Chapter Six

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Spring Thaw

January, Rajani decides, is the worst month of the year.

It's been two days since she's returned to Hogwarts and both days have been grey and cold and miserable. The fluffy blanket of snow that had enveloped Hogwarts in early December has since settled and compacted into layers of mush that always manage to soak through her boots and leave her toes numb and shriveled by the end of the day.

The only positive is seeing her friends again. They've taken to crowding around the Slytherin common room's fireplace and sharing stories of what they did over break. Mayra Byrne has several amusing stories from her Italian holiday, and Edward Poole dishes about a pickup Quidditch game that ended when his Gryffindor brother broke one of the other player's noses by flying directly into him. Everyone is quite amused by this particular story, and Patrick Poole finds himself heckled a bit more than usual in the hallways about his flying skills.

Classes are surprisingly easy to settle back into, but Rajani supposes that's because they'd had so much homework over the break that they didn't really have a chance to fall out of study habits. But it's nice to have her usual group to work with again - no one in her family is quite as enthusiastic about explaining History to her as Queenie is.

A few of the other houses try building snow forts and starting snowball fights but it never works out and Rajani often sees them traipsing back inside looking like drowned cats. For her part she has zero interest in even trying to find something fun about the weather. It's simply miserable and she'd much rather sulk by the fire and complain with her dorm mates.

Elspeth is particularly useful for this. Apparently something had happened over break with one of the older students and she's started talking more with the house, so although she's still a bit standoffish she at least responds when spoken to.

"Why does winter so much?" She grumbles, mostly to herself but loud enough that Rajani, who's curled up in the seat next to her, can still hear.

Rajani shrugs. "Because the world clearly hates us. There is no other explanation."

"You two are sure cheery." Eugene remarks from behind them. Rajani doesn't need to turn around to know that he's smirking. She can hear it in his voice. "Maybe it wouldn't so much if you weren't such downers about it."

"You were sulking just this morning about getting snow on your trousers Eugene, don't even go there." Finn counters as he enters the common room, shaking fresh snow out of his hair, which has grown past his ears since break.

"Eugene stop antagonizing people. Finn get a haircut. Raj scoot over so I can get at that fire." Queenie instructs as she slips past Finn and into the room. Rajani obligingly shifts her position so Queenie can plop down on the floor between her and Elspeth's feet.

"My hair is fabulous, thank you." Finn responds airily before he's off to his room to do who knows what. Despite being quite amicable he's never really been part of the group of people Rajani considers as her friends. She isn't quite sure why this is if she's honest, but as Finn hasn't made any attempts to rectify the situation Rajani doesn't feel too terrible about it.

Eugene eventually joins them in front of the fire and the four of them begin working on their newest Defense assignment. They'd had their first practical lesson of the semester about an hour before and it had been rather disastrous. Not a single person had successfully performed the general counter curse before class was over, so Professor Whits had assigned a foot long essay dedicated to the discovery and uses of the spell.

They're joined by Lenox and Nia shortly after, but Clary never appears. As they pack up their things and head to the Great Hall for dinner, Rajani decides to comment on it.

"Hey, where did Clary get to? She usually joins us during our study sessions."

Nia glowers at the empty space in front of her. "She has better friends to hang out with I guess."

Rajani frowns. She's obviously missed something.

Lenox tugs her gently to the back of the group.

"Clary is apparently best friends with one of the Ravenclaw girls and has been hanging out with her ever since they got back to school." He explains quietly. "Nia is really upset about it. She seems to be taking it as a personal insult."

Rajani nervously thinks about her own non-Slytherin friend Donaghan. She's so far successfully kept him away from the rest of her housemates, and she's not sure he's worth losing them as friends.

"I mean, she's still Slytherin though, right? Like the prefects said, we're all family."

Lenox shrugs. "We'll still look out for her, but I think things might be a little tense for a while."

Clary is already at the table in the Great Hall when they arrive, and she waves to them cheerfully. Nia ignores her and sits at the opposite end of the table.

Clary frowns, and then picks up and moves so she's sitting with them. "Hey, who poured itching powder down your shorts?"

Eugene makes a face. "That is vile Clary, learn some class."

Nia shoots him an annoyed look, and he gives one in return. "Just because you're giving her the silent treatment, Calligenia, doesn't mean I will."

Clary glances over at Nia in confusion. "Why am I getting the silent treatment?"

"Your Ravenclaw friend." Rajani says quietly. "You've kind of be ditching us for her."

Clary, to her credit, looks genuinely apologetic. "She's been having a rough time. Apparently her dorm mates are awful and she hasn't made any friends at all since arriving. And we've known each other for years but I kind of unceremoniously dropped her when we were Sorted into different houses. I guess I'm feeling a little guilty."

Nia frowns. "Well don't. If it was such a problem why didn't she say anything sooner? And a Ravenclaw of all things - ignoring our upcoming Quidditch match with them, they're all rather obnoxious." Nia was still decidedly steamed about certain comments about her parentage made by certain Ravenclaw students.

Clary frowns right back. "Not all of them. Amelia is just shy. And she'd never say anything bad about you!"

"Wouldn't she?" Nia challenges. "You know how the other houses all think they're so much better than us - like we're all evil and destined to be the next dark lord. Who says she's immune to the brainwashing, huh?" She pushes her plate away. "You know what, I'm not actually that hungry. I'm going to retire early." And with that she's gone, and a tense silence has settled over the table.

Clary is the one who eventually breaks it. "She... she wouldn't though. Really." But there's a trace of uncertainty in her voice.

Rajani wonders if Donaghan would ever believe those things. She can't picture it, but conversely she has been the target of glares from Hufflepuffs in the past. Nia's words can't be fully discounted.

Eugene coughs loudly. "Well, I for one hope tomorrow morning's Defense class goes better than today's. Perhaps we could find some way to practice the spell before bed tonight?"

And just like that the tension is broken again and they're able to converse comfortably. Even Elspeth stays for most of the meal, which is a first for her.

As they head back down to the dungeons, Rajani falls into step with Elspeth.

"So hey, it's nice being able to talk with you now." She offers, hoping the other girl's decision to walk with them indicates an openness to conversation.

Elspeth shrugs. "Talked with the head girl over break. She made some good points."

Rajani frowns. She honestly has no idea who the head girl is, only that she's a Gryffindor and that most of the older year seem to be scared of her. "Well, that's good. If you ever want to talk about it or anything..." She trails off as Elspeth shakes her head.

"It's fine." And that's that. They remain quiet for the rest of the walk, although Rajani does cycle through several possible conversation starters that she ultimately discards. Elspeth doesn't seem as keen to talk anymore.

Nia is in the common room when they arrive, and while she doesn't say anything she also doesn't leave when Clary sits beside her, and Rajani figures that's as good as it's going to get for now.

The rest of the month blurs by in a grey fog, and all at once it's time for their next Quidditch game. The first years decide to get decked out in bright green and silver everything, and Clary even paints her face in solidarity. The game is as intense as the match against Gryffindor, and it's clear Ravenclaw has been practicing hard since losing to Hufflepuff.

They lose by ten points, and Rajani can't remember a time she's ever felt so crushed. The worst part, she thinks, is how ecstatic the rest of the school is. Losing is bad enough without feeling like everyone was rooting for you to lose.

The atmosphere in the common room is gloomy that night, and Rajani decides to go for a walk before curfew to try and clear her head. She promptly manages to get herself lost when the stairs change directions while she's still on top of them.

She's found thirty minutes after curfew by a Gryffindor prefect, and she just knows the girl will report her and probably get her a detention. It's what Gryffindors do.

However, the prefect just looks at her curiously. "What are you doing out of the dorms after hours?" Her voice is unaccusing, simply curious, and Rajani is stunned at the show of kindness from someone wearing scarlet and gold.

"I just wanted to take a walk and I got lost." She admits, omitting the reason for the walk. She doesn't need a Gryffindor mocking her.

The prefect smiles in understanding. "That happened to my brother a few times. Don't worry about it, just stay with me. My route passes the Slytherin common rooms."

Rajani can only follow behind, stunned that she hasn't been turned in yet.

"I'm Petra by the way. Head girl. If you ever need anything don't hesitate to come find me and ask."

Rajani blinks. Elspeth had mentioned talking to this girl over break, and a niggling curiosity as to what might have been said urges her to speak up.

"I'm Rajani. You talked to my roommate Elspeth over the break. She said you made good points."

Petra smiles faintly. "Elspeth is going through a lot of the same things I did a few years ago." She leaves it at that. "Did you want to talk about anything?"

Rajani shakes her head quietly. "Not really. The war didn't affect my family that much. We left for India before it got too bad." She doesn't know for sure the war is what was discussed, but she has a hunch, and Petra's momentary frown confirms it.

"Well count yourself one of the lucky ones. Very few people here were unaffected by it, even if they don't show it as obviously as others." Petra's response is raw in its honesty, and Rajani finds herself wondering how it touched the head girl.

"Well, here we are. Again, if you ever need anything don't hesitate to come find me or the head boy. Dylan is a Ravenclaw though and I know there's extra tension between your houses at the moment." She gives a small, amused smile.

Rajani chuckles a bit as well. "Thank you for not reporting me."

Petra shrugs. "It was an honest mistake. They happen. Goodnight Rajani."

Rajani continues to contemplate Petra's words for the next few days, and she would have for much longer if it wasn't for Valentine's day interrupting her thoughts on Thursday.

The entire school seems to have been hit by a bright pink explosion and honestly it's making Rajani a bit nauseous.

"Did they have to go so all out for this? It's not even a real holiday." Clary groans as she punches a heart-shaped balloon out of her path on their way to breakfast. In the past few weeks she'd been working hard to stay in her Slytherin friends' good graces and was spending significantly more time with them.

"Agreed." Nia makes a face.

Eugene smiles. "I think it's nice! Romance is something that should be celebrated I always say."

"When have you ever that?" Queenie teases, poking him lightly in the side.

He grins sheepishly. "Well I think it a lot."

At breakfast, the mail is accompanied by a needlessly large number of flowers and chocolates, deposited on the tables in front of the lucky few who aren't alone for the holiday.

Rajani spots a box landing in front of her sister and raises an eyebrow.

"She told mom there wasn't any romance in her life." She observes wryly to Lenox, who's sitting beside her and trying to pick petals out of his oatmeal.

"Perhaps it's new, or not serious enough that she wants to tell your parents yet." He suggests, finally giving up on his food and grabbing a new plate.

"Maybe it's a torrid affair!" Clary grins. "An older man, or worse, a Gryffindor."

Both she and Nia burst out laughing as Rajani pulls a horrified face. "Merlin no, my sister has more class than that!" She pretends to gag on her cereal, and then joins in on the laughter. She wonders if she should ask her sister about it, but ultimately figures it's Sahana's business, and that she'll say something if it does turn out to be serious.

Rajani is startled out of her mirth when Lakshmi flies down and drops a note in front of her. Rajani stares for a long moment at her owl before shaking of her shock and picking up the envelope.

"Oooh, Raj has got a boyfriend!" Clary sing-songs teasingly, and entirely too loudly as far as Rajani is concerned.

"Oh hush you. Read the note! Who's it from?" Queenie is much more excited, and she leans across the table to get a better look.

Rajani pulls out a single sheet of parchment and unfolds it. A silver hair pin in the shape of a flower falls onto the table, and Queenie's eyes widen.

"Oh wow. That's so pretty! Alright boys, who sent it?" She grins at their male friends, who all quickly deny any involvement.

Rajani just rolls her eyes and picks up the pin, securing it in her hair before picking up the note again.

I thought you might like this better than real flowers. Happy Valentine's Day.

The note is unsigned, which of course makes Queenie needle the boys even more aggressively. Rajani just rolls her eyes good-naturedly and puts the note back into the envelope, which is then deposited into her bag.

But for the rest of the day she keeps unconsciously touching the pin, and wondering who might have thought of her.

It seemed the break had made certain dorm mates of his bolder than they had been before.

After Slytherin flattened Hufflepuff in their late February match, Charlie and Brandon had tried to sneak into the Hufflepuff locker rooms and charm their uniforms silver and green. Of course, neither boy was able to complete the charm accurately and both lost the house twenty points and were stuck with multicolored hair for a week. That didn't stop them from continuing to make mischief however.

Their Hufflepuff friend Aidan was in on a lot of it as well, so Myr was seeing a lot more of the Irish boy now than he had before. The whole house has started to figure out that when Aidan is in the common room it's best to make oneself scarce or risk being the target of whatever new juvenile prank the trio has come up with.

"It'll be a nightmare when they're able to get things from Zonko's in third year." Nabila mutters one afternoon after yet another prank gone wrong gets fifty points taken from the house. "They're bad enough when they don't have professional jokes at their disposal."

Myr hums his agreement, quill scratching rapidly over his History essay. The two Gryffindors are parked in the library near the front doors. "At least Remi hasn't figured out where any of the secret passages are yet. I can't imagine what it would be like if he was able to actually set up any of his pranks before getting caught."

Nabila rolls her eyes, not looking up from her own Herbology assignment. "I imagine someone would end up in the hospital wing more than likely."

Myr sighs. "More than likely." They work quietly for a few more minutes before Nabila finishes and heads out without so much as a goodbye.

Myr doesn't mind. Nabila isn't really a people person, and it's rare for her to speak to anyone about anything beyond schoolwork. The fact he's managed to establish something of a repertoire with her at all honestly astounds him. He likes it though - she's a great study partner when you're looking for peace and quiet.

He writes another inch on his essay before he rolls it up and deposits it back into his bag, deciding he's done enough for the afternoon. The sky outside the window is murky and gray, and there's slush clinging to the sill as well as the ground beyond it.

March is really a disgusting month. Myr can almost forgive the urge to cause mischief - it's not like going outside is particularly fun at the moment and there's only so much chess and gobstones one can play before going stir crazy.

Still, he wishes they'd let their energy out some other way. Preferably one that didn't threaten physical and emotional harm to the rest of the populace.

He heads out of the library and almost immediately runs into a grinning Aidan.

"Where should I avoid."

Aidan smiles innocently. "I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about!"

Myr frowns. "You guys were just busted for trying to sneak into the Prefect's bathroom, should you really be risking even more detention? I'm not sure how much it takes to get expelled but I'm not sure you should be testing it."

Aidan's grin falters. "Wait, you can get expelled? But it's magic school!" He seems genuinely distressed by the revelation, and a moment later he's rushing down the hallway, probably to confront Brandon and Charlie.

Myr decides the safest bet is to go in the opposite direction of the Hufflepuff boy, so he makes his way towards the Charms classroom, which is close enough to the Gryffindor Tower that he'll probably be able to tell if it's a "avoid at all costs" zone or not, and far enough from it to not get caught up in the fireworks if the trio of destruction had set something up there.

It seems safe enough, so he finishes the trek to the tower and gives the Fat Lady the password - only for her to shake her head.

"New password today dear, did you not check the notice board?"

Myr groans. He'd been so busy trying to avoid having to walk to breakfast with Remi he'd forgotten to check. And it was just his luck that the one day he forgets is the day there's a new password.

"I'll just wait here then." He sighs, sitting down. "Someone will have to come by eventually and I don't really fancy carrying my cauldron around until dinner."

The Fat Lady smiles sympathetically. "We all have bad days."

He smiles up at her, realizing for the first time that he's never really spoken to her before, beyond the usual exchanging of passwords.

"So um, what do you do up here all day?" He asks. "I imagine it can't be very interesting having to sit and wait for students to come and go."

The Fat Lady smiles. "Well aren't you a dear, worrying about me. No, I've been watching this door for centuries so I have plenty of things to keep me occupied! I've been practicing my opera lately, would you like to hear?"

Myr agrees out of curiosity. He doesn't really know all that much about paintings and the magic behind them, and he's never heard one sing before.

He regrets it moments later when the Fat Lady releases an ear-piercing shriek. When she stops he has to check that his ears aren't bleeding.

"I can't break glass yet unfortunately, but that's the ultimate goal!" She says cheerily, oblivious to Myr's disorientation.

"That was quite something." He offers weakly, and she beams.

"Oh that's too kind of you dear. Now then, what happened that made you forget to check the notice board? You're usually quite good about that - I've heard you scolding that Remi about it more than once."

Myr is surprised by the question. "Oh, well, I woke up late and I..." He hesitates, "Well I didn't want to have to walk all the way to the Great Hall with Remi, so I sort of ran as soon as I had my things together." He pauses again, and then can't resist asking, "How did you know about me reminding Remi so much?"

The Fat Lady laughs. "I see a lot more than people realize. I like knowing what the Gryffindors are up to - it is my house after all."

Myr smiles. He'd have to remember that. "I bet you know more secrets than anyone else in the school."

She smiles knowingly. "That's for me to know. Now then, I believe I hear someone else coming."

Sure enough Petra Rosier, the Gryffindor head girl, turns the corner moments later. Myr stiffens awkwardly, not sure, as always, how to act around her.

He's never spoken to Petra himself, but he knows from whispers around the common room that she's the daughter of a Death Eater and rumor has it she was planning to take the mark herself before the fall of the Dark Lord. He isn't sure if it's true, but Petra is certainly an intimidating person so he opts for caution whenever she's around.

She smiles at the Fat Lady. "Good evening. I hope you had a nice day ma'am." She greets her politely before turning to Myr. "Forgot to check the password?" There's no mockery or disdain in the question, but Myr can only shrug awkwardly, still feeling rather pinned by the sharp gaze locked onto him.

Petra nods. "It happens. Try to avoid doing it more than once though, or I will take points." She then turns back to the Fat Lady. "Leonis." She speaks clearly, with an almost over exaggerated enunciation, and the Fat Lady swings forward.

The head girl gives him a smile before she clambers into the portrait hole, and a moment later Myr follows.

Petra has already vanished up the stairs to the girls' dorms when he gets into the common room, so he makes a mental note to thank her the next time he sees her. In the meantime he retires to his own room, dropping off his bag and picking up a whining Owen. The kitten is kept in the boys' room for most of the day, and is allowed in the common room when Myr or someone he trusts is around to keep an eye on the disastrous ball of fur.

He carries Owen downstairs and as soon as he's set down the kitten pounces on top of a game of chess being played by two third years - one of whom Myr knows.

Bill Weasley grins and scratches Owen between the ears. "Hey little guy. Did you want to play?"

"Ugh, I was winning! Dang it kid, control your cat!"

Bill laughs. "Have you ever tried telling a cat what to do Thomas? It doesn't work very well."

Owen has made himself quite comfortable on top of the board at this point, and with an annoyed grunt the other third year - Thomas - stands up and storms back up the stairs to the dorms.

Bill gestures for Myr to sit in the newly free seat. "Hey Myr, long time no talk. How have you been doing?"

Myr shrugs awkwardly as he settles into the chair. He hasn't really spoken that much with Charlie's older brother, so he's not quite sure how to react to his sudden interest. He distracts himself by petting Owen, who had quickly relocated to Myr's lap as soon as his owner had settled down.

Bill grins. "Hey, I don't bite. Charlie seems to like you, and I'd like to know the sort of people my little brother is associating with."

Myr smiles wryly down at Owen. "We aren't that close, his best friends are Aidan and Brandon."

Bill laughs. "Yeah, they call themselves the ABC club. Aidan's idea apparently. But I didn't ask about them. I'm serious, how are you doing Myr?"

Myr shrugs again. "Decently enough. Schoolwork is a slog but that's true for normal school as well so it's not exactly new. Honestly I'm looking forward to next year. I think things would be much more exciting if I had Quidditch practice to look forward to."

Bill laughs "You may regret that you said that when you've actually been through one of Laurel's training sessions. So you're planning to try out then? Charlie mentioned that you're an incredible flyer."

Myr can't help beaming, just a little. "Yeah well, flying seems to be a talent of mine. Coach Crowell says I'd make a fair beater so I've started working on flying one-handed recently. It's a lot harder than I'd expected but it's a lot of fun!"

Bill is smiling warmly, and Myr continues eagerly talking about everything he's been doing in flying class, including the now weekly races they hold. Charlie and Remi usually come in first but he's managed to edge them out a few times, which he's rather proud of as he's definitely not as fast as they are.

"Skill will always be more important than speed in a game like Quidditch. It doesn't matter how fast the broom is if the person flying it has no idea what they're doing." Bill nods. "It sounds like you'll be a real contender next year though, Laurel doesn't have anyone in mind for the new Beater after Smith graduates."

"Maybe she could come watch us sometime!" Myr suggests. He knows a lot of the first years are planning to try out, so it would be good for them as well to have an extra chance to impress the notoriously tough Quidditch Captain.

Bill nods thoughtfully. "That would actually be a good idea. Are you still on Tuesday afternoons right after lunch?" At Myr's nod he grins. "Great! I think she's free then. I'll bring it up at practice tonight - maybe she'll go easy on the one leg dead lifts if she's in a good mood."

Myr isn't sure what exactly Bill is talking about, but from the older boy's grimace he gets the feeling he won't enjoy it much either if he manages to make the team next year.

Owen chooses that moment to loudly declare his presence and demand attention, so Myr drops him onto the floor and lights the tip of his wand for Owen to bat at.

Bill laughs as the little black cat makes a particularly ambitious leap for the wand and manages to go flying past, do a full 360 flip in the air, bounce off the wall, and land on his back just in front of the fireplace.

"Does he do that often?" The third year asks with clear amusement.

Myr rolls his eyes fondly. "At least once a day. He's not the most coordinated cat in the world."

Owen takes no offense as he bounds back up and once again makes an attempt at the pinprick of light pulsating at the end of Myr's wand.

Bill has to excuse himself to study after a few minutes, and his seat is quickly taken by Holly, who Myr hadn't noticed had entered the room.

"Oh my gosh I will never get over how cute he is!" She squeals happily as Owen once again trips over his own paws and face plants into her leg. "You are so lucky Myr! I want a pet so badly."

He just grins and mutters the incantation to turn off his wand. He then picks up Owen and deposits him straight into Holly's lap. The kitten instantly calms down and curls up, snuggling happily into her robes.

She squeals again. "So. Cute!"

They're joined by Fiona and Evera about thirty minutes later and the girls fuss happily over Owen until it's time for dinner. Myr tells them to go on ahead as he gathers a thoroughly exhausted Owen into his arms and takes him back to the dorms.

The kitten snuggles happily into the sheets and Myr flicks off the lights as he exits and double-checks that the door is closed before heading down to the Great Hall.

He spots Remi heading up and he lets out a mental sigh of relief that he won't have to deal with having to sit with him during the meal.

He joins the girls, who had saved him a seat, and Drake at the table and they spend the meal discussing classes and the upcoming Easter holiday. They all try to convince Myr to spend the break at school but he repeatedly declines, having long ago made up his mind to spend the week at home.

The comfortable atmosphere continues until they reach their dorm, and Myr finds the door wide open.

His stomach drops, and sure enough, when he checks his bed, Owen is gone.

"Is that a cat on top of the Training Grounds Tower?"

Ana, and the rest of the Ravenclaws she's sure, have long learned to tune out Evie's endless whining during their Friday morning flying class. However, this particular comment gets some attention.

"A cat?" Jerry frowns and glances up towards the tower looming over the open area they use to practice flying. "Merlin's beard she's not kidding! There's a cat up there!"

Amelia shakily flies over as well, worry b in her eyes. "Is... is it safe for it up there?"

Ana scoffs. "It's a cat, they're incredibly agile. It's fine."

By this point the whole class has clustered around to see the cat on the Training Grounds Tower. It peers down at them through huge yellow eyes, as curious about them as they are of it.

"What is going on over here? Keep practicing your dives, there are cats all over this school." Coach Crowell flies over to break them up. "There's nothing special about this one."

"But what if it falls?" Amelia keeps glancing worriedly up at the cat.

Ana shakes her head. "It's fine Amelia, it's a cat. It won't-"

Naturally the cat picks that exact moment to trip over air and flop headfirst over the side of the tower.

Ana can only sigh as the unwieldy things flails around in the air, surprisingly unworried despite it's current predicament.

"It will surely land on its feet? Cats always do, right?" Shaun speaks up, a rarity for him, and Ana only shrugs.

"Cats usually don't trip over air either." She points out. "This seems to be a rather stupid cat."

Below them Evie is running to catch the falling fur ball, but Finnigan is faster. The lanky brunet swoops down from where he'd been hovering a few meters above them and grabs the cat out of midair. He cradles it close to his chest as he drifts in increasingly slower spirals back towards the ground, the rest of the class close behind him.

Evie grabs the tiny thing away from Finnigan as soon as they touch the ground, and while he frowns at her he doesn't verbally protest. "Oh you poor thing! You must have been terrified!"

The cat seems perfectly content however, and it wriggles in an attempt to get away. On closer inspection Ana realizes the black cat is actually a black kitten, with wide golden eyes and paws that are a touch too large for its body.

"Lovely, the cat is fine. Back in the air, all of you."

Evie perks up, and Coach Crowell quickly rephrases.

"All of you who didn't blow up a broom during their first lesson get back in the air. Evie do what you please so long as it doesn't interrupt my flying class or involve any of my brooms in any way, shape, or form no matter how tangential."

Evie sags, pouting heavily as the rest of the class takes off, but to Ana's surprise she actually turns to head back inside, carrying the still squirming cat with her. Ana spots Coach Crowell pulling Finnigan aside but doesn't think much about it and spends the rest of the period dutifully practicing her dives, pulling up several meters earlier than she's supposed to but preferring to risk a scolding than a broken nose.

When they get back inside they're met with a bright-eyed Evie, which is never a good sign in Ana's opinion.

"Guys we totally have to figure out whose cat this is!"

Immediately Finnigan walks away, and Ana thinks he has the right idea. But before she can turn away the kitten lets out a squeaking attempt at a mewl, and something inside her melts just a little bit.

Maybe this fur ball is worth dealing with Evie for a little bit.

"I'll help, but I'm holding him." She declares, and Evie lights up and eagerly passes the kitten over.

The cat blinks up at her, yawns, and settles happily in her arms.

Amelia smiles. "I think he likes you." It's the longest Ana has seen Amelia willingly spend time with a group of people. The cat really is a little miracle worker.

"I've got homework but keep me updated." Fitzwilliam looks highly apprehensive and he quickly vanishes down the hallway.

"He's allergic." Jerry offers. "Shaun and I will help you though! Right Shaun?"

Shaun shrugs, which is taken as agreement by his enthusiastic roommate.

"Alright then, I guess it's the five of us! The kitten rescue squad!"

Ana glances around. "Four. Amelia seems to have vanished."

And sure enough the mousey girl has at some point made her exit. Evie frowns.

"Oh, well, four then! Still good!" Her smile quickly returns and she grabs the boys by their arms and starts tugging them down the hallway. Neither looks thrilled with the situation but they have little choice but to follow. Ana trails close behind them, keeping one eye on the kitten in her arms.

"We should probably find him some food." She speaks up. "Who knows when the last time he ate was, and going all the way up to the Training Grounds Tower probably tired him out."

Evie grins over at her. "Awesome idea! Does anyone know where the kitchens are?"

"Somewhere on the ground floor on the opposite side of the castle from Potions." Shaun offers. Ana frowns.

"Okay, maybe scratch that idea then. I'm not going to be late because some irresponsible pet owner let their cat end up on top the Training Grounds Tower."

Evie looks disappointed by the change in plans. "Okay. Well, maybe one of the Gryffindors will know who it belongs to."

"Should we even take it to Potions tough? I mean, what if it knocks something over? Professor Snape told us on the first day that if we do things wrong we could get seriously hurt." Jerry frowns.

Shaun raises his hand. "I could lock him in our room for the hour."

Jerry shakes his head. "Fitz is allergic, remember?"

Evie rolls her eyes. "He's 'allergic' to everything. The guy is just over dramatic. Let's do it! Come on, with all four of us the door doesn't stand a chance."

Thankfully Evie's overenthusiastic prediction had been correct and they hurriedly drop the kitten off in the girls' room before running back down to the dungeons for Potions class.

They get to their seats only moments before Snape enters the classroom.

There's a sharp tension permeating the air around the Gryffindors, and Ana notices that they've switched partners, leaving Jerry, who's usual Gryffindor partner is sitting with a sour-faced blonde, stuck with the one Gryffindor without a partner.

Ana admittedly doesn't really pay attention to the other houses or their students, but even she knows Remi Longbottom, who's essentially the Evie of Gryffindor house. She almost feels bad for Jerry having to work with him - there hasn't yet been a Potions class that Remi and his partner didn't get into trouble with Snape for doing things incorrectly.

"Wonder what's got them so wound up? Gryffindors usually get along pretty well." Shaun observes curiously as they copy down the recipes Snape has written on the board.

Ana honestly doesn't care, so she doesn't reply and Shaun lapses back into silence.

As they file out of the classroom twenty minutes later, an argument that seems to be a continuation starts up between Remi and one of the other Gryffindor boys.

"Just admit you left the door open and help look! It's your fault in the first place!"

Remi rolls his eyes dramatically. "It's a cat Myr and I didn't do anything wrong. It'll show up when it wants to."

Ana can see Evie perk up out of the corner of her eye, and she knows the other girl is wondering the same thing she is. Unlike Ana though, Evie has zero tact and she bounds right up to the arguing boys.

"Is it a black kitten? Because we found one of those during our class this morning! It fell off the Training Grounds Tower!"

The boy that isn't Remi goes pale. "T-that sounds like Owen."

"He's fine. Finnigan caught him well before he hit the ground." Ana quickly intervenes before Evie gives the kid heart failure. "He's in our room right now, I can go get him if you like."

The boy nods in relief, and then glares at Remi again.

"The Training Grounds Tower. Owen nearly died and it's your fault." He snaps. Behind him several of the girls look just as furious, but Remi doesn't falter.

"Well he's fine so no harm no foul, and that's not even one of the taller towers in the castle! And again, I didn't do anything."

Ana just sighs and starts heading for Ravenclaw Tower to get the cat - Owen had the boy said? Good name.

Evie is close on her heels. "That was so much easier than I expected! Aren't you glad this worked out so well?"

Ana ignores her. Now that Owen's owner has been found she has no obligation to put up with her roommate's nattering.

A seventh year gets them into the common room (and Ana is quietly thankful for his presence as the riddle admittedly would have stumped her) and the two girls fetch Owen from their room.

He's made an absolute mess of the place, and Ana lets Evie have the honor of returning the kitten to his owner so she can reorganize her trunk.

She only just makes it to lunch, and she ends up grabbing a sandwich to eat on the way to Defense class.

After the cat-based excitement of the morning, the rest of the day seems rather bland. Herbology is spent reviewing puffapods and the rest of the afternoon is wiled away in the library working on essays.

Ana enjoys the monotony however. If every day was as high energy as that morning had been she would have no time to do homework or read.

The next day, however, is just as energetic. When Ana first wakes up to the sounds of excitement she's a bit disoriented. Then she remembers that it's Saturday.

Today is their Quidditch match against Gryffindor.

Groaning, she turns over and pulls a pillow over her head. As much as she actually doesn't mind watching the sport, her housemates all seem to collectively become stupid for the day whenever there's a match. Which in turn makes her own enthusiasm for it decrease.

Eventually she gives up on returning to sleep and gets up to see that Evie has already departed the room. She gets extra intense on game days, and Ana is once again thankful that Coach Crowell had the foresight to stop her from every actually playing. Ana is certain it would result in multiple hospital visits for members of both teams and probably some audience members as well. Nothing good ever comes from Evie being excited about things.

She dresses as slowly as she can and privately envies Amelia's ability to sleep through anything on the weekends. During the week the quiet girl is always up by seven, but on Saturday and Sunday she doesn't budge until at least ten.

Eventually Ana has to join the cacophony occurring in their common room and she takes a steadying breath before heading down the tower stairs.

The Quidditch team is at the center of the room, being encouraged and lectured by everyone at once. Ana spots Eric Hobbes lingering on the outskirts and looking rather overwhelmed by the noise and she makes her way over to him.

Since Halloween she's been seeing more of the prefect, and she's found in him a kindred soul of sorts. So she doesn't hesitate to tap him on the shoulder and tilt her head towards the door in a clear invitation.

He smiles and they head out of the tower together.

"Excited for the match?" He asks as they walk towards the Great Hall.

She shrugs. "I suppose, but Gryffindor has proven to be quite a tough team. They played incredibly for a team that was only just put together this year."

Eric nods idly. "Laurel is definitely something else." There's a hint of something that Ana can't quite place in his voice, but before she can ponder on it he continues. "Though given that Slytherin beat Gryffindor, and we beat Slytherin, we certainly have a fighting chance."

Ana scoffs. "That hardly matters. Slytherin flattened Hufflepuff, who, may I remind you, we lost to." She pauses. "I do hope we win though. That would move us up to first in the tournament and since the only other match remaining is Gryffindor versus Hufflepuff we'd be almost guaranteed the win since Slytherin would be in second. It would put us to first in the total points for the House Cup as well." They'd been struggling in the cup prior to Christmas Break, but the new year had seen an increased effort by every year to earn points, and even Evie had quieted down, lowering her point losses significantly. They now rank just below Slytherin, and a win for the Quidditch Cup could pull them over the edge into first.

Eric grins. "So pragmatic. I see why you were put in Ravenclaw."

Ana rolls her eyes. "Nonsense. I'm here because I asked to be."

He blinks, and then gives the faintest of smiles. "I sort of did as well actually. What are the chances?"

Ana laughs. "I wouldn't be surprised if you had to ask to make Ravenclaw. Being confident in your own love of knowledge is the key component of our house after all."

Eric hums. "One could make the same argument for any of the houses though. Personally, I'm of the opinion that the Hat puts you where he thinks you can become your best self."

Ana nods thoughtfully. "That certainly has some merit. I wonder if anyone has done any research on it before?"

The conversation continues easily through breakfast, and Ana is once again grateful that she'd sat beside Eric on her birthday all those months ago. He's easily one of the most bearable members of her house, which is both unfortunate and wonderful since she's quite sure he feels similarly about her.

When the time comes to head out to the Quidditch pitch, Ana follows the hoard. The game may lower the general IQ of the people around her, but it is still fun. She can admit that much.

"Two Galleons that Gryffindor wins." Eric grins as they settle into their seats. Ana is keeping a careful eye out for Evie, not wanting her roommate to try sitting next to her.

Ana raises an eyebrow and breaks away from her surveying of the crowd. "You'd bet against Ravenclaw?"

He shrugs. "I like living on the edge."

She just shakes her head. "Oh what the heck, sure. I'm going to be a good loyal Ravenclaw."

They don't talk much during the match. Ana has to admit that the Gryffindor team looks good. Their Seeker's turns have gotten sharper since the first match and the Keeper is much better at covering all the hoops.

It's still a very close game, and Ana finds herself holding her breath as the minutes tick by and the Seekers drift in circles, neither moving much but their gazes sharp. It's anyone's game and they know it.

Then there's a glint of gold and both Seekers are shooting for it, hands outstretched, neck in neck on the dive.

Ana leaves the field two Galleons poorer than she'd entered it. She wonders if betting against your own team might have some merit after all.

The start of April also sees the start of Easter break, and Franziska is glad when significantly more people decide to stay at school for the week. In fact, the only Hufflepuff first year who does go home is Kiera.

Naturally, Kiera's absence means that Dora starts spending more time with the rest of them which, while Franziska certainly doesn't mind, additionally means that the rest of them are pulled into the borderline dangerous shenanigans the two girls are often getting into.

It's a warm Wednesday afternoon when a small group of them find themselves traipsing uncomfortably close to the Forbidden Forest during what Dora is calling an "exploration" of the castle grounds.

"Maybe we should get closer to the castle." Franziska speaks up uncertainly. She's gone the full year without once getting in trouble or losing points for Hufflepuff, and she doesn't want to ruin that streak right at the end of the year.

Dora grins. "Don't be such a stick in the mud Frannie, it's all good fun! Hey Henry, I dare you to go into the woods!"

Franziska bites down hard on the inside of her cheek as the Muggleborn enthusiastically agrees and trots towards the edge of the forest. They're going to be in so much trouble if they're caught.

Henry vanishes into the underbrush for a long moment before bounding back out, grinning proudly.

"It's just trees as far as I can see." He reports. Next to Franziska, Leona looks rather disappointed.

Dora tilts her head. "Maybe you have to go further in to find the good stuff."

"Maybe we shouldn't do that. Dumbledore says it's dangerous." Franziska repeats tensely.

The other four just look at her, and she realizes she won't be getting any backup on this. She had hoped at least Aidan would agree with her - he's a model student when not with his Gryffindor friends after all. But apparently Dora is as bad of an influence on him as Charlie and Brandon are.

"Fine, kill yourselves if you like. I'm going back to the castle." Maybe she can find some of her friends from the other houses to spend time with. She hasn't really gotten to talk to Nabila or Fitzwilliam since Christmas break anyway.

The hallways are mostly empty as she arrives - a majority of the school is enjoying time outside or studying for finals in the library, but a few do linger around the hallways. She doesn't recognize anyone though, so she makes her way towards the owlery, thinking she might send her parents a letter.

She doesn't write often since international mail is quite expensive and Hogwarts doesn't have an international owl so the process of actually getting her mail to its destination is a bit more complicated than just popping up to the owlery, but she figures she has time. It is Easter break after all.

She hasn't written the letter just yet, but she needs to send one of the local owls out to Hogsmeade to request use of one of their international flyers. She scratches out a quick note using one of the windowsills and attaches it to a little owl who hoots indignantly at being woken up, but it ruffles out its feathers and takes off moments later.

If past experience is anything to go by, she knows to expect the international owl within the hour, so she hurries back to the dorms to start writing.

On her way, she runs into Donaghan departing the library. After narrowly avoiding a collision she pauses and smiles over at him.

"Heading to the dorms?" She asks. He nods and falls into step beside her.

"I'm writing a letter to my parents. I need to get it up to the owlery before the international owl arrives." She states in an attempt to explain why she's walking much faster than normal, though Donaghan hadn't asked.

He nods in understanding. "You're from Germany right? Must be quite a trip getting out here for school." He doesn't ask, but she can see in his eyes that he's curious as to why she's here and not at Durmstrang.

Donaghan has always been quite pleasant, so she doesn't see the harm in explaining. "Well my mom went here, and she always wanted to move back after... you know, the war... but her and Da's works never really gave them the opportunity. But when I turned eleven she wrote Headmaster Dumbledore asking if I might be able to attend anyway and he said yes. So here I am." She knows it isn't the full story, but her mother had never really given her a full answer as to why they were going to such lengths to send her to Hogwarts. "I don't mind though, I really do like it here. You should stay over Christmas some time, it's lovely seeing all the decorations."

He grins ruefully. "I think my mum would miss me too much, but maybe sixth or seventh year I could swing it. After Halloween I'd imagine it would be rather stunning though."

They've reached the dorms at this point, and after doing a quick scan to make sure no one from any other houses is around (there never is - no one comes this far down into the basement during the daytime) Franziska taps the barrel that lets them into the common room and crawls through.

She waves over her shoulder at Donaghan as she races straight to her room and grabs a blank parchment and sharp quill. She probably only has ten or so minutes to write the letter if she wants to get back up to the owlery on time, so she sits down and smooths out the edges on the desk that sits beside each of their beds.

Dear Mum and Dad,

Sorry I haven't written sooner, school has been quite hectic since the end of Christmas break. I've been doing quite well though! I got an E on my last Transfiguration assignment so I'm feeling much more confident about our end of term exams. Of course, there are still almost two months left but it all goes by so quickly it seems. I'm looking forward to coming home, but I admit I'll miss my friends. They can be a little irresponsible at times, but they're really wonderful people, I think you would like them.

Missing you dearly,

Franziska Lida

She performs a quick proof-reading spell that they had been working on in class, and then she rolls up the parchment and runs back through the common room, waving distractedly to Donaghan once again as she passes him.

She slows to a brisk walk once she's crawled through the barrel. She still doesn't fancy getting in trouble this close to the end of the year, and running in the halls is strictly prohibited. Which of course makes sense - if someone were running on a staircase when it started to move it wouldn't end well.

She gets back up to the owlery just as one of the large international owls lands, and she quickly fishes five Galleons from her purse to pay it and then attaches her letter to it's leg harness.

"Heinrich and Pannida Reinhardt, Dusseldorf, North Rein-Westphalia, Germany." She states, and the owl hoots loudly before launching back out the window.

"Thank you!" Franziska leans out after it. She knows her thanks probably don't matter, but she feels it's polite. After all, it is quite a long trip, even for such a large and powerful flyer.

The little owl she'd used to make the delivery request chirps at her in annoyance and she quickly deposits two Knuts in its sack.

She may ask her parents for an international flyer as an early birthday gift. Using the school owls will surely start to get expensive after a while.

She heads back downstairs and runs into the exploration group as they come back inside from their forest adventures.

"We survived!" Dora waves at her cheekily and Franziska can only sigh.

"And you weren't caught I hope? We're barely hanging onto third place for the House Cup right now, and really, I'd hate to be last place. That's just embarrassing."

Leona grins wickedly. "I think Gryffindor has safely secured that spot thanks to certain over enthusiastic first years."

Franziska shakes her head. "But if they win the Quidditch Cup then they get an additional fifty points. That puts them only six points behind us." She points out. "I'd just rather be safe than sorry."

Leon frowns. "Point Frannie. But do you think they'll win for sure? They'll need to beat us by over a hundred points to secure it away from Ravenclaw since their match was so close." She points out.

Dora looks disappointed. "Yeah but our team isn't that great this year. Frannie might actually have a point."

Leona makes a face. "I wish I was a better flyer sometimes. Then I could go make our team better."

Franziska smiles as she falls into step next to the small brunette. "But then who would be our new announcer?"

The group ends up returning to the common room and joining Donaghan in one of the clusters of couches that are scattered throughout it.

"Did you send your letter?" He asks as Franziska picks a seat directly across from him.

She nods happily. "Made it just in time. I think I might ask my parents if they could get me my own international flyer for next year to make it easier to communicate."

"Those things are expensive though." Dora remarks. "I wanted one this year but my parents said the cost wasn't worth it."

Franziska shrugs. "It can't hurt to ask anyway. I've spent a lot sending them letters already this year so i think they might consider it."

They continue chatting in the common room for hours, occasionally slipping into the realm of schoolwork but mostly chattering about Quidditch and summer plans. Franziska finds herself in multiple side conversations at once, and it only gets more convoluted when Jemma joins them after spending most of the day with her Gryffindor friends and demands detailed explanations of everyone's days.

They're still clumped together and chatting when they head for the dining hall later that night. There aren't any decorations for Easter, which disappoints Franziska, but the Hall is as cheery as ever and hey're joined by the rest of their year as they sit down.

"And where have you boys been all day?" Leona grins as Cian and Tyler join them. "I know Cian has been in his room being anti-social, because that's what he always does, but you, Tyler always have stories to share." She grins. "Dish."

Tyler grins. "Remi and I snuck down the potions lab to see if we could find any rare ingredients. It was locked though, and Snape nearly caught us which would have . Imagine getting detention with him during the holidays!"

The whole group shivers at the thought. It's a fate they wouldn't wish on anyone, and certainly not a housemate. Even if that housemate probably deserved it after everything he and Remi have gotten up to during the year.

"I swear, you two have lost more house points then even Charlie, Brandon, and me." Aidan remarks cheerily. "Which is impressive since I think we've actually done more than you guys have managed."

Tyler shrugs. "Don't let Remi hear that, he'd be devastated. Sees you three as rivals or something, especially Charlie."

Franziska perks up. "Oh, that's because they both want to be Gryffindor Seeker. Holly was telling me about it last week."

Holly Kiddell had successfully transferred into the Hufflepuff Flying class a week before Christmas break, and it was common for her and Franziska to drift along a meter above the ground, chatting casually for most of class. Coach Crowell had long since stopped dealing with the flyers who showed little passion or skill and was working only with the students who showed potential and an interest in the more complex maneuvers of flight.

Jemma shakes her head. "Evera and Drake are both insistent they'll be on the team as well. The whole Gryffindor class seems pretty Quidditch minded this year." She remarks. "I predict there will be a lot of disappointed people next year. Second years almost never make the school teams. They get reserve at best."

Tyler nods. "That's all I'm hoping for myself. The current Keeper doesn't graduate for another two years so I figure fourth year will be my time."

"The current Keeper ." Dora groans. "If you can out fly her you'll get on next year no question. This year was an embarrassment for Hufflepuff in Quidditch. Lola is the only one worth her salt out there."

"Captain Jones is a good Beater." Donaghan notes. "I think he's hindered by the fact Boyle is iffy at best."

They devolve into a debate about whether Beaters should be counted individually or as a pair when discussing their merits, and Franziska quietly finishes her lunch, happy to simply listen as she doesn't honestly know that much about the statistics of Quidditch and its players.

The rest of Easter passes smoothly, and Franziska bounces between her housemates as well as her other friends, sharing stories and studying for the rapidly approaching final exams. But despite the pressure of school, it's the most relaxed she's felt since Christmas.

She's going to miss this when its time to go home.

 

Merry Christmas to those who celebrate and Happy Holildays to the rest! Rememer this is part two of a two-part update so if you missed yesterday's update make sure to read that first! See you guys on New Year's Eve for the final chapter of the kids' first year!

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!