Chapter Twenty-Seven

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
A Flurry of Changes

Christmas is... awkward, to say the least, so Rajani is quite glad when it's finally time to return to school. At least until she remembers that she'd confirmed to Queenie that she plans on asking Ed out for the next Hogsmeade trip.

She's reminded of this promise when she sees the sixteen year old at the first Feast back to school and Queenie nudges her in the side. Hard.

"Ow, jeez, yes I remember." She grumbles, feeling herself flush slightly when Ed glances over at them with one brow raised. Rajani waves him off and he shrugs and returns to chatting with his friends. "I'll ask later this week, give us a chance to settle back into school."

Queenie sighs dramatically. "Fine fine. I'm just excited for you! Your first crush!"

Rajani smiles tightly. She doesn't really feel like 'crush' is the right way to describe her feelings towards Ed, but as she can't think of a better word - aside from 'friendship' which she doesn't think counts - she stays quiet.

"Queenie chill, you're crowding her." Nia scolds lightly. "And I still say being single is the superior relationship status."

"Lies." Queenie, Eugene, and Clary all state at the same time, and Clary giggles and lightly pushes Lenox, who's seated beside her.

"What's with not defending my honor?" She teases lightly. Lenox just smiles in return and Rajani feels the usual twist in her gut, which she angrily shoves down. She'd never given Lenox a second thought romantically until Clary had developed her own crush on him, so really she has no right feeling angry about their relationship.

"You'll be eating your words when you finally meet someone who suits your picky tastes, mark my words." Queenie declares grandly, pointing dramatically at Nia as she does. "Els, you're with me, right?"

Elspeth glances up slightly, shrugs noncommittally, and turns back to her food.

"Ha! She's on my side." Nia declares, and this of course devolves into a debate about indications of agreement between the two that Rajani is only too happy to tune out as she finishes her meal.

She's able to keep putting Queenie off for the rest of the week, continuously citing classwork as an excuse for why she can't go ask Ed out right that second.

Of course, the reason these excuses are accepted is because schoolwork really has increased dramatically since the fall, and their study sessions in the Slytherin common room are dragging out longer and longer. On Fridays they push right up until ten o'clock, when they have to leave to go to Astronomy class.

On their way up that Friday they end up running into one of the Prefect patrols - more specifically they run into Ed and a Hufflepuff girl, who raises her eyebrow in curious amusement when Queenie makes a rather embarrassing noise and waves their friend over.

After a quick word with his partner, Ed jogs over, grinning. "Can't talk long. What's up?"

Queenie attempts to elbow Rajani, but she dodges away having expected it.

"It's probably a bad time to ask, but would you want to go to Hogsmeade with me in a couple of weeks?"

Surprisingly, once he's right in front of her, the words come easily. Rajani tilts her head slightly - why had she been so worried again?

Ed beams. "Hey, yeah, that would be fun! We'll talk more later, I've got to get back to patrol and you've got the whole Astronomy Tower to climb." With that he heads back over to his fellow prefect and the fourth years continue on their way.

"There, now you can stop being so dramatic about the whole thing Queen." Rajani quips as she walks past her clearly disappointed friend.

"I'm happy for you, I just expected a lot more stuttering." Queenie admits with a laugh as she does a quick skip to keep up with Rajani. "I wasn't even that chill asking Eugene out the first time and we were just about done with the engagement arrangements."

"That was pretty impressive." Clary admits ruefully. "All of you saw how incredibly dorky I was asking Lenox out last year."

"It was cute." Lenox tells her with a soft smile, and Clary happily grabs his hand.

"Yeah, I am pretty adorable." She agrees cheerfully.

The rest of the night goes by with thankfully little pestering from Queenie, though Rajani knows it's only because Professor Sinestra is on high alert for students chatting instead of doing their assignment. And by the time they stumble back into the Slytherin dungeons, just before midnight, everyone is too tired to stay up and chat about dates.

The next morning Rajani manages once again to escape her friends by waking up early and sneaking off to the library to continue working on Ancient Runes, which as always is the hardest class for her to get her head around.

Unfortunately this results in her bumping into Donaghan while she's looking for the translation book that Professor Babbling had suggested they use for their latest assignment.

"Oh, um, sorry, you can use it." He offers awkwardly, holding out the book that he'd already grabbed from the shelf. He's resolutely refusing to make eye contact with her, and honestly Rajani is rather glad for it.

"No, you found it first, it's fine. I'll get it later, I can work on, something else in the meantime."

She nearly says 'Potions', which is in fact what she needs to study in preparation for Monday's double block, but quickly catches herself. She's still all too aware of the fact Donaghan used to be her study partner for potions, and saying that would probably come across as mocking or cruel.

Donaghan pulls the book back after a moment. "Alright. Well, good luck." He mumbles, before hurrying away.

Rajani lets out a slow breath and makes her way back to the table she'd claimed. So far 1988 is not going particularly well. Hopefully her Hogsmeade date with Ed doesn't follow the same pattern the rest of her life seems to be.

Luck ends up being on her side for that wish. Ed catches her outside the Great Hall the following evening and pulls her to one side. She waves Queenie and Eugene on ahead of her, ignoring Queenie's poorly muffled squeal of excitement.

"Hey, so Hogsmeade?" He grins, and she smiles in return.

"I was thinking it could be a sort of date, just to see if it would make sense to take our friendship a step further. That is, of course, if you'd be interested in doing so." Rajani is acutely aware of how formal she sounds, but she doesn't worry about coming across as stiff since Ed laughs.

"Yeah, I think I'd be interested." He agrees. "Shall we shake on it then?"

Rajani can't help but laugh and shove him slightly. "Oh come off it. I better catch up with Queenie and tell her the news before she implodes from the weight of her own nosy-ness."

Ed grins and salutes her as she heads into the Hall, and she may stick out her tongue in response in a rare show of immaturity.

"That boy brings out the worst of me. My parents will be horrified." She announces as she sits in the seat Queenie had left open for her. "But I suppose it matches my current teenage rebellion."

Nia snorts. "Your idea of teen rebellion is pretty tame Raj." She teases. "Call me when you set something on fire, then we'll be talking rebellion."

Queenie finally runs out of patience and prods Rajani in the side. "Is it a date or not?" She pesters.

Rajani considers letting her stew in retaliation for the jab - it had actually hurt - but decides ultimately it wouldn't be worth it. "Yes, it's a date. Nothing more than that, we just want to see where things take us." She acknowledges.

Queenie beams. "I'm so excited for you! You've got to let me help you pick your outfit!"

Rajani hadn't really been planning on worrying about what she was wearing, so she has no problem agreeing to Queenie's request.

Two weekends later, as they're preparing to go to Hogsmeade, Rajani regrets this decision.

"Rajani Misra how do you have absolutely nothing cute to wear?" Queenie sighs dramatically as she tosses aside another of Rajani's dresses. "Honestly these are all so dark and brooding, where's the color? That's it, you're wearing one of my dresses since you have terrible fashion sense."

Rajani glares at her. It's only seven in the morning and frankly that is far too early to be dealing with Queenie's fussing. "It's not even really an official date Queen, stop being so dramatic." She grumbles.

Queenie smacks her, though it's with a dress so it's not at all painful. "Hush you, appearance is always important. Try this one on, I think it'll be cute."

Rajani reluctantly complies, eyeing her own clothes that have been left in a pile on the floor. Queenie has to help her zip up the dress, but when she turns around her friend claps excitedly.

"It's perfect! Nia, Els, Clary, confirm for me." She waves the other girls over and they sleepily make their way out of their beds.

"It does look good. Green is a really nice color on you Raj." Nia observes with a nod. "I mean, obviously, but still." She adds with a grin.

"It's fine. Dresses are dumb though." Elspeth mumbles, stifling a yawn as she does.

"Dresses can be good in the right circumstances." Clary notes. "Though I'd argue that the crack of winter probably isn't the ideal time to be wearing one."

"Language." Queenie reproves. "But she looks fantastic does she not?"

Clary grins. "Ed will be blown away."

Ed does compliment her dress when he takes her coat later as they settle down to have lunch in Madame Puddifoot's Tea Shop. It's a bit of a gaudy place, but Rajani finds it amusingly charming nonetheless.

"Thanks, it's actually Queenie's." She responds to his compliment as he pulls out the chair for her.

He grins. "Well tell Queenie she has excellent taste in clothing."

"I will not, she'd be utterly insufferable if she heard that." Rajani replies primly, and then grins when Ed starts laughing.

"Fair enough. So I've been here a couple of times before and I thought we could split the mixed platter. It's got some sweet, some bitter, and some spicy which I recall you liking."

Rajani grins. "I do like a bit of heat, but how would one make mini cakes spicy?"

"With great skill m'dear." A stout woman replies brightly as she bustles up to their table. Her black hair is pulled up in a tight bun and she's beaming so much that it's actually making Rajani uncomfortable. "Did I hear an order for the mixed platter?"

Ed looks over at Rajani. "Did you want to share?"

She shrugs. "I'll trust you on this. One mixed platter to share, and could I have your chai?"

"And one Earl Gray for me. Thank you Madam Puddifoot." Ed adds and the owner happily takes their menus and bustles off.

"Earl Gray? Very adventurous." Rajani notes with a sly grin.

Ed shrugs unrepentantly. "Don't mess with a good thing I always say. And Earl Gray is most definitely a good thing."

"You know, I've never actually had it." Rajani admits after a moment. "We only have Assam and Chai on hand in our house."

Ed raises an eyebrow teasingly. "Chai huh? Sound like someone's not being very adventurous."

Rajani laughs. "Fine fine. You can try mine and I'll try yours, how about that? Then we'll both be adventurous."

The conversation meanders through a series of topics after that as they wait for their food to arrive. The tea comes first, and as promised they each try each others'.

Rajani makes a face. "Way too bland for my taste." She admits, handing the mug back to Ed. "And just for the record, that Chai pales in comparison to what we get shipped in from our hometown - I'll have to bring some back next year for you to try."

Ed snorts. "Are you sure you're not just trying to make excuses for if I don't like it?" He teases, taking a sip as he finishes speaking.

"Not at all, just making an observation." Rajani grins back. "What do you think?"

"Not my favorite." He says after a moment's contemplation. "But I can see the charm. I think it would need to be paired with something for me to drink a full mug." Despite saying that he takes one more sip before handing it back to Rajani.

"Well," She observes. "I guess we'll just have to try again when the food gets here."

Ed grins. "I suppose we will."

The cakes arrive shortly after and Rajani has to admit to being impressed by the kick in the spicy ones.

Ed grins at her surprised sound as she bites into the first cake. "Told you they were good. Here, try this one with the Earl Gray, they compliment really well."

She accepts the offered cake and takes a bite, sipping his tea afterwards.

She hums lightly. "They do match nicely, though I still can't say I'm the biggest fan."

Ed laughs warmly. "Well you can't say fairer than that. Which do you think matches the Chai?"

Rajani is honestly surprised when she realizes the time over two hours later. They'd continued to chat and slowly work their way through their food, occasionally pausing to laugh at some of the other couples being cheesy or make cheeky comments about the gauche decorations of the tea house. When they finally finish, Ed insists on paying for the meal.

"Fine." Rajani eventually gives in and puts her coin purse away. "But I'm paying next time."

Ed raises an eyebrow, and then smiles. "Next time? So I'm tolerable company then?"

Rajani gives him a sly smile. "So far you're doing well. We'll see if that keeps up."

Ed smirks right back at her. "Challenge accepted m'lady."

They take the remaining time in Hogsmeade to wander between the shops, ducking from one heated area to the next and collecting sweets, pranks, and one rather fascinating book that Rajani finds on a back shelf of Tomes and Scrolls.

"I admit I had a lovely time." Rajani tells Ed as they walk back towards the castle at the end of the day.

He takes her hand, and she squeezes it reassuringly. It's a rather nice weight, so she lets him keep holding it as they walk.

"Well I'm glad to hear it. We'll have to go again on Valentine's day - Madame Puddifoot's goes all out and it's delightfully awful."

Rajani grins. "Well I'll look forward to it." As they reach the gates she spies Queenie trying to discretely peer around a corner to spy on them. "What say you we give our audience a show?"

Without waiting for an answer she tugs him closer and gives him a firm kiss on the lips. Ed is clearly surprised, but only too happy to go along with it, and Rajani finds herself quite enjoying their impromptu make-out session in the snow.

"Okay I get it you two are adorable! Get inside before we all freeze to death!" Queenie finally shouts, laughing but also shivering.

Rajani laughs and finally pulls away from Ed. "To be continued." She promises with a grin.

She's rather looking forward to keeping that promise.

Valentine's day lands exactly a week before Quidditch season starts again, so of course the topic of conversation is Quidditch.

Not that Franziska really minds, but she is slightly miffed that a year into their relationship (well, not officially but they were at least dating on the fourteenth the year before) they don't have anything else to talk about.

Still, it's cute how excited Brandon is.

"If Ravenclaw can beat Slytherin by literally any number of points, then Gryffindor has a clear shot to the Cup! The team is doing really well in practices now and just between us I've been trying to brew up a little liquid luck for Drake since he's the weakest member of the team - don't tell him I said that he'd be pissed - but even Fiona is really shaping up and everyone was worried about that replacement since, you know, Laurel was really something else. Not Gwenog Jones something else but-"

"Isn't brewing liquid luck cheating? And also against school policy?" Franziska interrupts, raising an eyebrow and glancing around the Three Broomsticks to make sure no one overheard. "And way above our brewing capabilities?" She adds after a moment.

Brandon scoffs. "You underestimate me my lady." He declares grandly, and Franziska sighs.

Honestly the date isn't bad, none of them are, but since learning that there had been a lot of people interested in her before Brandon had asked her out, Franziska has been a little less taken with her boyfriend and a little more curious about what could have been if she'd just waited it out a bit. It makes her feel terrible - she really does like Brandon after all - but at moments like this it's hard not to consider the missed opportunities.

They return to the castle a bit early so that Franziska can work on Arithmancy with Aidan, and she's rather glad to be thinking about numbers instead of brooms for a few hours.

The entire week following is a blur of studying and stressing - she did terribly on a Muggle Studies essay and it's caused her to become rather worried about her overall grades in the class - so when Brandon sits next to her on Saturday morning she's briefly startled. Then she remembers that it's game day.

"You two are sitting in Hufflepuff right?" Leona pesters them eagerly. "It's neither of our Houses playing so you'll just have to support me!"

"I'm not sure it works like that." Brandon points out amusedly.

"But yes, we'll be sitting Hufflepuff." Franziska assures Leona, who beams.

Brandon shoots her a look, but opts to chat with Aidan instead of speaking up, and Franziska is more than happy to strike up a conversation with Kiera and Tonks about their latest Care of Magical Creatures project. Their descriptions of being covered in mucus multiple times during their lesson the day before make Franziska even more happy about taking Ancient Runes instead, even if it is a harder class homework-wise.

Brandon tugs her aside as they leave breakfast a half hour or so later.

"Hey, I thought we'd sit in the Gryffindor stands today? I mean, you did sit in Hufflepuff during the first game, and we sat in the Hufflepuff stands last game. Isn't it sort of time to sit with the Gryffindors."

Franziska blinks. Honestly she hadn't even thought of it that way - she just wants to support Leona and feels the Hufflepuff stands are the best place to do that. "Well if you had a problem why didn't you say anything earlier?" She replies somewhat defensively. He's not wrong after all - they are supposed to be alternating and she's been very decidedly not doing that so far this season.

"I didn't want to start something in front of our friends." Brandon shoots back, and Franziska glares.

"'Start something'? Really? You've had all week and last weekend to have told me about wanting to sit with Gryffindor and you didn't, this isn't on me!"

"I figured you were smart enough to already have figured it out!" He replies angrily.

Franziska huffs out a breath. "I'm not a mind-reader Brandon, and I'm always going to want to sit with my House. If you want me to sit somewhere else you need to actually communicate that!"

"You know what, I'll just sit in Gryffindor, you sit in Hufflepuff. I'll see you later."

Franziska watches him walk away, feeling distinctly bad but too angry still to try and stop him.

"Well this is a stupid thing to have our first real fight about." She grumbles as she hurries towards the Quidditch pitch so she can hopefully still get a seat with her friends. She had promised Leona she'd be there to support after all, so despite wanting to go curl up in her bunk and bounce her football off the wall for a bit she can't do so without being a bad friend.

Her friends are already crowded at the front, and there's no room left, so she picks her way higher up the stands and finds an open spot next to Roderick Jarvis, a second year that Franziska tutors on occasion. He gives a half-smile as she sits down next to him.

"Hey Rod, how has your year been so far?" She asks politely, because she knows him and as much as she doesn't feel like idle conversation she doesn't want to be rude.

He shrugs slightly. "Alright I suppose. Classes are hard but Jemma's study groups do help."

Franziska had forgotten about those completely. She had asked Roderick to help Jemma set them up at the start of the school year but she hadn't heard anything about them since. It does explain why Roderick doesn't ask her for help as much anymore.

"That's great!" She says genuinely. "Jemma was really excited about those, I'm sure she's thrilled they're working so well."

"She stops in sometimes to offer help, but it seems like you guys have all been really busy since break ended." Roderik replies uncertainly, and Franziska can't help but laugh faintly.

"That's an understatement. Take it from me, learn how to study now or fourth year is going to be a very unpleasant wakeup call." She sighs. "I'm definitely not looking forward to OWLs next year."

"Drake isn't worried at all." Roderik mumbles. "But he's so busy with his girlfriend I think he just forgot they were even happening."

Franziska snorts, somehow unsurprised. She doesn't know Jemma's boyfriend all that well but he seems the type to forget about exams. "Well, Jemma will definitely remind him, she's already planning a study schedule for herself."

Roderik hums. "I might do that too. Make a study schedule." He clarifies quickly. "If Drake wants to forget about the most important tests of his life that's up to him."

Franziska grins. "Fair enough. I should probably make a schedule too."

So should Brandon. She finds herself thinking. He'll focus way too much on Potions otherwise.

And there's the pang, and okay, she's just simmered down enough that's she's starting to feel stupid about the fight. Why can't she just sit with the Gryffindors? She has friends in the House, and Jemma is seated there as well with Drake and Evera. She considers getting up to try and find her boyfriend, but then Leona's voice echoes over the pitch.

"Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, whatever strange occult creature Professor Snape is!" She cries, and most of the audience laughs. "Welcome back to Quidditch! We've had a few months off, which means the teams have had time to practice! Today Ravenclaw and Slytherin will face off in the first match of the year."

She goes on to introduce the players as they walk onto the field. Franziska mostly claps politely, not really knowing either team but hoping that Ravenclaw will win.

Soon enough Madame Hooch has tossed the Quaffle into the air, and the two teams are off. Ravenclaw is fighting hard, but the Slytherin team still has the excellent teamwork that had defeated Gryffindor in their first game, and they slowly inch ahead as the minutes tick by.

"A clever fake out pass by Macmillan there." Leona reports, though she sounds rather disappointed by the excellent play. "Slytherin makes a shot on the hoops, but Adley blocks it! Come on Ravenclaw Chasers, you can get the- nope, Flint has the Quaffle and... he's scored."

Franziska can empathize with Leona's disappointment, but she feels a bit bad when she sees Flint's shoulders sag slightly.

Then someone from the Slytherin stands shouts encouragement and the second year perks up again, taking off to rejoin the game.

"Maybe I should tell Leona to ease up on the obvious bias." Franziska murmurs to herself. "It can't feel good to hear people be disappointed when you do well."

"That is true, but also it's Marcus Flint." Roderik says beside her, and Franziska startles. She hadn't thought he'd be able to hear her over the roar of the crowd.

She frowns. "What's wrong with Marcus Flint?"

"He's a bully." Roderik says flatly. "And generally just a mean person. Some Gryffindor first year tried to stop him last week when Flint was putting bulbadox powder in the spare cauldrons, and he punched the kid. Which is not how you say thank you - Filch would have caught Flint if the kid didn't step in."

Franziska hums. "Sounds like a real winner. Alright, I suppose I don't feel as bad about Leona not praising him."

"His ego doesn't need it." Roderik confirms.

The game continues to be nail-bitingly close, and Franziska is actually kind of glad for it. It's a welcome distraction from her own growing guilt over her fight with Brandon.

"The snitch has been spotted!" Leona shrieks after nearly two hours, and every eye snaps to find the two Seekers, who are barreling downwards towards the pitch in pursuit of a faint golden glimmer than Franziska can just barely make out. The glimmer abruptly changes paths, shooting back over the heads of the Seekers. The Slytherin Seeker turns to pursue, only to stop and frown.

The Ravenclaw Seeker has slowed a few feet below him, and his hand is stretched out over his head, gripped into a fist, and he's absolutely beaming.

It takes a moment to sink in what exactly has happened, but once it does the stands go into chaos.

"Ravenclaw has caught the snitch! I repeat, Stafford caught the snitch! Ravenclaw wins by forty points!" Leona is shrieking the same two sentences over and over as the stands celebrate. The two teams fly down, and the captains shake hands.

The Slytherin Seeker McLeod also offers the Ravenclaw Seeker Stafford a handshake, but he's ignored in favor of celebration. He frowns and drops his hand after half a minute and returns to his own team, who greet him with pats on the back.

Franziska eventually manages to make her way out of the stands, saying goodbye to Roderik as she does. She needs to find Brandon and apologize for the fight.

She's mentally practicing what she wants to say when she runs into him just inside the castle.

"Hey." He rubs the back of his neck awkwardly. "Look, um,"

"Not here." Franziska says quickly. There are dozens of students filing in from the game, and the two of them are blocking traffic. "Dungeons. It should be pretty quiet there."

They walk down in silence, and Franziska begins worrying that Brandon will want to break up with her. He hadn't looked very happy when he'd stopped her, and that couldn't mean anything good, could it?

However, when they finally stop in one of the empty rooms in the dungeon, what's on Brandon's mind is entirely different from a break up.

"I'm sorry. I should have talked to you. You're right." He blurts out, cheeks flushing and looking anywhere but Franziska's face.

The Hufflepuff blinks, staring at her boyfriend for a long moment before recovering enough to let out a shaky 'what?' in response.

Brandon attempts to stare a hole in his foot. "I'm sorry. I'll try to talk to you more about this stuff, I forgot you don't like Quidditch as much as me and I just assumed things."

Franziska a breath in between her teeth, unsure how to respond. "I... it's fine Brandon, I was the one being unreasonable." She finally gets out. "But maybe we can both work on our communication skills?" She offers when he doesn't look up right away.

Finally he meets her eyes, smiling slightly. "Yeah, that would be good." He pauses, fidgets, and then speaks again. "So we're good?"

"We're getting there." Franziska decides. She can't really say they're good without lying, but Brandon seems happy with the reply so she leaves it at that. "So is the team excited about Ravenclaw's win?" She prompts, remembering what Brandon had said earlier about their chances for the Cup.

It takes some coaxing, but Brandon is soon chattering away as if the fight had never happened, and Franziska sits next to him for nearly an hour just listening. Finally she does have to leave - she has a pile of homework she still needs to complete, and she's still considering mentioning the bias issue to Leona.

She enters the Hufflepuff common room to find most of the House scattered around, studying diligently. Jemma waves her over from the corner that the fourth years seem to have claimed, and Franziska smiles as she walks over.

"Hey, what are we working on?"

Leona eyes her in a way that tells Franziska she probably knows more about where she'd been for the past hour than the brunette logically should, but she stays quiet and Franziska decides that maybe she won't say anything about the biased announcing if Leona can manage to keep her questions at bay until they're done studying.

The rest of the evening is, thankfully, quite boring as they struggle through essays and compare notes. There is a minor incident when Saundra, who's studying in the opposite corner with a few of the other third years, makes it start raining over the middle of the room, but since Franziska isn't affected for once she finds she doesn't mind terribly. After the week she's been having, a bit of rain seems minor in comparison.

Ana thinks the awkward, slushy gray area between winter and spring might be the worst time of the year.

She trudges through the melting snow Thursday morning on her way back from their double Herbology block, Aidan at her side.

"I must admit I'm glad tha Professor Vector is so understanding about us coming in a few minutes late most Thursdays." Aidan observes as they finally make it to the castle and he loudly stomps the mush from his boots.

Ana is a bit more delicate as she taps her shoes to shake off the slush.

"Well it is a twenty minute walk from the greenhouses to the Arithmancy classroom, assuming the stairs are optimally positioned." Ana points out. "As a mathematician one would hope Professor Vector would understand that the fifteen minutes we have between classes isn't sufficient time to cross the distance."

Aidan laughs. "I like how you take five words where one would suffice, it makes you very interesting to talk to. Speaking of, I saw you were reading Hans Christen Anderson and I have to ask, how connected to real magic is it? I haven't read the stories in a while, and I always prefered the Grimm tales myself, but I am curious."

Ana mentally flashes back to Alec and the winter break and she feels her cheeks heating slightly and becomes acutely aware of the silver pendant resting under her robes. "Well I admit I didn't think there was much magic, but a family friend over break pointed out to me that the stories serve as allegories and metaphors to magical events."

Aidan raises an eyebrow. "Family friend?" He prompts with a grin.

Ana glares at him. "I'm embarrassed that he was able to point something out that I hadn't previously noticed. And since when do you care?"

"I admit Leona is rubbing off on me." Aidan raises his hands, still grinning. "But I'm sorry, that was out of line."

"Quite." Ana huffs. "Honestly I'll never understand how anyone could be thinking about dating when we have our OWLs next year."

Aidan hums. "Agreed. Brandon did pretty badly last year when he and Frannie were still in the honeymoon phase. And how many people really find their forever partner at our age? I figure I'll start looking after we graduate."

Ana hums. "I figure my parents will set me up with someone by the time I'm seventeen - probably Alasdair Macmillan, which I suppose isn't the worst fate."

Aidan looks over at her with an unreadable expression. "An arranged marriage? You're okay with that?"

She shrugs. "I suppose I'll know if it happens - my parents got married without any interference from their families, so I doubt they'd set anything in stone without my approval. But they certainly seem interested in tying our families together and Alas and I were friends for a while."

Aidan drops the subject then, instead turning to the Arithmancy assignment due that day. Ana wonders why the topic had made him so uncomfortable - arranged marriages are far from unheard of things in wizarding culture, but perhaps they've fallen out of fashion for Muggles.

They arrive at Arithmancy late as predicted, though the rest of the Ravenclaws and Hufflepuffs come in even after them. Once everyone has finally arrived and settled in Professor Vector launches straight into the lesson, and Ana briefly puts the entire conversation with Aidan out of her mind as she focuses on getting everything written down.

Aidan leaves with his Hufflepuff friends and Ana ends up waiting for Amelia and Shaun to walk to the Great Hall with.

"I completely failed that last assignment." Amelia sighs. "I'm thinking I many drop this class and just focus on Care of Magical Creatures next year, assuming Professor Flitwick doesn't tell me I'll need it to be a Magizoologist."

Ana doesn't say anything, and works to keep her disapproval off her face.

She apparently fails as Amelia rolls her eyes at her. "Not all of us can be perfectly conditioned to study twenty four seven regardless of our interest in the subject Ana."

"I didn't-" She cuts herself off. "Sorry, I know."

"Well I think it's a good idea Amelia." Shaun pipes up as they arrive at the Great Hall and Ana sees Jerome waving at them enthusiastically from the Ravenclaw table. "If you know what you want to do it's smart to start focusing on doing exceptionally in the areas you'll need to pursue it."

Amelia smiles at him brightly and Ana is abruptly reminded of her talk with Aidan.

She clears uncertainly and decides to sit next to Jerome for lunch.

She mostly stays quiet during lunch, getting a head start on her Arithmancy paper and going over her notes from the class. The other three are content to let her study and conduct their own conversation around her.

They have double potions after lunch, and Ana naturally falls into step beside Amelia who has become her permanent partner for the class.

"Wit-sharpening today." Jerome recalls as they walk. "Can't wait to see how Snape insults our intellect in his explanation."

Amelia laughs softly. "I'm sure he'll find a way."

"Really it makes him look stupid to imply Ravenclaws aren't all intellectuals." Ana rolls her eyes. Insulting Snape on the way to Potions is a bit of a ritual for the four of them. She didn't used to participate until she realized it was started to help Jerome brace himself - he and Evie are most prone to being the target of Snape's wrath.

She figures if she's going to spend time with him the least she should do is be nice, and helping bolster his confidence fits into that mold.

She and Amelia set up their cauldron at the front of the class and begin organizing their ingredient for the day's potion. Professor Snape looms behind his desk, watching them closely. Ana does feel rather uncomfortable with the attention, but she practicedly ignores it and sits next to Amelia once they've finished preparing.

As expected Snape does, in fact, insult all of their intelligences ("you all could certainly use a dose of this potion"), but the actual brewing process is almost relaxing after the high energy of their other classes.

"Okay, that's definitely purple." Amelia decides, quickly capping the vial of armadillo bile and giving the cauldron two stirs before sitting back. "Ten minutes to simmer right?"

Ana turns down the heat under the cauldron and nods. "Correct. I'll keep an eye on the time."

They end up finishing the potion early, and the two wave to Shaun and Jerome, who are struggling to get the correct color in their own cauldron, as they head out of the classroom.

"Well I have half and hour until Care of Magical Creatures. Would you be interested in reviewing the Charms essay with me before I have to go?" Amelia offers somewhat uncertainly, and Ana is honestly surprised. While the brunette does study with them rather often, she's never the one to initiate it, instead following along half-reluctant when Jerome or Shaun suggests a group study session.

Ana shrugs. "I don't see why not." She decides. Getting input from others can be useful after all, even if that usefulness arises only rarely.

Thirty minutes isn't really enough time to do much more than get through the first page of the essay, but Ana is able to point out a few things for Amelia and she feels rather smug about it as the other girl thanks her before running off to her class.

Shaun joins her not long after and they study silently beside each other until Jerome and Amelia return from Care of Magical Creatures, bringing with them Finnigan Marley who sits quietly at the end of the table and pulls out his textbooks.

Finnigan studying near them has become a semi-regular occurrence since Ana returned from Christmas Break, but it's still rather odd to look up and find him staring at one of them. The worst of it, Ana thinks, is that he never asks or answers any questions, just sits nearby and does his own thing, occasionally staring until he's caught.

She glances up just as she's thinking this and finds the brunet once again staring at her analytically. She glares at him and he quickly goes to start his essay again, but she decides enough is enough.

"Can we actually help you with anything?" She says plainly. "Because generally when people stare at other people while doing homework it means they have questions." She's seen Amelia do it enough times to be confident in her declaration.

Finnigan glares at his paper. "...No." He finally mutters, and Ana huffs out an irritated breath.

"Then stop staring, it's distracting." She informs him before turning back to her own textbook and trying to find where she'd left off reading.

Finnigan keeps his head down until dinner, when all five of them stand to head to the Great Hall.

Jerome hurries to shove his things into his bag and rushes to catch up to Finnigan who'd started leaving on his own, as he always does. "Hey, you can come sit with us if you want! I know Ana was kind of snappy but she's just very focused on studying - she's actually nice once you get to know her." He beams hopefully.

Finnigan stares at him in vague confusion, and then glances at the rest of them uncertainly.

Ana shrugs. "I honestly don't care, you do you."

Jerome pouts at her but she ignores him as she packs up her textbooks and parchment, placing her self-inking quills - a late Christmas gift from Hannah - in a side pocket. They hadn't malfunctioned yet but she has had nightmares of them splattering all over her essays and causing her to fail the assignment and she's not taking the risk.

"You're more than welcome to sit with us Finnigan." Shaun says firmly, and that seems to be the decider since the quiet boy follows them to the Great Hall and sits next to Jerome when the excitable boy gestures for him to do so.

"Are any of you going to the Quidditch match this weekend?" Jerome, as always, is the one to start the conversation once they've all gotten their food.

Ana nods. "I'd like to see the team defeat Gryffindor - I think we have a good chance considering how the lions played against Slytherin."

She doesn't miss how Finnigan looks surprised at her answer, and she resists the urge to roll her eyes. One can be an efficient studier and also appreciate the fine art of winning in sports, though for some odd reason several people seem to think the two are mutually exclusive.

"I'll probably go as well, since we're playing." Amelia concurs. She's picked only the sweetest dishes to pile onto her plate, and Ana stifles a sigh. For such a tiny person Amelia has a terrible diet.

"Finnigan, are you coming?" Shaun offers, the only indication he gives that he too plans on attending. "We like to try and predict plays, though none of us is particularly good at it."

"I get the most though." Ana can't help pointing out quickly. It's a bit of a sore point how badly she actually does in their little competition during games - even if everyone else does rather poorly as well.

Finnigan nods uncertainly. "I guess I could." He mumbles.

When Saturday comes he looks like he regrets his decision. Ana hadn't really seen Finnigan the day before, so when he's pushed into the seat next to her in the Ravenclaw stands she's honestly a bit startled. She'd figured he would back out.

Even if he'd wanted to it's clear Jerome hadn't let him. The other boy squishes himself on the stand on Finnigan's other side, beaming happily at them.

"Great day for a game! i think it's finally starting to warm up some!" He exclaims cheerfully.

"I can still see my breath." Finnigan grumbles, and Ana thinks that maybe they could get along under the right circumstances.

Still, it does warm up as the rest of the spectators fill the stands, and once the players are in the air it's easy to forget the remaining chill as all focus is directed to the field.

"Gryffindor has switched up their playbook." Amelia notes about twenty minutes into the game, frowning. "I hate to say it but they might actually be better than Ravenclaw's team."

"Blasphemy." Finnigan states immediately. "Ravenclaw always has the best team."

"Statistically speaking Hufflepuff is the best one currently." Ana points out mildly. "Which is why they're first in the race for the Cup at the moment."

Finnigan gives her a reproachful stare and she shrugs. "I want to win as much as the next Ravenclaw, but statistically speaking those are the facts."

"Statistically speaking you guys aren't paying attention to a really good game." Jerome interrupts, whining slightly.

"That makes no sense." Ana tells him, even as she does turn back to the game in front of them just in time to see their Chasers perform a skillful pass around the male Gryffindor beater. "But there, see? Statistics don't always set things in stone. Statistically there's no way Slytherin should have been able to win the House Cup three years in a row, but that didn't stop them."

"They're up in first again now, did you see?" Amelia sighs. "If they get the Cup again this year I might scream. Where are they even getting the points from? Certainly not in class, we get much more in the ones we share with them."

"Guys!" Jerome looks away from the pitch momentarily to gaze at them with wide, pleading eyes. "The game!"

"Sorry Jerome, we'll stick to calling plays." Shaun promises, despite not being one of the people talking.

They do manage to keep their focus after that, and Ana is both impressed and annoyed when Finnigan ends up calling more plays accurately than she does, leaving her in second place for their miniature competition.

"And Weasley has spotted the snitch!" Leona calls excitedly from the announcer's box about an hour and ten minutes into the game, and all five of them turn to find where the Gryffindor Seeker is. To Ana's disappointment he's clear across the field from where the Ravenclaw Seeker has been hovering all game, and despite the red-headed boy not having the faster broom it's clear Ravenclaw doesn't have a chance at beating him to the snitch.

Despite this the Seeker does make a valiant effort, but he's still a good three meters away when Charlie grabs the golden ball out of the air and Gryffindor's side of the stands explode in celebration.

Ana sighs in disappointment. "Well, there goes our chances at a comeback. We're looking at third now regardless I believe?"

"Could go second, but Gryffindor and Slytherin both will have to lose rather spectacularly to Hufflepuff for that to happen." Shaun reports. "Still, it was a close game. We'll get them next year."

"And maybe Finnigan will be back on the team to help!" Jerome encourages brightly.

Despite the dull atmosphere in the rest of the Ravenclaw stands, Ana finds that she's actually rather happy. Somewhere along the line it seems the group have become her actual friends, and she finds she's less upset about it than she thought she would be.

Hannah will be thrilled.

With Ravenclaw defeated and only one match left Kent is running the team ragged with training. They don't know how Slytherin and Hufflepuff's match will go and so they're preparing as if they'll need a two hundred point win in order to secure the Cup, which may very well be the case.

Their last practice before the penultimate match is spent half playing and half listening to a combination encouragement speech and strategy guide by Kent.

"I expect all of you to be at the Slytherin-Hufflepuff match tomorrow, and I expect all of you to take note of Hufflepuff's plays. Statistically they're the best team right now, but we're close enough that it's still a toss up of who will actually take home the House Cup." He says sharply, and for once every single member of the team is quiet and paying full attention, even Remi who's made a habit of being very loud in his disinterest recently since apparently finally realizing he'll probably never be on the team unless he changes positions.

"Every single one of you is more than capable of outflying every one of Hufflepuff's team, I've seen that and you've seen that. So the more prepared we are, the better. Any questions?"

Everyone shakes their head, and Kent nods firmly.

"Excellent. I'll see you all tomorrow at the front of the stands. Dismissed."

Myr has to skip showering as practice had run long, making him late for a study appointment he'd had since the beginning of the week.

"Sorry I'm late, practice-"

"Ran long, I assumed." Percy Weasley looks up from the textbook that he'd been reading. He pushes his horn-rimmed glasses up his nose slightly, only for them to immediately slip down again. "It's perfectly alright, Gryffindor has a real chance at the Cup and I think it would be nice to get a win. Oliver certainly can't talk about anything else at the moment so at the very least it might get him to shush for a time."

Myr hides a smile as he sits next to the youngest school-aged Weasley. "You two are still having problems?" He asks.

Percy lifts a shoulder slightly. "Not particularly? I believe we're finally accustomed to one another's rythms, and I admit it can be fun to talk to him on occasion. Of course, knowing my luck we'll fall back out of sync next year and have to repeat the process all over again."

Myr pats his shoulder comfortingly. "I doubt it." He assures the younger boy. "Once you know how to live with someone it usually sticks, at least in my experience. Now, you wanted to go over Transfiguration, correct?"

Percy eagerly pulls out his textbooks, and they fall into what is a now familiar routine for Myr. He has to admit, going through the old theory again has actually been useful, as everything in Transfiguration builds on itself. The class is now probably his best one of the eight that he's taking, which is a major shift from previous years.

The next day finds him crushed in between Drake and Charlie, clutching a parchment and attempting to write down any plays that catch his attention as Hufflepuff faces off against Slytherin in their Quidditch match.

Honestly it's hard to do, as he has no surface to write on (he probably should have thought about that) and everything is happening so quickly that he's missing most of the game each time he ducks down to write something.

"Damn, Hufflepuff is good." Drake hisses as Lola Abbott, the Hufflepuff Seeker, cheerfully pretends to spot the snitch in order to distract the younger Slytherin Chasers and allow her team to snag the Quaffle away from them. "Keep an eye on that one, yeah Charlie?"

"I'll keep an eye on the snitch. Let Lola do whatever she wants, don't let it affect you or Evera." Charlie replies, raising his voice to be heard over the roar of the crowd as Hufflepuff scores.

"Or Fawley." Evera shouts back from Drake's other side.

Myr smiles faintly. "It wouldn't affect Jacob, he's way too zoned in on his job during games. I'm pretty sure Russia could set off a nuclear bomb and he wouldn't notice."

He gets some weird looks from the people around him, but behind him Fiona laughs.

"Dark humor, I like it!" She leans forward. "Muggle five!"

Mry grins back at her and obligingly high fives her. He hadn't even considered that his wizarding world friends might be unaware of the Cold War, but he supposes it makes sense that their newspapers wouldn't write about it. Perhaps he'll bring it up in Muggle Studies on Monday, it could be interesting to see exactly how uninformed everyone is on current events.

Over the course of the exchange they'd apparently missed three goals, so they all quickly settle back down and start taking notes again. Myr wishes he had a camera to document things instead - it would be easier and he wouldn't be developing a hand cramp.

By the time the game ends he has almost a foot of notes and he's having to stop writing every few seconds to shake out his hand and get the blood flowing back into it.

"That was terrible, we better beat these guys in two weeks." Evera declares as they head back towards the castle a few minutes later. Hufflepuff had won, and if Myr is calculating things correctly in his mind then in order to get the Cup they'll need to beat the badgers by about a hundred and fifty points.

"Team meeting!" Kent appears out of nowhere behind them, and all of the fourth years jump. "Common room in ten minutes. Be there or be benched."

Remi perks up. "Hey Charlie you should go talk dragons with someone for the next eleven minutes." He suggests.

Charlie snorts, whacks Remi lightly on the shoulder, and then runs ahead of all of them, spinning around briefly only to stick his tongue out before racing up the stairs towards Gryffindor Tower.

Evera laughs. "Last one there has to clean all the brooms after practice this week!" She calls, and she's off as well, closely followed by everyone else. No one particularly likes cleaning the brooms after the practices, especially the ones they've been having so far during the year.

Fiona ends up being the last one to arrive, having stopped to congratulate the Hufflepuffs on their win and not heard Evera's challenge. She shrugs when she's informed of her new task for the week.

"It could be worse. None of you are as bad and Cassidy and Laurel were last year." She points out with a grin. "And Jacob won't actually let anyone else take care of his broom."

"True." Fawley agrees from where he's perched himself on the window sill. "A true player always maintains their own broom anyway."

Evera bristles when the raven-haired teen shoots her a grin on his last sentence. "I'm still taking care of my own broom too!" She declares hotly. "Since I'm a far better player than you could ever dream of being!"

"Both of you stop it, you can bicker after the team meeting." Kent interrupts impatiently. "Now, floor is open, which plays caught your attention?"

Once the meeting is in full swing the team gets serious, swapping observations and suggesting possible counters to some of Hufflepuff's trickier plays.

The atmosphere is broken when a shuffling from the stairway draws everyone's attention, and a certain sandy haired first year trips into view, dragging his roommate down with him.

Percy flushes and scrambles to right himself, already stammering apologies, but Oliver bounces up excitedly.

"Hi! Can we help? We both have some ideas for how to counter some of the stuff you were talking about and-"

Kent cuts Oliver off. "Look, that's really nice of you two, but this is a closed team meeting." He speaks gently, but Oliver still deflates.

"Oh, right, yeah. But we-"

"Oliver we tried, let's go." Percy hisses uncomfortably. "So sorry again." He adds to the team, his face still as red as his hair.

"Now hang on a second." Charlie interrupts. "Perce, Ollie, what were you thinking?"

Kent shoots him a look but Charlie puts up his hands placatingly. "Trust me, Perce is actually pretty smart with this stuff and Oliver's obviously passionate. It doesn't hurt to hear what they have to say."

Kent sighs but acquiesces, clearly still thinking it will be a waste of time.

It is not, as it turns out, a waste of time. Both boys bring suggestions that are surprisingly insightful, and even Kent has to admit afterwards that it was good that they'd jumped in.

"Are you two trying out next year then?" He asks after they've wrapped up the meeting and are heading out of the Tower to get some dinner.

Oliver nods enthusiastically. "I'm a Keeper!" He announces.

Kent grins and pats his head lightly. "Well I feel better knowing the team will have you in my place next year." He says honestly, and Oliver beams.

"I don't like heights." Percy mumbles his answer more to the floor than to Kent, though the captain is now engaged in a conversation about professional Keepers with Oliver and doesn't hear the young Weasley.

"That's alright, not everyone has to play." Myr assures him. "We need fans as much as we need players."

Percy smiles at him slightly. "I know, it's not a bad thing." He agrees. "Just sometimes people look at my family and think it's weird that I don't play."

"You keep score which is vital. I'm willing to bet that once Ron and Ginny are old enough they'll be arguing goals for days if there isn't someone to call them." Charlie assure his brother, who grins.

"You don't know how true that is." He laughs ruefully. "You haven't seen Ginny throw a tantrum yet, she's always an absolute angel when you and Bill are at home."

Despite the ever present weight of the upcoming final game, and of the exams after it, Myr finds that the weeks following the Slytherin-Hufflepuff match are still enjoyable. He keeps up his study sessions with Percy around daily practices with the team, and he continues to do better in his classes than he had in previous years.

Then the day of the final match comes and he's pretty sure he's going to be sick from nerves. The whole team is tense, as is most of Gryffindor House.

"Good luck today guys!" Leona chirps happily as she passes the table. "I'll try to not be biased, but I mean Hufflepuff definitely should win." She adds with a wicked grin before skipping off to the Hufflepuff table, giggling to herself.

"They should get announcers who aren't from any House." Evera grumbles. "They shouldn't be so biased."

"You're only saying that because you haven't had a Gryffindor announcer." Kent observes. "My first year we had a Gryffindor and he was great honestly."

"At least Leona is better than the last guy." Drake adds, making a face.

Everyone voices agreement at that. Leona is definitely better than the Slytherin boy who had preceded her, and the conversation sidetracks into his most memorable calls.

Soon enough it's game time, and Kent gives them one last speech in the dressing room before they're off.

Myr takes to the sky as soon as Madame Hooch blows the starting whistle, bat held in a loose fist and gripping his broom more with his knees than his other hand. He keeps below most of the others players to start, occasionally swooping up to protect the Chasers from incoming bludgers but otherwise remaining low.

He can see Fiona faintly between the crush of bodies hovering just above the main play level, doing the same as Myr. Their game plan is to keep the Hufflepuff Beaters constantly moving, while they themselves need to do very little. The goal is to keep up their energy for when the snitch is spotted.

He's so focused on his assigned job that Myr mostly loses track of what the Chasers are actually doing most of the time. He thinks the score is close, and he can tell when a goal has been made, but he's more focused on where the bludgers are than the quaffle.

Then he sees Fiona moving, and he scans and spots Charlie climbing rapidly, in clear pursuit of a golden glimmer. Lola is just behind him and gaining ground.

Myr immediately takes off after them, bat cocked up and scanning rapidly for any nearby bludgers.

Fiona beats him to it, firing off a bludger directly at Lola, and the blonde has to pull up to avoid it, giving Charlie a small lead in chasing the snitch.

In the end though, neither Seeker catches the tricky ball as it vanishes among the stands and the game resumes.

Myr retreats back below the players but he's even more tense now, and he can feel it affecting his game.

His swings are stiffer, and it puts his aim off. Laurel would be disappointed in him, he thinks wryly as one of his bludgers nearly clocks the Hufflepuff Keeper in the gut, though she luckily spots it and darts out of the way. He's not sure how he would feel if he ever hospitalized another player, accidentally or not.

It's another hour of game before the snitch is spotted again, this time by Lola.

As soon as Myr sees the chase start again he takes off, spotting one of the bludgers and firing it point-blank at Lola. Her swerving gives Charlie a chance to catch up, and in a move both brilliant and - in Myr's opinion - incredibly stupid, he stands up on the broom and run.

He pushes off the back of Lola's broom and grabs the snitch out of midair, just as Myr remembers she had done during the final game their first year. He can see Lola laughing even as he leans forward to catch Charlie before he can tumble to the ground and kill himself.

"That was spectacularly moronic." He informs the redhead once he's successfully gotten the Seeker onto his broom.

Charlie leans against his back and grins, waving the snitch in his face. "I knew you or Fi would be close enough to catch me."

Myr finally thinks to look up at the scoreboard as he escorts Charlie back to his broom, and just like that the lightness that always comes with a win dampens ever so slightly.

Even with Charlie's catch they've only won by twenty five points. Which means Hufflepuff has won the Quidditch Cup.

THIS WAS MOSTLY WRITTEN IN A HAZE OF FINAL STUDYING SO FASKLDHFLASDHFKLSDHFA. I tried ;; Next chapter will be mostly written in the same haze so apologies in advance (though actually it'll probably work well for the parts dealing with the exams!) One more chapter of fourth year left, and only one more chapter to be posted in 2018! Year 5 - and 2019 - here we come!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2453 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!