Title (4/5):

Personally speaking, I love the title. It gave me the ummph feeling when I first saw it. It oozed with something new or creative.

Appearance (2/5):

You seriously need to edit the appearance of your chapters. It was messy and very crooked. It was disturbing to read when I first came across the first chapter, I wanted to skip to another story.

Foreword/Description (5/10):

I love the description. It was short and mysterious. And I could easily tell that this wasn't a walk in a park type of story. Also, your foreword needs a bit of improvement since it was messy just a bit.

Plot/Storyline (18/20):

Please forgive me siWnce I didn't finish reading the whole story. I finished it until chapter eight but all is well. I love the story. Period. Do I need to elaborate on that one? Yes? No? Fine.

Every chapter was a page turner for me since I love this kind of genre though it didn't answer some of my questions.

How did the gods obtain their power? Why is Xiumin older than Chen by eons? Where do they live? How come they pop up out of nowhere?

Character Development (28/30):

Imperfect qualities of a human was described here. The corruption and destruction of human beings was clearly described by Chen though he also learned that some people are willing to help. I love how every little thing looked like a fixed puzzle piece. Solid characters and great development.

Use of Language / Mechanics (17/20):

Luck was kind but not patience. (chapter 4)

Luck was kind but not patient. (Patience is a noun and kind is an adjective. So there is faulty parrallelism right there.)

Chen’s quiet was interrupted. (chapter 5)

Chen's quiet what? Atmosphere? Personality?

Chen entered the thin, standing room only shower. (chapter 6)

This, can you please elaborate? I kennut understand. Haha.

Overall, I love the language of your story. So deep and well written. I cannot say anything anymore. Speechless.

Flow (9/10):

The pace was really good. Though you may add some reasons as to why they were mixed with the human world then the flow would be just fine.

Reader’s View / Enjoyment:

I love the story. I like how dark it was and how the development of each characters balances out through out the story. I can't even find words to explain it. Though some of the words that you used were way too deep (I mean, not used daily) so it may cause a mental destruction for the new readers.

Final Score: (83/100)

Additional Comments:

I have stated everything from here and up so I have the right to stay silent. Lol. I apologize for not finishing your story. I have a busy schedule and I really am regretting this world I have entered. I also apologize for the lack of suggestions here. Lol. Thank you so much for letting me review your story and I hope that you'll upvote the shop and continue to write with love! 

Review Credit to Chunkee__ from ♪♫ Midnight Sonata Café ♫♪