♪ The Gisaeng by littlemisshappyify
♪♫ Midnight Sonata Café ♫♪ | Reviews and Recs [CLOSED for requests & READ CH. 37]OC || BIGBANG || 2NE1
Angst | Romance
Chaptered | Ongoing
Reviewed up to Chapter 3
Reviewed by hopexdreams
by INFINITE
This review is posted LATE on my (momodays09) part. The reviewer, hopexdreams, actually had this done a long while back in late May but it has taken a while for me to post it due to my hectic schedule. I deeply apologize to both my reviewer and the requestor. All in all, I hope this review helps you and please don't take it out on hopexdreams. If anything, take it out on me haha...Thank you!
Title (4/5):
Although I didn't know what Gisaeng meant, the title was eye-catching to me. I was satisfied with the title because I don't know any other title which fits the story better than yours.
Appearance (4/5):
The poster and background fit very well. It gave out the dark theme and set the mood. Well done.
Foreword/Description (7/10):
The description was short and intriguing, but the placing didn't feel right to me.
It could've been something like this ::
Although the story was quite predictable, the plot was quite original and I've never read something like this before. You did a good job there. I have nothing much to say here as everything is pretty much flawless.
Character Development (25/30):
I loved all the characters, especially Seryung and Seung Yu. I always loved realistic characters and everyone could relate to them. There should be more development on the characters in the upcoming chapters to make the story more interesting. Other than that, well done!
Use of Language / Mechanics (19/20):
I reread your story several times, and there were no mistakes. Good job proof-reading your story! The words used were rather advanced too. Keep up the great work!
Flow (8/10):
The flow is great, but the rather long chapters made your story seem draggy. However, long chapters aren't that bad, as long as the flow is still good. You took time to let the readers understand what you wrote, which is great. Everything's good.
Reader's View/Enjoyment:
I rarely read stories like this and I found myself enjoying your story very much. I'm sure the readers enjoy your story very much too, judging from their comments. I love your writing style, and you have a gift in writing.
Final Score: (81/100)
Additional Comments:
I'm really sorry if you didn't like the review or it didn't help you! Your story is really good! Looking forward to see more of your stories!
Review Credit to hopexdreams from ♪♫ Midnight Sonata Café ♫♪
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