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♪♫ Midnight Sonata Café ♫♪ | Reviews and Recs [CLOSED for requests & READ CH. 37]
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m o m o d a y s 0 9
   genre: any
   likes: psychological, romance, drama
   harshness: 5
   status: busy

Hello there! momodays09 here, and I opened this shop not too long back. I decided to revamp the shop and make it look pretty, but on the other hand, the quality of my reviews will still remain the same. I tend to focus on character development, flow, and the overall plot. I will be quite picky with grammar. For those who have been with me for quite a while, you guys know just how picky I can get. As for harshness, I know it states 5, but it really depends. I may provide my criticisms and feedback in areas that I find relevant. I am a er for real life situations where the idol remains the idol, haha. In all cases, if you have any questions regarding your reviews, let me know and I will try to answer them, but the results will remain as they are. But again, they are only results. Don't jump to conclusions just because the results aren't something you wanted. It could very-well be improved ^^

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h o p e x d r e a m s
   genre: any except
   likes: angst, romance, comedy
   harshness: 4.5
   status: busy

Hi~! I'm hopexdreams. I mainly focus on the character development and plot. I am also a grammar nazi, so don't be surprised if I'm harsh when it comes to grammar and spelling. They are my biggest pet peeve after all. I'm still strict with everything else though. I tend to have a good impression on real stories, because I'm a realistic person. But reading some fantasy stories once in a while won't hurt. ^^ I'm not sure about my harshness level but I don't bash or criticise any stories for no reason. I'll try to point out the flaws in a story, give reasons to that and suggest some ideas to improve. Let's improve ourselves together because nobody is perfect, after all. Fighting! ^^

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c h u n k e e _ _
   genre: any except heavy
   likes: psychological, supernatural, drama
   harshness: 4
   status: available

Wassup, guys! I go by the name Chunkee__. But you can call me Chunks if you want. I am very strict with everything. Punctuation, spelling, usage of words. I never liked unreal situations. I tend to want stories that can happen in real life. I'll give you suggestions to make your stories alive and real. I will look forward reading your stories. Fighting!

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k i n t o u n
   genre: any but not comfortable w/
   likes: anything , romance, fluff
   harshness: 4
   status: available

umm hi? ;;; I'm Hana. English is not my first language, but I don't think my grammar is so bad it hurts so-- I mainly focus on the plot and writing style; character development, too. What irks me is when things are messy, so that actually goes into the grades I give ; u ; I hope to improve as a writer along with everyone here! fighting! <33

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im sorry for the delay. school is just ughh. I can't make any promises, but I will aim to finish the two reviews in progress by the end of the month x.x

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-caas-
#1
Hi. I'm starting a shops list and I want to add your shop/gallery/list/contest/roleplay :
Read the rules, complete this form , put it in the comments box for this link and you will be on the list.

Author's name:
Author's link:
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Created:
Status:
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Info you want to add:
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Diviana #2
Chapter 39: Chapter 38: I am surprised you got to my review as quickly as you did. Thank you for the review, I will fix those grammar mistakes. I'll keep in mind to be more detailed as I write (that as has always been a problem of mine). I don't understand how my foreword was messy though. I'll credit later today.
JESLEN #3
Chapter 36: Hi thank you for this wonderful review. I agree with everything that was mentioned and I'll try my best to incorporate the suggestion. Yes, Haha, I think this was posted late because there were some things in the review that were not included in the story anymore :D Anyway, thank you very much for the review. 81 is still a decent score since I barely started the story. Credited ^_^
azxema
#4
Chapter 37: read the review.
wow, even though I'm lacking 72 is pretty much a decent marks right? right? lol
I guess I should not abandon and pay more attention to the little things such as the comma, I didn't know it'd make so much differences.
Thanks for the effort - really appreciate it. really.
overdosagexo #5
Chapter 28: Hello >< I am so sorry about this late reply... Yes, I would still like to read my review :) I apologize if this adds on to your burden...
Story: 包子 (Baozi)
aeterniti
#6
Chapter 34: Thank you for the review (and the feature - wow, I'm honored)! I read it well ^^
I actually like your way of thinking that Jongdae was inhaling the flames over and over again as atonement for his sins. The thought hadn't crossed my mind, haha XD
Ah, yes...Yixing XD To be quite honest, I just needed a ghost of his past, and since Yixing's my other bias.....X) Yeah, there was really no deep reason behind it being Yixing. Just personal preference, ahaha XD
But I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it while reviewing it ^^ I'm glad that I was able to convey the process of insanity in Jongdae to you, the reader. :)
AleatoryThinker #7
Chapter 33: Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the feedback. I'm seriously a dunce when it comes to titles as in I have no idea if the title is good or bad no matter how many times I think it over. In this case, I couldn't come up with anything that wouldn't give the assignment away, because, yeah, I'm not creative. Plus I'm not concise with words. A bad combination.

I'll definitely be on the lookout for those boring/lagging scene when I'm editing. The make-out scene was never planned so the suddeness makes sense. I'll either move it on the timeline or possibly cut it out. Making the character emotions is something I'll have to work a lot harder on, but I'm really glad the characters came off as realistic.

Once again, thank you for completing this review as it helps me a lot!
vexatious #8
Chapter 32: Thank you so much for the review! I haven't read it yet, but soon I will <3 I've already credited you in my foreword, so thank you so much again!
azxema
#9
Chapter 28: Not that person anymore's author here.
I wouldn't mind a late review, i'm not in a rush so yeah. I still want my review
vexatious #10
Chapter 28: Hi! Im sorry for the late response i havent been able to go online. Yes i would still want to read my request :)