Chapter Twenty

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Pressure Rising

The ride back to school is quiet, as Ana ends up in a car by herself. She takes the time to finish the Grimm anthology and read ahead in most of her textbooks. She finds her mind wandering to her very first ride on the Hogwarts Express, and meeting Alasdair for the first time.

She wonders idly if she'd been sorted into Slytherin if he'd still be in the car with her today.

She shakes off the thoughts, as frankly they're not particularly useful. She's content in Ravenclaw and is even starting to make other friends. And she does still talk with Alasdair during the breaks, even if it's mostly during meals.

She's thankful to be distracted from her own musings as the train arrives at Hogsmeade station. She quickly replaces her books in her trunk before departing the train and heading for the carriages with the rest of the returning students.

"Ana! Hey, wait up!" Aidan hurries up to her from the crush of bodies, grinning broadly. "Wow you move fast. How was your break? I loved the gift by the way, my parents got a kick out of it too. I hope you enjoyed the Grimm tales?"

Ana smiles politely in return. "I did. I actually just finished the full anthology on the ride over, it's truly fascinating the things people can dream up."

Aidan perks up. "I was actually curious as to how many of the stories have roots in the magical world. Did you recognize any of them?"

Ana had figured as much - Aidan is the sort to try and learn something from every situation, even when the situation is supposed to simply be a Christmas gift.

"You would have been an excellent Ravenclaw." She observes dryly, and Aidan laughs.

"Maybe, but I wouldn't trade Hufflepuff for the world." He replies cheerfully. "So? Any links?"

Ana does indulge him, and they end up swapping childhood fairy tales for most of the short ride to Hogwarts.

Aidan splits off from her as they approach the Great Hall, calling cheerfully that he'd see her in Arithmancy the next morning. Ana nods noncommittally despite knowing that she will sit next to him in class. She doesn't know anyone else in the class after all.

She takes the open seat next to Sarah, who says a quick greeting before diving back into an ongoing debate with Hannah on what sounds like the viability of using shooting stars as predictive omens.

Ana, not being far enough into divination to fully understand the concepts being tossed between the two women turns instead across the table to where Eric is sitting awkwardly between Horace and Josie, who are resolutely ignoring each other.

Ana raises an eyebrow at the sight, but decides not to comment, not being nearly invested enough in Horace and Josie's relationship to care that it seems to be having trouble.

"Eric, you were raised as a Muggle." She says instead, and he gives a startled laugh before nodding.

"Yeah, why do you mention it?"

Ana is happy to find that Eric grew up with different fables than Aidan, as the latter had grown up mostly on Irish tales and Eric is from further inland. Eric also knows a bit more about how his childhood stories fit into actual wizarding history, and the two of them discuss the overlaps for the entirety of the return Feast, eventually roping Hannah and Sarah in as well, though Horace and Josie remain quiet.

Ana settles back into her bunk that night quite content. She and Amelia exchanged pleasantries when they first got in but Evie is apparently still ignoring her which is perfectly fine with Ana. She lets Dracula stretch his legs for a bit as she goes over her Arithmancy homework before heading to sleep.

The next morning she hurries to dress and get to the Great Hall, eager to see her midterm grades. While she's certain she's held her spot as top of her class, it's always rather nerve-wracking to wait for the confirmation.

Josie is already seated at the Ravenclaw table, and Ana uncertainly takes the spot across from the other girl.

"Good morning." She greets politely, and Josie smiles.

"Hey Ana." Josie grins wryly. "Never date in school."

Ana nods. "Wasn't planning to." She replies honestly. Then, reluctantly: "You and Horace not work out?"

Josie snorts. "Of course not. We never were going to, this was a temporary thing from the start and he knew that." She shakes her head. "I won't bore you and I don't much want to discuss it. Tell me about your break. I hear you've discovered the wonders of Muggle literature?"

Ana is happy to talk a bit more about the Grimm anthology, and Josie offers to let her borrow a copy of Hans Christian Anderson stories. Ana hasn't heard the name before but Josie assures her that it has a lot more links to magic culture than the Grimm tales do.

They're joined by the rest of the seventh year class shortly after, and after them comes Professor Flitwick with the midterm exam results.

Ana looks over her column of Os proudly as the seventh years compare results and either celebrate or groan at the amount of studying they'll have to do to pass their year-end NEWTs.

Sarah glances over at her sheet and grins. "Congrats on the perfect grades again Ana." She says, and Josie groans.

"You got all Os didn't you?" She whines pitifully. "You have to help me study for Transfiguration then, best friend code says so."

Ana tilts her head slightly as Sarah bursts out laughing, rather confused and assuming she's missing yet another inside joke. She chooses not to ask, instead focusing on finishing her meal and running arithmancy equations in her head.

Sliding back into the rhythm of classwork is quite easy for Ana and she soon finds herself in a steady routine of classes and studying, rotating between sitting alone in her corner of the library and occasionally working with Aidan or Amelia, who she's been speaking with more often.

Amelia is far from the top of the class, but she's happy to share notes taken during Care of Magical Creatures in exchange for Arithmancy help and Ana sees it as a fair enough trade. Aidan's notes on the subject are often unreadable so having a second set to study from is more than welcome.

Ana is surprised to find that once Amelia is done being shy she's actually pleasant company to keep around. She recognizes the need for silence during studying and doesn't feel a need to bother with small talk, two things Ana can appreciate in a person.

And so she finds herself unexpectedly making another friend her age, much to Hannah's excitement.

"I feel way better about graduating knowing you're not going to be alone next year." The chubby blonde admits one day when she and Ana are sharing an empty classroom to practice a few practical charms.

Ana sniffs. "You don't need to worry about me regardless." She points out, flicking her wand in hopes it will light up without the Lumos incantation being needed. She's been attempting more wordless magic in recent weeks and while she's had no success yet she's confident that she'll get there before the end of the year. "I'm top of the class and well on my way to graduating with honors and multiple OWLs and NEWTs. There's nothing to worry about."

Hannah frowns faintly. "Everyone needs friends Ana. Humans are social creatures after all." She points out, looking up from her wand. "You can't tell me first year didn't get a bit better after you met Eric?"

Ana hesitates, but concedes the point. "I'll admit things are more bearable with people around, but I still think with or without acquaintances in my year I would have been fine." She says briskly, and Hannah laughs softly and turns back to her charms.

"Alright then. Still, I'm glad you have other friends. Amelia seems like a sweet girl - possible Prefect material according to Sarah."

Ana doesn't react. "She can have Prefect if she likes, I honestly don't think having the title on my resumé would make up for having to break up couples after curfew for three years."

Hannah gives a proper laugh at that and lets the conversation drop.

Ana finds that most of her seventh year friends are happy with her increasing socialization, and while she still doesn't really understand why they'd been worried, she's glad that they aren't anymore. She even increases the amount of time she's spending with Aidan and Amelia just to prove a point.

Things get a little shaky when she tries to introduce the two however. Apparently putting Amelia's shyness has only dissapated with Ana, as she goes dead quiet when Aidan joins them on top of the Astronomy Tower one Friday afternoon.

Amelia's eyes widen when the Hufflepuff walks in, and she looks over at Ana with a mix of confusion, nerves, and betrayal warring in her eyes. Ana has always thought Amelia was a bit more expressive than she should be most of the time, but right now it's appreciated as Ana hadn't foreseen this reaction to inviting Aidan to study with them.

Aidan doesn't see the look, or perhaps he simply ignores it, as he sits next to Ana with a broad grin and pulls out his Arithmancy textbook. "Alright, this is really nice! I see why you girls study up here, it's quite peaceful."

Ana gives a vague reply, and Amelia says nothing, staring at her notes and fidgeting continuously.

Ana huffs irritably. They don't have time for this - she expects to get through most of the week's Arithmancy material in the next hour and that won't happen if Amelia is refusing to speak. "Amelia, this is Aidan, he's second in the class and I believe you should know him from Care of Magical Creatures as well. Aidan, this is Amelia, my roommate. She's apparently forgotten how to speak."

Aidan laughs slightly. "No worries, I get that." He smiles warmly at Amelia. "You're friends with Henry right?"

Amelia shrugs noncommittally, but at least she's responding. Ana takes the win and flips open her textbook.

"Alright, I wanted to go over Merlin's Proof, that was complicated and therefore almost certain to be on the final exam."

They go a bit over Ana's hour deadline, but they accomplish all that she had wanted to, and she excuses herself from the Tower once they're done, citing a tutoring session before leaving the two alone. Perhaps they'll become friends and she won't have to deal with being the middle man again next time she wants to study with them both.

Marcus Flint is waiting for her in the library, his head bowed awkwardly and his left foot kicking repeatedly against the table leg.

Ana shoots him a look that has his feet falling still as she sits down across from him, pulling out some quills and parchment and laying them out over the table.

"Alright Marcus, let's see your notes from this week."

As always the session is equivalent to smacking her head against a brick wall for two hours. She honestly wonders most days if the only reason Marcus is failing school is because he's decided to do so. Ana spends as much time trying to force him to attempt problems as she does actually helping him make those attempts.

Finally the session is over, and thankfully they have gotten somewhere today.

"Alright, there. You've shown improvement." She sighs. "I'll see you same time next week."

She watches her pupil leave and allows herself one frustrated sigh before pulling out her own work.

She's so focused on finding the right page in her Transfiguration textbook that she misses the person sitting next to her until he speaks.

"You should tell him about the Quidditch restrictions."

Ana is ashamed to admits she jumps. She quickly composes herself and turns to look at the newcomer. "Alasdair, good to see you." She greets dryly.

He nods at her distantly. "Quidditch. Marcus is really determined to make the team, but there are academic restrictions. You should look them up and tell him about them. Might encourage him to try a bit harder." He points out mildly.

Ana frowns. It's a good idea, but she's a bit confused as to what exactly Alasdair is doing sitting next to her in the middle of the library after months of ignoring her during school hours.

"I'll do that." She finally responds. "Thanks for telling me." She adds after a beat that's perhaps a hair longer than it should be.

Alasdair shrugs and stands. "You looked frustrated." He replies before heading to a different table, where he's greeted by a few confused Slytherins.

Ana stares after him for a long moment before packing up her things and making her way across the castle and out to the grounds.

She finds Coach Crowell in the broom shed, organizing things after a first year Flying class. She waits patiently for him to finish, clearing just before he turns so as to not startle him.

"What?" The old coach frowns at her, but she meets his eye with no nervousness.

"What are the academic restrictions on Quidditch?" She questions, and is almost amused by the surprise that momentarily flashes across his usually expressionless features.

He huffs. "What's it to you? I remember you, you're no player."

Ana tilts her head in acknowledgement. "I have no strong inclinations towards flying, no." She admits. "But my pupil does, and he's struggling in his classes. I wanted to know the academic requirements he'd need to fulfill to make the team next year, as a sort of motivation for him."

Coach Crowell eyes her critically before nodding. "He wouldn't be the first using Quidditch as the fire under his for schoolwork. Look, I'm not sure what or if there will be continued restrictions next year. I'm retiring and the new Coach can do as she pleases on that front. For me though, I require all classes be passed in order to be eligible for the team."

Ana is surprised at the rigidity of the requirements, but she's glad for them.

"Thank you for telling me. Hopefully my student will do better once he's made aware of this." She nods politely and then leaves the Coach to his organizing.

Hopefully this will be enough to get Marcus to start caring a bit more about his schoolwork. If she can manage that it will be at least one thing taken off of her ever growing list of responsibilities.

Watching Lenox play Quidditch is almost as good as doing it herself, Rajani thinks as she watches her friend sweep past the Hufflepuff Seeker to grab Slytherin's second crushing victory of the season.

She grins up at him as he waves the snitch towards the reserves bench, and she joins the team as they head back into the locker rooms afterwards.

"Great job guys!" Mayra looks absolutely breathless, her hair a tangled mess as she pulls it out of the ponytail she throws it into for games. "That's two for two and we're firmly in the lead for the Cup!"

Rajani tunes out as the Captain starts giving individual reviews and makes her way over to the women's section of the change room to get out of her uniform and back into her school robes. She's just finishing when the female players of the team enter, and Mayra gives her a warm smile as Rajani exits the lockers altogether.

"Great showing out there." Ed Poole greets her cheerfully. He's taken to waiting outside the lockers after every practice and walking her to dinner, something she's not adverse to. He always has interesting insights into the game and she's happy to walk and talk.

"I didn't do anything, but I appreciate the credit." She grins back cheekily, and he laughs, elbowing her lightly.

"Hush you. That friend of yours is an absolute beast on the broom though. I somehow forget between games given he doesn't do much during practices, but he completely out-flew Lola and she's not exactly unimpressive. I'd say the best play this game went to Mayra though, she's really going all out in her last year."

Rajani nods. "Well Slytherin hasn't gotten the Quidditch Cup since her first year on the team, right? It makes sense she'd want a win before she leaves."

Ed hums in agreement. "She doesn't need it though. Rumor says she got another offer, this one from Wimbourne. The Slytherin team's stats and success rate have nearly tripled since she became Captain - that speaks to people more than wins do. I say whichever team she picks, she's off reserves within the year. Can't bench skill like hers for long."

They discuss Quidditch for a few more minutes before Ed steers the conversation around to the upcoming Hogsmeade trip.

"You're going of course?" He prompts, and Rajani shrugs.

"Maybe. Queenie and Eugene are making a date of it of course, and I'm not sure Nia or Els want to go. Clary said she's going to try and go with another friend if she's available, and I'm pretty sure Finn is going with Cad and Alasdair and those two don't exactly like me at the moment. I might ask Lenox if he's going, but if he's not interested I'll probably stay in the castle." She answers honestly. "I don't fancy going alone."

Ed nods in understanding. "Well you can come with me and my friends if you like. We're not doing anything dramatic, just walking around a bit, but you're welcome to join."

Rajani doesn't formally know most of Ed's friends, but she's seen them around and knows they're decent people, if a little coarse for her usual taste. "I may take you up on that. Let me check with Clary and Lenox first though, I wouldn't want to intrude if I have other options."

Ed grins. "Cool. Well, I guess this is where I let you go join your friends." He bows at the entrance to the Great Hall, and Rajani stifles a laugh.

"You're ridiculous." She informs him primly. "I'll tell you soon about Hogsmeade." She adds as she walks towards where she can see Queenie and Eugene already starting in on their dinner.

Queenie flashes her a mischievous smile as she approaches, and Rajani knows immediately she's going to be grilled about her walk over with Ed.

"We're still just friends. He offered that I could hang out with his friend group this weekend if I didn't have anyone else to go to Hogsmeade with." She preemptively announces, and Queenie's grin drops fractionally.

"It's still an invite to Hogsmeade." She offers after a moment. "Though I do think there's someone who wouldn't mind you asking him to go!" She adds cheekily.

Rajani rolls her eyes. "I'm going to ask Lenox when he gets here, yes. Just as friends, I don't think I'm much ready for relationships right now. I'm barely getting through school without the extra distraction." She adds pointedly, and Queenie holds up her hands in surrender.

"Fine, but when your schedule clears up I demand double dates." She declares, and Rajani laughs and agrees, starting to pile food onto her plate, ignoring the slight twinge that comes from the suggestion that she'll have more time in the future - as if she'll have fewer classes to deal with.

She knows it wasn't intended that way, so she lets it pass.

The rest of the Quidditch team arrives not long after, and Rajani quickly waves Lenox over.

"Amazing job today! You made Hufflepuff look completely incompetent." Queenie raises her glass of water in a toast, which Eugene is quick to follow much to Rajani's amusement.

"You were awesome." She agrees with a grin over at Lenox, who smiles bashfully back. Her new charm - a Fanged Frisbee in honor of the prank war - lays heavy on her wrist and she rubs it lightly as Lenox sits next to her.

"Thanks. It was a team effort though, and I'd say Mayra was the MVP."

Rajani nods. "Ed agrees, but you really are a beast out there. I've heard Ravenclaw's Seeker isn't even planning to try, though considering how poorly they've been playing this year I'm not sure it would really make a difference." She adds as an afterthought.

Lenox frowns at the mention of Ed, as he always does. "Well I look forward to an easy final game then." He replies smoothly, and Rajani frowns slightly, unsure of what made his good cheer drop away.

So she moves on. "Any way I was wondering if you already had plans for Hogsmeade next weekend? I can't seem to find anyone willing to go with me but I think it would be rather boring to go alone." She smiles at him hopefully, and he flushes faintly.

"I, um, sure." He agrees quickly. "I didn't have any plans, so yeah, I could go with you."

"Great!" Queenie claps her hands together ecstatically, and then laughs awkwardly when the other three look at her in confusion. "I'm glad you found someone to go with Raj!" She quickly clarifies, but Rajani knows there's more to it, and she's determined to figure it out.

She doesn't get a chance to for a while though, as schoolwork is piling up and she's continuing to struggle to keep up. Queenie can only help so much, and even with the rest of their classmates pitching in as well Rajani is slowly starting to accept that she may have to figure out how to tell her parents that she's dropping a class.

Her saving grace comes in a very unexpected form when Ed drops onto the couch next to her on a quiet Wednesday afternoon and scares her half to death, causing her to scatter her notes across the common room floor.

"So hey, Hogsmeade?" He prompts with the biggest -eating grin Rajani has ever seen. She throws some of her notes at his face in response.

"Help me pick these up." She instructs briskly, and he laughs but complies. Once everything is reorganized he tilts his head and sits on the couch again.

"So. Hogsmeade?"

She shakes her head. "Lenox and I are going, and I think Clary is coming too. Didn't work out with her other friend."

Ed shrugs. "Well alright. Maybe next time then, I require more pranking assistance and my friends are going to be my next targets so I can't exactly get them to help."

Now Rajani's interest is piqued. "Well you should have said that before. I can talk to Els for you if you want, she's a big fan of pranks."

Ed is already shaking his head. "She only targets other Houses, didn't you notice?" And Rajani hadn't but now that it's been pointed out she realizes he's correct.

"Huh, and here I thought she hated us." She jokes lightly. "Well, next trip then, I promise. For now I have to study - Ancient Runes is kicking my rear."

"You need to swear more, and also your note system is crap for studying in that class." Ed informs her, flipping over so his head is hanging off the side of the couch, and Rajani can't help laughing this time.

"You are ridiculous." She grins, and he smiles in return.

"So you've said. You still seem to enjoy my company though, so really that says more about you." He teases and she rolls her eyes, feeling her cheeks heating slightly but ignoring that in favor of responding to the second half of his sentence.

"So what did you mean about my notes?"

Ed turns out to have some surprisingly helpful advice on how to organize her notes for her trouble class - something she would never have considered as her process works perfectly for the rest of school. However, she does note a marked improvement in her class work even in the next couple days, and so when she and Lenox head for Hogsmeade she's determined to get Ed something to say thank you.

She just has no clue what would be appropriate. What sort of gift says 'thanks for helping me not completely disappoint my parents by being the first Misra in generations to fail a class'?

She muses on this as she and Lenox follow the crowd of students walking to Hogsmeade.

For his part Lenox isn't very helpful with her predicament. He notes that it's really Ed's job to help out the younger students so Rajani doesn't have to get him anything.

He's right of course, but Ed has been a friend since before he'd become prefect and Rajani thinks that she ought to treat him as such. And she hadn't gotten him a Christmas gift, so she feels she owes him for that as well.

So when they reach Hogsmeade she keeps an eye out for anything that might fit the bill.

It's a fun trip overall. She and Lenox get lunch at the Three Broomsticks and waste nearly all of their allowances on goodies from Honeydukes. She also purchases a few trick wands from Zonko's for Ed, carefully not mentioning this to Lenox as they check out.

"I admit I don't fully understand the appeal of pranks." He observes as they head back towards the castle, scarves pulled tight against the light wind that's picked up over the course of the afternoon. "They seem rather juvenile and unnecessary to me."

Rajani shrugs. "They can be fun among friends. The prank war was a bit much, I can admit to that." She smiles at the memory of the chaotic month at the start of the school year, thankful that her scarf is hiding it. "But as long as everyone is laughing, pranks are rather enjoyable. A good way to let off steam."

Lenox hums. "I suppose so, though that would mean labeling last year's war as having anything to do with pranks incorrect, wouldn't it? Very few of the targets found the pranks to be amusing."

Rajani tilts her head in acknowledgement. She'd had plenty of fun of course, but by her own definition Lenox isn't wrong.

"Regardless, I doubt anything like that could happen again any time soon. The teachers are more than prepared for it now, especially knowing how far some people are willing to go."

"It's something to mark the year by anyway." Lenox states, and Rajani laughs and twists her left hand, attempting to reach her bracelet and its new charm despite knowing her fingers aren't long enough to make contact. "Next year will have a hard time topping that."

Rajani nods. "True enough. Though I'd imagine some of the first years could have done without something so... exciting just at the start of the year. Imagine if our first year had been so hectic?"

Lenox shakes his head. "I believe I wouldn't have enjoyed my time here half so much personally." He responds distastefully.

Rajani nods. "I think I'm inclined to agree with you there. First year was quite overwhelming enough without the added stress the prank war would have brought on. Especially as first years don't know enough magic to really get involved."

"As you did?" Lenox responds wryly, and Rajani shrugs, unrepentant.

"It was only fair really. And as they say, if you can't beat them, join them."

Lenox raises an eyebrow. "Who says that? I've certainly never heard the saying."

Rajani frowns and thinks for a moment. "I believe Ed said it when he and Els were convincing me to help them with the wet fur prank." She concludes after a moment. "It must be a Muggle saying then. He is half-blood after all, I'd imagine he knows something about Muggle culture."

Though she still can't see his full face, Rajani can tell Lenox is frowning from the way his forehead creases. "Perhaps, but I'm half-blood as well." He points out. "And I've never heard of it."

"You were raised magical though." Rajani counters lightly, not wanting to argue. "Ed says his mother is a Muggleborn and they spend holidays with her family. He'd naturally have more exposure."

Lenox doesn't reply, so Rajani considers the topic closed. "Anyway, speaking of Muggles, how are you doing on the essay for next week? I'm stuck at ten inches and Professor Quirrel wants a foot. I'm just not sure how much there really is to say about football."

It does the trick, and the two keep up a steady conversation about school for the rest of the walk back. They're sitting in the common room, comparing Muggle Study essays, when the rest of their friends return from the trip.

"Hey! You came back early." Queenie observes as she falls onto the couch next to Rajani. Eugene quickly sits beside his fiancée, his cheeks still red from the winter air. "Is that the Muggle Study essay? Mind is nearly two feet, do you think Professor Quirrel will mind? I did some extra reading in the library, Muggle sports are really quite odd don't you think?"

Rajani recognizes that her friend is on a post-date high, meaning the day went well. She smiles softly and lets Queenie ramble, sharing and amused look with Lenox as she does.

They finish their essays - Queenie adds another three inches to hers and her handwriting is just as small and neat as Rajani's is and really Raj doesn't know how her friend does it - and spend dinner with the rest of their classmates, minus Cadfael and Alasdair who sit on the other end of the table, like always.

All in all, despite how exhausting life has become, Rajani thinks the day has been a pretty good one, all things considered.

They win against Ravenclaw, and thank goodness for that or Myr thinks Laurel might actually have changed the team lineup right at the end of the season.

It's a closer game than any of them would have liked, though, and Laurel gives them a pretty brutal dressing down afterwards before letting them hit the showers. Even Remi stays quiet this time, for once reading the mood and responding properly.

It's not exactly the best atmosphere for Myr's last night in the castle before heading home for Easter, but at least it is a win. He can't imagine how much worse things would be if they'd lost.

Normally he's rather excited around this time of year, packing up his things and hunting for Owen around the castle to head home for an entire week. But this year there's some trepidation mixed into his excitement. He knows that he has to talk to his mother and Uncle about getting a new wand over the summer.

He hadn't said anything over the winter break, telling himself he'd wait to see what his midterm grades looked like before doing anything as expensive as ask for a new wand. It was a flimsy excuse but it meant the three weeks spent back home were less daunting.

Now that his grades are back - and bordering on failure - he knows he has to confront the problem head on. Not that knowing is going to make it any easier.

Holly is as ever a huge advocate, and he's subjected to several dissertations on the usefulness of a properly selected wand and is even given a few suggestions for which ones to try first when he gets his new wand over the summer. Holly is a big fan of Willow or Larch wood as his 'best match', though she also says he could be a Hazel. Myr doesn't understand most of it, but he smiles and nods anyway. She is giving him a discount after all - it's the least he can do.

Laurel has offered some more solid advice on the matter, as has Willow who cornered him in a hallway two days before Easter break began and handed him a list of reasons he needs to be present when selecting a wand.

The list, he thinks, is the most useful item he has at the moment, as it puts things in terms even his Muggle mother will understand. He once again regrets thinking that Willow was the stuck up Kiddell sibling for two years.

The train ride home is tense and quiet, as he's still one of the only students to actually go home during the break. He takes the time to go over Willow's list and attempt to study, though he gives up on that endeavor rather quickly, too nervous to properly focus on his notes.

Ultimately he just lets Owen out of his carrier and plays with him for the majority of the ride. His mother is meeting him at King's Cross for a change, as Cadi is checking out a few Universities in the city and they've decided to take the holiday to explore London.

Cadi is with Aster when Myr arrives, and she instantly launches into a rant about LSE - the school she'd visited that day - and how amazing it is.

Aster laughs brightly. "I think Cadi has found her dream school." She tells Myr with a smile. "She may be the one picking you up from school in the future, especially if she lives off campus."

Myr thinks that actually sounds like fun - crashing with his sister for a few days before going home. Plus the city is quite nice, when it's not raining.

Cadi eventually finishes reciting her love letter to LSE and asks Myr how his schooling is going. He responds by making a face that has Cadi laughing and his mother looking concerned.

Myr smiles reassuringly at his mother. "It's fine, my grades are just not where I'd like them to be." He explains quickly. "I actually wanted to talk to both you and Uncle Cyril about it though. Is he going to be around this week?" A small part of him hopes the answer is no, but he knows that he'd rather have the conversation now rather than have to put it off again until the summer.

To his (mild) relief, his mother nods. "He's going to be down sometime tomorrow afternoon, depending on the trains. Are you sure there's nothing I can help with in the meantime?"

Myr shakes his head. "Honestly I just want to relax and not think about school for a while. The season has been rough and classes have been hard - can we just go to museums and eat some proper fish and chips? Goodness knows they don't make them very well at school."

Cadi laughs again, and Myr is quite pleased to see her so upbeat. He hadn't gotten to speak with her much during the winter holidays, as she'd been with her boyfriend Dylan for a lot of them, and when she had been around she'd been rather moody.

The family of three takes dinner at a small pub and Cadi happily fills Myr in on her senior project, which she'll be formally starting over the summer but she's already planned out almost entirely. Myr is happy to sit and listen quietly, not completely understanding everything Cadi is saying but he's happy to see her so enthused.

Aster however wants to hear from her youngest. "So Myr, you mentioned the season is going poorly?" She prompts gently, and Myr mentally sighs, knowing he'll have to talk if he wants his mom to not pry later.

"Yeah, Laurel knew going in that this year's team was going to be weaker, but knowing something and actually experiencing it are two pretty different things." He shrugs. "We've lost one, won one, but the loss was to Mayra's team - I've mentioned her, she and Laurel have a pretty heated rivalry on the field." He's careful to keep his terminology vague so that if anyone overhears them they could mistakenly think they're talking about football instead. "I'm glad I'm on the team this year though. Laurel is graduating and I'm learning a lot from her. I doubt whoever takes her place is going to be half as good, no offense to the current reserves team." He has a pretty good idea who the new Beater will be, and as much as he enjoys playing with Fiona she's definitely not Laurel.

"Well you've got what, four more years on the team? It's bound to improve in that time." His mother smiles sympathetically.

Myr shrugs. "I could be switched out if someone better comes along in the future." He points out. "And a lot of the older students drop out to focus on school in fifth and seventh year, since those are the major exam years. If my grades don't improve I'll probably be doing that as well."

Aster frowns but doesn't comment. Cadi isn't quite as tactful.

"That's the second time you've mentioned your grades. What exactly is the problem? You were telling us over Christmas that some of the older kids are even helping you study. Is the material that complicated?"

Myr hesitates, glancing around at the other customers. "Can I tell you later? It's... complicated." Complicated to talk about without blatantly breaking the Statute of Secrecy anyway. "And it kind of concerns Uncle Cyril so I'd like him to be around as well."

Aster's frown deepens but she nods. "Fair enough. So tell me dear, how are your friends doing?"

Myr is only too happy to change the topic to Holly's continued futile quest to get Charlie to go on a date with her.

"I honestly think she sees it as a challenge at this point. She always arranges to hang out with some of the Hufflepuff girls before even asking most of the time so it's not like she's expecting him to even say yes."

Cadi snorts. "Sounds like Holly. What about you little brother, no lady in your life?"

Myr flushes. "No! No way, dating is weird and I'm totally with Charlie on this." He says, making a face.

Both Cadi and Aster laugh. "You do realize," His sister giggles. "I'll be reminding you of this moment when you bring a girl home, right?"

Myr glares at her petulantly, but reluctantly grins after a moment. "Yeah, I know. I'll just have to hope you don't scare her off then."

They retire to their hotel not long after, skipping desert in favor of sleep. Myr isn't sure how sitting on a train for seven hours is as exhausting as it is, but he's firmly passed out only minutes after falling into bed.

He wakes up to Owen nosing at his ear, demanding belly rubs. Myr sleepily oblidges him, and then reluctantly gets out of bed and snags a random pair of jeans and shirt out of his trunk, slinking to the bathroom and changing quickly.

Probably too quickly for his still waking brain as he manages to smack his hip rather hard again the bathroom sink when he overbalances trying to pull on his jeans.

Mumbling a few choice swears under his breath - learned courtesy of Cassidy - he finishes changes and exits the bathroom, rubbing gently at his probably-bruising side.

His mother and sister wake up not long after that, and once they've gone through their morning routines the three of them grab breakfast in the hotel's attached restaurant and then head out into the city for some sight seeing. It's just after two when they return to the hotel and find Uncle Cyril has arrived.

Myr feels something catch in his throat as he realizes that he'll have to talk about the wand situation sooner rather than later now, especially gives how worried his mother had been the night before.

However, Aster doesn't press immediately, instead dropping off their leftovers from lunch in the hotel room and bustling them all back out to go look at one of the castles.

Myr has a hard time enjoying the rest of the day though, and he knows that his family has noticed. Finally, just after dinner, they return to the hotel room and Aster sits him down on the beds.

"Alright Myr, I know something is bothering you and you wanted to wait until your Uncle was here." Aster smiles gently, and Myr takes in an uncertain breath, wondering how exactly to start.

Finally, he leans over and rummages through his chest until he finds his wand. Placing it on his lap, he takes another breath before starting to speak.

"My grades have never been great, and my magic is pretty weak. That's something I've known since I started at Hogwarts. After all, if I had impressive magic, someone should have noticed before I turned eleven, right?" He doesn't look up, but he can see his Uncle shift out of the corner of his eye. He ignores it and continues.

"But this year... this year it's pretty bad. I can barely keep up and even when I'm doing the spell perfectly it doesn't always work. I failed a couple of my midterm exams." He in another breath and clenches a fist around his wand. "Holly... has a theory. One a lot of people agree with, or I wouldn't bring it up. But she says that I should have been present when Uncle Cyril picked out my wand. The wand chooses the wizard. And, well," He finally holds up the Chestnut wand. "This one didn't pick me. It's possible I'd be better at magic if I got a different wand - one that's actually mine."

He very quickly continues before either of the adults can say anything. "I know wands are super expensive, and I'm sorry this one turned out to be a waste but I wouldn't be saying this if I didn't really think it was a good idea-"

Aster cuts him off with a gentle hand on his shoulder. He looks up to find her smile is equally soft.

"If you need a new wand Myr, we'll get you one." She promises. "Your education always comes first, you know that."

Myr smiles shakily back. "Holly says if I visit the Kiddell shop between noon and one this summer she can give me a discount." He offers, and Cadi coughs to get their attention.

"He can come down with me." She offers. "Two birds with one stone; I have to be back for uni stuff anyway."

Myr is so relieved that things have gone over so well that he nearly forgets that his Uncle hasn't said anything yet. Then he remembers and the knot in his stomach returns.

"Um, Uncle Cyril? I know you probably spent a lot on the wand and I really do appreciate it-" He starts, but his Uncle holds up a hand and looks over at Aster and Cadi.

"Could you ladies give us a minute." It's phrased as a question, but Myr can tell his Uncle isn't really asking.

Cadi frowns in confusion but Aster seems to understand something that isn't being said, and she guides Cadi out of the room, leaving Cyril and Myr alone.

Cyril lets out a low breath. "I was hoping... well, I guess it was a silly thing to hope really." He looks up at Myr then, and Myr has never seen his Uncle look as haggard as he does in that moment. "I didn't buy the wand."

Myr looks down at the stick still clenched in his fist. "You didn't...?" He turns it over in his hands. It seems to be professionally crafted, but it's not like he knows that much about the processes so maybe his Uncle has even more secret talents Myr didn't know about.

Or maybe he's being purposefully dense in the hopes that the obvious conclusion isn't the right one.

Cyril is shaking his head. "It was your father's."

Well. There goes that hope.

Myr stares at the wand in his hands, feeling at once like his emotions are going into overdrive and being completely drained out of him.

Uncle Cyril shifts uncertainly after what must be several minutes of silence, though Myr's having a hard time noticing the world around him through the ringing in his ears. And why is this affecting him so much? It's a second-hand wand. A wand that had belonged to the man who had lied to his wife and walked out on his two young kids to fight in a war none of them knew about. Died in a war none of them knew about.

Why should it affect him?

He finally looks up. "Oh. Well that explains it then." His voice sounds hollow. His chest feels hollow. But why should it affect him? It doesnt' affect him. "We should probably go catch up with mom and Cadi. I'll get a new wand over the summer. Should fix things up, right?"

Uncle Cyril looks pained as Myr carelessly drops the wand into his trunk and kicks the whole thing under the bed.

It shouldn't affect him. So he gets up and walks out the door and pretends that it doesn't.

Maybe if he pretends long enough it will be true.

There's an awkward stretch of time between the end of Easter break and the start of final exams where studying too much means you'll probably burn out before exams start, but the shiny newness of the year has more than worn out it's welcome.

Needless to say, Franziska is often quite bored during the end of April, as is most of the school from what she can tell.

Unsurprisingly then, there are more Hogsmeade weekends scheduled in the early days of spring, and while the ground is still wet and muddy from the slowly melting snow most every student able to go is in the village from mid morning until supper time, Franziska among them.

She of course always goes with Brandon, but the outings now are no longer one-on-one and often include Brandon, Aidan, Holly, and some mix of Franziska's friends as well, depending on what they're doing.

The first weekend in May sees the group, this round including Leona and Henry as Franziska's tag-alongs, heading out to the village the second they've all finished with their breakfasts, eager to get out of the castle.

"Coach Crowell says the new coach will be choosing the announcer next year." Leona is saying mournfully to Brandon and Charlie, the only two people present who haven't already heard her bemoan the failure of her 'bribe Coach Crowell into letting me be the new Quidditch announcer' plan due to the Coach's impending retirement.

Charlie pats her shoulder supportively. "I'm sure you'll still get the job Leona. What's your competition?"

"It can't be that  much, I think most people want to be in the stands." Brandon observes. "I certainly would be."

Leon sticks her tongue out at him. "I don't know who the competition is, that's the problem. What happens if another Slytherin gets the job? We'll be subjected to at least another year of horrid announcing and bias towards the worst team."

"Worst team is winning this year." Charlie says flatly, clearly frustrated with the truth of that statement. "If Slytherin gets both Cups this year I'm rioting."

Gryffindor's final match against Hufflepuff is coming up, but even with a win they'll be third overall thanks to Hufflepuff's crushing defeat of Ravenclaw the previous fall, and Franziska has noticed that all the Gryffindor Quidditch players have been taking it rather hard.

"Isn't calling them the worst team being biased yourself Leona?" She points out with a small smile, and Brandon laughs.

Holly giggles as well, though when she whispers something to Charlie with a pointed look at Brandon, Franziska thinks she may be amused by something other than her comment.

Leona sticks out her tongue. "Oh I'd never say that when announcing, obviously. Unlike the current announcer. Really, what Coach was thinking picking him." She shakes her head.

Henry pats her shoulder comfortingly. "No way anyone other than you gets that job, you want it way more than anyone else." He smiles encouragingly.

That sets Leona off on another rant about the importance of good announcing, and Franziska is just glad that she missed the subtle insult Henry had slipped into his sentence. She's never sure if he intentionally does it or if it's more of a habit he can't quite shake, but a lot of Henry's attempts at comfort are backhanded in some way.

Brandon had picked up on it though, and he slides a bit closer to Franziska, snagging her hand and leaning in. "Did he just imply she's too excited about what's really just a silly job?"

Franziska giggles. "I don't think he meant to, but yeah it kind of sounded like that, didn't it?" She whispers back with a grin, letting him keep a hold of her hand. They still haven't quite labelled whatever it is they're doing, but it's starting to feel pretty official and hand-holding is part of being official after all.

She's just glad they're doing this on a trip when Tonks has detention and Kiera is spending the day with Evie from Ravenclaw. Franziska isn't exactly sure when the two girls had become friends, but Evie's destructiveness has declined ever so slightly since it started so she's not exactly going to complain.

She does know that if she'd allowed the hand-holding when the two girls were around, she'd never hear the end of it. Leona will probably have a few choice words herself once she notices, but she's still caught up ranting to Henry, who's stopped really listening and is looking around at the scenery.

Charlie and Holly have also made themselves conspicuously scarce, dragging Aidan into a conversation about school so that she and Brandon are left mostly alone for the rest of the walk.

"So how's your week going? I hear Remi nearly blew up another cauldron in Potions." She offers after a minute of just quietly enjoying each other's company.

Brandon groans. "Of all the things to ask. Yeah, thankfully it was only a nearly this time. And he wasn't my partner. And Snape only gave him detention instead of the entire class."

Franziska can't help but giggle at Brandon's distress. "Sorry, sorry. It's just what I'd heard from Fitz in Charms yesterday so it's what came to mind. Any less destructive happenings I don't know about?"

Brandon grimaces slightly when Franziska mentions her Ravenclaw friend, which she finds odd given that Fitzwilliam is Brandon's friend as well and they'd gotten on just fine during Winter Break. But she doesn't push and the expression is gone so quickly she's not quite sure she didn't just imagine it.

Brandon thinks for a moment, and then perks up. "Actually, there was a pretty funny incident in Care of Magical Creatures yesterday! I'm kind of surprised you didn't hear about it, some of the other teachers got pretty mad at Professor Kettleburn for endangering students." He grins at Franziska's concerned look. "Overreactions, I promise. So we were working with fire crabs this week-"

Franziska listens raptly as Brandon spins the tale of the escaped fire crab rampaging around the hollow where Care of Magical Creatures is held. Thankfully the thing didn't set anything or anyone on fire, but the ultimately had to get Hagrid to come in and catch the creature before it actually did some damage.

Charlie has inched closer as the story has gone on, and as they reach Hogsmeade he pipes up with his own two cents on the matter.

"Everyone is talking about child endangerment but I mean really, what did they expect? I personally think a fire crab is no more dangerous than learning how to make poisons in potions, or hexes in charms." He points out loftily, and Brandon laughs.

"Yeah but if you screw those up that's your fault - no blame can go to the school."

Franziska tilts her head in alarm. "That is a good point though. Everything we do here is pretty dangerous."

"Which is why they need to take off the kid gloves for everything, not just certain classes or teachers." Brandon nods sagely. "If you treat people like delicate glassware then of course someone will get hurt."

Franziska frowns. "I suppose. Though considering our class's penchant for rule-breaking I sort of get if they're being extra cautious about us." She replies wryly, and Brandon ducks his head slightly.

"Okay, fair point."

Charlie and Holly exchange a glace at this and both grin broadly. Franziska practicedly ignores them and lets go of Brandon's hand so she can turn properly to talk to Leona, who's still bombarding Henry with facts and statistics of the fine art of announcing.

"So hey, anyone have anywhere specific they'd like to go first?" She asks, raising her voice slightly so Leona can hear her as well.

Charlie immediately nods. "Aidan and I are hitting Zonko's. Brandon, you're welcome to come but I know you might have other plans." He grins teasingly and Brandon rolls his eyes.

Franziska laughs. "Okay then. I wanted to go check out the Shrieking Shack actually. We haven't been down there yet." She nudges Brandon lightly, and he perks up immediately.

"Heck yeah! You two are on your own, creepy haunted shack wins."

Franziska giggles again. "Henry, Leona, Holly? What do you guys want to do?"

"I'm going to Honeydukes Sweet Shop." Henry replies. "But I can go any time, so I wouldn't mind seeing the shack again. It's pretty creepy."

"I'm going to Zonko's with the guys." Holly says firmly, and Franziska sees Charlie shaking his head behind her.

Leona shrugs. "I guess I'll go look at the shack with you guys then." She decides. "Meet back here in an hour?"

Everyone agrees and they split up.

Leona hops ahead of their group, grinning and walking backwards as they make their way across town to where the Shrieking Shack is located.

"So do you all know the story of the Shack?" She asks, purposefully putting on her creepiest voice.

Henry grins. "I've heard it, but I'd love to hear your version."

Leona sticks her tongue out at him before promptly launching into the fable that Franziska is sure she picked up from one of the Prefects.

"For decades the old shack on the edge of Hogsmeade had sat empty, falling into disrepair and neglect even as the town around it thrived. For decades it sat silent, watching," Leona grins wickedly. "Perhaps even waiting?"

Charlie groans and rolls his eyes but Holly elbows him and he falls silent. Leona doesn't spare him a glance.

"Then one night, in nineteen seventy one,"

"Wait, really? I was almost alive by then." Brandon interrupts in surprise. Franziska nudges him pointedly and he grins sheepishly over at her. "Sorry."

Leona turns her creepy smile onto them. "Oh yes, this isn't some tale from centuries past. This takes place in our century." She says lowly, her eyes gleaming. "Which means that even though the Shack has stood silent in recent years, it could very well awaken again at any moment."

Now she has everyone's attention, and she soaks it in for a moment before continuing.

"As I was saying, one night in nineteen seventy one, a young man was walking home. He walked the same path every night, passing the old shed with no notice, and expected this night to be just the same. But as he passed in front of the shack, it emitted a scream from within, so loud and agonizing the man swears it rattled in his bones." She leans forward. "He raced home, the sounds following him all the way there. The next morning, every person in the town shared their stories of the shack. All had heard it's cries. Finally, one woman stood up and bravely made her way into the shack." She pauses for effect, grinning wickedly at each of her friends.

"What she found inside was horrific. Blood covered the floors and the walls. Scratch marks marred every corner. But the worst part?" She leans closer still, somehow managing to keep her footing as they walk. "There were bones. Scattered all along the floor, some still hosting torn fragment of flesh."

"Ew." Franziska can't help muttering, her stomach turning at the image.

"The woman ran back to tell the other villagers what she'd seen. But when a group went back they found the place completely clean. No blood, no scratches, no bones." She leans back. "But every once in a while, the townsfolk would hear the screams again. To this day no one knows what causes it. Only the bravest of souls dare venture close for fear of the specter that surely haunts its halls. And if you listen at night, you can still sometimes hear that terrible screaming."

"Well that sounds like a fairy tale." Henry squeaks out after a long moment. "And also is different than what I heard."

Leona scoffs. "Is not, I just told it better. That's the bonified true story. And anyway, I hear that Dumbledore himself says it's real so how about that?"

Franziska leaves them to their bickering as she and Brandon walk up to the fence blocking off the path up to the Shrieking Shack. Leona had perfectly timed her story, so it had ended just as the group had arrived.

"So what do you think? Haunted shack or nah?" Brandon looks over at her with a grin, and Franziska shrugs.

"I mean, if Dumbledore believes it maybe. But it does all seem a bit dramatic."

Brandon laughs. "Bet I could get inside. See some of those bones." He laughs at her grossed out expression. "Okay, sorry, too far. I'll stay out here. Still, kind of cool to be so close to one of the Wizarding world's biggest mysteries."

Franziska tilts her head. "Is it really? Maybe one of England's." She concedes. "But I'd never heard of it until now. I suppose I can ask my parents when I go home."

Brandon nods. "No way they haven't heard of it. So you wanna go to Honeydukes now?"

She grins and the drag the still quarreling Leona and Henry back into town.

All in all, it's a fun day out, and Franziska is rather disappointed when the sun starts to drop and the prefects present begin telling the students still lingering around town to start heading back to the castle.

"Well I'm happy." Charlie grins, hoisting his bag of tricks up over his head.

"Filch will have confiscated them all by next week, guaranteed." Holly whispers to Franziska, and both girls giggle as Brandon eagerly looks over Aidan and Charlie's purchases.

"Most likely." Franziska agrees easily. "But they're so excited, I can't take that away from them."

Holly grins knowingly. "So you still insisting there's no label for you and Brandon? You've been going on dates since the start of the school year."

Franziska shrugs. "We haven't talked about it." She says honestly. "I'm happy with how things are now, but I suppose with the end of school coming up we probably should figure out where this is going."

Holly rolls her eyes. "You sound so stiff about it. Do you like him? If yeah then start calling him your boyfriend. If no, then stop stringing him along and let other girls have a shot."

Franziska raises an eyebrow. "Your sister tell you that?"

Holly laughs. "Willow, yeah. She was complaining about Charlie though, so maybe it's a slightly different situation. Still, I think you two need to 'talk about it' before exams start."

Franziska looks ahead at where Brandon and his friends are laughing about something, and she smiles faintly.

"Yeah, you're probably right. You mind steering everyone off to the Great Hall when we get back?"

Holly beams. "You got it."

She makes good on her word, effectively driving everyone away as she launches into one of he rants on wand making and Ollivander's refusal to sell the unused space in Hogsmeade to the Kiddells.

"She's more self aware than I realized." Franziska laughs as she tugs Brandon into a side hall. "So hey, I think we need to talk. About us. And well, what exactly we are."

He looks nervous. "I, um, I thought we were dating?"

Franziska nods. "But I mean, I'm thinking I'd like to call you my boyfriend. If you wanted."

Brandon's entire face lights up, and the next thing Franziska knows she's being tugged forward.

It's a sloppy kiss, especially as she wasn't ready for it, but they try again after they stop laughing and it's much better the second time around.

Franziska is rather glad they finally talked about it.

And we're back on track! Also, there's only one chapter left of third year - can you believe it? It's been a crazy fun ride for me, and year four is only going to keep up the momentum! More couples will surface, school is going to amp up, and of course there are a few little plot threads set here that are going to take off. Also Percy Weasley is starting next year so that's fun. But first, we've got exams to
contend with, and those are coming up in two weeks! Here's hoping things go well for the kids!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2452 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!