Chapter Twenty-One

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Silver Victories

The sixteenth of May dawns cool and clear, but despite the ideal weather the mood of the third year Gryffindor boys' dorm is grim.

Their Quidditch match against Hufflepuff is that afternoon, and no one is feeling particularly optimistic about it.

"Why couldn't Abbott have gotten sick a week later?" Evera grumbles as the members of the Quidditch team trudge down to the Great Hall for an early breakfast. "At least our last game would be a win if we were playing Ravenclaw like we're supposed to be."

Laurel has scheduled an early practice for the team. In her words, they're going to put on a damn good final showing.

Myr gets it. This is Laurel's final chance to show her skills as Captain, and she wants to make sure it's a good impression. But with exams starting in two weeks Myr is having a hard time focusing on the game when his grades are barely scraping passed 'passing' in every class that requires more than just theoretical knowledge of their subjects.

Nonetheless he stumbles sleepily through breakfast and follows the rest of the team down to the pitch without a complaint. With the game being today, he wasn't realistically going to get much rest anyway. The whole school is likely going to the game as one last hurrah before exams, and Myr knows that even inside the crowd will be loud enough to be distracting.

"Come on team, brooms down, five laps around the pitch!" Laurel is already running, and Charlie cheerfully takes off after her. On the entire team only he genuinely seems to enjoy Laurel's nightmarish warmups.

The rest of them take off at varying paces and enthusiasm. It takes twenty minutes for Remi - always the slowest, though Myr thinks that these days it's more out of protest than actual lacking fitness - to finish his laps, and they they're up in the air and Laurel is calling maneuvers with every breath.

It's honestly quite an enjoyable practice - fast-paced and intense, the best kind in Myr's opinion. If you're dodging bludgers every few seconds you can't be distracted by academic concerns.

After two hours Laurel ends the practice and tells them to shower and change into their uniforms before lunch. Brandon catches up with the Gryffindor boys just outside the locker rooms.

"Hey, how'd it go? What would you say Kent's block score is? Any chance it's gone up because-"

"You really want your first date with Frannie as an official couple to be a win for Gryffindor, yeah, we know." Charlie grins, tired but still cheerful. "Though wouldn't a win either way be bad for you two? Or is she less intense about Quidditch so her House losing wouldn't sting as much?"

Brandon shrugs. Ever since he and Franziska had made things official the week before he's been nearly insufferable, talking about almost nothing else. Myr thinks it's kind of cute personally, and he wonders if his sister had been the same way about Dylan. It would certainly explain why his mother and Uncle were so annoyed with the man (even if Myr doesn't really like him either despite having missed this portion of their relationship).

"She's less intense than me anyway, but I guess she would be disappointed for Hufflepuff to lose, wouldn't she?" He frowns. "Maybe we should have skipped this and studied by the lake instead."

Charlie punches his shoulder lightly. "Don't you dare. You have to come support us, all of Gryffindor is."

"All the more reason we have to win." Evera sighs. She's been trailing behind the group slightly, with Fiona attempting to engage her in conversation and decidedly failing.

"We don't have to." Fiona offers uncertainly. "We just need to do our best."

"We does not really include you." Evera snaps, and Fiona frowns.

Charlie quickly steps forward. "Evera was that really necessary?" He asks pointedly. "Fiona is as much a part of the team as you are."

Evera mumbles an apology, and Fiona gives her a smile in response.

"We're all stressed out about this." Charlie says decidedly. "But all we can do is our best, and if we overthink it that best could be impacted negatively."

The group reaches the dorms at this point, and the girls split off to grab their uniforms out of their rooms. Myr heads to his own dorm to do the same, closely followed by the rest of the Gryffindor boys.

Brandon even tags along, and Myr can't help but laugh when he sees his roommate pull on a Hufflepuff scarf.

Brandon just sticks his tongue out, unashamed. "I gave mine to Badger a while ago, so she gave me hers to make sure I stay warm."

"Winter is over Young." Drake teases. "What good is a scarf going to do you?"

"I'm giving it back." Brandon rolls his eyes at him. "But just for a bit. She said she had an idea so I'm giving it to her at the game."

"Hey, which section are you sitting in?" Evera appears in the doorway, dressed in her uniform and apparently unbothered by the fact most of the boys are still changing. Myr dives behind his bed, blushing heavily and very nearly using a word his mother had strictly forbidden.

Drake doesn't have as much restraint, and Charlie gives a quick "language!" even as he scrambles to get his robes buttoned properly.

"What are you doing here Evera? This is the guys' room!" Drake hisses at her.

Evera waves him off. "Oh whatever, your pants are all on." She points out. "But seriously, Brandon, have you and Frannie talked about this? Holly mentioned it and I realized it's actually quite important."

Brandon hesitates. "Um, we're going to sit with you guys at lunch, but we're sitting with Leona and the other Hufflepuffs during the actual game." He mumbles. "Franziska said she wants to sit with Leona one more time before she becomes the commentator next year."

Evera frowns dangerously. "Seriously? This game is huge for Laurel and Gryffindor, and you're sitting with the Hufflepuffs?"

"I'm sitting with my girlfriend!" Brandon counters irritably. "You know what, I'll see you all at lunch. I'm going to go meet up with Badger." Her grumbles, draping the scarf over his shoulders and storming past Evera.

Drake frowns. "That was a little harsh Ev." He points out.

She huffs out an irritated breath. "It was a legitimate question!" She grumbles.

Myr blinks. "You're acting like Holly on one of her off weeks!" He accuses, and then frowns in confusion when Evera blushes instead of shouting at him.

"I... I am not! Ugh, finish changing, we'll see you in the Great Hall." She mumbles, suddenly in a hurry to get out of the room.

Myr blinks again before shrugging and proceeding to put on the rest of his uniform.

Lunch is a bit of a blur for Myr. He loses track of the number of unfamiliar faces coming up to him and wishing him luck. He knows Laurel sits to his left and he thinks Eric is next to her, but otherwise he's rather jumbled on who's seated where as everyone is discussing strategy in low tones while the non-players make extra-loud small talk to prevent eavesdropping.

Myr is pretty sure he's caught at least the parts pertaining to him, but all too soon they're in the air and he's swinging to drive a bludger away from taking off Cassidy's head with no real concept of what he's supposed to be doing.

"Good job Myr!" Laurel calls.

Apparently he's doing fine though.

The game is as intense as everyone had expected it to be, and Myr is glad he's already learned how to tune out the crowd because their screams are nearly deafening.

He's thankful for all the work he and Laurel have done with non-verbal communication on the field because he's pretty sure he wouldn't be able to hear any plays she calls through the pounding in his ears even if the crowd wasn't making verbal communication impossible.

He eventually is able to focus enough to process the game at a conscious level, though he's rather glad to learn he's apparently good enough to be able to hold his own even when flying on autopilot. He zones in just in time to deflect a bludger that one of the Hufflepuff beaters has fired at him, and Laurel redirects it again towards Lola, who's flitting around Charlie in a way that's clearly irritating the Gryffindor Seeker.

Laurel gestures to him quickly, and Myr dives as directed, looping back around and scanning the players over him to see if he can find the other bludger.

Too late, he spots it hurtling towards Evera, who's too distracted by a pass to Jacob to see it coming.

The whole thing seems to play out in slow motion, and it's not the first time Myr has seen one of his teammates fall off their brooms, but it's the first time they're unconscious. It's the first time they can't catch themselves.

Evera falls almost twenty feet before Laurel manages to get across the pitch to snatch her out of the air. Coach Crowell is blowing his whistle repeatedly, and all at once everything come crashing back down and time speeds up again for Myr.

Laurel has Evera held tightly against her torso with one hand, the other maintaining balance on her broom. She's spiraling down towards the ground slowly, where Madame Pompfrey is already waiting.

Myr stays aloft after checking what the rest of the team is doing. One of the Hufflepuffs is crying, and Myr spots the bat in her hand.

She probably hit the bludger. He realizes, and he coaxes his broom up a few feet so he's level with her.

"It happens." He offers quietly. "It was my bad not reacting in time."

She looks over, tears still falling and mouth still twisted downwards, not really responding.

"It's not your fault. Ev will be fine, she's tough." He states more firmly. "If you want you can go down and make sure." He's not sure she actually can, but he thinks she probably needs it. It looks like she's probably a second year and this can't be a great start to her time on the team.

She looks at him uncertainly, but then starts descending. His eyes drift past her to focus on Evera and Laurel, now on the ground, and it suddenly hits him that the pitch has gone rather quiet. Which is odd really, even when Kent had been taken out the year before the Quidditch pitch is never completely quiet, not when there are people in the stands.

Myr finally looks around at the rest of the players, and realizes with a jolt that Lola has her fist clasped around something, though she looks less pleased about it than she normally would. Charlie doesn't seem to have even noticed, eyes still locked onto the people below.

Finally, as Laurel begins to remount, Lola holds up her hand, the golden Snitch flashing in the sunlight, and the stands erupt once again.

Myr doesn't bother with the formalities, heading straight to the lockers as soon as his feet touch the ground.

"How is she?" He asks Laurel when she walks in behind him. Being captain, she had stuck around the pitch long enough to shake hands with the Hufflepuff captain and check in on the still-sobbing beater before coming in.

Laurel shrugs. "It could have been a lot worse. Coach Crowell would have caught her if I hadn't. She's staying in the Hospital Wing overnight but it looks like it's just a mild concussion." She smiles faintly. "She'll have to take her exams later most likely."

"She'll love that." Myr grins in relief.

Laurel laughs faintly. "Until she's inside taking tests while everyone else is enjoying the last week before summer." She points out.

Things simmer down pretty quickly after that. No one is feeling very celebratory, naturally, and most of the team check in with Evera in the hospital wing before heading to their common rooms or the library to really buckle down and get ready for the upcoming exams.

Myr is happy when Kent decides to buckle down next to him. Ever since the midterm exams, Evera's older brother has been doing his best to help Myr out with his studies whenever they both have time. It's been extremely helpful, and while practical spells are still often beyond Myr's capabilities, his written and theoretical work has improved noticeably.

He just hopes it's enough to pass the year. He's heard stories about people having to repeat years and he honestly really doesn't want to lose his friends and have to get to know an entirely new group of students. School is hard enough without the added social stigma of being a failure.

Kent is sympathetic, and as a sixth year he doesn't actually have any major final exams, just a few comprehension checks to be sure he's on track for his NEWTs, which means he's dedicating most of his time to working with Myr on the practicals for the third year's exams.

"You're doing really well, and your spell work is at least becoming more consistent." Kent encourages him after one of their study sessions on the weekend after the final Quidditch match. "And you're getting a new wand this summer, right?"

Myr nods, rubbing his wrist lightly.

Kent grins at the motion. "Break time?"

Myr just nods again.

The two decide to swing by the kitchens, which Myr hadn't actually known the location of until Kent had showed him after a Quidditch practice some weeks before. They grab a light snack from the house elves, who are helpful as ever and a few even wish them luck on their exams.

School becomes a blur from there, as classes begin to shift focus onto review material and the library steadily becomes more crowded as the procrastinators finally begin studying properly for the upcoming exams. Myr eventually moves his primary study spot to one of the abandoned classrooms on the fourth floor.

He can feel his stress levels rising as the exams creep closer: his temper shortens, his patience with his friends become more brittle, and generally socializing is far more exhausting than it's worth most days.

So he holes up and studies the same spells over and over again, praying it will be good enough to scrape by, praying that his new wand will magically fix him.

But he can't quite escape the voice at the back of his mind, whispering that no wand is ever going to make up for the many ways he fails.

Exam periods are always hectic, and third year even more so. But Franziska hadn't had midterms for all of her classes, so she's still taken somewhat off guard at exactly how much studying she needs to do for her eight finals.

On the bright side most of her core classes are simple, practical applications of the spells they've been studying, and applied magic is always easier than written essays or tests, but both Muggle Studies and Ancient Runes are theoretical at best, so with those and Potions she has at least three classes in a format she's far less comfortable with.

It's times like these she's particularly glad that she was sorted into Hufflepuff. Aside from the fact their common room is quite spacious, everyone is more than happy to help out with studying. The sixth years, being the least stressed out, are scattered between the younger years, helping with concepts that don't make sense and checking on wand technique.

Franziska is sprawled out on the floor the day before exams start, poring over her Herbology notes and checking her recollection by gazing around the common room and naming all the plants she can.

Leona is flopped over next to her, groaning over her Care of Magical Creatures textbook. She has three exams the next day and until about an hour prior she'd been reviewing Charms with Franziska in preparation for their other exam.

"Why on earth is this exam tomorrow? We don't even normally have Care of Magical Creatures on Monday." The brunette whines pitifully, rolling onto her back so her words aren't muffled by the picture of billywigs in front of her.

One of the sixth years overhears from where she's sat with a group of second years, coaching them on the unlocking charm and she looks over with a small smile.

"Professor Kettleburn is taking next week off for an expedition in South America." She explains lightly. "So he moved his exams. You'll probably be with all four Houses tomorrow so get ready for some chaos."

Not for the first time Franziska is quietly glad she got into Ancient Runes. Care of Magical Creatures sounds like a disaster waiting to happen most days as far as she can tell.

Leona glances up curiously. "Really? He didn't mention anything to our class."

The sixth year shrugs, quickly fixing one of the second year's grip before looking back over. "It was said in passing a couple weeks ago to the seventh years. I only know because Hunter helps me study during prefect meetings sometimes and he mentioned it. It sounds like it was all pretty last minute. I just hope he doesn't lose anymore limbs." She laughs.

Leona snorts, though Franziska fails to see what's so funny. Bodily injury doesn't strike her as particularly amusing.

Leona nudges her arm lightly. "Chill Frannie, it's a joke Professor Kettleburn always makes. We have permission." She teases gently.

The sixth year gives them one last smile and then returns her full attention to the second years, one of whom has set the floor on fire.

"That wasn't supposed to do that." She mumbles sheepishly, and Franziska bites down on a groan of annoyance when she recognizes Saundra Campbell as the perpetrator.

Thankfully the fire is put out quickly, but Franziska relocates from the common room after that. She needs full focus if she wants to get through the week unscathed, and Saundra has never been particularly conducive to effective concentration.

The next day she wakes up almost half an hour earlier than she normally does, the familiar knots in her stomach reminding her that it's the first day of exams. Instead of trying to fight for an additional few minutes of sleep she kicks off her blankets and pulls out her Potions textbook, going back through the recipes she'd marked the night before that she isn't quite confident with yet.

The dorm wakes up around her, and the girls are all more alert than usual as test stress awakens them faster than normal. Tonks joins Franziska on her bed, skimming the book over the German girl's shoulder.

"I'm going to fail." The Metamorphagus groans miserably. "Snape has it out for me and I can never remember the final ingredient for the Confusing Concoction."

"It is rather confusing." Kiera quips cheerfully. Of the group she's the only one who hasn't pulled out review material to look over while they change, a picture of relaxation amidst an otherwise tense room.

The rest of them groan as they finally pack up their study materials and head up to the common room. They spend a few minutes comparing notes with the guys before heading for the Great Hall. On the way there, someone tugs at Franziska's sleeve and she turns to find Roderik looking back nervously.

"Um, after exams today do you think we could go over some Potions?" He asks uncertainly. "I didn't do well on the midterm and Professor Snape scares me." He adds even softer, and Franziska smiles gently.

"He scares all of us honestly." She says warmly. "Of course I'd be happy to help Rod."

He offers a smile before hurrying away to sit with the other first year Hufflepuffs, and Franziska internally beams that he'd sought her out for help and not a prefect. She quite likes the reserved first year after all and is proud he sees her as a responsible and helpful older figure.

"Ready to die?" Kiera is still cheerily joking after they finish their breakfast and head down to the dungeons for their Potions final. She's met with several groans and Franziska thinks she sees Tonks threaten to throw something at her friend but she's not entirely sure.

Despite everyone's extreme nervousness, the exam really isn't that bad. Franziska pairs up with Jemma and while they nearly run out of time to complete their potion due to being the last two to finish the written portion, Franziska feels pretty good about their final product, placing the labelled bottle on Snape's desk and heading out of the room with less lingering dread than Potions class normally produces.

Of course, Snape had also spent less time looming over them menacingly so that may have contributed.

Charms is in the afternoon, and is significantly less nerve wracking. Franziska finishes early and decides to enjoy a walk around the courtyard before heading back to the common room to meet up with Roderik. She's not joined by anyone - Brandon is still in his Potions final - but the silence is honestly relaxing.

She works with Roderik for a little over an hour before Brandon insists on dragging her away to work on Ancient Runes for their exam the next morning. It's more efficient than their normal study sessions, as Brandon is significantly behind Franziska in comprehension for the class.

After dinner she retires to the common room as despite it being against her better judgement. She feels pretty solid about Muggle Studies though, so she's relatively certain that even if she is disturbed she'll still do well on the exam the following afternoon.

She goes to bed earlier than she normally would, but she wants to be properly rested, especially if her mind is going to keep waking itself up early from nerves during the week.

Her plan somewhat backfires when she wakes up a solid hour early. Sighing, she goes up into the common room and goes through her Ancient Runes notes one last time before looking around the room naming as many plants and their functions as she can. She's pleased when she's able to get a majority of them, and resolves to spend her afternoon going over History of Magic and Transfiguration instead of Herbology, despite the two exams not being until Thursday.

All in all the exams for the day go decently well, though she feels much better about Muggle Studies than Ancient Runes.

She ends up not studying at all in the afternoon, instead sitting by the Black Lake with Brandon, holding hands and discussing the Ancient Runes test. They also share the occasional kiss and Franziska thinks she rather likes those and will probably miss them during the summer.

"We should go to Diagon Alley together." She suggests, eyeing a suspicious rippling at the center of the lake. "Or do something about the distance. I don't want to overwork Rudi flying letters back and forth."

"We can use Muggle mail as well, I think I know how it works." Brandon offers, and Franziska beams at him. Of course, why hadn't she thought of that? "But yeah, it would be nice to see each other in person. Maybe I can talk to Charlie. We're all going to his house for the last couple weeks of summer vacation."

Franziska immediately shakes her head. She's heard Aidan talking about that as well, and she really isn't interested in imposing on what is clearly supposed to be male bonding time. "Oh no I wouldn't want to impose. I was just thinking I could come in a few days early and we could see the city together and do our school shopping then."

Brandon hums thoughtfully. "That does sound nice." He admits. "I'll talk to my dad. And Charlie, since if I'm meeting with you then I'll be leaving his house early."

They while away the time until the sun is dipping towards the horizon and Kiera and Leona hunt them down and announce that dinner is being served.

The next morning Franziska once again wakes up early, and immediately curses her brain for doing so.

"Frannie, why are you up? You don't have Divination this morning." Henry point out when she joins him, Tyler, Tonks, and Jemma in the Great Hall for an early breakfast.

She shrugs blearily. "Too into the routine. I'll learn how to sleep in again next week." She promises, and Tonks laughs.

"Girl your brain works in really weird ways. I don't know any other fourteen year olds who'd pass up a chance to sleep in."

Franziska retires to the library afterwards, doing a quick review of Herbology before diving into History of Magic. She doesn't quite have the dates of the European witch hunts in order and she's mentally kicking herself for letting herself get away with putting it off for so long. She ends up spending the rest of her morning focused on that and resolves to do her Transfiguration review in the evening after the Herbology final.

The Herbology exam naturally goes quite well. She pairs up with Jemma, and the two of them finish nearly an hour early so they take the time to double check all their work before leaving it in the greenhouse for grading and head back into the castle.

"I feel like I've barely seen you this year." Jemma smiles as they make their way back to the common room.

Franziska laughs awkwardly. "Sorry about that. It's been a crazy year." She observes, and Jemma nods.

"Study for Transfiguration with?" She suggests, and Franziska is happy to agree.

The two girls move to the library after Saundra Caldwell manages to somehow conjures a rainstorm in the middle of the common room, but aside from that distraction they get quite a bit accomplished before heading to the Great Hall for dinner.

"Where have you two been? Brandon was bugging me for hours." Aidan greets them with amusement. "Not straying already are we Frannie?"

Franziska blushes at the implications, feeling a twist of discomfort at the thought. Jemma however, just laughs it off and sits next to Henry, leaving Franziska to take the seat beside Aidan.

"I'll find him after dinner." She promises the red-headed boy, and Aidan grins and nudges her.

"Hey I'm just teasing. You and Brandon are cute, even if he has gotten way less fun since you started dating."

Jemma shoots him a look from where she's started to eat. "Backhanded compliment much?" She observes almost dryly, but she's smiling at her food.

Franziska keeps her promise anyway, finding Brandon at the Gryffindor table and chatting with him for nearly an hour in front of the Great Hall.

"See you in Transfiguration in the morning?" He asks hopefully as she starts back to the common room.

She smiles and gives him a quick peck goodnight. "Of course. Get enough sleep tonight, okay? I know you zone in the afternoon if you don't and you need to be focused for History as well."

He grumbles good naturedly but agrees and Franziska finally gets back to her dorm, taking her own advice and retiring early after an additional two hours of review with the other girls in their room.

The next day Brandon ends up following her for the entire day. Franziska lets him - they only have a little over a week before she's back to Germany after all, and she's going to miss him over the summer.

Transfiguration goes well, but she knows she tripped on a few of the dates for History of Magic despite her and Brandon going back over the important ones right before going in to the exam. She finishes her essay just as the allotted time finishes and she meets back up with Brandon outside of the classroom.

"Hey, how did it go?" He asks brightly, clearly much more confident in his own work than she is with hers.

She shrugs. "Decently I suppose. I'll pass at least but I think I'll need to redo my study schedule next year if I want to keep up."

He slings an arm around her comfortingly. "Well, only one exam left, right? Defense tomorrow afternoon, and I can help you study during lunch since I have it in the morning!"

She smiles at his enthusiasm. "Alright, but we're both studying for it now." She says firmly, and he easily agrees.

The don't really get all that much studying done, but Franziska is feeling more than ready for Defense as it's been her best class this year. She quite likes Professor Addison and will be sad to see him go, but he's already handed in his resignation. She just wishes he'd tell them why he's leaving.

"I heard his wife got sick and they're going Stateside to try and get better care. She's a Muggle so magic-ing it away isn't exactly an option." Brandon says when she brings up the topic during their 'study' session. "And America's medical system is faster if you've got money, which I guess they must have."

Franziska frowned. "Oh, that's awful! I hope she gets better then." She sighs. "And that next year's teacher is as good as Professor Addison."

Brandon nods idly in agreement and they move back to trying to actually study.

In the end it doesn't affect anything as Franziska breezes through the final with no problems at all.

"Go well?" Brandon grins when she practically skips out of the classroom.

She beams at him. "Let's just say it's a good ending to the year."

He grins in return, something mischievous lingering in his gaze. "It's not over yet Badger."

She laughs as he pulls her down the corridor and out into the Courtyard. Not a bad end to the year at all.

All in all Raj thinks it's a pretty good end to what has been a rather emotional roller coaster of a year.

Ed had burst into the common room Sunday evening, rudely interrupting what had been a very entertaining chess tournament to announce that he'd gotten a look at the final point count and Slytherin once again is in the lead.

Rajani really hopes they manage to win the Cup again - having both the Quidditch championship as well as the House Cup would really be something. Even her parents would be proud of that.

"Three years in a row? Not too bad a streak." Mayra grins from the couch. She'd failed out of the tournament early on, but unlike most of the other loser has stuck around to cheer for Sahana. "You kids have to keep it up, you hear?"

"No pressure or anything." Eugene quips from one of the loveseats that he and Queenie are sharing. The room laughs as the games Ed had interrupted slowly start back up.

Ed takes the open spot on the floor next to Rajani, who thinks idly that she might once have been embarrassed to be caught lying on the ground like a commoner but now she just grins over at her friend.

"Excellent news." She greets as he flips onto his back to match her position.

"Indeed." He agrees cheerily. "You look much more relaxed today. Exams go well?"

"My parents shouldn't know a thing." She confirms happily. While finals had naturally been extremely stressful, she's actually quite happy with all of them, and is confident her grades will be passable for her parents. "I feel bad for Sahana and Mayra though, they aren't getting their NEWT results back all summer and I just know my mother is going to drop in on them unannounced the moment the grades are released."

Ed snorts. "Hopefully it's not an inconvenient time." He grins knowingly, and for once Rajani wonders if she might finally know what that smile means.

Not that she's talked to Sahana about her suspicions, though she probably should before they get back home.

"Hopefully." She settles on the safe answer, glance over at where Mayra is shrieking in victory as Sahana gains another win in the tournament. "It will be odd, I think. Being an only child."

Ed grins lightly. "Hey, take it from someone who's already had one sibling move out - it's not as game changing as you think it's going to be. There will be a little more attention than usual for a while but then things fall back into their same old pattern."

Rajani grimaces. "I'm not sure even a small amount of time will be managable. My parents are rather intense."

"So I've gathered." Ed glances over, and then turns onto his stomach so he's right next to Rajani. "Tell you what, any time they get to be too much you can send me a huge rant about it. That can help, trust me."

She grins. "I may just take you up on that, but you remember that you offered, so no backing out when you get a mountain of letters."

Ed grins right back. "Well I will look forward to that." He responds cheekily, and Rajani can't help but laugh.

The rest of the weekend is similarly relaxed, and Rajani wishes school could always be this way. It's certainly better than the looming return to her parent's house - and without an older sister to talk to.

These thoughts are what push Rajani to finally ask Sahana if they can talk. She doesn't miss the way Mayra watches them leave, traces of concern clear in her expression despite her clearly trying to hide them.

"Rajani. What is this about?" Sahana asks once they're safely at the top of the Astronomy Tower, far from any possible eavesdroppers.

Rajani hesitates, and then clears . "Um, I was hoping I could stay with you and Mayra at some point during the summer? I think it would be good for me to get to know the city, and it's closer to Eugene and Queenie as well-"

"That wouldn't be a good idea." Sahana cuts her off immediately. "Mayra and I will only just be getting settled and who knows what the land lord will think. I'm sorry."

Rajani frowns, and then remembers her conversation with Ed. "If I stayed with you long enough our parents likely wouldn't see a need to check in often, if at all." She points out. "And they'll certainly not be opposed to the idea of me seeing Queenie and Eugene more often so it's completely up to you."

Sahana makes a face. "No wonder you manage to get away with so much." She sighs. "Look, you make excellent points..." She sighs again. "Let me ask Mayra. It's her place as well after all."

Rajani beams. "I promise you won't even know that I'm there!" She promises. "And um, Sahana?"

Her sister, who has started back down the stairs, turns with irritation clear on her features. "Yes Rajani?"

Rajani shifts slightly and then clears . "You know I won't tell our parents, right? I mean, I nearly failed a class this year but they have no idea."

Sahana blinks and then shakes her head in amusement. "I know Raj. You're finally growing up. But I really do need to ask Mayra."

Rajani smiles. "Right, of course! Just tell me what she says."

Queenie is thrilled by the idea when Rajani mentions it at breakfast the next morning.

"Imagine being only a few minutes walk from each other! We could hang out so much more!" She gushes excitedly. "I'll show you all around Muggle London! It's really something, even Eugene was impressed last summer by the castles we looked at."

"They were decently constructed. I still say they must have used magic for it." Eugene offers his input after swallowing the last of his English muffin.

Queenie rolls her eyes. "We've been over this sweetie, Muggles didn't have magic. Rules were more lax back then about the division between us and them but there were still divisions. Muggles did most things themselves."

Eugene shrugs towards Rajani, piling more food onto his plate. Rajani just laughs.

"That sound amazing Queenie, though perhaps we don't tell my parents we'll be looking at Muggle history during our visits." She smiles, and her friend laughs.

"Deal. I really hope Sahana and Mayra let you stay with them, this summer will be so much fun!"

Rajani doesn't get an answer from her sister right away though. While she's waiting she spends time out and around the castle with her friends - playing some final pranks with Elspeth and Nia, flying around the Quidditch pitch with Lenox and Eugene, and lazing around by the black lake with Ed. During this week of relaxing, their final grades are returned, and Rajani is thrilled to see she passed everything.

"Ancient Runes is my lowest grade, but an A is an A." She says happily. "And the rest of my grades are exceeds expectations or outstanding." She adds, "So my parents really can't make too big of a deal over one A."

Clary smiles ruefully. "I'm glad I don't have your parents Raj, if my dad was that strict on grades I'd probably be permanently grounded."

Finn - who for once is actually sitting with the rest of them instead of with the older or younger Slytherins - glances over her shoulder to take a look at her grades. "Well, at least Care of Magical Creatures is an elective." He states, and Clary yanks her grades away from him.

"Ever heard of personal space?" She grumbles. "But yeah, looks like I'm down to just one elective now. At least I like Divination more."

Eugene snorts. "You failed Care of Magical Creatures?"

Clary glares at him. "I got a P, so it's barely a fail." She grumbles. "At least I won't have to get all dirty twice a week any more."

Rajani smiles supportively over at her friend. "You always complained about that class anyway." She encourages. "Now you can focus on the stuff you actually like!"

Sahana chooses that moment to walk over to their group. "How did you do Raj?"

Rajani hasn't missed that her sister is using her nickname far more often since their talk in the Astronomy Tower, and she's hoping it's a good sign. "One A in Ancient Runes, but E or higher in the rest." She reports, and Sahana nods.

"Mayra thinks that you could stay with us for a few weeks in July if that's acceptable."

Rajani lights up. "Really? Thank you Sahana! I promise I'll be out most of the time anyway."

Sahana smiles faintly but it's clear she's still a little uncertain about the situation. "Well, good. I'll write mother and father to iron out details once Mayra and I are settled in."

As Sahana walks away Clary spins towards Rajani with wide, excited eyes. "You're going to be staying in central London this summer? Girl we need to hang out then!"

Rajani laughs. "I'll tell you dates then when we have them." She promises.

Queenie is pouting. "We already have plans though!" She points out.

Clary sticks her tongue out. "I'll join you then." She says with finality. "I'm bored in the summers anyway."

Rajani lets out a laugh as the two begin debating what they should actually do and which parts of Muggle London are worth seeing.

That afternoon finds her with Ed by the lake, and she happily tells him about her grades.

"Good job Raj." He congratulates her. "A lot of kids drop Ancient Runes honestly, it's one of the harder classes. Even Arithmancy doesn't really get intense until NEWT level."

Rajani beams at the praise. "Speaking of that, you better tell me when you get your OWL results back. I need to know which classes you at so that I know not to study for them your way."

Ed barks out a surprised laugh. "You are very different than when I first met you." He remarks. "It's a good thing." He quickly adds when she tosses him a look. "You're more confident with yourself."

Rajani smiles hesitantly. "Well, I wouldn't say you had nothing to do with that. So thanks I guess."

He grins in return and they laze in the sun for a while longer before Rajani heads to the training grounds to meet with Lenox for a quick flight around the castle. He'd invited her the evening before and it will be the first time the two of them have flown without Eugene around since tryouts at the start of the year. Needless to say, Rajani is looking forward to seeing if she can keep up with him this time.

"You're trying out for the team again next year, right? We need a good Chaser to replace Mayra." Lenox asks hopefully as they loop around the statues decorating the top of the West Tower.

Rajani hesitates. "Honestly I'm not sure." She finally replies. "After how close I came to failing a class this year I'm thinking I should be focusing more on school. Making the team would be wonderful, but also be an extra time sink that I no longer think I actually have the energy for." She answers honestly, and she feels a bit bad when she sees how disappointed the response makes Lenox.

"Oh, well, I'm sure Alas will be happy to hear that. If you don't try out then he'll almost definitely get the spot."

Rajani smiles at the thought. "That might be ideal actually. I think he's always cared more about Quidditch than I have anyway." She looks over. "I'll still bring my broom to school though, so I expect more of these flights around the grounds whether or not I'm on the team, okay?"

That lifts Lenox's spirits and the two spend the rest of their journey discussing their plans for the summer.

"I wish I lived closer to you all." Lenox sighs as they land back on the Training Grounds and head towards the castle. "I'd love to spend time with everyone over the summer."

"Well I know that if you sent Eugene Quidditch tickets he'd have no problem convincing his mom and uncle to let him stay with you up in Montrose for a few days." She points out, and Lenox looks thoughtful.

"I may just do that. Or maybe I'll invite Cad and Alas, from what I can tell neither of them are big on staying at home during the summers."

Rajani tilts her head curiously. "You're friends with Cadfael and Alasdair? I honestly didn't think that was possible." She jokes lightly, and Lenox grins obligingly.

"We're roommates at least, and they're not so bad when you get past the rough edges."

The next day is the last day of the year, and Rajani finds herself attempting to spend time with every single one of her friends before the Feast that night. Ed and the other prefects have officially confirmed that Slytherin has once again won the House Cup, and the whole House is in the common room having an impromptu victory party.

"Three year streak! You kids better keep it up!" One of the seventh years, who's clearly had too much firewhiskey, slurs as he stumbles over to where Rajani and most of the third years are seated.

"Sure thing boss." Eugene quips, and another seventh year hurries over to drag the drunk boy away.

"Sorry about him," Rajani is surprised when she recognizes the newcomer. She hasn't really seen Keaton Avery other than in passing since his family had come to her parent's party nearly two years prior. Keaton glances over at her and smiles briefly before leading his drunk roommate across the common room towards the dorms.

Eugene waves as they leave. "I"m surprised Keaton is even here, but I guess he was in charge of keeping an eye on Harold." He observes cheerfully.

"I think everyone is here. I mean we won the Quidditch and House Cups this year." Clary grins. "We've got a lot to celebrate!"

"And it's just about to do that formally." Sahana has appeared behind them, and Rajani jumps. "It's about time to wrap up and head to the Great Hall." She tells them, and upon looking around Rajani can see that all six prefects are gathering people up and sending them towards the door.

Queenie loops her arm through Rajani's, and grabs Eugene with her other.

"Gloating time!" Eugene cries cheerfully, snagging Clary into their little chain, which expands to include both Nia and Elspeth shortly after.

Laughing, Rajani decides to throw caution to the wind and grabs onto Lenox, adding him to their line up and giggling at his look of surprise. She ends up choking on her own amusement when Lenox pulls Alasdair into the mess, stunned to see her usually bored-looking Housemate grinning. Alasdair even grabs Cadfael, who looks quite irritated but Rajani thinks she might see the faint hint of a smile on his face when he turns away, sagging in defeat and letting himself be pulled along.

Finn joins them sometime between leaving the common room and entering the Great Hall, and the third year Slytherin class bursts into the silver and green covered dining hall laughing and shouting, and all linked together. They get several odd and annoyed looks from the rest of the Houses, though their fellow Slytherins all look amused.

But Rajani for once could care less about the anger directed at them from the rest of the school. There's a spring in her step and a lightness that she hasn't felt since her midterm examinations blew up in her face. Slytherin has had a great year.

And nothing is going to stop her from celebrating until it's time to go home.

Ana sits with the seventh year girls on the train ride back. She'd considered that they wouldn't want her around, due to them being fully graduated now and her still with four years to complete, but Hannah, Josie, and Sarah had all insisted she sit with them, and Eric had mentioned he'd like to see her during the train ride to say goodbye as well, so she's planning to find him on the platform before she leaves with her parents.

"I can't believe we're really done!" Josie cries happily, flopped across the seat so her feet are up against the window and her head is in Sarah's lap. "We're real adults now ladies!"

"Some of us are anyway. Jury is still out on your maturity levels." Hannah teases lightly.

Ana sits quietly by the window, uncertain how tactless it would be to mention that she's not done just yet.

"I do believe Ana is higher on that particular scale." Sarah notes wryly, grinning down at her friend when Josie makes and offended noise in the back of .

Ana smiles faintly. "I do think I'll miss you all next year. Aidan is quite a good companion but I can't exactly have meals with him."

Sarah looks up. "You should sit with Willow." She says, her eyes lighting up in the way they do whenever she's struck by a new idea. "She's Laurel's younger sister, prefect, likely  future Head Girl. I think you two would get along well enough to have meals together." She grins teasingly. "Unless you want to sit with your year mates?"

Ana grimaces. "Not every meal, no. Perhaps I will speak with Willow on the train ride in September."

Sarah grins. "I think you'll get along. She's a bit more on the outgoing side but she loves talking about politics and obscure knowledge."

Ana tilts her head to acknowledge her interest. "I can still owl you if I wish to discuss the outdated practices of Wizengamot though, yes? I feel you'll be better versed  than she would be."

Sarah laughs. "Of course, though I'm not sure how busy I'll be. I have a few interviews lined up and some of the jobs are more time consuming than others." She warns.

"Well I'll be nearby if you ever want to chat Ana!" Hannah pipes up. Josie looks up at that, craning her neck awkwardly so she can look over at the blonde.

"You got the job then?" She asks excitedly, and Hannah beams.

Hannah had been working on getting a paid internship at a Magical Observatory only a few hours away from Hogwarts in the Scottish Highlands, and while she'd been optimistic there hasn't been any solid answer one way or another for a few weeks.

Hannah shrugs. "Well, almost. I need an Outstanding on my Astronomy NEWT but I'm confident I managed it. I'll know for sure one way or another by month's end."

Ana nods. "I'm certain you'll get the job. I don't know anyone as passionate about Astronomy as you are." She says firmly, and Hannah beams at her.

"Thanks."

Ana looks over at Josie, the one person who hasn't really spoken about her future plans in any detail despite the looming need to do so. "So what about you Josie? Any interviews?"

Josie shakes her head, having returned it to it's nest on Sarah's leg. Her hair frizzes slightly as it rubs against Sarah's robes. "Not as of now, no." She admits. "I applied to a few higher education establishments during the year but unless my NEWT grades are mind blowing chances aren't great. I'm mostly working to rearrange my initial plans in case I don't get in anywhere. I'm thinking private tutor for some of the Pureblood families around London? They rarely send their kids to Muggle school before they head to Hogwarts so there's decent opportunities there."

Ana tilts her head, remembering her own tutor from childhood. "My parents stopped hiring tutors after I turned nine." She notes. "So you'll have to deal with really little kids more than likely."

Josie shrugs. "Well considering I intend to have a few of my own some day, I'll consider it practice." She grins. "And I figure in a few years I can reapply and work at an actual Wizarding school."

"Maybe you can teach Defense at Hogwarts! Goodness knows there's a limited supply of people who haven't already have the position." Hannah jokes, and even Ana cracks a grin at that.

Josie laughs. "I'll probably have to wait until everyone who knew me in school has graduated at least though." She notes. "But maybe I'll be back in seven years!"

"Stranger things have happened." Sarah observes thoughtfully. "And I think you'd be a good teacher at least. Goodness knows we didn't have enough of those. I would never have gotten an Outstanding on my Defense OWL if I hadn't studied everything myself."

Ana makes a face. "I understand that. In three years, only Professor Whits actually followed the full curriculum laid out in the OWL handbooks." She observes. "I've been doing most of my work for the Defense OWLs myself over the breaks."

"Somehow I'm not surprised." Josie notes with clear amusement. "Though Professor Addison wasn't bad. Trust me, you'll be missing him at some point, the Defense teachers can be very bottom of the barrel."

Ana makes a face. "I appreciate the warning." She sighs. "Though I'm not surprised. How long has the post been cursed for?"

"Little over forty years now I think?" Josie looks up at Sarah, who nods and specifies.

"Forty two as of this year." She confirms. "So Professor Addison was the forty-first Defense professor since Professor Merrythought's retirement."

"I bet the curse breaks at fifty. That's a magical number right?" Hannah pipes up jokingly, and Sarah rolls her eyes.

"Fifty three would be more likely since it's prime actually. But as we don't know the base nature of the curse formulating a projected length is a futile effort at best."

Ana perks up at the familiar Arithmancy mentioned. "Would the Marley Formula not be able to at least roughly approximate that though?" She asks curiously. She's only just started looking at the theoretical parts of her Arithmancy textbook, as they won't be touching on it in depth until after the OWL examinations, so she's curious to hear more about them from someone better versed.

Sarah shakes her head. "Marley's doesn't work with dark magic, and this is most certainly dark." She informs Ana briskly. "In fact, most Arithmancy has to be reworked when applied to dark magic - it's not clear why at this moment though there are several witches and wizards in the field exploring that very topic."

"Maybe one day you'll figure it out Ana! How cool would that be?" Josie grins, finally sitting up so she can address Ana face-to face.

Ana shrugs, though the idea does appeal to her. "Perhaps. I'm not sure what exactly I want to do with my life just yet, so it's certainly a possibility."

"Well you've got plenty of time to figure it out." Hannah assures her. "I don't think any of the Ravenclaws in our year are still hung up on what they want to do. Other Houses yeah, but we're good at thinking ahead so I know you'll figure it out sooner rather than later."

Ana nods confidently. "I'm already perusing possibilities during the summers." She informs them. "It's all casual for now - I'll be able to better focus my search once my OWL results are in."

Josie laughs. "Sarah two point oh." She grins.

Sarah grins as well, coloring slightly. "I suppose I was like that at fourteen wasn't I?"

"Nothing wrong with that." Ana frowns, feeling uncharacteristic defensiveness welling up.

Sarah quickly raises her hands. "No, not at all! Being prepared is a good thing - I made Head Girl didn't I?"

Ana tilts her head in acknowledgement. "I don't really want to be a prefect though." She admits after a moment. "It's a lot of interacting with other people and I'm not really keen on such things."

Hannah snorts. "You do fine with us."

"You're all Ravenclaws. And mature. First years are only sometimes the first and never the second." She says primly, and Sarah bursts out laughing.

"You're not wrong." She admits once she's calmed down. "There were definitely days I was ready to throttle some of the other prefects, especially the Slytherins and Gryffindors."

Ana settles back into the seat, listening distractedly to the familiar chatter between the three other girls as they discuss people she doesn't know and memories she wasn't around to share. She gazes out the window and realizes with the faintest pang that this will be the last time they do this. Sure she can write the three (not that she think she'll ever have a reason to write Josie), but it won't ever be the same as them all being in one area.

She'll miss it. Sure she can talk to Willow, and she's not incapable of interacting with some of the people actually in her year, but she's not really friends with any of them. And at some point she's come to genuinely consider most of the seventh years as her friends.

She sighs softly and tunes back into the conversation fully - even if she doesn't understand everything they're talking about she suddenly doesn't want to miss it.

They chat for the entirety of the train ride, and Ana can't really find it in herself to be irritated that she couldn't get any studying done before they're pulling into King's Cross.

"Agh I'm going to miss you guys." Josie is getting teary as she drags Sarah and Hannah into a hug, which the other two return. Then the lanky brunette turns to Ana.

"I don't know your opinions on hugs so you're getting a handshake." Josie laughs even as a few tears slip free and she holds out a hand to Ana.

Ana shakes it firmly. "It has been good getting to know you Josie. I will miss you as well." She says solemnly.

Sarah laughs and holds out a hand for a handshakes as well, which Ana gives. Hannah skips the formalities and steals a quick hug as her goodbye.

"Write me this summer okay?" The blonde insists, and Ana promises before the four of them finally depart from the train.

Ana scans the platform, looking for her one graduating friend she hasn't yet bid a proper farewell to. The station is crowded, and the steam from the cooling engine isn't helping whatsoever with identifying faces.

After what feels like an eternity of straining to look around, someone taps her on the shoulder.

She spins, instinctively reaching for her wand which isn't in it's usual place so her hands comes up empty.

Eric raises his hands in surrender. "Hey woah, sorry for startling you." He grins. "I didn't want you to go before saying goodbye."

Ana relaxes and nods. "I had the same thought." She replies, and then holds out a hand.

Eric raises an eyebrow, clearly amused. "No need to be so formal Ana."

She drops her hand, feeling a bit embarrassed. "Well, I will miss you, and I hope your future endeavors are successful." She hesitates, wondering if she should mention Laurel. While she's certainly gotten to know Eric's girlfriend in the past two years she doesn't really care about the woman one way or another.

Eric saves her the trouble of deciding when he takes her pause as the end of her thought. "And to you as well. If you need any NEWT books feel free to ask - mine are just going to be sitting around gathering dust after all." He hesitates, and then smiles. "Good luck Ana."

Ana nods, and the two part, leaving Ana feeling just slightly hollow. She can still write to them, she reminds herself. They aren't gone from the world, just from school.

Sighing, she drags her trunk down the platform, carefully balancing Dracula's terrarium with her other arm and scanning for her mother.

She finds Winona waiting near the entrance, and they make their way to the waiting car before her mother begins chattering on about their plans for the summer.

Ana half tunes her out, watching King's Cross vanish into the bustle of the city. School is going to be very different from now on.

Hopefully it will be a good kind of different.

Short chapter is 300 words short but this one was fighting with me so yeah ^^'' But that marks the end of year three! Up next: year four, and a lot of the dominoes set up this year are going to start falling. Hope you all will look forward to it!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!