Chapter Fourty-One

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
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Ana actually somehow succeeds in getting her mother to invite Jerome and his family to their New Year's Eve party, and even better Jerome offers to come two hours early to "study" with Ana.

She hasn't told him about her motivation for asking him to do so, but she rather doubts he'll mind not studying as much as she'd convinced her mother they would.

Luckily for her Jerome is still a Ravenclaw (even if he is a rather unique one) and he'd already worked out that they wouldn't be doing much as his bag when he arrives is more filled with snacks than actual work. He hands her a licorice wand once they've both settled in her room and set up a few textbooks and parchments so they can pretend to be working if either of Ana's parents look in on them, though she rather doubts they will. Winona Vulchanova takes her parties very seriously and Ana rather doubts she'll be seeing her mother at all until after midnight.

"Thanks." She accepts the offered candy, not worrying too much about spoiling her appetite and the night will be a buffet-style serve-yourself affair. "So you obviously realize we won't be studying."

He laughs. "There's no way you aren't already finished with all our break assignments." He points out. "I wouldn't say no to some Apparition practice if we have time, but I assume you've got something you want to talk about?"

Ana on the wand as she ponders how exactly to phrase her dilemma. She still hasn't told a soul about her realizations two weeks prior, not even Alec who's still in quarantine in Peru (and yes she's still illogically worried even though the Macmillans have since been sent confirmation of Alec's wellbeing by the Curse-Breakers' Society). Ultimately she decides that it's only Jerome, and nothing she says could be taken poorly.

"I've discovered I may have a crush on Alec." She announces, popping the wand back into when she finishes and watching Jerome expectantly.

His response is not the surprise she'd expected - instead he grins. "No offense Ana, but I kind of already knew that. It's great to hear that you know it now though - have you told Alec?"

With anyone else she might have been irritated. She still is, slightly, but she supposes that she had guessed Jerome's crush, which really was a much bigger deal, so she can't logically be annoyed that he knew of hers.

She shakes her head, her tone a bit clipped now. "I have not. The letter is written but I only discovered all this due to the fact he's in quarantine and cannot return home for the winter holidays."

Jerome immediately looks concerned. "Quarantine? Is he-"

She doesn't let him finish. "He's fine, it's preventative. There have been some cases of smallpox in the area so naturally everyone is being quite cautious. I intend to learn more from Mrs. Macmillan tonight."

Jerome exhales thankfully. "Well that's good news at least. Perhaps he'll come home over the summer instead, especially if you're confessing right away like that. Do you think I could read the letter? I mean, if you're comfortable with that." He adds hastily.

Ana glances at her door, then goes to her desk and pulls the letter out from the drawer she keeps all her correspondence with Alec in. "I got him a Christmas gift as well." She adds as she hands the parchment over to Jerome. "A top-quality bag to keep his finds in when he's out in the field. I'm not sure if it's impersonal but I'm not much for gifts."

Jerome suddenly perks up. "Oh my gosh that's right! Ana, I still haven't given you your birthday gift!" He puts the letter to the side for a moment to rifle through his bag before triumphantly pulling out a box. "Okay, here you go! Let's say it's for Christmas too." He jokes before going back to the letter. "This is really good so far, by the way."

Ana shrugs and focuses on opening the gift. She honestly doesn't care what Jerome thinks of the letter, she doesn't intend to change it as she knows Alec will understand it, even if it turns out he doesn't reciprocate her feelings.

When she finally gets the box open she can't help but laugh faintly. "I see why you needed to wait." She observes, holding up the self-refilling inkwell to get a better look at it. It's rather standard but Jerome has clearly had it customized as the whole thing is decorated with black cats in a variety of poses. She also notes with appreciation that the cats even have her grey necklace marking.

Jerome looks up, half smiling but clearly nervous. "I hope you like it. I considered jewlery but I figure nothing is going to replace that pendant of yours."

Ana taps said necklace lightly. "That would be correct. This is wonderful Jerome, now I can keep one in my bag and one on my desk here so I don't have to cart it back and forth from Hogwarts every holiday. And I quite like the touch with my animagus form."

He beams, looking quite relieved. "Oh good! Anyway, here's your letter back. I think Alec would be awfully stupid to not respond positively to that."

Ana shrugs, returning the letter to it's proper place. "It doesn't matter, I plan to maintain the friendship regardless." She says, trying to keep any uncertainty out of her voice. She does have to admit that the idea of Alec rejecting her isn't one that sits comfortably, but she also privately doesn't think it's very likely. Why else would he have been corresponding with her for so long if he didn't see her with some kind of affection.

"I should tell you that Alasdair will be at the party tonight." Ana thinks to mention an hour later when they're both preparing to join the bustle that's slowly rising from the floor below them. "He and I don't speak much anymore but we do often end up pushed together by our parents for things like this."

Jerome shrugs easily. "I think as long as I don't point out the questionable direction he's taking the Quidditch team in I should be fine." He grins. "And really, I can't imagine him choosing to acknowledge me much at all, Alasdair is one of the snakes who mostly keeps to himself."

Jerome heads down first so Ana can switch dresses into something slightly more festive than the rather plain black frock she'd had on for the rest of the day.

She actually finds a rather nice formal gown - black of course, but with silver ts - that she's never worn before and opts to slip it on, adjusting her pendant so it's prominently displayed on her chest and heading first to the restroom to check her hair and then to the floor below.

She doesn't see Jerome right away, which doesn't surprise her in the least. He's officially the shortest person among the Ravenclaws in their year since Amelia's growth spurt just before the break, and she wouldn't be surprised if he was the shortest boy overall in their year as a whole.

She weaves through the crowd, politely responding whenever anyone addresses her and unfortunately getting pulled into a conversation with Mrs. Flint about Marcus's tutoring. Her student is standing next to his mother and looking distinctly uncomfortable in his dress robes.

Ana doesn't really have all that much to say to Mrs. Flint - Marcus still struggles in school but since she started regularly reminding him that he could be removed from the Quidditch team if his grades don't stay up he's been putting in more effort. However that doesn't stop his mother from going on, addressing each of his classes in turn and making both Marcus and Ana increasingly uncomfortable.

Finally Ana spots Jerome and bids a quick goodbye to Mrs. Flint, citing a need to go say hello to her friend. She bids Marcus goodnight as well though she only gets an annoyed grunt in return.

"Ana, there you are!" Jerome grins as she walks over to him. He's leaned up against the wall near the drinks table along with a much younger boy who's very clearly related to him. "This is my brother Terrence."

"I go by Terry." The boy says, holding out his hand. "But Jerry says that you're not big on nicknames."

Ana shrugs and accepts the handshake, privately pleased at the manners the nine year old is displaying. If the Boot brothers' parents are as well behaved she thinks they might start getting regular invites despite their blood status, which she wouldn't be averse to at all.

"Ana." She introduces herself in return. "And I'm perfectly alright with nicknames so long as I learn them right away. I only knew Jerome from a distance for several years and as such I can't reconcile him as Jerry in my mind."

Terry tilts his head, clearly rolling the logic around in his mind. "I suppose that makes sense. Still, what if someone was quite insistent? Would you use their nickname then? Mum always says that habits can always be changed with a bit of effort."

The party turns out to be one of the best New Years' celebrations she can remember. She stays with the Boot brothers the entire night, debating a wide variety of topics and being privately impressed at how well young Terry actually keeps up - even better than Jerome at times which both boys laugh about.

When the ball drops Jerome smacks a kiss onto Terry's cheek, grossing his brother out, while Ana merely rolls her eyes at their antics. She does briefly wish that Alec could have been there, but she resolves firmly that in a year's time she'll be sharing New Years with him. She's waited this long, one more year can't possibly hurt anything.

There are only a few days after the party before Ana returns to Hogwarts, and she uses them to once again trying to send Alec his letter, which has now been returned twice by the owl post. She's rather hoping it will work this time, as the total cost of the single package has become rather ridiculous.

Perhaps she should look into getting a personal owl.

Finally the fourth arrives and Ana heads back to school. She sits with Amelia and Shaun as well as Jerome on the ride back - the latter of whom is tactful enough to not mention that he'd seen Ana only a few days prior - and listens politely as they share stories about their Christmas breaks.

When it's Ana's turn to speak she merely shrugs. "It was average I suppose. I went shopping with my mother, did the assigned homework. Nothing spectacular."

Jerome does give her a slight side-eye but she'd already decided not to share her Alec-related discoveries with Shaun and Amelia - frankly she's not close enough to them to feel that sharing such personal information is particularly warranted.

Amelia ends up speaking the most, talking about how her parents reacted to meeting Henry for the first time.

Ana tunes out at that point. She frankly still doesn't understand Amelia's relationship with the Hufflepuff boy and rather doubts it will last past Hogwarts, if that long, and as such has no real interest in hearing about how it's going.

She refocuses on the conversation again when the upcoming Apparition test is brought up.

"So how difficult is the class? I'm starting it next week." Shaun asks partway through Jerome's fretting about his passing the exam. "I've heard mixed reviews from the upper years."

Ana shrugs. "I'm not certain you'll have the same professor as we did, but he's alright.

"Terrible about answering questions though." Jerome adds. "Be ready to do a whole bunch of reading on your own. I'm just thankful we had that Hogsmeade outing and break to practice."

Shaun grimaces. "We technically get Easter I suppose, for anyone who's of age by then. Still, I feel like you lot have an easier time of it than we will."

"I feel like all of you have an easier time than I do." Amelia grumbles. "The bloody test is on May twenty fifth for the second class and I turn seventeen on the twenty-sixth so I have to get my license over the summer."

"You still get to take the class though, right? Everyone else is taking the second section." Jerome double-checks and all three of them nod.

Personally Ana isn all that concerned about when and where she gets her apparition license - in her line of work she'll be utilizing port keys far more frequently - but she must admit that doing things earlier is almost always a better option, so she does feel a bit badly for Amelia.

They arrive at Hogwarts just as it's getting dark out and head immediately for the Great Hall and the return Feast.

Things fall into a familiar routine as school properly starts back up, and Ana is just getting comfortable when an owl drops a package in front of her on Tuesday morning the week after they all get back.

"Still talking with that Curse-Breaker?" Amelia asks leadingly as Ana picks up the package.

"Of course, there are plenty of new discoveries being made every day. And whenever Curse-Breakers monthly doesn't adequately explain something he's quite good at answering my questions." Ana responds.

Honestly she's amazed she manages to keep her voice level and flippant - the package isn't the one she'd sent being returned yet again. This one is from Alec. Which means he's gotten her confession.

She curses how late the mail arrives as she can't return to the dorm room to open the letter until after Arithmancy ends, which isn't for two hours.

She's not too proud to admit that she's rather distracted in both Arithmancy and Charms before it, and even Aidan notices despite the fact he's lived with his head in a textbook since the start of sixth year.

"You feeling alright? If you wanted to study together I have a free period right now." He offers as they exit the classroom. "I was going to look over some notes for Defense Against the Dark Arts but-"

Ana waves dismissively. "No worries, I'm quite secure in my capabilities in each of my classes at the moment. I actually require the free period for a personal matter, though perhaps we could study some other time?"

Aidan gives a half-shrug. "Of course. I'm pretty much always in the library these days so come join me some time."

Ana nods and then finally heads back up to the Ravenclaw Tower, tearing open the letter as soon as she reaches the privacy of the dorm and thanking Merlin that neither Evie nor Amelia decided to spend their free time here.

She doesn't notice she's shaking until she unfolds the letter, and though she tries to force herself to stop there's still a slight tremor no matter how much she tells herself the answer doesn't matter.

She skims the top part of the letter quickly, looking for the point where he begins addressing her admission.

I have to admit I was surprised when I read your confession.

Not a great start, but she pushes on, restraining herself from reacting until she's read the full response.

When we first met I mostly saw you as Alasdair's friend who was kind of fun to mess with. But since we've been talking more directly I'm glad that he met you. You're smart, and beautiful, and passionate in a reserved way that I think most people miss. And perhaps this is all a bit sappy but I don't want you to think I'm saying yes simply because you put me on the spot.

Honestly Ana hadn't even thought about that until just then, but she's glad Alec thought to address it as it seems like something that could have come up later down the line.

Which is to say, of course, that I've been falling in love with you for a year now and I would be more than happy to finally do something with those feelings. The entire camp is being put onto mandatory leave in March - just tell me when Hogsmeade weekend is that month and I'll meet you there.

Yours,

Alec

Ana looks at the sign off and can't help beaming. She rather likes the sound of 'yours'.

Myr would never tell his sister, but in the end he never works up the courage to go up to Amanda and ask her out.

No, instead she strides up to him in the middle of the Great Hall two weeks after school starts up again and informs him that he's adorable but the awkwardness is getting to be a bit much and he'll be taking her to Hogsmeade this weekend.

He thinks he likes her even more after that fiasco, even if it does mean his Housemates mercilessly about it for the rest of the week. But Amanda more than makes up for it by smiling at him every single time they cross paths in the hallway.

He does still feel a little odd about their age difference - yes she's turning fifteen before he turns seventeen so it's not quite two years but still - but Cadi's scolding keeps him focused. Plus, worrying about his date trumps having to think about his Uncle Cyril possibly marrying his mom and legally becoming part of the family. Or think about why thinking about it makes him feel a bit sick to his stomach.

When the Hogsmeade Saturday arrives its snowy and miserable outside and Myr worries that the weather could cause the date to go horridly.

Brandon is no help at all when Myr mutters his concerns to the room while the boys are all getting dressed.

"The weather doesn't matter, if it's going to crash and burn it'll do that all on it's own. Trust me, I had the longest relationship of anyone here."

It's weird to hear him talking openly about Franziska, but the two had apparently made up over the break and are back to being friends. Myr doesn't quite understand it - Brandon had been crushed when Franziska broke up with him - but he supposes it's better than having to watch Brandon glare at every happy couple in the castle.

Now it's Drake doing the glaring, though he's doing more to try and hide it. He's even successful on some days - usually after a good Quidditch practice or a day when they don't have any classes with the Hufflepuffs.

Hogsmeade days are inevitably bad ones though. He's sulking in his bed and passes on going to breakfast at all when Charlie asks him when he's planning on getting up.

The boys exchange glances before leaving him to his wallowing.

"Didn't she break up with him at the start of the summer? How is he still so mopey?" Remi asks, probably loud enough that Drake can hear him through the door that Brandon hasn't completely closed yet.

Charlie smacks him upside the head. "One day you'll have your heart shattered and feel like an arse for that comment." He says in lieu of a reply.

Remi makes a face. "No way, I'm just never going to date. I'm gonna hunt monsters!"

"Hey Charlie I found your soulmate." Brandon laughs, indicating Remi with his thumb.

Charlie feigns injury. "How could you say such a thing? I could never love anyone who hunts my babies!"

Myr just laughs and tunes out Charlie and Remi bickering over the right way to deal with dragons, a common debate in their dorms these days.

The girls are already in the Great Hall, and Holly and Fiona drag Myr into the seat between them before he can protest.

"Okay, the clothes are fine considering it's winter so you've got to dress warm." Holly declares after staring at him long enough that he starts getting uncomfortable. "So what's your plan?"

Myr blinks at her and Fiona's expectant looks. "Uh... plan? She asked me though." He points out, suddenly even more nervous than before. He has a rough idea of things they could do but he hasn't really outlined anything specific.

Fiona tuts. "Myr you can't just assume. She took the step of asking you, you ought to have planned at least a little." She scolds lightly. "Now then, I don't know that much about - sorry, what was her name again?"

Myr sighs. "Amanda. And I can't say I know much about her either, that's why I figured we'd just get butterbeers at the three broomsticks and talk or something. Maybe Madame Puddifoot's if she prefers tea. I can ask on the way over you know." He knows he sounds defensive but he really doesn't need them freaking him out this close to the date.

"That's a good start." Evera pipes up from across the table, and Myr finally reigsters that with Nabila sitting next to her he's been completely surrounded by the Gryffindor girls. "Always ask what she wants to do next, but offer options. That way you're both accommodating but also don't seem passive. Considering she asked you out she could definitely be nervous that you're only going with her because she was pushy."

From what he's seen of Amanda Myr doesn't really think that would be a problem, but he forces a smile at Evera anyway. At least she's being helpful instead of just interrogating him.

Then all too quickly breakfast is over and he's nervously waiting for Amanda outside the Great Hall. To his surprise Melody walks over instead and introduces herself.

Myr shakes the offered hand. "At the risk of sounding creepy I actually know. Is everything okay with Amanda?" Something twists in his guts as he asks - is she sick? Did she decide she doesn't actually want to go out with him?

Melody immediately shakes her head. "Oh no! No sorry, I didn't mean to worry you." She assures him quickly. "Ames got caught up in another debate with Harrison over Muggle technology. She'll be out soon, I just wanted to meet you." She hesitates, and then adds, "So you can tell us apart?"

He nods. "I couldn't say why, but yeah, you look different to me." He responds.

Melody beams. "I see why Ames was attracted to you. Oh, here she is, you two have fun!" She waves cheerfully and skips away down the corridor to meet up with a few other Hufflepuffs.

Amanda shakes her head as she watches her twin leave. "Alright then. Sorry I'm late, and sorry if Mels was weird."

"She was a perfect lady." Myr responds with a nervous smile. Amanda hasn't done anything drastically different with her appearance, but the sight of her is making Myr's mouth go dry. "Unlike the twins Gryffindor was stuck with." He says it without thinking, and to his relief Amanda laughs.

"The youngest Weasleys, right? Only first years - I don't envy the prefects having to clean up after them." She comments as they begin walking down the hallway towards the pathway to Hogsmeade. "Just yesterday they pranked Filch in his own office, did you hear about that? They'd dropped a dungbomb on one of the third year potions classes and then dropped another on in Filch's office when he was giving them their punishment. It was pretty ballsy but also got them a full month of detention. That brother of theirs was beside himself."

Myr knows exactly which brother she's talking about - Percy had chewed the twins out for a good hour when they got back to the dorms, grinning like a pair of cats who got the cream.

"Percy acts more like their mom than their brother at times." Myr acknowledges. "Still, they do keep things lively in the Tower so there's that I suppose. What about Ravenclaw, any drama there?"

Amanda grins knowingly. "Wouldn't you like to know. Though honestly it has gotten a bit bland since that one girl in your year stopped setting things on fire at random. That was kind of funny."

The conversation peters out then and Myr desperately tries to think of something else to say. His tongue feels like it's glued to the top of his mouth, and they go a few minutes before he remembers his conversation with Fiona and Holly.

"So, uh, since it's so cold I thought we could just get a butterbeer or some tea when we get to Hogsmeade?" He manages to stutter out.

Amanda's cheeks have been turned red by the chill, and she pulls her scarf down from over her nose so she can reply. "I think I can get on board with that. How about Madame Puddifoot's tea shop? Melody says her stuff is really good but I've never tried it. No one to go with you know."

Myr nods, thankful that Amanda doesn't seem that bothered by the fact they hadn't spoken much. The rest of the walk is made in silence, both of them opting to hide behind their scarves in an attempt to ward off the wind and the snow.

Amanda shakes out her hair when they finally arrive at the tea shop. "I admit I've never come to Hogsmeade during the winter." She says once her scarf has been unwrapped from her face. "I think I might have had the right idea."

"Well then tea will be even more welcome! Table for two?" A plump, entirely too cheerful woman bustles up to them happily. Myr figures she must be Madame Puddifoot.

"Yes ma'am, thank you." Amanda replies cheerfully.

Madame Puddifoot beams. "You can just put your cloaks right over here and follow me." She gestures to a rack that already hosts several cloaks and scarves. Myr makes sure to put his cloak on top of Amanda's so they can find them again before following their host.

"This place is quite cute. I see why Melody likes it so much." Amanda comments once they're settled and Madame Puddifoot has left them to puruse the menu.

"You mentioned you haven't been before." Myr remembers. "Why is that?"

Amanda had just begun to return to her normal coloring as they warmed up, but instantly her cheeks refill with color. "Well, it's sort of a date place." She admits. "And I've never had a date and I don't just want to come in by myself or with my sister so." She leaves it at that, clearly rather embarrassed.

Myr shrugs. "That's fair. It's sort of the same reason I've never come here either." He offers her a smile, which she returns full force.

And Myr things that maybe this date won't go so terribly after all.

They end up trying a bit of everything at the tea shop and then make some purchases at Honeydukes. Amanda wants to go to Zonko's but Myr admits his discomfort with the shop and so they instead retire to spend the rest of the trip at the Three Broomsticks, sharing a slice of chocolate cake and just getting to know each other.

Amanda is the one who brings up the upcoming Ravenclaw versus Slytherin Quidditch match, and Myr is very happy to hear that she's a big fan of jocks.

"It's one of the reasons I asked you out." She admits. "I've seen you play and it's really amazing to watch."

"Do you play?" Myr asks curiously, and she shakes her head regretfully.

"No balance." She laughs. "Though trust me I'm always trying to improve. I like flying, but the coordination you need to actually play Quidditch is a bit beyond what I'm capable of."

"We should go flying sometime." It's impulsively said, and Myr almost immediately regrets it. Is he being too presumptive? The weather is definitely going to stop them from flying for at least a few months so he's not just assuming a second date he's assuming many more dates. Enough to constitute a relationship even. He's not sure how many dates that would be exactly but he can't imagine there's an unlimited number you can go on with one person without committing to something more serious with them.

It feels like ages before Amanda replies, though a glance at the clock shows it's been less than ten second. "That would be awesome! You should show me some of your Beater tricks!"

Myr takes a moment to recover from his internal panicking but he manages to put together a reply that he's pretty sure Charlie and Laurel are ghost writing in his brain. "You'd just use them to help Ravenclaw."

Amanda laughs so Myr doesn't have to murder his roommate and ex-captain for drilling tactic secrecy into his brain just yet. "Fine, you caught me. But seriously, I'd love to go flying sometime, once it thaws out a bit. I honestly don't envy our poor team having to play the snakes in the snow. Do you think they'll try cheating again like they did against you guys?"

They're back in safe territory and Myr latches onto it, possibly rambling a bit in his desperation to not say something that will make Amanda storm off and declare she never wants to talk to him again.

Which some part of his brain tells him is ridiculous but a larger part keeps loudly worrying about it for the rest of the afternoon. However Amanda doesn't leave. In fact, Amanda keeps leaning closer as they chat, giving him that smile that started this entire mess. And it's only making him more nervous.

They're quiet on the walk back to the castle, hiding from the elements behind their scarves. But halfway back Myr feels something bump against his cloak and glances down to find that Amanda's hand has slipped out from under her cloak and she's gripping his lightly.

Nervously he slips his own hand out and she grabs it.

He's still worried, but he thinks that maybe the date might have gone well. And maybe he's definitely going to ask her if she wants to go watch the Ravenclaw-Slytherin match together next weekend.

Rajani is quite pleased when break finishes and her friends return to Hogwarts. She doesn't even mind that both Clary and Lenox are still mostly avoiding her - she's just happy to be back in her familiar environment with her familiar friends.

When asked how her break was she mostly just talks about practicing for the upcoming Apparition test, though she does admit to Queenie that she's not sure she'll be staying next year.

"It's so boring here. At least at home I can meet up with you and Eugene." She complains as the two girls sit on Queenie's bed. Rajani is doing most of the talking while Queenie reviews color schemes for the wedding.

"That is true, I missed you this break. I'd say we'll have to make up for it this summer but alas I'll be in Peru." Queenie laments.

Rajani laughs. "Poor you, having to travel the world and see ancient ruins."

Queenie laughs as well.

Trevor is back as well and Rajani takes full advantage of the fact she's gotten on good terms with both Tabs and Terrence in order to patrol with him at least once a week.

"Your power has gone to your head." He teases her one night after they've finished their patrol (admittedly twenty minutes later than they should have), "Tabs and Terrence are going to catch on eventually."

"I'm sure Terrence already knows, being a Ravenclaw and all, and he's still fine with it." Rajani replies flippantly. "And are you really complaining? You're getting quite a bit out of this arrangement as well after all." She adds with a sly grin.

Trevor laughs. "You've got me there."

Rajani kisses him goodnight before turning towards the dorms, but she pauses when she catches sight of movement in her periphery.

Thinking Trevor might want to say something else she turns, but instead of her boyfriend finds Clary hunched over by the fireplace, clearly trying to make herself invisible.

It had been a great patrol and a better day, so Rajani feels confident enough to invite herself over to sit next to her dorm mate.

"Hey Clar, what are you doing up?"

Clary very obviously turns her head away and clears . "Nothing, just sitting, good night."

Rajani can hear in her voice that she's been crying. But it's also quite evident that she doesn't particularly want to talk, and if the crying is over what Rajani suspects it might be she probably isn't the best person to be offering comfort.

"Alright then, goodnight Clary. Don't stay up too late." She says, maintaining cheerfulness as she gets up and heads up to the dorms, leaving Clary to sulk by the fireplace in peace.

The next morning she gets confirmation - Lenox had broken up with Clary just before curfew, while Rajani was on patrol with Trevor. Neither Queenie nor Eugene has exact details - Queenie heard about it from Nia who had a front seat to the drama and Lenox hadn't been wiling to talk about it much with Eugene or the other boys in their dorm the night before.

"Still, I hope Clary will feel up to talking soon. I know we all saw it coming but still." Queenie says quietly, glancing over at the end of the table where said teen is poking forlornly at her plate. "That can't be easy."

Rajani thinks back to her own breakup with Ed and sighs. That hadn't exactly been a fun experience and it had been a completely mutual decision. She can't imagine what Clary must be feeling. Or how much she might hate Rajani for being tangentially responsible.

"I'm glad I've got patrol tonight, hopefully Lenox will fall asleep before I get back." Eugene mutters as the three of them head towards the library. None of them has class but the common room has been Clary's haunt so they've unanimously agreed to avoid it until things have settled more.

Apparently they're not the only ones with that idea, as Alasdair and Cadfael join them not long after they've found a table in one of the quieter corners of the library.

Cadfael takes the seat next to Rajani and pulls out his Transfiguration textbook, looking over at her questioningly. She pulls out her own in response, giving him half a grin.

Studying with Cadfael has become a lot more common in the past year, even if he is taking a lot more classes than she is this year (and yes, she is irritated that he passed Ancient Runes and she didn't but she's not letting it stop her from working with him on other subjects).

The day passes, and Rajani manages to get through it without any interaction with Clary or Lenox. This is made rather simple by the fact she only has one class on Thursdays and it's Transfiguration which Clary isn't taking. And Lenox handily is trying to avoid her as much as she wants to not deal with him so they get through class unscathed and Rajani retires to the library to study with whichever of her friends happens to have a free period at the time. Trevor comes by a few times as well, during which her studying efficiency drops dramatically. Not that she's complaining.

In fact, it seems like her day might just be drama-free despite the breakup when Eugene pulls her aside after dinner with a guilty look on his face.

"No." Rajani says immediately. "My day has been shockingly enjoyable, don't ruin it."

"It's... not? I don't think it is." Eugene insists, plastering on the million dollar smile that has half the faculty falling over themselves to help him. Rajani just frowns, unimpressed. He sighs.

"Could you take my patrol shift tonight? I know you had one yesterday and you're with Tabs tomorrow but Lenox is freaking out. We're doing a guys' night kind of thing." He blinks at her pleading and Rajani sighs. It technically won't ruin anything at least, it'll just be a bit annoying.

"Fine, but only because I'm the most amazing friend in the world. Who are you partnered with? I should tell them that we're swapping."

Eugene beams. "It's with Jemma! Thanks Raj, you're a doll!"

"And you're a slimy little rat." Rajani grumbles. She really should have asked who the patrol was with first - spending at least an hour walking with Miss Future Head Girl isn't her idea of a good time.

Still, she had agreed, and she'll definitely be able to use this to get a favor out of Eugene later so she sighs again and looks around for her fellow Prefect.

She spots Jemma chatting with a group of younger students and she grimaces before pushing on a smile and walking over.

"Jemma, do you have a minute?"

A few of the younger years look scared of her, and she's actually pretty pleased with that. But she ignores them and stares down Jemma instead, who gives her a smile.

"Of course Rajani, just a moment?" She asks, and it's the sort of tone most people just can't say 'no' to.

It makes Rajani want to punch her in her perfect teeth. Just a little bit.

"Sure, I'll wait by the entrance." She says instead before spinning on her heel and striding away.

Jemma takes a little over a minute to wrap up whatever nonsense she's conducting with the kids, and Rajani is getting rather impatient when the blonde finally joins her.

"Hey! Sorry, what can I help you with?" She asks, beaming despite the fact she looks quite frazzled.

Rajani suppresses the urge to roll her eyes. "No help required, thanks. Eugene and I are swapping patrols so you're with me tonight."

Jemmo tilts her head, clearly confused, but she's smart enough to not ask. "That sounds fine. I'll meet you by the portrait of Sir Cadogan then?"

Rajani merely nods and heads off. She needs to put her books away before the patrol and she frankly doesn't want to have to talk to Jemma any longer than she needs to.

Eugene is still waiting for her outside the Great Hall. "Seriously, thanks. Do you want me to take your shift with Tabs tomorrow?"

Rajani waves him off. "I actually almost like those patrols, Tabs isn't so bad if you know how to handle her." She gives Eugene a grin. "I'll just hold onto this for some future date."

Eugene groans. "Fine, that's fair. You better not stick me with anyone annoying though, since you like Tabs so much."

"I only said almost, and you're getting my next round with Saundra." Rajani snipes back, grinning.

Eugene groans dramatically as they make their way to the common room, and Rajani ends up talking Prefect business with him (and Gabi, who had been studying by one of the windows until she overheard their conversation) until she has to leave to meet with Jemma.

The blonde is (of course) already waiting by the portrait, attempting a conversation with Sir Cadogan though she's failing rather miserably.

"Don't bother, portraits are all two-dimensional." Rajani greets her blandly. "You'll never get him thinking about anything but the glory of battle."

"'Tis indeed glorious!" Cadogan exclaims from the wall. Rajani ignores him.

"We should get going. Which route are you on tonight?"

"Gryffindor Tower." Jemma supplies helpfully. "So I didn't want to press in front of the younger students but why the switch?"

Rajani glares at her. "None of your business Finnegan, it's personal."

Jemma folds her hands behind her back as they walk. "My apologies." She offers after a moment. "I hope all is well but I won't press. I know personal business is-"

"Yes, yes, very touching. I was supposed to be spending the evening with my boyfriend so please understand if I don't feel like speaking with you right now." Rajani interrupts. It's not exactly a lie - her and Trevor likely would have spent the evening together despite not technically having any plans to - but it's still mostly said to get Jemma to shut up.

It thankfully works, and they walk in silence for over half of the patrol before the trouble starts.

Jemma hears it first - shouting near the Gryffindor Tower. She signals to Rajani before running off towards it.

Rajani takes a more sedate pace when following her patrol partner, so when she arrives Jemma is already neck-deep trying to sort things out.

Rajani recognizes Marcus Flint - a fourth year Chaser for the Slytherin quidditch team and one of Alasdair's favorites if she's remembering his ramblings about the team correctly - as one of the combatants but the two Gryffindor boys aren't familiar at first glance.

Flint and the stockier Gryffindor have their wands out and are yelling at each other, while the lanky red-head is nervously tugging at the other Gryffindor's arm, giving Jemma and Rajani a look that's an almost amusing mix of desperation and exasperation.

Jemma can't seem to get the two shouting boys' attention so Rajani pulls out her own wand and fires off a Caterwauling Charm. The shrieking very quickly gets everyone to stop screaming and starting cowering, including Jemma.

Rajani cancels the charm and puts her wand away. "Alright boys, wands away. It's after curfew and there's no dueling allowed in the halls regardless."

Both combatants hesitate, though the Gryffindor gives first when the red-head elbows him in the side. Flint only puts his wand away when Rajani glares directly at him.

"Good. Now first of all I'm taking five points from each of you for being out after curfew, so five from Slytherin and ten from Gryffindor." She doesn't give the boys a chance to argue. "Flint you're going to tell me what happened, and you two," She gestures at the Gryffindors, "Are going to talk to Jemma here. Then we're going to all three of you back to your dorms and report this to your Heads of House. I'll have no complaints, you're very clearly breaking the rules."

The Gryffindors follow Jemma a ways down the hall to give their version of events while Rajani drags Flint in the other direction.

"Wood started it. He got a smart mouth about the team. And my mum." He snaps. "I couldn't just leave that!"

"So you challenged him to a duel?" Rajani guesses, unimpressed and not hiding it.

"He challenged me. What am I supposed to do, not show? Slytherins aren't chickens."

"This could get you suspended from the team Flint." Rajani snaps. "Keep your disagreements on the field. And what's with the other kid? I'm remembering Wood a bit now but you didn't mention him at all. What was he, moral support?"

Flint looks away, flushing, and Rajani knows she's hit something that he hadn't shared before.

"I may have said something to the effect that those two are fags together." He grumbles.

Rajani's mind goes blank for a moment, then she slaps Flint. Hard.

"I don't care what you pull on the field. I don't care how many duels you try to have after curfew. But you never. Ever. Go after someone's uality, I don't care how much they piss you off. Wood had every right to be pissed for that comment. I won't tell Professor Snape this time but if I hear about you talking like that to anyone ever again I'm friends with Alasdair and I will have you benched. Are we clear?"

Flint has the decency to look ashamed. "Yeah, whatever. Weasley's not so bad anyway. I'll just deal with Wood on the field."

"There you go. We'll crush them next year yeah?" Rajani pats his shoulder. "You'll be sticking with Jemma and I until we get back to the common room then you go straight to your dorm."

They return the two boys to the Gryffindor Tower and Jemma fills Rajani in on their version of events after they drop of Flint, which match up with Marcus's for the most part though Wood had, of course, claimed that Flint had started things.

"I heard the same, though of course they're all pointing at each other as the catalyst. I propose we tell McGonagall and Snape that we aren't sure who started it and let them met out the punishment as they see fit."

Jemma nods quietly. "That sounds good to me."

She seems a bit odd, but Rajani doesn't think much of it until they've filed their reports with the professors and are about to part ways at the base of the dungeon staircase. That's when Jemma taps her shoulder hesitantly.

"I'm glad you were there today. I don't think I could have handled it that well - Flint never listens to anyone who isn't a Slytherin."

"It's just having a firm hand." Rajani says dismissively. "You would have figured it out." You're the perfect prefect after all.

Jemma smiles. "Thanks, but I don't think so. You did a really good job Rajani. I'm glad we were patrolling together." With that she turns and heads for the Hufflepuff common room.

Rajani blinks, and then shrugs. Jemma is always way too nice, and it's too late to bother analyzing the interaction. So she turns and heads back to her own common room, more than ready to pass out and end the day.

For all the stress leading up to it the Apparition test turns out to not be so bad.

Brandon is waiting outside the Great Hall when she, Evie, and Fitzwilliam emerge after the exam.

"So? How did you do?"

Franziska beams. "We passed!" And aside from that, she thinks, I'm really glad that we're friends again.

Turns out Evie had been correct - just walking up to Brandon and asking if he wanted to sit with them over the Christmas Break had been met with tentative acceptance, and things progressed naturally from there. It's still a bit awkward at times - she's learned that she can't joke about their relationship yet - but overall things are falling back into a more familiar routine and she's glad for it.

"It was easy." Evie declares proudly. She had gone home over the break and as such had missed the official reunion but has, in true Evie fashion, adapted admirably to the new person hanging around their group.

Brandon grumbles. "I start the class next week but I don't turn seventeen until June." He complains. "It that we can't just all get our lisences at the end of sixth year.

"You have to be of age." Fitzwilliam points out quietly. "Otherwise what's the point of even having the liscence? You couldn't use it until you turned seventeen anyways."

"And you'll get to Apparate home right after the test! How cool is that?" Evie adds with a grin.

They don't eat dinner together - with the whole school back they each stick with their own House during mealtimes - but Franziska doesn't mind so much as she gets into a conversation with Aidan and Leona about study habits and which ones are the most efficient.

Roderik asks her if she'll be helping with the weekend study group while some of his friends pester Jemma, and Franziska is still waffling on her answer when one of the Slytherin girls from their year walks over to Jemma and demands a conversation.

Franziska frowns after the girl and glances at Jemma who smiles reassuringly.

"Rajani Misra, she's one of my fellow prefects." She explains cheerfully. "I'm sure it's nothing to worry about."

Franziska still worries a bit, which is why she decides to stay up studying late that night - something she's learned that sixth and seventh years can get away with despite curfew being very clearly violated.

She's glad that she does - for one thing she finally thinks she understands the nonverbal theory they've been studying in Charms for the past several weeks, and for another Jemma looks about ready to cry when she walks into the common room after her patrol has ended.

Franziska immediately closes her textbook. "What happened?" She asks, half standing from the couch. Jemma shakes her head.

"Nothing, it's me. I'm just tired." She says, giving a distinctly unconvincing smile.

Franziska frowns at her. "Do you need to sleep before talking or are we talking now?" She asks in retaliation. "Come on, it's just me. We can talk to each other, right?"

Jemma sighs and settles on the couch a foot away from Franziska. "It really is nothing. Patrol was just rough. A couple younger years were fighting in the halls after curfew and I couldn't get control of the situation which is just frustrating."

Franziska shifts over so she can put a hand on Jemma's shoulder. "I'm sure you were just taken by surprise - you'll know what to do next time, right?"

Jemma sighs and buries her face in her hands, mumbling something that Franziska doesn't quite catch.

"Sorry, what?" She probes gently, and Jemma looks up, strained smile back in place.

"I know, you're right. Just frustrating. We should get to sleep, things always look brighter in the morning!" With that Jemma hops up and heads down the corridor to the dorms, leaving Franziska with nothing to do but gather her books and follow, resolving to check on Jemma again in the morning.

However, when morning comes Jemma is seemingly fine, cheerfully chatting with Cian and Donaghan about their band and a new song that Cian is working on.

Franziska eyes them suspiciously all through breakfast, and she's surprised when Donaghan approaches her after they've finished and most of their classmates head for the library or the common room to study and socialize.

"You stayed up late last night right? Did you see Jemma come in from patrol?"

Franziska is a little confused as to where the question is coming from. "Yeah I did. She seemed down then but she looks fine now?"

Donaghan shakes his head. "She's acting like it but she's still... I dunno, off. You think I should try to talk to her? You seem to know her better than anyone else in the House."

Franziska shrugs. "I think it can't hurt to try. Don't push her obviously, but if you can tell something's bothering her I think she won't be angry about you asking."

Donaghan nods. "Okay. Thanks Frannie."

"No problem, good luck. She was walled up pretty tightly last night." Franziska warns, and he nods in acknowledgement before hurrying to catch up with Jemma and Cian down the hall.

"What was all that about?" Kiera asks when Franziska walks over to join her and Tonks as they head for the greenhouses to study for Herbology.

Franziska jsut shrugs. "He had a question, I tried answering it as best I could. Any more detail than that would be probably infringing on someone's privacy."

Kiera hums. "Fair enough. So who wants to get the venomous tentaculas out because I'm calling not it right now."

As none of them have classes that morning they spend the entire day in Greenhouse twelve, affectionately nicknamed 'the helper house' by the many Hufflepuffs who use it for practical practice, studying the venomous tentaculas (and occasionally annoying the venomous tentaculas) until it's time for lunch.

Tonks and Franziska leave Kiera to pack things up since she hadn't helped to get anything out and walk back towards the castle, trudging through the foot of snow that still decorates the school's grounds.

"I saw you and Brandon are talking again. What's going on there?" Tonks asks, only to immediately trip and fall into a snowbank.

Franziska can't help giggling even as she helps her friend up. "That's what you get for attempting to take over Leona's job." She teases. "Anyway, there isn't anything going on there, we're just friends again. Trust me, I'm not dating him again, that ship has sailed, caught on fire, and sunk to the bottom of the ocean."

Tonks laughs. "Okay okay, I got it." She dries herself off with a flick of her wand and the two continue walking. "Then you're probably free for the Valentine's Hogsmeade weekend? Apparently Kiera and Tyler are going together so I've been ditched."

"So nice to know I'm the backup." Franziska jokes. "But sure, I'll go with you. We can make fun of the other couples." She blinks. "Wait, Tyler and Kiera are dating? When did that happen and how did I miss it?"

"Well you're spending a lot of time with the Ravenclaws lately." Tonks points out. "But honestly I think only Leona knew about it, and only because she somehow knows everything. Ty and Kiera have always been friends so I guess it was the next natural step for them? I dunno, I was as surprised as you honestly. Mind you I'm awful at that sort of stuff. Did you know one of the older Hufflepuffs tried to ask me out and I didn't know about it until Leona told me a year later? Honestly why people can't just be upfront about what they want is beyond me."

Franziska shrugs. "Not everyone is as unconcerned with their image as you are. Putting yourself out there is hard, especially when feelings are involved." She points out.

Tonks hums. "I guess. Well, whatever, when I like someone I'm just going to tell them, none of this wishy-washy nonsense."

Franziska just shakes her head in amusement. She can definitely see Tonks diving headfirst into romance - she just hopes it doesn't end up getting the Metamorphagus hurt.

Kiera catches up to them just as they reach the castle and Franziska can't resist asking her about Tyler.

Kiera grins, coloring slightly. "Oh well, it's not a date-date, more like a date with a question mark stuck to the end of it? We're just seeing if it would make sense."

Franziska is about to push for more information when she glances to her left and nearly trips over air (a feat usually reserved for the Metamorphagus to her right).

Donaghan had obviously had a lot more luck talking to Jemma than Franziska had if the fact they're currently kissing is anything to go by.

Kiera glances towards where she's looking and grins. "Aw, cute, Donny finally got the girl. He's been pining after her since we were thirteen."

"Didn't she just break up with that other guy?" Tonks asks, clearly confused.

Kiera scoffs. "Sure, almost a year ago. We can ask Leona but I'm pretty sure this is safely out of rebound range."

"I just don't get how it happened." Franziska says uncertainly as the three girls back away and try to not disturb the new couple. "Last night she was a mess and now she's jumping into a relationship? Isn't that generally a poor idea?"

"Her poor idea to execute on. We don't know the full story, this could very well be a great thing." Kiera points out and Tonks grins.

"You just really want them to be together, don't you?"

"Thirteen Tonks! He's liked her for three years, let me be happy for him! It's adorable!"

Franziska still feels a bit of hesitance towards the situation but she's hopeful that Jemma might explain it to her. At the very least she knows Donaghan doesn't have any bad intentions - the kid is way too much of a passive sweetheart for that.

She doesn't get a chance to talk to Jemma until after dinner that night. She looks for the blonde once her History of Magic class is over but the prefect isn't in her usual spots and even Evera and Drake aren't sure where she is (though Drake's sulkiness while responding makes Franziska think he might be actively avoiding information about his ex).

But finally she manages to grab her friend just as they're all exiting the Great Hall that night.

"Hey, can we talk?"

Jemma laughs. "I figured you might want to. Come on, let's find an empty classroom."

They walk in silence for a minute or so before Jemma starts talking, though Franziska can tell it's just to fill the silence.

"So I was tutoring a third year after History otherwise I would have stayed to talk to you then. Her name's Adeline, she's really sweet, maybe prefect material though I know it's probably early to think about that yet. You would like her, I think. You would like a lot of my students though - you already know Roderik right? He says you help him with Charms and Herbology sometimes."

"Jemma." Franziska interrupts, almost amused at the rambling. "Relax. How about here?" She gestures towards one of the empty rooms they're passing and Jemma nods.

The blonde takes a set across from the door, and Franziska sits on the chair in front of her, spinning so she's sitting on it backwards so she can face her friend.

"So. You and Donaghan." She prompts.

Jemma sighs. "He's really nice. And really cute. And I've kind of liked him for a while? But then Drake asked me out and I've told you about Drake already."

Franziska nods, giving no verbal response so as to not break up Jemma's thought process.

Jemma shifts in her chair. "So yeah, I don't know. We were talking about last night and I told him... well, last night wasn't the first time I've frozen up like that. I'm just... really bad at getting people to listen to me when they're angry I guess? I sort of freeze up and panic and all I could think was how both of the jobs I'm considering are really high stress and maybe I'm not cut out for either one."

Franziska is surprised when instead of sighing, Jemma actually smiles. "Donaghan told me that that was ridiculous and that he's seen me take control of situations plenty of times." She tilts her head back. "I don't know. It was really nice to hear someone having faith in me when all I could think about was everything I've ever done wrong when trying to help. So I kissed him. And he kissed back. And... I think I'm really happy about it? I don't know how to tell Evera and Drake but even that isn't really stressing me out yet."

Franziska studies her friend's face for a long moment before smiling tentatively. "Well... it sounds like you've got a lot to work through, but it also sounds like Donaghan is a good person to have around while you're doing that. And he's right, you can take charge, but I've noticed you're best at dealing with the aftermath of things rather than preemptively stopping things. No offense." She adds quickly and Jemma laughs.

"None taken, you might be right. I'm going to keep thinking about it, we have another year and a half after all."

"It goes by fast though." Franziska sighs. "To think, next June I'm going back to Germany permanently. I'm going to miss you guys."

Jemma hums. "I'm going to miss you too. All of you really, we've had a pretty awesome group in our House."

The two reminisce for several minutes before Jemma jumps out of her seat.

"Well what are we doing here moping around? All our friends are waiting in the common room right now - we can go talk to them! We can mope next year after graduation."

Franziska laughs and follows Jemma back towards the Hufflepuff common room. She knows her friend is right but it's still odd to think how soon they'll be finishing school and starting their adult lives. She wonders how many of her friends she'll really keep in touch with after they all graduate - cross-country communication is notoriously difficult.

She does her best to shake off the nostalgia as she and Jemma reach the common room entrance - Jemma is right that they still have a year and a half yet. And Franziska is going to make sure that the memories she makes are worth looking back on.

Jeez Louise I wrote Frannie's section in one shot on Saturday. So this has not been edited whatsoever (even on my 'non edited' chapters I do some quick fixes) since it was literally finished six hours before upload time. Still, a lot happened here and literally all of it is important (I mean, most of it is romance stuff but THERE'S SOME NON-ROMANCE STUFF OKAY). Next chapter will take us to the end of sixth year - and then we'll really be in the home stretch!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!