Chapter Thirteen

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Forward Momentum

The return to school is about as eventful as the train rides normally are. Rajani sits with Queenie and Eugene and they talk about what they've done since seeing each other at Christmas and compare homework to ensure everything makes sense. Rajani adds an extra inch to her Charms essay after a rather clever observation from Eugene about the nature of size magic. They arrive at the castle just in time for dinner, and then they hurry to resettle themselves in the dorms and hand out the gifts they'd gotten for their housemates.

Lenox puts on his bracelet immediately, and gives Rajani a new charm for her own - a staircase. She finds the callback to their midnight wanderings both amusing and a bit embarrassing considering how it had all ended rather poorly. Still, she attaches the charm to the silver chain around her wrist right next to the snake from first year.

"I'll have my whole school story on my wrist by the time we graduate." She smiles over at Lenox who smiles back almost shyly in return.

"That's actually the idea." He replies.

Everyone quite likes their gifts from what Rajani can tell from their reactions - even Elspeth smiles uncertainly when she unwraps the simple quills Rajani had picked out for her.

"They're self-sharpening, so you don't have to stop in the middle of writing essays. I always find that to be really annoying if it interupts my train of thought." Rajani explains quickly, feeling bad for offering such an impersonal gift.

Elspeth looks surprised. "No, it's great. You didn't have to get me anything." She mumbles something else under her breath but it's too soft for Rajani to make out properly. Still, she's glad the present seems to be well received.

Clary is cackling over her gift. "Oh man, this is fantastic." She grins. "Open yours, open yours!"

Rajani is amused to find that Clary had a similar idea when she discovers the other girl has gotten her a book on how to not get caught sneaking out at night.

"Hey, it was Cadfael's fault!" She protests, putting no real effort behind the dissent.

"And the tree thing was the squirrel's fault so I guess we're even." Clary shoots back cheerfully.

Finn is incredibly pleased with his gift as well. "I've been wanting to find something like this." He tells Rajani when she hands him the package. "It was quite thoughtful of you to get me something even though we aren't very close."

Rajani waves her hand lightly. "It's no problem, I thought you would like it so I got it. No big deal."

From Finn's expression it apparently is a big deal, but Rajani leaves it be as she goes to sit with Queenie on the couch to gather her own presents before heading up to bed.

The next day it's back to classes, and their grades from the mid-winter exams are handed back by their Head of House during breakfast.

Rajani makes a face when she spots the P in Herbology marring the rest of her A and E marks.

Queenie winces when she glances over at Rajani's sheet. "Ouch. Herbology not making sense this year?" She asks, not unkindly.

Rajani sighs. "I probably should study for it more than I do. It's just such a boring class, it's difficult to muster up enthusiasm for leaves that can kill you."

Queenie laughs. "If you say so. I can help you out if you like, I managed an A."

"I got an O!" Eugene announces proudly. "I'd be willing to assist you ladies if you needed it."

Queenie shoves him lightly. "Heck no, no offense Gene but your ego doens't need any more . We're good working together."

Rajani just smiles as they bicker playfully about how big is too big for an ego and turns to Lenox, who's seated on her other side.

"How did you do?" She asks him, politely avoiding looking at his paper without permission.

He shrugs. "Not terrible but not great either. I'll have to step up my game to get the same grades I got last year." He admits somewhat sheepishly. "Maybe I could join you and Queenie when you're working on Herbology."

Rajani nods. "That would be great. The more the merrier."

"I'll join too! My grades are a mess." Clary moans from across the table, collapsing on it rather dramatically and getting her hair in the oatmeal.

"Clary! Ew!" Queenie is immediately pulled out of her conversation with Eugene. "Why are you like this, seriously?"

Clary flicks her hair, sending oatmeal onto the backs of the Ravenclaws sitting behind her. Ignoring their glares she merely smirks. "Can't help being fabulous my friend."

"Is that what they're calling it now?" Queenie fires back haughtily, mirth softening both her features and the words. "People's standards have truly dropped."

The two continue their banter through breakfast and on the way to Herbology.

"You know," Queenie whispers to Rajani as they enter Greenhouse Four, "Our Herbology grades might be because we have this class first thing Monday mornings. Just a thought."

Rajani rolls her eyes good-naturedly at her friend before gathering with the other Slytherins around the long table in the center of the room. The Gryffindors huddle on the other side, eyes narrowed but still too sleepy to be particularly aggressive.

The lesson is a rather simple review of mandrakes, as apparently not many people had answered the questions on them correctly on the exams prior to break. Rajani does her best to pay attention, but between the early hour and the topic she finds herself zoning out every few minutes.

When class finally lets out she decides she really should go the library and do some reading of the Herbology textbook herself before their Defense class.

It's easy enough to fall back into the routine of Hogwarts, and Rajani is just starting to settle into the usual patterns of existence when February arrives, and with it their Quidditch match against Ravenclaw.

In the week leading into the game the reserves team gets to train with the main group, in case an injury puts someone out of commission and they have to sub in another player. Rajani enjoys practice quite a bit, and she's proud to say that she's been improving rather rapidly.

So much so, that when practice wraps up the night before the match Mayra pulls her aside to talk to her.

"Hey, Raj. Just wanted to tell you that you're going to be our primary sub tomorrow." The Irish teen grins lightly, patting Rajani's shoulder proudly. "You really impressed me in practice today."

Rajani floats through the remainder of the evening, ignoring the glares she gets from Alasdair as they make their way back to the common room.

Logically she knows that the likelihood of actually getting onto the field is minimal, not in the least because the other teams are apparently incapable of aggression (and really Rajani has to question that - Quidditch is a contact sport, so fear of making contact seems rather silly to her, even if it does put Slytherin at an advantage).

The next morning she's feeling a bit more jittery about the whole situation, though her rational mind continues to remind her that she's likely still going to be watching the entire game from the bench again.

The game starts up normally enough. The view from the bench isn't as good as it is from the stands, and Rajani's neck aches slightly from having to look up to see what her teammates are doing.

Beside her, Alasdair has leaned back completely, supporting himself on his elbows as he critically watches each play as best he can from the awkward angle. The rest of the reserves players are less enraptured, chatting amongst themselves and occasionally tossing glares at the Ravenclaw reserves sitting across the field, who are only too happy to return the expression.

Rajani doesn't see exactly when the situation goes sideways, but it's about an hour into the game when Taylor shouts and then is cut off abruptly.

Rajani immediately looks for her teammate, only to see him tumble off his broom and to the ground. Coach Crowell catches him before he hits the group, but the fourth year is already out cold. The announcer is screaming abuse at the Ravenclaw chaser who had apparently caused the incident, though the mocha-skinned girl doesn't seem to care much as she snags the Quaffle Taylor had dropped and takes off back across the pitch.

Rajani is frozen on the bench for a long moment before Mayra swoops low and yells to her.

"Misra, move your rear, you're up. Grab your broom and get up here!" An instant later the captain is gone, chasing down the Ravenclaw player who had taken the Quaffle.

Rajani shakes off her shock and grabs her broom obediently, swinging her leg over it as soon as it leaps into her hand and pushing off to join the rush of people soaring above.

She realizes very quickly that practicing for Quidditch and actually playing in a game are two very differently things. She's momentarily disoriented by the rush of people around her and the ever-present shouting from the crowd, but she attempts to clear her head and scan the field to figure out where everyone is.

She pushes her broom about five meters higher so she can have a better vantage point, and once she ascertains where her teammates are she dives back down, flanking Mayra on the left as her captain angles to get the Quaffle back from Ravenclaw.

The chaser they're flying after spares her half a glance and scoffs.

"If this is the best Slytherin can manage it's no surprise Gryffindor kicked your asses this year."

Mayra's eyes narrow dangerously, and she subtly gestures to Gwenog Jones before picking up speed. Once she's pulled ahead of the Ravenclaw chaser she pulls in front of her, forcing the girl to slow down and veer to the side - straight towards Rajani.

This maneuver she knows. In a flash Rajani pulls up beside the other girl, forcing her to stop or cause a collision that would result in both of them getting knocked off their brooms.

It takes less than two seconds for the Ravenclaw to recover from the cornering, but it's one second too long as their third chaser swoops in from above and knocks the Quaffle from her hands.

As it falls, Rajani doesn't think - she just dives. Moments later the ball is in her hand and she's wheeling back around towards the opposite end of the pitch. She sees the Ravenclaw chasers bearing down on her, and she quickly passes off to Mayra, who's immediately off, defended by a gleeful Gwenog who nearly beheads one of the Ravenclaw players with a well-placed bludger.

Rajani follows closely, slightly below the main action. She swerves carefully across the field, trying to make sure she's always open for a pass though it's easier said than done. She's so focused on the players she nearly gets herself knocked over by a bludger.

Glaring at the Ravenclaw beater that had targeted her, she decides to try a new approach. She pulls up, and then ascends so she's back over the action, her sense now attuned to bludgers as well as players.

Calling plays during an actual game is quite different than when observing from the outside. She muses as she rolls around a bludger and casually drops a meter to get in the way of a Ravenclaw chaser.

She recognizes the dark-skinned girl who had mocked her earlier, and she gives a lazy grin before spinning her broom in a circle, the straw ends clipping the front of the girl's broom and knocking her off balance just enough to give Mayra time to pass to their other chaser, who catches the Quaffle and then fires on the goals in a single, fluid motion.

Rajani would really have to learn his name after this - she could learn a thing or two from his play style.

"Thanks kid!" He gives her a quick wave and then they're off again.

Queenie tells her later that she'd played for about an hour and a half, but to Rajani it feels like mere minutes before a whistle sounds and she looks around to find Talia Blackthorn, the fifth year Slytherin seeker, grinning wickedly and holding the snitch aloft in one fist.

Rajani joins the celebration in the common room, feeling rather high from the continued adrenaline rush of the game. Several of the main team players congratulate her on doing well for her first game, and Mayra casually notes that it looks like the open chaser spot the next year will be filled pretty easily.

Rajani feels sweaty and ruffled, and she knows her parents would probably be utterly horrified to see her running around in a jersey, covered in dirt and sweat with no thoughts towards taking a shower for at least a while, but she decides she'll let herself worry about that later. In the moment, she simply enjoys herself.

Eugene and Queenie both congratulate her profusely, and Eugene again exclaims that she'd be an excellent captain at some point. Gwenog Jones passes them glasses of an unknown substance, shouting something about only being young once, and though she knows she really shouldn't Rajani tosses it back, still lost in the rush of the win.

She regrets it when she has a hangover the next morning.

"I'm swearing off Quidditch." She informs her mattress, not wanting to move enough to address any of the actual humans in the room. "That rush makes you do stupid things and it's not worth it."

Queenie laughs. "Oh I'm sure it's just because you weren't expecting it. Now you know and you'll be much more graceful in victory next time."

Rajani hums, though whether in agreement or just pain from her pounding headache she isn't quite sure.

"I'm amazed anything managed to make you less that prim Raj." Nia teases from her own bunk across the room. "It was nice to know that even you can let loose sometimes."

"Treasure the memory because it's not happening again." Rajani declares, still into her mattress, and most of her roommates laugh.

"I'll bring you something up from breakfast, okay Raj?" Queenie pats her shoulder lightly. "You don't look up to walking around just yet."

Rajani mumbles her thanks as the rest of the girls file out of the dorms and presumably out to the Great Hall. She finally turns over so she can watch the lake lap against the windows of the dorm, and she smiles lightly. Despite her complaining, and the continued pounding behind her eyes, she has to admit she'd had a lot of fun the day before.

But she doesn't think she'll be accepting any more drinks from Gwenog Jones in the future.

Ana is quite pleased when she receives her exam grades back the first morning after they return from Winter Break. All Os except for one E in Herbology, which she'll take considering how unprepared she had felt for that class in comparison to the rest.

She's particularly pleased with the O in Potions, though perhaps part of that pride comes from the shock and praise she gets from her sixth year friends.

"I'm pretty sure I almost failed potions my second year Ana, that's seriously impressive." Hannah compliments when she sees the grade. "I bet you manage to get all your OWLs, seriously, you're such a stereotype."

Ana isn't sure what that word actually means, but Hannah's tone gives away the fact she's quite impressed, so Ana thinks it must be a good thing and she smiles.

Josie laughs at the comment. "Seriously though. You're the most Ravenclaw Ravenclaw I've ever met, and I've got three older siblings who were all sorted into Ravenclaw."

Sarah Poole, who's seated nearby but just a bit separate from the rest of the group - as she usually is - looks rather upset by Josie's comment but keeps quiet.

The rest of breakfast goes by comfortably, and Ana is glad that the nearly month-long break they have for the winter hadn't dented her acceptance among the older students.

The sixth years all share stories about what they'd done over break, and Eric is teased quite a bit over his visiting the Kiddell household the week before they came back.

Then school starts up again in earnest and Ana is happily back in her element. She pays extra attention in Herbology, even taking some notes during class - something no one else does but she needs her grade to go up before the end of the year so she's not embarrassed.

She even - reluctantly - agrees to Shaun's offer to sit in with his study group. She vaguely remembers them from when she'd dropped in during final exams the year before, but the only names she can concretely recall are Shaun and Fitzwilliam and she suspects that's only because she knows them from her house.

She mostly stays off to the side while the others chat and compare notes, though she does tune in a bit more when they start working on their Herbology assignment. The session isn't extremely useful, but she does agree to join them again the following week when Shaun asks once they pack up their books and head down for dinner.

Despite having spent the better part of three hours with her year mates, Ana still opts to sit with the sixth years that night. It's partially habit and partially a genuine preference for their company.

The conversation is mostly on schoolwork and the renewed intensity of NEWT year for the sixth year students, and Ana does her best to keep up and take note of anything she thinks will help her when it's her turn to prepare for the tests in four years.

It's a familiar routine, and comfortable as well. It's almost too easy for Ana to slide back into the nearly mechanical motions of school and homework. Honestly she likes it - the more she's on autopilot the less she has to pay attention to her roommates and classmates, most of whom irritate her.

Of course, she can't entirely ignore them, especially not Evie, who seems to be the sort of person who would be unavoidable even if she wasn't actively trying to get her nose into everyone else's business.

In fact, her least favorite house mate seems to have gotten ever worse since the break somehow, which honest Ana hadn't thought was possible. While Evie had never really let rules or regulations dictate how she handles everyday life, since returning from her trip home she seems to be going out of her way to bend and break every basic principle Hogwarts has in place for keeping students safe.

It starts on a particularly gross January morning, when the skies are gray and there's just the hint of snow swirling around the windows - enough to frost the glass but not enough to actually be enjoyable. It's Friday, so Ana has nothing to do until Astronomy that night so she decides to go study in her favorite corner of the library.

It's calm at first, pleasant really, and Ana has nearly lost herself in her Transfiguration essay when something flies past the window to her right.

Ana wants to dismiss it, but when she instinctively glances up she realizes the flying object is, in fact, a person.

Specifically a person who isn't supposed to be flying.

Sighing heavily, Ana closes her textbook, packs away her things, and heads to the front of the library to talk to the librarian.

"Madame Pince? Could I leave my bags here for a moment?" She asks politely, and the librarian easily acquiesces. Ana has heard stories that the woman is quite stern and inflexible with other students, but as a frequent patron of the library Ana has never had a problem.

She's about to hurry out, when she pauses and turns back. "And would you happen to know where Coach Crowell might be at this time?"

The librarian looks a bit confused by the question, but she thinks it over. "I believe he'd likely be in one of the teacher's lounges. I can give you directions if you like."

She doesn't ask why Ana wants to know - there's an unspoken rule in the library that people's business is their own, and they'll share if they want to. It's yet another reason why the library is Ana's favorite place in the school.

Following Madame Pince's directions, Ana manages to make her way through a section of the school she's never traversed with relative ease, and luckily the Quidditch Coach is in the first room she checks.

"Coach Crowell?" She taps on the door politely to announce her presence.

He looks over and frowns when he sees her. "Ms. Vulchanova. What can I do for you?"

Ana knows that the coach doesn't have any particularly warm feelings towards her, due to her general indifference towards flying, which means he has less patience for anything she might want. So she keeps it simple.

"I believe I saw Evie Jones flying one of the school brooms on the far side of the castle, next to the library.

That gets his attention. "That infernal-" He cuts himself off, muttering angrily under his breath. "Thank you for informing me Ms. Vulchanova." His thanks is curt and distracted, but Ana doesn't blame him for it. After all, the last time Evie had been on a broom she had sent their roommate Amelia to the hospital wing.

Ana briefly debates following the coach to watch the situation unfold, but she very quickly nixes the idea and instead returns to the library, where she happily returns to burying herself in her schoolwork, naïvely thinking that that will be the end of it.

She's very quickly cured of this notion when not two hours later her peaceful bubble is shattered by the library doors flying open and an absolutely furious Evie Jones storming in.

"Where is she? I know you did this Ana!" She's shouting, oblivious as ever to the glares she's getting from the other occupants of the library.

"Miss Jones, the library is a quiet place to study. I must ask you to leave if-"

Evie ignores Madame Pince as she scans the library, clearly looking for Ana, who shrinks back behind the bookshelves, really not wanting to deal with it. She'll have to eventually of course, but she'd rather the confrontation not sully her favorite place in the school.

Madame Pince is clearly growing irritated, and finally she picks up her wand, and with a simple flick of the librarian's wrist Evie is forced back out of the room and the doors are firmly shut behind her.

Ana can admit that she lingers in the library a bit longer than she normally would have after that, waiting until her stomach seems to be actively attempting to consume itself before she exits the safety of Madame Pince's domain and makes her way to dinner.

"Hey, there you are!" Hannah waves her over cheerfully. "I thought we might have to send Eric to collect you again - you don't normally study this much when it's not exam time."

Ana grins wanly. "Got caught up with Transfiguration, you know how that is."

Hannah laughs and nods in understanding, shifting to make room for Ana at the table.

The second year glances uncertainly towards where the rest of her year usually sits, and she's relieved to see that Evie is absent. Hopefully the confrontation can be pushed to the next day. Or even better, perhaps Evie's inability to focus on anything for very long will cause her to forget entirely.

Those hopes go straight out the window when she returns to the dorm briefly that evening to collect her things for Astronomy.

"You! Hey, don't run off, we need to talk." Evie is still fuming when she grabs Ana's arm before the Bulgarian can escape back out of their dorms and to the library.

Ana sighs. "There's nothing to discuss Evie. You were flying illegally, I told Coach Crowell, as I'm expected to. It's school policy and especially as Ravenclaws we should be following the rules."

Evie scoffs angrily. "Well it's a stupid rule and I wasn't hurting anyone!"

"Yet." Ana can't help but point out.

Evie glares. "Look, I don't know what your problem is but you've kind of been a huge jerk to me since day one and I'm sick of it! I never did anything to you but you insist on being rude and sticking your nose in my business where it doesn't belong!"

It takes every ounce of Ana's self-restraint to not snap back, to not point out that Evie breaking school rules where Ana could see made it her business, that Evie had repeatedly ruined her projects and potions with her inability to follow rules, of the hypocrisy of saying that Ana was the one who couldn't stay out of other people's personal lives. But she manages to bite her tongue and substitutes an eye roll.

"Believe what you like Evie, I'm going to go study." She says primly and stalks past her roommate, who surprisingly lets her go.

Amelia is sitting in the common room, and she shoots Ana a nervous glance before hiding behind one of her textbooks. Ana ignores her other roommate and exits the Tower completely, heading back down for the library with a singular focus.

After that things are even more tense between Ana and Evie than normal, but Ana can't really bring herself to feel bad about it since Evie's new response to her is complete ignorance. Not having to worry about avoiding her accident-prone roommate in every class is honestly something of a relief, and dealing with the constant sense of someone glaring at her back is something she's willing to handle.

January bleeds into February, and the spring thaw starts earlier than it had the year before, much to everyone's consternation. Making their way too Herbology through the greying slush makes Ana's least favorite class that much more tiring to attend, though she continues to partner with Jemma Finnegan which makes it a bit less frustrating, as the Hufflepuff girl is quite adept at the class.

She also finally learns why Professor McGonagall had been a bit off for the entire year from Josie during a particularly lively lunch period.

"Her husband passed away over the summer." The sixth year explains. "It's why she's living at the castle again - she sold their house in Hogsmeade pretty soon after it happened. Terrible business really." She shakes her head sadly. "Married only three years, and after he'd pursued her for so long too."

Ana for once is somewhat intrigued by someone else's romantic life, but she doesn't press for any more information, not wanting to pry into her favorite teacher's personal business. She does, however, try to be extra polite and enthusiastic in her next Transfiguration class. It pays off when she earns twenty more points for Ravenclaw.

Valentine's day arrives, and honestly Ana is a bit irritated by the entire affair. Even the sixth years are annoying, with Josie and Horace fight-flirting in the way that they always do but it's somehow even worse, and Eric abandons the group completely to sit with Laurel at the Gryffindor table.

Only Hannah empathizes with her irritation over the holiday. The chubby blonde proposes they find the least festive corner of the library and study together until it's passed by, and Ana is only too happy to accept.

"So you're not a fan either." Hannah says with a laugh as they clear a corner table of bright pink confetti. "Think that will change when you get a boyfriend?"

Ana scoffs. "I don't intend to ever do so. Marriage and boys in general don't seem to be worth the effort if I'm honest."

Hannah laughs again. "I feel that, though you may change your mind when you're older. For now though, quiz me on Charms, would you? We have a quiz next week and I am in no way ready for it."

It's comfortable with Hannah, and they while away the holiday mostly unscathed by the flying cupids and random heart floating around the castle, though Hannah does get some glitter in her hair when they briefly venture into the Great Hall for lunch.

All in all Ana thinks she may have avoided the worst parts of the holiday - then she heads out to Astronomy and all her careful avoidance turn out to be for nothing when she catches a Gryffindor couple snogging in the corridor.

"There are children here." She snaps at them, bright red and doing her best to not make any eye contact whatsoever.

The girl starts giggling helplessly while the guy turns red and awkwardly starts trying to tuck his shirt back in. Ana presses on, still blushing and reaffirming her own disgust with the whole concept of couples.

That doesn't stop her Astronomy class from being focused around Venus that evening, only cementing her frustration with the situation. At least Shaun, who she decides to sit beside, doesn't say anything on the topic.

Evie however is quite loud about how she's hoping to get even more flowers and chocolates the next year - even though Ana is relatively certain that she hadn't received any in the first place this year. In fact, it seems nearly everyone else is buzzing with excitement from the holiday - even Amelia is smiling a bit despite Ana thinking her roommate would feel the same way about Valentine's day as she herself does.

She manages to survive the rest of the class, and when she collapses into her bed she's relieved to know that it's officially the fifteenth.

The match against Hufflepuff is coming up fast and practice is getting intense, even for the reserves team.

Connor always pushes them harder during game weeks in case something occurs during the game and one of them had to step in. It had paid off well in their last match when Fiona managed rather respectably as a backup Keeper, though she certainly wasn't as good as Kent and it was mostly thanks to the Chasers upping their game and the Beaters increasing their aggression that they'd managed to pull a narrow win in the end.

Their first practice in March is as vigorous as Myr had anticipated, but with almost half a year of practices under his belt now he's proud to say that he can keep up quite effectively with Laurel's ridiculously intense warm ups, and he even privately enjoys some of them, sometimes working out in the dorms with Charlie even though he technically doesn't have to.

Once they've finishes warm ups the main team takes off, leaving the reserves to begin their own practice.

Connor grins. "Alright troops, as you all know they switched up the order of competition last year, so we played Hufflepuff later than normal. I assume this means you all remember quite a bit about that game."

Everyone nods. How could they forget the final defeat that left them without the Quidditch Cup?

Connor nods in response. "Good. Then you'll remember that their primary play style is aggressive rather than defensive. Most people assume Hufflepuff would be as mild on the field as they are in everyday life but that is the exact opposite of the truth, and if you forget it you get situations like what happened last year."

"So we need to play more defensively?" Fiona pipes up, while Remi makes a face, clearly unhappy with the idea of playing in any way other than with intense aggression.

Connor nods shortly. "That's a big part of it. The tough part of defensive playing is that you have to find the balance between defending but still playing offensively enough to score points. It's why most professional teams focus more on their defense than their offense - the offensive aspect of things usually comes easier to most players."

Connor then proceeds to run them through a few new exercises that supposedly will improve their defensive plays.

If he's honest, Myr doesn't think the new games are giving him any sort of new angle to his playing, and he wonders aloud later during their water break if he may have already been playing defensively.

Connor laughs. "Beaters usually are the most defensive players on the team, though they can play aggressively as I'm sure you all remember from Gwenog Jones's showing last game." He looks over at Myr directly as he continues. "You, however, are particularly defensive. I may run you through some stuff to improve your aggression later, but for today we'll stick with the schedule."

Myr ducks his head in slight embarrassment when Fiona nudges him teasingly. "He's defensive in everything he does, you should have heard him trying to talk Evera down from her epic revenge quest last year."

Connor grins. "Well I'm glad he failed, that was a fantastic day. Nothing like a bunch of Slytherins unwittingly dressed up in red and gold." He takes a moment to savor the memory before snapping back to full focus. "Alright enough of that. Everyone on your brooms, we've got less than an hour to perfect everything."

Practice is absolutely exhausting, and Myr is embarrassed that he actually falls off his broom a few times, something that hasn't occurred in a few months. Fiona naturally teases him about it good-naturedly (and Remi a bit mockingly) but by the end of practice he's honestly feeling good, even if he knows he's going to be horridly sore in the morning. They pack everything back into the Quidditch shack, and Myr  and Fiona carry their brooms back up to the Gryffindor common room.

They've developed an after-practice ritual of sorts ever since coming back from winter break. As they'd both gotten new brooms for the holidays they were learning together the best ways to take care of them.

They're sitting on the floor of the common room in front of the fire, warming up after spending over an hour in the bitter cold March air, sharing a broom care kit that they had borrowed from Bill Weasley.

"You ready for the match this weekend?" Charlie joins them by the fire, vibrating in his excitement. "Hufflepuff won't know what hit them!"

Fiona smiles brightly. "You guys looked good at practice today, that's for sure!"

Charlie's grin turns conspiratorial. "And just between us, even if we lose Hufflepuff is going to get some payback for last year." With that he stands back up and cockily prances up the stairs.

Fiona glances over at Myr, who feels a distinct dread curling in his stomach.

"Just let it go. You know how he gets when he has a prank idea."

"Normally Aidan is involved at least somewhat to keep them from going too overboard or read up on what exactly they need to do. But I kind of doubt he'd be involved in a prank against Hufflepuff."

Fiona laughs a bit. "I didn't realize you trusted Aidan that much. Figured you'd find the whole group to be immature."

Myr scoffs slightly. "They are but at least Aidan is smart about it. I'll try talking to them tonight after dinner."

Fiona rolls her eyes but says nothing as she returns to caring for her Cleansweep.

As it turns out, Myr never gets a chance to talk Charlie and Brandon out of their hare-brained schemes, as he doesn't see them after dinner, or ever at dinner. This of course only increases his anxiety about the entire situation.

"Calm down Myr, at worst they'll get detention and lose a few house points, so what?" Evera is completely unconcerned by the absence of her two friends. "Ravenclaw is a million points ahead of all of us anyway, it's not really looking like a competition this year, and good-natured rivalry is a healthy part of the sport."

Myr is rather unimpressed by her blasé interpretation of what he finds to be a rather unfortunate state of affairs but there is logically little he can do without actually knowing what Charlie and Brandon are up to, or where they even are within the seemingly endless corridors of the Hogwarts castle. So he reluctantly sits back and sulkily eats his dinner while his housemates chatter on cheerfully around him.

The two troublemakers return from whatever escapade they had been on just before the prefects come by to tell everyone to go to sleep, and Myr pounces.

"Where have you two been?" Myr hisses as they scramble into their pyjamas and slip into bed.

Charlie just winks at him. "You'll see in the morning. Get some sleep, we have double Herbology with the snakes in the morning."

Myr does try, but his worries over what exactly his dorm mates had gotten up to in their absence keeps him tossing and turning for hours before he's finally able to enter into an extremely fitful sleep.

As it turns out, he needn't have worried at all. The next morning the Hufflepuffs get a surprise when their benches have all been hit with a spongify spell, resulting in a very bouncy breakfast for them.

"How did you even manage that? You weren't at dinner." Holly admires as she plays with her own breakfast.

Brandon and Charlie high five cheerfully. "We had a bit of help." Charlie admits.

"An insider if you would." Brandon adds helpfully.

Myr raises an eyebrow. "Aidan actually helped you with that? I thought he was the responsible one of you three."

Charlie laughs. "It was his idea actually! Brilliant, isn't it? Just the right mix of annoying and fun, and by skipping dinner we had an excuse to be in here late looking for food."

Evera and Holly continue pestering the two about the prank, much to Myr's chagrin.

"Don't encourage them, it'll only make things worse." He groans, more towards his food than the girls. He knows nothing is going to discourage Charlie and Brandon from causing him headache after headache, whether or not their housemates are for or against it.

Aidan joins them as the Gryffindor second years exit the Great Hall.

"That was awesome! It worked perfectly, we definitely need to log this one in our records." The red head grins, and Myr balks.

"You keep records?" He repeats, incredulous.

Aidan grins. "Of course! It's only good etiquette to keep track of one's results, to avoid any mistakes being repeated in the future."

"You could just not repeat things at all and avoid causing any irreversible mistakes in the first place." Myr points out, but he knows it's hopeless and they aren't listening anyway, chattering together about possible future applications for the spongify transfiguration.

Classes that day go by in a bit of a blur - Myr is keeping up well enough in his studies and Herbology is always rather mindless for him, even with the double block before lunch. He ends up partnered with Nabila, who's equally efficient with their task, as well as equally focused which Myr appreciates. He's not really up for talking.

Transfiguration is after lunch, and Myr is surprised how many of their Hufflepuff classmates stop by Brandon and Charlie's table to laugh about the breakfast prank. He still isn't thrilled by their trouble-making but at least no one seems to have been hurt physically or emotionally by the trio which Myr supposes is worth quite a bit more than he sometimes gives credit for.

Class passes quickly, if difficultly - Transfiguration is definitely his worst class - and Myr retires to the common room for a game of gobstones with Holly afterwards, uninterested in joining his classmates by the lake.

"You've been pouty all day." Holly observes as she knocks one of his gobstones out of the ring with practiced ease. "What's eating you?"

Myr shrugs as Holly lines up another shot. "Nothing much. I guess it just bugs me that Charlie and Brandon didn't get into any trouble over this morning. It will only encourage them to get worse in the future if they think they can get away with it."

Holly hums and hits his gobstone yet again. Myr braces before it spews the usual stench over his robes. "Maybe. This seems like more though. They've been pranking for almost two years now and this one was really pretty tame comparatively. Brandon putting itching powder in the Slytherin Quidditch team's clothes was much worse, if much funnier." She grins at the memory, and Myr can't help but do the same. It had been pretty funny, especially after what Gwenog Jones had done to Kent during the game.

He doesn't say anything for a while as he carefully lines up his own shot. It isn't until after he's hit one of Holly's gobstones twice that he replies. "Cadi hasn't written me in a while. She already didn't tell me about her new boyfriend, and I guess I'm worried that she's pulling away." He misses his next shot and gets another cloud of stench blown over him for it.

 Holly frowns and pauses the game with a quick flick of her wand. "Hey, I'm sure it's nothing. A girl's first relationship is crazy. You should have seen Laurel back in her fourth year when she was dating Bill. It was only two months but she was like another person. Don't worry, Cadi is just figuring things out."

Myr nods idly, not completely convinced but certainly feeling a bit better about the entire situation. After a moment, he blinks.

"Wait... your sister dated Bill? As in Bill Weasley?"

Holly giggles. "They were a mess. Wanna hear about it?"

The rest of the afternoon isn't quite as bad as the morning had been.

The next day is the match against Hufflepuff, and Lola Abbot is merciless in her taunting of Charlie as they play cat and mouse above the rest of the game. The commentator is quite amused by the banter as well, though he's rather blatantly rooting for Lola, being a Slytherin.

The game is shorter than most, lasting a little over an hour with no real dramatics to speak of, and Myr can admit he zones out a bit until the very end, which is as nail biting as the year before had been.

Charlie spots the snitch first, but Lola uses a dive to catch up with him, putting them neck in neck. Ultimately Charlie manages to snag the snitch almost directly out of Lola's palm, and her laughter is loud enough to be heard from the ground over fifty meters below.

"Good game." She acknowledges as the teams shake hands once everyone has dismounted. "You may just prove yourself a Seeker yet Weasley."

"I beat you today." Charlie protests. "I think that already make me a Seeker."

Lola just grins and moves on to shake Laurel's hand. Tyler grins apologetically at Charlie as they pass each other.

"She's like that, don't let it bug you."

Myr watches the whole exchange with no small amount of amusement. He can appreciate Lola's brand of snark, having seen his own mother utilize it to great effect against his Uncle in the past.

The rest of March passes rather blandly, and soon Easter break is approaching.

Myr of course signs up to go home, much to his classmates' protests.

"You'll see them in two months anyway, and it's only a week! Stay with us!" Evera whines pitifully as the group of Gryffindor second years walk up the Astronomy Tower for their Wednesday class.

"Yeah, if you go we'll think you're getting sick of us." Drake sighs. "Would you want to emotionally damage us like that?"

"Yes." Myr deadpans with no hesitation, earning laughs from most of the group.

"You're heartless Cadwallader." Holly teases. "But really, you should stay at least once. Easter break is so much fun since most people stay."

"All the more reason to leave." He counters. "I deal with you all enough when you're somewhat restricted by classes. I can't imagine how much worse it gets when you're allowed to run free all day."

Despite continued wheedling for the rest of the week he doesn't budge on his decision, and when it's time to head down to the station to go home there's a spring in his step. As much as he (usually) likes his classmates, he misses his family and nothing is going to stop him from seeing them whenever the opportunity presents itself.

And if his friends have a problem with it, well, that's their problem to deal with.

Easter, Franziska thinks, is significantly better than Christmas.

Sure, Christmas is a bigger affair and Hogwarts looks stunning all decked out in lights and tinsel, but very few people actually stay over the Winter break. During the one week they have for Easter almost everyone sticks around and she feels much less lonely.

Cian and Donaghan had both gone home for the break, but every other second year Hufflepuff is still in the dorms, and Franziska loves how full it is.

And of course, there's the best part of Easter - the egg hunt hosted by Professor Sprout and open to anyone who's interested. It's a school-wide, no-holds-barred competition that requires a mix of teamwork and magical prowess, and Franziska absolutely loves it.

"Frannie! You're on our team for the hunt this year, right?" Kiera wakes her up the day before the hunt will commence by leaping onto her bed and rather abruptly dragging her from a nice dream about a meadow and some bunnies that she can't quite remember, but which has left her with a lingering feeling of contentedness.

"Naturally, but who is 'our'?" She replies easily, rubbing at her eyes and halfheartedly swatting at the mass lying on top of her.

Kiera obligingly sits up, allowing Franziska to do the same. "Well all the second year Hufflepuffs, naturally, and then the second year Gryffindors want to team up as well! Well, some of them, Nabila says she has better things to do than run around school like a chicken with her head cut off."

Franziska raises an eyebrow. "I assume you're paraphrasing?" The Nabila she knew wouldn't ever use such a coarse comparison.

Kiera grins unabashedly. "Maybe. Anyway, are you in? The ABC club is already in the Gryffindor common room organizing an attack plan."

"ABC club?" Franziska thinks it sounds vaguely familiar, but in her still half-asleep state she can't figure out what exactly Kiera is on about.

The blonde girl grins. "Aidan-Brandon-Charlie, you really are tired if you're forgetting basic knowledge like that. Come on sleeping beauty, let's get some food in you so you'll actually be useful, yeah?"

Breakfast is a far less formal affair for Hufflepuffs during break, as the common room is almost directly next to the kitchens making it easy to sleep in and grab something from the house elves later. Kiera lets Franziska get dressed and then the two girls head over to pick up something to eat.

The house elves are as cheerful and accommodating as ever and the two girls end up armed with enough snacks to feed a small army, which they take with them up to the Gryffindor Tower.

"Food! Sweet, I knew bringing the badgers in on this was a good idea." Brandon grins as the two of them enter the common room. "Just set them down on the table and join the circle."

Franziska finds herself a spot between Leona and Henry Davies, who seems a bit more fidgety than he usually is, even with his seemingly endless well of energy.

"Okay, quick overview for the new arrivals." Charlie quickly takes charge of the meeting. "We're going to split into teams of three that we're going to try to balance by magical ability. Naturally myself, Brandon, and Aidan are going to be the team leaders since it was our idea."

Franziska spots Tonks rolling her eyes playfully at the comment. "And what if we'd like a lady in charge?" The metamorphagus questions.

Charlie frowns. "Well I suppose each group can have a female co-leader? That way it's fair."

Brandon pouts. "Aw, no. Don't give in to their demands Charlie!"

Holly laughs. "And who will the co-leaders be?" She asks, redirecting the conversation back on course.

Charlie frowns. "Huh, I'm not sure. I guess whoever wants to be?"

"I'm a co-leader!" Tonks shouts immediately, causing Kiera to burst out laughing.

"Can I volunteer too?" Holly asks hopefully.

Next to Franziska Henry is still fidgeting, and she looks over at him as the rest of the group continues debating who the best co-leaders would be.

"Hey, you feeling alright?" She asks, genuinely concerned. A mini flu epidemic had struck half the house earlier in the year and she wonders if he's coming down with something.

He grins at her. "I'm okay. Do you think we could invite some of the Ravenclaws to be in our team as well?"

Franziska smiles brightly. "I think that would be awesome! Let's tell the others and then you and I can go try to find them at the Ravenclaw Tower, okay?"

Henry perks up immediately and turns back to the still bickering group. "Hey! Hey guys Frannie and I are going to go try and recruit some Ravenclaws too!" He shouts over the chaos.

Brandon looks over first, though everyone eventually calms down enough to direct their attention to the two Hufflepuffs.

"That's a great idea you two! You don't mind if we place you in groups while you're away?" Charlie agrees easily.

Both Henry and Franziska give an affirmative to the question and then head out of the common room to hunt down more allies.

"Let's check the library first. That's a pretty standard Ravenclaw hangout." Henry decides as they descend the stairs to the fifth floor corridor.

Franziska agrees, but can't help teasing him a bit. "That's a little stereotypical of you. I thought you were better than that Henry."

He blushes. "Okay, so I admit there's a specific person I'm looking for and she's in the library a lot."

Franziska's curiosity is most definitely piqued by the comment but she decides to leave her friend be for the moment. It will be more fun to with the rest of the girls around for support anyway.

Henry makes a beeline for one of the back corners of the library as soon as the two of them step inside, leaving Franziska to linger awkwardly by the door. However she soon spots a familiar face and decides to do some recruiting of her own.

"Hey Fitz!" She smiles and pulls out a chair so she can sit next to him. "Do you have anyone to do the egg hunt with tomorrow?"

He perks up when he sees her, but deflates at her questions. "Oh, um, I don't participate in that. I'm allergic to pollen and stuff and there's a lot of it out around this time of the year."

Franziska's smile falls. "Oh, alright. Well, I hope you'll root for us!"

Henry seems to have struck out as well when he rejoins her at the entry of the library.

"Amelia says group things aren't her cup of tea." He reports sadly. "Said said she thinks Jerry and Shaun would be interested though."

Franziska nods, bouncing on the balls of her feet to try and reinvigorate herself despite their initial failures. "Well let's go find them then! We only have a day to prepare after all, every second counts!"

The duo take off back into the winding halls of Hogwarts towards the Ravenclaw Tower.

They manage to catch Laurel's boyfriend just as he comes out of the common room.

"Eric! Eric hi, you don't know me but I'm one of Holly's friends." Franziska quickly intercepts him, smiling as brightly as she can manage.

Eric looks surprised, but he smiles back after a moment. "Franziska Reinhardt right? Hufflepuff second year, spotless record." He grins at her look of surprise. "Part of being prefect is knowing everyone in the school, and the fact you're friends with my girlfriend's youngest sister doesn't hurt. Anyway what can I do for you?"

Henry ends up having to respond as Franziska recovers from the shock of being known by a prefect, something she thought only happened if you're a major troublemaker. "We're looking for Jerome Boot and Shaun Roberts. Are they in the Tower?"

Eric thinks for a moment, and then nods. "I think I saw them playing chess in the common room. Wait here, I'll go grab them for you."

It takes five minutes, but Eric successfully returns with not only Jerry and Shaun but also Evie Jones, who Franziska has mixed feelings about being there. Nonetheless they pitch their proposal to all three students and all three agree to join their team for the hunt.

The group of five head back to the Gryffindor Tower and are met with a surprising amount of efficiency.

Brandon greets them first. "Badger! You're my co-leader okay? Great. And hey, you got more recruits! Evie, no blowing anything up, I think the prefects would stop letting us bring our friends in here if you did."

Evie frowns despite Brandon's tone clearly being joking. "I won't. Not intentionally."

"Maybe just don't touch anything and we should be good. You can be on my and Holly's team." Charlie quickly steps in before any feathers can be ruffled. Evie looks like she's going to say something, but then nods and pulls on a smile.

"Sounds like fun! What's the game plan?"

They spend the rest of the afternoon and most of the evening making sure everyone is on the same page for maximum efficiency. Franziska has to admit she really enjoys being a co-leader for one of the teams as she has a bit more say in how things are going to be handled and she vetoes several suggestions that break school rules.

She's certain she won't be able to sleep a wink thanks to the excitement coursing through her once they finally break for the night but she actually manages to fall asleep rather quickly.

They decide to have breakfast with their teams, so Franziska heads over to the Gryffindor table to sit next to Brandon. They're joined by Shaun, Tyler, Leona, and Remi, and they go over their strategy quietly as they eat.

"Everyone is clear on the plan then?" Brandon triple checks, his eyes gleaming in the same way they do whenever he's about to pull a prank.

Once everyone has given the affirmative they focus on eating quickly, wanting to be able to take off as soon as the headmaster announces the start of the hunt.

Soon enough Dumbledore rises, his eyes twinkling behind his half-moon spectacles.

"Now then, I know you're all eager to get started so I won't dally. Let the egg hunt begin!"

Brandon is immediately out of his seat, and the rest of the second years aren't far behind, charging for the doors in their groups.

Franziska nearly trips as they head for the courtyard, but Brandon grabs her hand to steady her and they race the rest of the way with their fingers still locked together.

Tyler and Remi summon their brooms once they reach the southern courtyard and take off to examine the roof for any eggs. Shaun, and incredibly skilled transfiguration student, begin casting Revelio on everything in sight while Leona stands guard to warn if any competitors are on their way.

Meanwhile Franziska and Brandon do their best to hunt the Muggle way, using the occasional charm to lift things that are just a bit too heavy. By the two hour mark they've collected almost twenty eggs, which are stored in a specially enlarged bag hanging from Leona's waist, courtesy of her sister Sarah.

"Alright team, pull in. Let's move to our next section." Brandon waves Shaun and Leona over, and the latter shouts for Tyler and Remi to come down and join them. They trek over to the edge of the Forbidden forest, waving to Charlie and Holly's group as they pass them exploring the Quidditch pitch along with several older students.

With less flying required for this part Tyler stays on the ground with Franziska and Brandon and helps them with the charms while Remi searches the treetops.

After about thirty minutes Franziska is struck with an idea.

"Hey Brandon, I'm going to ask Hagrid for some tea. There might be an egg inside his hut." She calls to her co-leader who grins and flashes her a thumbs up before returning to digging up an egg that Shaun had found earlier.

Flicking a braid over her shoulder, Franziska trots over to the groundskeeper's squat little home by the forest. She does find an egg in his garden, which she carefully puts into the pockets of her robe before knocking on the giant wooden door.

When Franziska had first seen Hagrid as a first year she'd been rather terrified of the hulking giant of a man. Now though she knows he's really a harmless sweetheart.

Her knock is greeted by a loud barking that causes her to jump back a solid foot in surprise.

Hagrid opens the door and laughs at her startled expression. "Sorry about tha' lass, Fang's still gettin' settled. You lookin' for an egg I take it?"

She blinks at the wolfhound puppy peeking out from between Hagrid's feet. "I... yes, I was. When did you get a puppy Hagrid?"

The groundskeepers gives a long, rumbling laugh. "Fang 'ere is gonna help me with me duties! 'e's just a pup now but in a few years he'll be scarin' off the toughest forest creatures!" He pats the puppy's head affectionately, and Franziska grins.

"He's really cute. I'll have to come visit more often!" She says. "But um, about that egg?"

Hagrid laughs again and lets Franziska play with Fang in the doorway while he fetches an entire handful of eggs for her, to her absolute delight.

"Oh this is wonderful! Thank you so much! I'll come visit tomorrow at tea time and tell you how we did in the competition!" She promises before rushing back to her group with her treasures.

When the competition wraps up six hours later Leona's bag is completely full, as are most of their pockets. They'd collected fifty-one eggs, which was more than either of the other two teams had. However they still loose out by seven eggs to one of the sixth year teams, much to everyone's chagrin.

They still celebrate in the Gryffindor common room that night however, and it's honestly a lot of fun, even if Evie does accidentally set one of the chairs on fire and get herself ejected from the Tower by one of the prefects.

The Hufflepuffs return to their common room well after curfew, but they're accompanied by the seventh year Gryffindor prefects so they don't lose any House points, much to Franziska's relief.

The next day she makes good on her promise and takes tea with Hagrid in his cozy little hut, playing with Fang and regaling the groundskeeper with tales of their planning and how close they'd come to winning the whole thing. She eventually branches off into other stories about things her classmates have gotten up to, from teaching her Christmas crew how to play football to the endless and often frustrating antics of the ABC club.

She ends up leaving hours later with another promise to take tea with him soon, and she's already looking forward to it.

The rest of break is spent gorging herself on chocolate with her friends and playing chess and gobstones.

All in all, she definitely prefers Easter to Christmas.

 

And the buffer proved a pipe dream. Ah well, I'll keep trying now that I'm officially home for the summer. Anyway, hope everyone is having a good summer so far (or just a good day if you live on the other half of the world and are starting winter!) As with the rest of second year this ended up being just more cute filler for the kids. I've got a lot more meat planned for next year, which is coming up soon! Just one more chapter for second year and then we'll be heading into their third! Time sure does fly ^^

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!