Chapter Twenty-Eight

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Disappointments

"Good game, way to use my move against me." Lola grins as she offers Charlie a handshake.

All the players have landed back on the pitch, and while Gryffindor may have been the victor of the game the Hufflepuff stands are the ones celebrating more heavily.

Charlie grins back. "I can't believe you didn't see it coming." He teases, and she laughs in turn.

"Fair enough kid." They finally release their handshake and move down the line.

"You were really good up there." One of Hufflepuff's Beaters compliments Myr with a bright smile. She's a slight thing, but he can feel definitely strength in her grip as they shake hands. "Reminded me of Laurel's play style a bit! I look forward to next year's match as well." She punches him playfully on the arm before moving on to shake Charlie's hand.

On Myr's other side, Fiona looks amused. "That was pretty chummy, she didn't say anything to me." She notes.

Myr shrugs. "I remember her from last year, she probably just remembers Laurel's playing. It's a compliment."

"I know, it's just cute." Fiona grins at him teasingly, and Myr finally figures out what she's hinting at and flushes.

"Would you stop? If I don't want to date I don't want to date." He grumbles, and Fiona giggles.

"I'm not pushing! I just think she maybe thinks you're cute is all, nothing else."

There is still a small celebration in the Gryffindor Common Room that evening - they had won the game after all, if not the Cup. Myr is pretty sure he spots some firewhisky being passed around but Charlie and Evera catch him and drag him into a conversation before he can report it to Professor McGonagall.

All in all, it is a nice evening of general cheer, and Myr ultimately decides to enjoy it while he can, even if there is a part of his brain fretting over the obvious rule-breaking happening just where he can't quite see it. After all, now that the Quidditch season is over the only thing they have left to look forward to is exams.

Even with his improved magic over the year the final exams still aren't something Myr is particularly eager for. So he enjoys the warmth of the fireplace - probably the last time it will be lit as it is officially warm enough outside most days to declare it springtime - and conversation with his friends until they're pushing curfew and Bill and the other prefects have to warn everyone to call it quits soon.

Of course, they don't stop talking entirely. Brandon parks himself onto Charlie's bed once all the boys have changed into their sleepwear and Drake takes up residence at the end of Myr's bed and they keep talking well into the night.

The next day is Sunday, and Myr regrets his decision to stay up with the other boys. They all get to sleep in, but he has to drag himself up for a study session with Percy at nine. Which really isn't all that early considering it's the same time that school always starts, but after falling asleep at what was probably close to three in the morning, it feels like the crack of dawn.

He's surprised when he gets to breakfast to find that Bill and Oliver Wood are also sitting with the first year Weasley. Myr takes a seat next to the prefect.

"Morning." He greets blearily, dropping onto the bench a bit harder than he'd intended and wincing slightly. He knew it wouldn't bruise, but sitting on a broom for hours always makes him sore, and his rear end did not appreciate the extra abuse, small as it was.

Percy looks apologetic. "You didn't have to get up Myr, I could have studied myself. Sleep is quite important and Ollie and I could hear you guys still up around midnight." The first year points out, lips twisting into something that Myr would almost call scolding, if not for the fact the expression was on the face of an eleven-year-old.

Myr hums tiredly. "Up now, 's all good. I need to study myself anyway." He adds when he sees Percy about to launch into a lecture about good sleeping habits. He's already heard it given to both Oliver and Charlie - the latter having received it twice. "Exams are coming up in a month after all."

Oliver whines pitifully at that. "I am so not ready for Defense Against the Dark Arts. Or anything." He admits.

"That's why you're studying with us." Percy shifts slightly, and Myr realizes he must have bumped legs with Oliver under the table. "You'll get better if you just buckle down and actually study, instead of trying for two seconds and then getting distracted."

Bill snorts. "Honestly I think everyone is going to have trouble with Defense this year, the teacher was really subpar." He points out.

Myr hums agreement around a mouthful of breakfast. Swallowing, he voices his thoughts on the matter.

"The fourth years have already made a pact to all study together next weekend." He tells them, finally starting to feel some of the residual tiredness starting to inch away as the food properly enters his system. "Or at least the Gryffindors and Hufflepuffs have, and Frannie and Jemma are going to ask their Ravenclaw friends to come as well."

Bill laughs. "I miss having big study sessions like that. OWL study groups were crazy, we even had some Slytherins sit in a couple of times."

Myr raises an eyebrow in surprise. He can't recall ever having spoken to a Slytherin outside of class or Quidditch - the House really keeps to itself, not that he can say he paid much attention to that fact. "That's crazy. Though I guess even the snakes worry about OWL grades, they are pretty important."

Bill laughs. "Understatement of the century. If you think exams have been bad so far next year is going to be awful."

"Lovely, always good to have something to look foward to." Percy pipes up dryly, his lips twitch upwards slightly with amusement.

Bill laughs and rewards his brother by messing up his hair, earning a furious whine from the younger Weasley and laughter from Oliver.

"So are you joining me and Percy today Oliver?" Myr decides to finally address the fourth person at the table. Oliver looks about as sleepy as Myr feels, poking tiredly at his food and mostly just watching the conversation between the Weasely brothers, never joining in for longer than a sentence at a time.

The brunette blinks, and then nods. "Yeah, Perce says you've helped him a lot. Plus being in the library is probably a better atmosphere than the dorms to study in."

Myr laughs, thinking of his own roommates and their never ending chatter. "Very true. Well, I hope I can help."

They continue chatting easily, unavoidably ending up on the topic of Quidditch once Oliver properly wakes up enough to join the conversation. The kid seems to have a hard time talking about anything else honestly, though it reminds Myr a bit of Laurel so it's endearing for the most part.

When they move to the library Bill accompanies them, much to Myr's surprise.

"Hey, I don't have exams this year." Bill points out. "So it's not like I have anything better to do than help out my brother and his friends."

It ends up working to Myr's favor that Bill is there. While the first years quiz each other on their subjects, Bill helps Myr with all of his subjects.

"So you're taking Care of Magical Creatures and Muggle Studies as well?" Myr questions as they go over the wizarding understanding of electronics, a topic that Myr did terribly in due to actually knowing how electronics work.

Bill shakes his head. "Nah, I studied these two on my own, but I passed the OWLs so I think I'm qualified to help with them. I'm taking Arithmancy and Ancient Runes since it's a lot harder to study those outside of a classroom."

Myr glances at him, raising an eyebrow. "You can take OWLs without being in the class for them?" He can't help but ask. It's a rather odd realization.

Bill shrugs. "Most people don't, but I wasn't sure what I wanted to do so I figured better safe than sorry. And once I did figure it out it became more of a challenge to see how many OWLs I could pass."

"He passed all of them." Percy adds in, interrupting his own explanation to Oliver on Transfiguration Theory. "Bill's absolutely brilliant." He beams proudly and Bill laughs and ruffles his hair again.

"Thanks Perce. You're not so shabby yourself."

It's not long after that a few of Myr's friends trickle into the library and join them, eager to get help from Bill and compare notes for the impending exams.

"Aw man, I've got an entire chart written up entirely wrong." Holly groans as she looks over some of Nabila's notes from Divination.

Personally Myr thinks all the charts look ridiculous, but he doesn't comment as Fiona switches from talking about Charms with him to trying to help Holly. He instead turns to Charlie, who's engaged with Drake and Evera in a very heated discussion on the best breed of Dragon.

"I'm pretty sure we haven't covered those in Care of Magical Creatures yet." He points out to them with no small amount of amusement. "Are you three already done studying?"

Charlie grins over at him. "Might have gotten slightly sidetracked. But really, who thinks the Ukrainian Ironbelly is the best dragon?"

"It's the biggest one!" Drake declares.

"And that's all it's got." Evera points out. "The Swedish Shortsnout is obviously the superior breed. It has the hottest flames, so it automatically wins against literally everything else, living or not."

Myr sighs, mostly lost if he's being honest. Cadi would probably have more of an opinion on Dragon Breeds than he does, so he lets the three continue their debate and decides to spend some time going over his notes just with himself. Maybe he can find some solid questions to ask Bill when the older Weasley is done helping the two first years with their Defense essays.

They break for lunch, and about half of them reconvene in the library afterwards to continue studying. Myr is admittedly feeling a bit better when he settles down that night to sleep, though he was so tired by the end of the session that he's rather certain he's not going to remember anything from that part when he wakes up in the morning.

When they arrive at breakfast the next morning it's immediately clear that the entire school is starting to switching into finals mode, as several students are reading textbooks and going through their notes. There's still about a month left before studying will turn into cramming, but it's close enough that the most diligent students are getting head starts.

Myr knows that most of his friends will only be cracking down on the weekends, but he decides to start rereading their Defense Against the Dark Arts textbook as he eats his breakfast.

And as it turns out, his early preparation proves to have been quite a good idea when the month's end rolls past and he's significantly less stressed than most of his friends. Only Nabila seems unconcerned as finals studying kicks into high gear and everyone begins cramming themselves into the library.

As the two least stressed (not that Myr isn't still very worried - he just feels he's a bit more prepared than his peers who hadn't begun their reviewing until now), Myr and Nabila often find themselves studying together in the surprisingly empty Gryffindor common room with the handful of other students who had thought ahead. It's actually pretty nice - it reminds Myr of their first year when he and Nabila had studied together in the library. He forgot how good of a study partner she is.

Currently she's quizzing him on Potions, which is their first exam much to everyone's disappointment. He's doing decently, though he keeps mixing up the instructions for the Calming Draught and the Draught of Peace.

"Ground moonstone goes in later for the Draught of Peace." Nabila reminds him as she scans over his notes. "Otherwise pretty good job. You're more prepared than Fiona is."

Myr raises an eyebrow as he collects their shared study notes and shuffles them in preparation to quiz Nabila on the same material. "Really? She's always been one of the top students in our year though."

"In Gryffindor, and she's always below me." Nabila doesn't even try to pretend she isn't bragging. "Her ranking is more indicative of how little the rest of our House studies rather than how much she does. You'll probably outrank her this year now that your magic thing seems to be fixed."

Myr smiles faintly. He doesn't want to jinx anything or sound arrogant, but he thinks Nabila may actually be correct. Most of his points lost in the past years had been on the practical sections of the exams, and with his new wand those parts are looking far less daunting.

That said, "When we finish here, do you think you could help me practice for the practical parts? I haven't actually really studied for that in the past since I wasn't very good."

Nabila grins lightly. "Of course, I need to practice too after all. Quiz me first, then we can go find an empty classroom to use."

Nabila does much better on the Potions quiz than Myr had, and he makes a mental note to himself to go over the recipies for everything again before bed that night. They then pack up their notes, grab their wands, and head out into the castle to find an empty room.

They end up picking up Holly and Leona Poole from Hufflepuff on their way, and the four of them practice together until it's time for dinner.

Myr ends up jumping between study partners for the practical aspects of the exams, sometimes joining Aidan, Charlie and Brandon out on the Quidditch pitch, sometimes tagging along with Evera, Drake, and Jemma, and even once sitting down with Fitzwilliam and Shaun from Ravenclaw, who he hasn't seen all that much of outside of class since first year.

By the time exams actually start he's feeling pretty confident about his chances at doing well. Or at the very least, better than he had in the past. His mother, Uncle Cyril, and Cadi all send him snacks and well wishes the weekend before finals officially start, and between himself and his roommates all the sweetest treats are gone by the end of the day.

For once, Myr feels like he's not only ready for exams, but that he's actually going to miss Hogwarts over the summer. Just a little bit.

Ana is ready as she ever is when exams hit. That doesn't mean she stops studying though, flipping through her notes while waiting outside the Charms classroom for the exam to start.

"Seeing you study is making me even more stressed." Jerome whines pitifully. He, Shaun, and Amelia are standing with her, though she's the only one with notes out. "If you're not ready then there's no hope for me."

"You did well when we quizzed you yesterday." Amelia comforts him, and Ana nods.

"You'll do fine Jerome. I just like revising. Half of this is for my Animagus training anyway." Ana tells him. Her last lesson with Professor McGonagall had been two weeks prior, at which point the Transfiguration professor had told her to focus on her other subjects. Ana is hoping she'll get some summer homework for it, but she's somewhat pessimistic on that front.

Jerome grins slightly. "Still nervous, but thanks."

Charms goes quite smoothly, save for Evie's wand sparking and everyone near her, including Professor Flitwick, diving for cover. Somehow the brunette manages to not set anything on fire for once, and Ana is pretty sure she gets bonus points for it. Which Ana thinks is ridiculous, but she doesn't say anything.

Ana's own performance is flawless, and even Jerome manages decently well. He's beaming proudly as they exit the classroom three hours later.

"One down, too many to go." Evie declares, attaching herself to their group as they make their way up the hall.

The boys eye her warily, but Amelia and Ana have been making something of an effort to smooth things out with their roommate in the past few months so they are less surprised.

"Good job not burning everything down." Ana offers. Evie looks torn between being insulted or laughing, but she ultimately settles on a slightly tense smile.

"Yeah, I'm getting the hang of knowing when my wand is about to go off." She says after a moment.

Shaun looks over at her curiously. "Your wand? You mean the problem is your wand acting on its own?" He clarifies, and Evie frowns at him.

"Yeah, it's not like I want to burn things or blow them up." She snaps defensively.

Shaun shakes his head. "Well yeah, obviously. You should talk to Willow or Holly Kiddell about that, they're really good with wands. They might be able to help you with yours."

Evie looks surprised that Shaun's advice is actually non-malicious. "Oh, um, yeah. Thanks, I'll do that." She finally remembers to say as the group turns towards the library. "I'll go find them now! Thanks!"

"That was weird." Jerome declares once Evie has left, and Amelia laughs.

"She's been trying more recently. Hasn't destroyed anything in our room since last year, which is a new record for her."

"Even got me a Christmas gift since she thought I hated her." Ana adds.

Jerome pokes her lightly. "You do have that aura. I thought you hated me for a while there too!"

Ana frowns at him. "I don't bother hating things, it's wasted energy I find. Easier to just ignore people than hate them."

Amelia shakes her head slightly. "A good policy, but I find it hard to believe you've never hated anyone."

"I find people annoying." Ana acknowledges. "I certainly found both Evie and Jerome to be annoying at first."

And Alec. She mentally adds.

Jerome laughs. "Annoying is fair. You like me now though, yeah?"

Ana shrugs. "You're tolerable."

Jerome proceeds to make a complete fool of himself as he pretends Ana's words have physically injured him. Both Shaun and Amelia laugh, along with several other people in the corridor, while Ana merely rolls her eyes at the childish display.

"Less tolerable now." She states primly when he's finished, and the other three stare at her in shock. "What?"

"Did you just make a joke?" Jerome asks incredulously. "I don't think I've ever heard you be anything other than one hundred percent serious about everything. Honestly it was sort of freaky."

Ana frowns at him. "I can joke." She defends, but she knows he's right. It had been a bit of a gamble, but she'd attempted some humor with Hannah on their last Hogsmeade visit and the blonde had been delighted, so Ana had thought she'd try with her new friends when she saw an opportunity. Perhaps it hadn't been a good idea.

Amelia quickly speaks up. "That was great, you should joke more." She smiles warmly at Ana. "Dry humor suits you." She adds.

Ana nods, relaxing slightly. "Yes, well, thank you."

She's not sure if it's the joke or the exam stress, but something does shift in their dynamics after that. Even Finnigan, who while not really part of the group still gets dragged into it on occasion, notices the change and comments on it as the group studies in the boy's dorm room two nights later.

"You guys are all being weird." He informs them flatly, barely glancing up from the Defense Against the Arts textbook.

Shaun raises an eyebrow at him while Jerome laughs uncertainly. It's Ana who actually ends up addressing the statement though, after a good thirty seconds of silence.

"In what way?"

Finnigan shrugs. "Dunno. The atmosphere is different. Normally I feel like I'm invading but now it's not like that."

"That could just be you." Ana points out.

Finnigan shrugs again in answer and they all go back to studying again. But Ana finds herself pondering the observation, as it does align with what she's been noticing as well. There had been a faint tension in the group prior to the start of exams, one so subtle she hadn't even been aware it was there until it vanished. Now she's curious as to what had caused it to exist before, and what made it vanish after.

The next day they have Transfiguration first thing in the morning, and Ana of course does flawlessly. She's confident she's gained another O for her report card.

"I wish I had your magical skill." Jerome sighs as they head to lunch. "I definitely only got an A again. I'm probably going to be the one Ravenclaw who manages to flunk the OWL for this class." He jokes lightly.

Shaun pats his shoulder supportively. "We'll all study together next year, don't worry."

"As long as you do your best that's what counts." Amelia adds.

Ana doesn't say anything. She kind of agrees with Jerome - as hard as he tries it's pretty clear he's not great at magic or memorization.

Amelia nudges her, clearly meaning for Ana to add something nice, but Ana just shrugs.

"That's why I like you, you're honest." Jerome grins at her. "It's fine guys, I'll just keep doing my best! And hey, if I don't make it it's one less class to worry about for NEWTs."

Ana can tell he's still a bit nervous despite his cheer, but she doesn't push it. It's something to worry about next year - for now they still have over half of their exams left.

Defense is in the afternoon, and even Ana walks away from the exam feeling less than pleased.

"I really hope this is the worst teacher we get for this class." Amelia sighs. "I feel terrible for the fifth and seventh years who had to deal with her during their OWL and NEWT years."

"I don't care about sixth year, but next year and seventh I do hope we get a better professor." Ana agrees. "Though I can't imagine it gets worse than her."

"Don't jinx it." Jerome laughs.

The next day is Potions and Herbology for Ana, and while she knows she passed both they're always the two classes she has the least confidence with in terms of consistently getting Os. She's rather certain she'll be dropping them both after OWLs, assuming neither is needed for whichever job she chooses to pursue.

She voices as much when their group, plus Evie for some reason, is sitting in the common room, playing a few rounds of Wizard's chess. She's not currently playing, so she'd started talking to Jerome about future plans.

"Do you know what you want to do yet?" Evie asks curiously. "Personally I'm completely stumped. Anything interesting involves flying and, well, I never passed that class." She still sounds sore about it, but at least she's not throwing fits every time her broom ban is brought up.

Ana shrugs, though she admittedly does have more of an idea now than she had when she first arrived at school. "I have a few options I'm sorting through. I intended to narrow it down over the summer, since we won't be meeting with Professor Flitwick about it until the beginning of next year."

"That's smart." Shaun agrees. "Pawn to B6." He adds to his pieces.

Amelia narrows her eyes at the board thoughtfully as she adds her own two cents. "I'm going to be a Magizooligist myself."

"We know." Jerome teases. "I figure I'll see what my grades look like this year and then plan accordingly. Whichever subjects I'm best at should probably be the ones I focus on in terms of jobs, right?"

"Makes sense." Ana agrees. "Do what you're good at."

"Isn't it do what you love?" Amelia points out with some amusement. "Okay no, that's definitely a trap. Knight to E5."

"Not if you're bad at what you love. Do what puts food on the table." Shaun suggests. "Also Bishop to E3, check."

Amelia growls slightly under her breath and turns her full focus back to the game.

"Do what you love after you've secured enough money in the bank to support said love in case it doesn't pay the bills." Jerome concludes with a grin, and Ana smiles slightly as well.

"I think that works." She agrees.

"It's a little wordy, but I can get behind it." Evie agrees cheerfully.

The next day's exams are mostly electives, so Ana ends up separate from her friend group in the morning when she goes to her Ancient Runes final.

Aidan sits next to her as she gets settled. "Feeling ready?"

"Of course. Are you looking forward to being the number two student in our year again?" She responds, only realizing afterwards that her humor might not be as welcomed by the Hufflepuff.

However, Aidan laughs. "Somebody is confident. But to answer your question, yes, I am looking forward to outcompeting everybody except for a single Ravenclaw."

They don't get to speak much after that as Professor Babbling hands out the exams and any talking would naturally be considered cheating. Ana finishes before Aidan does, but she decides to wait for him outside of the classroom, assuming he shouldn't be much longer.

Sure enough he emerges slightly less than eight minutes later, and he looks surprised to see her. "Hey, how did it go?"

"Easy." She replies truthfully. "I'm reading ahead to prepare for OWLs and a lot of that stuff links back to this pretty well."

Aidan nods. "We'll have to study together next year then." He suggests. "Speaking of, did you want to sit with me and my friends? We're going over History of Magic."

Ana hums. "Perhaps for an hour or so, but I'm supposed to meet with some of my friends to go over Arithmancy before this afternoon's exam."

Aidan nods in understanding. "Makes sense. I'm not much for studying for things on the day of the exam, it always stresses me out too much. Otherwise I'd join you."

Ana admittedly hadn't really thought to ask him to join - Aidan and her exchange gifts and she certainly considers him a friend, but their friendship tends to remain in the classroom for the most part, as well as the occasional walk through the halls in between classes. Still, she hums in understanding.

"Makes sense."

She ends up sitting with Aidan and his friends for only a few minutes before deciding that she would get far more accomplished on her own than listening to Charlie Weasley and Brandon Young ask incredibly obvious (and in her opinion incredibly stupid) questions.

So she finds a table with fewer people crowded around it and spreads herself out to reserve space for when Amelia and Shaun arrive.

After about thirty minutes they join her, bringing with them Fitzwilliam who looks less than pleased at the admitted mess Ana has created in her endeavors to keep enough chairs free of people.

She shrugs unapologetically as she gathers her things and gives her friends and Fitzwilliam space to sit down. "Enjoy your morning freedom?" She greets dryly. Ever since the first time she'd done it, being vaguely snarky has become her default state of being. No one has complained yet so she doesn't think she needs to be too worried about it for now.

"We went over some History of Magic with Finnigan and Jerome." Shaun informs her. "Evie had Muggle Studies though, so Jerome is studying with her now."

"That... doesn't sound particularly helpful for either party." Ana observes honestly.

Amelia frowns at her. "Sometimes you can be a little mean." She says quietly, and Ana frowns back.

"Apologies, I didn't realize. I'm just stating the facts as I see them."

Shaun quickly redirects the conversation to Arithmancy, and they manage to stay civil until lunch, at which point Amelia makes it clear she's not speaking to Ana if she can help it.

"Jeez, what happened?" Jerome asks in confusion when he joins them at the Ravenclaw table. "We were doing so well this week."

Ana decides to be honest. "I mere observed that I wasn't sure you and Evie would make for very effective study partners. Amelia took offense."

Jerome snorts. "Not an unfair point. We did end up pretty distracted when Willow came down to the common room and Evie practically attacked her in hopes she'd help with the wand thing." He pats Amelia on the head lightly. "I appreciate your standing up for my honor, but you know Ana doesn't mean anything bad by it. She's just very blunt."

Ana raises an eyebrow. "...Still, I apologize." She finally says. "If nothing else, what I said should have been stated with you in the area. As it was I may as well have been speaking about you behind your back, which is not something friends should do."

Jerome blinks, for once forgetting to smile around his honest surprise. Then he starts beaming. "We're friends?"

Ana frowns at the question. "Of course. Did you think we weren't?" She's actually going to be a bit upset if that isn't the case.

Jerome shakes his head quickly. "Of course we are! I just didn't know if you thought that yet!" He says, still grinning brightly, like he can't help it. "Oh man today is the best! Even if Evie did set the rug on fire."

"Evie did what?"

Exams had been exhausting. Which, of course, isn't exactly surprising, but it still somehow catches Franziska off guard every year when she wakes up the Saturday after their final test feeling utterly drained.

Her roommates clearly agree with her, as all of them are still burrowed under their covers despite the sun streaming in from the high windows indicating that it must be halfway through the morning at least.

"We should wake up." Franziska observes blearily, half into her pillow but loud enough that she's pretty sure that at least Tonks and Jemma in the beds next to hers will hear.

Tonks whines. "Counter argument, we could continue not moving."

"Counter argument accepted." Kiera declares from Tonks' other side, yawning loudly on the last syllable. "Today is a day for not moving. We have earned it. So sayeth me."

"Don't you usually wake up at five in the morning? Why are you so against this?" Franziska points out, though really, she doesn't want to get up either. She just feels like talking.

"That's at home, and not right after the hardest exams of our lives." Kiera declares.

"OWLs and NEWTs are going to be harder." Leona reminds them unhelpfully, and they all groan except for Jemma, who Franziska thinks is actually still asleep and not just being lazy like the rest of them.

"All the more reason to enjoy freedom while we have it." Kiera declares, half-muffled as she snuggles back down into her bed.

"Still, can you believe we're done fourth year? That's over halfway finished with school." Leona observes after a moment of silence. "We're like, almost adults."

"Ain't that a scary thought." Tonks jokes lightly. "I haven't even had a date yet, how could I handle a job?"

"We have to start thinking about that though." Franziska points out. At this point she's pretty much awake, but her bed is warm and really, there's no reason why they need to move. "Professor Sprout is going to be going over class requirements for jobs with us right at the start of next year."

"Urgh, don't remind me, I have no idea what I want to do." Leona groans. "Sarah and Patrick both knew perfectly what their plans were, and Ed was an arse and didn't tell me how he handled it. I know he still has no clues on the job front and he's about to go into seventh year."

Franziska feels a bit bad for her friend, but she herself isn't really worried about the impending meeting with their Head of House. She's known for quite a while that she wants to go into Muggle Relations, and she already knows thanks to her mother which classes she needs OWLs and NEWTs in for those positions.

"You'll figure it out, Professor Sprout is basically the best Head of House so she'll be super understanding." Kiera pokes her head up from her covers only long enough to reply to Leona. "I mean really, if Snape let your brother get away with that imagine how much better Sprout will be."

Franziska giggles at the picture that suddenly leaps into her head of Snape patting students awkwardly on the head. "I bet Snape was awful. Your brother is probably embarrassed to say what happened."

Leona snorts. "You know, you might hbe on to something there. Honestly, who thought making Snape a Head of House was a good idea?"

"Isn't he the only Slytherin on staff? He kind of doesn't have a choice." Tonks points out.

"Coach Crowell was Slytherin. He should have been the Head of House, he was one of those rare snakes that actually was nice to people outside of his House." Leona sighs.

"He would have been terrible though. He only really cared about Quidditch." Franziska points out. "I know you talked to him after first year, but I never did."

"Still better than not caring about anything." Leaon declares, and Franziska has to give her that.

Eventually nature's call and hunger (and Jemma waking up) force the girls to get out of bed and get dressed.

"You know what I most look forward to about the summer? Being able to have breakfast in my pyjamas." Tonks announces. "You can't do that here since meals are all in the Great Hall."

"I have literally never done that." Kiera says in amusement. "Is it that amazing?"

"It is pretty nice." Franziska admits. "Though you might be able to get away with in during the Winter Break? I think I've seen a few kids in their pyjamas at meals since so few people actually stay."

Tonks perks up slightly, and then frowns. "I'm not sure my parents would like me staying over Christmas though. I'm not sure I would like me staying over Christmas."

"It's pretty fun." Leona pipes up. "I stayed last year and it was a party. Probably staying against next year since, you know, OWLs."

"I'm considering it, but I think I'd get to homesick. Plus Wilbur is getting old. I want as much time with him as possible." Kiera frowns. "At least Charlotte will be around for a while yet."

Franziska shudders when Kiera mentions her pet tarantula. "I still don't know how you can stand having that thing in your room."

"She's a she, not a thing, and she is wonderful and fuzzy and loves cuddles." Kiera declares, though she's grinning to show no offense has been taken.

Unsurprisingly the guys are already in the Great Hall when the girls arrive. Henry waves them over eagerly, and everyone shuffles to make room.

"Nice sleep in?" Tyler teases.

"Extremely." Kiera grins back. "Jealous?"

"Absolutely." The blond responds without missing a beat, and the whole table laughs.

"One week left." Donaghan observes quietly. "It really went fast this year, huh?"

"I can't imagine next year." Jemma nods. "With OWLs I'm sure it will be even worse."

"And prefect duties for some people." Leona adds, nudging Jemma lightly.

"It could go to anyone." Jemma defends. "If you all know so well who's getting the badges then which guy gets it?"

"Probably Aidan." Henry decides after a minute. "I'm pretty sure the rest of us would go power mad within five minutes of getting to school if we were given that job."

Tyler snorts. "At least you're aware of it."

"Donaghan would be a good prefect I think." Jemma pipes up. "Frannie too."

Franziska nearly chokes on her orange juice. "No thanks. It's hard enough navigating my personal life without having to navigate everyone else's too."

"How are things going with Brandon by the way? You guys didn't hang out much during exams." Leona asks, though her looks tells Franziska that she probably already knows the answer.

Franziska shrugs. "We were both busy, and he's used to studying with Aidan and Charlie. We're hanging out this afternoon by the lake - you guys can come if you want, we haven't had a proper hang out by the Black Lake since first year."

"Hey that's true!" Kiera perks up. "Oh man, this is going to be great! Did I even bring my swimsuit? Tonks do you have an extra if I forgot?"

Leona looks torn. "It wouldn't be imposing?"

Franziska shakes her head. "He's already invited Charlie and Aidan, and probably most of Gryffindor knowing him. I ask Fitzwilliam too but he said he's busy."

Leona immediately grins. "Well then, I suppose I could grace this party with my presence."

The rest of breakfast is spent making plans, and Franziska finds herself even more excited for the afternoon.

She grabs Brandon shortly before lunch to tell him about the plans.

He looks just as excited as she feels. "That's awesome! Is there anything we should bring? Charlie is coming obviously, and Fiona and Holly said they might stop by. And if Tyler is going Remi will probably come too, and I can drag Myr out - he needs to loosen up, he's been way too tense because of exams." He continues rambling excitedly, eventually deciding that every fourth year Gryffindor is going to be down at the lake whether they like it or not.

Franziska just laughs and lets him talk. After how awkward they've been recently it's nice to hear him getting excited about something without any underlying uncertainty. Eventually they have to separate to go to their respective Houses for lunch, and Franziska can't stop grinning.

"Good to see you so happy." Leona comments when Franziska sits down. "So operation lake party is definitely a go?"

"Yep." Franziska grins. "So we better eat quickly if we want to get everything set up in time - apparently there's going to be a lot of guests."

Henry nods. "I told Amelia about it too. She says she might come by too, so that's at least a couple of Ravenclaws."

Franziska and Leona both smirk. Henry has has an incredibly obvious puppy crush on Amelia for nearly two years now but despite the fact they've sort of become friends he's too scared to actually ask her out, despite his confidence in everything else.

"Hey that will be fun! We don't get to hang out with them very much." Tyler says. "Oh, and uh, I invited Remi too." He shifts a bit, and Franziska gets why. Tyler's cousin isn't exactly the most popular person in their year, rivaling Evie in the amount of chaos he creates. Still, it's an open party, so she smiles at him.

"That's fine, just maybe keep an eye on him?" She suggests, and Tyler nods, clearly relieved at the calm response.

"Of course! Thanks Frannie."

"Okay team, let's finish eating and get this party started!"

Franziska is pretty sure she has a slight stomach ache from how quickly she'd powered through her lunch, but it's completely worth it. The Hufflepuffs had split into two groups, one heading for the greenhouse and the other running to the kitchens. With a bit of magic they'd transfigured a few picnic blankets by the side of the lake and piled on the snacks they'd gotten from the House Elves. They then pitched several puffapods into the water, so the shore of the lake is covered in floating flowers. All in all it's beautiful and Franziska is thrilled that they'd thought of it.

She's sitting beside Brandon, holding his hand loosely and enjoying the sunshine. Charlie, Fiona, Myr, and Leona are playing chicken in the water with interference being run by Kiera and Tonks. Jemma, Drake, and Evera are swimming nearby, splashing each other and anyone else who gets to close. Nabila is talking excitedly with Amelia on one of the blankets while Henry sits beside them listening in eagerly. Donaghan and Cian had brought their instruments are are playing quietly to their small audience of Shaun, Jerome, and Tyler. On the second blanket Evie and Holly are engaged in an animated conversation that involves a lot of waving their wands around. Franziska thinks she ought to be more concerned about it than she actually is.

In fact, the only thing that's setting her slightly on edge is the fact that she can't see where Remi has gotten to. However, she's relaxed enough that she's able to tell herself she'll worry about it when it actually becomes a problem.

"I admit I didn't expect Nabila and Amelia to hit it off so well. They're both so quiet." Brandon observes idly, playing with Franziska's fingers.

"Both love creatures though, right? I saw Nabila and Charlie debating about them at some point, and Amelia is apparently really loud in the Care of Magical Creatures class from what I hear." Franziska responds, just as idle. Really the conversation doesn't matter, she's just glad to be relaxing with her friends.

Of course, the loose thread she'd told herself not to worry about ends up showing up exactly when she's most relaxed.

It starts when Evera shrieks. At first Franziska thinks Drake must have just dunked her again, but then Holly is shouting too.

"What the heck is that?"

"Everyone, meet the giant squid!" Remi yells excitedly from the lake, where sure enough he's riding on top of a giant squid.

Franziska freezes in a panic, looking helplessly at the others. What exactly was one supposed to even do in a situation like this?

"Remi what the heck?" Tyler looks absolutely livid. "What are you doing? That thing could be dangerous?"

"Aw he's fine." Remi yells back, apparently oblivious to his cousin's fury. "Come on, haven't you ever wanted to meet the giant-"

Before he can finish the sentence the squid bucks and he tumbles from atop it into the water, vanishing from view.

"I'm getting a teacher. No one go into the water." Jemma instructs, and the few people still standing in the shallow end quickly jump back onto dry land.

Tyler is still fuming as he paces along the bank. "I'm sorry Frannie, I know I said I'd keep an eye on him."

Franziska shakes her head. "I mean, you shouldn't have to. I doubt anyone is going to be mad at you for his stupid decisions."

"Wasn't his cousin supposed to be watching him?" Evera grumbles to Drake, dripping onto the ground and glowering at the lake.

Franziska sighs and Tyler wilts.

Jemma returns with Professor Flitwick a few minutes later, and Franziska is starting to worry as none of them has seen Remi emerging from the water yet.

They quickly fill the Professor in on the situation, and he blows out a low breath before nodding.

"Right, one of you go get Hagrid. The rest split into two teams and patrol the lake to see if the boy has washed up along the shores. I shall investigate the lake once Hagrid arrives."

"I'll get Hagrid." Franziska volunteers immediately. She hasn't been able to visit the groundskeeper since finals had started and she'd like to see him again before leaving for the summer. Even if it is under less than ideal circumstances.

She races off as soon as Professor Flitwick agrees. Hagrid's hut is on the opposite side of the castle, but Franziska manages to get about halfway before she's forced to slow to a walk, panting heavily and nursing what is going to be a massive cramp in her side given a few minutes.

She continues to stumble determinedly along, sprinting a few times when her mind tricks her into thinking she'll be fine and that the cramp isn't as bad as it actually is.

She does finally reach Hagrid, and he and Fang run on ahead while she takes a much slower pace back to the lakeshore.

When she arrives, Remi is back on the shore, soaking wet and being very firmly dressed down by Professor Flitwick even as he shivers under a heavy towel. Hagrid is waist deep out in the water, seemingly talking to the surface of the lake though Franziska suspects his conversation partner might be the squid.

She wanders over to where Brandon is sitting with Aidan and Charlie, and her boyfriend quickly hurries over when he spots her approaching.

"Hey, sorry that went so sideways." He frowns at Remi despite the Gryffindor boy not looking at them.

Franziska presses her shoulder against his lightly. "It was fun up until the giant squid attack though." She points out. "So I can't really complain."

He smiles over at her, and she smiles back. She really can't complain.

Rajani thinks she rather likes dating Ed. There are plenty of perks that she didn't know came with a boyfriend, and a few extra ones stemming from his role as a prefect. The most prominent of which is getting to sneak around after hours and claim the best makeout spots.

It's at least forty minutes past curfew when the two of them stumble back into the common room, laughing quietly and ignoring the eye rolls they get from a few of the upper years still awake.

"See you tomorrow." Rajani whispers, giving Ed one last, chaste kiss before they split to go to their respective dorms.

Queenie is waiting up for her when she walks in, though Rajani isn't particularly surprised. Her best friend is usually still up when she returns from her late night trysts with Ed.

"Have fun?" Queenie asks dryly.

"I'll bet." Nia laughs. "Older guy like that probably has a lot of useful experience."

Rajani grins slyly. "I have nothing to say on the subject that's any of your business." She replies cheekily, and Elspeth snorts from where she's burrowed under her covers.

Queenie frowns. "It feels like you're just using this guy for makeouts." She says after a moment. "That's not a healthy base for a relationship."

Rajani raises an eyebrow as she begins changing for bed. "It's not a relationship though, not like yours and Eugene. Ed and I already talked about this months ago when we first decided to start using 'boyfriend' and 'girlfriend' when talking about each other." She pulls on her nightshirt before turning to face her friend. "He's graduating next year, and we've both got major exams we need to focus on. We both agreed that this relationship is just going to be for fun, no strings or expectations attached."

Queenie doesn't look particularly thrilled with the answer, but honestly Rajani doesn't care. Her relationship with Ed is honestly everything she could have hoped for. All the discomfort and uncertainty she's been feeling all year seem to have vanished every since they'd decided to play things by ear and just have fun. It may not be a relationship Queenie would be happy with, but Rajani is beyond thrilled.

That said, she doesn't like going to sleep while her best friend is uncomfortable, so she decides to share a tidbit of information she'd picked up while sneaking around that night.

"So boyfriends aside, I may have gotten a peek at the final scores for the House Cup competition."

All eyes are immediately on her. Although Slytherin had taken an early lead in the competition, Hufflepuff had been steadily overtaking them, and that morning the two Houses had been neck-in-neck. Every Slytherin had spent the day doing everything in their power to gather last-minute points, but the Hufflepuffs had been doing the same, leaving the final result as unclear as ever when dinner time came around.

Rajani grins and basks in the attention and anticipation for a moment before taking pity on her friends. "Guess who's taking home the Cup for the fourth year in a row?"

"Woo! Heck yeah, best House!" Nia whoops and high fives Clary enthusiastically. Queenie grins as well.

"Only natural really." She says airily, and Rajani smirks and shakes her head.

"Those poor badgers." She says cheekily, dropping onto her bed and muffling a yawn. "Well, we can celebrate tomorrow at the feast, but I'm beat. Goodnight all."

She doesn't fall asleep immediately, but within a half hour she's drifted off.

The next morning their dorm is a flurry of excited activity as they all get ready for their final day at Hogwarts.

"Clary, I'm pretty sure this is yours." Elspeth tosses a book onto Clary's bed, and the brunette glances at it.

"Oh hey! I've been looking for that, how did it get into your stuff?" She wonders a she jams it into her trunk around the rest of the things she's already crammed in.

Queenie eyes the disorganized mess. "Honestly Clary, you wouldn't lose so many things if you learned to pack properly."

"It works for me." Clary counters cheerfully. "And I haven't lost anything really; I just misplace stuff for a while. It always makes its way back eventually."

Queenie rolls her eyes and Clary sticks out her tongue in reponse.

Rajani just smiles to herself as she organizes her own trunk. Lakshmi will be caged and put onto her bed during the goodbye feast as she is every year, so after double checking her potions ingredients Rajani is confident she hasn't forgotten anything.

"I can't wait to see the looks on the Hufflepuffs' faces when they see we won again." Nia's grin is wicked. "Snakes can't be beat."

They arrive in the common room just as she speaks, and Lenox glances up at her words from where he and the other guys in their year, plus Ed, are seated on one of the couches.

"It means there's more pressure to keep winning next year though." He points out. "And more animosity from the other Houses."

"The other Houses are jerks with or without alledged reason." Elspeth grumbles. "I don't recall them being very friendly first year either, and Ravenclaw had won the year before."

Rajani hums lightly in agreement. "Ed, you'd know better than us, but Sahana and Mayra seemed to deal with the same stuff we did even without the win streak."

Ed shifts so she can sit next to him and he slides an arm over her shoulders. "Can confirm. Slytherin and the other Houses just don't get along. They're all so quick to assume we must all be mini dark lords in training that they've never really bothered to try and know different."

"They think they're so great, but they're even worse than us." Elspeth growls. "Hufflepuffs and their acting like they're better just because they can't take care of themselves properly, Ravenclaws thinking they're smarter than everyone else, and Gryffindors."

She doesn't need to say anything more on Gryffindor House - they all know exactly how hypocritical and awful the lions can be without needing to spell it out.

"Enough with the negativity, today is a celebration." Eugene declares. 

"And one well earned." Lenox agrees. Clary has settled herself next to him much the same as Rajani has with Ed, and once again the Indian girl is pleased to find that whatever weirdness she'd felt about the two before has seemingly evaporated since she started her own relationship.

"I can't believe the year is over already though, I'm going to miss you all this summer." Clary pouts. "Raj, any chance you'll be hanging out with your sister again?"

"Maybe. Work is tough for her right now and summer is in season for Mayra so it will probably be a lot harder to find time to stay with them this year." Rajani replies. She doesn't mention that her sister's letters have been rather odd of late and she gets the feeling that it's more than work stressing Sahana out and decreasing the likelihood of a summer visit.

"I'm not actually going to be around very much this summer." Queenie adds. "We're celebrating Kingsley's graduation with a trip to South America to visit family. I'm pretty excited, I haven't seen my cousins in years!"

Clary raises an eyebrow. "Sounds like fun. But whatever will Eugene do all by his lonesome?" She teases, and Queenie laughs.

"Actually, Eugene and his mom are coming with us." She explains happily. "Our families arranged the whole thing as a surprise. We're leaving in a week."

"You better get lots of pictures." Clary demands. "Leaving me all alone over break, you're going to owe me!"

"Shouldn't you be getting mad at Lenox? He's the one actually dating you."

"He also isn't stable enough during the summer to set a time." Clary replies to Queenie's counter argument. "We've already agreed to just write each other as often as possible."

Nai pretends to gag. "We get it, you're adorable." She jokes lightly. "Now come on, I want to be the first ones to the Great Hall!"

"You told them?" Ed guesses as the group makes their way through the dungeons towards the main entrance.

Rajani grins lightly. "You have to ask? They're my friends, of course I said something."

Ed shakes his head. "For shame."

She elbows him lightly. "Please, you absolutely would have done the same if you didn't have patrol. All your friends were asleep by the time you got back."

Ed laughs. "Well, I can't disagree. Still, it was fun playing dumb this morning when we all woke up."

When they enter the Great Hall Rajani's friends still get excited - after all they hadn't actually seen the final point tally like Rajani and Ed had, and there's something viscerally pleasing about seeing their hourglass filled just a bit more than all the rest (except for Gryffindor's which is rather drastically below the rest due to a major point loss only a few day prior).

"Four years and counting." Clary declares proudly as she grins at the hourglasses.

"Don't get ahead of yourself, we haven't even started fifth year." Queenie warns, but she's smiling as well. "But it does have a nice ring, doesn't it?"

The group settles about halfway up the table, and Ed gives Rajani a quick peck on the cheek in farewell before moving to greet his friend from his year and sit with them.

"Do you even know any of his friends?" Queenie asks, staring after Ed disapprovingly.

Rajani shrugs. "I've talked to a few of them, yeah. They're nice enough, but pretty frazzled. All Ed's closest friends are taking about a million NEWT levels unlike him. I'm fully planning on stealing some of their workbooks next year before they graduate."

"Still, you guys are dating. You should know his friends - he knows yours."

Rajani rolls her eyes. "Yeah, about as well as I know his. It's just a casual relationship Queen, we don't need to be involved in every aspect of each other's lives all the time."

Queenie is still frowning, but the arrival of her brother cuts off any further complaints she wants to give.

"Hey guys, great job this year!" Kingsley grins enthusiastically, clapping Eugene on the back as he does. Eugene pitches forward slightly, coughing, and Queenie catches him by the arm.

"Thanks Kingsley. Please don't break my fiancé." Queenie smiles up at her brother, who laughs warmly.

"I can't promise anything Queen. So, done fourth year already. You kids ready for OWLs next year?"

"Don't remind me." Clary groans. "I barely passed the normal exams this year, I guarantee I flunk at least half of my OWLs."

"Well look at it this way, that's four classes you don't have to take anymore." Nia teases.

Kingsley leaves them to it shortly after so he can greet the rest of the Slytherins and, presumably, sit with his actual friends. The fourth years are only too happy to maintain conversation amongst themselves until everyone has filed in and Dumbledore stands to give the farewell speech. All of Slytherin goes siilent, eager to hear their victory announced once again.

"Yet another exciting year has come and gone!" Dumbledore exclaims cheerfully, "And all of the Houses performed quite admirably this year! However, there can only be one winner of the House Cup, and this year, once again, Slytherin has pulled ahead by a few points! Congratulations."

The Slytherin table erupts into nearly deafening cheers, and Rajani has no problems dropping decorum and joining in the noisy celebration herself. Around her Clary has jumped out of her seat and is awkwardly leaning over so she can hug Lenox, Nia is shaking Elspeth, and even Alasdair and Cadfael look somewhat pleased from where they're sitting a few feet away from the rest of the fourth years. Rajani can't see her potions partner Finn, but she assumes he's likely as happy about the results as anyone.

The Feast is a cheerful event for Slytherin House, and Rajani feels properly stuffed by the time she stumbles back to the dorms to collect Lakshmi and her trunk for the train ride home.

Ed catches her in the common room, his own trunk and a cage with his toad awkwardly juggled in a single hand.

"Hey, I was thinking we could sit together on the ride back?" He suggests, and Rajani is only too happy to agree.

"Hey, guys, I'm sitting with Ed. See you at the platform, yeah? Don't leave without saying goodbye."

Most of her friends are more than happy to agree with some light teasing, but Queenie does look slightly put out by the announcement. Rajani ignores it - if Queenie is going to be petty about Rajani's boyfriend, that's her problem. Rajani has more important things like kissing to be occupying her time and attention.

The train ride back is honestly one of the best ones Rajani has had. There is, of course, copious amounts of making out, but they also chat about their summer plans and Ed talks a bit about his aspirations for after graduation.

"I'll probably go into the Ministry like Sarah did honestly. Something with Wizengamot - I've become pretty interested in the legal system in the past year." Ed tells her, and she raises an eybrow.

"I honestly would not have called that." She admits.

Ed laughs. "Yeah, that makes sense. My family doesn't even know I'm considering it yet. What about you? You've got that meeting with Snape about the future in the fall, you know what you're looking at?"

Rajani shrugs. "Kind of? I'm thinking of going into the Ministry, though I want to stay very far away from whatever Sahana is doing." She grins, and Ed laughs as well. She'd told him about the insane hours her sister was pulling for work.

Seven hours passes faster than normal, and as she feels the train slowing Rajani starts collecting her things.

"I need to find my friends to say goodbye, I promised I would." She explains, somewhat apologetic to cut things off even just a few minutes early.

Ed waves her off with a grin. "I know how that goes. Have fun, I'll write you this summer, yeah?"

"Not if I write first." She replies, waving as she pushes open the compartment door and hurries down the train, scanning for any sight of her friends. 

The train has reached the station by the time she finally locates their car, but it's worth the effort when Clary drags her into a hug as soon as she open the compartment door.

"Hey! There you are. Get lots of goodbye kisses?" She teases upon releasing Rajani.

"I did indeed. You all have a great summer, and write me as much as possible okay?" Rajani demands.

Everyone agrees easily, and Rajani thinks that despite how much tension she knows is going to be at home, this may not be such a bad summer.

So I didn't end up writing this in an exam-stress haze, because I didn't end up writing during exams xD I cranked out about half of this chapter in a single day and I just finished it four hours ago so it's probably a complete mess and I apologize. But hey, Merry Christmas, Happy Hanukkah, or Merry Fesitvus for the Rest of Us! Hope you all are relaxing with your favorite people for the next few days!

Also, this is officially the last update of 2018, and the last chapter of fourth year! Now we're getting into prefects, breakups, and all that wonderful stuff that comes with being properly highschool-aged! Also my favorite of the DADA professors arrives next year~ See you all in 2019!!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2452 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!