Chapter Thirty-One

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
For Want of a Nail

Halloween in the castle is always cause for a lot of mixed emotions. At least for Myr it is.

While the castle looks amazing, and some of the teachers like to theme their lessons which can be really fun, it's also the time of year that Peeves the poltergeist is most active, and Myr doesn't think anyone particularly likes being on the wrong end of one of Peeves' many pranks. So he assumes he's not the only one with conflicting feelings about the holiday.

Of course, they're made worse by the fact he manages to have a bucket of armadillo bile, likely swiped from the potions store room, upended over his head by the poltergeist before breakfast has even ended.

Peeves cackles above them as Fiona slides her wands out of her sleeve and performs a quick cleaning spell on Myr's robes.

"Thanks." He mumbles and she smiles lightly.

"Peeves usually doesn't strike the same target twice in a day." She offers. "He'll probably be off tormenting the first years for a bit now."

"Still. First thing."

Fiona can only shrug sympathetically.

"Oh come on Myr, it's Halloween!" Evera interrupts, leaning over the table and nearly putting her hand in the puddle of bile still on the wooden surface. "You can't be sad today! Those are the rules!"

"Indeed." Drake agrees, nodding sagely. "Halloween is to be occupied by spooky goodness and pumpkin pie. No room for sadness."

Myr rolls his eyes slightly. Drake and Evera have always been rather ridiculous about their love of the holiday in his opinion.

"Myr, we have to get going." Charlie rescues him from having to listen to the two start singing Halloween songs - which they always do at some point during the day, usually more than once. "Muggle Studies is in fifteen minutes and you know what the fourth floor staircase is like."

Myr nods and the two excuse themselves, waving to the others who they'll see again in Care of Magical creatures after Muggle Studies.

"I wonder if Quirrell will do anything for Halloween? We haven't had Muggle Studies on the thirty-first before." Charlie muses aloud.

Myr shrugs. "Honestly Muggle traditions aren't all that different from wizards ones as far as I can tell. Do you guys trick-or-treat?"

Charlie glances over at him with a frown. "Is that one of those weird muggle contraptions? I don't think it sounds like one I want my dad getting his hands on."

Myr blinks, nearly tripping over his own feet in his surprise. "Wait, you don't? Okay, maybe there is something we could talk about in class today."

Sure enough, once everyone has settled into their seats Professor Quirrell takes a plastic pumpkin used for candy collection out from behind his desk and holds it up.

"Now then, I know we have some Muggleborns in the class, but I'd like them to stay quiet for a moment. Who hear thinks they can guess what this is?"

Franziska Reinhardt's hand shoots up immediately, to the surprise of absolutely no one. She knows as much about Muggle customs as the Muggleborns do, despite the fact she was raised by two wizards. Myr still can't quite figure that one out. 

Professor Quirrell looks around to see if anyone else will volunteer. After a moment Kiera Cassidy from Hufflepuff raises her hand uncertainly.

"Is it a decoration of some kind?" She asks when the professor eagerly waves for her to answer. "I mean, pumpkins are a popular Halloween decoration for us, so maybe it's the same for Muggles?"

Professor Quirrell beams. "Very close! Muggles do in fact use pumpkins as decorations on Halloween, but this particular pumpkin is unique!" He turns it so the hollowed out center can be seen. "This pumpkin is used for something called trick-or-treating!"

Myr is actually rather impressed by Quirrell's lecture on Muggle Halloween traditions, which is surprisingly accurate. Normally Muggle Studies gets the details of the Muggle world distinctly, and often amusingly, wrong, despite the professor's clear enthusiasm for the subject.

"How did he do?" Charlie asks as he and Myr head for the forest after class. Two of the Slytherins from the class trail behind them, also heading for Care of Magical Creatures. Myr knows them both - they're the only two Slytherins in their year on the Quidditch team - but neither he nor Charlie acknowledge them, and they return the favor.

Charlie always enjoys fact-checking Quirrell's lectures with Myr after the classes, and Myr humors him. Usually because it is rather funny what Quirrell gets wrong.

"Actually he was pretty on point." He responds.

"He didn't get the point of the trick part of trick-or-treating though." One of the Slytherins speaks up, and both Myr and Charlie jump.

Alasdair Macmillan raises an eyebrow at them, while Lenox McLeod looks as surprised as Myr feels at the comment.

"You, uh, know about trick-or-treating?" Myr asks uncertainly. He had thought Alasdair was a pureblood, and therefore wouldn't know anything about Muggles or their traditions.

Alasdair just shrugs and goes back to walking in silence. It's a distinctly weird moment and it lays heavily in the air until they arrive in class and Charlie and Myr are able to go join the other Gryffindors, while Lenox and Alasdair join the Slytherin girl still in their class.

"How was class?" Fiona asks as they approach. She enjoys hearing about the misinterpretations of the wizarding world as much as Charlie does, so Myr usually ends up telling her about all their lessons. He's pretty sure she could pass the OWL at this point.

"Apparently accurate except the stuff about tricks. According to Macmillan anyway." Charlie supplies.

That gets them confused looks from all their classmates. 

"You talked to the Slytherins?" Remi, surprisingly, finds his voice first, and Charlie can only shrug.

"I mean, not really, he said one sentence then went mute again, but it was super weird."

They don't get to discuss the odd phenomenon any further as Professor Kettleburn appears with a cage that's occasionally spewing fire, and the entire incident is just about forgotten by the end of the lesson. Fire crabs, as Myr learns, require one's full attention if you want to keep your clothes from burning.

"You've got more than one set of robes, right?" Fiona asks, concerned, as the group of Gryffindors head back towards the castle. "The next Hogsmeade trip isn't until next weekend."

Myr nods, tugging at his singed robes and being thankful that it's still surprisingly warm out despite the date. "I'll be fine. Plus this weekend is the first Quidditch match so I'll be wearing my uniform on Saturday."

They're greeted by a flock of bats when they open the castle doors, and Evera shrieks happily even as she ducks with the rest of them.

"This freaking holiday." Remi grumbles as he splits off. Myr isn't sure where the brunet vanishes to when he's not in class with them, but as nothing has exploded or otherwise caught fire recently he's not all that concerned.

"No Halloween spirit that one." A voice chimes in, and Evera and Drake both perk up.

"Hullo Nick! Enjoying your death day?" Drake asks with a grin.

Nearly-Headless Nick, the Gryffindor House ghost, tips his head in answer. "Well there have been worse ones. This year I hope to attain membership to the Headless Hunt!" He floats off through one of the walls, and Drake shakes his head sadly.

"He tries every year." He tells the group. "They never let him in though. He's not quite headless afterall, it would stop him from engaging in a lot of their activities."

"It's really too bad, he does so want to join." Evera adds with a sigh. "But oh well, I guess when you're dead there's not much else to do! Who wants to try and sneak into the kitches to steal some pie before lunch?"

Myr declines the offer, citing the need to change, as does Brandon though it's clear he only does so because he has Ancient Runes to get to. Fiona and Nabila decide to accompany Myr up to the Gryffindor Tower, but the rest of their friends head down to the dungeons.

"You know Myr, there are some fire-proof potions that work against Fire Crab emissions." Nabila says halfway to the Tower. "I have some extra if you'd like to use it on Friday. So you don't lose anymore robes."

Myr is surprised. "That sounds great Nabila, thanks."

"How do you even know about that?" Fiona asks, sounding impressed.

Nabila shrugs, but there's a faint smile tugging at her lips. "I like creatures. And I'm better in the class than Charlie so naturally I'm prepared."

Fiona and Myr share an amused glance. Myr thinks that if he decides to not continue Care of Magical Creatures, the thing he'll miss most is the ongoing rivalry between Nabila and Charlie over who's better in the class.

Not that Myr knows which classes he'll be dropping after OWLs. He still has no idea what job to even be considering right now, nonetheless working out which classes he'll need to take for it.

He does what he usually does when worry about the future starts creeping up and shoves it down to be worried about when his career consultation is scheduled. He leaves Fiona and Nabila in the common room so he can change, and he's pleased to find that his bed is occupied by a large, fuzzy black lump.

"Hey Owen, haven't seen you for a few days." He greets his cat with a quick scratch behind his ears before digging into his trunk to find a clean set of robes. "You should come to the Halloween Feast tonight, I bet some of the students would love to see a giant black cat roaming around."

Owen's ears are perked up, but he otherwise hasn't moved from his spot on the bed. Myr grins and pets him a few more times before heading back down the stairs - only to pause when he hears the familiar sound of bickering coming from the second years' dorm room.

"I though they got past this stage." He sighs to himself. He debates internally for a moment whether or not to interfere, but he figures that he'll most likely be dragged into it anyway so he knocks at the door.

Immediately the voices go quiet, and a moment later Oliver Wood pokes his head out of the door. "Oh, hi Myr." He grins and steps back, allowing Myr into the room.

"I could hear you two from the hall." Myr wastes no time getting to the point. "I thought you had sorted our your differences?"

Percy flushes. "Oh, apologies Myrddin. I didn't realize we were so loud."

Percy has begun using Myr's full name since he heard Uncle Cyril using it one morning early in September, and while it's a bit weird Myr figures it's harmless. "No need to apologize. What's wrong?"

Now it's Oliver's turn to look embarrassed. "Perce is ditching me in potions." He grumbles. "And he knows I need his help in that class."

Percy's irritation returns full force. "And I told you that there are plenty of people who will be just as helpful! Unlike you, Lucas doesn't almost blow up my cauldron at least once a week, so of course I'd rather work with him!"

"Only almost! Come on Perce, the first game is this weekend and I can't fail potions now! They won't let me on the field!"

My regrets knocking. "Oliver, one week of poor performance in one class won't get you pulled off the field, and we don't have a reserve Keeper anyway so unless McGonagall herself told Charlie to keep you grounded nothing is going to stop you from flying. Percy is allowed to partner with whoever he wants in class."

Oliver looks relieved, and Percy rather smug.

"There, what did I tell you?"

Myr leaves them to it to rejoin the girls in the common room.

The rest of Halloween actually goes quite well - Peeves keeps his mischief far away from Myr, Transfiguration and History of Magic both have fun Halloween themes, and even Potions is tolerable. And the Feast is, as always, fantastic. The Great Hall is decorated with all manner of spooky ghouls and ghosts and Evera and Drake takes turns telling increasingly ludicrous scary stories. They continue the stories that night in the common room until they have to head to Astronomy.

Once Halloween is over though, the stress piles right back on, especially with the match against Slytherin rapidly approaching. Charlie has taken to booking the Quidditch pitch before classes start in order to get play time in, as Melissa Tatum - the Slytherin captain - managed to snag almost all of the afternoon spots.

This means Myr has been waking up at six in the morning for nearly two weeks straight, and he thinks it might be making him play worse than usual.

Charlie relents when the team (minus Oliver who's oddly enthusiastic about the early mornings) confronts him in the locker room after their Thursday practice, and he cancels the one he'd planned for the next day.

Myr is glad for it - he actually feels rested on Saturday and ready for the first game of the season. The team sits together at breakfast and quietly go over their strategy while the students sitting around them make a ruckus to prevent eavesdropping. Myr is actually feeling rather optimistic about the day - the team has been doing well in practice, and Oliver's save ratio is already higher than Kent's had been. Evera is rather thrilled with this fact and has announced her intention to taunt her brother with it during Winter Break.

They go over the plan one more time in the locker room before heading out onto the field, brooms over their shoulders and spirits high. Charlie steps forward to shake Melissa Tatum's hand, and Myr scans the Slytherin players.

Alasdair is standing next to one of the beaters, speaking to him in a low voice. He stops when he sees Myr watching them, offering a small nod which Myr returns. Then Coach Crowell is releasing the snitch, and all fourteen players are taking off.

Myr glances at Oliver as the second year swerves to the hoops, worried that the excitement of his first game might be overwhelming, but upon seeing the twelve-year-old fully focused he turns to find where the bludgers have gotten to.

Only to find out moments later that one of them had been behind him.

"Ollie!" The fact he can still make out Percy's voice from the screaming crowd feels like it should mean something to Myr, but he's too concerned with spinning around and spotting where Oliver is free-falling to the ground, the bludger that had knocked him out zipping off to cause more chaos. Myr also spots the beater that Alasdair had been talking to floating nearby, looking disgustingly pleased with himself.

Myr may spend the rest of the game aiming every bludger he can at Alasdair and the beater who went after Oliver. Infuriatingly, they always manages to dodge.

Rajani isn't completely sure how she feels about their crushing victory against Gryffindor, considering it put a second year in the hospital wing for three days. But for the most part she's pretty happy about it, especially given that Lenox had caught the snitch, adding insult to injury for the lions.

She also had her first taste of firewhiskey at the after party, and that was rather fun as well. So maybe her feelings about the victory aren't quite so mixed.

"What are you thinking about?" Jemma Finnigan asks curiously.

Rajani glances over at her patrol partner. Of all the other prefects in her year, Jemma is probably the one she finds least irritating to patrol with, after Eugene of course though it's rare she's paired with any of the Slytherins. Willow and Bill seem to plan patrol schedules so that all four Houses have at least one prefect on patrol at all times. Which in Rajani's opinion since she actually enjoys talking with the other Slytherin prefects, but rarely gets the opportunity to do so.

"Quidditch." She responds to the question honestly, and Jemma nods.

"I suppose you're still happy about your win." She replies, though her tone is clipped. Rajani figures she's a bit more upset about the second-year situation, but honestly the kid is fine. She overheard Charlie mention that he was already asking to rejoin practices which to her is a clear indication that there was no long-term damage, so really no harm done.

"Well yeah, the Gryffindor-Slytherin House rivalry is well documented." She replies snidely. "Of course I'm happy. If the situation was reversed the Gryffindors would be quite smug I'm sure."

Jemma frowns and falls silent, and that's when Rajani finally remembers that she's dating one of the Gryffindor Chasers.

She sighs. "Okay sorry, that was uncalled for. Mostly I'm happy my friend Lenox caught the snitch, not about the bull that Alasdair and Callum - or sorry, you probably know them as Macmillan and Lindsay - pulled with the kid. Lenox says Melissa - Tatum - tore them a new one in the locker room." She doesn't mention that the captain had been more upset about how obvious they'd been than the incident itself.

Jemma looks a bit less upset at the news. "Well that's good then. McLeod did fly quite well, Charlie said so himself at dinner Saturday."

Rajani raises an eyebrow at Jemma as the girls start up the stairs to the seventh floor for the last section of their patrol. "You sat with the Gryffindors at dinner?"

Jemma shrugs. "Franziska did too. You know how it is - when your boyfriend is sad you need to be nearby for emotional support that he insists he doesn't need."

Rajani can't help but smile at that. "Okay yeah, I might be familiar with that." Then she catches herself and rearranges her features into something more neutral. She remembers the last time she'd let herself get along with a Hufflepuff, and it hadn't been pretty. No need to repeat past mistakes.

The last thirty minutes of the patrol is done in silence, though Jemma tries a few times to start up another conversation before eventually accepting that Rajani isn't interested.

Ed is waiting for her in the the common room when Rajani gets back.

"How was patrol?"

She shrugs. "Decent. Jemma is better that Tabs or Charlie."

"I'd imagine especially Charlie after the match this weekend." Ed adds wryly. "I overheard Bill tell Willow that they can't pair us with the Gryffindors for patrols for at least the rest of the month."

Rajani rolls her eyes as she sits next to her boyfriend, fitting comfortably under his arm. "Lions are such drama queens." She declares, and Ed laughs.

"Truer words." He replies with a grin.

They chat and cuddle on the couch for nearly an hour until they're interrupted by Gabi coming back in from her patrol.

"You two ought to sleep." The ravenette suggests, scrubbing a dark hand through the knots in her ever-tangled hair. "It's nearly one in the morning and I know that both of you have classes right after breakfast tomorrow."

"It's no different than Astronomy." Rajani shoots back lightly, but she's already standing and stretching even as she speaks. "But yeah, I could go for a bed. See you tomorrow." She gives Ed a quick kiss and then follows Gabi down the tunnel to the girls' dorms, wishing her fellow prefect goodnight before slipping into her room as quietly as she can manage.

Her class first thing in the morning is Defense Against the Dark Arts with the Hufflepuffs, and she's very careful to sit herself right in the middle of her friends so as to avoid accidentally ending up next to anyone she doesn't want to acknowledge.

"How was patrol with Jemma last night? I'm paired with her for the first time tomorrow and I don't fancy walking into a Tabs situation unprepared." Eugene pokes her in the side. "Thanks for that by the way, really appreciated the heads up."

Rajani smirks at him. "Some things in life must be experienced first hand." She snarks back, quoting one of Professor Greengrass's favorite sayings. "But Jemma is fine. Big on small talk but good at hushing up when it's not wanted. Surprisingly for a Hufflepuff." She adds, and Clary snorts.

The professor starts class then, and Rajani settles in. She's quite glad to have such a competent teacher for their OWL year - while she doesn't think she plans on continuing the class, it will be nice to not completely humiliate herself on the exam.

The lecture of the day is two parts, which are Rajani's favorite kinds. The first half of class Professor Greengrass goes over the theory and motions of the Impediment Jinx, and in the second half he pairs people up to practice.

Professor Greengrass always lets them choose their own partners as well, which is nice. Rajani doesn't mind Snape as much as she knows some of the other Houses do, but it does bother her when he occasionally assigns pairs for the double blocks.

The one problem is that she almost always finds herself paired up with Finn, who, despite now being her almost-permanent potions partner, she still doesn't really know all that well.

"Ladies first." He offers with a bow, and she shoots off the jinx before he can even get back up, grinning at him innocently. One thing she has figured out is that he appreciates sass and being surprised.

After watching him struggle to move for a few moments Rajani reverses the charm, and Finn finally manages to stand back up.

"Pretty good." He admits. "My turn then?"

"Don't announce it, you'll be-" Rajani cuts herself off with a quick Protego as Finn tries catching her off guard like she had done to him moments before. She grins at him. "-expected." She finishes cheekily.

Their practice session ends up turning into a mini duel, in which only three spells are actually used. Professor Greengrass is rather amused by their display and comments not only on their form for Impedimenta, but also on their dueling skills in general, offering a few pointers on timing and reading their opponents.

After class Queenie and Eugene join her in the corridor. "That was really cool Raj!" Eugene grins. "You wiped the floor with Finn."

"No offense to him but he was raised by Muggles. He's not going to have as natural ability as Raj who's a pureblood and was raised as such." Clary points out from behind them. Lenox gives her a look, though he doesn't drop her hand, and she shrugs. "I read it somewhere. But it makes sense, doesn't it? I mean, if you grow up around magic you'll have a better intuitive idea of how it works, right?"

Queenie looks thoughtful. "That does make sense." She decides after a moment. "Still Clary, you ought to be careful. If some arse of a lion heard you saying things like that-"

"Then he would get his tongue tied up for the rest of the day." Clary replies proudly. "I've finally perfected the tongue-tying jinx."

Rajani glances back at her friend. "Congrats, you've been working on that one for a while now, right?"

Clary nods happily. She's been teaching herself several jinxes and hexes ever since the third year prank war in order to "defend Slytherin's honor" as she always puts it.

"It's a lot of weird wrist movement, but I figure that it'll help me in the long term too." She adds.

Lenox squeezes her hand. "Clary has decided she wants to try for the Auror track when we graduate." He sounds proud, and Rajani momentarily wonders what it might have been like to date Lenox, but she snaps herself back to reality pretty quickly. Ed is a fantastic boyfriend, even if their relationship does have a self-imposed time limit.

"Kingsley says that the training for that is pretty intense." Queenie warns. "But that said I think that's awesome! There are almost no Slytherins on the Auror squads because of the stupid biases from the first war, so we need good snakes representing us!"

Clary's cheeks go slightly red, but she's beaming. "It's just a thought, I'll have to see what Professor Snape says the requirements are for that job. Goodness knows my grades the past few years haven't been outstanding."

"You've improved a ton though, plus if you drop the needless classes like you did Care of Magical Creatures you'll probably do really well." Queenie encourages. "Seriously, I'm holding you to this now, we need Slytherins in the Aurors."

Clary laughs. "Well then this future Auror needs to go study. Anyone care to join me?"

Since none of them has a class for at least the next hour, everyone does end up at one of the tables in the library. Rajani works on her Ancient Runes translations, which is due in an hour and she definitely needs to manage her time better.

She's surprised when Cadfael sits next to her about twenty minutes later. She looks around for Alasdair, who usually accompanies Cadfael everywhere, but the asian boy is nowhere in sight.

Cadfael shifts uncertainly. "I finished the Runes homework, if you wanted to compare." He mumbles.

Rajani shrugs and moves so that her own attempts are visible. Since their talk the year before she's been trying to be less openly hostile towards Cadfael, and really any help in Ancient Runes is help she'll take.

To her genuine surprise Cadfael is actually good at Ancient Runes, and she continues talking to him about morphology variations even when Queenie joins them in walking to class fifteen minutes later.

It isn't until after class, when Cadfael leaves to find Alasdair, that Queenie comments on the sudden camaraderie.

"It's good to see you two trying to mend bridges." She elbows Rajani lightly. "Though won't Ed get jealous? I thought he was your Ancient Runes helper."

Rajani rolls her eyes. "He gave me some study tips but he dropped the class before fifth year." She replies. "And honestly, if he gets jealous of me studying with boys I wouldn't want to date him anymore. Who has time for that?"

Queenie laughs, but it sounds a bit weak. "Right. I mean, I don't have that issue with Eugene, though we're engaged so I figured it would be different than dating."

Rajani holds back a sigh. Queenie has always thought her relationship with Ed is weird, but Rajani also thinks that Queenie was hoping for a ton of relationship drama to live through vicariously and she's not getting it from either Rajani or Clary, whose relationship with Lenox is surprisingly stable despite it seeming to have come out of nowhere.

"I'd imagine good relationships aren't so different." She says instead, and Queenie hums.

"You're right, you're right. I'm glad then, that you've found someone who you get on with so well." She says. "Speaking of Ed, will he sit with us today? Or will you finally go sit with his friends?"

Rajani shrugs. It's another thing that Queenie finds odd about her relationship with Ed - how Rajani hasn't really met any of his friends. "They're honestly a bit vulgar." She replies. "I admittedly wouldn't mind sitting with them if Lucy was there. Or Trevor and Gabi."

Queenie huffs, but it's playful. "Ah yes, the prefect club. I suppose if you manage that you'll steal Eugene away from me and leave me all alone."

Rajani laughs, glad the momentary tension is gone. "You'd probably hate it, Trevor is..." She trails off. "There is no word for what Trevor is." She decides with a grin.

She ends up sitting with her friends as normal, and Ed sits with his. It's their usual setup, and it works well enough for them. Plus Ed has no afternoon classes, and Rajani doesn't have History of Magic for two hours, so they spend time together after lunch is finished.

"Queenie is still confused by our whole relationship." Rajani informs Ed once they've settled in the courtyard. It's a bit chilly, enough that Rajani knows the weather is going to turn more towards winter within the week. Which is all the more reason to enjoy being outside while they still can.

"What's to be confused about? I like you, you like me, and we're seeing how it goes from there." Ed responds, sounding amused.

Rajani nudges him lightly. "It's not that simple and you know it. I think the fact we're breaking up when you graduate weirds her out a bit. And I've noticed we're a lot more physical than she is with Eugene."

"And I'm not complaining about that." Ed adds in with a grin. Rajani laughs.

"I'm not either." She agrees, and the conversation quickly shifts gears into something more entertaining.

Rajani ends up daydreaming through History class, looking forward to when class is over and she can track down her boyfriend and resume where they'd left off.

"Raj." Queenie hisses. "At least pretend like you're paying attention. We do have OWLs this year."

Rajani blinks at her friends, momentarily startled, before grinning and giving a slight shrug, unrepentant. "I can study tomorrow, or over the weekend." She whispers back. "How his droning doesn't put you right to sleep I'll never know."

Queenie rolls her eyes, but when her boyfriends slumps down next to her, clearly dozing off, she has to concede the point.

Once class is over Rajani wastes only as much time as it takes to bid her friends farewell before hurrying off to find where Ed has gotten to.

She hears Clary shout something teasing after her, but she just waves in response. She loves her friends, but she and Ed had left off just before the fun part, and she's rather anxious to get back to it.

After all, they only have until the spring. No sense wasting time.

Brewing an Animagus potion turns out to be even more complicated than Ana had expected - and she had been fully ready for the potion to be one of the most difficult ones she's created.

For one thing, while finding undisturbed parts of the castle is generally straight forward, being able to find those areas again proves the challenge. For another, keeping a mandrake leaf in for an entire month is proving incredibly inconvenient.

Halfway through November Ana is just about ready to spit out the leaf and try again in the summer when she doesn't have classes that require her to be able to clearly enunciate incantations. Her grades are almost definitely going to be negatively impacted, and there's a chance that November twenty third will be too overcast to see the moon and she'll have to restart the whole process anyway.

She says - or rather writes as she's long given up on speaking as a form of communication for the month - as much to Amelia one Saturday afternoon while studying in the library.

Amelia reads the note, and then shrugs. "It's your call Ana, though I think you'll be rather upset with yourself if the twenty third does turn out to be clear."

Jerome and Shaun glance up from across the table, as does Finnigan who once again has managed to sit with them without Ana noticing.

"Talking about the mandrake leaf?" Shaun guesses, and the confusion decorating Jerome's features clears up.

"Oh! Yeah, I agree with Amelia. Plus midterm exams are in December this year so you should still do well on those." Jerome adds his two cents eagerly.

Finnigan wrinkles his nose, clearly not following the conversation. Amelia notices and glances at Ana, who shrugs in response to the silent question.

Amelia turns to Finnigan. "Ana is in the process of becoming an Animagus, so she has to keep a mandrake leaf in all month."

Finnigan blinks. "That explains why you've been so quiet." He says after a moment, looking at Ana. "But, um, what's an Animagus?"

All four of them stare at their companion until he gets so uncomfortable that he actually sinks down in his chair slightly.

"Stupid question obviously." He grumbles under his breath.

Shaun recovers first. "No, not at all. You grew up Muggle I presume?"

Finnigan eyes him warily, still slouched and looking ready to bolt at the slightest provocation, and nods in a short, jerky motion.

Shaun nods in return, much calmer. "I was too. I only know about Animagi because of Ana - it's one of those weird wizard things they don't teach you - at least, they haven't yet. Maybe in NEWT levels when we start talking about human transfiguration?"

Ana lets the others explain what an Animagus is to Finnigan while she returns to her Defense Against the Dark Arts essay.

She manages to finish the essay before Jerome urges them all to leave the library for a bit and take a break.

"Speaking of," Shaun adds as the library doors close behind them, "What is everyone doing for winter break? We have to sign up to stay or not next weekend if memory serves."

Ana gestures to the castle in answer. She can't go home for the break - the lighting storm she's expecting is smack in the middle of it. Which is odd considering winter isn't known for having the best conditions for such storms, but she's still choosing to trust Professor Trelawney's cards on the subject.

Shaun nods. "I'm probably going to stay as well. Extra practice with spellwork is never a bad thing."

"Well I'm definitely heading home." Jerome states firmly. "Terry says I'm not allowed to miss Christmas."

Amelia smiles. "I'll likely go home as well, spend some time with my dad and Daniel. It's the first Christmas Dan is actually going to be in the country so I'd feel terrible if I skipped it."

Ana tilts her head, but it's Jerome who voices her question. "Not Daniel Kingsley of Puddlemere United?"

Ana doesn't keep too close a watch on Quidditch, but she's aware of the big names in the game and Daniel Kingsley has been a rising star in the past two years.

Amelia shrugs. "Yeah, that's him." She confirms, and Jerome releases a noise that Ana is pretty sure his vocal chords shouldn't be capable of making.

"You have to get me an autograph! Jeez, your complete disinterest in Quidditch makes even less sense now, honestly. Your brother is going to go down as one of the greats in the world of Chasers, mark my words." He declares dramatically, getting some amused looks from the students they're passing.

Amelia shrugs again, though there's a faint smile on her features now. "Cool. As long as he's happy, that's what counts."

"How do you become a professional Quidditch player?" Finnigan asks after a moment, sounding almost hesitant. It's clear he's still a bit off balance from their reaction to his earlier question, his tone preemptively defensive.

Amelia shrugs. "It differs for everyone. Usually seventh years will owl their preferred teams' recruiters to come watch one of their matches, along with their Hogwarts play record - you know, goals scored, or blocked, number of overall wins, stuff like that. Then they have to wait to hear back about whether or not the team is interested in giving them a spot in the tryouts at the start of the next season. Occasionally there will be open call spots for the tryouts as well, if they don't have enough reserve members for the season or didn't do any scouting at Hogwarts during the school year. There are a lot of paths really, it's not so complicated."

"It sounds kind of complicated." Jerome pipes up.

Ana shifts the leaf into her cheek carefully so she can speak. "If you're truly passionate about something, then any path is worth taking towards it." She's acutely aware of how odd she sounds, between having a leaf in muffling the words and having to speak slowly so she doesn't tear it or otherwise damage it. Still, she's proud of how long the sentence was.

Shaun hums. "True. Honestly I wish I had something I was passionate about - I'm still stumped what to tell Professor Flitwick during career consultation in the spring."

"Is that when it is? For some reason I thought it was the start of the year." Amelia asks. "I've been waiting for a message or something about those."

Ana had figured out pretty quickly that her own estimate on the timing of the consultations had been somewhat off, but she had also been under the impression that the consultations would be earlier in the year. She's still rather embarrassed by her own failure in the area despite no one else seeming to remember that she had been the one to mix up the dates in the first place. Hopefully that knowledge remains firmly forgotten.

Shaun shrugs. "From what I hear from the older students." He amends. "They never actually talked to us about the consultations, did they? We just sort of heard about them from..." He trails off and frowns. "Where did we hear about them?"

The others shrug, and Ana follows suit despite knowing she'd learned about the consultations from her mother. It's not worth risking the leaf to say anything.

It's easy to lose focus on the conversation when she can't participate in it, and she very quickly finds herself going over the process of creating the animagus potion in her mind. She's had it memorized for over a year now, but she would hate to mess something up and have to restart the entire process with no idea when the next electrical storm will be arriving. Worse than the fourth being cloudy would be missing a storm because of a simple mistake.

"Ana? Hey, we're heading back to the library." Jerome pokes her and she realizes that he's probably been trying to get her attention for at least a minute. She feels herself starting to flush, but she quickly pushes down the embarrassment. There's nothing wrong with being distracted after all, provided the distraction doesn't cause any sort of destruction or injury.

She nods to show she's heard and follows the group back, now preoccupied with organizing her study order for the rest of the afternoon. Efficiency produces the best grades after all, and midterms and papers will be the only things included on her scholastic transcript for the year due to the OWLs replacing their final exams. She can't afford for anything to be lower than an E.

The rest of the afternoon and most of the evening is dedicated to studying, and Ana manages to secure assistance from Amelia and Shaun in staying out after curfew in order to work on her Astronomy assignments. There are benefits, she thinks, to being friendly with the prefects.

She had done some research over the summer into what will be needed for Curse Breaking, and Astronomy requires an OWL grade of E or higher. While Ana of course does as well in Astronomy as she has everything else, she'd never given much weight to the subject as something she personally would need in the future. So she feels she ought to make up for lost study time in order to reach the NEWT level.

She sits up in the Astronomy Tower with her charts spread out over the floor, studying the stars' movement and shooing away several giggling couples looking to avoid prefect patrols.

She also encounters a few of said patrols when they stop by to check that no one is in the Tower. She has to spend nearly ten minutes convincing one of them that she's allowed to be there at all, and the Slytherin girl - either the sixth or seventh year since And doesn't recognize her - informs her that she'll be checking with Willow if Ana really has permission. Ana just rolls her eyes once the girl and her oddly quiet Hufflepuff partner depart and returns to tracking Mars across the sky.

The moon is almost invisible in the sky, and Ana finds herself glancing at it repeatedly as she works, wishing she could rush the days to the next full moon. She's on the other side of the halfway mark at this point - the new moon had been a few days ago and it's a waxing crescent that decorates the sky above her, moving towards the full moon. But it feels an absolute eternity away and Ana is uncomfortably aware of the leaf in .

The hardest part of course is eating, so Ana has been skipping meals here and there in the past two weeks as well, not wanting to swallow something she shouldn't. Even when she does eat she has to be careful, never having too much at once for fear the leaf will get caught up in the food and she won't notice in time.

She sighs and puts the final touches on her last start chart. According to the sky it's about two in the morning, and she figures she probably should go to bed now.

The trek to the Ravenclaw Tower isn't far, but because she has to descend the entire Astronomy Tower and then climb the Ravenclaw one it takes her almost fourty minutes before she's staring down the door knocker and realizing she can't count on anyone else to open it for her. She's been letting her friends answer the riddles on their own for the most part, since the knocked doesn't accept written responses (Ana is less surprised than her friends were about the realization - she doubts even the most powerful charm could render an inanimate object able to read).

"Many have heard me, but none have seen me. I will not speak unless spoken to."

Ana huffs a breath through her nose. At least it's an easy one. She shifts the leaf so she can speak at least somewhat clearly.

"An echo."

The sound of the door is almost painfully loud in the otherwise dead silent hall, and Ana pulls open the door and slips inside as quietly as she can manage as if it will offset the noise. She doesn't love the idea of showering in the morning and sleeping in her own filth all night, but she figures it would probably piss off a lot of people if she were to turn on the shower this early in the morning.

Despite her hygienic misgivings, she falls asleep rather quickly once she's in bed.

She wakes up with the leaf curled awkwardly over her teeth, and she locks her lips together and moves it under her tongue to prevent it from falling out. Once that's done she looks around and realizes she's the only one in the dorm, and that the strength of the light shining through the window indicates that it must be nearly ten at the earliest.

She'd overslept.

Drat. She thinks to herself as she jumps up, stumbles as her vision briefly goes wobbly, and then grabs her clothes and darts for the bathroom as soon as she's steady again. That's two hours lost that she wanted to use to go over Jerome's Care of Magical Creatures notes with him. Despite his poor performance in most classes his notes are surprisingly thorough, if somewhat difficult to decipher without assistance.

She heads directly to the library, bypassing the smell of breakfast still wafting from the Great Hall. She hasn't the time to waste grabbing anything to eat, and it's better for the leaf anyway.

Her friends - and Finnigan - are all gathered around one of the tables, and she drops into the seat next to Jerome, pulling out her textbooks and spreading them out around her.

"Good morning." Jerome greets cheerfully, holding out his notebook for her to take with a bright grin. "Amelia and Evie let you sleep in a bit since you've seemed kind of run down lately. Don't be upset, I encouraged it. Anyway, here are my Care notes like you wanted. Shaun helped me charm them with a color-coding spell so they should be easier to figure out. If you need any translations from my terrible handwriting just poke me. I've got to work on that Defense essay you finished yesterday."

Ana blinks and accepts the notebook, almost touched at the thoughtfulness if it hadn't interfered with her study schedule. She also wishes she could speak freely so she could inform Jerome that she isn't run down whatsoever and she's not sure where he would get an idea like that. But the leaf holds her tongue for her and she instead turns to the notes that had been offered. She has two hours to make up for after all.

Thoughtful or not, Ana needs to be efficient, not coddled. She'll be informing her friends of that as soon as she can speak freely again.

Franziska is actually quite excited for winter break for once. Due to the upcoming OWLs, several of her friends are staying at school during the break to give themselves more time to study and to practice their wand work. Franziska is just happy that she won't be alone in the dorm room.

"It'll be fun spending Christmas together again!" Leona says cheerfully as the Hufflepuffs sit down for breakfast Monday morning. "I assume the same group from second year still stay over the break?"

Franziska nods cheerfully. Leona had gotten along well with her break friends - give or take, Franziska does think Leona might have scared Fitzwilliam somewhat - and Franziska thinks it will be fun to have new people added to the group again, even if most of the break probably will be spend studying.

"You've already decided? We don't have to sign up to stay until this weekend." Kiera points out. "I'm sort of on the fence. I'd like to be home for Christmas, but also I really need to work on my Charms if I want to get an E on the OWL."

Donaghan glances at her curiously. "Don't we just need an A for Charms to pass into NEWT levels though?" He points out.

Kiera nods. "Yup, but if I get an E on the OWL I don't need to pass the NEWT and I can still become a Herbology specialist at St. Mungo's." She explains with a grin. "Gotta plan ahead Donny!"

"Don't call me that." He sighs, but he's smiling.

Franziska turns back to Kiera. "So you still don't know if you're staying?"

"You should! It's really fun here during Christmas, I stayed over during second year and it was awesome." Leona encourages eagerly. "Stay and I'll personally help you with your Charms."

Kiera laughs. "No offense Leona, but you're about the same level as me in that class. Now if Aidan was staying and offered his services..." She trails off and everyone glances over at the Irish boy, who shakes his head firmly.

"I'm not missing Christmas with my parents." He says simply. "I'll help you all study when I get back, and over Easter break as well."

"Boo." Tonks declares loudly, and Aidan rolls his eyes as she giggles.

"Donaghan and Cian are going home as well, how come only I'm getting any grief?" He asks, though his tone is light.

Donaghan grins. "Your information is old, we've been swayed into staying." He informs Aidan, and Cian nods. "We're looking forward to hearing some classic wizarding carols."

"And a lot of Celestina Warbeck." Tyler declares. "Lola and I will ensure you two are fully indoctrinated into good music."

As it goes whenever an opinion on Celestina Warbeck is voiced, the table ends up dissolving into a debate on whether or not Ms. Warbeck is really a shining example of good music or if she's simply overhyped.

Franziska personally likes her music for the most part, though she doesn't feel strongly enough to get involved in the debate, instead turning to chat with Henry, who's seated to her right.

"What about you? Joining us for the break?"

He shakes his head. "Amelia is going home so I decided to as well. I'm not that worried about OWLs honestly."

Franziska raises an eyebrow in amusement. "Really? And how does your Ravenclaw girlfriend feel about that?" She teases, and Henry blushes.

"She's not my-" He cuts himself off. Although he and Amelia have been spending a lot of time together - and if Leona is to be trusted are going to Hogsmeade together again over the weekend - neither has acknowledged their friendship as anything but. Despite the fact it's obvious to all of them that they're definitely dating.

Franziska lets him off though, changing the topic to something less prying. Namely, their afternoon potions class and if he wants to compare essays during the break they have right before it. Franziska may be dropping Potions after OWLs this year, but she still wants to do well.

"Why don't you ask Brandon for help? He's one of the few who's actually sticking with Potions, and apparently he's actually good at it." Leona pipes up, dropping into their conversation with ease and directing a suspicious frown at Franziska as she does.

"He has Defense during our free period." Franziska defends herself, but she knows it's not fooling Leona. Her roommate had sensed that Franziska and Brandon had been having problems even before Franziska realized they were having problems.

"He has lunch before that, and you both have time before lunch as well - neither of you takes Divination." Leona points out, still frowning. "I will push you two into a closet without your wands if you don't figure out something soon." She adds lightly, but Franziska somehow doubts she's kidding.

"It's complicated." She says anyway, despite knowing it's not going to help. "He's getting really secretive with his potions stuff - I've asked both Charlie and Aidan in addition to Brandon about what he's doing and none of them will say anything."

"Well then insist." Leona suggests. "I mean, you've been dating for what, almost two years now? You should be able to talk this out, like last year with the Quidditch seat stuff."

Franziska nods, but she's not convinced. Whatever is going on with her and Brandon right now, it feels worse than the argument they'd had at the end of the previous year. But Leona is right about one thing - they should be able to talk about it. That's what you do in relationships.

Thankfully, Evie arrives just then to walk with them to Charm class and effectively distracts Leona as she begins chattering on about the next Quidditch match and how Ravenclaw is absolutely going to win.

Franziska has never been happier that she made friends with the destructive girl.

But still... "Ravenclaw doesn't stand a chance. Your Seeker isn't half the flyer Lola is, and Elizah Blackthorn has one of the highest save ratios among the current Keepers." She says haughtily, laughing at Evie's scandalized look.

"I come here, with the promise of friendship, and I'm attacked in this way!" She declares dramatically, leaning right into Donaghan and Cian's space as she pretends to swoon. "The humanity!"

Franziska laughs as Cian makes a face and attempts to push Evie away. Donaghan just looks amused as he moves the remains of his breakfast so Evie doesn't get her hair in them.

"Well you can't exactly start a discussion about Quidditch and not have someone point out that your team hasn't won the Cup since first year." Donaghan points out, grinning at Evie when she pouts at him.

"Oh fine, fair enough. Come on, I want good seats. We're learning the Substantive Charm today!" Evie recovers quickly enough, bouncing back to her feet and nudging Franziska eagerly.

Charms class is quite enjoyable save for Evie accidentally blowing up one of the windows, but once it finishes Franziska can feel Leona staring at her again, and she knows what the brunette is going to say even before she walks over.

"Hey Leona, did you want to join me and Franziska? We're going to keep practicing in one of the classrooms." Evie greets the brunette, blissfully unaware of the slight tension in Franziska's stance.

"Were you?" Leona's tone is light. "Well I won't say no to practice! If you promise not to blow out any other windows." She adds teasingly.

Evie rolls her eyes dramatically and declares that Leona clearly has something against Ravenclaws, but it's playful and although Franziska knows why Leona is going with them she's glad to see her friends getting along.

They find an empty classroom quite easily, and practicing the substantive charm ends up evolving into a full review of all the Charms they've done during the year. Franziska nearly forgets about Leona's impending metaphorical closet until the brunette abruptly stops halfway through the incantation for the color-change charm.

Evie frowns. "You okay Leona?" She checks, and the brunette quickly grins at her.

"Yep, I'm great! Frannie over here though, she needs to go have a talk with her boy." She says pointedly. "Herbology will be out by now. Go." She adds firmly when Franziska attempts a protest.

Evie tilts her head in confusion, but doesn't try to help defend Franziska either, so Franziska finds herself resignedly heading out of the room towards the main hall where she'll hopefully be able to intercept Brandon before he can vanish off to wherever he goes in his free time.

She's successful, reaching the entrance hall just as the door swings open to admit the Gryffindors and Slytherins in from the greenhouses.

"Brandon!" She quickly walks over as soon as she spots her boyfriend. "Hey, can we talk?" She asks nervously. "In private?" She adds, glancing at Charlie who's pretending (badly) to not be listening.

Brandon immediately looks as nervous as she feels. "Does it... have to be in private?" He asks weakly, and Franziska realizes that maybe he's been avoiding her as much as she's been avoiding him. That maybe they both know where this is going, even if she doesn't want to admit it. Not yet.

She shrugs. "I guess it could wait." She mumbles, and Leona is going to be pissed-

"No it can not. You two go. Charlie, come help me with our Care of Magical Creatures essay." Fiona appears out of nowhere and begins hauling Charlie away as he protests that she has class and he can't help her right now.

Franziska is both glad of the interruption but also somewhat upset because now she actually has to figure out how to talk to Brandon about the weirdness that's been slowly growing between the two of them for most of the year.

They walk in silence for several minutes until Brandon finally gets uncomfortably enough to speak first.

"You wanted to talk to me, so what's up?" His tone is preemptively defensive and Franziska doesn't blame him.

She finally stops walking - they're in one of the many deserted hallways now, they won't likely be disturbed - and turns to face her boyfriend. "I did yeah. Um, I don't completely know where to start but I guess first off I'd like to know what you're doing with your secret potion."

Brandon balks. "That... that's still in the works, I can't tell you anything because there's nothing to tell." He says haltingly, and Franziska frowns.

"I'm your girlfriend Brandon." She says quietly. "Why are there things you can tell Charlie and Aidan but not me?"

"That's not fair!" He protests. "They're my best friends! It's totally different."

Franziska feels like it shouldn't be, but she bites her tongue. Saying something like that is too close to acknowledging that this might not work out.

Instead she says, "Well then what can you tell me? We've barely seen each other this year."

Brandon shifts. "Yeah, sorry about that. OWLs, you know ho it is..." He trails off, but she waits, not letting him change the subject until he answers her question. Finally he sighs.

"Look, we... we might be doing something that isn't completely, one hundred percent... legal?" He quickly keeps talking before Franziska can respond to that revelation. "It's nothing bad! But, you know, didn't want to get you mixed up with it if it went badly."

Franziska stares at him. "You're breaking the law?" She repeats, stunned. "Brandon you can't- I have to tell a teacher-"

"No! See this is why we didn't tell you!" He interrupts angrily. "You're way too much of a stickler for the rules! No one is getting hurt, and that's all you need to know."

"We're getting hurt." She replies quietly, though it takes Brandon a moment to process the words through his continued frustration.

He blinks. "What does that even mean?"

"Our relationship. When was the last time we properly hung out together? Not studying?" She presses. "I see more of Evie than I do of you. And I have more fun with her too." She adds, somewhat pettily. See if Brandon can keep acting so high and mighty now.

Brandon bristles. "Well then maybe you should be dating her instead." He grumbles, staring at the floor.

Franziska pauses, then, "Maybe I should. It certainly feels more natural than what we have." They both stand in silence for a long time before she finally speaks again. "Why did you ask me out?"

Brandon looks up, confused. "Because I liked you?"

"We'd never spoken before. Not really. Even over Christmas I spent more time with Nabila and Fitzwilliam." Franziska points out. "I barely had an opinion of you but you asked me out."

He shrugs uncertainly. "Okay, you were really pretty and like I said I could tell a lot of other people liked you too. I wanted to ask first."

Franziska processes this, and then remembers something her father had told her the summer before third year: "some people will be drawn to you...you'll know when someone loves you for you and not your Veela charms."

Something inside her goes cold. "Brandon, there's something I should tell you." She clears . "Look, um, I don't think you actually like me."

Her boyfriend immediately tries to protest but Franziska puts up a hand. "Listen. As friends, yeah, but I don't think you actually like me romantically. I'm a quarter Veela." She pauses to see if that will explain things enough so she doesn't have to, but Brandon still looks confused.

She sighs. "It means that sometimes people think they like me but they don't. It's a weird genetics thing-" She shakes her head. "Look, just ask Charlie okay? He's the creature expert. I don't even understand all this stuff myself. But... I think we worked better as friends." She rushes out the last part, staring at her feet and feeling close on the last word.

Brandon is silent for a long time.

"If I'm the one getting dumped, shouldn't you be less upset?" He finally says, and Franziska can hear that he's struggling to keep his voice steady.

She can only shrug, and a moment later he sighs.

"Okay. Friends. But I think we should maybe... not talk for a while."

She nods mutely, and a moment later hears him walking away. She can't bring herself to move until even the echoes of his footsteps have faded, at which point she finds the nearest wall and sinks down.

Brandon is right. She broke up with him. Yet here she is, sitting on the floor, shaking like she's the one who was just dumped.

There's an ugly feeling in her chest, and she closes her eyes in a vain attempt to pretend she's fine.

She knows logically that it was the right call. But right now, everything just feels like it's falling apart around her.

And on that cheerful note xD Anyway, this year is going to be slightly differently formatted, with the first half of winter break being next chapter instead of all of it being chapter five. This is due to the fact that we have both the career consultations and OWLs to get through after break and I want to make sure we give each ample time to be developed. ALSO I changed Trelawney's prediction of the storm to eight weeks instead of ten because that works better in the time frame ^^''

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2452 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!