Chapter Fourty-Five

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Pass It On

The whole first week of classes are far more stressful than Franziska had honestly been ready for.

None of her professors review anything from the previous years, instead starting straight in on new concepts that have Franziska pulling her first all-nighter to study the third day of school so she can remind herself of every concept they'd learned in the past six years.

Several of her friends as well as student from the other Houses find themselves in similar situations - Nabila Shafiq, a friend of hers from Gryffindor, tells her in Herbology on Friday that her roommate Evera had nearly had a panic attack over Defense Against the Dark Arts on Tuesday and Franziska can't blame the blonde for it.

"I finally get why the seventh years always looked like the sky was about to fall at any moment." She sighs as Nabila checks the soil of their Venomous Tentacula. "I get the feeling we won't have time for senioritis."

Nabilia gives her an odd look. "That's one of those Muggle concepts isn't it?" She states wryly, not really asking.

Franziska laughs. "Brandon's actually, so I guess it's an American thing? He's not Muggleborn so I'd guess it's known in the wizarding community there as well."

Nabila sighs. "He's moving back after graduation, did he tell you? Says he misses real food." She smiles faintly. "I suppose I can't fault him on that though. But an entire ocean away is rather far."

"Did he find an apprenticeship there or is he just diving in without actually and I'm answering my own question." Franziska interrupts herself with a laugh. It's just like her ex to move across the Atlantic without a set plan.

Nabila's smirk widens faintly. "Oh, so you do know him. That's good." She teases lightly, and it's small but Franziska remembers a quiet eleven-year-old who could only hold a conversation about magical creatures and knows it's a big jump for her friend.

The Herbology double block goes by rather quickly, and then it's lunch and Franziska is free for the rest of the day.

Which of course means she spends the next several hours in the boys' room sorting through every last detail of the party they're in charge of running that night. They've been working on the plan throughout the week but it's been stilted and mostly headed by Donaghan, who took over from Jemma when she realized her Prefect duties were getting in the way of party planning.

They've settled firmly on a getting-to-know-you theme but haven't completely settled on what games they want to play yet. And Cian is still pitching the idea of the Weird Sisters playing a few songs, though there's very heavy resistance - one of the members is a Gryffindor and they don't want to let a non-Hufflepuff into the common room.

"Well what if we found someone to fill in for Heathcote could we do it?" Cian suggests.

Donaghan gives him a bemused look. "Ci, Heathcote has some of the hardest parts in the song, no one can learn it in," he flicks his wand and mutters a quick Tempus charm, "Six hours. We do have a recording of our tracks though, is there some way to play that?" He suggests, though clearly he's saying more to placate his best friend than out of any real belief that it's possible.

Franziska tilts her head thoughtfully. It's not a bad idea but- "Unless someone has a Muggle cassette player we're probably out of luck. Though maybe when Aidan gets out of class he might have some ideas?"

"I'll make sure to get him in here." Leona confirms. Aidan has done the least contributing to the planning, but considering he's taking eight classes even after having dropped History of Magic and Astronomy no one is particularly upset at him for it. Though they do have a decently sized list of questionably doable magic that they need to ask him about, considering he's the most knowledgable on the subject by far.

"Speaking of, Care of Magical Creatures should be letting out pretty soon right?" Jemma observes. "Leona, we can go over together and get everyone back here for final preparations." She suggests, and Leona shrugs amenably.

Once the two girls have left Franziska takes the now-open spot next to Cian so the three of them can be closer while they talk. She doesn't like having to raise her voice more than necessary, and it felt awkward sitting alone across the dorm from them once the spot opened up.

"So have we solidified anything at this point? Other than the general theme?" She asks in amusement. "What about decorations? I remember you were talking to Kiera and Tyler about that yesterday?"

"Tonks says she has it covered, something about Saundra and pink. I stopped asking after that, I don't need to remember that day."

Franziska actually laughs a bit at the memory from their second year, when the Scottish first year had turned half the house bright pink on accident. It had been traumatizing in the moment, but looking back on it, it is a bit amusing. "You didn't even turn pink if I recall, I should be more scandalized than you." She points out with a grin.

"I turned pink. It was awful." Cian says flatly. "If everything in the common room is pink again tonight I'm going to turn Tonks into a frog."

"You dropped Transfiguration last year, you don't know how to Transfigure humans." Donaghan point out.

"Then I'll get to practice." Cian grumbles back and both Donaghan and Franziska are still laughing when the Leona and Jemma rejoin them with the rest of their House in tow.

Jemma takes point from Donaghan after that and begins listing out everything they need to have accomplished as well as when it needs to be done.

"Leona, Aidan, and... Tonks. You three look over the list of maybes and determine what definitely is and isn't possible." She instructs briskly, holding out a hand for the list which Donaghan promptly hands over. She folds it into an airplane and gives it a tap with her wand so it flies across the room to Aidan. He grabs it and Leona and Tonk join him.

"We'll look over it in the library." Aidan confirms. "Leona gave me a rough overview on the way here - we should have a list of what's achievable in the next hour."

Jemma doesn't wait for them to leave before moving on. "Okay, Kiera and Tyler, Tonks said she taught you the spells she was going to use to decorate so you're on point for that." She waits for them to nod before continuing. "That leaves food. Frannie and Henry, that's on you. You four will all have to leave dinner early of course, it has to be ready for when the first years arrive." She nods. "And Cian, Don, you're with me finalizing the games. We can work on that now, you guys can relax I guess?"

Franziska smiles faintly and grabs Henry. He's been uncharacteristically quiet all week, but she completely understands - breaking up with someone , and Henry had really liked Amelia in a way Franziska never had with Brandon. She thinks Jemma probably paired them up with the intention of Franziska using her experience to help their friend cope.

"So what foods are we thinking? I'm not super familiar with British finger foods." She says cheerfully as she pulls him out of the dorm towards the common room. She thinks a walk around the grounds will be better than staying cooped up underground, as cozy as the common room is.

Henry follows without resistance. "Um, I guess crisps is the obvious. And sausage rolls." He shrugs. "Sorry, I'm-"

Franziska bumps his shoulder lightly with her own, cutting him off. "Hey, I get it. No pressure to stick around tonight, just help me carry the plates in yeah?"

He smiles weakly. "No I, I think it would be good to stay. Get to know the first years, play silly camp games." He laughs faintly. "Leona keeps offering to teach me the tricks of her trade which actually sounds like a good diversion."

Franziska laughs. "If it makes you happy I won't say anything against it, but I'm not sure we need her to be any more powerful than she already is."

That gets a proper chuckle out of the other. They walk in companionable silence until they get outside, at which point Franziska gently steers the conversation back to snacks, and this time Henry is a bit more active in his responses.

They sneak out of dinner about thirty minutes early, leaving fifteen minutes after Kiera and Tyler vanish. Franziska half-suspects that the couple had left earlier than they needed to have some alone time, so she decides to try and drag out the kitchen visit as long as she can manage so as to not walk in on anything she doesn't want to see.

The House Elves are all apparently well aware of the Hufflepuff House tradition and several of them eagerly make snack suggestions, piling dozens of plates and bowls onto a counter for the two seventh years to levitate back to the common room, and never has Franziska been happier at their proximity to the kitchen - they barely get everything to the barrels safely. Luckily Tyler and Kiera are finished, and a few younger years have come as well and offer to help carry the food in and set up for the party.

The common room is a yellow and black paradise with images of badgers running all along the walls, looking like something out of a Disney movie. Franziska beams.

"It looks amazing you guys!" She observes to Kiera and Tyler. Most of the rest of the seventh years crawl into the common room then and confirm her sentiments.

Kiera and Tyler tolerate them for about two minutes before they bid everyone goodnight and rush off to the boys' dorms.

"Well I guess we'll be staying for the party." Aidan laughs a bit awkwardly. "Jemma and Donaghan are delaying the firsties so the rest of the House can get through to their dorms so expect a people flood pretty soon." He grabs one of the mini quiches from the House Elves and munches on it as the group finally relax.

Franziska ends up in a conversation with Tonks about Herbology while the rest of the House swarms past, occasionally pausing to ward off wannabe snack thieves. Finally Donaghan climbs through, flashing everyone a grin and a thumbs up.

Then the first of the first years comes through, and Franziska wonders if the young girl's expression is the same as Kiera's had been all those years before, when they were still eleven and walking into the unknown. Probably not - Kiera had been greeted with a faceful of exploding flowers after all, not a table full of food. But still, the thought draws a larger smile out of Franziska as the rest of the eleven-year-olds pile through eagerly and attack the snack table.

Jemma manages to wrangle them into the first game, which she and Donaghan moderate. Cian and Aidan work together to get a sound system working - most of the list had proved too difficult to do on short notice but playing the Weird Sisters' demo tapes had been deemed both doable and well worth the effort. Personally Franziska is excited to finally hear the band Cian has been ranting about for years now.

The music comes on during an extremely tense, but extremely entertaining, round of cops and robbers, and Franziska is so startled by the noise that she stumbles and gets herself tagged by a very proud first year cop.

"Gotcha ya crook! Into the pen!" She declares dramatically, grinning brightly and snagging the loot bags from Franziska's hands. "I got one!" She shouts excitedly to her teammates, only to have the retrieved loot nabbed by one of her classmates, starting up another chase.

Franziska laughs and steps to the side to observe the rest of the round, narrowly avoiding several collisions on her way to the snack table.

"I feel like we've collected more people since we started." She notes to Aidan with a laugh as the red-head joins her. "The music sounds great by the way."

He grins. "Thanks, be sure to tell Cian and Don. And I'm pretty sure I've seen at least seven kids from other years sneaking in to join. But I don't see the harm - I recall Lola Abbot leading a war against the seventh years during our party and she was only in third back then."

Franziska laughs. "The more the merrier I suppose, but it will be hard to get everything settled and cleaned up afterwards."

"Jemma has the prefects recruited to help out on that front." Donaghan assures her as he walks over and leans against the wall next to Aidan. "Also I think Do The Hippogriff is the next song and I need you to listen to the lyrics and back me up next time I tell Cian we need to edit them." He adds with a grin.

The party drags on well past midnight, and Franziska is pretty sure at least half the House has joined by the end of it. The fourth years had never gone to bed after arriving from their Astronomy lesson, all the prefects were there, and she recognized quite a few faces from Jemma's tutoring groups including Adeline Lindberg who she ends up talking to for nearly a half hour about Muggle Studies.

Finally the last of the younger years, minus the prefects, are herded off to their beds. The food is gone and the music has looped at least three times though no one had complained since it meant everyone got to dance to Do The Hippogriff multiple times. Cian had looked quite smug at the public response to the song, while Donaghan looked rather resigned.

The group of twelve left at the end of it all set about quickly vanishing the table and collecting the dishes to be returned to the kitchens the next morning (or whenever they woke up). There's no food left at all, eaten well before the party had finished, and Franziska can barely finish pushing the furniture back into place without collapsing from exhaustion.

"Alright, I think that's good enough for now." Jemma yawns, punctuating her point. "Goodnight everyone. I'd call this a resounding success."

"I second that." Donaghan agrees, giving the blonde a quick kiss on the cheek before following Cian down the hall to the boys' room.

Franziska is quick to follow their lead, hurrying to her own room on sleep-heavy legs, closely followed by the rest of the girls.

She's asleep before she even hits the pillow, and her last thought leaves her with a smile - they definitely gave the first years a night to remember.

Myr may have spent the first week more focused on learning which names went with which faces in the prefect meetings so he felt slightly less incompetent in his new role. This decision results in him already being behind in school work the very first weekend of classes.

So while he can now pick out not only Melody and the Slytherin Beater (who he's learned is named Hector) from a crowd, he notices the rest as well. A loud voice accompanied by widely waving arms at the Hufflepuff table is Saundra, a derisive snort from a band of Ravenclaws is Josephine, a stumble and a yelp in the Potions room during the fifth year Gryffindor class is usually Corey. Myr knows them all almost as well as he knows his own Housemates.

But he couldn't explain the basic reasons for why Unforgivable Curses are branded that way, despite every Defense lesson that week having been dedicated to exactly that topic. As such he finds himself spending his first Saturday at school already waist-deep in textbooks and notes in the library.

At least he isn't alone - Nabila may not be behind but she's set up next to him with a NEWT-level workbook for Care of Magical Creatures and is scribbling away in it.

They're the only Gryffindors in the library that he can see, though there's a group of younger Ravenclaws crowded by one of the windows and a few solo Hufflepuffs scattered around the rest of the tables in sight, one of whom he recognizes. Aidan is never looking up when Myr look over though, so he resigns himself to not waving at the other boy in greeting.

He does manage to get through a decent chunk of the work he'd been unintentionally slacking on before he has to go to the first Prefect meeting of the year. Raj has decided they'll be having a short one each week, with one long one per month for the prefects to air concerns or generally report on things they had deemed less important.

"See you at dinner." He says to Nabila who hums in vague acknowledgement as he gathers his things and heads to the prefect's meeting room.

He honestly hadn't even known the prefects had their own room for personal use - aside from the prefects bathroom of course - but in retrospect it makes perfect sense. How else would people from all four Houses meet easily, if only to organize patrols?

He's a bit early to the meeting, as he'd intended, though he's still arrived after Raj.

"Hey, sorry. Were you waiting long?" He greets, dropping his bag in one of the seats as he walks over the Head Girl.

She shakes her head, clearly distracted. "Just arrived myself." Her tone is as clipped as ever but Myr is learning to not let it bother him. "The first week had no patrols so we'll need to go over protocol and have the older students walk the younger ones through all the different routes." She pauses and glances at Myr out of the corner of her eye. "...And I'll show them to you." She sighs faintly and yeah, Myr bristles at that. He's trying for Merlin's sake! It isn't his fault he doesn't know these things.

He bites back his irritation - he's been trying hard to watch his reactions around Raj considering her loss, difficult as she makes it at times - and resigns himself to sitting in silence while Raj decides on the pairings.

To his surprise though, she pushes the list of prefects in front of him. "Any ideas for good pairs? I didn't stay after patrol on the train so I don't know any of the new prefects very well outside of the Slytherins."

Myr blinks in surprise. He honestly hadn't spoken all that much to anyone other than Fiona and Adrian, but he takes the paper anyway.

"Well, Melody is good at listening but she's almost always sarcastic about it so probably avoid putting her with Josephine. I think Fiona might be a good match? Her or Shaun, they seem like the calmest two."

Raj nods thoughtfully and Myr, encouraged, pushes on.

"Corey is a bit of a clutz so he should go with one of the Hufflepuffs, probably Jemma or Saundra since they'll be patient with him. Maybe Taylor? I admit I don't know Taylor all that well. And Aidan is nice but I'd say a bit to tense right now with NEWTs to really be functional enough to deal with Corey."

Raj hums again, waving lightly for him to continue.

Myr studies the rest of the list. Honestly he doesn't know the other fifth years quite as well (and only knows Corey as much as he does on account of the boy having somehow gotten his cauldron cake all over Slytherin prefect Alana Farley's robes) so he's a touch more hesitant to make suggestions for them.

Still, he decides to perservere through a few more - he can select half the pairs and leave the rest to Raj.

"Raymond from Hufflepuff was rather quiet, possibly a bit overwhelmed? I'd say Charlie or Adrian would be good at getting him to open up and talk a bit more. And Jessica from Ravenclaw is the exact opposite - super loud and a bit aggressive honestly. I actually would have suggested you taking her but perhaps Alana or Amelia could instead."

Raj actually smirks slightly at that. "Basically put her with one of the scary girls?" She summarizes dryly, though Myr doesn't think she's insulted. It's honestly rather difficult to tell what Raj is feeling at any given time though. 

"Alright, noted." She nods firmly. "Melody will go with Shaun, Corey with Jemma, Adrian can take Raymond and Amelia can deal with Jessica. Bella is an irritable brat so I'm putting her with Saundra and Lionel will go with Hector, they're already getting along quite well. Hmm, then Lindsey..." She trails off, pursing her lips thoughtfully. "I guess she can go with Taylor, just to be safe. He's generally quite laid back. That leaves Tyrone. You didn't talk to him at all?"

Myr shakes his head. "He didn't stay after patrol either. He was with Fiona for that though, if you wanted to put them together again? She didn't say much about it which actually," He perks up slightly, "Means he didn't really leave an impression. Probably he likes talking but doesn't have all that much to say."

Raj blinks, and then actually lets out a short, barked laugh. "I guess you lions are all friends after all. Alright, if that's the case I'm putting him with Brett. They can bore each other with Ravenclaw nonsense."

Myr leans back in his seat, feeling quite proud. Maybe he is behind, but it's definitely all worth it now.

Raj still takes charge during the meeting itself, reminding everyone of the rules and going through the different approaches to punishment they're allowed to take against anyone they find breaking rules, either during the day or on patrols.

"You have to use common sense, and watch out for biases. We're not going to strictly pair you up with only other Houses but if a patrol of two Gryffindors find a Slytherin out of bed I don't care how many generations your family has held onto our feud you better be giving that kid the same punishment you would someone from your own House. Clear?" She says this part rather threateningly, and only Alana and Saundra don't shift nervously at the tone. "Good, now that that's settled, some of you are going to help the fifth years learn the routes, so I hope you didn't have anything else to do today because you're not doing it."

She quickly assigns their previously selected pairs and the prefects without a fifth year to guide head out.

"See you later Myr." Fiona says as she heads out. "Maybe we could study Defense for a bit before dinner? If you're free by then." She adds with a quick glance at Raj, who looks rather impatient for everyone to get out. The other pairs have already left to go over the patrols routes but the Head Boy and Girl have to wait until the other prefects have left since they need to lock the meeting room.

"Astronomy Tower route first, it's the longest." Raj decides once they've finally locked up. "There are five routes in total, so we're not going to be done in time to study with your girlfriend." She adds.

Myr can feel his face turning red. "She's not my girlfriend!" He corrects her. "I'm dating Melody's twin sister actually. Fiona is just a close friend - we're both Beaters for Gryffindor."

Raj blinks, letting that process, and then shrugs. "Okay, that makes more sense how you know her so well. So are you going to continue playing? You know Quidditch can't come before your prefect duties - both Charlie and Hector have tried worming their way out of things before but it's non-negotiable."

Myr honestly hasn't really thought about it. Charlie has mentioned tryouts a few times but Myr has been so stressed about Prefect duties he's barely acknowledged it.

"I dropped out of reserves a while back myself." Raj says idly. "I needed to focus on school."

Honestly Myr hadn't even known Raj had been on the team if he's honest, but he doesn't comment on it.

They walk mostly in silence for several minutes, with Raj occasionally pointing out popular spots for rule-breakers to try and hide.

Finally Myr can't take the quiet anymore. "So..." He trails off, thinking perhaps he should have actually thought of something to say before speaking. "Um, you probably know McLeod then right? He's in our year."

Raj hums. "We're not really talking right now. And he's dropping Quidditch this year, he and Alasdair spent most of last year arguing over Alas's captaining methods according to Hector." She glances over at him. "You do know who I'm speaking of without my using their last names, correct?" She checks, and he does his best to not glare.

"Yes, I do. I'm used to using their last names on the field but I know who they are." He bites back, a bit sharper than he means to but honestly Raj's constant presumptions are irritating. "So Lenox," He emphasizes his use of McLeod's first name with a pointed glance at the Head Girl, "is quitting? Too bad, Charlie was looking forward to taking him down one more time this year."

Raj finally glances over at him, and she's smirking. "Please, Lenox is the best Seeker in the school right now, and even without him actually being on the field Terrence was trained by him - he's going to wipe the floor with Charlie, just wait and see."

Myr grins, rolling his eyes. "Sure, some younger year is going to take out a Weasley. I'll believe it when I see it."

"Two months Big Talk, we'll see who's laughing then." Raj fires back, and Myr is surprised to find her grinning. It's a challenging, mocking one for sure, but it's more honest than anything else he's seen from her since they started talking.

"We'll see indeed." He snipes back. "Although I probably should drop out, shouldn't I?" He adds after a moment of silence. "I'm already prioritizing this over schoolwork, I probably won't have any energy leftover for Quidditch."

Raj eyes him closely for a moment, and then shrugs. "Your call obviously. Also that curtain is the whoops curtain and you really don't want to find anyone behind it when you're patrolling. I'd say use your position to make your patrol partner check when you're up this way. It's a right of passage anyhow, or so I've heard." She smiles faintly as she waves at a particularly thick tapestry adorning the hallway.

Myr decides it's probably better to not ask for an elaboration on the comment and just follow her advice.

He wouldn't say the rest of the walk is better, though he does find it slightly easier to talk to Raj knowing that they have Quidditch in common. She hadn't listened to the Final for the World Cup so he fills her in on the plays that he thought were the most impressive or interesting.

They end up being late to dinner, and as a result Myr ends up with the seat next to Remi Longbottom since he's the last of his class to arrive.

Myr has honestly never gotten along all that well with the brunet, but after the moderate success with Raj he's feeling a bit more social than normal, so he decides to try talking with his most distant roommate.

"So tryout are coming up in a few days." He says idly as he grabs some chicken for his plate.

To his shock Remi merely shrugs. After years on reserves the other boy had finally made the main team the year before and Myr would have thought he'd be ecstatic to continue playing in their seventh year.

"Oh. Um." Myr hesitates, no longer sure what to talk about. Luckily Remi has never needed any prompting to start chatting about himself so he's quick to fill the silence.

"After last year I realized Quidditch isn't all that." Remi declares dramatically. "Let someone else deal with those awful practice times and sore legs. I need to focus on school! There's rumor of a medusa stalking the streets of Dorset county and I'm going to start my Monster Hunter career by tracking it down and taking it out!" He waves his fork in the air dramatically. "So you see I don't have any time for silly games."

"Silly games? Well with that attitude we're glad to be rid of you!" Charlie counters loudly from the other side of the table, looking insulted. "Right Myr?"

Myr shrugs awkwardly. "Um, I'm actually thinking about not trying out this year?" He admits, and Charile gives him the most wounded look imaginable. "I'm sorry! I really need to focus on NEWTs and the whole Head Boy thing threw me."

Charlie groans. "Great, now I have to pick whether to put Fred or George on the team. I'm going to be the new least favorite brother." He complains.

Myr can only laugh. "You can think about it on patrol tomorrow." He says cheerfully. "I'll make sure you get the Astronomy route, so you'll have plenty of time to consider every possible option."

Charlie whines slightly and drops his head into his arms. "I don't like you with power. You're nicer without it."

The rest of dinner is spent making light-hearted banter and discussing Quidditch, NEWTs, and seventh year in general. Myr mostly stays quiet, content to listen to his friends (and Remi) as he eats. If he's honest, he's still pretty nervous about the coming year, but listening to the familiar chatter he knows that things aren't really going to be all that different. It's a comforting thought.

If she's honest Ana had expected seventh year to be dramatically different from the rest of her schooling. She isn't sure why - logically it's just another year, and although they do have NEWTs to prepare for she's well on schedule for them and really they had similar pressures during fifth year with their OWLs. And yet she's a bit disappointed when she realizes one month in that seventh year is exactly like every other year at Hogwarts.

She goes to class, studies in her free time, and writes Alec numerous letters complaining of the boredom. He responds with stories from his work that she knows are slightly exaggerated but which she enjoys nonetheless. At the very least they break up the tedium of her daily routine at school.

She voices her thoughts to Jerome once, rather idly. The two of them are out by the Gamekeeper's hut, helping tend some of the creatures Professor Kettleburn keeps in the garden. Jerome had suggested they do some hands-on studying for the Care of Magical Creatures NEWT and Ana had been more than happy to oblige and do something different with her Saturday afternoon.

"I kind of know what you mean. I remember being so intimidated by the seventh years when we first started, they were all tall and way more powerful than I was, but actually being a seventh year is kind of underwhelming." He agrees with a laugh.

Ana smiles faintly as well. "If I recall you were tiny in first year though, you probably thought everyone was huge."

Her friend chuckles. "I'm still working on the height thing, but you might have a point."

They mostly work in silence, but it's comfortable and despite her own rule of not being sappy or sentimental Ana allows herself a moment to reflect on how odd her friendship with Jerome actually is, and how if she told eleven-year-old Ana about it she rather doubts the girl would believe it.

It's nearly an hour later, when they're herding blast-ended skrewts back into their pens, that Jerome speaks again. "Though there is one pretty big difference. We don't have another year after this. It's our last chance to do anything we wanted to during school."

"Like win the House Cup?" Ana drawls. "Would be nice to wrangle it away from Slytherin this year."

Jerome shakes his head in amusement. "That would be a massive upset. But yeah, things like that. Finnigan is on the Quidditch team again this year, Fitzwilliam is determined to ask that Hufflepuff he's been friends with since forever to go to Hogsmeade with him, stuff like that. Things that you keep putting off until there's no time to put it off anymore."

"And seventh year would be that time." Ana hums. "I don't put things off though, so I doubt it will impact me particularly. Seventh year is going to be just like all the rest."

Jerome elbows her lightly. "You never know, something might surprise you! And hey, if nothing else break will be different! What with your boyfriend and all." He winks teasingly.

Ana just rolls her eyes.

They sit with Amelia and Shaun at dinner, as they usually do. Amelia is quieter than usual, though that in and of itself has become normal since Henry broke up with her. Honestly Ana isn't sure if she's actually still upset about the relationship ending, or if at this point she's nursing her wounded pride more than anything else.

She does still contribute to the conversation at least, though she responds to Shaun more often than to Ana or Jerome.

They get to talking about Potions and the insane level of precision that Professor Snape has been requiring of them which does pull Amelia slightly out of her shell.

"I'll be honest, Professor Snape is a brilliant potioneer, but he's utter cack as a teacher. Shaun, you ought to take his job when you finish your education degree." She whines after Ana recalls their Potions master making Charlie Weasley test his own Elixir to Induce Euphoria. The red-head had been making an arse of himself, to be sure, but Ana has read up on the results of a failed Elixir and had Charlie's partner Nabila not been keeping a very close eye on the potion as it was prepared he would likely have spent at least a week in the Hospital Wing.

Shaun shakes his head. "Don't speak so poorly of him, he's under a lot of stress you know." His words are diplomatic but it's rather evident he doesn't entirely believe them himself. "I imagine he has his reasons."

"I mean, I failed my Potions OWL pretty miserably so it's been a while, but I don't recall Professor Snape ever being very nice." Jerome pipes up, having been mostly unable to offer any opinions on the topic up to that point. "It sort of seems like he doesn't really like kids? Which is odd for a Professor."

"Sometimes people have to take what jobs they can get to pay the bills." Shaun says with a shrug. "Though I agree that perhaps teaching wasn't the best fall-back plan for Snape. I wonder what he originally wanted to do?"

Jerome is looking a bit worried now. "Do you think that could happen to us? I mean, we all know what we want to do but what if it doesn't work out? You guys have fallback plans, right?"

Shaun pats his friend's shoulder consolingly. "Of course we do, it would be silly not to."

"I don't, but I have a guaranteed path." Ana corrects idly.

Amelia rolls her eyes. "Ah yes, your boyfriend gets you the favoritism treatment."

Ana shrugs, feeling absolutely no shame over the truth in the statement. "I know I'm going to do well, and so does Alec. And of course nothing would be quite as secure if it wasn't for my grades - I have been top of the class for all six years so far, and I doubt this year will be any different." She lets herself sound smug, she's more than earned it. "Anyway, networking isn't something to be ashamed of, it's basically a requirement for just about every job out there." She levels a slightly challenging gaze at Amelia. "Wasn't your entire summer internship just a chance to make nice with some of the bigger names in your future industry?"

"That's different, I'm not sleeping with any of them." Amelia says dismissively. Both Shaun and Jerome gape at her but Ana actually feels something akin to respect for just a moment.

"Fair enough." She allows. "Still, I'm not going to refuse a good opportunity just because the means of getting it were perhaps a bit bent. And, I should add, entirely accidental. I'd never sleep with someone just for a job."

Amelia sighs. "Yeah, fine, you have a point." She grumbles, and promptly goes back to stabbing her food in silence.

Honestly Ana was almost pleased to have Amelia snapping at her again - it's a marked difference from the moody silence and perhaps a sign that she'll get over the break up soon and they can return to their usual status quo.

Shaun still looks vaguely traumatized by the ual implications Amelia had brought up, while Jerome is beginning to look more amused than anything now that the initial shock is wearing off.

"Moving on to more palatable discussion," He says with a grin over at Shaun, "October is in a few days and I've heard whispers of people starting up another prank war, like back in third year."

Ana can't help smiling at the memory, and both Shaun and Amelia do the same. The prank war had been irritating for the most part, but Ravenclaw's winning prank, executed by the entirety of the House, is definitely one of Ana's more cherished memories. That day had easily been her best birthday at Hogwarts.

However a moment later she fixes her expression into one of disapproval. "I rather hope nothing comes of those."

"Doesn't Leona know for sure if it will happen?" Shaun asks with a knowing glance at Jerome that has Ana internally rolling her eyes. As observant as he is, Shaun has a massive blindspot when it comes to thinking Jerome likes Leona.

Jerome sticks his tongue out cheerfully. "Wasn't Leona actually, she's got herself a new accomplice who told me about it in Care of Magical Creatures."

Shaun tilts his head. "I'm honestly not sure if I should be concerned that she's expanding her empire or just accept that it was inevitable anyway and move on with my life. Who's the new accomplice anyway?"

Jerome opens his mouth, glances at Amelia, and then shrugs. "A true gossip master never reveals his sources." He says instead, grinning innocently.

Shaun definitely doesn't miss the look, and Ana knows that he's definitely figured, same as she has, that the new source is likely Henry. But he doesn't comment on it.

"Oh good, you're apparently working for her too." He says instead, groaning slightly. "That woman has far more power than any one person has the right to."

Jerome shrugs idly and hums noncommittally, a faint grin playing across his features. "Think what you like."

Ana has Astronomy that night, so she stays in the common room to study while most of the rest of the House goes to bed. Amelia will come back down around twelve-thirty but she likes to catch an hour or so of sleep before the lesson. Finnigan usually makes an appearance around the same time, though Ana doesn't really know what he does up to that point.

Tonight however, Finnigan stays in the common room with her, and by eleven they're completely alone and Ana really isn't sure what to make of her yearmate's presence.

Yes he's been studying a lot more with Jerome, and even Shaun says that he's opening up somewhat after six years of being a brick wall in every possible way but literally. But Ana still hasn't really interacted with him much so she isn't sure whether or not he expects her to start a conversation. She doesn't care honestly, but he is becoming friends with her friends so she'd rather be on neutral to positive terms with him if at all possible.

He ends up speaking first, and Ana politely looks up from her notes so he knows she's listening.

"So Jerome talks about you a lot."

She doesn't respond, just tilts her head in acknowledgement, and Finnigan actually seems to relax somewhat.

"Says you're his best friend. So, uh, I figured since," He frowns, stumbling over what he wants to say for a moment before abandoning the train of thought entirely, "Well, I guess we should talk more."

Ana shifts slightly. Not what she was expecting, but it seems he's come to the same conclusions that she has about their nonexistent relationship which is always a good starting point.

"I wouldn't be adverse to that." She assures him, still uncertain of how to actually speak to the other and habitually reverting to the tense formality she takes up with all strangers.

He looks about as lost as she feels though which again, is a good start in her opinion.

"Jerome said you're playing Quidditch again?" She suggests, recalling her friend's comment from earlier in the day and hoping it might spark the other Ravenclaw into talking.

Unfortunately his only response is a slightly uncertain "yeah" followed by more silence.

Ana frowns. "If you wish to speak with me more you need to actually speak more." She points out flatly, and he starts, flushing slightly though Ana thinks he looks more angry than embarrassed.

"Right, I know that." He snaps. "Jerry says you're nice but no offense I don't trust that. Jerome thinks everyone is nice."

Ana snorts. "Obviously, he's friends with you." She fires back and then wonders if that was too much. Amelia is obviously rubbing off on her.

Or Evie. But that thought is too horrifying to dwell on for longer than a second before very firmly suppressing it.

She quickly amends the statement to preemptively curb any insult taken. "And myself. I was far from the most open to friendship at the time of our first real interaction and frankly thought him an idiot not worth my time."

Finnigan eyes her suspiciously for a long moment, and then sighs.

"I can't say I didn't have the same thoughts, so I can't really judge." He grumbles, sounding rather annoyed by the realization. Then he sighs. "Jerome is the one who pushed me to try out for the team again this year."

It takes a half-second for Ana to realize he's finally replying to her earlier attempt to discuss Quidditch. "He tends to push people at situations and decisions if he thinks they'll be good for them. You made it on, correct?"

Finnigan nods. "Though Captain Lewis was very clear it was only because most of the team graduated last year and he was desperate." He says sourly. "The other new Chaser is a second year who keeps almost falling off his broom in excitement."

Ana grimaces. "No chance at the Cup then? I would have liked to see Ravenclaw take it again before we graduate."

Finnigan actually looks surprised for a moment. "You like Quidditch? I figured you would be someone who complained about how nonsensical it is."

"Nonsensical can be fun, and Quidditch is quite fun, even to spectate." Ana replies, feeling rather smug. "And really, activities such as sports are a great way to relax or stay in shape, so really they're far from nonsensical."

They end up discussing Quidditch until Amelia appears from the girls' dorms, clearly still waking up but pretending she isn't.

"Oh, you're already here." She says once she's registered that Finnigan is also in the room. "Well, let's go then. Maybe we'll beat Nabila for once."

They don't talk on the way up the Astronomy Tower - they never do - which gives Ana some time to properly ponder Finnigan's sudden and apparently random decision to start talking to her. He'd mentioned Jerome of course, but from their conversation Ana can already tell Finnigan isn't the sort of person to do anything unless he's decided on it himself.

Except for when it comes to Jerome, apparently. An observation which naturally leads itself to one rather obvious conclusion, but Ana doesn't particularly want to speculate on that possibility as it feels invasive to her. Besides, if she's correct Finnigan will likely tell her himself when he's ready to do so.

Still she finds herself looking over at the boy again, critically eyeing him through the new lens she now has. He's rather gawky, definitely the tallest Ravenclaw in their year and possibly the tallest person overall in their grade. His hair is a black curly mess and his face seems to be set in a permanent scowl.

If Ana's hunch is correct, she honestly has no idea what Jerome sees in Finnigan Marley. But if they do turn out to be dating, she's determined to be fully supportive. Even if it means spending more time with Finnigan.

If she wasn't perpetually numb Rajani might almost find it morbidly amusing how the world keeps moving around her. It feels like one of the most important cogs to the continuation of the Earth's rotation is gone, and yet it keeps going, uncaring, along with most of it's population.

Sometimes Rajani feels like she and Eugene are the only two people who have somehow fallen off of the world and are now watching it spin away from them. If she wasn't so numb she might be worried. But she doesn't have the energy for it, so she just puts what little she has towards pretending that everything is fine.

She has to - as Head Girl there are things beyond herself to attend to, people relying on her accomplishing her tasks in a timely and efficient manner. And she of course has to study for her NEWTs - Queenie would be furious with her if Rajani tried to use her best friend as an excuse to fall apart.

That doesn't stop it from being very difficult to not do just that. She's so far kept her breakdowns to the dorm she shares with the other Slytherin girls, and they don't comment if they happen to walk in and see her.

Nia gives her a wide berth if she's the one to come in, while Clary will usually sit nearby and have her own silent cry (and it's actually rather odd how quiet she's being in general lately but Rajani doesn't have the energy to really think about it). Elspeth surprisingly is the most directly sympathetic, usually conjuring a glass of water to set by the bed and sitting quietly nearby with a book and waiting until Rajani has calmed down, at which point she quietly asks if she's feeling a bit better and leaves when Rajani gives the affirmative (she's never sure if she's lying or not but she thinks Elspeth would stay if she was so she much be telling the truth).

The days blur together as Rajani robotically fulfills her duties, studies for school, and meets with Myr to set up the weekly patrol listings. She thinks Myr might hate her but she's not really paying enough attention to him to know for sure.

She doesn't actually care though, so it doesn't matter. She'll never see him again after graduation anyway and she's doing her job perfectly so he can't complain.

She's only taken a few patrols herself though she's sent Myr on at least two a week to make sure he knows the routes firmly. She hasn't made Eugene take any patrols - he's doing even worse than she is. Myr commented on it only once, apparently learning it was a taboo subject after Rajani leveled him with a stare that could probably kill if weaponized.

At least, she thought he had learned, but the second week of October when they're putting together the patrol list he decides to try again.

"I think Eugene should take a patrol with Jemma this week. Maybe the Great Hall route, it's the shortest one." He suggests casually, as if he hadn't just violated their unspoken agreement.

Rajani glares at him but he doesn't look at her, instead continuing to scan the schedule for a few more seconds before apparently realizing she isn't going to answer. "Raj? Is that okay?"

She purses her lips but he still won't look directly at her so the effect is lost. He wants to force her to talk, the damned lion. Fine then, she can be the more accomodating party.

"Eugene is still in mourning, he'll miss things if he's sent on patrol." She replies smoothly. "Give the patrol to Lionel, he hasn't taken that route too often, I want to make sure he knows it."

"Then he can take it Tuesday with Adrian." Myr counters steadily and Rajani rather hates him for daring to sound that calm when he's not being at all reasonable. "Look, I can't say I get it. My dad may be dead but I spent most of my life thinking he was an arse who ran out on my mom after cheating on her so I never really mourned, even after getting the truth. But I do know that letting people wallow in their own misery isn't helpful for anyone."

Rajani glares at him a moment longer, hating that his words make sense.

Hating that they sound like something Queenie might have said.

"Fine. Jemma is probably a good partner choice anyway." She reluctantly agrees. "But I'm going to check with both of them afterwards how he did and how he's feeling, and if it was too much he's off the roster again."

Myr nods easily. "Of course. Alright then how about Bella and I take the dungeon route on Thursday?"

She doesn't know if he's volunteering to partner with their, admittedly, most irritating fifth year to try and appease her, but if that's his plan it doesn't really work. She remains vaguely irritated with him for the rest of the session, and only later realizes that it's the most she's felt in a while. She isn't sure how to react to that bit of information.

She asks Eugene that night at dinner if he's alright to go on patrol for Wednesday, and she isn't sure whether the listless shrug she gets in response is a good response. Still, despite her personal distaste for Jemma (which has lessened since the start of the year though whether due to the numbness of Queenie's death or the fact Rajani had defeated the other girl for Head Girl is unclear) she knows that of all their prefects she's the best choice to pair with Eugene for his first patrol of the year.

Still, she stays awake that Wednesday night, pacing the floor of the common room until her friend returns from patrol, whereupon she immediately steers him to one of the couches in order to check in on him.

"Everything go well?" She asks as casually as she can manage.

Eugene presses his lips together slightly, and then nods. "It was actually really nice. Having to scold students was... distracting, I guess. I didn't have time to focus on the fact I feel completely hollow because I had a job to do." He sighs. "Jemma was nice too. She's weirdly good at talking to people, but you know that." He lapses into a dull silence for a long moment, and honestly Rajani is impressed he'd said that much so she doesn't expect him to go on, but a moment later he speaks again. "She should be a Healer. I told her that today - I don't know if you've ever really talked to her during patrol but she was between childcare and healing all last year. But she knows how to talk to people - I think that's important." He trails off again, his eyes going distant, and Rajani knows for sure this time that he's not going to talk again.

"Well, that's good to hear." Rajani says uncertainly. Maybe she had been wrong to keep Eugene off the roster? "I'll make sure you pair with her again next week for one of your patrols then."

He nods vaguely and she can't do much more then nod briskly in return and head up to her dorm.

She doesn't get much sleep that night.

The next day she has both Transfiguration and Defense Against the Dark Arts with Jemma, but as the blonde Hufflepuff sits with her boyfriend - Rajani's ex-friend Donaghan who she's still not comfortable being around four years later - in both classes she has to wait until after school to ask about the patrol with Eugene.

She's twitchy all through the day, and she even sits in the back during Defense to make sure she catches Jemma when the other girl leaves at the end of the lecture. It's not her best decision considering she's struggling in the class already but in her mind it's an acceptable casualty if it means she gets a better picture of how Eugene's patrol had gone.

She makes pointed eye contact with Jemma as the other girl and Donaghan come up the aisle after class, and Jemma thankfully understands and walks over to her.

Unfortunately she pulls Donaghan along, though he looks as thrilled as Rajani feels about the prospect of having to talk to him again.

"Hi Raj, do you need something? Oh, this is Donaghan by the way, we're dating."

"We've met." Rajani decides to remain diplomatic. "I had a few questions if you've got time? Prefect stuff." She adds with a pointed look at her former friend.

"It's cool Jem, I'll meet up with you in the library." Donaghan smiles, and Rajani isn't sure if he's genuinely unaffected by being around her or if he's just gotten incredibly good at masking what he's feeling.

She suspects it's the latter as Jemma gives him an odd look. "Alright then. See you later." She gives him a quick kiss before turning to Rajani. "What can I help you with?"

"I wanted to ask about last night's patrol with Eugene." She replies briskly. No need to dance around the point - knowing Jemma she likely was already somewhat aware of what Rajani would be asking about.

Jemma hums. "It went well honestly, considering the circumstances." She tilts her head thoughtfully as they slowly exit the classroom and start towards the library. "He admittedly seemed to... well, I wouldn't say get better, that's not going to happen for a while, but he opened up more? He was completely mute to start but he was talking by the end of it. I'd say patrolling seems to be doing him some good." She looks like she might want to say more, but after a short glance over at Rajani she changes her mind. "Nothing drastic happened on the patrol though so I don't know how he would handle a conflict right now. If you want my suggestion....?" She trails off, looking over at Rajani again.

A year ago Rajani wouldn't have wanted anything from her biggest rival in the school. Now though, she nods for the blonde to continue.

Jemma looks quite pleased. "Well, I'd say keep him on generally shorter patrols, and with people who are really good and single-handedly dealing with problems, just until we know for certain how he handles them. Adrian would be a good choice, or Saundra. You and Amelia from our year, and maybe in a few month I think Tyrone from Ravenclaw would be a good fit as well, he's got a nice mix of Shaun's calm and Alana's spark in him. But he is still new so probably give him another few weeks to really get comfortable with the routes." She nods firmly. "In my opinion he needs the normalcy of patrols right now, something steady. Like I said he relaxed more the longer we were out."

Rajani studies the other girl before nodding once. "We'll certainly keep all that in mind, thank you Jemma." She hesitates as the other girl smiles and begins to pick up her pace to walk away. "And Eugene was right. I think you'd do well as a Healer." She shrugs at Jemma surprised glance. "Have fun with your boyfriend."

She walks away then before she says anything she'll regret later and decides to hunt down Elspeth and Nia to go over the Defense lesson they'd just had. After all, she hadn't really been paying as much attention as she should have.

Luckily her friends are more than happy to sit down with her - they've officially finished with Unforgivables now (which Elspeth complains about somewhat) and have moved on to the beginning of patronus charms, though their new Professor informed them they wouldn't be attempting a cast until after Christmas break. Only five minutes into the study session and Rajani understands why - the theoretics behind Patronus charms are so complex that she honestly isn't sure that even a month is going to be enough time to properly comprehend the technique for the spell.

"It seems so arbitrary." Nia grumbles an hour later. "What dictates if a memory is 'happy enough' to fuel a fully formed patronus? If someone is depressed are they just not going to be able to make one at all until they get over whatever made them pissy in the first place? And if dementors away happiness how can you ever fulfill these bloody requirements at all?"

Elspeth blows a strand of hair out of her face an mutters an agreement.

Rajani however hums thoughtfully. "Well... is it so different from the Unforgivables?" She points out, earning herself disbelieving looks from the other two. "Hear me out." She says quickly, "To properly cast an Unforgivable you have to really mean it, right? That's an emotional aspect. The patronus charm seem to have that exact same aspect, except instead of truly meaning harm you have to truly mean, um, being happy." She shrugs slightly. "It might be easier to understand that way?"

Nia doesn't look convinced but Elspeth has a thoughtful expression on her face. "That actually does make some sort of sense." She admits, tapping her quill aginst her Defense notes and causing an ink splatter across them. "Higher level spells require more emotional control..." She trails off and starts scribbling a few things down onto the scroll while Nia watches in vague confusion.

Rajani normally might have teased Nia for her confusion. After all, she's not only taking Defense but also Charms and Transfiguration which should be giving her plenty of solid background for the more complex spellwork they're doing. However she opts to remain silent instead, jotting down her own observation in her notes so she won't forget it.

She has her own patrol that night with Hector, and she's more than happy to let him chatter away about the Quidditch team and the new maneuvers Alasdair is running them through and mostly remain silent for the hour and a half patrol.

She does tune in slightly when he starts talking about their new Seeker. She isn't that close to Terrence Higgs but he's a good kid from what she remembers of the few interactions they've had and she's happy to hear that he's getting along with his teammates for the most part.

He has apparently inherited some of Lenox's distaste for Alasdair's methods, but being younger he hasn't challenged the Captain that much.

"He'll come around though, the new stuff is awesome, we're going to absolutely cream Gryffindor this year." Hector says happily. "Heck, we could probably do it even if Weasley catches the snitch."

Rajani is admittedly happy to hear it. She may have dropped her Quidditch dreams early on but she'd still love to get one last win over the lions before graduation.

She almost smiles at the thought. And she thinks she maybe feels the world spinning underneath her feet, just for a moment.

So the last line of Raj's section links back up to her observations right at the start of her POV, which is probably really badly done but I need to start practicing overarching symbolism now because I want to try and incorporate it into CtF xD Anyway, can you guys believe there's only five chapters left? Four in 7th year and then the epilogue. ALSO Ana continues to fight me but the hardest part of this bit was actually remembering to write 'Raj' in Myr's section since that's how he knows her xD

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!