Last Breath

Description

People lose themselves as they try to think and act big. We all want to be rich, smart and look absolutely gorgeous; to have our own happy ending in life. But...what if death approaches before we could achieve all that? In the end, life's not all about how much money you make, how educated you are or how amazing you look. 

 

"One little act of kindness can make a huge difference in someone's life"

Perhaps it's in these little acts of kindness that can make all the difference in someone's life...

 

Foreword

BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP

The heart monitor spiked as the patient woke up in shock. The once-silent and peaceful room was filled with utter chaos as nurses filed in and tried to give her treatment. The older sister immediately snapped out of her dozing faze and quickly walked to the bed with worry. 

"SaeHee, SaeHee. It's okay. It'll be okay. Breathe. Breathe. It's going to be okay... " 

The panicked teenage girl was not able to pull herself together. Holding onto both sides of her shoulders, Yuri sat herself in front of the little girl, attempting to calm her little sister.

Dear Kris...

She inhaled deeply to demonstrate the basic tactics to living, before exhaling to empty out her lungs. Her little sister slowly took control of herself as she followed through with breathing in and out.

I don’t even know if you’ll ever read this...

The heart monitor eventually adjusted to normal peaks as she began taking even breaths. Yuri held her younger sister tightly in her arms as SaeHee trepidly wrapped her arms around the elder's upper torso. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she cried into her older sister's shoulders. Her fear of death was transparent. However, her desire to stay alive was only a fire waiting to be put out. 

"Unnie.." SaeHee stirred in the elder's arms.

Yuri's mind took meager steps back into reality as she registered Saehee's voice. As she opened her eyes and looked down, Saehee's puffy eyes stared back into her own longingly.

But, I guess it’s worth a shot...

 



 

Teaser/Trailer. Enjoy!


 

In response to A U M E R - - - | A WRITING CONTEST |

Subject prompt: Breathe



 

Credits:

Poster Credit to happymonkey from Whatever Graphics Shop

Review Credit to maviseu from ME0WXX'S ALL-ROUNDED SHOP | PrincessHades from ❅ Rubricless Review Shop ❅ | LeeChaeMi and korea9153 from The Iridescent Review Shop | HanMoonHae from KMS & HMH™ Review Shop | Angelshell from ↻ The ωanderℓust Café | KirbyK from Yifan's Honest Reviews | Raichulove from ❝tried to walk❞ | Bleu from Crimson Twilight Review Shop | bambiimonster, kaistalminsulunew, and SeasonsOfEXO from CinammonFrappe Review, pilsuk123 from Sehun's Review Cafe

Test reviews by hopexdreams, Chunkee__



 

Please do NOT copy my story. I actually worked really hard coming up with this...

I do not own Kris or EXO (I wish I did x.x) but the storyline is all me.
Anything that looks alike is just pure coincidence.

Whatever the idols present in this story may or may not apply in real life.

Comments

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lovday #1
Chapter 4: this is such a beautiful story...
taeyeonsundaes
#2
Chapter 4: I am completely mindblown. This is a beautiful story.
creativegirl013
#3
Chapter 4: I really loved reading this. Kris is such a sweetheart for taking a risk to go visit the patient. Awww,poor Saehee~ I was routing for her too~ Yuri and Kris are both cool people being there for a terminally ill patient till the bitter end,especially the older sister~
parkminahlovesbtob #4
Chapter 4: Omg I cried in math class while reading this
LeeChaeMi #5
Chapter 4: I... Have no words.
xxdaehyunxx
#6
Hello again! I hope you don't mind me featuring this on my shop. I just had to. If you are not okay with it, I will remove it >< btw, here's the link to the shop where it is featured in: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/620401
xxdaehyunxx
#7
Chapter 4: This deserves to be featured. It's absolutely amazing and there's just no words for this.
JsscaEliza #8
Chapter 4: This story really made me cry.
:((((( thank you author-nim. ^^
kaolapanda
#9
Chapter 4: *cries* I love your aspect of life it's true how such little things in life are usually taken advantaged of when others take each and every small gesture in life to heart. Thank you author :D