Chapter Thirty-Eight

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Quidditch tryouts end up surprising everyone, even Charlie. The only person they're really looking to replace is Jacob Fawley so most of the people trying out are Chaser hopefuls, including Angelina and her friend Katie Bell who Myr had briefly met the week before.

However one person clearly outflies all the rest, and it's not who any of them had expected.

"Welcome again to the team Remi. Must be nice to finally be off the bench." Drake comments in the dressing room before their first official practice with the new team. Charlie has already headed out to the pitch, but the other four boys on the team are still changing.

Remi frowns at him. "You don't need to rub it in Jarvis." He grumbles before leaving the dressing room.

Drake holds up his hands. "What did I say?"

Oliver snorts. "Never mention a man's failures to his face, he won't appreciate it."

"That sounds like a quote." Myr observes as he finishes pulling on his uniform. "Come on, the girls probably beat us onto the pitch."

"It was a quote. My mum said it once and I think it's pretty accurate." Oliver explains as they walk. "Though I don't get why. I'd want people to tell me when I'm messing up, how else can you get better?"

"No wonder Perce likes you so much, he loves telling people what they're doing wrong." Charlie jokes, clearly hearing the tail end of their conversation. "Alright guys, main team with me, reserve team you're going to be working under..." He trails off, frowning uncertainly. "Normally I'd leave Remi in charge but he's actually on the team. Okay, Greg you're reserve head now. No higher than ten meters."

The reserve players mount their brooms and take off, leaving the seven primary team members waiting for Charlie to continue.

Charlie ushers them into a slightly closer circle. "Alright, Evera, Drake, and Remi. You guys take the quaffle and just toss it around a bit. Get used to each other and try out some different plays. Have fun with it!" He shoos them off and the three depart, looking slightly confused.

"And the rest of us?" Fiona asks curiously.

"Helping Oliver." Charlie responds. "Kid you've got major potential but your save ratio is the lowest one of all four teams at the moment. We're all going to try scoring on you and you need to block as many shots as you can. Simple enough?"

Myr and Fiona nod and follow Oliver over to the hoops while Charlie collects three extra quaffles from the shed before joining them and handing them each their own quaffle.

Oliver frowns. "If you're all shooting at the same time how can I block all of them?" He points out.

Charlie grins. "We're increasing your speed, mobility, and peripherals - after this one ball will be a piece of cake." He punctuates the sentiment by tossing his quaffle at the far hoop and forcing Oliver to dive to deflect it.

Myr has to admit that it's really fun trying to score on Oliver. Of the three of them he's definitely the worst at it - he's only ever trained as a beater which is an entirely different skillset - but he manages a few goals when he times throws with Fiona and Charlie.

For his part Oliver seems to be enjoying himself as well. By the time they've been at it for fourty five minutes he's starting to try riskier maneuvers to block multiple shots at once, to the point where Charlie calls for a break.

"Oliver you're doing great but please don't fall off your broom okay? We need you to not be in the hospital wing during the first game." The captain reminds the youngest team member, who nods.

"Don't worry, I'll be careful! I'll only risk life-changing injuries when blocking during real games!"

Myr thinks that Oliver might have missed the point but Charlie doesn't correct him and they go back to the exercise for another fifteen minutes before Charlie calls them all back in and they go straight into more familiar, full team exercises.

Practices continue like this each week, with Charlie dividing people up for the first half and then returning to full team for the rest. Myr actually rather likes the method once he's gotten used to it, and he's optimistic about their chances for the Cup this year.

He's also pretty optimistic about school, which has been a lot more manageable since he's only taking five classes instead of eight and has the entirety of Tuesday free to study.

Or, technically study. Most days he ends up playing wizard's chess with his friends more than he actually gets work done for his classes.

"You're going to regret not using this time properly when your essays are all due." Nabila points out one day. It's the first Tuesday of October and Myr and Charlie are playing their fourth game while several of the other Gryffindor sixth years are scattered around the common room, either studying or playing their own games of chess or gobstones.

"Nothing is due until November Nabila, relax." Charlie counters lazily. "The teachers have already told us basically everything that's due this year and when. And there's nothing due any time soon."

"Maybe not for you." Holly counters, sounding frustrated. "But we've got a paper for Transfiguration we have to turn in next week Monday. Have you started that yet Myr? I'm having trouble articulating the theory behind basic human transfiguration."

Myr shrugs. "I was going to get to it later today." He admits. The entire month of September had been spent rigorously going through all the theories of human transfiguration so he doesn't think the paper will be too difficult to create once he sits down and focuses properly. The difficulty, of course, is focusing.

Holly huffs. "Alright fine. Nabila, Fiona, you guys have started right? May I request assistance?"

"Why are we second choice?" Fiona laughs, even as she and Nabila walk over to Holly.

Holly shrugs. "Myr's the best at theory, we all know that."

Myr feels himself heating up slightly at the compliment, and he definitely is blushing when everyone else voices various levels of agreement.

"I was better before I got a good wand." He mumbles.

"Take the compliment Myr." Charlie grins. "Also, it's been your move for about five minutes now."

"Sorry!"

Myr ends up losing the game only a few moves later - he's distracted now by guilty thoughts of the paper he should be working on. As such he concedes the defeat and lets Drake take his place while he runs up to their dorm to grab some quills and parchment.

He tries to work in the common room but after thirty minutes and zero progress on the paper he decides to move to the library where the atmosphere will hopefully be more conducive to focusing.

However there's a distraction in the library as well - namely Jemma eagerly waving him over to where she's sitting with a group of younger students.

"Myr! Hey, do you have a minute?" She asks as he gets closer. "We're going over Transfiguration and Evera mentioned once that you were really good at the theory."

Myr sighs. "Alright, but I've got a paper I need to work on so I can't stay long."

Jemma tilts her head. "For Transfiguration? I've already finished it. Tell you what, help us and I'll help you later."

He smiles. "Sounds fair enough. What are you all working on?"

Jemma does a quick introduction of the group of students with her - mostly fourth year Hufflepuffs with a few Ravenclaws and Gryffindors as well from the same year.

"We're just starting cross-species switching." The boy Jemma had introduced as Roderik supplies. Myr thinks he might recognize the younger boy but he's not confident enough to place exactly from where. "Professor McGonagall has spent the past week going over the theory but it's really complicated."

"Understatement. I can't wait to drop this dumb class." One of the girls grumbles under her breath.

Myr frowns at her. "Most job do require some level of comprehension in Transfiguration you know." He points out. "And regardless, knowing the theory for this class actually makes theoretics in Charms, which you'll start sixth year if you continue to NEWT level, much easier to understand."

She makes a face but picks up the quill that had been discarded on top of a pile of ink-stained notes. "Fine, explain ti then."

Roderik buries his face in his hands, apparently embarrassed by the girl's attitude.

Jemma looks rather irritated as well, a strage expression to see on her face. "Amanda be nice. I don't know what's got you in such a mood but if you're not going to drop it you can leave."

Amanda huffs but doesn't move, slouching down into her chair and holding up her quill to take notes.

Myr remembers cross-species switches well, they had made up a decent portion of the final exam fourth year, so it's not too difficult to start explaining the basic concepts needed to properly execute the transfigurations.

Of the six fourth year student there, it's Roderik and surprisingly Amanda who pick up the ideas best, though Jemma whispers to him that both of them are taking Arithmancy as one of their electives. Myr wonders if perhaps he would have benefited from choosing that class for his own elective schedule, but the past is the past and he chooses to focus on the present.

The study session wraps up when Jemma has to leave for Herbology.

"I promise we'll meet up this afternoo or tomorrow, whichever works better for you." She says as she packs up. 

"We could meet up after breakfast?" Myr suggests. "Unless you have something before History?"

Jemma shakes her head. "After breakfast then. See you tomorrow Myr, and thanks again for helping!"

Amanda also hangs back. "Um, sorry for snapping, I've been kind of moody lately but that isn't your fault. Thanks for the help."

Myr smiles at her. "It's fine, I enjoy Transfiguration so it's not really work for me."

And then Amanda smiles at him before hurrying off to her own class and Myr thinks, oh. Because suddenly he gets what his friends mean when they talk about butterflies.

He doesn't get much studying done that afternoon.

Luckily for him no one notices his slight distraction for the rest of the day, but the next morning when he meets up with Jemma she immediately gets suspicious.

​​​​​​"You're off this morning. Did something happen?"

Myr shakes his head. He definitely isn't tell the girl who just broke up with her boyfriend and still isn't really on speaking terms with him or her other best friend that he might have a crush on one of her younger Housemates. It just seems indecent.

Jemma is polite enough to drop the subject and try to refocus on the paper, and eventually Myr manages to do the same, finishing most of the essay before they have to head to History of Magic. He even ends up helping Jemma edit a few points on her already-completed essay, and she promises to help him with "something in the future - an I Owe You of sorts".

Myr doesn't really accept the offer but he also doesn't turn it down either. Jemma's pretty smart and is taking four out of five of his classes with him so he may just need to ask for her help down the line.

They arrive in History class together and Myr has a moment to be glad that neither Drake nor Evera are taking the class since arriving with Jemma would probably not look great. Drake already spends most of his time glaring at Donaghan Tremelett who's been spending more time with Jemma since her and Drake's breakup.

He takes a seat at the back next to Leona Poole, the only person other than Jemma who he somewhat knows in the class. He's the only Gryffindor who had continued it into NEWT level.

"'Sup beater boy." Leona grins as he takes the seat next to her. "You making moves on Jemma already?"

He frowns at her. "Jemma's nice but not at all my type. And anyway, I'm friends with both Drake and Evera, I wouldn't do that."

Leona elbows him lightly. "I'm teasing, chill. Everyone knows you're probably as straight as Charlie anyway."

Myr feels his face heating. "What's that supposed to mean? I like girls!"

Leona shrugs. "I mean, you're sixteen and haven't even crushed on anyone as far as I can tell. I'm not judging, Sarah dated a girl for a bit though she's with a guy now which is a little confusing but whatever. Not the point, the point is I don't judge."

"But you do assume and stick your nose into everyone business regardless of if it's welcome." Myr counters angrily. "I'm not interested in guys, but even if I was it's none of your concern. I'm going to sit up front." He picks up his bag, ignoring Leona's attempts at protest, and moves to one of the empty tables further up. He really doesn't have patience for dumb gossip and rumors today, especially on that particular subject.

An image of Amanda smiling at him the day before flashes in his mind and he glares at his desk. She's two years younger than him anyway, it's probably creepy to like her at all.

Despite this he's still distracted throughout the class and he's pretty sure he took some notes down incorrectly. Maybe he'll be taking Jemma up on her owing him one sooner than expected.

To his surprise Leona leaves him alone after class, walking to lunch with the other Hufflepuffs taking the class instead and leaving Myr to make the trek on his own.

As he walks he notices another class letting out of the Charms classroom, and he nearly trips over himself when he recognizes Amanda chatting with one of the other girls from the study group. He quickly slows down so they can get ahead of him and he doesn't have to risk an awkward conversation with the girl who's somehow wormed into his head in just a day.

"What are you doing?"

He jumps and turns guiltily to Holly, who somehow snuck up on him in the coridoor. "What do you mean?"

"You're acting like I used to way back in second year whenever Charlie was around." She replies bluntly. "Don't think I haven't noticed - you like someone."

He starts to protest but she holds up a hand. "Hey, I'm not judging. I just said I did the exact same thing. You know, when I was twelve." She grins. "A word of advice, things go better if you actually talk to the person you like. I sure as heck wouldn't be dating Emery now if I hadn't talked to him."

Myr lets out a breath. Annoying as it is, Holly is right. And being compared to a twelve year old might have pissed him off slightly.

Leaving his friend behind he hurries to catch up to the group of fourth years. And when Amanda spots him and waves, he can't help but smiles back.

Crushes .

The day before the fourteenth - the day of the October full moon - Ana is frustrated to see that it's still raining outside. It's not nearly as heavy as it had been the month before, but she's concerned that once again she'll be forced to postpone her Animagus transformation.

To think, back in fourth year she had thought that as soon as she turned sixteen she would be able to transform. It's no wonder so few people actually become animagi.

The thirteenth is a Friday, and thankfully a lecture day in Divination so Ana doesn't have to deal with Clary and Elspeth's impatience over her inability to speak properly. Unfortunately she also has her fourth Apparition class in the afternoon and the first one in which they're starting to learn the pronunciation and wand movement for apparating.

Ana is able to practice the wand motion at least, but when the teacher, Wilkie Twycross, checks that she'll be able to speak again in the next class she's quick to confirm.

"Oh excellent. You'll need your voice for the remaining classes." The wisp of a man practically sighs - his voice in general is quite weak and Ana finds listening to him to be tedious most days. Still, he's the professor so she does her best to stay on his good side. It's not hard considering most of the other students mock him behind his back.

There are sixteen students in their Apparition class, including Elspeth who Ana is now acutely aware of, much to her distaste, and of course Jerome who Ana usually sits with. Unfortunately Aidan, like Amelia, isn't able to take the Apparition classes until the following year so Ana is rather stuck with her least intelligent friend.

Oddly enough she's actually gotten closer to Jerome since they're the only two in their friend group currently in the class, and though he regularly jokes that he'll probably end up having to retake it until they graduate Ana finds he's not quite as hopeless as she recalls him being in their first few years.

"Here's hoping it clears up tonight, huh?" Jerome sighs, glancing out the window. "Say, you just have to do it in light of the full moon right? We should stay up all night and see if we can't get a quick glimmer. You have the potion on your nightstand, we could just stay in the common room and keep it nearby."

Ana frowns at him, and he quickly answers the unspoken question. "Evie told me about the potion when we were talking about some transfiguration stuff yesterday, I swear I'm not somehow spying on you girls."

Ana smiles, nodding. Didn't think you would anyway.

Jerome flushes and glances away. "Of course not, I'm a gentleman."

Another side effect of spending more time with Jerome has been learning some of his tells - mainly the one where he gets incredibly nervous whenever someone mentions liking girls. Ana figures he's got a crush on somebody but despite how obvious he generally is she hasn't yet figured out who. She even mentioned it to Alec in her last letter to him, sent off a few days before.

"Anyway." Jerome continues. "Do you think that would work? As long as it's after midnight it's technically the fourteenth, right?"

Ana thinks about it. Technically it won't be a perfect full moon, but it will still be one, and the idea is tempting. She's ahead in her work as well so the sleep deprivation won't impact anything to drastically and really it can't be worse than her two AM Astronomy classes on Sunday.

So she nods, and Jerome absolutely beams.

"Awesome! I know how to get food from the kitchen, Leona showed me last year. Any requests on snacks?"

They don't really accomplish what they were supposed to for the class, but by the time it lets out they've compiled a solid list of food they're going to collect for their all-nighter.

"Should we invite Shaun and Amelia?" Jerome ponders as they head to join their friends in the library. "Though if Amelia comes Evie will want to as well, and we shouldn't leave out Finnigan or Fitz either..."

Ana shakes her head. Just us. She writes. Could upset the prefects otherwise - we already have to sneak out after curfew, the more people there are the higher chance we get caught.

Jerome hums. "Good point. We'll have to wait until they all fall asleep then. Maybe we meet at midnight? You can't take the leaf out until then anyway."

Ana nods confirmation and sets the parchment they'd used to suss out the details on fire for good measure. No sense in carrying around evidence that could be found later.

Jerome jumps. "Jeez, you're getting good at nonverbal stuff huh?" He observes, sounding suitably impressed.

Ana wouldn't admit it, but she definitely swells up just a bit.

The two of them keep their plan successfully from the rest of their friends, though that's easy for Ana who simply has to not write anything down. She had been slightly concerned that Jerome wouldn't be able to keep quiet but he actually does a really good job acting like everything is normal, making Ana wonder why it is he's so terrible at hiding his discomfort over romance. He even successfully hides that he's going to get snacks from the kitchen after dinner by saying he needs to ask Leona something and he'll catch up with them later after dinner is finished and they're heading back to the Tower.

Shaun smiles knowingly as he vanishes. "I'm pretty sure he likes Leona." He observes idly.

Amelia raises an eyebrow. "You think? He doesn't really seem to treat her any differently than anyone else." She points out.

"You didn't realize Henry liked you until he asked you out." Shaun replies, grinning teasingly.

Amelia laughs. "Okay, fine mister love guru. Ana, pitch in here, what do you think?"

Ana just shrugs. She's not a big fan of these kinds of conversations, even if she's honestly curious if Shaun might be correct.

Maybe she'll just ask Jerome during their rendezvous after curfew. There's nothing wrong with being direct, and she  always prefers when people are upfront with her anyway.

That night she keeps herself awake by mentally going over her Arithmancy homework, and when she's finished that she resorts to finding patterns in the raindrops pattering against the window. To her slight hope they seem to be getting lighter as the night wears on.

Finally, after casting nearly twenty Tempus charms in her impatience (and maybe she should ask Alec to get her a Muggle watch for Christmas, it seems like a very useful tool despite its origins) it's finally twelve oh five in the morning and she carefully slips out of bed, snagging the potion bottle and ingredients on her nightstand as she does.

She beats Jerome to the common room, and she wonders if he's perhaps fallen asleep. However, after five minutes he appears from the boy's staircase, moving very slowly and carrying an armful of snack foods.

Ana hurries to help him and the two of them manage the transport almost silently.

"You ready?" Jerome asks with a grin as they settle next to the tallest window in the common room. "It's been getting slower all night, we're almost sure to see some moonlight in the next few hours."

Ana wishes she could share his optimism, but after almost a year of failures she's hesitant to think anything is going to go well.

They end up playing a strangely addicting Muggle game that Jerome calls dots and boxes on the parchment she'd brought for communication purposes for nearly an hour and a half before Ana blinks and realizes that the sound of the rain has faded almost entirely.

She looks out the window - and there's a gap in the clouds. Jumping up she grabs the potion and tries to position herself so that when the moon appears in the gap it will be directly on her.

She can hear Jerome making muffled squeaking noises behind her as she waits, barely daring to hope that this might actually work.

The light bursts through for only a few seconds, but it's enough. Ana pulls out the leaf, drops it into the vial, and quickly begins to add the rest of the ingredients.

One strand of hair, one teaspoon of dew fetched from a special location she'd hidden away from the rest of the common room to ensure it wouldn't be disturbed, and the Death's-head Moth Crysalis are all put on top of the leaf and she quickly corks the potion and swirls it gently as the moon vanishes back behind the cloud cover.

The potion is silvery in color, and Jerome tilts his head, clearly in awe.

"Is it complete? Are you gonna be an animal now?" He asks softly, and Ana stifles a laugh - she's feeling incredibly giddy.

"Not quite, we just need to put in where I left the dew and wait for a lightning storm. If it turns red then we got it right." She explains, her voice higher than normal in her excitement.

"I guess we don't need to stay up all night then." Jerome observes. "Also it's nice to hear your voice again." He adds with a grin.

Ana returns the smile. "We can stay up a bit longer. I don't think I'll be able to sleep for a while anyway. Where did those snacks get to?"

They stay up for another thirty minutes, eating and talking quietly, before Ana thinks to bring up her question from earlier.

"So hey, sorry if this is invasive and you can totally tell me to back off and mind my own business, but do you like Leona? Shaun says you do but I think it's more than that."

Jerome immediately looks nervous. "Um, no, I don't like Leona. Like, romantically, she's a good friend." He adds hurriedly. "But not like..." He hesitates. "Can you keep a secret?"

Ana tilts her head. "So long as keeping it won't put anyone in danger, yes." She agrees, and he nods.

"It won't. So, um, I don't like Leona, obviously, I said that already. I, um, I actually don't like girls? At all?" He stares intently at the floor as he speaks. "So I um, don't like Leona. I..."

It clicks for Ana just before he admits it. "You like Shaun." She murmurs. "Got it. I admit, I didn't even consider that possibility."

Jerome blushes bright red. "You don't... it's weird though. It's not natural."

"I can set things on fire without words or a wand Jerome." Ana points out. "We may have Arithmancy to prove things but the fact is we break the laws of physics regularly. This isn't really that weird comparatively."

Jerome blinks. "I.. guess. I feel kind of stupid for worrying so much now." He mutters.

Ana shrugs. "Hey, there are people who would be weird about it. Full honesty I don't get it, but I won't tell anyone." She hesistates, and then adds. "And so we have mutually assured destruction, I've been talking to Alec about basically everything in life, not just Curse-Breaking. He's a really good friend and confidant."

Jerome looks up at her finally, a small uncertain smile on his face. "I kind of figured. You sure it's just friendship though?" He adds, slightly teasing.

Ana rolls her eyes. "Don't push it Boot, I've told you enough already. We should probably get to sleep though, I need to be awake tomorrow to tell Professor McGonagall about the potion."

Jerome nods and the two of them leave the remaining food in the common room for the House Elves to clean up and sneak back to their dorms.

It still takes a while for Ana to fall asleep, but despite the late hour she still wakes up at eight with Evie and Amelia.

"Good morning." Evie yawns.

Ana waves mutely back, used to not being able to speak.

"Tough luck, looks like it's still raining." Amelia observes, making a face at the window.

Ana blinks, and then grins. "There was some moonlight earlier that I used. Hopefully that will be the last month I need to keep a mandrake leaf in my mouth."

Evie nearly falls out of her bed. "Holy crap I wasn't expecting you to talk. What even? When was there moonlight?"

Ana decides against telling them about her midnight hang-out with Jerome and simply says, "I couldn't sleep, and when I saw the clouds parting I took the chance. The potion is down in a hidden section of the common room - now we just have to wait for a thunderstorm."

"Shouldn't take too long with all the rain we're getting." Evie observes. "Man I can't wait to see! You've got to let me be there when you take the potion, I wanna see what animal you become!"

"Maybe. I'd have to ask Professor McGonagall." Ana responds, though she already knows that if she lets anyone be present other than her teacher it would be Jerome. Or Alec, though she's not sure how that would even work. "And it's safer for there to be as few people present as possible."

Evie pouts. "Fine but you'll transform for us afterwards right? I'm way too invested in this to be left on a cliffhanger!"

Ana rolls her eyes. "I'll show you both, and the boys as well if they like. I plan on practicing the shift a lot anyway, to get used to the sensation."

Evie continues eagerly firing off questions as they get dressed and head down to breakfast, resulting in Shaun and the other two boys cluing in to her success with the leaf the night before.

"So now you can become an animal?" Finnigan asks quietly.

Ana sighs. "No not yet, and no Evie I don't know what animal I'll become. There's no clear theory behind animagus transformations, though if someone cracks it we'd probably have solved patronus forms as well."

This thankfully sets off a different conversation about the theories behind patronuses and Ana is able to step away from the center of attention to walk beside Jerome.

"This all goes right over my head." He laughs, but she shakes her head.

"I think you'd be able to make a corporeal patronus." She muses. "You've got a lot of optimism. The happy memory is key after all, and the hardest part for most people."

Jerome looks genuinely stunned, and maybe a bit teary. "I, um,"

"If you want I'm going to ask McGonagall if you can be there when I drink the Animagus potion. I think it would be useful to have a second person I trust nearby in case things go wrong." She continues, and he blinks again, thoroughly caught off balance.

Finally he nods. "If that's alright, I'd be honored."

They share a smile before Ana has to step back into the conversation to correct Evie's horribly incorrect declaration about lust impacting patronuses.

But even as she lectures the other nothing can stop the feeling of warmth spreading across her body. She's finally almost there.

She's going to be an Animagus.

Despite it being a bit cognitively dissonant, Rajani actually thinks Tabs and Terrence are her preferred Head Girl/Boy team since she started as a prefect. For one thing she actually gets to patrol with her friends in Slytherin, and for another they're generally more lax about point taking. Willow and Bill had always been incredibly strict on the rules but Tabs and Terrence generally tell the prefects to follow their best instincts in situations rather than following the exact letter of the law.

That doesn't change the fact that patrolling with Tabs is incredibly trying.

Rajani somehow avoids having the Head Girl as her patrol partner for over a month before her luck finally runs out and she's scheduled for a ten to twelve patrol - what they call a "midnight run" - with Tabs for Wednesday night.

"Bad luck, you're taking the Astronomy Tower route too so it's the long one." Eugene sympathizes when they check the week's patrol schedule posted in the Prefects' bathroom. "At least when I had her a couple weeks back it was the dungeon run so I only had to listen for so long."

"She's not so bad if you can get her going on one topic." Hector offers. He's leaning awkwardly around Alana to try and see the schedule as well. "Then you can kind of tune out and think about other stuff while she rambles."

"The key is finding the right topic though. The same one doesn't always work." Trevor points out. All six of the Slytherin prefects had checked the schedule together after the Sunday meeting. "Last year I once got her going on species-switching but she barely had anything to say on it when Ed tried using it a couple weeks later."

"Her interests move as fast as ." Eugene jokes.

They all head together to the common room when they've determined that none of them have a Sunday night patrol and they're greeted by Queenie who'd been working on a paper prior to their arrival.

"Eugene! Good, you're back. We need to talk." With zero preamble she jumps up, grabs her fiancé, and drags him right back out of the common room.

"I hope it's not a long talk, curfew is in an hour." Gabi points out, frowning as the common room door closes behind them.

"It shouldn't, it's probably more wedding stuff." Rajani sighs. While she is excited for her friends, she doesn't see why they can't plan the wedding next year instead, when she'll probably be too busy to want to hang out anyway. Most days she's stuck third wheeling Alasdair and Cadfael since Clary has gotten weird about Rajani spending time with her and Lenox, and Elspeth and Nia are rarely around the common room at all.

Gabi rolls her eyes. "Weddings. I'll never understand tying yourself down this young." She grumbles.

Rajani shrugs. "I mean, if you find happiness, latch onto it I guess. But yeah, I'm happy single." She agrees.

Something at the back of her mind whispers that she's absolutely lying, but she shoves it down angrily. She's perfectly happy by herself for the moment, and she doesn't miss kissing and cuddling with another person whatsoever.

"Well if you ladies ever need happiness-" Trevor starts with a lecherous grin, but Gabi cuts him off with a sharp whack to the back of the head.

"No finishing that sentence, I would like my dinner to stay down." She grumbles. "I'm turning in, Alana, Rajani, if he tries anything hex him."

"I wouldn't!" Trevor protests, then grins at the two other female prefects. "Not without permission of course."

Alana makes a face, but something in Rajani pushes her to flirt right back.

"You'd have to woo me first. Prove you're not just all talk." She challenges him.

Trevor winks. "I never say anything that isn't true."

Alana makes a gagging noise and follows Gabi towards the girls' dorms, leaving just Rajani, Trevor, and an awkward-looking Hector in the common room, along with a few other students who aren't paying the trio any mind.

"So Hector, how are you finding fifth year so far?" Trevor asks, dropping onto one of the couches and taking up most of it.

Rajani rolls her eyes and takes one of the love seats for herself while Hector uncertainly sits on the floor. As much as she generally likes him Rajani thinks the younger male prefect is missing his Slytherin bite in a major way. She wonders if maybe she could try and fix that. It would certainly give her something to do while her friends are all busy pairing off without her.

Hector shrugs. "It's stressful because of OWLs obviously, my sleep schedule is completely shot because of patrolling, and Quidditch practice takes up a lot of my weekends, but it will all look good on my resume so I can't complain. I've been studying with Flint anyway, he's got some top-grade Ravenclaw tutoring him so he gives me notes from that which helps a lot."

One of the things Hector lists catches Rajani's attention. "You're on the quidditch team?"

Hector smiles proudly. "Beater. Captain Macmillan said I've got good potential for it, and a great aim. Leacock's been showing me the ropes and we've got some really good plays to try out against Gryffindor next month." His eyes are bright and determined, and Rajani thinks she's finally figured out why the kid is in Slytherin.

"Not bad. I used to be a reserve Chaser but school ended up taking over my priorities list." Rajani says. "I'm the one who got Lenox to try out though, so you're welcome."

Hector laughs. "McLeod is a fantastic Seeker, but he and Captain Macmillan bicker a lot. I'm not sure he's going to stay on the team next year - he's already grooming Terrence to take over for him."

Rajani tilts her head, recognizing the name. "Terrence Higgs? Good for him, making reserves. And I'm not surprised to hear that Alas and Lenox aren't getting along, they've always had divergent opinions on most things."

Trevor ends up falling asleep on the sofa as Rajani and Hector continue talking Quidditch right up until Queenie and Eugene return from their talk.

"Isn't it past curfew?" Queenie asks. "As prefects you guys are really not setting a good example." She adds with a grin.

"As prefects we get to decide when the rules do and don't apply." Rajani returns cheekily. "But I guess we do have class tomorrow."

They have to rouse Trevor from his nap before they can head to their dorms, but once they've arrived in their room Rajani decides to ask Queenie what she had needed to talk to Eugene about.

"I'm going to Peru again this summer!" She explains excitedly as the two of them sit on Queenie's bed. Clary, Elspeth, and Nia are all listening in as well, though they've taken over Elspeth's bed much to the actual owner's irritation. "My cousin invited me down as a mised bachelorette party and an apology that she can't fly up for the actual wedding. Eugene and I had some stuff planned for the summer so we had to rework our timeline was all. We're doing cake tastings over Christmas now instead."

"Request to be the officla cake tester." Clary raises her hand immediately, grinning. "I will ensure nothing is poisoned."

"My worry is that you would be too thorough and no one else would get any cake." Queenie shoots back teasingly, though Clary actually wilts slightly, one hand self-consciously covering her waist line.

"Why is that even needed? Cake is cake." Elspeth grumbles. "Seems like a lot of fuss. When I get married it's going to be a small event. None of this over the top nonsense."

Nia immediately pounces on the comment. "When? Don't tell us you have a secret lover Els, and you never mentioned it?" She teases, poking her friend mercilessly in the side.

Elspeth tries to roll away from the assault and ends up pushing both herself and Clary off of the bed.

Clary giggles, apparently recovered from Queenie's weight joke. "When Lenox and I get married we'll invite everyone! No secrets here."

"Ooh, has he proposed? Or are you just that confident he's going to?" Queenie asks eagerly.

Clary blushes. "Well, I mean, he hasn't asked yet, no, but we love each other so I don't see why he won't once we graduate. Maybe ever beforehand - his parents married really young too."

Rajani doesn't realize she's frowning until she spots Nia giving her a weird look.

"Oh my gosh we could totally do a double wedding!" Queenie squeals. Elspeth rolls her eyes and Nia just laughs as Clary and Queenie proceed to plan an overly elaborate wedding to share.

Rajani mostly keeps quiet as they talk, and she eventually declares that she's tired and heads back over to her own bed, with the others following suit shortly thereafter.

Rajani doesn't fall asleep for quite some time afterwards, though.

The next few days are normal enough, though Rajani does stop asking about Queenie and Eugene's wedding plans and tries to keep the focus on Queenie's Peru trip or their upcoming papers and assignments that are due when she does spend time with her best friend.

However, she's spending a lot more time with Trevor, who is proving an excellent distraction from both her friends and her studies. He'd asked her Monday night, when they were patrolling together, if she was serious about the wooing.

"I totally get that this would be a rebound relationship, but I want to make sure that you know that as well. Because you're super hot and I'd totally be fine just being a physical outlet." He wags his eyesbrows suggestively and she smacks him.

"You won't be if you think that's how wooing works." She grins at him. "But honestly, pure physicality sounds just about perfect right now. Relationships kind of ."

"They kind of do." He agrees.

They haven't actually kissed or anything - Trevor has insisted they at least have one semi-date at Hogsmeade first "for wooing purposes" - but already Rajani is feeling a lot more comfortable in her own skin again.

Then Wednesday night comes and her mood drops considerably when she remembers she has a midnight run with Tabs to get through before she can go to sleep.

The other girl is already waiting in front of the Great Hall, bouncing cheerfully on the balls of her feet. "Hey Raj! Ready for the Astronomy route? Honestly this is my least favorite patrol, so many couples thinking no one will see them making out if they hide behind tapestries. But hey, someone has to do it!" She grins.

Rajani attempts to force a smile back. "Hi Tabs. I dunno, at least they aren't shacking up." She replies somewhat tersely.

Tabs gags. "Oh trust me, some of them do and it is not comfortable for anyone when we catch that. You're lucky it hasn't happened to you yet."

Rajani is so startled by the news that she forgets to be annoyed by Tabs' presence. "Wait seriously? Why would you ever do that outside of your dorm room? That's just asking to get caught."

"Right?" Tabs exclaims, laughing as she does. "Well here's hoping tonight isn't the night you have to learn how to keep a straight face while two teens try to get dressed without tripping over themselves."

Rajani actually snorts. "Lovely mental image, thanks for that."

Tabs beams. "As Head Girl I must prepare you for all possibilities! Oh, speaking of have you encountered any of the pranks that have been left around the school this year? We're finding a lot more than normal and some of them are pretty dangerously situated - Adrian nearly lost a finger yesterday, but luckily Saundra was able to react fast enough to protect them both."

Rajani frowns. "I've found a couple but nothing like that. He's alright though?" Despite Adrian being a Gryffindor he's proven surprisingly decent to patrol with, having a dry wit and easy-going attitude that's begun shining through now that his initial wariness of Slytherins is starting to wear off.

Tabs nods. "It's worrying though. Terrence and I are planning to organize a full search of the school next Sunday if everyone is okay with it. I know it's the first Hogsmeade weekend but yesterday showed that these pranks could seriously hurt someone if we aren't careful." She looks genuinely apologetic, and Rajani blinks.

"You're a really good Head Girl." She blurts out, then flushes. "I mean, I figured you would be but-" She tries to correct herself but is cut off by Tabs bursting into laughter.

When she's calmed down the older girl turns to look at Rajani. "I didn't think I would be a good Head Girl, so that really means a lot to hear." She smiles, a bit watery. "We all figured Gabi would be Head Girl this year honestly, so I'm doing my best to fill those shoes."

"Well I think you're doing fine just as yourself. And I can definitely stay this weekend, keeping the castle safe is our job as prefects, right?"

Tabs beams.

The patrol is a lot less awful that Rajani had been expecting. Tabs still rambles excitedly about everything under the sun, but Rajani finds that if she mentions that Tabs is talking too much the girl will actually cut herself off sheepishly and let Rajani talk for a bit.

"It was surprisingly nice." She tells Trevor when she finds him waiting for her in the common room after the patrol is over. "I think Tabs just needs people to tell her when she's being too much - she doesn't really mean to be. Also our Hogsmeade date is being postponed."

Trevor's face falls. "Aw man, why?"

Rajani grins. "Tabs or Terrence will tell us in the Saturday meeting I'm sure. It's a good cause, I promise."

Trevor grumbles slightly. "You know, if you're not comfortable with our arrangement we don't have to-"

Rajani cuts him off by straddling his legs and getting into his face. "Does this look like I'm uncomfortable?" She teases. "Seriously Trevor, just relax. We're not conventional and that's totally fine. Screw what society says we should do first. I like you, you like me, and we're both fully aware of the limits of this relationship. Any further questions?"

Trevor grins. "How the heck did Ed let a girl like you get away?"

Rajani shuts him up by kissing him.

Franziska is actually quite excited about the first Hogsmeade weekend of the school year. She's going with Evie and Fitzwilliam, neither of whom she's really gotten a chance to talk with outside of classes since most of her free time is spent with her Housemates.

She is slightly concerned that the first visit is landing only a week before Halloween - Jemma and Aidan had warned them about an increased number of pranks lying around and Franziska just knows it's only going to get worse after the students are able to access Zonko's Joke Shop. The week before Halloween has always been bad for pranks, even without a prank war (and thank goodness that was just a one-year thing).

Still, she's staying optimistic, and the fact most of the prefects are staying behind to scour the school for pranks does make her feel slightly better.

Still, when Evie suggests they hit Zonko's on the walk over Franziska is very quick to shut down the idea.

"Okay, no Zonko's, I can live with that. I guess." Evie frowns. "What did you want to do then? Halloween is Tuesday, we need to do something spooky!"

"We don't have to." Fitzwilliam points out nervously. Despite being in the same House as Evie Franziska has quickly realized that the two don't really know each other that well. She's already resigned herself to being the middle man for the entire day. "Hogwarts does plenty without us."

"You have to admit though, third year was hands down the best Halloween yet! That prank Sarah coordinated was amazing." Evie grins. "Even if Jerry and I were in detention for two weeks straight because of the distraction."

Franziska frowns. "Distraction?"

"Long story." Evie laughs. Fitzwilliam looks distinctly less pleased with the memory, and Franziska is inclined to think she'd probably agree with his analysis if she knew the full story.

"Anyway, I was thinking we should go to Honeydukes." Franziska finally answers Evie's question. "It's not spooky, but having candy is very Halloween."

"It'll be really crowded though." Fitzwilliam mutters. "I don't really like crowds."

"We can go later, we have all day." Franziska assures him quickly, though Evie looks a bit annoyed by the decision.

"Yeah, we can go later. How about we stop by the Post Office first instead?" She suggests, and Franziska is glad her friend decided not to argue over the order of their store visits. "I need to send a letter to my folks anyhow, and I imagine you've got a full stack to send to Rosa, right Frannie?"

Franziska grins, shifting her bag higher up onto her shoulder. "I might. You don't mind Fitz?"

He shakes his head quickly and the matter is settled. Franziska continues to try and coax Fitzwilliam into talking more whie Evie goes on about Occamies, which they're starting to study in Care of Magical Creatures.

Franziska fails to get Fitzwilliam to open up on the walk over, but she resolves to get him talking before they head back that evening. She wants her friends to get along with each other.

There are a few other Muggleborn and Half-Blood students already in the Post Office when they arrive, and because Evie hadn't brought her own envelopes they end up having to stand in line so she can buy one for her letter.

"I don't get why you don't just owl them. Your folks know about magic, right? They'd have to." Franziska observes curiously.

Evie shrugs. "I mean, yeah, but I don't have an owl and it costs more to use the school owls than to use the post." She explains. "The conversion rate between pounds and wizard money is complete baloney."

Fitzwilliam speaks up nervously then. "Um, is it really? I've never had to use it before..."

"Well yeah, you're a pureblood. No offense." Evie replies easily, though Fitzwilliam recoils like he's been hit. "You wouldn't be caught dead doing anything that required Muggle money I'd imagine."

"Evie!" Franziska scolds, genuinely shocked by the comment.

Evie looks at her in confusion. "What? Am I wrong? Purebloods tend to be really wizarding-world focused. Name one pureblood who cares about Muggle matters."

Fitzwilliam is starting to fidget uncomfortably so Franziska decides to let the matter go to avoid making thing any more awkward. It's only the start of the day - she doesn't want the entire trip to be this tense.

"Isn't there a Weasley in charge of Misuse of Muggle Artifacts? They're pureblood. But you're right, there are certain norms across all blood purities. Just maybe don't generalize so much? Every person is an individual after all."

Evie shrugs. "Fair enough." She concedes, moving on easily from the conversation.

Franziska rather envies her friend's ability to do so - she's still feeling a bit tense. Still, things proceed smoothly from there and in a few minutes both Evie and Franziska have posted their letters and the three are heading back out onto the main road.

"So what now?" Evie asks. "Honeydukes still too busy for you Fitz?"

Fitzwilliam's shoulders rise defensively.

"Evie lay off. I'm not a fan of crowds either." Franziska places a hand on her friend's shoulder. "How about we check out Tomes and Scrolls? They might've gotten some new shipments over the summer."

Both her friends perk up at the suggestion and Franziska stops herself from laughing openly at how stereotypically Ravenclaw that reaction is.

Evie rushes off to the Beings and Beasts section while Fitzwilliam wanders over to the area with old legislative scrolls. Franziska considers trying to get them to stay together but she ultimately decides to do some browsing in the fiction section instead. As much as she'd love to she knows she can't force a friendship.

She ends up getting wrapped up in a novel about a witch and a muggle in a forbidden romance, which Evie catches her with.

"It's been over an hour, we can probably safely hit Honeydukes now." She grins. "Good book?"

"It has fantastic character development." Franziska shoots back. "Find any good books on trolls?"

That gets Evie going on Security Troll training and the history of it as the two girls go looking for Fitzwilliam further back in the store, both carrying the books they intend to purchase.

Fitzwilliam is buried in about a dozen scolls at the back of the store, looking absolutely thrilled. He looks up as they approach and tilts his head curiously, apparently catching the end of Evie's latest comment on the process of figuring out how to actually train trolls.

"The reason it took so long was due to high resistance within the Wizengamot. Many of the members were still Beast-wary back then." Fitzwilliam says quietly when Evie pauses for breath. "It wasn't until Mr. Scamander that proper funds were even alotted to the training team - it's amazing they managed to perfect the training process as quickly as they did all things considered."

Evie scoffs. "Batty old people, always afraid of change."

Fitzwilliam smiles awkwardly. "That's why the new generation has to come in, right?"

Evie beams and slaps him on the back, sending him stumbling forward. "Darn right! I like you Fitz, how come we haven't talked before?"

Franziska just beams happily.

Honeydukes is still quite crowded, but Fitzwilliam declares that he can handle it. Franziska somewhat doubts that, but Evie takes him at his word and drags them both into the store.

Fitzwilliam keeps close to the entrance, as Franziska had expected, so she does her best to collect some extra sweets to give to him while she and Evie peruse the selection.

As she fills up her bag Franziska is struck by an idea that has her grinning goofily enough for Evie to ask if she's snuck some cheering solution.

"Nope, just had a thought. Can't share, sorry. Hufflepuff stuff, you know how it is." Franziska hums happily.

Evie raises an eyebrow in amusement. "I have to say, I wouldn't have pegged Hufflepuff to be the House with secrets." She jokes as they finally head back to the register to pay for their selection.

Franziska shrugs. She'll have to ask the rest of her friends, but she thinks introducing a rewards system to their first year first week party could be a lot of fun, with the right rewards.

"I mean, I'm sure the other Houses have something they do that they don't tell the rest about." She says as they pay. "That seems like it would be pretty common."

"Well Ravenclaw doesn't as far as I'm aware." Evie replies, and then frowns. "Although... Hey Fitz!"

Fitzwilliam startles from his place waiting by the door. "Um, yeah?"

"Was there some secret Ravenclaw thing I was excluded from? You guys didn't like me for our first few years!"

Fitzwilliam shakes his head. "I... don't think so?" He offers uncertainly. "Nothing I was invited to."

The rest of the visit proves very enjoyable, and Franziska walks home with Evie and Fitzwilliam debating how long a law should be deliberated on before the courts make a decision on it. She may not be able to participate in the conversation, but she's thrilled to see her friends getting along with each other.

As they approach the castle Fitzwilliam suddenly stops and shuffles nervously.

Evie frowns. "Shoot did I say something rude again? Sorry for whatever it was-"

"We didn't dislike you." Fitzwilliam blurts out. Evie blinks in confusion.

"Our first few years. We didn't dislike you. Um, mostly we worried about the fire and disaster that tended to follow you around, but we didn't dislike you." He clarifies awkwardly. "So, um, yeah."

Evie grins. "Aw that's nice of you to say. Also fair, wandy here did throw some major tantrums. Say, what sort of wand do you have? I bet we could get Holly to tell us more about what it means and if it has any special abilities like mine does!"

Franziska waves to her friends with a laugh. "I'll leave you two to it. I've got to go find Jemma, but I'll see you both in class!"

Evie waves distractedly, more focused on dragging Fitzwilliam off on her hunt for Holly Kiddell, but Fitz does try to call back a proper farewell before he's out of earshot.

Franziska laughs and heads off to find her Housemates. She needs to share her ideas for their first year party before she forgets.

The next day is suspiciously quiet considering it's the day before Halloween - even Peeves seems to be lying suspiciously low. The whole thing makes Franziska twitchy.

Other than Muggle Studies in the morning she has the whole day off, so she ends up helping the prefects with a secondary sweep for prank items in the corridors. Both Jemma and Aidan have class so she takes Henry with her. He's already been patrolling that morning with Amelia so he's able to show her how they're doing their checks.

"It's a really simple charm, even I can do it." He jokes.

Franziska frowns. "Don't say it like that, you're a very talented wizard. You just learn differently."

Henry shrugs. "Eh, I've accepted it." He grins. "But seriously, let me show you so we can get going. Amelia is super twitchy that no one has checked the corridors between the Great Hall and the dungeons yet."

The spell is indeed quite simple, and Franziska has the hang of it after only two attempts.

"Is this a standard thing they only teach prefects? I feel like it could be taught to third years." She observes as she and Henry make their way towards the Great Hall.

He shakes his head. "Saundra came up with it actually, with help from her Ravenclaw friend."

Franziska frowns. "Saundra. The same Saundra who turned everything pink back in her first year? Who set a flock of birds on half the school by accident in her second? The one who just last year made it rain in the dungeon for two weeks? That Saundra actually created a spell that does what it's supposed to do?"

Henry laughs. "I'd forgotten about the birds. But yeah, that Saundra. She's a prefect this year, didn't you know? Cleaning up her act and all that."

Franziska scoffs. "I didn't realize it was an act. I thought she was just a walking disaster."

"I mean, she's still that. She nearly blew up several windows before getting this right, at least according to Amelia." Henry replies cheerfully. "But still, pretty impressive for a fifteen year old, right? And here we are, better start casting." He adds as they arrive at their destination.

Franziska mutters to herself as she reluctantly casts the charm repeatedly in areas where she thinks a prank might be hidden.

"What are you doing?" A voice pipes up curiously and Franziska nearly drops her wand in surprise.

"Looking for pranks. What are you doing?" She asks, turning and blinking in surprise, momentarily thinking she's seeing double before remembering that twins exist. "You two." She corrects herself.

The one on the right grins innocently. "Oh nothing, just walking around, getting to know the school."

"First year stuff." The one on the left agrees, equally innocently.

Franziska is immediately suspicious. "Hand over the pranks." She instructs firmly.

The red-haired twins double down. "What do you mean?" The left one asks, blinking up at her.

"We don't have any pranks!" The other insists loudly. "How would we even get them?"

"We're only first years." Right agrees.

Franziska frowns. "You two are Charlie's little brothers, and you've got another older brother who I'm pretty sure is in third year now. You may not be able to go out but I remember when Charlie used to get into pranks our first few years. So again, pranks."

Left looks at Right uncertainly, but before they can decide whether to try and continue lying to Franziska or not there's an explosion behind them and suddenly they're all three knee deep in muck.

Franziska just stares at the sudden swamp covering the Great Hall Entrance with resigned frustration.

"Oops, that wasn't supposed to do that! Sorry!" The familiar voice calls, and as Franziska had expected Saundra comes around the corner, wand up and frowning. Her Ravenclaw friend trails close behind her, looking vaguely amused.

"That was-"

"-so cool!" The twins exclaim, splashing at the swamp water excitedly.

"This is very disruptive." Franziska corrects them irritably, but she's ignored as the two wade over to Saundra and her friend and begin pestering them with questions.

"Found a prank!" Henry laughs as he struggles over to Franziska. "Well, at least it could have been worse. There's plenty of time to clean up before dinner."

Franziska just sighs. "Let's just start."

They do manage to get things mopped up before dinnertime, but only barely, and Franziska is utterly wiped. She ends up stumbling back to the dorm as soon as dinner is over and snuggling into her bed with a book.

 She is not looking forward to the next day.

Ana did it! Finally!!!!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2452 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!