You Belong With Me, Why Can't You See?

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let's say we have 2 guys, who seems to be a playboy owning every girl's heart. and we have a girl, who seems to take no interest in love or guys.

but what do we know whats going on in their minds?

Foreword

he pulled me closer. my heart seemed to not just skip a beat, but dozens of it.

"what?" i asked him, trying to not look into his eyes."i- its nothing," he said, giving out and awkward laughter.

i regained my cool and pulled my hands away from his grip.

"say, you want what you cannot have right? and i'm probably the last girl on earth to ever swoon over you," i coolly said with a smirk plastered over my face.

i honestly hoped that he felt it the way i said it.

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you wonder what's going on in his mind...

you wonder if he's thinking of you right now...

you're hoping that he will appear in your dream tonight, and vice versa...

you know you don't have feelings for him, you're not supposed to...

but you just can't deny it.

you love him

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dear readers,

i decided to delete the other story and make a new fic.

i'm going to do my best on this fic! butonly with your help.

i get discouraged easily :( like if i get little comments or subscriptions. maks me feel bad

haha but i am super excited for this one:)

i'll think of the plot through the night and will post the first chapter tomorrow, promise<3

 

please subscribe, add me as your friend, and comment on my plot (maybe give me suggestions?)

xoxo,

rainbowscones

rainbowscones
i'm thinking of a prequel to this story, maybe about sooyeon's past? what do everyone think? comment and tell me~

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KimYunJin
#1
Chapter 20: Awwwww okay im wrong she should and must end with the Cute charming Prince! Okay ill stop crying now :') ,,, good job authornim its a master piece <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 loved it alot and just dont do the sequel cuz itll ruin the concept just keep it simple and beautiful like this :)
KimYunJin
#2
Chapter 11: OMG yoseob please just let goooooo !!!!!!!! ;A; im crying buckets in here :'( though i love yoseob from my heart and every thing but , im junhyung biased :')
Mai_1992
#3
Still confuse about her, is she love Yoseob more or Junhyung?
Sorry, I'm curious.....
foreverbeastfans123 #4
I really love this story... :)
Pls make a sequel for this story... DAEBAK ^^
Hwaiting to Yoseob and Sooyeon!!~
Pls update it soon, ne?
rainbowscones
#5
@gordeebrubaduck : sure i'll do that
@KikoBread : haha okay i won't
@lalalalala : ;)you were right
@Seobie_Lover : i mean not that extreme. i was just frikking chased down by my friend to the airport and he caused a scene--" its embarassing
gordeebrubaduck
#6
The ending is so goooood. But it would b better to make it longer.. see her life with her grandma and thn see if yoseob has wait for her or not. :) overall its a great storyyy
iamab2uty
#7
Oh.... So confusing.... I hope things will be.clearer soon :)
thelazywriter
#8
Make it longer!!
Or wait umm sequel~
I don't know @.@
Just don't leave it like this >~<
it's killing me <3
mcgroin
#9
I think you shouldmake it a bit longer & then make a sequel (: