Chapter Seventeen

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Comet On Its Way

Starting school on a Tuesday is a little weird for Ana, but it's just a matter of orienting herself and she's back on track.

She gets her new schedule during breakfast and looks it over as she eats, half tuned in to the seventh years' conversation going on around her.

"Ugh, I've only got five classes and I still manage to have no free time on Mondays." Horace gripes.

Hannah grins teasingly. "No rest for the wanna-be lazies." She mocks playfully. "At least you're not still in Astronomy, my class this year in on Sunday at two in the morning."

Ana winces slightly. Her own Astronomy block is set for one o'clock on Friday mornings and she's definitely not looking forward to it.

"Why'd you even keep on with Astronomy Hannah?" Eric questions, his own schedule already put to the side. "It's not a very useful subject."

"It is too!" Hannah counters, and Ana looks up from her own parchment in interest.

"How so?" She wonders. "From what I can tell so far we're just memorizing which stars go where - not very magical."

Hannah sighs in a very put-upon way that has both Horace and Josie grinning. "I'll have you know that Astronomy was the very first branch of Divination. To read the stars is to read the future. Also knowing where stars are located in the sky at any point of the year can be vital if a witch or wizard ever gets lost while out in the field. Curse-Breakers especially make good use of their Astronomical knowledge."

"So you want to be a Curse-Breaker?" Horace frowns in confusion.

Hannah shakes her head. "I'm thinking of being an Astronomer actually."

And with that Ana tunes back out and refocuses on her schedule. It's a bit packed compared to her previous year, but it made sense given she had three additional classes. Her only regret is that by taking her three chosen electives, she'd apparently forfeited the right to sleep in during the week.

Once breakfast is over Ana heads up to the sixth floor for her first class of the day: Study of Ancient Runes.

The Professor is a wisp of a woman, with a severe face and straight brown hair that does little to compliment her features. The room is still mostly empty when Ana arrives except for a single Hufflepuff boy sitting right at the front of the room. His textbook is already out and Ana can see, even from the doorway, that he's already taken some notes on the pages.

She decides she rather likes this unknown Hufflepuff and decides to sit next to him, instead of taking an empty desk and risking having someone worse become her seatmate.

The boy looks surprised when she sits next to him. "Oh, um, hello." He smiles awkwardly. "Ana, right? You've been top of our class for the past two years."

She nods briskly. "I'm afraid I don't remember your name." She admits diplomatically. She's really not ashamed of the oversight - she doesn't know most of her classmates' names.

He gives a lopsided grin that's still a touch uncertain, but a bit more grounded that he'd been when she first sat. "Aidan Ward, Muggleborn. And Hufflepuff, obviously." He laughs and gestures at his robes. "Have you started reading the textbook yet?"

"Naturally." He grins. Ana decides right then that she intends to keep sitting next to Aidan Ward for the remainder of the class.

Eventually the rest of their peers arrive, and Ana is surprised to notice that all four Houses are represented, though even with that there are only eleven of them in the room.

The Professor introduces herself as Bathsheda Babbling and gives a lengthy lecture on the importance of understanding Ancient Runes, and how they are much more than just ancient writing systems.

As Ana had already read the first three chapters of the textbook, she's already familiar with everything the Professor is saying. So she flips ahead a chapter and starts studying some basic runes.

When she happens to glance to the left she's amused to find that Aidan has had the same idea. When class ends, she decides to speak to him about it. They are, after all, heading in the same direction anyway.

"I think it's both fascinating and bit suspect that supposedly all runes are formed on a mere seven base runes." He notes as they head down the stairs towards the greenhouse.

Ana shrugs. "Perhaps, but seven is a well documented figure in magic. It contains quite a bit of power."

Aidan grins at her. "I read that too. You're taking Arithmancy?"

"And Divination." She confirms. "But still, I do agree that it's a bit suspect. I'll bet there are exceptions that we'll see in the NEWT levels."

She decides to stay with Aidan during Herbology, and they continue discussing Ancient Runes while potting Puffapods. Aidan nearly drops one of his but Ana is quick to snag it with a levitation charm that earns her five house points.

Aidan grins. "Nice reflexes. You wouldn't happen to be interested in dueling practice sometime? I've been wanting to try my hand at it but I'm second in the class so there isn't anyone who would really be a challenge."

Ana hadn't realized Aidan's scholastic position until then, and she raises an eyebrow. "Alright, I could maybe show you a few things." She acquiesces. "On the condition you teach me anything about Care of Magical Creatures that I, for whatever reason, cannot figure out on my own."

He agrees, and they shake on it. Ana heads to lunch after the hour and a half lesson feeling rather pleased with herself.

"You'll be happy to know I've made a friend in my own year who is a Hufflepuff." She informs Hannah as she sits down at her usual spot with the seventh years. "So I'll be perfectly fine when you all graduate this year."

Eric grins. "Well that's a relief. I admit, I was worried about you Ana. You aren't the most social person in the world. So who is this kid?"

Ana is momentarily affronted by Eric's comments, and then she remembers that she'd befriended him rather by accident and has to concede the point to herself. "His name is Aidan Ward, and he's second in my year."

Sarah laughs. "Set high standards for friendship." She says approvingly. "Otherwise you end up surrounded by the likes of Josie and Horace."

"I'm perfectly pleasant company, I just get frisky when Ace is around." Josie snipes back pleasantly. "Not my fault you're in a permanent dry spell love."

Sarah frowns and backs down, and Ana once again reaffirms her own desire to never get into or be interested in having a relationship. The whole thing seems to be more trouble than it's worth.

"Hey, not her fault she has higher standards than you." Hannah points out, and Horace looks wounded even as his girlfriend laughs.

"I can recognize a diamond in the rough is all."

"And I think you're both nuts." Hannah concludes cheerily. "Now let's hear more about Ana's new friend. I want to make sure we're leaving our third year in good hands."

Ana flushes at the possessive sentence, but she knows Hannah means it in the best possible way so she tells them what she's learned about Aidan in the two classes they'd had in the morning.

The seventh years all have class after lunch is over, but as Ana is free until her Defense Against the Dark Arts class at fifteen hundred she decides to head to her favorite place in the castle and do a bit more advanced studying for her upcoming classes.

The library is almost completely deserted, but Ana habitually walks past the tables brightly lit by the giant windows that line most of the library and finds her favorite spot just past the restricted section. It's a bit gloomier there, but she rather likes the feeling of the world outside her books not existing.

She gets so caught up in her Divination textbook that she almost forgets she does actually have one more class today. She manages to make it to the Defense Against the Dark with minutes to spare, and as the last person to arrive she's stuck with the one remaining seat in class - next to Evie.

The brunette doesn't acknowledge her, starting stubbornly at the front of the classroom instead, and Ana is perfectly fine with that. She unpacks her books and a parchment and quill to take notes with and waits for the class to begin.

Their new professor is a man who looks to be in his mid forties and is suffering something of a beer belly. Ana can't help but think he's probably having a mid-life crisis.

"Well, um, good afternoon everyone. I'm Jonathan Addington and I'm your new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher!" He smiles awkwardly. "I hope we'll all get along this year!"

It's far from a promising start to the class, and Ana ends up tuned out as she reads through the chapter they're studying on her own, taking notes on what she thinks is important or interesting and merely annotating the parts that are less intriguing.

Evie glances over at her once or twice during the lesson, a mixture of confusion and annoyance, but Ana manages to escape the classroom before the Muggleborn can say anything on the topic of her lacking attention.

She hadn't received any homework from her three classes that day, so she decides to check her schedule and prepare for the next day's courses with the remainder of the time until dinner.

She's quite pleased to see that she has Ancient Runes again at the end of the day, and after Herbology again. She hopes she'll be able to pair up with Aidan again and solidify that relationship as quickly as possible.

Dinner is spent listening to the seventh years - or more specifically Sarah as the others for being a stereotype - plan out study schedules for their NEWTs. Ana herself isn't planning to study for midterms or finals just yet, but she certainly understands Sarah's determination for the NEWTs and she imagines she'll likely implement a similar schedule when she's seventeen.

"So if we follow your schedule will you give us House points?" Horace jokes, and Sarah sighs and rolls her eyes.

"Being Head Girl is a very important job - I'm not going to give out points to just anybody for anything less than a stellar reason." She says briskly. "I won't abuse my power."

"Aw, then what's the point of having any?" Josie teases in turn, and Ana rolls her eyes.

"This is why Sarah is Head Girl and not you two. She has actual respect for propriety." She observes, and Eric and Hannah both laugh.

Sarah grins at her as well. "I think you could be a good prefect yourself Ana, if you were a bit more social."

Ana shakes her head. "I'm honestly not very interested in being a prefect. Too much trouble I think, and my grades speak for themselves."

"Most jobs do require you to interact with people Ana." Horace points out, and Ana is momentarily taken aback as she's rather certain it's the first time he's addressed her directly.

"I'm aware of that. I can deal with people just fine if I'm being paid for it." She explains patiently, and is then immediately confused when the whole groups starts laughing.

"Ana you're a gem. I'm going to miss you next year." Josie giggles.

Ana decides to take the compliment even if she isn't quite sure what warranted it in the first place.

The next day starts with Divination, and Ana is very quickly disappointed. Professor Trelawney resembles an insect with her think glasses and trailing scarves. She also spends the first twenty minutes of a fourty five minute class discussing how most of them will never truly be able to use Divination properly.

Ana is aware that while pure Sight is rare, success as a Divinator can still be achieved by a thorough understanding of the symbolism in the field. By the end of the class she's very firmly written Professor Trelawney off as quite mad as well as an incompetent teacher.

Thankfully Transfiguration is the next class on her schedule, and she's quite excited to see Professor McGonagall, her favorite teacher at Hogwarts. Not to mention she has a question for the professor.

Professor McGonagall doesn't bother with any review, stating that they're old enough that she expects them to review on their own time. The lesson is all theoretical, but Ana is enraptured in a way a lot of the students around her aren't. She's so engrossed she almost doesn't register that Alasdair had conspicuously decided to sit beside a blond Slytherin boy instead of her.

She does notice though, and it makes her think about Hannah's words on the train. She shrugs off the uncertainty, reminds herself that she has a new potential school friend in Aidan, and returns her focus fully to the class.

She earns ten points for Ravenclaw during the class, and when it's over she takes her time packing up her things so the rest of the class will leave ahead of her. Once the room is empty of everyone except for herself and McGonagall she walks up to the teacher's desk.

"Professor? I had an inquiry and I was hoping you could help me?"

Minerva McGonagall smiles at Ana. "Of course Ms. Vulchanova. What can I do for you?"

Ana takes a quick breath. She knows her request is a rather major one and she hopes the Professor will consider it instead of simply brushing her off. "I was actually interested in becoming an Animagus and was hoping you could help me with the process. I've read up on everything I'll need to do already and I'm confident I'll have no problems achieving it, but I would feel much better being mentored by one of the best currently living Animagi."

McGonagall's smile had dropped as Ana spoke, but it returns rather wryly at the final sentence. "Flattery doesn't become you Ms. Vulchanova. However, you are too young to begin training to be an Animagus."

Ana feels her heart drop into her stomach. She had considered the possibility she'd be told no, but the reality is much harsher than she'd been prepared for.

"However," The professor continues, "If you're still interested next year and you can maintain your current academic standing this year I'll arrange a private session for you in the afternoons. You won't be able to attempt the actual transformation until you're at least sixteen, but I can teach you more about the process and prepare you for the difficulties in the year leading up to that."

Ana blinks, stunned for a moment, and then smiles.

"Thank you Professor! I won't let you down!" She promises, and feels rather like she's floating out the door.

Divination aside, the year is definitely looking good.

By only the second week Rajani has determined that she absolutely hates her new schedule. Particularly Thursdays.

This Thursday is the worst one though - she hopes - as not only does she have classes from nine in the morning until four in the afternoon with no breaks in between except for lunch, she also has Quidditch tryouts at five.

And while she's certainly looking forward to tryouts - she knows she won't make the team this year as they only need a Seeker, but she's confident she'll make reserves again and from there she's almost guaranteed Mayra's spot the next year - she's also pretty exhausted by the time she escapes her double Herbology class an hour before tryouts start.

"You look exhausted." Lenox sympathizes as she trudges into the common room for some much needed relaxation.

She drops her bag by the couch, knowing no one is going to steal anything from it and too lazy to go all the way back to her dorm room to put it away properly. She'll grab it again on the way back from dinner.

"Just a bit." She replies to Lennox, a bit sarcastically. "I regret taking Arithmancy more than ever."

The class itself doens't seem like it's going to be too terribly difficult, at least based on the three classes Rajani has had so far, but it's the only non-required course on the Thursday schedule, meaning she'd inadvertently chosen this hell for herself.

Lenox hums and sits next to her on the couch. "I'm sure you'll get used to it. Professor Quirrell says that Muggle students have schedules like yours every single day of the week without any free periods. If a Muggle can handle it, I'm confident that you will too."

Rajani laughs. "I doubt Muggles have as much studying to do as us though." She says, but there's less bite in it. "Hey, would you come with me to tryouts today? I think I could use someone who isn't Alasdair to talk with."

She normally wouldn't have asked, but Eugene had decided not to tryout again this year, saying he had more important things to think about - which Rajani knows is improving his grades to impress Queenie. Why the two of them suddenly feel a need to do things like that when they're already friends is beyond Rajani, but Queenie has assured her that she'll get it when she finds a boyfriend of her own.

Lenox looks surprised for a moment, but then he uncertainly nods. "Alright, I suppose I could. My dad has been telling me I should try out anyway, may as well give it a shot to get him off my back."

"Your dad?" Lenox never speaks much about his family - or anything personal really - so Rajani is curious about this bit of information.

He laughs a bit awkwardly. "Yeah, um, my dad is the manager of the Montrose Magpies. He really wants me to be a player one day, though I'd prefer to coach, or be a manager like him."

Rajani tilts her head. "That explains why you were so good during flying class first year." She notes. "Which position do you think you'll try out for?"

"Probably Seeker? That's who we're missing this year, right?" Lenox sounds uncertain, and Rajani raises an eyebrow.

"You don't want to be on the team but you're trying out for the one spot that's actually open this year?"

Lenox blushes. "Well, honestly if I'm going to be on the team I'd like to actually be on the team and not on reserves." He admits. "Otherwise I'd rather just focus on school."

Rajani nods. "That's fair enough. Do you have a broom you can use?"

He smiles faintly. "I'm sure I can borrow Eugene's." He says, and Rajani can't help but laugh a bit.

"True, he's otherwise occupied this year it seems." Rajani thinks some of her bitterness on that front might have shown, but Lenox doesn't respond and instead indicates that he's going to get a broom.

Once he's returned, Eugene's Firebolt in hand, the two head for the Quidditch pitch.

Alasdair is already there, along with several of the other hopefuls, sitting on the bench and waiting for the tryouts to start.

Mayra is of course already present as well, but Rajani is surprised to see that her sister is there as well. The two seventh years are talking with their heads bent close, seemingly arguing about something. However, when Sahana pulls back and begins walking away, she shoots Mayra a smile that Rajani hasn't seen in years.

Rajani isn't sure how to feel that her sister is more genuinely happy around her roommate than around her own family.

She doesn't get much time to think on it however, as Mayra calls tryouts into session shortly after Sahana has settled herself at the front of the Slytherin stands.

They run the usual warmups, and Rajani is happy to find that despite slacking some over the summer, her flying skills are only slightly rusty. By the end of the warmups, she's back in full form, darting around several of the younger hopefuls just to show that she can.

Lenox keeps right next to her the entire time, and she's impressed at his ability to follow even her more complicated turns with ease.

Mayra finally sends them all back to the bench and calls for keepers to tryout first. Rajani settles next to Lenox and grins over at him.

"I can see why your father wants you to play, you're really quite good." She compliments him, and he shrugs.

"I didn't say I wasn't." He points out, and she laughs incredulously.

They chat lightly for the entirety of the tryouts, until Mayra calls for the Chasers and Rajani mounts her broom and takes off.

She's acutely aware of her sister in the stands, and when she glances over she realizes Sahana is staring right at her. For a moment she falters, but then she decides she doesn't care. Maybe if she plays well Sahana could put in a good word with their parents and Rajani will be able to actually practice her flying during the summer.

Her focus intensifies after that, and she's proud to say when she touches down that she's rather certain it's the best flying she's ever done. Even Mayra gives her a nod of approval before she calls up the Seeker hopefuls.

"Good luck." She says to Lenox as they pass each other, and he smiles easily before taking off.

Rajani settles herself back on the reserves bench to watch the five Seeker candidates audition. She glances up at her sister as well and is a bit confused when she notices that Sahana has pulled out a notebook and a camera, which she has trained on the pitch.

She ultimately shrugs off the odd sight and focuses on Lenox. He's not the youngest person trying out - there's a second year as well - but he's definitely one of the smallest. Rajani thinks that's going to work to his advantage considering the most successful seekers are the slimmest ones.

Even with his advantage though, Rajani can tell that the competition is tight. All five of the hopefuls are male, much to Sahana's surprise as most of their previous Seekers had been female. In fact, according to one of her Quidditch books (received on her thirteenth birthday the year before from Eugene), Slytherin is known for having more female players on their than almost all the other Hogwarts teams.

It does make sense, Rajani thinks, considering they're the most ambitious house. Having been part of a winning Quidditch team on your resume looks good regardless of what job you're actually applying to, so there's more incentive to try out.

The Seeker tryouts last longer than any of the ones before them, and Rajani's neck is starting to hurt from looking up for so long. She has to admit that it's worth it though - all five of the flyers, minus the second year, are impressive. Rajani isn't sure how Mayra is going to pick only one.

Most of her attention is on Lenox though, and she finds herself getting a bit jealous. He'd been holding back when flying with her during the warmups. Now, when actually trying to outshine everyone, he's easily keeping up with even the seventh year trying out.

When Mayra finally wraps things up and lets the final group land again, the sky is getting dark and Rajani is pretty sure they've missed dinner.

"Should we check the Great Hall? There may be some people lingering there late." Lenox suggests after the two third years have put away their brooms and headed back across the pitch.

Rajani shrugs. "It's worth a shot, and it's on the way to the dorms anyway. Goodness knows I'm ready to pass out, today has been nonstop for me."

Luckily for them, late dinners seem to be common among older students, as there are still quite a few sixth and seventh years lingering around the Great Hall, chatting with each other over textbooks or just staring lovingly at one another.

"That I'll never understand." Lenox makes a face after they pass a Hufflepuff couple making weird faces at each other. "Liking someone shouldn't reduce your brain capacity the way it seems to."

Rajani laughs. "Well they were Hufflepuffs." She points out playfully, and Lenox grins in turn.

"Fair enough. Though Eugene looks pretty similar when he's talking about Queenie so it doesn't seem House-specific unfortunately."

"Well I don't intend to be so silly when I fall in love." Rajani declares.

"Big words from a little girl who's never dated before." A familiar voice teases, and Rajani spins, grinning brightly.

"Hello Edward, I don't believe I asked your opinion."

The prefect laughs. "My opinion should always be heard. It's always correct after all." He waves to the seats next to him. "Join me, my friends all pissed off before I even got here."

Lenox looks a bit uncomfortable, but follows Rajani's lead as she sits next to Ed.

"So why are you two in so late? Second years don't normally get delayed by teenage nonsense." Ed notes, and Rajani fills him in on the intensity of tryouts. She mentions her sister's presence as well, and Ed grins in a rather knowing way.

"She was probably just documenting everything so Mayra could go over it later." Is all he says, but Rajani gets the feeling he's holding something back on that particular subject. However, Ed quickly veers onto a new discussion.

"So Hogsmeade is coming up in a month. You two excited?"

Lenox shrugs quietly. Ever since sitting down with Ed he'd remained rather stoic, and Rajani wonders if he might be more tired from tryouts than she is. He had been up in the air much longer after all.

She, however, is still hungry, and she hasn't really been able to talk with Ed in the past two weeks due to his being kept busy with prefect duties. "Of course! My roommates and I have been planning what route we want to take for the optimum shopping experience. Is there anywhere you'd suggest we definitely go?"

Ed is only too happy to fill her in on all the best and worst places to see in Hogsmeade.

"People make a big deal about the shrieking shack, but it's really just a tiny wooden nothing so don't waste your time with that. And be careful not to go into Zonko's at the same time as a Gryffindor, you will absolutely find yourself getting zapped by something and it just isn't worth it. That said, do check out Zonko's if you can, there's some fun stuff in there."

Rajani nods thoughtfully, and glances over at Lenox. "What about you boys? Got any big plans for the first Hogsmeade weekend?"

Lenox simply shrugs again, and Rajani finds she's getting a bit worried. Sure Lenox has never been the most talkative person, but he usually speaks when spoken to. She wonders if the day has tired him out more than he'd admitted earlier. So she makes a decision, pushing away her half-finished plate and standing up.

"Hey Ed, we're going to head back to the common room. It's been a pretty long day and it's just starting to catch up to me now." She announces, and while the prefect raises an eyebrow suspiciously he simply nods.

"Sure thing, I remember how hectic third year felt. Enjoy it while you can, it only gets worse." He grins a bit mockingly as Lenox stands up as well.

Rajani rolls her eyes at him before she and Lenox leave for the dungeons.

Lenox doesn't say much, so Rajani fills the silence herself as best she can, talking about her classes and how boring Ancient Runes is proving to be. When they get back to the Slytherin common room she politely excuses herself to the dorm, where she's immediately jumped by Clary.

"Where the heck have you been? We've barely seen you all day." She complains. "Now sit your down and talk to us for heck's sake before we forget what your voice sounds like."

"Thursdays are busy for me, and we've been in classes together all day what are you even talking about." Rajani replies pointedly, and Clary rolls her eyes.

"Classes don't count, they're boring and we can't talk. I mean you weren't at dinner! How are you missing meals already, it's the second week and I know for a fact your workload isn't that heavy yet." Clary continues unabashed, and Rajani can only shrug.

"I had tryouts for the Quidditch team and I stayed late to support Lenox. We had late dinner with Ed Poole."

Nia glances up. "I remember him, he sat with us during the last week of school last year. I don't know how I feel about him yet."

"He's nice." Rajani defends. "And he's a prefect now too, so it's not a bad idea to have him on our side."

Queenie grins. "Spoken like a true Slytherin. So Ed huh? He's pretty cute for an older guy."

Rajani can feel her face heating up. "Queen, just because you're obsessed with dating at the moment doesn't mean the rest of us are in a rush to make fools of ourselves. And certainly not with Ed! He's way too old." She defends quickly.

Queenie just grins wider. "I'm not obsessed with dating, I'm already engaged. I've moved on to higher planes of romance. I just don't want you to be all alone is all."

The girls chat for a few more minutes before Rajani forcibly calls it a night, and she passes out almost immediately after she curls up under the sheets, so it's well worth it.

They have to wait an entire week before Laurel puts up the results from Quidditch tryouts, and while Myr is content knowing he's probably just on reserves again, the rest of his friends are freaking out rather spectacularly.

This is because there were a lot more openings than any of them had expected there to be. In addition to Bill leaving, Jamison had dropped out after seeing his OWL results, leaving a beater slot open as well. And most importantly, rumor said that Laurel was considering favoring younger students in order to create a longer-lasting team that could really get to know each other to ultimately become an unstoppable force.

Which means the third years are in an excellent position to actually make the team.

Myr finds himself seeking shelter in the library more often than not to avoid getting caught up in the endless argument raging between Evera and Drake over who's going to get the Chaser spot between them.

He's at one of the larger study tables near the windows when Evera comes barging in, shrieking excitedly and getting an extremely firm shushing from Madame Pince.

Evera obligingly lowers her voice, looking contrite for all of two seconds before she's beaming again and bodily tossing herself in front of Myr.

"Myr! Myr Myr Myr guess what?" She gives him half a second to orient himself to her sudden appearance before she answers her own question. "We made the team!" Her voice rises in excitement and she receives another sharp hushing from the librarian for her troubles.

Myr blinks uncertainly. "Um, congratulations?" Then her words properly process and he starts, nearly knocking Evera off the table when his knee jams against the bottom of it. "Wait, we?"

She nods eagerly. "You're replacing Jamison and I'm up for Bill! Drake, Remi, and Fiona are reserves but Laurel said when she put up the list that she's going to integrate the practices a lot more than last year, so basically we're all going to be practicing like we're on the main team!" She beams, and Myr can't help breaking into a grin as well.

"Holy heck, I didn't expect that..." He slumps back in his seat, giddiness overwhelming him for a moment. "Does Kent know?" He thinks to ask once his thoughts have somewhat reconfigured into something coherent.

Evera giggles. "Yeah he knows. I'm pretty sure I have cracked ribs from how excited he was that we'll get to play together before he graduates."

Madame Pince shushes them once again, and the two Gryffindors decide to leave the library and head back to the common room. Myr figures he probably should talk with his friends now that the results are out and the conversation will be a bit different.

"First practice is this weekend, Laurel says she hopes you stayed in shape over the summer!"

Myr smiles faintly as Evera chatters eagerly about her excitement and how she can't wait to play in a real game. He decides to not rain on her parade by bringing up exactly how exhausting Laurel's practice sessions get, though he thinks her brother has likely already given her something of an idea.

"Myr! There's the man of the hour! You missed Laurel posting the new team!" Charlie greets him enthusiastically and slings an arm around his shoulder. "You realize we now out number the older kids on the team? Between us and the reserves the team is basically dominated by third years."

"Yeah yeah." Brandon grumbles, slouched on the couch by an equally put-out Remi. Myr realizes with a twinge of sympathy that Brandon is the only third year who had tried out who hadn't even made the reserves.

Charlie frowns and sits next to his best friend. "Hey, maybe next year, yeah? A lot more positions will open up with Laurel and Cassidy both graduating."

Myr frowns and glances at the parchment on the announcement board, checking the names of the team and realizing to his shame that he doesn't actually know the two other Chasers on the team.

"Cassidy Walsh is a seventh year and an absolute beast on a broom. Her and Laurel have a bit of a friendly rivalry going on so don't be startled if they insult each other any time they're in hearing range. Or if Laurel fires a Bludger at Cass in the middle of practice." Charlie fills him in with no small amount of amusement when he notices Myr's bewilderment. "Jacob Fawley is fifth year and honestly kind of a prat but he's pretty good at staying open. Very bendy that one, could have been a Slytherin really."

"He's that bad?" Evera makes a face. She'd come up to stand with the two boys as they talked. "I hope I don't have to work with him that closely then."

"Oh he's fine during games. Just don't think you'll be friends off the pitch." Charlie assures her. "And really, having someone that competitive contributed a lot to our win last year - Jacob has the highest shot-score ratio on the team."

Evera seems to weigh something in her mind, and then she nods determinedly. "Then I'm going to make extra sure I work with him!"

"That was a quick change of heart." Kent drawls mockingly from where he's seated in front of the fireplace with a few of his year mates, playing a round of Exploding Snap.

"Well I don't intend to be the team weak point." Evera says briskly. "Failure isn't genetic after all, yet people all too often like to assume it is."

"Hey!" Kent protests as his friends burst out laughing. "I resent that!"

"I resent you so I guess we're even." Evera sticks her tongue out at her brother with an air of finality, and he just rolls his eyes in response.

Myr decides to go speak with Fiona instead of watching the familiar scene of sibling rivalry pan out. She's seated on the opposite end of the common room, half focused on a barely-started essay and half on the general chaos in the room.

"Is that the Horklumps essay?" He questions as he sits next to her, and she startles slightly before smiling in greeting.

"Yeah, at least it's an attempt. I understand whey these things are classified as 'boring'." She laughs. "I'm just glad we're moving on to XX classifications next week, Flobberworms and Horklumps aren't exactly exciting material."

"Agreed." Myr nods. "Maybe if we work on it together it will be a bit more bearable?" Myr suggests, pulling out his own blank parchment.

"Wait, are you guys doing the Care of Magical Creatures essay? Hold on, lemme get a quill, I'll join you." Charlie interrupts excitedly, charging towards the dorms and yelling at Brandon to come with him. Pretty soon the entire third year Gryffindor class are spread out on the floor in a needlessly wide circle, swapping notes and offering suggestions on what to write.

For his part, Myr is quite happy about the whole situation. The entire class had decided to take Care of Magical Creatures so he's hoping that group study sessions like this one won't be uncommon for the rest of the school year.

They actually manage to mostly finish the essays, though Brandon and Remi are noticeably lagging behind in required length. But as everyone else has stopped, they roll up their parchments as well and Brandon declares that they should spend the rest of the afternoon down by the lake.

Myr decides it does sound like fun, and he follows his friends out of the castle and into the warm autumn air. He stays on the sandy shores of the lake - he's heard one too many rumors about the Giant Squid to feel safe actually getting on the water - and watches his friends splashing each other.

Evera tries to wave him over but he shakes his head and she blows a raspberry at him before tackling Drake into the surf.

"Hey! Looks like we had the same idea!" Myr turns in surprise at the new voice to find a group of third year Hufflepuffs walking over from the castle. Aidan waves to Charlie and Brandon before sitting next to Myr along with Jemma Finnigan and a boy Myr thinks is called Cian, but he's not sure since he's never actually spoken to the other before.

"It's too nice a day to waste it inside." Jemma says pleasantly. "So Myr, how was your summer?"

It's nice to catch up with the Hufflepuffs, the House Myr thinks he gets along with best outside of his own. Once Aidan runs off to join Charlie and Brandon in the water, Jemma, Cian and Myr start talking about Muggle Studies, a class all three of them are taking.

"Personally I quite like Professor Quirrell, he's so enthusiastic about the subject!" Jemma nods firmly. "I like when teachers like what they're teaching, it makes the class more enjoyable for me."

"It's kind of a waste in my opinion. Half of what they're teaching is either wrong or only partially correct. Do you wizards actually pay attention to us at all?" Cian grumbles, and Jemma frowns.

"Well at least we're trying to learn. For a long time the wizarding world was completely cut off from Muggles, so we might not be perfect just yet but it's a process."

Cian shrugs, and Myr smiles faintly.

"It's certainly better than total separation." He offers. "Imagine living in the USA, where they aren't allowed to have any contact with the Muggles."

Jemma laughs a bit. "True, they are a lot slower about progress over there it seems. But to be fair they struggled with prejudice long before the witch trials started, if you consider the way Native shamans were treated during the initial settlement of the colonies."

"We should get Brandon over here, since he's the American. See what his opinion is." Myr grins, and Jemma giggles as well.

"Oh gosh, please no, I couldn't stand to hear him go on about the States again. They're perfectly serviceable but I don't much fancy living there myself." Jemma shakes her head. "It's good to love where you come from though."

They continue talking together until the sun starts to lower and stain the lake red and gold, at which point everyone finally gets out and they head in for dinner.

Most of the group has to go dry off and change, so Myr is the only Gryffindor third year at the table for a solid five minutes. And in those five minutes he realizes he doesn't actually have any friends outside of his own year, making the whole experience rather awkward.

He stares firmly at his plate until his friends come down and join him.

"So first practice in two days, I can't wait!" Evera wastes no time before launching into more Quidditch talk.

Myr spots Holly rolling her eyes in his peripherals, but he's happy to have the information.

"When did Laurel tell you that?"

"We ran into her and Eric just outside the Great Hall." Charlie informs him. "They were off in quite a rush."

"Well that's what couples do." Brandon says with an air of understanding that Myr know for a fact he's faking.

Evera picks up on the tone as well. "Oh please, like you'd know what couples do. You've never even asked a girl out!" She points out.

Brandon sits up straighter. "Well I'm going to, and really soon too. Have you done that?"

Charlie looks over with a frown. "You are? Why is this the first I'm hearing about this?"

"'Cause he probably just decided that right this second." Evera sing-songs.

Myr shares a wryly amused look with Charlie as the two begin bickering. "So practice in two days? Any tips for a new member of the main team?"

Charlie grins. "Never fly between Cassidy and Laurel."

Two days later finds Myr in exactly that position, and he realizes very quickly why Charlie had given the warning.

A bludger flies half an inch from the front of his broom as Laurel practices friendly fire. Cassidy dodges neatly and then proceeds to score on Kent, who had to dive out of the way of the flying metal ball of death as well.

"Full attention Myr!" Laurel calls to him. "Being aware of where your own teammates are is as important as knowing where the opposition is!"

Myr veers out of the danger zone and spots Evera laughing. "Hey, you made the same mistake not ten minutes ago if I recall." He shouts to her as they pass, and she sticks her tongue out.

Practice is rather intense with not only the seven main players in the air but also the seven on reserves. They're split into two teams but Myr is finding he has a difficult time keeping up with who's on which team thanks to all of them wearing red and gold. He knows Laurel is his second among the beaters, putting Fiona and a fifth year who's name he doesn't know on the other team, and his Keeper is Kent, but he really can't recall which Chasers or which Seeker is playing for who.

He wonders if they remember either.

To make up the difference he's mostly aiming at the air around the players to throw off direction and intercept passes. One of his proudest moments so far was when he managed to actually hit the Quaffle using one of the Bludgers while it was in mid-pass from Cassidy (who he knows is on the other team - he's relatively sure Laurel wouldn't be firing at her if she was with them).

Of course, it had been somewhat accidental, and Laurel told him she'd teach him to do it on purpose the next time while they waited for the Chasers to finish their dive after the Quaffle.

The game is an intense back and forth and Myr finds himself starting to actively chase down bludgers as the scores climb and he finally figures out who's on which team. Evera swears at him rather impressively when one of his bludgers forces her into a tight swerve that results in the second year on the reserves stealing her ball and proceeding to fire on the posts, though the fourth year reserve Keeper blocks the attempts rather neatly.

By the end of practice Myr finds he isn't quite as sore as he remembers usually being after sessions with Laurel, and he hopes that it's an indication that he's in better shape than he used to be and not that she'd gone easy on them for the first practice.

He's hopeful it's the latter when both Evera and Drake are utterly beat when they finally touch down to head in for dinner.

"Is it always that intense?" Evera groans slightly, stretching her legs repeatedly as she walks and looking father ridiculous.

Charlie laughs. "That was nothing, you wait until game time comes around. Those are intense practices."

Drake and Evera share matching looks of distress that cause Charlie, Myr, and Fiona to all grin a bit at their expense.

The group continues talking excitedly, and Myr is happy to simply walk along and listen in. For all his summertime concern, school is turning out quite well so far.

Franziska thinks that third year is absolutely the best one yet.

Putting aside the fact Saundra Caldwell, a second year who had been making trouble from day one, had managed to vanish half the plants in the Hufflepuff common room on the first day, resulting in people randomly finding leaves and seed around the dorms, the year has been amazing so far.

Both Muggle Studies and Ancient Runes are fascinating, and she's made friends with a new Hufflepuff first year, Roderick Jarvis.

Roderik's older brother is in Franziska's year, and the young boy had been extremely nervous when he'd been sorted into Hufflepuff instead of Gryffindor like his brother. So Franziska, upon noticing his discomfort, decided to take him under her wing. For the most part she helps tutor him in his classes but she's also talked with him about Hogwarts in general and a bit about Quidditch as well, though the subject still makes her a bit ill when she thinks about how dangerous it actually is.

"I don't think I'd want to play myself." Roderik informs her one day. They're sitting in the Hufflepuff common room doing homework. Franziska is mainly focused on Rue translations, but she occasionally will answer questions or go over wand movements with her first year friend when he gets stuck on his Charms essay. "But Drake really likes it so I'll go to games. He made reserves this year for Gryffindor."

Franziska thinks it's rather cute how much Roderik looks up to his older brother, even if doing so has made him rather ashamed of his own House placement thanks to the fact Drake apparently doesn't think very highly of Hufflepuff House.

"I heard, Jemma mentioned it during lunch last week." She smiles over at him. "I think he'll really appreciate your support."

Roderik smiles shyly. "Maybe."

Franziska doesn't get a chance to inquire into why Roderik would think his brother wouldn't appreciate his support, as Leona Poole chooses that moment to burst into the common room in a flurry of energy. The brunette is surprisingly chipper considering she had apparently almost died in a side-along apparation gone wrong over the summer, but the experience doesn't seem to have impacted Leona's pep in the slightest.

"Frannie! Frannie I heard that you've got a date to Hogsmeade! Girl i cannot believe I'm having to get this from the grapevine and not from you!" She exclaims, sounding hurt. "Oh, hey Roddy." She adds to the wide -eyed first year.

Franziska blinks. "Well this is the first I'm hearing about it as well. I was just going to go with Kiera and Tonks."

Leona frowns. "Oh, oops. I guess he hasn't asked you yet. Act surprised when he does! And say yes!"

Franziska isn't quite sure what she's getting herself into when she agrees, but hopefully it will be fun.

And if she's honest, she's glad for the legitimate excuse to chicked out of asking the cute fifth year if he wants to go with her.

She finds out that evening who her mystery date is when Brandon Young sits next to her at dinner.

"Hey Badger!" He greets cheerfully, as if it's perfectly normal for a Gryffindor to sit at the Hufflepuff table.

Franziska raises an eyebrow. "Hi Brandon. Why aren't you sitting at the Gryffindor table?"

"I wanted to ask if you had any plans for Hogsmeade this weekend." He proclaims, and Franziska is a bit jealous of his confidence. She figures it must come from being a Gryffindor.

"Um, I..." She can feel herself blushing and she curses Leona mentally for not  giving her more of a warning so she could properly prepare herself. She certainly hadn't expected her surprise suitor to be Brandon. "I didn't have any plans in particular no." She finally gets out, and Brandon beams.

"Great! Then would you be interested in going with me?"

She nods maybe a little too quickly, but his grin is well worth it.

"Great! Then I'll see you this weekend! And, um, in classes tomorrow too, obviously." And with that he rushes back to the Gryffindor table, leaving Franziska bright red and the rest of the Hufflepuff table grinning at her expense.

"Ooh, Frannie's got a date!" Leona giggles happily.

"A little more forewarning would have been nice." Franziska moans, dropping her head into her hands to attempt and hide the bright red hue she's certain it's turned.

Leona just grins. "This was much more entertaining."

"Agreed." Tonks guffaws, and Franziska genuinely considers throwing some bread at her before thinking better of it. No reason to potentially start a school-wide food fight over something as simple as a bit of embarrassment.

Her friends a bit more before the conversation drifts into the more general topic of Hogsmeade and their plans for it.

"We know Franziska is getting whisked away on a romantic afternoon-"

"We do not-"

"But how about everyone else? I for one intend to hit up Zonko's." Tonks completely ignores Franziska's attempted protest.

Aidan nods enthusiastically. "Charlie and I will be there too. I thought Brandon would be with us but it seems that he'll be otherwise occupied." He teases, and Franziska's head is back in her hands.

Thankfully, on the actual morning of the Hogsmeade visit her friends are much more helpful.

For a certain definition of helpful, anyway.

"Frannie you can't actually be wearing that." Leona tuts, looking over her coat and jeans combo. "This is a date! You need to dress up a little!"

"It's a date with Brandon though, so not too much. He's a pretty active kid." Kiera recommends.

"Ooh, and wear something red! He'd like that." Tonks contributes, turning her own hair red to demonstrate. "Or gold, but red is better."

"Try talking about potions." Jemma suggests as Kiera and Leona raid Franziska's trunk for a more suitable first date outfit. "He's quite passionate about that class."

"Here, put this on." Leona shoves a red sweater into her arms, and Franziska frowns.

"This is still going to be under my coat though." She points out.

"But you'll take it off! Now go change, the group is leaving in fifteen minutes!" Leona shoos her into the bathroom and Franziska decides to humor her friends for the time being. Hopefully they'll quit fussing once Brandon is actually with them.

Her wish is more than granted when her friends seem to spontaneously vanish into thin air as soon as Brandon spots them approaching and breaks into a smile.

"Hey! You look nice out of your school robes." He compliments, and once again Franziska is blushing.

"Oh, um, thanks, you too." She manages to stutter out. As they begin walking towards Hogsmeade she remembers Jemma's advice. "So how is it you like potions when Snape is the teacher for it?"

Brandon bursts out laughing. "Fair question. I don't like him much, and the feeling is mutual, but I've always been pretty interested in potions and how they work. How is it they only work for witches and wizards even though we use a surprising amount of non-magical plants to create them? Which plants carry which properties for the potions? It's all pretty interesting to me. One day I want to make my own potion!"

Franziska has to admit she's impressed. "I guess you probably like Herbology as well then? Since we learn about what the plants actually do?"

Brandon nods eagerly. "You get it! Potions and Herbology are really closely linked together. It's surprising how many people like one but not the other."

Franziska smiles. She's really glad conversation with Brandon is still quite comfortable despite the fact that they're technically on a date.

They continue talking about their favorite classes until they reach Hogsmeade, at which point to do make a pit stop at Zonko's joke shop before they get to what Brandon is calling 'the fun part'.

"I just need to pick up some supplies." He assures her vaguely when she questions his purchases from the joke shop. "Aidan and Charlie pranked me with a nose-biting teacup a couple days ago and I intend to return the favor."

Franziska frowns. "Won't they be wary of any teacups you've touched though?" She questions, both nervous about knowing rules will be broken but also genuinely curious about how exactly the pranking process works. Goodness knows she doesn't trust anything Aidan hands her if she's seen him hanging out with the ABC Club recently beforehand.

Brandon grins. "That's the genius of it! I'm going to pull a fake out." He pauses, looks around, and then grabs Franziska's hand. "But I can't tell you details here, you never know if they're nearby. Come on, let's go to Honeydukes first, and then the tea shop. No way Aidan or Charlie will be in there."

Franziska allows the subject to be temporarily dropped as they walk over to Honeydukes, a store she's admittedly excited about visiting.

It's naturally swarming with students, and Franziska spots a few of her friends stuffing as much candy as they can manage into their bags.

"Man it's busier than I expected. Do you want to do this last instead?" Brandon calls to her over the noise, and after a moment of hesitation Franziska nods. She'd like to actually be able to hear Brandon while they're there.

So they leave Honeydukes and head for Madame Puddifoot's Teashop.

"Honestly this place isn't ideal, but most of Gryffindor is going to be at the Three Broomsticks in an hour and I thought you might like to not be hounded by my roommates." Brandon admits, and Franziska laughs.

"That is preferable, yes. And I like tea, so this is lovely."

Admittedly the tea shop is a bit cheesy for Franziska's taste, but they manage to get a table in a corner so they mostly avoid the garish decorations. They both order and then settle back in their seats.

"So tell me about this 'fake out' prank of yours." Franziska prompts, and Brandon grins.

"Okay, number one rule of pranking is to not use the same prank on the same person twice in a row, otherwise they wise up to your tricks. The catch is that everyone knows that trick, so no one is going to expect a pro to make that mistake. I plan to use that assumption to my advantage."

Franziska raises an eyebrow in amusement. "You've really thought this out, huh?" She observes, and Brandon shrugs with faux modesty.

"I am a pro after all. One can never overthink a prank."

Franziska honestly isn't sure if she's saying the right things, and she feels especially awkward as Brandon seems to be completely confident. So she sits quietly and nods and smiles where she thinks she's supposed to as Brandon outlines his plans to temporarily transfigure Aidan's cat Cerid into a teacup. Little warning signals are going on at the back of her head, but she firmly ignores them, not wanting to give in to her nervousness when Brandon really seems to be trying hard.

"So I think I've talked for a while now, um, you're taking Muggle Studies right? What's that like? Myr and Charlie can't seem to agree whether it's a good class or not." Brandon finally says, his lips and taking a sip of his certainly now-cold tea.

Franziska flushes - she shouldn't have let Brandon do all the talking, she's clearly messed up again. "Oh, um, I like it for the most part? Professor Quirrell is really enthusiastic but sometimes he goes off on tangents so we have to teach ourselves the rest of the day's lesson since he always sticks to his schedule. I think some people might find that frustrating but I don't mind. I usually study with Leona, Kiera, and Jemma before we go to bed." She shifts nervously in her seat, and glances up at Brandon. She's relieved to find that he's smiling.

"Cool! I wish I had someone to study like that with for Ancient Runes. I'm the only Gryffindor taking it."

She can't help but giggle. "I know, I'm in that class too." She points out. "Does Aidan not study with you?"

Brandon makes a face. "He's usually studying with that Ana chick from Ravenclaw and I can tell she doesn't like me."

Franziska nods in understanding. She doesn't quite get how Aidan managed to befriend the single least friendly person in their year, but she has noticed that he tends to distance himself from his friends when around the black-haired girl.

"I think he'd probably be happy to study with you if you asked, but you could join me and Cian and Donaghan for our study sessions if you like." She offers nervously. Is it wrong to invite a guy who likes you to spend time with you and two other guys?

Brandon nods a bit uncertainly. "Yeah, that would be good. Thanks."

They continue to chat, and Franziska is glad that despite second guessing every other word out of that all in all things seem to be going rather well. When it's nearing the end of their alloted time for Hogsmeade visits, the two pay for their tea and head over to Honeydukes, which is much less crowded than it had been before.

"Which sweets are your favorite?" Brandon asks quickly. "I'll get them for you."

Franziska feels herself blushing. Brandon had paid for the tea as well. "No, I'd feel bad if you paid for everything."

"Then you can pay next time." Brandon's statement comes out more like a question, and for the first time Franziska can see that he's as nervous as she is. The knowledge immediately puts her more at ease.

"Well, alright, but no take backs." She agrees, and Brandon beams.

"Great! So what did you want?"

After ten minutes the two finally start heading back to Hogwarts, laden down with several chocolate frogs, sugar quills, and cauldron cakes.

"You have quite a sweet tooth." Brandon teases, and Franziska giggles.

"What can I say? Sugar tastes good."

"True enough."

When they arrive back at the castle they divide their candy and then head back to their dorms after a very awkward hug goodnight.

Franziska is so busy floating on the remnants of the date's positive atmosphere that she forgets to keep an eye out for her roommates when she enters the dorms.

"How was it?"

Franziska jumps as Leona leaps in front of her the moment she walks in.

"Calm down Leona, let her put her gifts away." Tonks scolds, but her eyes are bright with curiosity.

Franziska sighs. "I couldn't get away with just saying it went well and leaving it at that, could I?"

"How long have you known us?" Jemma points out with a warm smile, and Franziska laughs.

"Oh alright, I kind of want to share anyway. But I hope you weren't planning to sleep much tonight because there's a lot to say!"

Okay, this hasn't been properly ediied and I apologize ;; But I hope you enjoy regardless! Next chapter is going to feature something I've had planned since first year and I'm so excited to finally be at this point in the story!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!