Chapter Twenty-Nine

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Summer Surprises

Ana is honestly slightly surprised that she's not sitting alone on the ride back to King's Cross, but she can't really say she's unhappy about the situation. She doesn't speak much, opting to go over her animagus notes for most of the trip, but she listens in on her friends' conversation.

Jerome does most of the talking, unsurprisingly, with Shaun and Amelia occasionally giving their two cents on whatever topic is being discussed. For the most part they talk about their plans for the summer, but there is some speculation on OWLs and their impending meeting with Professor Flitwick about their career paths.

Ana has pretty much determined what general path she intends to share with their Head of House, so she tunes out of that conversation for the most part to carefully study notes from her second-to-last animagus lesson. She admittedly started struggling with some of the later concepts that they worked on, and she wants to perfect them before getting back to school, that way once she's turned sixteen she'll be able to start working on actually achieving transformation rather than having to waste time continuing to study the theory.

She bids her friends farewell once they reach King's Cross, and awkwardly promises to write when Jerome insists upon it. She's used to receiving letters occasionally, but she's not much for writing them herself if it's possible, preferring face-to-face interactions. Still she resolves to do her best with it.

Her mother is waiting for her on the platform, and Ana deposits her trunk and Dracula's terrarium on the trolley before greeting her mother.

"How was the rest of your year dear?" Winona asks as she pushes the trolley back through the barrier and the two women walk towards the station's exit.

Ana makes a noncommittal sound in reply. Honestly she doesn't much feel like trying to maintain conversation with her mother, instead mentally going through her notes again.

Winona frowns but doesn't push. "Well alright then. We've been quite busy here. I've sent you a few letters and I know Marcus' mother has told him-"

Ana half tunes out as her mother recounts her own goings-on since the start of the year. As expected it contained the usual tea meetings and fussing about politics, so Ana is able to nod and hum at all the right parts mostly on autopilot.

Once she gets home she quickly excuses herself to her room to unpack her trunk.

She is admittedly happy to be back in her own room - the ceiling twinkles over her with the charms her father had placed three summers before and her bed sits well-made and alone next to the window. She's missed having her own space.

Her books are quickly re-shelved onto her bookshelf and her parchments and quills are organized onto her desk just the way she likes them. Dracula is released from his terrarium and settled onto her pillow while she digs out the crystal ball her Baba had given her years before from its hiding place. She settles onto her bed, legs crossed, and places her hands around the cool glass.

It's been some time since she's attempted to use the scrying orb, especially since her Baba doesn't visit quite as often since Ana started school - her mother said something vaguely about increased Ministry interference but honestly Ana finds she doesn't mind all that much. As much as she'd liked her Baba as a child, she thinks the old hag would be more bothersome than anything now.

Ana focuses on her target and tries to let the magic flow through her hands the way she'd been learning before switching her focus to her animagus studies. Her palms warm slightly, and she suppresses a grin at her success and refocuses on her goal.

The surface of the ball begins to flicker, swirling with dark clouds. Ana stares intently, not blinking, and for a moment she sees a flash of light - but then the crystal goes clear.

"Drat." Ana grumbles, dropping the crystal onto her comforter and shaking out her hands, which feel uncomfortably warm now that she's giving them some attention.

"What were you looking for?"

Ana starts and awkwardly tries to hide the crystal ball behind her, though she knows her father must have already seen it. "Nothing." She says curtly.

Her father laughs. "We've known you've had that since you got it Ana, you don't need to hide it."

Ana frowns at him irritably. "If you knew why didn't you say something?" She grumbles, still keeping the crystal ball behind her out of pure habit. "Anyway, I'm trying to see when the next electrical storm will be."

"For you animagus transformation." Her father nods in understanding. "You can probably do that in Divination at school though, can't you? You shouldn't attempt to do it on your own and your Professor McGonagall informed us you aren't to attempt it until you're at least sixteen."

Ana frowns. "I'm aware, I just wanted to get a list of the upcoming storms is all."

Her father steps further into the room, much to her annoyance. She honestly doesn't feel much like making polite conversation, even with her parents.

"You should come downstairs. Your mother really wants to hear about your year." Her father continues, and that's exactly what Ana wanted to avoid.

"There really isn't anything to say dad." She replies shortly. "It was school, I did well, top of my class again of course. That's really it."

Alexander frowns at his daughter. "Are you feeling alright Ana? You were quite eager to inform us of your studies last summer."

"Well that was a year ago dad." She responds, feeling herself losing her temper slightly. She reigns it in so as to not snap at her father. "And this year I'd like to be by myself for a while."

Alexander is still frowning, but he nods slowly.

"Well, alright. Dinner will be ready in approximately an hour."

"Thank you." She replies, turning back to her crystal ball. She waits until she hears the door close before fixing her bracelet and picking up the crystal ball again.

An hour later her hands are throbbing slightly from heat and she's no closer to determining when the next electrical storm will be. Sighing she returns to the ball to its hiding spot without really thinking about it and heads down the stairs, bracing herself for the questions she knows will be coming.

However, instead of insistences that she tell them everything about her year, her mother simply hands her a plate and gestures for her to go towards the dining area. Confused, and a bit suspicious, Ana complies and finds a letter sitting in front of her chair.

"Father, what is this?" She questions as she shifts her plate so she can hold it in one hand as she picks up the letter. She carefully puts the plate down before turning her attention to the envelope in her hand.

Her father chuckles. "It just came with the evening post. I didn't know you and Alec were writing each other this year."

The tone is entirely too knowing, and Ana just knows they've gotten the wrong idea. "I haven't." She states bluntly. "However he did mention at Christmas that he'd like to know how my final exams went so I assume this is him asking after those."

Ana doesn't like the hopeful smile on her mother's face as Winona joins them at the table.

"Mother no. I know what you're thinking and please stop there. Alec is seven years older than me and quite frankly I find him irritating." Ana informs her mother testily.

Winona frowns slightly, looking both hurt and disappointed. "I would never force you into anything dear, you know that. I merely saw that you were wearing his necklace and made assumptions, I apologize."

Ana's hand flies up to grasp the pendant hanging over the front of her dress. She's grown quite fond of the accessory and how well it matches her wardrobe, but the reminder of who it was from makes her want to take it off.

"Right well, understandable I suppose. But really mother, I have more important things to consider than boys right now. I have OWLs coming up next year, and my career consultation with Professor Flitwick in the fall."

Her father tilts his head. "Career consultation? I don't believe we had that in Durmstrang." He observes, clearly curious.

Ana decides to let her mother answer the question and turns her attention onto her dinner. She does half-listen to Winona's explanation of what the career consultation is, so when her father asks her a question she's able to catch it and return her full focus to the conversation.

"What I want to do? Well if I'm honest," She hesitates slightly when she realizes how her answer will sound against the conversation they had just had, but she presses on quickly, "I'm leaning towards Curse Breaking at Gringotts. I've looked up the requirements for hiring and it asks for all my favorite classes. In addition, the ability to travel the world and see new things and other cultures would be fascinating to me."

Please don't point out that it's the same career as Alec's.

Her mother looks about ready to do just that but her father speaks first, much to Ana's relief.

"I think that would be a wonderful career for you." He says with a smile. "And your Animagus abilities, once you have them, will likely be quite useful in the field I would imagine."

Ana finally feels herself starting to smile, some of the tension she's been carrying with her since exiting the train easing. "I would imagine so too, yes." She agrees. "And my friend Hannah is a professional Astronomer and I'm certain she'll be more than happy to lend me her NEWT materials for Astronomy if I ask."

Her father looks thoughtful at that. "Astronomy is required then? And NEWT level?"

Ana shakes her head. "Only an OWL is needed, although it must be an E or higher to be accepted without a NEWT. I merely think that since it is a requirement for my career choice then I ought to be as well versed in it as possible, especially considering how important knowledge is for Curse-Breakers."

It's easier to talk to her parents after that, discussing the risks of Curse-Breaking and where she might be able to visit once she's licensed. Her mother very carefully says nothing about Alec, and Ana is begrudgingly thankful for it.

That night she stares up at the stars sparkling overhead and pretends she can see the constellations in the nonsensical mess of lights on her ceiling. When first enchanted the ceiling had accurately matched the sky above it, but with time the charms have worn off and have fallen out of alignment, leaving Ana to go outside to do her Astronomy homework.

She wonders how difficult it would be to renew the charms in a way that would prevent the deterioration of accuracy, and she drifts off to thought of the Arithmancy techniques that might be applicable.

She wakes up the next morning with an urge to work on her Arithmancy homework, having dreamed about the subject during the night. So she takes her workbook down to breakfast with her and starts in on her first set of problems.

Her father has already left, and her mother keeps quiet and reads the Daily Prophet instead of asking Ana any questions. The whole day ends up flying past and Ana manages to finish the entire summer assignment for Arithmancy before dinner is served that night.

Her father isn't at the table when she sits down, and she glances at her mother questioningly.

"There was a fuss at work today, so your father will be home late." Winona says lightly, and Ana is immediately suspicious.

"What does fuss mean exactly?" She asks. Anything that could keep a security warlock of her father's calibre at work past his shift couldn't be anything so mundane as a 'fuss'.

Her mother sighs, and Ana realizes that she hasn't yet touched her food. "Your father won't say, but he did sound relaxed. Most likely something exploded either in Magical Accidents and Catastrophes or the Misuse of Muggle Artifacts office again and someone unrelated was caught up in it. He'll likely be home in an hour or so."

Ana knows her mother is probably correct. She also can tell Winona is trying to convince herself. Shrugging, she goes back to her dinner.

Her father does return just before she finishes eating, and Ana stays at the table so she can hear about the incident that she's sure her father will complain about.

And sure enough he starts in as soon as he's downed a few forkfuls of dinner. "Honestly whoever put Weasley in charge of Misuse of Muggle Artifacts was utterly daft. He's a nice enough fellow but he causes nearly as many misuses as he cleans up."

Winona hums sympathetically and Ana decides that she's going back to her room. Arthur Weasley messing with Muggle Artifacts and making a mess is far from an uncommon occurrence and she's rather certain she's heard it all on that particular topic. So she excuses herself, rinses her dishes, and heads back up to her room.

Dracula is still splayed out on her pillow where she'd left him during her studying, and she quickly cleans his terrarium and returns him to it before grabbing her nightgown and starting her nightly routine. Honestly the day has been quite boring, and she still has the entire summer to get through before she can return to school and a more interesting lifestyle.

Once she's clean and changed she settles down at her desk and finally opens Alec's letter from the day before.

Ana,

I'd say I hope you did well in school, but I assume you made top of the class again. Instead, let me tell you about the run-in with a Peruvian dragon that we had the other day, I think you'll find it interesting to note the odd behavior it exhibited.

The letter goes on to describe several misadventures Alec has had in Peru, and Ana finds herself quite engaged despite herself. She takes a few notes on the stories and then pulls out her own parchment and quill. She'd been planning to write to her friends anyway in an attempt to stave off her boredom until bedtime, so she sees no harm in replying to Alec at the same time.

She ends up not quite getting around to her friends' letters, writing a full two feet in response to Alec's three-foot note and then realizing she'll have to ask her parents to help her mail it, as neither of her parents' owl are international flyers.

Sighing, she puts the letter aside and decides to finish writing in the morning, when she'll be more awake and better able to think up reasons why this still definitely doesn't mean she thinks of Alec as a friend.

Franziska spends the entire second day of summer break catching her mom up on everything that had occurred at school that year (after spending the first day recovering from portkey sickness).

Her mother is especially interested in the Giant Squid sighting.

"I never got to see it while I was there, from what I hear it only surfaces rarely." She says curiously. "What did it look like? I had a friend who was convinced it was magically mutated but my boyfriend at the time claimed it was an ordinary squid that somehow got into the lake."

"The latter." Franziska confirms. "You dated at school?" She adds, somewhat surprised. She hadn't known her mom had dated anyone before getting together with her dad.

Her mom laughs. "Of course dear! I had two boyfriends before I graduated, even kept one for a year afterwards though we didn't work out obviously."

Franziska frowns. "I thought you and dad were pen pals while you were in school though." She recalls.

Pannidda laughs again. "Oh sweetie, just because I knew your dad didn't mean I was saving myself for him. He was just a boy I had met on vacation, and there were lots of cute boys at Hogwarts who were much closer." She looks about ready to say something else, but apparently decides to keep it to herself. "Regardless, school is a time for experimenting and learning what you want in a relationship. By the time I met your dad again I knew exactly what I was looking for and found it in him."

Franziska thinks on it. "Did you know you loved him though?"

"Oh no, not right away. I thought maybe when I was a girl, but love is so much more complicated when you get older. Your father and I just grew together in a way that worked for both of us. It's partly why we had you so late - we took our time getting to know each other."

Franziska nods slowly, not totally convinced but thinking that it sort of makes sense. "So then... do you think Brandon and I are going to break up one day?" She asks nervously, eyes flitting around the room rather than focusing on her mother.

Pannidda looks at her searchingly, staying quiet for a long while. "Well dear, I think that will be up to you." She finally says. "You and Brandon. I know some people who married their school-year sweethearts but I'm proof that sometimes the person that fits you needs some time to find themselves. Why do you ask? Is everything alright with you two?"

Franziska isn't sure she wants to talk about it with her mother, especially now that she knows her mom had broken up with her own first boyfriends - and the second how had Franziska never heard about any of this? - and will probably be pretty biased about the whole thing. So she just shrugs noncommittally.

"Not really, we just had our first fight is all. It's resolved now but it got me thinking. That's all." She says it quickly and knows her mom can tell that there's more to it, but Pannidda makes no comment. Instead she asks if Franziska wants to help her make lunch, and Franziska is only too happy to take her up on the offer.

It isn't until the second week of summer, after several days of mother-daughter time (to the point where Franziska is about ready to change parents just for a break) that Rosalinde's finals end and she's back home for the summer.

Franziska isn't sure how seeing her best friend in person for the first time since August is going to go. They've been writing each other letters all year like they'd promised, and Rosalinde has seemed pretty happy, but the last time they'd been face to face had been when Rosa met Brandon, and that had been a disaster of Saundra-level proportions.

Still, Franziska is excited to see her friend, so she pushes on the Treindl's doorbell and bounces in nervous anticipation on the balls of her feet as she waits for an answer.

Rosalinde's mother is the one who comes to the door, and she smiles warmly upon seeing Franziska. "Frannie love! So good to see you! Come inside, let's have a look at you!"

Franziska has always liked Mrs. Treindl, so she accepts the offer and steps past the wispy woman into the house. The Treindl residence is quite similar to her own home, with a nearly identical floor plan including an oddly angled fireplace. The decorations, however, set the two homes distinctly apart, though Franziska feels comfortable in both of them despite the differences.

"Rosa is still fast asleep, I'll go get her in a minute. But what have you been up too? It's been far too long since you've been over to our house." Mrs. Trenidl waves Franziska into one of the dining room chairs and soon after presents her with a plate of fresh sausages.

Despite having just finished breakfast at her own house, Franziska's stomach grumbles in interest as the smell reaches her. "Oh, I couldn't-" She tries to insist, but Mrs. Treindl is a force of hospitality and won't hear a single complaint, insisting Franziska have as much as she likes.

Franziska is halfway through her third sausage and a modified story about Hufflepuff's victory in Quidditch ("you should play for the school team Frannie dear! You're wonderful at football!") when Rosalinde appears on the stairs, yawning out a half-hearted good morning.

Her mother gestures for Franziska to be quiet, a mischievous glint in her eyes. "Morning Rosa. Nice of you to finally join us."

Rosalinde hums and stumbles over to the kitchen counter to help herself to breakfast, and Franziska has to push down a giggle at her friend's obliviousness.

Finally Rosalinde turns around with her plate and looks directly at Franziska. She blinks slowly, uncertain, and then turns to her mother questioningly.

Mrs. Treindl grins. "Yes dear?"

"Mom, is Frannie here and you didn't get me up?" Rosalinde asks, and Franziska finally snorts out a laugh.

"Only for about half an hour." She replies. "I was telling your mom about the football season at school."

Rosalinde whines in as she finally unfreezes and sits down next to Franziska. "You can't talk about that without me around! Frannie, this is the ultimate betrayal!" She declares dramatically, pretending to burst into tears afterwards which gets both girls laughing pretty quickly.

Mrs. Treindl smiles. "Well it was good catching up with you Frannie, don't be such a stranger this summer you hear?"

"Yes Ma'am." Franziska promises once her giggling has slowed enough to allow her to properly form words again. "I'll make sure to come by for breakfast more often."

"Good. Now I'll leave you two be, just tell me if you're going out."

"We'll probably head to the park to do some sketching this afternoon." Rosalinde suggests, glancing over at Franziska who nods in confirmation.

"That would be great, I had no time to draw during the year." She agrees, happy that things between her and her best friend are as comfortable as they've ever been.

They spend the entire week out and about in the city. At fifteen both their mothers think they're officially old enough to handle themselves and no longer fuss at them when they go out, so long as they give a rough estimate of when they'll be home.

This leads to the two spending their days in the heart of Düsseldorf, visiting the numerous museums and people watching at the train stations. They get daily allowances that they ration as well as they can, but more often than not they find themselves forced to walk home after overspending and not having enough for a taxi ride back to the suburbs.

They talk about school some, but Franziska does notice after a month that she hasn't really told Rosalinde anything about the past year, save anything pertaining to the "football season", since Rosalinde isn't really asking.

She wonders if it has anything to do with Brandon. Instead of asking directly, however, she decides to try and steer the conversation and see how things play out and if her suspicions that Rosalinde has been avoiding the topic are accurate.

"So hey, how was school?" She asks as innocently as she can manage. They're in the park today, having decided to try and save up some cash by not spending anything except what will be needed for lunch. "I just realized you haven't told me a thing."

Rosalinde coughs nervously. "Oh, it was fine. School is school, you know? I almost failed math, but I told you about that in the letters and nothing else really happened."

Franziska hums. "Did I tell you that I got into a fight with a kid?" She asks suddenly, thinking if she talks about her Christmastime spat with Finnigan Rosa might be more open to talking.

Rosa looks over at her in surprise. "What? You? You're kidding." She starts to laugh, but pauses when she sees Franziska's expression. "No." She says, sounding partly scandalized but more intrigued. "Who? Why?"

Franziska feels her cheeks heating slightly. "Well it was over Christmas break, when most of the other students had already gone home. I've told you about my friends other than Brandon right? Fitzwilliam and Nabila?"

Rosalinde nods, and Franziska is quietly relieved at the non-reaction to her talking about Brandon.

"Okay, well, Nabila wasn't there this year, she went home with one of her Gryffindor friends, so I was a little worried that Fitzwilliam was going to feel awkward being with just me and Brandon. That didn't end up being a problem though, but the guy who started hanging out with us might have ended up being a bigger one." She laughs slightly. "His name is Finnigan and he's one of Fitz's roommates."

Rosalinde raises an eyebrow curiously. "Isn't Fitz the totally wimpy one? I find it hard to believe any of his friends would cause problems."

Franziska laughs despite herself. "Rosa that isn't nice! And they don't seem like they're really friends? Finnigan just kind of invited himself as far as I could tell." She pauses, thinking about it. "Actually it's sort of weird. He always stays over break so far as I can remember, but he usually keeps to himself. Even during classes I'm not sure I've ever seen him really talking to anyone."

Rosalinde tilts her head. "Definitely weird that he suddenly started hanging out with you then." She confirms. "So what did he do that was so awful?"

"Ah, it really wasn't so bad. We always play a little pick up game of football during break, really more passing the ball around and arbitrarily deciding when we're trying to avoid passing to someone, and he was a right jerk about the whole thing. He was on his House team last year, but he didn't get on this year so I guess he might have been sore about that." Franziska is proud of herself for coming up with the reasoning on the spot. After all, it would be odd to say that she'd been uncertain if Finnigan knew what football was without giving something away.

"Well he sounds like a prick and I hope you kicked his ." Rosalinde declares, and Franziska laughs a bit.

"Not really. He was on the House team after all, so we ended up sort of tying. It was weird getting that upset about something though, I don't think I've been that angry since Halloween when we were six." She laughs at the memory, and Rosalinde giggles as well.

"Oh man, that was a crazy one, wasn't it? I miss being that age, everything was so much less complicated then."

"Tell me about it." Franziska agrees. The two lapse into a brief silence, and Franziska thinks that as stressful as trying to keep her accidental magic under control was, being a kid really had been easier than being a teenager.

She glances over at Rosalinde to find the small blonde studying her uncertainly. She blushes a bit at getting caught, and clears .

"So, um, I guess something did kind of happen at school. But I can't tell you about it here. Do you want to have a sleepover tomorrow? At your house? My mom is too nosy."

Franziska thinks for a moment than fourteen is maybe a little old for sleepovers. She very quickly pushes that thought away and agrees whole-heartedly. "That would be fun! We can watch Lady and the Tramp like we did when we were kids." She adds with a grin.

Rosalinde giggles. "Agh, I'm too young to be nostalgic! Come, we're going to skip around the park like the young ladies that we are!" She declares, jumping off the bench and taking off, leaving Franziska laughing and scrambling after her.

Their mothers have no problem agreeing to the sleepover, and Rosalinde drops off her pyjamas and toothbrush at the Reinhardt household before the two girls head into the city to see when adventures they can find. Franziska spends most of the day distracted by her own curiosity about what Rosa could possibly have to tell her that's so secret.

Finally, dinnertime comes around and the two girls return to Franziska's house for dinner. Her father is away on Ministry business again, and they give Rosalinde the usual excuse of a business trip, which isn't exactly false.

Dinner takes longer than Franziska would like, but her mother hasn't really seen Rosalinde since they've been meeting at the Treindl house, so Franziska tolerates her mother's endless questions about Rosa's school year.

"Really, you should come over during the year, we only ever see you when Lida is home." Pannidda says, lightly reproving. "You're always welcome here Rosa."

"Thank you Mrs. Reinhardt." Rosalinde smiles politely. The two girls excuse themselves shortly afterwards, and true to Franziska's word they end up watching Lady and the Tramp once they're both showered and snuggled into their pyjamas. Through the whole movie Franziska tries to push down her impatience and just enjoy the time with her best friend.

As the credits roll, Rosalinde takes an uncertain breath in. "Okay, so. Um. One thing might have happened at school. Or, during the school year. Not really at at school-"

"Rosa!" Franziska can't help interrupting, and Rosa groans.

"This is hard, okay? You swear you'll be my best friend no matter what?"

Franziska blinks. "Oh my gosh you murdered someone."

That at least gets Rosalinde to laugh. "No! Oh my god Frannie what? Look I... I'm in a relationship."

Franziska shrieks. "What?? Rosa!" She knows she's grinning and Rosalinde smiles a bit uncertainly in reply.

"But um... it's, um..." She takes a breath and Franziska bites down on the urge to shout at her friend to just spit it out.

"It's a girl. I'm dating a girl. I'm gay." Rosa's voice gets very small as she speaks, her eyes sinking from the screen to the comforter in front of her, where her hands have fisted into the fabric. "So, um, yeah."

Franziska feels a bit like she's been slapped. That hadn't been what she'd expected at all. A thousand questions leap forward, demanding to be asked, but then she remembers Rosalinde's questions: "swear you'll be my best friend no matter what?"

So she pushes the questions aside for now and instead gives her best friend the brightest smile she can muster.

"Awesome! We could totally go on double dates now, and we don't even have to worry about accidentally stealing each other's dates!"

Rosa stares at her, and then bursts into laughter, wiping at the tears that start sliding down her face, and Franziska hugs her and demands information about her girlfriend. They stay up until well after midnight talking, and Franziska feels closer to her best friend than she ever has before.

The first week of July Rajani spends most of her days sitting impatiently by the window. She gets plenty of owls from her friends and boyfriend (who she has neglected to mention to her parents so far), but none of the letters are the one she's eagerly waiting for.

And then finally, on the second Tuesday of the month, a large tawny owl that Rajani doesn't recognize swoops through the window and deposits an envelope bearing the Hogwarts crest on the table behind her. She thinks maybe it falls a bit heavier than it should, but she also thinks that that could very well be wishful thinking.

She gives the owl the treats she's been keeping with her by the window, and then hesitantly reaches for the envelope at it flies off. Slowly she lifts it - and there's definitely an increased weight to it. That can't be her imagination.

She tears open the envelope, pulls out the letter with the required textbooks list and deposits it carelessly onto the table. She then peers hopefully into the envelope - and barely suppresses a squeal.

She tips the Prefect badge out of the envelope and into her hand where it lands somewhat awkwardly, one of the points at the top digging into the skin of her palm. But she doesn't care - she made prefect.

She curls her hand around the badge, needing the slight sting to ground her through the giddiness that she feels building up inside her chest.

She needs to tell her parents. That thought pushes her to finally move, snatching the letter off the table and sweeping the ripped envelope into the garbage can by the table.

She nearly faceplants down the stairs she's moving so quickly, but she thankfully manages to catch herself against the railing, though she thinks she'll likely be sporting a rather ugly bruise on her right bicep for a few days at least.

The near miss does encourage her to slow down slightly and she makes it to her father's study with no further incidents. She takes a steadying breath - she never spoke to her father much before but since getting to school her interest in engaging with her parents has decreased even further - and then knocks politely at the door.

"Come in." Her father calls from the other side, sounding both distracted and irritated at the intrusion.

Rajani keeps her head bowed respectfully as she slips into the room. "I apologize for imposing, but I wished to inform you that I have been made Prefect." She holds out the badge and notices that her hand is shaking slightly. She promptly tries to correct the tremor though she's certain her father has already seen it.

She risks a glance up to find her father is actually smiling.

"Rajani that is simply wonderful, excellent job. Go and tell your mother, we must do something special for dinner tonight."

Rajani blinks, and them beams at the man in front of her. "Thank you, I will." She agrees and quickly excuses herself from the room, feeling light as air at the unexpected praise. She quickly heads down the hall to the sitting room where she's certain her mother will be, either reading or sewing.

She knocks lightly to announce her presence and then steps inside, smiling in response to the small nod her mother gives her.

"My Hogwarts letter just arrived." Rajani says after a moment of silence. "I was made prefect."

Once again she holds out the badge proudly, and is happy to see that her hands have calmed down, though the area of her palm where the tip is still resting is starting to dent inwards.

Her mother looks up and absolutely beams. "Oh honey that's wonderful! We'll have to do something special tonight in celebration - what would you like? Anything at all, I can run to the store now to get any ingredients we might not have."

Rajani grins. "Then could we have Chole? Made with the spices from the Dehli markets your sister sent us?" She asks hopefully.

Her mother nods briskly. "Of course! I'll start it in an hour or so."

Rajani nods happily and practically skips back up to her room. She puts aside the letter and - reluctantly - the badge and sets to work writing letters to her friends and Ed to give them the news.

It isn't until she's half-way through Clary's letter, the fourth one of five that she intends to write, that she realizes that her getting the prefect badge means that Queenie didn't. And since Queenie is still in South America for another two weeks she isn't going to know until then.

For the first time Rajani feels a slight stab of worry. How will Queenie react? Will she be upset? Probably yes, but will she show it? Will it hurt their friendship? They had promised it wouldn't, but faced with the idea now after a summer of no communication Rajani is less certain the deal will still be in place.

Rajani pushes Clary's parchment aside and grabs the completed letter to Ed to add a coda. They'd agreed that part of the dating deal was to be able to dump their concerns on each other without judgement, and she definitely needs somewhere to vent her nerves.

The added section of the letter ends up spilling halfway down another piece of parchment, and Lakshmi looks distinctly unimpressed by the growing pile of deliveries sitting in front of her cage.

"Sorry girl, but this is a big deal! Even mother and father were impressed, and they've never been impressed with me before. Honestly it would have been such a disappointment to them if one of their daughters was a prefect and the other wasn't." She explains to the owl, who retains her irritated gaze, uncomprehending of and indifferent to Rajani's justification. Rajani shakes her head with a faint, tired smile. The high of the letter arriving has more than worn off and she's feeling rather drained now.

She decides to finish the letter to Clary and write the letter to Elspeth in the morning and addresses the three she's finished before giving them to Lakshmi for delivery. The owl still looks less than impressed, but she takes the envelopes and swoops out the window with no verbal complaint and Rajani takes that as a win.

She spends the rest of the afternoon skimming through her sister's fifth year potions book, which Rajani had taken the liberty of permanently borrowing from Sahana's room at the start of the summer, along with all of her OWL-level workbooks. She figures one can never get too much of a head start on studying for what are supposedly the second most nightmarish set of exams she'll have to endure. And she's also preemptively thankful that she won't have nearly as many NEWTs to stress about.

At least dinner that night is delicious, bringing back faded memories of her youngest years, when they were still hiding in India in fear of both sides of the War and she was close with her sister to the best of her limited recollection.

She hasn't seen Sahana at all so far during the summer, and even Mayra hasn't been replying to her owls. Rajani is a bit worried, but both of them are working so she figures they don't have the time to do much besides their jobs.

The conversation at the table is fully focused on school, which is actually surprising for Rajani - normally she doesn't get to speak at all during dinner if her friends and their families aren't over for a meal.

She's relieved that neither of her parents thinks to bring up the upcoming career consultation since she honestly doesn't know what she wants to do besides probably something in the Ministry. She doesn't feel up to pretending like she's going to give their inevitable demands, phrased as suggestions of course, any particular thought. She plans to figure out what path she wants to take on her own, without her parents telling her what it should be.

She wonders if Sahana had gotten any tips from them, or if, as Rajani had always assumed, Sahana had just always known exactly what she wanted to do. Rajani had always assumed she would know by this point what she wants to do as well though, so it's possible her youthful assumptions were regularly incorrect.

She has a hard time sleeping that night, the faint remaining excitement of her new title warring with her concerns over Queenie's reaction and the impending career consultation that she doesn't feel ready for whatsoever.

She does eventually fall into a fitful slumber, but she doesn't feel particularly well-rested when she wakes from it the next morning. Yawning heavily, Rajani needs a few minutes, during which she gets dressed, before she notices that Lakshmi has returned and there's a small pile of letters back on her desk.

She perks up slightly and grabs the topmost one, which ends up being from Nia.

Congratulations, should I be calling you your majesty now?

All seriousness, great job, you're going to kill it.

Nia

Rajani grins. Nia's never been much for writing so just the fact she wrote back at all means a lot. The next letter is from Ed, but it's also the thickest so Rajani decides to read the third letter first.

However, it's not a reply from Lennox, as she'd expected it to be, but rather is from Eugene.

"How did you even get this? Eugene isn't even on this half of the world, nonetheless this continent." She asks her owl. Lakshmi gives her a half-glance before going back to her water bowl, the look almost mocking.

Rajani laughs. "Okay, you're the best owl in the world, I got it. Wonder what Eugene wants?"

Hey Raj,

I hear you and I are going to be teaming up this year! When Queenie didn't get the badge - and yeah, we got our letters out here in Peru just fine, which is cool! - we knew you must have gotten it instead. Queenie says congrats too by the way, and also she demands that since her fiancé and best friend are the prefects we should get her all the benefits that go with the title.

Rajani lets out a thankful breath, both that the school had somehow contacted Queenie and Eugene out in the jungle, and that neither of them seem upset.

We've got some crazy stories to share when we head back to school though, South America is amazing! I'll stop writing here, they're about to send the daily post owl and I don't want to miss it, but congrats again!

Eugene (And Queenie! <3)

The end of the letter is clearly signed by both of her friends, and Rajani finds herself a bit teary. She blames the lack of sleep.

"Then Eugene is the other prefect." She informs the sitll disinterested Lakshmi. "That will be fun! Imagine if it was Alasdair or Cadfael? I mean, we're on not terrible terms now but still, it's not like I really ever talk with them even if we're not enemies anymore."

Finally she turns to the letter from her boyfriend. She feels a bit bad now that she dumped everything on him the day before when it's turned out to be fine.

She tears open the envelope and is surprised to find that in addition to a letter there's a map stuffed inside. She looks it over in confusion and finds several areas marked with what she recognizes as ancient runes.

"What?" She mumbles to herself and turns to the letter, assuming the explanation will be contained within it.

She has to get through most of the letter before she finds her desired explanation, and she has to admit it's actually pretty sweet.

Ed tells her exactly what she probably should have figured out herself, that her and Queenie are better friends than to let a title come between them, and she shouldn't worry about it so much.

However, I know that's not so easy to do, so I'm taking you out to have a bit of fun. You're probably wondering what the map is for, correct? Well I hope you've been doing your Ancient Runes homework, because you'll need to put it to work here. Find the spot labelled "Fun" and meet me there on Thursday at ten AM. We'll have a proper London date to get your mind off of things. Looking forward to seeing you there!

Yours,
Ed

Rajani grins at the sign off and turns back to the map. She hasn't actually done her Ancient Runes homework, but she figures there's no time like the present.

Finding the indicated rune isn't hard - it's coming up with an excuse for her parents that proves to be the more difficult task. Mr. and Mrs. Misra won't take just any reason to let their daughter leave the house without their supervision, and she definitely can't use her sister or Mayra to bail her out.

She ends up multitasking, finishing Clary's letter from the day before and getting started on Elspeth's while she ponders how exactly to convince her parents.

Then, halfway through Elspeth's letter, she glances back at Clary's and is hit by a wave of inspiration.

Her parents surely wouldn't object to her spending time with a fellow pureblood, would they? Rajani quickly adds a coda to Clary's letter, sends Lakshmi out with it, and then hurries down the stairs to talk to her parents, hoping Clary will agree to her request.

She knocks lightly on the sitting room door to announce her presence. "Mother? May I come in?"

Vandana glances up from her book and smiles softly, a look that Rajani honestly hasn't seen in a while and it momentarily catches her off guard. "Of course, what do you need?"

Rajani clears . "Well, one of Clary Traver's cousins is starting at Hogwarts this year so she and her family are taking her school shopping tomorrow, and Clary asked if I would like to go with them. I know you and father are quite busy so I thought-"

"That sounds wonderful dear!" Vandana doesn't give her the chance to finish, her eyes already lighting up with the potential. "We haven't properly met the Travers family! Oh, but your father and I are quite busy tomorrow, but you absolutely should go! Tell the Travers we wish them well, and give our luck to the new Slytherin!"

Rajani smiles. "Of course mother! Thank you so much!"

She quickly darts back up to her room, grinning, and is surprised to find that Lakshmi has already returned, complete with a reply from Clary.

The next Travers going to Hogwarts is my cousin Ava, and she doesn't start until a couple years after we graduate. And we don't even hang out with her branch of the family, but yeah, I'll cover for you. Have fun with your boyfriend!

Raj quickly folds up the letter and hides it in her desk drawer, grinning. She definitely intends to have fun.

Myr gets a summer job.

He feels like it's something he should do, now that he's fifteen and well on his way to being an adult.

His Uncle Cyril offers to pay him to work at the curio shop but Myr turns him down, wanting to get the job on his own merits. And also not wanting to see Uncle Cyril and his mother pretending that they haven't been getting closer since Cadi moved to London for university.

Honestly, Cadi not being around is a big part of his decision. He hadn't realized how much time he spent with his older sister until she wasn't around anymore. She had said she would try to come home for a few weeks, but that was before she decided to take a second summer course, completely filling up her schedule.

It takes nearly a month before he can get an interview, and another two weeks after that before he finally (thankfully) is told he got the job.

It's nothing fancy, he just buses tables at a slightly upperclass restaurant by the port, but it's good money and it gives him something to do each evening.

And admittedly he does like the nice blazer - that his Uncle insists is a late birthday gift - that he wears as a part of his uniform. It makes him feel a bit classier himself, and his coworkers have about a few of the looks he apparently gets from the younger customers.

His favorite fellow worker is a seventeen year old girl named Tegwyn, who everyone calls Wyniteg for reasons Myr still can't figure out a month into his job, who reminds him a lot of Cadi with her quiet demeanor and sharp wit.

More importantly she recognizes him from school, which she just graduated from.

They end up volunteering for the closing shift together pretty often once they both realize their connections to the wizarding world, and Wyniteg is more than happy to help prepare Myr for what to expect in his final three years of Hogwarts.

"How is it we never met at school? There can't be too many people from Whales there." Myr observes one night as they walk back towards his house.

Wyniteg shrugs, staring up at the stars overhead. "We were in different Houses, so there's that. Ravenclaw and Gryffindor don't mix nearly as much as they both do with Hufflepuff. And the school is pretty big. There's maybe thirty to fifty kids per year. So statistically speaking-"

Myr laughs. "You really ought to meet my sister someday, you'd get along well I think."

Wyniteg grins as well, still gazing skyward and nearly stepping into the street. "So you've said. She's going into politics, right? When she gets past entry level she should contact me - I want to get into the Ministry and there's a special branch in the British government for people aware of the wizarding world. Ambassador work, stuff like that. It's a straight shot to the top."

"She would probably enjoy that." Myr admits. "She knows how owling works so I can give you her address, get you guys in contact. Given that she's okay with that of course."

They reach his house at this point, and as he does every night Myr invites Wyniteg inside for a late dinner, but as always she politely declines and spins around to head back to her own house, humming the Hogwarts' school song just loud enough to follow Myr all the way up to his front door.

"How was work?" Aster greets him as he steps into the house. She never goes to sleep before Myr gets home, which honestly Myr rather appreciates. He enjoys talking about the customers of the day and Wyniteg's weird observations about most of them.

"I would really like to meet this girl. You say she's a witch?"

"Ravenclaw." He confirms. "She wasn't a prefect or anything which would explain why I never knew her." He adds redundantly. He knows his mother is a bit suspicious of Wyniteg, which Myr figures is fair - she hasn't actually met the girl. Still, it does irk him slightly that his mother doesn't trust him to know if his friends are dangerous or suspicious.

Aster suddenly sits up. "Oh, that's right! Your letter came in today. No badge, sorry sweetie."

Myr shrugs. He hadn't been particularly concerned with who would get the prefect badge, though if it didn't go to him then he has a good feeling about who did get the role. "I bet Charlie got it, which really is fair. He's mediated Remi's madness quite a bit honestly, I just don't have the patience to deal with that."

His mother laughs. "This Remi sounds like quite the character." She observes with amusement, and Myr shrugs, grinning faintly despite himself.

"Honestly? The giant squid thing this year was tame for him. But it feels like every House must have that one crazy reckless kid - Evie from our year is Ravenclaw's, and Hufflepuff has a girl a year below us who manages to turn one thing into something it isn't supposed to be at some point during the school year. This year she made it rain in the dungeons for a solid five hours before anyone could fix it. I almost felt bad for the Slytherins." He laughs.

"And the Slytherins?" His mother prompts, clearly entertained by the stories.

Myr pauses, and then shrugs a bit sheepishly. "Honestly I'm not sure. I know a couple of them have played some nasty pranks on all the other houses, not even just during the prank war a coupld of years ago. But I don't really know any of them well, they just keep to themselves. And like I said, they're intentionally mean, so I don't really want to get to know them"

His mother frowns. "An entire House made of mean kids? That sounds a bit far fetched Myrddin."

Myr is immediately on the defensive. "I know it sounds judgey but I'm serious! Not one of them has ever been nice to any of us. The older students confirm it too, they're all just... they act like they're better than the rest of the school. And who wants to deal with that on top of school?"

Aster doesn't look convinced, but she lets it go. "Alright then. Oh, and your uncle wants to take you into the city to shop for your school supplies sometime next week - when is your day off?"

Myr has to double check his schedule the next day, but ultimately they go on the following Tuesday.

They arrive in Diagon Alley via the Floo ("Was it really so hard to get that hooked up sooner?") and Myr tumbles straight into a familiar face.

"Myr!"

"Hey Holly." He grins. "On break?"

She laughs and shakes her head. "Not working today actually. Tuesday is a quiet shopping day so I'm getting my school stuff. You too I take it? Ooh!" She suddenly peers at the fireplace behind him. "Is Cadi coming?"

Myr isn't sure how to feel about Holly apparently being more excited about maybe seeing his sister than actually seeing him. "No, she's got summer school so-"

"Yep! She's joining us for lunch!" His Uncle interrupts him cheerfully. Myr hadn't even noticed him coming through the floo. "It was supposed to be a surprise but eh, close enough! And you must be one of Myr's school friends?"

Holly nods cheerfully and sticks out a hand. "Holly Kiddell, future wandmaker! My sister Willow is around here somewhere too, though she's got a ton of random nonsense to buy for NEWT-level Divination so we split up for now. We're meeting up at Fortescue's at noon to go find somewhere to eat."

"Well why don't you join us! The more the merrier I always say." Uncle Cyril invites her along, and Holly of course agrees eagerly.

"I just got all my books, but I can wait!" She adds. "Hey, Myr you can come with me 'cause I already know where all the books are except for Muggle Studies since I don't take that. And Mr. Mry's, um..." She frowns. "Are you his dad I guess? You don't look alike, no offense."

Something in Myr tightens ever so slightly, and he sees a similar tension in his uncle.

Holly immediately picks up on the new atmosphere and backtracks fast. "Sorry, that was probably rude to assume-"

"He's my Uncle. Uncle Cyril." Myr interrupts quickly. Holly blinks, and then starts frowning.

"You're the uncle? The one who gave Myr a hand-me-down-wand?"

Just like that the atmosphere is light again and Myr laughs as his bewildered uncle gets a very stern dressing down from Holly, who now that he's looking has clearly grown several inches since he'd last seen her.

"I'll go get my books then." He grins, and his uncle looks over at him helplessly.

Holly is still ranting about wand core compatibilities when he returns, arms filled with his required textbooks.

"Uncle Cyril? You have the Galleons." He interrupts when Holly finally takes a moment to breath. His uncle looks incredibly relieved at the distraction, and he happily accepts the pile of books and flees for the counter to pay.

Holly and Myr exchange a glance, and both burst into giggles.

Once he's recovered, Myr raises an eyebrow. "Wand core compatibility? That's a new one. You learn something this summer?"

Holly laughs again. "Some of it yeah, but actually Emery had some really good observations about how the wood itself might physically interact with the cores! You remember him, he's in the year above us. He got an O on his Herbology OWL so he's got a lot of good insight on plant stuff that I don't have yet."

Myr shrugs. He does vaguely recall a face to go with the name, but Emery has always been Holly's friend more than his - or anyone else's in their year.

He ends up changing the subject awkwardly. "Cool cool. So is Willow Head Girl?"

Holly rolls her eyes. "It's literally all we've heard about for the past two weeks, yeah. Bill Weasley is Head Boy though so hopefully he'll chill her out a bit."

Myr grins. "Hey that's awesome! I'm pretty sure Charlie is Prefect for our year so that's kind of cool for them." He then adds, out of curiosity, "How did you know about Bill?"

"Oh, Head Girls and Boys are told ahead of time who their pair is, so they can communicate over the summer and start figuring out how they want to handle the prefects during the train ride in." Holly explains. "You're probably right about Charlie though. I'd've put Galleons on it being either you or him, none of the other guys are even slightly qualified for responsibility."

Myr grins. "I don't know, Remi can be very-"

Holly is shoving him with a laugh before he even finishes the thought. "Oh good gracious no. I need brain bleach to clear that idea from my mind." She half-laughs, half-groans. "Evil thought! Evil."

Uncle Cyril rejoins them then, and Myr keeps Holly from attacking him with more wand knowledge by asking about her summer.

"I mean, other than Willow going on and on about being the Head Girl, it was actually pretty fun! We stayed with Laurel and Eric for a bit and we all hid from our parents and their constant questions about when the wedding is going to be. OH, also Laurel might be pregnant!" Holly looks thrilled. "They don't know for definite yet, Eric says they'll be sure in a week or so, but I might be an aunt! How exciting is that?" Holly twirls happily.

Uncle Cyril raises an eyebrow. "And you say they aren't married yet?" He observes cautiously.

Holly sticks her tongue out. "Oh if it's true they'll get married first, trust me my parents were very clear about how they'd feel having a bastard in the family. But still, Aunt Holly! It just sounds wonderful doesn't it?"

Myr smiles at her. "It's pretty neat, yeah. I can't even imagine Cadi having kids."

"Cadi having what now?" A teasing voice breaks in, and both Myr and Holly spin to greet the newcomer.

"Hey sis."

"Cadi!"

Cadi grins. She's wearing a dress, which in and of itself startles Myr, but she's looking far more professional and made up than he's ever seen her before in general.

"Wow Cadi, you look lovely." Uncle Cyril beams, and she flips her hair cheerfully.

"Thanks, it's been working for me really well too. Word of advice Holly - I don't know if it's different in the Wizarding world, but you're probably going to have to dress nice to get a job because guys won't hire a girl they can't fantasize about."

Myr chokes on air and Uncle Cyril flushes as well, even as Holly bursts into laughter.

"It's a bit different, but really depends on who you're trying to get a job with. The blood-purists definitely fit that mold though! It's weird how similar the Muggle and Wizarding worlds really are." Holly muses.

They meet up with Willow fifteen minutes later, and once introductions are out of the way they end up wandering around Diagon Alley in search of somewhere to eat.

Uncle Cyril and Willow get into a discussion about current wizarding politics that Cadi ends up jumping in on, leaving Myr to chat with Holly while they walk.

He tells her about his summer job and Wyniteg, and Holly eagerly details her continued apprenticeship under her Uncle at the Kiddell wand shop. Once they find a place to sit down, Myr tells Cadi about Wyniteg's offer.

"That actually sounds pretty cool." Cadi admits with a small grin. "Getting to work in both worlds would be fantastic, but I'd probably want to learn more about the actual duties and roles available down that track before pursuing it. I do still want to help people after all."

"I can give Wyniteg your address if you wanted to owl back and forth a bit. She sounded like she knows a lot about it." Myr offers, and Cadi shrugs with a grin.

"Why not? Networking is super important - that's my older sibling lesson for you this year. Remember it for it shall change the course of your job opportunities."

Myr laughs and the group continues chatting through lunch. Cadi has to leave for her afternoon class but she swaps information with Willow before going. Personally Myr is amused at how well his sister gets along with the Kiddells.

Willow and Holly stick with them as they all collect the rest of their school supplies, and they part just before the sun starts to set when Myr and Uncle Cyril have to floo back to Whales.

Later that evening, when Uncle Cyril is downstairs talking with his mother over the remains of dessert, Myr retires to his room to start packing his books into his trunk.

He stops when he comes across something a bit odd. He slips out of his room and hurries down the hall to peek his head back into the kitchen and dining area.

"Um, Uncle Cyril? You bought me two of the Defense Against the Dark Arts textbook." He pipes up during a lull in the adults' conversation. "I think you might be able to refund it?"

Uncle Cyril glances up, and then laughs. "Oh no, sorry! That one is for me." He explains standing to take the extra book from Myr's hands. "I was actually just telling your mother - Headmaster Dumbledore asked me if I could be your Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher this year, and I figured since it's your OWL year you'll need a good teacher!"

Myr blinks slowly, staring at his uncle as he processes the information. That... well.

It's certainly going to be an interesting year.

And so fifth year starts with a flourish and a bang! Well, metaphorical bang, but still ^^ I was both on vacation and horridly sick while writing a decent amount of this so I apologize if that's evident xD I'm pretty pleased with the end result, especially the scene with Rosa since that's a 'based on real events' situation. Anyway, I've decided to put little reminders at the start of each new (school) year about Confronting the Faceless - the sequel to this story! - because I'm shameless and I want to remind everyone that it's a thing and you should check it out! I'm really excited about it and there will be some familiar faces popping up over there~

Also happy 2019 everyone! Here's hoping it's a good one ^^

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2453 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!