Pain

We're Together

Dong Wan's POV

                              It was getting late when we arrived at my apartment. Min Woo and I had been dating since the morning and I never get tired because of it. I love him very much. I can't bare to separate with him even for a minute. I still hold his hand even though his car has already been parked. He released his grip on his steering and looked at me with his soft gaze. I gave him the most beautiful smile and willingly close my eyes. I could feel he leaned closer and within a second, his lips were brushing mine. I let him dominated our sweet kiss. After a while, I pulled away. I smiled again and kissed his hand. I got out from the car but before I closed the door, he said to me,

"Are you sure you don't want me to come upstairs with you?", he smirked a little. I know his naughty thinking but not for tonight.

"You know I have to get up early for tomorrow,right?", I lowered my head to speak to him that still sitting in the car.

"So??I can 'wake' you up..."he tried to convince me to let him sleep in my apartment but I shooked my head.

"Min Bongie....If you are sleeping with me...I might wake up in the noon. The musical practices are starting in the early morning. I cant afford to be late. You might drain my energy again. I'm sorry,Min Bongie...but tomoroow night, i'll be sleeping in your place,ok??"I explained to him hoping him to understand and luckily he did. He pouted but not for long. I reached my arm to pinch his adorable cheek but he avoided it. 

"Then, the pinching is also can wait for tomorrow..hehe!!", he giggled as he started his engine. I moved a little further from his car. Before he closed the window, I managed to hear him saying to me, 

"I love you,Wannie. See you tomorrow", then he drove away. I waved even though I doubted he could see it. Then, I turned to enter my apartment. I waited patiently in front of the elevator and when it arrived, I entered it. I pushed the 5th floor button. In the elevator, I smiled upon remembering the sweetness of my relationship with Min Woo. We went to the amusement park for the whole day for celebrating our monthversarry. Today really  brought sweet memories of me and him. We ride the  ferris wheel and kissing in it without anyone noticing, we ride the roller coaster and screamed together to release our stress, we ate ice creams from one cone and what the most memorable was he got a teddy bear for me after he successfully shot all balloons in the arcade. The teddy bear was actually the thing that i've been holding till now. It is big and it is white in colour. I hugged it thightly,imagining that it was Min Woo and kissed it repeatedly. Luckily, there was no body else in the elevator. If not, they might think I am a mad person. I am mad...but I am mad in love. Not mad in maniac way.

"Ding!", the elevator stopped. I stepped out from it, still holding the teddy bear and did not remove the smiling. I walked and walked till I reached my apartment's door. I reached for my keys in my pocket and when I found it, I intended to unlock my apartment. But I stopped when I saw a figure in front of me. I put the teddy bear down and looked at the person awkwardly. I've never seen this person anywhere. Who is .....

"You must be Dong Wan. Glad to meet you. I am Hye Mi. Min Woo's ex", she said cutting my thoughts. I startled and became speechless. What the heck was Min Woo's ex doing here? She came to get him back?? Again, I was speechless when she suddenly cried. The tears of hers kept streaming down. I did not know what to do. I only watched she cried and it zapped me when she said,

"Please help me, Dong Wan-sshi....I am pregnant with his child"

 

 

Author's note: It has been a while...hehe^^.....hoping this story will turn out well...hehe!!the plot is already there...but to turn it into words....huhu...T^T...update will be very soon....

sorry for the short chapter.....hope you guyz will continue to read this story.....^^ 

Thanx again for reading~~Really appreciate it~~And leave ur comments too~~HEHE^^ \(^V^)/

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MrsYooChun
#1
Chapter 8: JNP?? what does this mean??? :)
lunanegra #2
Chapter 29: Bwaha.. SuJu as their kids? OMG, they are having a very chaotic family.. ^^
MMM123 #3
Woodong in the bonus chapters was just wow :)
ayuwannie #4
Chapter 6: hahaha I began to feel the Jindy moment... But.....Sure, Woodong keep the best, love love love woodong so much :)
ayuwannie #5
Chapter 1: what I'm feeling right now is similar to what dongwan feel, what's this? I had to read the next chapter :)
TheLetterV
#6
Chapter 30: hahahaha you are just sooooo CUTE!!! ❤ (((o(//////Σ//////)o)))

and Dongwannie is my favorite out of Shinhwa members too!!
you are the first author I've met here that feels the same! \(*0*)/

~ WAAAHH . . .
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~ that's . . .
~ sooooo~~~ . . .
~ AWEEEESOME!!!! (((o(≧∇≦)o)))
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~ *high-five-sister!* └ (^○^)オ(^▽^)ツ~
TheLetterV
#7
Chapter 27: My...GODDD!!(✖////✖)~❤
WAAHH I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! ヽ(///ヮ///)ノ heehhee

I've loved that you broke it with a funny scenario the end of it~ (although, I must say, YOU - ARE - SUCH - A - TEAAAAAAAAAASE ! ~ but) I've loved that so much ! kekeke ~ /// Eric's characterization is HILARIOUS! "MY BABY BIRD IS BEING BY YOUR BABY BIRD!!!" L-M-A-O ! <3 XD
and him being caught for peaking on the Woodong couple~~ wahhh that was so funny yet quite hot in a ert-ish way I can't even explain it ! waa~~~~hahahaha~~~~ヽ(*≧ヮ≦)ノ

Also, actually~ I hoped Jindy would've done it at the end~~... and I would've preferred if Andy wouldn't have turned all shy and stuff, although it's cute~ I actually love the 'aggressive Andy - submissive Jinnie'~ kekeke...~ maybe you could write like a sequel where they'll go all the way?? *blushing*-pwweeeease??-*BLUSHING* (((o(//////Σ//////)o)))

General overview: the segmentation to paragraphs is fantastically fit; the plot have a great and calm opening, a Y-and-HOT-AS-HELL middle section and a surprising and funny scenario at the end~~ great development for a one-shot(!).
Except a few grammar corrections (and the tiny unsatisfying feeling I have cus they didn't finish what they had started) every thing about this chapter is PERFECT! ・:*:・(*/////∇/////*)・:*:・
so I give you 9.8 out of 10 ! (slightly taken down cus of the little grammar mistakes)

From my perspective, you've done a great job writing this chapter. chincharo! *thumbs-up* d-(^ヮ^)
✧・゚:* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ❤ KUDOS AUTHOR-NIM! ヾ(*⌒ヮ⌒*)ゞ ❤ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *:・゚✧
TheLetterV
#8
Chapter 26: I know it's a late comment but I had much so I only got to read the last chapters now~~ OTL
aanyway~ reaaally cute chapter! Ricsyung were never my favorite pairing, and apart from that- I'm not into Ricsyung lately, YET I read the chapter because you wrote it really well and I liked the fluffy plot~ kekeke❤

only two things were a bit of a turn-off for me~ (๑•́ ω •̀๑"):
* Eric calling Hyesung "my husband and wife" ~ I wish you wouldn't have written the "wife" part.. it's just that-..Hyesung hates those kind of stuff, and he will never let Eric get away with it if he'll make him girly [no matter which way]~ hahaha ヽ(*≧ω≦)ノ
* I hoped that Dongwan, being the wit-GOD, apart from being entertaining and making the crowd laugh, would say a more emotional.. longer speech. with some beautiful memories of the two included that only the 6 of the members know about to share with the crowd (and through that with the reader) :/

Anyway, the chapter was written nicely. I also liked the Woodong moments in it very much; the hold each of them has on each other is always so beautiful and lovely~ (๑>◡<๑) ❤
You did a great job! chincharo (๑>ヮ-)~✌
MizzPeel0007 #9
Chapter 30: Oh so Min Woo planned the entire thing to get a honeymoon for he and Dong Wan sweet, but can you say jealously. Of your cute little son, well he did get a week to spend together,, loved the ending so much.