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Of The Guardians: Inheritor [Being Made Into a Novel Series]
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“It’s not: I jumped in, and it was cold. No. It was cold, and I jumped in. Always arrange a sentence so you appear to be fearless, when in fact you are far less than fearless—you are clueless. 
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- Jarod Kintz, At even one penny, this book would be overpriced.
In fact, free is too expensive, because you'd still waste time by reading it.

 

"Your hair, it's s-short. Like... really short," he said. You blinked and felt your scalp. Kai was right. All your long black hair was gone. Only some of your hair remained. Coming to this realization, you sharply gasped, going into a brief state of shock. "My hair..." you said. Kris flew beside you, taking you into his secure arms as he brought you down to the cave floor. You did not dare to look him in the eye, nor anyone else's for that matter. Your heart had sunk. Too many emotions were filling your mind for you to even comprehend in that moment.

"T-that creature deceived my people! How could we not see who she was?!? How could we have been fooled by such evil forces?!?!" Baekhyun said, pacing back and forth as he berated himself. "You couldn't see because she cast something over your city," Suho said. "There was a haze covering your eyes and ours as well." Irra's body was contained within his water barrier, the gruesome features still visible after being scorched.

"She's not a being who belongs in Athosia any longer," Kris said, eyeing the body carefully. You furrowed your eyebrows, not understanding what that statement meant. "What?" Tao asked. He looked just as confused as you were. Kris continued to stare at the floating form. "Suho. Did you perhaps read about something like this in the Passages of Faydar?" he asked sternly. The scribe looked at him with widened eyes and back at Irra's body. "...I believe I did."

Luhan choked a bit. "Wait! In the Passages of Faydar?" Suho nodded. "But doesn't that mean it's..." Luhan trailed off, looking back at Kris. He hoped they were just joking. Kris bit his lower lip and nodded as well. "What does that even mean?!?!" Kai said impatiently. Along with Tao and you, Kai was also quite lost on the secret code the others were talking in.

"It means this creature is from the time of the Guardians," Baekhyun answered gravely. "It's supposed to be locked away." Your eyes shot open. "So this confirms that the gate is open," you concluded. Suho looked at you and nodded. His face was covered in a darkened expression. "We must tell the Council!" he exclaimed. You all agreed and quickly went back to Baekhyun's house to contact them.

"Luhan, that sphere was given to you by Junsu. Perhaps it can be used to communicate," Suho said as he sat down the fair-skinned boy, trying to help figure out how to use it. Luhan nodded and took the ball out of his bag, fiddling with it as the rest of you piled inside. "I must report the events accurately to my King. Would one of you two mind coming with me to testify?" Baekhyun asked, motioning to you and Tao. Your eyes darted to the taller boy. "I'll go. Kora needs her rest," Tao said as he walked to the door. "But Tao! You're hurt!" you argued, walking after him to go instead.

He turned and grabbed your wrists lightly. "Kora, you have done more than you know, and I'm fine," he replied, smiling slightly as he released you. You frowned and looked down. "But you need more care than I do. You got burned and-" "Hey, I said I'm fine, right?" he chuckled. "I promise to see a healer before I come back." You sighed and nodded. Tao patted your head before walking out with Baekhyun. "We'll return as soon as we can," Baekhyun announced before the two men left out the door.

You sighed and strolled through the house. Kris and Kai were sitting at the dining table; one was studying a ma

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TheSilentScene
I literally never come on here, but yes, I am still writing the novel. I left this site because I wanted to write original content & someone on this site did something that made me feel unsafe. I hope you guys have grown into amazing people & that you've keep your love of reading & writing alive :)

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EricaKpopLove
#1
Chapter 100: its Dec 2023. life comes by so fast lol
i hope whoever reads this is doing great!
still thinking about this story and waiting for the novel.
or news. thankyoooou again for making such a great story
TheSilentScene
#2
I literally never come on here, but yes, I am still writing the novel. I left this site because I wanted to write original content & someone on this site did something that made me feel unsafe. I hope you guys have grown into amazing people & that you've keep your love of reading & writing alive :)
ackerwoman
#3
Chapter 5: I'm having flashbacks when EXOtics is mentioned above. Good old time.
miaka07 #4
hi..how are you?..just wondering if you have any updates on the novel?..sorry to ask..i just suddenly miss your story..thank u and hope ur doing good.. ?
winterphantom #5
Chapter 100: Will definitely support this upcoming book of yours! I would love for it to be an actual paperback/hardbound book, but if South East Asia is too far, then I wouldn't really mind an e-book. Can't wait to how this wonderful story of yours unfold! xoxo
laemh123
#6
Chapter 50: I'm so excited for when this gets finished this is like the 10th time I've read it!
EricaKpopLove
#7
Chapter 100: Chapter 78: Hiiiii, im from canada!
A hard/paperback copy would be amazing

I literally spent all last year of middle school reading this! Uugh im so excited

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Thaankyoou
kachinggu
#8
Chapter 2: it is so rare to find this kind of fantasy stories here!

giving u this before i jump right into the story, hope u like it!
https://i.imgur.com/mJLmPxt.jpg
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Clamz17
#9
Chapter 100: Congrats on finishing undergrad! I’m from the US and would love a copy of your story :) i’d Probably get the ebook just cause I don’t have much time to go and visit a book store nowadays