Chapter Twenty-Four

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Finding A Rhythm

There's always a stretch of time at the start of the year where the first years have to get used to their living situations. For Myr's year, they'd taken about a month to get settled - Myr himself had switched beds since he absolutely can't handle sleeping next to Remi, something he'd learned during their trial period.

They'd all thought this year's boys wouldn't need very long to get settled. After all, there were only two boys in the year, and Percy is notorious around school already for being extremely adherent to the rules.

A week and a half into the year however, Percy and Oliver Wood are still at each other's throats every time they're both in their dorm room, and there's no sign that they plan on slowing down.

Myr arrives back from double Potions on Thursday utterly exhausted and hoping to grab a nap before Quidditch tryouts that afternoon, only to hear the now-common sound of the two first year boys in the heat of yet another argument.

Charlie comes in behind him and immediately groans. "You know, at home Percy is the good kid." He complains. "I don't know why he's being such a pain now."

"He's sweet enough when he's not around Oliver." Fiona notes. "I think they may just have clashing personalities."

Charlie snorts. "Oliver is a lot like me, I like the kid. Percy's usually the one being about something or other."

Myr sighs and heads away from his friends and up the stairs. Usually Charlie or Bill is in charge of breaking up the first years, but Charlie has voiced his annoyance a lot more in the past two days, and Bill is studying in the library at the moment. And Myr figures if he's not getting a nap anyway he may as well see if he can help.

He walks into the battle zone braced for anything, but is surprised to find that despite the raised voices the scene he walks in on is otherwise rather civil.

Percy is standing next to his bed, back ramrod straight and arms crossed tightly across his chest. His ears are glowing red but his expression is carefully controlled.

On the other side of the room, Oliver is flopped back into the desk chair - and Myr is a little jealous that they get a desk in their room when his year doesn't - with his feet up on one of the two beds and glaring irritably at the red-head.

"I'm almost afraid to ask but what happened?" Myr sighs.

Percy and Oliver both looks surprised for a moment, but Percy recovers quickly and is only too happy to tell his side of the story first.

"Oliver tramped all over my side of the room with his muddy boots and now I have to redo my potions notes." Charlie's brother accuses, his voice pitching slightly at the end of the sentence and his hands curling into fists against his sleeves.

Oliver rolls his eyes. "Who leaves their notes on the floor?" He counters, his voice notably more even than Percy's but just as accusatory.

"They obviously fell! There were on my bed!" Percy's voice pitches again, and his ears flush even darker as he clamps his mouth shut.

Oliver groans and spins in the chair. "Well that's not my fault!"

"You shouldn't have been on my side!"

Myr decides he needs to step in now. "Okay, woah, breath, both of you. Percy, let me see your notes, I know a spell that should clean them up."

Percy looks at him uncertainly and then turns to his bed and picks up a pile of muddied notes.

Myr lays them out on the desk, shooing Oliver out of the way, and carefully performs a cleaning charm.

Percy grabs the notes from him the moment the mud is gone and rifles through them worriedly, letting out a small sigh of relief when he sees that they're unmarred.

Myr turns to Oliver, who's now seated on his own bed. "How about you two lay out a couple of ground rules? Shoes have to be taken off at the front of the room could be a good one. And you can choose punishments if the rules are broken."

Percy perks up. "I could do that." He offers. "I have some ideas-"

"Oh please, you'll make everything a rule!" Oliver complains. "Let's get Charlie to make the rules, he'll be fair."

Percy frowns, a mix of hurt and irritation on his features, before he nods sharply. "Fine, Charlie can decide."

Myr rubs his temples lightly as the two boys run past him to hunt down Percy's older brother, and while he's half sorry for sending the two first years to Charlie he figures he's done plenty for now. He checks the time and seeing that he has an hour to tryouts decides to try for that nap after all.

He somewhat succeeds, not fully passing out but at least resting his eyes for a solid forty five minutes, and he feels markedly better when he grabs his broom and heads out to the Quidditch Pitch.

The rest of the hopefuls are already there, and he spots Oliver Wood sitting excitedly in the stands. He gives the brunet a wave and Oliver happily returns the gesture.

Laughing, Myr jogs out to where the others are gathered and stands next to Charlie.

"Seems like we've got a fan already." He observes with a grin, and Charlie nods.

"Ollie is apparently quite a Quidditch player. Percy says it's pretty much all he talks about it. He's a Keeper too, so he actually has a decent shot next year. I don't think anyone knows who's going to replace Kent when he graduates this year."

The mentioned current Keeper, and new team Captain, chooses that moment to clap his hands and get everyone's attention.

"Alright people, we've got a couple obviously open positions this year, but we'll be taking auditions for every position. If you can out-fly the current players I'm not going to bench you. But if not there's a lot of space in reserves as well and some of our current players can tell you reserves is the first step to the main team." Kent nods at the end of his speech, content with it's contents.

Evera pouts at him. "But no way you're replacing your very own sister, right?" She jokes, and Kent shoves her.

"Extra play time for anyone who can out-fly this one." He adds with a grin.

"Easy enough." Jacob Fawley drawls carelessly. The sixth year Chaser is standing slightly off to the side, leaning on his broom in a way that makes Myr wince slightly. It can't be good for the bristles.

Evera glares at the older boy fiercely and he only gives her a cocky smile.

Kent coughs pointedly. "Right then, we'll do some stretches and then get into the sky. Follow me everyone!"

Kent's warmups are significantly less painful than Laurel's had been, and although Myr is of course pleased he's also already mourning his fantastic calves which he doubts will ever be in quite the shape they were in the year before.

The Chasers are airborne first, and Myr sits next to Charlie and Bradon near the benches, stretching in order to stay warm since he knows the Beater tryouts are up next.

"Do you think Kent really will change the lineup this year?" Brandon sounds hopeful. "I mean, it's almost all fourth years except him and Fawley, including the reserves."

Charlie pats his shoulder lightly. "I think there will at least be room in the reserves this year?" He offers, and Brandon deflates.

"Yeah. I'd almost rather be in the stands with Badger than stuck on a bench way down here." He sighs. "Maybe I'm just not cut out for Quidditch."

Charlie is immediately shaking his head. "Don't say that! You just have to keep trying!"

Brandon snorts. "Trying only goes so far." He points out. "If I'm not getting anywhere why not change course? I actually have been thinking about taking extra lessons with Snape for Potions."

Charlie gags, as does Remi who's sitting nearby but for once not trying to push himself into the conversation.

"Why would you actually want to spend time with that greasy git?" Charlie asks once he's put his face back to rights. "Honestly I'd do just about anything to get out of having to stare at his ugly glowering mug twice a week."

Brandon shrugs. "Yeah he's awful, but he's also a genuine Potions Master, and I like Potions."

"You like blowing up potions." Charlie corrects wryly, and Myr can't help but nod his agreement.

Brandon mocks offense, gasping dramatically and putting his hand over his heart as he collapses backwards onto the grass. "You wound me! My great experiments are true acts of potioneering greatness!"

"Great mess maybe." Myr quips, and Charlie snorts.

"Nice." They high five over Brandon's still prone form, and the American laughs as well, sitting up a moment later.

"You know, I'm actually liking this idea. I may not tryout after all." Brandon is halfway to his feet at this point, and Charlie is too busy looking confused to stop him. "See you two later, good luck and all though I'm sure you'll make the team again." And with that he's off, a spring in his step.

Myr blinks. "Well. I suppose he looks happy at least."

Charlie shakes his head. "I'm telling you that girlfriend of his has made him barmy. I don't get all the fuss about it personally."

Myr shrugs. "My sister seems happy with dating, but I haven't really thought about it yet. Mum says I'm probably a late bloomer like Cadi though. Maybe you are too?"

Charlie makes a face. "Maybe." He says. "But I hope not. Dating just seems yucky and weird. I'm happy with dragons."

Myr has to mount his broom a minute later as Evera, Drake, and the other Chaser hopefuls touch down. Only Kent and Fiona are still circling overhead, waiting for the other Beater candidates.

There's only three of them, Myr, Fiona, and an awkward second year who looks more ready to speed in the other direction than swing at any oncoming bludgers. Myr lands feeling pretty certain who he'll be teaming up with this year.

Fiona is equally optimistic. "Looks like I'm finally off the bench." She observes with a grin. "I look forward to beating with you Myr."

"I would like all to know that I am refraining from making a very crude joke about that." Evera announces proudly. "You're all welcome."

"Yes, we're very proud of you." Drake smirks, and Evera smacks him playfully as the group waits for Charlie and Remi to finish their Seeker tryouts.

"You know, I almost feel bad for Remi. No way he's every going to out fly Charlie, and yet he keeps trying. It's almost endearingly pathetic." Fiona notes, watching the two figures circling in the sky above them.

"Sure, if you're into that sort of thing." Evera makes a face. "I'd rather kiss Jacob Fawley than Remi Longbottom myself, but you do you girl."

Myr tunes out of the conversation as it strays into territory he's not yet comfortable or familiar with, and he instead watches the end of the tryouts. Once Charlie has made his way back over to them, the whole group treks back to the Great Hall for dinner, discussing who they think will replace Laurel and Cassidy.

"I mean, Fiona obviously is the new Beater even if she's no Laurel. No offense." Drake observes.

Fiona shrugs. "None taken, Laurel was a real talent. I'm just doing this for fun. And anyway, I doubt anyone will be as good as she was for a long time honestly."

Charlie grins. "My brothers might surprise you." He notes idly, and Evera is immediately interested.

"You've got more? I mean, you must have more, Bill is a Chaser and Percy is a raging nerd who probably doesn't even know how Quidditch works. How big is your family exactly?" She presses curiously.

Charlie puts his hands up under the assault of questions. "Okay, one at a time. First off, I've got twin brothers who play Beaters. Two Percy is a nerd, yeah, but he's actually a decent enough Chaser when he's in the mood. And he knows the Quidditch playbook like no one else I've met. Honestly I'm scared of when Oliver figures that out-"

"Figures out what? You guys were awesome up there today!" Said Quidditch-obsessed first year chooses that moment to spontaneously appear behind them, and Evera actually yelps in surprise as he's closest to her.

"Jeez kid, wear a bell or something." She groans. "I swear you have a sixth sense for knowing when people are talking about Quidditch."

Oliver beams happily at the comment. "I'm gonna be on the team next year!" He declares excitedly.

Charlie ruffles his hair almost distractedly. "Well we'll certainly have a Keeper position open next year, so it's possible. Kent has been the Gryffindor Keeper since we got here and Fiona was his reserve last year so it's up in the air who's getting the position now that he's graduating."

Oliver's eyes light up excitedly at the information. Myr is honestly surprised the first year hadn't already worked it out on his own somehow considering how much he seems to know about everything else Quidditch related.

"Then if she's not reserve this year maybe there won't be one! And I get to be the new Keeper!" He spins happily, nearly tripping himself in the process.

Charlie laughs. "Well that enthusiasm will certainly help! But you do know most second years don't make the team, right?"

"Hypocrite."

The group had arrived at the Gryffindor table to eat just as Charlie spoke, and Holly looks quite pleased at her interjection as the other fourth years, plus Oliver, join her, Brandon, and Nabila at the table. "You made the team your second year so you know full well that skill talks."

"That was with Laurel though. If Jacob makes Captain next year who knows what will happen?" Evera shudders.

"He'll probably just try to play every position himself." Drake jokes, and the group falls into a comfortable banter as they eat, with the occasional excited interjection from Oliver the only thing that breaks the flow of conversation.

As they head back up to the stairs towards Gryffindor Tower, something occurs to Myr.

"Hey Oliver, where's Percy? Did you two get everything sorted out?"

Oliver snorts. "Yeah, we're fine, he just overthinks everything and it's annoying is all. Charlie made good rules."

"Of course I did, I know how to handle my younger siblings." Charlie agrees proudly. "Anyway, Perce is probably in the library studying again. If he's not back in two hours I'll sic Bill on him."

Myr wonders what it would be like to have so many siblings. Then Evera steals Drake's broom and races off up the stairs shouting taunts and he thinks that maybe he already knows.

It's weird to watch Lenox and the other familiar flyers heading out for Quidditch tryouts while Rajani stays in the common room poring over her History assignment and making sure she's gotten all the dates correct.

Eugene and Queenie are sitting with her, and Eugene pats her shoulder comfortingly when her head instinctively turns to watch the group head out. "It's strange at first, but honestly the extra study time is worth it, I promise."

"It'll be different without Mayra this year as well." Rajani agrees, but she still feels a tug in her gut telling her she quit. The feeling does not sit lightly.

Nonetheless she manages to push down her unease - it's not like she hasn't been doing the same thing plenty these days with all her lying to her parents - and refocus on her homework long enough to get half-way through it.

That's when Ed joins them on the couch and any hope of actually getting work done goes out the window and drowns in the Black Lake.

"Hey pixies, what are you doing studying already? It's barely the end of the second week." The brunette grins over at them and Queenie pulls a face, putting down her quill.

"You're a terrible prefect, you know that? Telling students not to study." She admonishes him.

He grins. "Hey, I only have four classes, I've already long forgotten the stress of having to study every waking moment."

Rajani shoves him playfully, and he just laughs and pokes her back.

Queenie opens to make a comment that Rajani is sure will embarrass her, but then changes her mind moments later, her entire demeanor shifting from playful to somber in a heartbeat.

Rajani frowns at the change, but when she turns around she realizes the cause.

Cadfael Ashburner has emerged from the boy's dormitories and is quickly making his way towards the exit, his head down and a gloomy aura saturating the air around him.

Eugene sighs as his roommate leaves and the room's atmosphere immediately lightens again. "I wish he'd talk to someone, he's really bumming everyone out."

Ed frowns. "Why's he like that? I know he's always been a bit of a cad, excuse the pun, but he looked like death warmed over just then."

Queenie shakes her head. "His little brother passed away over the summer." She says quietly. "I can't even imagine - I don't even want to imagine life with Kingsley around. His brother was supposed to start at Hogwarts this year too..." She trails off, her face pressed into the carefully apathetic mask that Rajani recognizes as her friend trying not to tear up.

Ed lets out a low breath. "Oh, ouch. I may complain about them but I couldn't imagine losing any of my siblings either." A moment later he stands up. "I'll see if I can talk to him. You three have fun studying."

Queenie looks vaguely surprised as Ed gets up, suddenly all business, and hurries after their blond year mate.

"I honestly didn't think he had it in him to do that." She admits.

Rajani raises an eyebrow. "He is a prefect Queen." She points out with a trace of amusement.

Queenie shrugs. "I always figured the other boys in his year must be absolutely awful and that's why he was picked." She admits with a faint grin. "But you heard the prefect, back to studying. I want to get started on our Muggle Studies paper so that I don't have to think about it next week."

They get through about five minutes of work before Eugene pipes up again and derails their focus. "Who do you think will make Prefect in our grade next year?"

"Jemma Finnegan, obviously." Rajani replies promptly. "She's too much of a goody-two-shoes not to be. From our House I think Finn will probably be the male Prefect."

Eugene pouts. "Why not me?"

"Because you talk back in class too much." Queenie replies sweetly, pecking him on the cheek lightly. "I think it's cute but I don't think the professors appreciate it."

Eugene's lips quirk up. "Well I suppose I can't argue with that. What about you ladies? Who gets the honor of Prefect?"

"Obviously me." Queenie and Rajani speak at the exact same time, and the two girls look at each other in surprise a moment later.

Eugene scoots away. "Is this going to become a thing? Because if this is going to be a thing I'd like to get very far away very quickly please."

Queenie eyes Rajani critically, and then holds out her hand. "May the best woman win." She declare diplomatically.

Rajani gives the firmest handshake she can in response, and the two girls hold eye contact for a long moment before releasing their grip. Rajani's hand hurts slightly but she ignores it and grabs her quill again.

"So where were we?"

The study session is a bit tenser after that, but by the time the rest of their friends have wandered in from their various classes or other activities they've mostly fallen back into their usual routine.

Lenox is the last to arrive, waving at them only briefly before ducking up the stairs towards the dorms.

"I appreciate him." Eugene announces decidedly. "You know Cad and Alas don't shower every day? Finn neither but he also isn't always around at night. Dunno where exactly he gets to but he's not losing House points so I don't care. Lenox takes proper care of himself."

"Is that so?" Clary asks, sitting up from where she'd flung herself over the back of the couch, her eyes sparkling slightly. "I'd appreciate that too. I'm so glad I'm a girl, we all have proper hygiene."

"That's because we're Slytherins." Nia says primly. "I've smelt the Gryffindor and Hufflepuff girls at times and they're as bad as boys."

"Why is this our conversation topic?" Elspeth grumbles. The two girls are sitting on the floor in front of the couch, with their homework out but ignored in favor of chatting. "Boy are gross, girls are gross, everyone is gross. End of discussion. Someone talk about Transfiguration, I don't understand Colovaria."

Nia turns to help Elspeth with the incantation as the others laugh.

"I'm excited to see who you eventually fall in love with Els." Queenie grins. "We'll see if you think boys are gross after that."

Rajani very nearly adds on 'or girls' but bites her tongue. She doesn't know how her friends feel about that lifestyle and she doesn't want to unintentionally out her sister to anyone. Or unintentionally out anyone else in the area who might be the same.

She sighs to herself, grimacing as she looks back to her essay. She's only half-listening to the following conversation - she knows Lenox rejoins them at some point - but her attention is fully regained when a figure approaches them that normally doesn't hang around their group.

Eugene tilts his head curiously at the newcomer. "Hey Alas. What's up?"

Alasdair shrugs uncertainly. "Have you guys seen Cadfael around? We normally hang out in the courtyard and practice for class a bit but he never showed up today."

Eugene, Queenie, and Rajani all share a look, and by unspoken agreement Rajani stands up.

"We saw him earlier. He was in a mood - Ed went to go talk to him. I can help you look if you want."

Alasdair starts to shake his head but Rajani holds up a hand.

"Look, you probably know best where Cadfael would hang out, and I know where Ed would. Between us we're more likely to find them."

Alasdair hesitates, and then nods uncertainly.

"He hates you though." He notes idly and Rajani can't help but smirk.

"I'm aware. It's his own fault though, following us out. He ought to know Slytherins-"

"I know what we're supposedly like." Alasdair cuts her off. "You just take that pretty firmly to heart. Snakes are ambitious and clever, but we're supposed to have each other's backs - no one else is going to after all."

And in one sentence Alasdair makes Rajani feel like Hippogriff dung.

She sighs heavily. "I'll apologize, alright? I honestly didn't know about the vanished stair - I didn't know he'd get the flack for that too."

Alasdair glances at her out of the corner of his eye as they make their way through the winding dungeon corridors. "Did you ever find out who did that?"

Rajani shakes her head. "Nothing concrete. I may have my own suspicions but like you said, Slytherins have each other's backs so I'll be keeping those to myself for now." She tilts her head up to look at the ceiling thoughtfully. "I will try to better in general about applying that to people outside of my immediate friend group from now on."

Alasdair shrugs. "I honestly don't care. Don't go having a crisis of self on my behalf."

That actually earns a sharp laugh from Rajani and she looks back to her traveling companion. "Oh, no, don't worry. I've already passed that point a while ago - you're just a step in the already occurring crisis."

He smirks. It's faint, but it's there. "Well, good to know I suppose."

They walk mostly in silence after that, only speaking up to suggest a direction they think may prove helpful to their search.

Rajani normally isn't a fan of the quiet, as it reminds her far too much of her parents' house, but right now she's thankful for it as her thoughts spiral around her head and try to reorganize themselves in the face of the new information Alasdair has given her.

They wander the dungeons for some time, and Rajani makes a mental note to herself that she should properly explore the entire network of winding corridors before they graduate. Eventually, they reach an area that leads up, and Rajani perks up when she hears movement.

"Might be rats again." Alasdair points out, as flat as ever.

It's not rats. Although Ed is nowhere to be seen, Cadfael is sitting against one of the walls, idly drawing nonsensical patters in the dust coating the ground.

"Hey, it's dinner time if you're hungry." Alasdair greets, walking over to slide down next to the other boy, Rajani's presence either forgotten or ignored. Rajani thinks it's most likely the latter.

Cadfael startles faintly, and then shakes his head. "Lost track of time. Not hungry though."

Alasdair shrugs. "We'll get something later then. Raj is here too."

Rajani is surprised to hear Alasdair refer to her so casually - normally only her friends use her nickname. She nods politely when Cadfael looks up at her, and he makes a face.

"Why is she here?"

"She can speak for herself, thanks." Rajani interrupts before Alasdair can answer the question. "I offered to help look since I know Ed and he went after you earlier. I'm still here because I owe you an apology for two years ago. There are reasons for my behavior but I've been treating them like excuses, and for that I apologize."

Cadfael eyes her warily, and then nods. "It's fine."

Taking that as a dismissal, Rajani decides to head back up to the Great Hall, as her own stomach is starting to protest the lack of food.

She arrives well after the rest of the school, but Queenie has saved her a seat and she slips in between the dark-skinned girl and Clary with as little fuss as she can manage.

"How went the hunt?" Clary questions.

Rajani shrugs and starts to fill up her plate. "Successful I suppose. Alasdair is very..." For once words elude her and she merely gestures with her fork.

"Definitely." Eugene agrees with a laugh. "He and Cadfael seem to get each other though, so at least they've both got someone."

Rajani nods distantly. "And they do have us as well." She adds after a moment.

Eugene hums. "Of course! Slytherins always have each other's backs - the prefects tell that to the first years every year, right on the first night. But I mean just for casual stuff they have each other, because I'm pretty sure I'd be bored out of my mind trying to study with those two."

"You'd probably get more done though." Lenox points out wryly, and Eugene laughs.

"Probably, but where's the fun in that?"

Rajani once again finds herself sitting quietly as her friends talk. Something about the whole day has drained her, so although she responds when directly addressed she has little energy to do more than that.

She knows Queenie is giving her worried looks from across the table, but she decides she'll address them later. Honestly even she isn't sure why she's feeling as hollow as she is at the moment, so there wouldn't be much she could say at this point regardless.

Dinner drags by slower than Rajani thinks is normal, but they do eventually retire back to the common room where she can distract herself with work and pointedly ignore her friends' attempts to engage her. She does eventually tell them that she's feeling rather under the weather, giving the girls a pointed look that has them fending off any further attempts at interrogation over her mood.

Rajani knows it has nothing to do with her monthly cycle though, despite her implications. She'd finished a little over a week ago, so this particular rush of emotional upheaval is all her, and that's almost as upsetting as the upheaval itself.

She does surprisingly manage to finish her Muggle Studies essay before she decides to call it a night and head down the tunnel to the dormitories, wishing her year mates goodnight as they likely won't be retiring for a few hours yet.

When she gets to the room, she contemplates her bed for a long moment before instead turning to her nightstand and pulling out a quill and parchment. She hasn't sent a letter to her parents and she should probably report to them that everything is going well.

The letter is brief and to the point, and she folds it neatly and places it in her book bag to ensure she won't forget in. Then she changes into sleepwear and settles beneath her comforter.

She doesn't fall asleep right away - it's far too early for her to consider doing so - and instead her mind goes back to wandering over everything she's learned that day.

She feels a bit less hollow now, but the thoughts still don't sit comfortably, and when she does finally doze off what feels like it must be hours later, she's still rather uneasy about the whole situation.

She doesn't have very good dreams that night.

Franziska thinks she's come up with quite an effective way of balancing her relationship with Brandon and her friendships with everyone else - simply involving Brandon in everything she does with her friends.

This mostly has resulted in them having to move their study sessions out of the Hufflepuff common room and into empty classrooms (since they had been rather quickly ejected from the library for being too loud). Franziska doesn't mind it, and for the most part her friends are fine with the change, though they tend to filter in and out.

Nearly a month into the school year finds her settling into a room on the eighth floor (and she's pretty sure she's never actually been on the eighth floor before this) on a Friday afternoon with her bag stuffed full of every textbook she could fit.

Brandon is with her, and he looks amused as she dumps the contents of her bag onto the table they've selected. "You planning to get through everything in the next three hours?" He teases lightly, sitting next to her and pulling out his Potions book.

She grins at him. "I figure if people forget their textbooks or finish something earlier than expected then they can just use my books."

"You are the sweetest." He drops a kiss on her cheek before pulling open his book. "Who all are we expecting today?"

Franziska doesn't have to answer, as their study group bursts through the door not moment later.

She laughs. "There's your answer."

Leona pouts dramatically. "Dang it, I wanted to catch you two being illicit!"

Aidan shakes his head at her in mock scolding. "I told you, they were expecting us. That's just sneaking 101, never let your target know you're coming."

Kiera cackles. "But it can be fun watching them squirm, wondering when you'll arrive!" She points out cheerfully.

"This is true." Henry concurs as he closes the door behind them. "But also somewhat cruel."

Franziska waves them all over. "Brandon and I are model students. Henry, did you still want to work on the new Defense hex?"

Henry nods eagerly, taking the seat next to Franziska and pulling out his wand with no further prompting.

Leona and Kiera spend most of the time messing around, but they're polite enough to not interfere in the others' studies. Even Brandon has buckled down on his Potions in particular.

He'd told Franziska the second week of classes that he plans to get private theory lessons from Snape, but he'll have to prove himself in class first. So far he's stuck fast to his resolution and Franziska is happy to support him through it even if she really doesn't get why anyone would willingly spend more time than absolutely necessary with Professor Snape.

She personally doesn't care if she does manage an E on the Potions OWL in a year, she's planning to drop the class for her last two years of school.

Aidan is spending more time helping Brandon with his new passion, and Franziska is just happy that none of the ABC club guys seem inclined towards pranks this year.

She neatly deflects Henry's botched Revulsion Jinx, though it bounces dangerously close to the table and jolts one of the benches.

"Hey, watch it!" Leona yelps. "You know, you ought to ask for proper tutoring for Defense, you've always been poop at that class."

Henry flushes. "I'm trying!"

Leona's grin has taken on the quality that Franziska recognizes she's about to unleash her uncanny powers of knowing absolutely everything going on in the castle. "I'm just saying. Perhaps that Ravenclaw girl in our year - Amelia, isn't it? She's quite good from what I hear. I bet she'd be more than happy to help you."

Henry's face gets even darker, and Franziska immediately realizes what Leona is up to.

"Leona, stop meddling in other people's love lives." She scolds lightly, but she knows that she's grinning. "Henry will ask her out in his own time I'm sure, if he really likes her."

Leona sticks her tongue out but obligingly drops the topic with just one last knowing look at Henry, who's still blushing terribly.

Franziska takes pity on him. "Hey, why don't we switch to the Potions essay? I bet Aidan and Brandon can help out with it. They haven't been working on anything else for the past hour."

"I was doing extracurriculars." Brandon defends himself, and she bumps him lightly having known full well he wasn't working on the assigned essay.

Aidan looks appropriately embarrassed as well. "Sorry, the theory is fascinating, we kind of got off track."

"Completely by accident I'm sure." Kiera teases. "But also I'd like help with that too, Potions bullocks."

"Language!" Franziska yelps, and everyone at the table laughs at her blush.

They end up never finishing the essay, getting distracted talking about Quidditch and the upcoming Hogsmeade trip.

"I assume you two will want to make a date of it, but what's everyone else up to?" Leona dismisses Franziska and Brandon with a wave of her hand, looking intently at the others.

"Like you don't already know." Aidan points out with a grin.

She shrugs. "Wouldn't you like to know. I have to maintain my air of mystery you know."

He nods sagely. "Indeed. Gossiping 101 after all."

The both giggle at that, and Franziska thinks back to their conversation when they'd first come in and wonders if it's an in-joke she missed.

"Well I'm raiding Zonko's with Tonks. She's promised to try and not have a weekend detention for once." Kiera laughs.

"What did she do to get today's by the way? I thought she was supposed to study with us." Aidan pipes up.

Kiera shrugs. "Annoyed Filch somehow - did you know he can give detentions?"

"He can give House points too." Franziska pipes up. "I got ten from him last year during the prank war."

"Wait what?" Even Leona looks surprised by the information, and Franziska feels a stab of pride that she actually knew something before her roommate did.

"Yeah, I helped him clean up one of the corridors during a free period. It wasn't anything big really." Franziska shrugs modestly, but she knows her smile is ruining any chance of her being considered humble right at this moment.

Kiera shakes her head in amazement. "I honestly would have thought Jemma would get points out of him before you would. No offense."

Franziska just laughs and shrugs. Honestly she would have thought the same in her friend's shoes, and she says as much.

"True." Leona agrees. "I mean, we're all Hufflepuff but Jemma is, like, above and beyond."

"She wanted to be in Gryffindor though, did you know?" Brandon pipes up cheekily.

Kiera makes a face. "Boo, no. She would have been a terrible Gryffindor."

Brandon sticks his tongue out at her and the two devolve into a private war over who could make the more ridiculous face. Franziska buries her face in her hands and pretends she doesn't know her boyfriend as the others laugh at the display.

Dinner arrives sooner than Franziska expects and the whole group arrives in the Great Hall late. Brandon bids them farewell and hurries over to join Charlie and Drake at the Gryffindor table while the Hufflepuffs join their own table on the other side of the hall.

Jemma greets them with a smile. "How did studying go?"

"Could you go over my Charms essay?" Kiera requests promptly. "You're the best in that class, I don't trust these people."

"Not even me?" Tonks bats her eyes at her best friend, but breaks down laughing only moment later.

Jemma smiles modestly. "Of course I can Kiera, though I don't think I'll have time until Monday, is that okay? I'm starting the first year study group this weekend."

Kiera nods easily. "It'll probably not be done until Monday, so that works perfectly." She grins at Jemma's long-suffering stare.

"You really shouldn't put things off for so long, we've had that assigned for over a week now." Jemma scolds lightly.

They talk about classes for a bit, but there isn't yet much to discuss despite the steadily mounting homework levels. Naturally the conversation turns back to the upcoming first Hogsmeade trip, and everyone excitedly shares their plans.

"I actually have a date." Jemma admits off-handedly, wincing when Leona spins to face her so quickly Franziska is rather certain her brunette friend is going to have whiplash.

"Did you see how good I was? I didn't tell anyone until you said it!" Leona exclaims proudly. "But Drake asked her to go just the two of them three whole days ago! I didn't realize you two were getting closer but that's so cute!"

Jemma blushes slightly at the attention now being focused on her, but Franziska finds her eyes drifting past the blonde to the slight figure sitting on Jemma's other side.

Donaghan is smiling, but it's strained and Franziska feels bad for him. She'd been watching him nervously nursing his crush on Jemma for the entire month of school and she'd really hoped he'd get the guts up to ask her out.

But she can admit that she sees how Drake and Jemma could work as well, and she wishes her friend luck and suggests a possible double-date in the future if things work out.

The weekend passes rather quickly. Franziska mostly spends it studying, but she does sneak up to the Astronomy Tower with Brandon on Saturday night to stargaze - and make out a bit, admittedly. They're caught by Bill Weasley, who tells them to get back to the dorms and not get seen by anyone else.

"We're lucky it was him." Brandon admits as they sneak back down the Tower stairs. "Bill's cool, he'll just give warnings to first time offenders. But anything more than that and he takes points."

Franziska grins at him. "We just can't get caught next time then."

She muffles her own laugh at the look on Brandon's face, gives him a quick kiss goodnight, and reminds him not to get caught again before hurrying back towards the Hufflepuff dorms and leaving her stunned boyfriend in the corridor. Hopefully he'd snap out of it and not get a detention. She's rather looking forward to their upcoming Hogsmeade weekend.

The week ends up dampening that enthusiasm with the sudden rush of assignments and complex new spells piled onto them by the professors. By Friday, Franziska is exhausted and dreading their History of Magic and Transfiguration lessons in the afternoon.

"Are we still working on Evanesco or was Tuesday the last day for that?" Tonks frets. "Because I'm still not doing it right."

The Hufflepuff fourth years are enjoying what is a surprisingly warm day for the start of October out in the Clocktower Courtyard, comparing schedules and planning their study groups for the month.

"Last class was the last one, we're spending this month on cross-species switches." Cian announces flatly from where he'd sat a bit away from the group after Donaghan had dragged him to the meet up. "You'll have to practice on your own."

"I can help, I'm not totally comfortable with it yet either." Tyler offers, shuffling through his assignments. "We could work on it after Divination on Mondays?"

"Those of us not in the class could secure a location right after lunch and work on things beforehand too." Jemma suggests.

They have a rather rough idea of when they'll be meeting to study in the coming week when it's time to head back to classes, but Franziska knows that unless they solidify it over the weekend she'll probably be studying alone with Brandon. Which isn't the most objectionable situation, but she doubts they'll actually get much studying done if no one else is around.

She honestly gets through the last two classes in something of a daze, and she makes a note in Transfiguration to go over what they'd done with Aidan since she hadn't really been processing any of it.

But finally, finally, the week was over and Franziska looked forward to the Hogsmeade trip with renewed enthusiasm, putting thoughts of the pile of work waiting for her to the back of her mind and focusing on enjoying her day with Brandon.

She eats breakfast on Saturday at the Gryffindor table, chatting with Holly and Fiona while Brandon goofs off with Charlie.

"We're raiding Honeydukes for all of it's candy." Holly informs Franziska cheerfully when the latter asks what her plans are for the trip. "That's we as in me, Fiona, Nabila, and Evera. She usually doesn't come with so that will be fine."

Franziska nods, and then blinks and looks over. "Wait, who usually doesn't come with?"

"Evera." Fiona supplies with a smile. "Usually she's with Drake and Jemma but since it's a date this time she doesn't want to third wheel."

Franziska hums. "That would make sense. She's okay with it though? Them dating?"

Holly glances at Fiona, who nods firmly. "She's fine. So what about you, anything big planned with Brandon?"

Franziska shrugs in reply. "Nothing in particular. We're just going to walk around and enjoy the warm weather while it lasts. Most likely we'll be back here by mid afternoon and spend some time down at the lake."

Holly sighs. "I'm jealous. Charlie still won't go out with me."

"Maybe you ought to accept that and move on." Fiona suggests. Holly waves her off.

"Nonsense, it's tradition now. And anyway, I don't even like anyone really, so who else would I move on too?"

Fiona just shakes her head forlornly and Franziska grins at their antics.

She drags Brandon out the door before everyone else has finished, wanting to make the walk to Hogsmeade without their friends, much as she enjoys their company.

"How is Potions coming along?" She asks as they walk, and is happy to quietly listen as Brandon immediately goes off talking about his latest scheme to get their irritable Potions Professor to give him extra lessons.

Franziska really doesn't understand most of what Brandon is talking about, but it's cute to see him so excited about something so she stays quiet, nodding and humming at appropriate moments to keep him talking. They're only a minute or so out from the village when he realizes how long he's been talking.

"But yeah, that's sort of the long and short of it." He cuts himself off and grins over at her sheepishly. "Anything big happening in your life lately?"

She shakes her head, still amused. "I see you every day Brandon, you'd know if there was. I'm dreading Charms this year though, I reckon we'll have to build up muscle in our wrists if we don't wand our hands falling off."

He laughs and pulls her towards Honeydukes. The conversation fades out as they pick out a few sweets before their classmates catch up and overrun the store. By the time they've paid the rest of the school is starting to stream into the village and they make their escape into the Three Broomsticks, claiming a quiet table at the back before anyone else can steal it.

All in all, it's a good start.

Ana hasn't ever gone into Hogsmeade without a clear purpose before. She doesn't think she likes it very much.

She's scheduled to meet with Hannah for lunch around twelve thirty, but that leaves her with an entire hour which she has no idea what to do with.

She ends up wandering between shops, fidgeting with her bracelet and constantly checking that her coin purse still has the same amount of money in it as when she'd left the castle. Eventually she does go into Tomes and Scrolls and peruses the shelves to see if any of the books catch her attention. There are a few first editions that catch her eye, but what she ultimately decides to purchase is a tome on animagi and how to identify them. It costs more than she normally would have paid for such a simple book, but she still has thirty minutes before Hannah arrives and she's officially sick of being bored.

She heads towards the Shrieking Shack and settles on a bench about half way out to the supposedly haunted building. Ana believes it to be a load of nonsense of course - if there was any truth to it there would be at least some similarities between the numerous stories surrounding the place. What really solidified her disbelief was when she heard claim that it was a Muggle haunting the shack - anyone with half a brain knows that only witches and wizards can leave imprints on the world in the form of ghosts.

But the tall tales scare enough people off that the road leading to it is quiet enough to settle down and read for a while.

There are the occasional stray groups of third years on their first Hogsmeade expedition, but Ana finds that giving them a sharp glare is more than enough to get them to settle down if they're being too rowdy and break her concentration.

The book is at least interesting - if, as she had expected, overpriced - and she gets absorbed enough that she's startled when someone sits down beside her.

"Good book?" Hannah grins, and Ana quickly closes it and turns to face the older woman.

She hasn't seen her friend since graduation the year before, though she had sent Hannah a book on Muggle Astronomy when the blonde had turned eighteen over the summer. Hannah looks exactly the way Ana remembers, rounding and with hair like straw both in color and texture.

"It's adequate, thought I paid too much for it." She reponds to the question, and Hannah laughs.

"Oh man I forgot about how you talk like that. Everyone in the Observatory is super casual - I've learned more slang there then I ever did at school."

Ana pushes down the urge to make a face. "Oh, well that's... good?"

Hannah laughs again. "Don't worry, I know it's crazy. I'm having fun though. Anyway, shall we get lunch? I miss Madame Rosmerta's butterbeer something awful, I never get a chance to get any when I'm in town."

Ana follows her friend, tucking her new book beneath her arm. "Why don't you have the chance? You don't work very far from here, and I can't imagine you'd live very far either as commuting out here is quite a pain."

Hannah nods. "I actually live in Hogsmeade, but we don't have days off really, and I work nights so I usually get home after Madame Rosmerta closes, and I usually don't wake up until the afternoon at which point I'm rushing to get to work." She shrugs lightly. "So if I start dozing off please don't be insulted." She adds with a grin.

Ana frowns. "I wouldn't want to be imposing Hannah. If you need to sleep-"

Hannah is cutting her off within seconds of her trying to voice the thought. "Nonsense, I always have time for friends. Josie is swinging by over Christmas to tell me all about the fancy French University she got into - did you hear about that? I know you and Josie weren't as close so I don't know if she told you."

Josie had not - the only other people Ana had really kept in contact with were Sarah and Eric - so Hannah is happy to fill her in.

They continue catching up over lunch, and Ana once again remembers how much she misses her old group of friends. As enjoyable as sitting with Amelia and Shaun can be, they're not as intelectually stimulating as the seventh years had been when they were still at school.

"So I've been blathering on long enough I think." Hannah jokes as she wraps up a story about one of her coworkers spending an entire three nights trying to plot a new star system, only to find that the telescope lens was dusty and that's what he'd been studying. "How are things at Hogwarts? Are you still tutoring?"

Ana hums, thinking how exactly to answer the question. "I suppose the answer would be yes, though since he made the team this year Marcus doesn't exactly pay attention when I'm trying to explain things."

Honestly tutoring sessions with Marcus Flint, the son of one of her mother's friends, have gotten rather uncomfortable thanks to the fact that Alasdair Macmillan also made the Slytherin Quidditch team, and he and Marcus have become friends. This has resulted in Ana seeing a lot more of the boy, who she used to be friends with but eventually stopped talking to for no specific reason.

She of course doesn't say any of this to Hannah, who's nodding sympathetically.

"Quidditch people get really intense about that game honestly, I'm not surprised he's distracted. Though the season doesn't start until next month - if he's bad now you may want to brace yourself for worse then." Hannah is clearly amused by the situation, but Ana frowns when she realizes her friend is right.

"I suppose whenever we have a loss I should probably just cancel the sessions." She muses. "Honestly, I'll never understand how utterly obsessed people get with that game."

Hannah laughs. "Well I can think of a few reasons to watch. The players being in excellent shape being the least of those."

Ana thinks about the people on the Ravenclaw Quidditch team. "I suppose they aren't terrible to look at." She concedes. "Still, I'm not sure that would be enough for me to really get into the game."

Hannah shrugs as Madame Rosmerta walks over to them. "Who said anything about liking the game? I just like watching." She laughs and then turns to greet their hostess, who takes their orders and then hurries off to deal with the rest of the customers.

"But anything else going on? I recall my fourth year was rather chaotic." Hannah smiles at the memories. Ana has heard bits and pieces about the year before she'd arrived at Hogwarts, but she never got the complete story from any of her friends.

"Your fourth year contained a Defense teacher who blew things up nearly as often as Evie does." Ana points out. "Our teacher this year can barely stand up. Again."

Hannah winces. "Yikes, hopefully Dumbledore will find someone younger next year? Are you at least learning things?"

Ana nods briskly. "I can teach myself of course. But there is actually one rather exciting thing happening for me this year."

Hanna perks up. "Your animagus lessons, right? I've been wanting to ask but I didn't want to say anything if you weren't enjoying them."

Ana shakes her head. "Oh no, they're wonderful. I meet with Professor McGonagall every Sunday after lunch for two hours. She says I'm not allowed to actually make any attempts to complete the spell until next year so we're just going through the steps and the dangers each poses."

Hannah hums. "Makes sense, fourteen is a bit young to be doing transformations like that. She'll probably have you wait past Halloween next year. Sixteen is a much better age for things like that."

Ana tilts her head in acknowledgement. "We've been looking at the effects of transformation on the developing body these past few weeks so I understand. I'm excited to learn about my form but not enough to risk my health."

They continue catching up, and Ana finds herself smiling without realizing it. She really has missed her friend, and when it's time for Hannah to run home to get ready for work Ana is rather dissapointed.

"Will we be able to meet at the next Hogsmeade weekend?" She asks, and Hannah looks surprised.

"Of course we will! I have to give you your birthday present after all." She grins. "I'll be seeing you every Hogsmeade until you get sick of me."

"I used to see you every day at every meal, I highly doubt I'd grow tired of your presence now seeing as I havn't already." Ana points out, and Hannah just laughs.

"I miss you Ana. Keep up the good work, but don't overwork!" She warns, giving Ana a hug goodbye that Ana tries to escape from immediately.

"Yes alright, I'll see you in a few weeks." She responds once she's extracted herself from the embrace.

Hannah waves as she hurries down the main street, turning off after a moment and vanishing from sight. Ana turns to head back towards the castle. It's only two in the afternoon, so she'll have time to do her school work before dinner, which she's rather pleased about.

The rest of the day goes by rather quickly between studying and writing essays, and when she awakens the next morning she grabs her notes for her animagus lessons and heads straight to the library to start reviewing.

Although it's only the fifth Sunday of the year, and only the fourth that she's had the lessons, she's already perfected the routine. A quick breakfast followed by settling at one of the back corner tables in the library with her notes from the previous sessions and all the books she's collected on animagi, which she then spends the morning going through in order to be fully ready for the afternoon's lesson.

This particular morning is the first one to divulge from the usual routine when Finnigan Marley walks over to her table, actually managing to startle Ana when he sits across from her.

She stares at him for a long moment as he pulls out his textbooks and parchment, spreading out over the half of the table not occupied by Ana's notes.

"No, no one was using that side, go right ahead." She drawls once she's recovered.

Finnigan half-glances up at her, then goes back to his notes without responding.

Ana rolls her eyes and returns to her own studying, not letting the surprise visitor throw her off her game any longer than he already has.

But the incident leaves her just confused enough to mention it over lunch to Amelia, Shaun, and Jerome, who have unintentionally become the new group of people she takes meals with.

Amelia frowns. "That is weird. I don't think he's ever willingly sat with anyone else outside of class before." She looks over at Shaun and Jerome. "Is he more open with you guys?"

"Not even slightly." Jerome shakes his head rapidly enough that Ana thinks he may give himself whiplash. "He's been super withdrawn and quiet from day one. Even Fitz chats more than he does and Fitz is like a scared little puppy most of the time."

Ana smirks at the comparison. "Not inaccurate. Well, whatever. He didn't distract me, I just found it odd."

"Quite." Shaun agrees quietly. "Maybe we could talk to him tonight? He's been rather sore since getting cut from the Quidditch team this year - maybe he just wants to reach out to someone but doesn't know how."

Ana rather doubts it, but she keeps her thoughts to herself and finishes her lunch as quickly as possible without choking or being impolite. Once she's excused herself she hurries to the Transfiguration classroom, moving perhaps a bit faster than she should be.

She knocks at the door once she arrives and waits a few second before pushing open the door and stepping in.

"Good afternoon Ms. Vulchanova. Take a seat, I'll be with you in a moment."

Professor McGonagall is grading essays at her desk, and Ana quickly settles in one of the front seats of the classroom and arranges her notes in front of her. She then folds her hands together in her lap and waits as patiently as she can manage for McGonagall to be ready.

After about three minutes the professor puts away her grading quill and stands. "I apologize for making you wait Ms. Vulchanova, but I do believe you are early today."

Ana lowers her eyes slightly. "My apologies, shall I wait for the appointed time?"

McGonagall shakes her head. "No need. Now, let us begin. Today and for the next several weeks we will be discussing the risks of long-term use of one's animagus form. We will start with the physical aspects and then delve into the mental and emotional. Any questions before we begin?"

Ana shakes her head quickly and raises her quill, adjusting her ink pot so it's easily in reach, prepared to write down everything McGonagall says.

The lesson itself is quite interesting, though nothing Ana hasn't briefly read up about on her own in the past. At the end of the session she packs up her things, thanks her teacher profusely, and then hurries back to Ravenclaw Tower to go over her new notes before dinner time.

"How was animagus training?" Amelia greets her casually as she enters their dorm. It was odd at first to be on comfortable speaking terms with the quiet girl but Ana is mostly used to it by now. Their third roommate Evie is nowhere to be seen, though admittedly Ana hasn't really seen much of her at all outside of lessons and curfew.

"Quite interesting, though I'm looking forward to next week more. We'll be discussing the mental impacts of frequent or long term transformations which isn't something I've found any books on yet."

Amelia tilts her head. "Sounds fascinating. You'll have to tell me about it. Have you finished the Astronomy Chart for tomorrow? I wanted to compare results with someone who actually gets good grades in that class."

Maybe Ana will never be fully comfortable with being on casual speaking terms with Amelia she thinks, as the request takes her by surprise.

"Of course. Let me just get it and we can compare." She agrees, and the two girls work on Astronomy until it's time to join the rest of their House for dinner.

It's definitely different than her past three years, Ana reflects as she and Amelia are joined in the common room by Shaun and Jerome and all four of them head to the Great Hall, but it's not bad. It's all becoming routine.

Ana and Franziska fought me this week which is odd - I had their parts better planned out than Myr and Raj's this chapter OTL. Ah well, things happen. And speaking of things happening, a LOT is going on on this end of the story creation - Hogwarts: A History now officially has a  sequel! That's right, when this story ends we'll be jumping right off into Confronting the Faceless, which will feature some of the characters and all of the canon from this story! And also, in two weeks we'll officially be half-way through this story. I'll save the cheesy emotional spiel for that author's note though, so for now we'll leave off here. I hope everyone is surviving midterm season for those of you stuck in it like I am. And I hope those of you who aren't appreciate your freedom! xD

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2453 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!