Chapter Three

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
The Daily Grind

The Ravenclaw common room is everything Ana had dreamed and more.

When the hat had - after less deliberation than she had expected - sent her to her hoped-for house, she had become a bit worried that she would end up disappointed once the Feast was over and school really began.

But from the riddle-giving doorknob to the star-covered ceiling and the dozens of bookshelves lining the circular common room, Ana already feels at home.

The prefects had let them in and, after a quick warning about not forgetting anything in their rooms since the riddles can be pretty tough, showed them to their dorms.

There are only three of them in the room and they've been giving plenty of space between their beds, which Ana is grateful for. She's absolutely exhausted and is looking forward to falling asleep.

"So I'm Evie! What about you guys?"

One of the other girls, however, seems to have a very different idea. Ana glances at the third girl in the room, hoping she'll ignore Evie so they can just go to bed.

The girl is looking back at her with uncertainty and Ana realizes she's going to be no help whatsoever as Evie begins talking again, apparently unbothered by the fact neither of her roommates have responded to her initial question.

"Aren't you so excited to start school tomorrow! I'm a - what did Frannie call it? Oh yeah, a Muggleborn! So this is all really new to me. What about you guys?"

Ana's lacking response this time is pointed, in hopes that Evie will quiet down and let them all sleep. The other girl has ducked her head down and is rummaging around in her trunk, presumably for her nightclothes.

"Thought they haven't given us schedules yet, have they? I guess we'll get them at breakfast? When did those other guys say that was?"

"Prefects. They're called prefects and it's at seven thirty in the morning so if you don't mind we'd like to get some sleep before then." Ana finally decides that the only way to get through to this girl is extreme bluntness.

Evie frowns. "Wow, okay then. You don't have to be a jerk about it."

Apparently I do. But Ana bites her tongue and instead begins changing clothes. The third girl has scampered off to the showers to change and Evie shrugs and begins rifling around to find her own nightgown. Ana, not caring about modesty, changes right there in front of her bed and then passes out almost as soon as her head touches the pillow

She awakens to the sun angling in through the window beside her bed, and she's not sure if she's annoyed or pleased that she has some time to shower and dress before her dorm mates get up. She settles for neither and instead focuses on getting ready quickly so she can organize her books in her satchel before going down to the common room.

There are already a few students there, some of whom are reading, while others edit their summer essays. She spots a familiar face near one of the windows and makes her way over.

"Excuse me?"

The prefect looks up from his book in surprise. "Oh, um, hello. Can I help you with something?"

She nods. "I hope so. I was wondering which books I should bring with me to breakfast this morning? We haven't received our schedules yet but I thought you might know what classes the first years will have today."

He quickly nods. "Oh, of course! Yeah, let me just-" He's a bit awkward as he pulls a stack of parchments out of his bag. "Here, first year Ravenclaws have Transfiguration with McGonagall this morning, followed by Charms with Flitwick, and then double Herbology out in greenhouse this afternoon." He smiles, still distinctly awkward. "I hope that helps?"

She nods. "It does, thanks."

"I, um, I'm Eric Hobbes. If you needed anything else you can always ask." He offers, and she nods again. Hopefully she won't need anything else but it's never bad to know the names of your prefects. Much easier to get their attention that way.

She returns to the dorms to find that Evie is in the showers and their other dormmate is just about packed.

"Our classes today are Transfiguration, Charms, and Herbology." Ana announces, and the other girl looks over, surprised.

"Oh, thanks. I'm Amelia by the way." She's not looking at Ana as she speaks, and her hair has dropped in front of her face so her introduction is a bit muffled.

"Ana. And no problem. No one wants to lug all their textbooks to class." She replies. "Want to walk down together?"

Normally she wouldn't offer, but some small, vindictive part of herself wants Evie to have no idea which books to bring. A bit of revenge for keeping them up last night.

Amelia wavers for a moment before agreeing, and they're joined by a swarm of other Ravenclaws as they head down the stairs leading to the girls' dorms and out the door.

Ana is glad for the older students unwittingly accompanying them as she honesty can't remember the way back to the Great Hall. The one downside to Ravenclaw tower is how far removed it seems to be from the rest of the castle.

Amelia sits next to her at the table, but after filling her plate Ana pulls out her Transfiguration textbook and begins reading the first chapter, curious as to what they'll be studying. She glances up only briefly when Evie appears a good twenty minutes later, looking slightly disheveled but sporting a bright smile and trailed by two boys that Ana recognizes as Shaun and Fitzwilliam, first years whom she'd spoken with at the previous night's Feast.

Around eight thirty a short wizard with a shock of white hair begins ambling down the table, passing parchments to each student.

"Ah Ms. Vulchanova and Ms. Kingsley. Your schedules." He hands Ana and Amelia a parchment each and then bustles on.

"You were right. Transfiguration, Charms, and Herbology today." Amelia smiles. "How did you find out?"

Ana glances around the table so she can indicate Eric to the other girl, but he doesn't seem to be at the table. "I asked one of the prefects, Eric Hobbes. I'll point him out if I see him."

Amelia nods and goes back to her schedule.

Ana follows suit. They have a surprising amount of free time, with at least an hour between most classes, and they only have two classes at all on Tuesdays - if you count midnight Astronomy as occuring on Tuesday at all - which she finds odd. Surely they won't be getting so much homework as to require hours upon hours of study time?

She's disappointed that their first Defense Against the Dark Arts class isn't until Thursday afternoon. But she supposes it's something to look forward to if the other classes turn out dull.

"Oh man, we're going to learn how to fly? Awesome!"

Ana sighs and Evie begins enthusiastically responding to nearly every class on the list. How she's in Ravenclaw when she clearly hadn't cracked open a single one of her textbooks absolutely baffles Ana. Her house is supposed to be filled with intellects, but so far she's been very disappointed.

Maybe classes will help clear things up.

She ends up nearly being late for Transfiguration when a staircase decides to switch directions while she's still standing on it. She's out of breath and red-faced when she finally does arrive, and she drops straight into the first open seat she can find.

"Hey Ana. Congratulations on making Ravenclaw."

She glances over to her seatmate and is pleasantly surprised to find that she already knows him. "Oh, Alasdair! Do we have this class with the Slytherins?"

He shrugs. "I suppose so. I hear most classes have two houses at a time."

She nods idly. "How are your housemates so far?"

He shrugs again. "Quiet mostly. I can't complain."

Ana grins ruefully. "I wish mine were the same. This girl Evie wouldn't be quiet and let us sleep last night, it was awful." She glances around then and realizes that Evie hasn't yet arrived. "Though it looks like she's going to be late so perhaps this class will pass peacefully."

There's the ghost of a smile on Alasdair's face. "Perhaps."

They stay quiet until the lesson begins. McGonagall stands and walks around her desk so she's directly in front of the foremost row of seats.

"Welcome to Transfiguration. Before we begin I must warn you: Transfiguration is some of the most complex and dangerous magic you will learn-"

She's interrupted by a triumphant Evie tripping through the doors and landing on top of one of the Slytherin girls sitting in the back.

"I'm here! Man it is hard to find your way around this place!"

McGonagall frowns. "Ms Jones, please take your seat. And five points from Ravenclaw for the disruptive entrance."

Every Ravenclaw in the room, Ana included, shoots an annoyed look at Evie, but they seem to fly over her head as she plops down in the front row and pulls out her textbook.

McGonagall clears . "As I was saying, this class will teach you some of the most complex and dangerous magic that you will learn during your time here in Hogwarts. As such, anyone messing around in my class will be asked to leave and not come back." She looks pointedly at Evie, who looks back with a wide grin.

McGonagall's eyes sweep over the rest of the class. "You have been warned." With that she's back behind her desk and instructing everyone to open their books to the first chapter.

Ana has already scanned the section on the Transfiguration formula and she's glad when their Professor mentions that they'll be working on understanding the formula for both of their first week's lessons. How mathematics factors into magic is something Ana has never fully understood so the formula is giving her some trouble.

Forty five minutes later the bell signals the end of class, and Ana finds herself walking next to Alasdair.

"So, did you want to go to the library? Get started on the essay?" She's not too surprised that they already have an assignment due - McGonagall is clearly a tough teacher.

Alasdair shakes his head. "I'm going back to the common room actually. I'll see you later."

Ana watches him leave, and then shrugs and heads off to locate the library, which is much more difficult than she'd anticipated. After nearly thirty minutes of searching she finally comes across it, only to realize she ought to start looking for the Charms classroom so she won't be late.

Charms is shared with the Hufflepuffs, but Ana finds herself sitting between Amelia and a Ravenclaw boy she hasn't met yet.

Their Professor is the same short man who'd handed over her schedule that morning - Filius Flitwick, head of Ravenclaw and an accomplished duelist. Ana has read about him in the past and she's looking forward to learning from him.

The boy next to her - she eventually learns that his name is Finnigan - is nearly as involved in the lesson as Ana, asking several questions and rivaling her for number of answers he gives to the teacher's inquiries. He's clearly done his research, and Ana is quite pleased to know that there's some hope for her house.

Of course, for every question they get correct, Jerome "Jerry" Boot gets three wrong.

He's the last of the Ravenclaw first years that she hasn't met, and she's honestly baffled as to how he's ended up in the house of cleverness when he trips over his own answers ninety five percent of the time.

She supposes it's nice that he's trying, but by the end of class Fitzwilliam, who's seated next to him, has taken it upon himself to prevent Jerry from raising his hand in the first place.

Charms ends rather quickly between embarrassment over Jerry's incompetence and Flitwick's enthusiasm, and they pack their bags and head to lunch in the Great Hall.

Ana is one of the first to arrive, having been very carefully mapping out her location in a small journal she'd brought, specifically dedicated to charting the castle. She helps herself to a turkey and rye sandwich and begins reading her Transfiguration textbook in order to prepare for the essay she intends to begin working on that afternoon.

"Hey roomie!"

Ana bites down a groan of annoyance as Evie slides into the seat next to her. "How go classes so far?"

"We have the same schedule Evie, you know how they've been." She responds flatly, not looking up from her textbook.

"Haha, oh, right. You were really good in Charms." She offers, seemingly caught off guard for the first time since Ana has met her.

"Thanks. I read the textbook on the train." She accepts the compliment, but has no desire to return in. Not like there's anything to compliment Evie on, all the girl has done is show up late and accidentally fling her wand across the classroom during Charms.

"Wow, that's really dedicated! Textbooks are so dry, I prefer practical application!" Evie declares.

"You sound like a Gryffindor." Ana mumbles to herself as she hurries to finish her sandwich. Maybe she'll go to the greenhouse early - surely she can find somewhere to study in peace there.

Double Herbology that afternoon is spent with the Hufflepuffs, and Ana finds herself paired up with a thankfully quiet boy, though he's distinctly unenthused by the subject matter. Ana takes what she can get and listens dutifully as the cheerful Professor Sprout explains several of the safety measures they'll be taking during the class, and then for the second half they work practically with dittany plants, learning to care for them properly.

Ana ends up doing most of the work herself, and she decides she wants to keep her current partner for the rest of the year if she can manage. She heard quite a few disagreements break out among the other pairs, but her own partner (really she should learn his name for next time) never said a thing, merely shrugging and agreeing with everything she did.

Once class lets out at two thirty, she heads straight back to the library. She's much quicker in finding it this time, and she locates an empty table near the windows on which to spread out and begin research for Transfiguration.

All in all, it certainly wasn't a horrendous first day, but she can't stop a nagging thought in the back of her mind from whispering questions as to whether Durmstrang might not have been better.

Their schedule seems rather haphazard to Myr, but he supposes there must be some sort of reason to it.

And it's not like he plans to complain that they have a full hour free after breakfast on Tuesdays. It gives him plenty of time to explore the castle and determine where exactly his classrooms are located. The day before had seen him show up late to two out of his three courses (thankfully Professor Binns hadn't noticed and Professor Flitwick was quite understanding) and he hoped to avoid that with Transfiguration and Defense Against the Dark Arts when he has them later in the week.

He's joined in his search by Charlie Weasley and Brandon Young. His two dorm mates had been fast friends, and only two days in it was already rare to see one without the other. They had a third friend as well, a Hufflepuff boy named Aidan they'd met on the train, but he was only able to hang out with them in the afternoon once classes had let out.

Myr is glad for it - Charlie and Brandon on their own are already a handful. The addition of their third musketeer would surely only lead to trouble.

"Ooh, prefect bathroom! Remember where this is Charlie!" Brandon grins and Myr holds down a groan. He's starting to get the feeling they only tagged along with him to scout out good prank spots.

"If you two are just going to goof off can you do it somewhere else? I want to find the classrooms and still have time to get to Herbology."

"Why don't you do this in the afternoon? Flying classes don't start until next week anyway so we have two hours after lunch before History class." Charlie points out, clearly curious.

Oh. Myr hadn't known that. "Yes well, what else would I do with this time?" He points out awkwardly.

Charlie grins. "You any good at chess Myr?"

Myr blinks. "I... know how to play, yeah." Where was this line of questioning going?

Charlie proceeds to lead Myr and Brandon back to Gryffindor tower, and he spends the rest of the hour introducing Myr to the wonders of wizard's chess. Myr knows he needs to get a set for Cadi by the end of their second game.

"'Know how to play' indeed." Charlie is still grumbling as they head out to the greenhouses later. Myr had quite soundly beaten him in both of their games, much to Brandon's amusement and Charlie's embarrassment. Myr thinks it was made worse by the fact his older brother Bill had shown up in time to see him lose the second game and had mercilessly about it.

"We can have a rematch later if you like." Myr offers as they find a spot to stand between Nabila - one of the Gryffindor girls - and a Slytherin who Myr doesn't recognize.

"You should go against Bill. See if he's still smug when you beat the pants off of him." Charlie is clearly still pouting over his own loss so Myr lets it go and glances over to Nabila.

"So, partners?" He offers. She shrugs.

"Sure."

She says nothing more and he doesn't press, and the lesson begins shortly afterwards regardless.

Nabila proves to be a very good partner despite her disinclination towards speaking. She stays focused and together they manage to finish their assignment a good ten minutes before the end of class. Professor Sprout happily awards them five points each and lets them leave early.

"Well, we still have some time before lunch, and since next class isn't until fifteen hundred, do you want to drop off our bags in the dorms?" He suggests awkwardly, not totally sure how to talk to Nabila despite having just spent nearly and hour and a half working with her.

She shrugs. "I'm going to the library." She responds, and promptly turns to do just that, leaving Myr alone in the entrance hall. Somewhat disoriented by her abrupt departure, he turns to head to the common rooms anyway. No point in dragging his bag around when he won't need it for nearly four hours.

He drops his bag off on his bed and then settles in the common room to watch a group of fourth years playing what appears to be marbles, though every time someone loses a point they get foul-smelling liquid squirted into their face.

A few other first years file in to deposit their things, and one girl opts to toss herself down next to him when she returns to the common room.

"Hey Myr!" Holly Kiddell grins at him happily, brown hair falling in strings in front of her face as it usually does. "Way to go getting us those points! Laurel says that Gryffindor has won the House Cup for two years in a row now so we have a legacy to keep up!"

Myr blinks. "Is it that big of a deal?" He honestly doesn't quite get the concept of the House Cup or what it's supposed to stand for.

Holly looks affronted by his question. "Of course it is! Whichever house gets the House Cup gets bragging rights as the best house!" She explains as if it's obvious.

Myr frowns. "I suppose."

"You'll see when we win this year! Anyway, you wanna go get lunch?" Holly doesn't give him a chance to respond before she's skipping for the portrait hole and he has nothing else to do but follow her.

"Herbology is alright but I wish we spent some time studying wand woods. You know Hogwarts doesn't have any classes dedicated to it? What do they think will happen when the great Ollivander passes away with no family to take over the shop? Will wands just vanish?"

Myr grimaces slightly. Not a conversation has passed that Holly hasn't found a way to steer towards wands and wand making. Her passion is certainly impressive, but admittedly rather tiring.

"Didn't you say there are more wandmakers than just Ollivander?" He points out, and she immediately launches into a rather familiar lecture that Myr partially tunes out as they arrive in the Great Hall.

Charlie waves to them from the Gryffindor table, and Holly waves back without missing a beat in her rant.

"Hey guys, how was Herbology? Remi managed to kill our dittany plant." Charlie announces. "He's the worst partner can we please stick him with a Slytherin next time?"

Myr glances around nervously, wondering if Remi has overheard, but he realizes the other boy isn't even at the table.

"We can give him my partner." Holly grins. "You and me next time Charlie!"

"Definitely." He grins back and begins heaping food onto his plate.

Myr whiles away the time between lunch and History of Magic that afternoon learning gobstones - the game the fourth years had been playing - from Charlie. He has to run to grab a shower before they head for Binns' classroom as he's rather soundly beaten by the red head, much to Charlie's satisfaction.

As it had been the day before, History of Magic is incredibly boring, and fifteen minutes in at least half the class is either already napping on their desks or well on their way.

Myr is sitting in the front row, so he doesn't see it at first, but giggling starts up behind him and after a couple of minutes he can't resist turning around to see what could possibly be so amusing.

He finds himself face to face with a pig snout and he very nearly falls out of his seat.

As it is he jerks backwards into his desk, causing a rather loud ruckus.

The class goes quiet and looks to the Professor, but he drones on as if nothing of note has occurred. Myr wonders if dying makes people hard of hearing.

The girl's hair flashes red and gold, and she gives Myr an apologetic smile.

The rest of class is spent glancing over his shoulder to see the strange girl changing her appearance to poorly imitate the people Binns is describing. When the bell signaling the end of class sounds, he turns around completely.

"I'm so sorry for startling you! I was just having a touch of fun there!" The girl grins as her hair changes to a vibrant lavender and her nose shrinks down from a miniature elephant's trunk to a normal little girl nose. "I'm Dora."

He smiles and offers a handshake. "Myrddin. I was just surprised, no harm done. How do you do that anyway? We haven't been to Transfiguration yet."

Dora winks conspiratorially. "A girl never reveals her secrets." She giggles.

Myr ends up spending the rest of the afternoon with Dora and the other Hufflepuffs by the lake. They're joined by most of the first year Gryffindors as well, and at some point a water war erupts, making Myr quite glad he'd had the foresight to stow his books back in Gryffindor tower beforehand.

As it is he ends up thoroughly soaked thanks to Dora and her friend Kiera, a curly-haired blonde with a loud voice and an apparent life goal to drag everyone she ever meets into a mud fight.

Brandon, Charlie, and their Hufflepuff friend Aidan had holed up near one of the hollow trees lining the lake, sneak attacking anyone who got too close. This in turn got Evera and Drake, along with their Hufflepuff friend Jemma, into the water war, and from there things spiraled out of control.

By the time the group shuffles back towards the Great Hall, not a single person remains dry.

"Blimey, that was awesome!" Fiona McKay enthuses happily as the Gryffindors sit at their table for dinner. Her curly red hair is plastered to her face and her accent is heavier than normal with the excitement of the afternoon.

"We should definitely hang out with the Hufflepuffs more." Charlie agrees. "That Metamorphagus girl is fun!"

He immediately gets several questioning stares and he grins.

"I'm talking about Dora! Have you guys never heard of Metamorphagi?"

"Don't act smug Charlie, you wouldn't know about them either if we didn't have a super nerd for a brother." A cheeky Bill Weasley states as he walks by them with his friends, lightly mussing Charlie's hair as they pass.

Charlie ducks and fixes his bangs before sticking his tongue out at Bill's retreating back. "Yeah, well, Metamorphagi can change their appearance at will, like Dora." He explains, a bit more put out than he had been when he first announced his knowledge to the group.

"That is so cool. How do you become one?" Drake pipes up. "I want to look like Superman!"

Charlie shrugs. "I think you're just born with it. Honestly I zone out when my brother goes on rants about stuff he's read about so I don't really know."

"Your brother? Bill?" Holly tilts her head curiously as she scoots a bit closer to Charlie.

"Oh, uh, no. I have some younger brothers too." Charlie looks a bit uncomfortable with the question so Myr decides to switch subjects.

"So flying lessons start next week right? What exactly do those entail?"

The rest of the table is more than happy to follow his lead, and the rest of dinner is spent with the kids from magical families enthusiastically explaining broom riding to the ones raised as muggles.

Myr notices towards the end of the meal that Holly has been oddly quiet. He tries to catch her eye but she's maintaining careful eye contact with her plate. As soon as she's finished eating she makes a quick exit - nearly running into her sisters on the way out.

"Woah hey, where's the fire?" Laurel sits in the seat vacated by her youngest sister as the middle one heads off to join the Ravenclaw table. "I've never seen Holly abandon a meal that fast. What are you guys talking about?"

"Flying class!" Charlie grins. Laurel's eyes light up in understanding.

"Ah, got it. So any of you newbies play Quidditch?"

This turns out to be a very touchy subject, as both Charlie and Remi immediately declare themselves Seekers - whatever that means - and then begin arguing over who the better player is.

"You look absolutely riveted." The teasing voice is accompanied by a light prod in the shoulder, and Myr turns to find Evera grinning cheekily at him. "Never heard of Quidditch?"

He shrugs. "I've heard of it but no one has explained anything beyond the fact it's on broomsticks and it's a kind of sport."

Evera looks beyond thrilled to be the one to finally explain the game to him.

"Okay, so you've got seven players on every teams, and four balls. Thre are three Chasers, who carry around the Quaffle - that's one of the balls - and try to throw it through one of the three hoops at the ends of the field to score ten-point goals. The Keeper is in charge of blocking goals. Then there are two Beaters who are in charge of the bludgers. There are two blugders - more balls by the way - and they fly around the field and try to knock people off their brooms. Beaters have bats and try to direct the bludgers towards members of the other team and protect their own teammates."

"That sounds kind of dangerous." Myr points out.

Evera shrugs, a bit more dissmissive of his concerns than Myr is entirely comfortable with. "I guess. There's plenty of protections in place and as far as I know the last Quidditch related death here at Hogwarts was decades ago. Anyway, the last player is the Seeker, who's in charge of finding this tiny golden ball called the snitch which flits around the playing field. Whichever Seeker makes the catch gets their team 150 points and ends the game."

Myr frowns. "Why bother with the rest of the team if the Seeker is the one that matters?" He questions.

Evera looks personally affronted. "The Seeker just ends the game. Plenty of teams have won despite the other Seeker catching the snitch. The Chasers are the most important team members." She puffs up and Myr can't help a wry grin.

"You're a Chaser then?"

"You better believe it! Best Chaser ever." She grins.

Laurel overhears the declaration and glances over. "We'll see about that. You'll need to impress me first little girl."

Myr figures Laurel is probably a Chaser as well. He excuses himself from the table shortly afterward, still not really engaged in the conversation. Quidditch just seems dangerous to him personally.

He makes his way up to the Gryffindor tower, where the painting of the Fat Lady is practicing her opera.

"Um, ma'am?" He shifts nervously as she finally notices him.

"Oh I'm sorry dear. Password?"

"Dittany."

The portrait swings forward to reveal the passage into the common room and he traipses up, mind locked on the idea of a warm shower and soft sheets.

He wonders if he should be prepared for every day to be this eventful. He's not sure he could handle that, if he's honest.

He nods to Holly in the common room, where she's curled up with a book by the fireplace, and then stumbles to his room. One shower later, he's asleep before his head has even touched the pillow.

There are definitely worse classes to start a Wednesday with than Defense Against the Dark Arts, but Rajani still finds the scheduling a bit odd. After all, they'd just had Defense the afternoon before, and no classes in between.

"It's probably due to how many classes they need to schedule." Eugene Slughorn suggests. "Avoiding overlap and all that." The gawky blond boy has proven quiet easy to befriend, though Rajani is a bit wary of him despite his sociable demeanor.

She nods, swallowing a bite of egg before responding. "I suppose that does make sense."

"And I don't know about you, but I know exactly when I'll be working on my Defense homework." Clary adds, grinning around an orange peel.

"Swallow before talking Clary, no one wants to see that." Queenie sighs. She's been trying to instill some manners into Clary, but so far has had very little luck.

Rajani leans back slightly, smiling as she listens to the already-familiar banter that springs up between her roommates. She catches Lenox's eye from across the table and he flashes her a grin which she's happy to return.

Nia and Elspeth arrive a breakfast a bit late, both panting from the rush.

"Why didn't you jerks wake us up?" Nia groans as she falls over next to Eugene.

"You looked so cute sleeping." Clary jokes, grabbing more toast from the platters. "We didn't want to disturb you."

"Well do next time." Elspeth mutters. She's never very talkative, but Rajani has noticed she's worse in the mornings before she's eaten.

Rajani feels a small surge of guilt. "Sorry guys. I woke of early and figured you'd wake up on your own."

"Oh, no one's blaming you Raj." Nia smiles. "We all know Clary is the Lion in the pit."

Clary chokes. "Ew no, take that back!"

And just like that the atmosphere is light again, and stays light as they make their way to the North Tower for their class.

Professor Whits is just arriving as they do, and she flashes them a grin.

"Good morning little neonates! Have a good rest?"

Rajani has no idea what the professor just called them, but she didn't sound like she was trying to be insulting so Rajani opts to smile in response.

"I found the reading quite interesting." Queenie pipes up. Three days in and she's already established herself as something of a teacher's pet, though she has earned about twenty points for Slytherin already so Rajani isn't complaining. "It's fascinating that people can mix up doxies with faries or pixies."

"They are all small flying things that buzz." Finn offers from where he's seemingly materialized behind the girls.

Clary yelps. "Merlin's pants Finn, make some noise when you move, would ya? How long have you been there?"

"Not long" He replies, sliding past the group and taking a seat at the front of the classroom. Queenie joins him, while Clary makes a beeline for the back of the room along with a majority of the other Slytherins.

Rajani hesitates, and then sits at the desk next to Queenie. The rest of the Slytherin class, as well as the Hufflepuffs, appear shortly afterwards.

"This seat taken?" A boy sporting a Hufflepuff tie and a strong case of baby face gestures politely to the seat beside her.

Rajani glances around and realizes that all the people she usually talks with are sitting elsewhere, so she shakes her head. "Apparently not."

He smiles and slides in next to her. "Cool. I hope you don't mind me sitting here, I'm trying to get a friend of mine to talk to other people." He glances at another boy who's standing in the doorway, giving him a very dirty glare.

"Well I don't mind as long as he won't try to pull anything." Rajani says pointedly and the boy laughs.

"Nah, Cian is a pushover and an introvert." The boy pulls out his Defense textbook and begins pointedly ignoring his friend. "I'm Donaghan by the way."

"Rajani." She introduces herself in turn, but they never get past that point as Professor Whits begins the lesson.

They briefly go over the readings, and then Professor Whits goes into details about how to handle each of the three creatures they'd read about. So far Defense class has all been theoretical, but Professor Whits has promised to have quite a bit of practical applications in the second half of the course, when they're "more familiar with spell work" as she puts it. Rajani thinks it's rather silly, but she doesn't complain. Sahana had told her about one Defense teacher they'd had two years prior who hadn't allowed any practical spell work in his classroom.

The lesson ends about five minutes early, so Professor Whits sends them off with a new reading assignment as well as instructions to write a single-scroll essay on how to deal with doxies to be handed in for the next class.

"You . I got stuck next to some mopey Slytherin guy." Donaghan's friend - Cian, Rajani remembers - is at their desk before either she or Donaghan has even started putting their things away.

Donaghan rolls his eyes. "Maybe if you tried actually talking to him he wouldn't have been so mopey."

"If it was Cadfael he probably would." Rajani offers. "He's big on moping."

Donaghan laughs slightly. "Okay well, don't sit next to him next time then."

"I'm sitting next to you next time you git." Cian mutters.

Donaghan glances over at Rajani as he picks up his bag. "It was nice being your seat partner today. Maybe we'll get a chance to talk more next time." He smiles, and she returns the gesture.

Nia corners her in the hallway as they exit.

"What the heck Misra? What was that about?"

Rajani frowns. "What was what about?"

"Baby face! Don't make nice with the enemy!" Nia snaps. "You heard how his friend talked about Cad-"

"You called Cadfael a whiny-baby just last night!" Rajani countes defensively.

"Because he is, but we know that because we live with him! Badger boy didn't even try talking to him. Trust me Raj, don't try making friends with those guys." Nia's eyes are dead serious, and Rajani frowns.

"Donaghan seemed nice though." She protests. "I wouldn't mind sitting with him again. And I believe you guys were the ones who ditched me in the first place."

Nia sighs and shakes her head. "Your call. Don't say I didn't warn you though. Slytherins look out for our own, because no one else would bother. You can't trust the other houses."

Rajani has to admit, it's not the first time she's heard the sentiment. Sahana has never had anything very nice to say about the other houses either, and while Rajani has always thought her sister was just being dramatic, the other Slytherins seem to have similar ideas. And those sorts of convictions surely aren't born from nothing?

So she sighs."Alright, I'll sit with you guys next time. But someone else has to sit with Cadfael - I sat with him yesterday."

They decide to hang out in the common room and work on the essay until it's time to head over to their first potions class of the week. Which, as it turns out, they once again have with the Hufflepuffs.

Rajani can see Donaghan shooting her a curious look as she ducks past him to sit with Queenie, but she ignores it and focuses instead on getting her parchements organized.

When Professor Snape enters, Rajani takes a long moment to study him. She hasn't, until this point, really seen the Head of Slytherin house, but her sister has nothing but good things to say. Rajani isn't so sure.

With long greasy hair and a beak-like nose, Severus Snape looks more like a storybook villain than a teacher, but there's a glint of sharp intellect in his eyes that keeps Rajani from passing judgement too quickly.

After taking several moments to glide to the front of the classroom, Snape finally speaks.

"You are here," He drawls, "To learn the subtle science and exact art of potion making. As there is little foolish wand-waving here, many of you will hardly believe this is magic. I don't expect you will really understand the beauty of the softly simmering cauldron with its shimmering fumes, the delicate power of liquids that creep through the human veins, bewitching the minds, ensnaring the senses... I can teach you how to bottle fame, brew glory, and even stopper death - if you aren't as big a bunch of dunderheads as I usually have to teach."

Well. Rajani can tell a few people are bristling at his harsh analysis of the group, but perhaps it's his way of preemptively discouraging anyone from mucking about. An incorrectly brewed potion could, after all, be deadly.

"For our first lesson, you will be learning the difference between cauldron and vial types. This may seem pointless but choosing an incorrect cauldron or container can ruin a potion entirely so pay attention."

By the end of the lecture, Rajani's hand is cramping from her desperate attempts to scribble down everything the potions master has said, so it takes her a few minutes to gather her things, by which point most of her friends have vanished to lunch.

She sighs and slings her satchel across her shoulder, only to freeze when she realizes that Donaghan is still in the room. And even worse, he's looking directly at her.

She nods to him politely and makes for the door, and he thankfully seems to get the message as he doesn't follow.

She spends all of lunch with her head down and an odd flutter of regret in the pit of her stomach.

After lunch is History of Magic and then Transfiguration, both with the Ravenclaws, and Rajani makes sure she sits with her friends in both classes. They spend the afternoon in the dungeon, alternately working on their essays and staring out into the lake, trying to catch glimpses of merpeople or the giant squid. Clary swears she sees a grindylow at one point but no one really believes her and a good-natured pillow fight is started over it.

By the time dinner rolls around, Rajani is feeling much better. She even gets a jab in about Clary's horrid table manners that nearly starts a food fight (though one of the prefects scolds them before it can get too rowdy). And by the time she's ready to go to bed, all lingering guilt about the brush off has evaporated.

The day is incredibly productive thanks to their having the entire afternoon off. Next week they'll be starting flying lessons, but for the time being they retire back to the common room to finish homework and discuss which classes are their favorites. Dinner is a casual affair, and Clary and Queenie even sneak food back into the dorm, so they keep snacking as they work.

Then comes double potions on Friday morning.

"Today you will be making a cure for boils. Or rather, you will try. You will be finished by the end of the period."

Snape has assigned them partners, and Rajani find herself sitting opposite to a Hufflepuff with a bad case of baby-face.

"So, um, I guess we better get started then. You want to use your cauldron or mine?" Donaghan thankfully isn't being awkward, so Rajani follows his lead. They each crush three of the six required snake fangs and measure out four scoops. Donaghan heats the potion, and Rajani waves her wand the way Snape had demonstrated before sending them off.

Now they had anywhere from half and hour to forty five minutes to wait until their potion turns orange.

"So, have you started on your Defense paper?" Donaghan asks conversationally as he counts out the porcupine quills they'll need for the second part of the potion.

"Oh, yes. I'm nearly halfway through, though I've hit a bit of a wall. I've explained everything I believe needs explaining, but I need another paragraph to fill the scroll." Rajani responds somewhat hesitantly, but he's being polite so she doesn't see why she should be rude in return. It would be poor manners.

He nods. "Same here. I'm honestly thinking I might just rewrite it with sloppier handwriting."

Rajani can't help but laugh softly, glancing over to Nia to make sure the other girl isn't watching. "Well that's certainly one way to go about it, but it doesn't seem very honest does it?"

He sighs. "I suppose not. Perhaps we can compare sometime - see if one of us has thought of something the other hasn't."

Rajani looks over at her partner, but he's not meeting her eyes, instead checking the potion.

She hesitates. The other houses supposedly aren't very nice. But perhaps individuals within them are decent enough. After all, no one in their year much likes Cadfael, aside from maybe Alasdair - though it's always difficult to tell with him - and he's Slytherin. There must be exceptions.

So she smiles. "Sure. That sounds like a great idea."

Potions goes much smoother after that, and while Snape deems their final product "barely passable" Rajani doesn't mind all that much.

The afternoon passes in a blur - potions is their only class on Fridays - and she does meet with Donaghan after lunch to compare essays. She's vague about what she's up to when Nia questions her departing the common room, and is quite thankful when no one seems suspicious.

By eleven o'clock that evening all her work is done and she is, quite frankly, exhausted.

"I'm glad we have Astronomy on Fridays." A drowsy Clary declares. "I don't know how anyone could stay up all night and have classes the next morning."

Rajani has to agree. As it is she isn't sure she'll be able to stay up long enough to actually get to class.

A group of them had gone out earlier to hunt down where the Astronomy Tower actually was and had asked one of the prefects how long it took to get to the top. So they knew they had thirty minutes before they needed to get going if they didn't want to be late.

The common room is mainly occupied by the first year class, though a few older students are scattered around the tables, quills scratching away as they study into the witching hours.

The trek to the top Astronomy Tower does end up taking exactly half an hour, and the group arrives three minutes late. Professor Sinestra just smiles and mentions perhaps leaving a bit earlier in the future.

They spend the next hour gazing through their telescopes, trying to locate specific stars that the professor is pointing out. Rajani thinks she finds about half, but she's also aware that she might be being a touch optimistic. She's so exhausted by the end of the lesson that everything has developed a layer of fuzziness around it.

They somehow manage to stumble back to their dormitories when class is over, arriving a little after two thirty and immediately dispersing to their dorms. There's none of the usual banter the girls have before going to bed tonight - everyone changes into their night clothes as fast as they can manage before diving under the covers.

Rajani takes enough time to curl up into a ball before thankfully passing out, promising herself that she's not waking up until noon.

Franziska can't believe how much homework they have already. Isn't the first week supposed to be easy?

She makes the mistake of voicing this observation aloud in the common room to Jemma Finnegan just after breakfast on Saturday and causes Hunter Vaugnes, a stocky, blond fifth year prefect, to snort loudly.

"If you think this is bad you're going to be a mess come finals." He observes. "I'd stay well ahead in your lessons if I were you."

"Oh be nice Hunt." One of the third years shoots back airily. "We aren't all half Ravenclaw like you ya know."

The girl gets a pillow thrown at her head for her troubles.

Jemma pats Franziska on the shoulder. "We'll work on it together! I bet it just seems like a lot because we aren't used to it yet."

Franziska smiles thankfully at her, cheeks still a bit warm from the embarrassment of being called out. The two girls are joined shortly after by Aidan Ward, a cheery read head who's already made a name for himself around the common room from his constant questions about seemingly anything he can think of.

"Hullo girls. Is that the Transfiguration paper? I was just going to the library to meet up with Charlie and Brandon to work on that!" He grins. "Did you want to come? Five heads are better than three after all."

Jemma lights up. "Ooh, maybe I can hunt down my Gryffindor friends as well! Then we'll be seven!"

Franziska outwardly smiles in agreement but inwardly hopes that only Brandon and Charlie will be there. They've already spent quite a bit of time with the Gryffindors, and while they're a lot of fun - Franziska would never say no to spending some down time with Holly - she has a hard time believing they'll be very good study partners.

Nonetheless she finds herself tailing Jemma and Aidan as they make their way to the library. Hopefully, even if her suspicions prove correct, she'll still be able to get some work done. It's a big library after all, there's plenty of space for her to find her own study area if need be.

They arrive before Brandon and Charlie and claim a table by the window. This proves incredibly distracting as it faces the Quidditch pitch, where a few scarlet and gold clad figures are tossing a Quaffle around.

"Oh man, do they do pick up games here?" Franziska jumps as a lanky brunet seems to materialize out of thin air behind her. She leans her head back to give Brandon an annoyed glare but he just smiles cheekily back and plops into the chair next to her.

"I think sometimes, but those guys are probably practicing for Monday's tryouts. Rumor has it Laurel is completely overhauling our team's lineup so every position is open." Charlie replies as he takes a seat beside Aidan. "Bill is probably out there somewhere. Laurel has been leaning on him all week and I think he finally cracked and agreed to try out last night."

"I don't get why he'd need convincing at all." Brandon remarks, leaning back in his chair. "Quidditch is the greatest. Really the only part of school worth caring about." He pauses. "Well, potions is useful too I guess."

Charlie shoots him an incredulous look. "Says the guy who added the wrong ingredients to our potion on purpose just to see what would happen!"

Brandon grins. "Hey, it looked really-"

"You melted my cauldron Young."

Franziska is startled by the intensity with which Charlie growls this, but Brandon seems unaffected.

"So we'll use mine for the rest of the year. Can't you ask for a new one for Christmas or something? Or hey, your birthday is before then right? Make it your birthday present!"

Charlie flushes angrily and doesn't acknowledge the suggestions, instead pulling out his Transfiguration textbook. "Let's just start."

Brandon, as expected, is extremely unhelpful over the course of the next few hours, spending more time watching the Quidditch players outside the window than working on his essay. Charlie however proves quite studious, and he and Franziska get into a pretty intense discussion about the exact meaning of wand power in the Transfiguration formula.

"Wow, nerd alert over here." Aidan grins. "We're at a school to learn magic and you're talking math."

"Math is actually very applicable, even with magic. There's a whole branch of it called Arithmancy that's solely about mathematical applications." Jemma pipes up. "My dad talks about it sometimes. It's really important to his work."

"Desk job?" Charlie smirks slightly.

Jemma smirks in return. "Curse breaker for Gringotts actually." She proceeds to stick her tongue out at the Gryffindor. "Anyway, as productive as this has been I'm due to meet with Evera and Drake out on the grounds in a few minutes. We're going exploring!"

"Drake's idea I bet." Charlie guesses, looking interested. "Me, Brandon, and Aidan have looked around already. Did you guys want a guide? I'm just about done anyway."

And just like that Franziska finds herself alone in the library. Sighing she buckles down and finishes her essay, then begins the one assigned for Potions. Surprisingly they so far don't have anything aside from reading for History of Magic, but she wonders if that might be because the teacher can't actually pick up and grade their essays.

She stays in the library, slogging through her assignments, until lunch, after which she agrees to a suggestion by another first year Hufflepuff, Henry Davies, to go swimming in the lake. She'd missed the hangout earlier in the week with the Gryffindors and she's curious to see the lake up close during the daytime. And she's surely more than earned a break.

They end up collecting a decently sized group by the end of lunch, including the ever evasive Cian who's all but dragged down to the lake by Donaghan.

Franziska decides to sit next to her silent housemate and see if she can't get to know him better. Despite only a week having passed, he's honestly the only person she can't consider a friend amongst the first year Hufflepuffs.

"So Cian, Donaghan says you two have been friends since you were kids? That's got to be nice, knowing someone already." She prompts hopefully.

Cian shrugs. "Yeah I guess." His want to be anywhere else is clearly painted over his face, and Franziska issues a hasty retreat to where Leona Poole is giggling loudly with Tyler Abbott. The two glance up as Franziska walks over.

"Um, hey. Could I sit with you guys?"

"Don't want to get wet?" Tyler smiles and gestures to the ground next to him. "Me neither. I've heard there are some freaky things in that lake."

Leona nods eagerly. "He was just telling me! His cousin knows a ton about this place already so he's sharing."

The short-haired brunette girl is already known around the common room as a chatterbox with a knack for knowing things she shouldn't. Franziska wonders how much of her information is gleaned from Tyler, who if she's honest is a bit easy to overlook and probably has no trouble overhearing things.

She shrugs and sits down. "Like what?"

The three of them spend the next hour chatting about monsters, both in and out of the lake. Leona proves surprisingly knowledgeable on the topic of Erumpents and Franziska does her best to remember any details her father has shared about Erklings. Tyler knows little more than what he's heard from his cousin Remi, but he pipes up whenever he has a question. They're joined partway through by a completely soaked Kiera, who proudly announces that something with tentacles definitely grabbed her while she was in the lake and they really should join the rest of them swimming.

The sun is going down by the time the Hufflepuffs decide to head back inside, and despite having only sat on the beach the entire time Franziska is completely exhausted. She'd remained in the same spot throughout the day, cycling through several different people as they came and went from the castle and the lake. Currently she's chatting with Aidan about Quidditch, which the muggleborn wizard still hasn't fully wrapped his head around.

"So if catching the snitch gets one hundred and fifty points," He says slowly, "How come there are Chasers and stuff at all? It seems like one hundred and fifty points probably wins the game to matter what."

Franziska has never been to a professional game herself, but her mother is a big fan of the German national team so she's quite familiar with just how insignificant the Seeker's contribution can be. "In school games that is often the case." She admits. "But professional games can go for days with no one finding the snitch. Average scores are usually well into the hundreds by the time it's caught. The Seeker's job really is to time the catch just right so their team can win. The points are just a bonus."

Aidan tilts his head. "Days? When do they sleep? Or eat? That seems rather dangerous."

Franziska shakes her head. "If games get too long they sub in their reserve players for a few hours. And there are a ton of rules they have to follow to make sure everything and everyone is safe."

Aidan looks relieved. "Oh, well that's good then! When is the first match do you think? I really want to see a game."

Franziska genuinely isn't sure, so they agree to ask one of the prefects after dinner. The entire house was holding an informal party to celebrate surviving the first week so there's sure to be someone who knows the answer.

Dinner is a rushed affair for the Hufflepuffs, and Franziska notes that the prefects never show up to the Great Hall at all. Which naturally only makes Franziska even more curious.

Tyler and a few of the other first years try pestering his older sister Lola Abbott into sharing details, but she only grins.

"It's no fun if you go in knowing what to expect Ty! And anyway, Maisie would kill me if I shared what they have planned."

Maisie Abbott was Tyer and Lola's older sister, as well as the sixth year prefect. Franziska personally liked her best out of their six prefects, and she knew the sentiment was shared by most of the class.

"What's the point of having older siblings in the same house if they don't let you in on cool secrets?" Leona grumbles. "I mean, I have three older siblings but they're all in different houses. But I know they would have told me what to expect!"

Franziska doesn't say anything. She certainly isn't thrilled by the notion of walking into an unknown, but at the same time she does trust their prefects to not do anything horrid or embarrassing. So she's decided to remain neutral on the entire situation until she knows more.

They vote that Kiera crawl through the barrel leading to their common room first, and she's happy to oblige. A moment later she releases a shriek, and no one is quite sure whether it's terror or excitement that prompts the noise.

After a long moment of hesitation, Tyler crawls in next. His cry is much easier to decipher, and the rest of the first year class crawls in with no hesitation.

The entire room is in bloom, and as Franziska emerges from the barrel something pink and fluffy lands in front of her, sprouting into a dozen flowers moments later and covering her in petals.

She can't help releasing a yelp and she ends up tumbling face first into the new blooms.

"Very smooth Reinhardt." She hears Hunter Vaugnes laughing but she can't really get upset when she's too busy being dragged over to the fireplace by Jemma, who's happily insisting on braiding flowers into everybody's hair.

Aidan already has a flower crown and Leona is working on another one for a very resistant Cian.

"Oh go on Ci, it's all good fun." Donaghan smiles over at his pouting friend, weaving his own crown as he does.

Franziska obligingly sits still as Jemma secures several lavender blossoms in her hair, and then she's released and the slight blonde is grabbing for Kiera, who has up to this point avoided getting too many flowers on herself.

"Submit to the floral goddesses!" Leona shrieks as she assists in tackling Kiera to the ground.

"And here I thought this was the nice house." Dora laughs, her multicolored hair very thoroughly decorated with petals.

Franziska finds that she can't stop grinning as the older kids continue pelting the lower grades with the odd flowering plants.

Lola Abbott grabs her arm at one point and drags her behind one of the couches, where several other younger students sit, including Henry Davies and a highly irked Kiera, complete with flower crown.

"Hey, we're going to launch a counter attack! We need you smaller kids to try and grab some of the puffapods away from the Prefects while we stage a distraction."

Franziska assumes the strange plants must be puffapods, and Lola points out a basket of them beside Hunter's feet.

"They flower when they touch the ground so be careful!" One of the other members of their little attack force warns. "I'd take the entire baskets if you're able to."

"Alright squad, you guys ready?" Lola's grin is almost manic, and Franziska feels a pull of uncertainty in her gut, but the command to run is given before she's given a chance to think too hard on it.

She hesitates, wanting to better understand the plan before diving into it, but Henry grabs her hand and drags her back out into the chaos of the basement.

Honestly she can't remember much after that aside from colorful explosions and a whole lot of shouting. Someone throws a puffapod directly into Hunter's face though, and that particular memory she thinks she'll cherish for a while.

Eventually Professor Sprout comes up from her bedroom to tell them to clean up and get to sleep. The first years are excused from the process as they haven't learned about puffapods yet, but the rest of the house busies themselves clearing out the mounds of flowers covering nearly every surface of the common room.

"Well that was exciting." Kiera seems to have gotten over the fact that her head is more petal than hair as she beams happily from where she's sprawled out across her bed.

Franziska is sitting a little more carefully, not wanting to get any flowers on her comforter. It would probably be rather uncomfortable to wake and find a stem poking into her hip.

Leona, Dora, and Jemma are taking their showers first, as all three were more covered in blossoms than she or Kiera.

"It certainly was a fun way to end the week." Franziska agrees. "I think Cian may be scarred for life though." The quiet first year had been caught in one of the bigger explosions of the night, and he had pointedly excused himself from the festivities early.

"You realize we'll have to top that somehow when we're seventh years." Kiera grins suddenly. "We should start planning now! We'll give the best first week party Hufflepuff has ever seen!"

Franziska just laughs. But she admits, thinking about the future with this house is a lot less daunting than it had been before.

"Alright then." She agrees. "What did you have in mind?"

None of them get any sleep that night. And Franziska honestly doesn't mind.

 

So my first exam was moved from Saurday to tomorrow and my whole study schedule was basically tossed out the window and has resulted in a lot of scrambling for me this past week. BUT it means this chapter goes up today instead of Friday! So hey, good news for you guys xD The next chapter won't be until the 16th more than liely when my exams are done, and then there will be a double update for Christmas and the final chapter of first year will go up on New Year's Eve as the NYC ball drops because why not? Anyway, the kids have officially started school, and there are a whole bunch of cameos from the other apps crammed in here. I couldn't fit everyone but darn it I tried! Anyway, wish me luck, and I apologize in advance if I can't respond to comments right away OTL All shall be responded to once I get home for sure!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2453 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!