Title (3/5):

The title was simple yet easy to understand about what's going to happen in the story. It's clearly about the couple's undying love for each other. 

Also, capitalizing the first letter of the words can also be done. (i.e. 'All That I Have')

Appearance (3/5):

Your poster is really amazing and it sets an angsty kind of feel into your story. For the story's appearance, I hope you can trim down your paragraphs. It gets harder to read when its all stacked up.

Foreword/Description (7/10):

There is somethiing off with your description. Let me just rephrase it as if it my own story.

Because they knew each other since high school,  Kyuhyun thought that five years later, they would still be happy with being together and living in a small apartment.

But what happens when Kyuhyun finally sees Sungmin broken? What if him being broken was something that could shake Kyuhyun's image about them? What happens when reality steps in?

"You are all that I have..."

Did you see the difference? It was disturbing to read 'being and living together' so I changed it. 

The foreword was neat too.

Plot/Storyline (19/20):

I haven't been a fan to drugs and self-abuse but since this is about a shattered past, it gave the chills while reading it. It was steady and it was easy to understand your plot too. I couldn't say anything anymore. It just sounded perfect.

Character Development (29/30):

Since you were focusing on two characters, I'd rather say your characters are stable and very easy to distinguish the two. They didn't have a perfect life and they have their own weaknesses but when they were together, they felt that they could do anything. Well done.

Use of Language / Mechanics (20/20):

Language-wise, it was perfect. Easy to understand, no wordy sentences and no fillers.

Flow (9/10):

I gotta give it to you, the flow was really great. There were no distractions of some sort and it was really awesome. Nothing more, nothing less.

Reader’s View / Enjoyment:

Of course, I didn't enjoy it. It's an angst story. I can't possibly laugh. *slapped* 

Anyhow, I love your story despite being an angst genre and it was a first time for me to read a self-abuse and drug kind of story. It gave me a sense of reality and a kind of a mental note to not to do those things in the future.

Final Score: (90/100)

Additional Comments:

CONGRATULATIONS! You have been featured! *claps* Anyways, since the story is already complete and I didn't have any reasons to make your story more amazing. It was written with emotions and feelings that I couldn't think anymore.
Anyhow, please comment after you picked your review up and if you think that I did a good job in reviewing your story, I hope you'll upvote the shop and help us in spreading the word!

Review Credit to Chunkee__ from ♪♫ Midnight Sonata Café ♫♪