Chapter Nineteen

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Aftermath

After the Ravenclaw House's grand Halloween prank, the prank war was officially, finally, called off as the teachers came down hard. And Franziska was glad for it, especially considering the very next day saw the start of the Quidditch season, with Gryffindor versus Slytherin.

She has agreed to watch the match with Brandon, whom she is starting to speak to again after he'd sent her multiple chocolates as apology for starting the prank war.

Of course her roommates about it as she gets ready the morning of.

"Ditching us for your boyfriend Frannie?" Leona giggles teasingly as she pulls on her own robes for the day. "I'm heartbroken."

Franziska rolls her eyes at her roommate. "Could you quit that? We've gone out once, we haven't labeled it anything yet."

Leona just giggles and Tonks and Kiera begin humming a wedding march. Franziska throws her pillows at them as she exits the dorms.

She spies Donaghan in the common room, but she decides to not bother him as she once would have. The blonde has been extremely quiet and generally mopey the past few days but he hasn't told anyone what the problem is. Franziska knows that both Cian and Henry know what happened to cause the shift in their friend's mood, but they aren't sharing either.

She quickly makes her exit from the Hufflepuff common room and out into the now safe corridors of the castle, though her guard is still a bit raised. She reckons it will be that way for a while yet - one doesn't just shake off the hyper-awareness you had to develop during the prank war after all.

She and Brandon had already arranged to meet in the Great Hall first to have some lunch before the match, then she was going to sit with the Gyrffindors in their section.

Admittedly she's a little worried about that, but she knows the Gryffindor captain's Ravenclaw boyfriend regularly sits with her House during Gryffindor matches so there aren't really any rules against it. It just feels weird to Franziska.

Brandon is standing just outside the Great Hall and he perks up when he sees her.

"Badger, hey!" He grins and hurries over. "I, um, I brought my scarf so you won't have to stand out so much with your Hufflepuff robes, if you wanted." He blushes and shifts on his feet awkwardly and Franziska feels her own cheeks warming as she accepts the offered article.

"Am I that obvious?" She asks with a small laugh as she secures the scarf around her neck before following Brandon to the Gryffindor table. She's thankful that they aren't sitting with their yearmates - that would probably have been an entirely new level of awkward if they had.

"So um, are you still mad at me? About the prank war?" Brandon asks uncertainly, poking at his food.

Franziska sighs. "I was never mad really, but I do think you need to apologize to Aidan properly. I mean, how would you feel if someone hurt Buddy?"

Buddy is Brandon's owl, who Franziska had gotten to meet earlier in the semester, and Franziska knows how much Brandon likes the young bird.

Brandon makes a face. "Okay, I guess I get that. Cerid is just a cat though." He grumbles under his breath.

Franziska lightly kicks him under the table. "If this is going to work out we'll need to work on your attitude towards fluffy balls of adorablness." She informs him with a small smile.

Brandon grins back. "Well, if it's for you I might be able to tolerate them."

Conversation is a bit easier this time than it had been during their Hogsmeade date, and Franziska is happy to find that her irritation with Brandon really is gone. She hadn't been entirely sure she could forgive him for being the instigator of the worst month of her Hogwarts career, but she enjoys talking to him too much to ever really stay mad.

Once breakfast is over they make their way to the Gryffindor stands. Brandon is happily rattling off statistics of the current teams, apparently garnered by sneakily watching their practices.

"I may not be flying for Gryffindor, but you can bet I'm still an invaluable member of the team." He says proudly, and Franziska laughs.

"I can see that. So what about Slytherin? You haven't said much about them yet." She prompts. "And they are Gryffindor's first opponent."

Brandon grimaces. "Okay, between us? I'm not so sure we'll be able to win. Between Evera and Jacob having no harmony and their new Seeker? Odds are not in our favor." He sighs. "I haven't told Charlie that."

Franziska pats his hand encouragingly, tugging his scarf higher around her neck as they enter the stands. "I hear Gryffindor does it's best when the odds are close." She encourages him. "I know it will be a great game."

They sit next to Holly, who Franziska is thrilled to talk to for a bit, having seen less of her friend since flying lessons ended after first year.

"Is your sister excited for her first game of her last year?" She asks curiously, and Holly shrugs.

"Mixed feelings I think. She says the team isn't as strong this year but it'll improve with the season, and with the years. I think she just doesn't want to lose to Mayra in their last year."

Franziska nods. "Makes sense. Why's the team weaker though? Did that many people graduate?"

Brandon pipes up then. "It's a combination. Bill Weasley and Archie Jamieson both dropped in favor of school and no offense to Charlie but the new Slytherin Seeker is supposedly a monster on the pitch. I haven't gotten to see him play myself, but he's in our year. Lenny or something?"

"Lenox McLeod, son of the manager for the Montrose Magpies. Laurel already saw him as a potential threat if he tried out to replace Blackthorn." Holly supplies. "I'm actually kind of excited to see him in action. Everyone says he's the only Seeker this year who might give Charlie a run for his money."

Brandon scoffs. "Yeah right, Charlie is the best Seeker Hogwarts has seen in years."

Franziska immediately feels defensive. "Hey, Lola managed to outdo him two years ago." She points out. "You Gryffindors need to stop thinking your the top of the world in sports."

Brandon backs down instantly, looks chastened. "Sorry Badger, Lola is definitely the second best. Just statistically Charlie overtook her last year is all."

Holly raises an eyebrow. "Wow you are whipped." She teases, and Brandon flicks the corner of her own scarf into her face, leaving her spluttering but still amused.

Franziska just laughs lightly as the players begin to enter the field, hoping her blush isn't too obvious. She waves to Charlie as he walks on and he winks at her cheerfully before mounting his broom.

Beside her, Holly sighs.

"Holly are you-" Franziska cuts herself off at the sappy smile on her friend's face. She glances over at Charlie again, and then grins. "Why Holly Kiddell, do you have a crush on Charlie?"

Holly giggles, her cheeks faintly pink as she sits straight again. "Is it that obvious? I'm gonna ask him to Hogsmeade on the next trip. You two had your first date there, right? What did you do? I want to make sure it's perfect."

"Maybe ask before you start ringing the wedding bells, he might say no." Brandon points out, scooting a bit closer to Franziska as he does. "Now  shush, the game is starting!"

On the pitch, the players have all taken to the air and are waiting for Coach Crowell to toss up the Quaffle. Franziska feels her stomach turn slightly, but she stubbornly pushes it down. No one has died during a school game in over a century and they aren't going to start now, regardless of what the little voice in the back of her head is shouting.

Then the Quaffle is up and the teams are off. Immediately Franziska understands her friends' concerns about their team's chance against Slytherin - the skill divide is evident from the first takeoff.

Evera rushes the Quaffle but Mayra Byrnes flicks it out of her reach with a quick spin and straight into the hands of one of the other Slytherin Chasers, who's off across the pitch in the next heartbeat.

Franziska doesn't realize she's holding her breath until Laurel Kiddell smashes a bludger into the pathway of the Chaser and one of the Gryffindors manages to snag the Quaffle away and heads back across the pitch.

"Go Laurel! Kick their !" Holly shrieks excitedly, and Franziska jumps in surprise.

Brandon looks over at his Housemate in annoyance. "Jeez Holly, what're you trying to do, make us go deaf?"

Holly sticks her tongue out at him. "I'm being a supportive sister, so bleh. Willow and Eric are even worse - you two are lucky they decided to sit in the Ravenclaw section today." She gestures to where an obnoxiously large Gryffindor banner is hanging over the Ravenclaw area of the stands. "Willow's logic is that Laurel will be bolstered if there's support from all angles." She grins at Brandon. "Maybe you two should have sat in the Hufflepuff section."

Brandon shakes his head. "Next time maybe."

Franziska nods idly, her eyes flitting back to the game. Now her stomach is battling both nervousness for the players and anticipation of the game. She remembers now why she loved it so much first year.

One of the Slytherin beaters flies dangerously close to the Gryffindor stands, and Franziska instinctively ducks to avoid being kicked.

"Hey watch it!" Brandon shakes a fist at the player, who glances back briefly but pays him no further mind.

Brandon snorts. "Rude. You okay Badger?"

Franziska smiles. "Oh I'm fine, all part of the game right?"

Brandon doesn't get to answer, as Evera takes that moment to make an attempt on the hoops, though the Slytherin Keeper is quick to snatch the ball out of the air and pass it off to Mayra, who'd been waiting patiently nearby. The Slytherin Captain immediately takes off, streaking across the field with both Beaters beside her, fending off any attacks Laurel or the other Beater Myr attempted to shoot their way.

"Come on Lions! You can do better than that!" Brandon shouts in frustration as one of the Beaters angles a bludger to get Kent away from the hoops and Mayra makes and easy score.

The male Gryffindor Chaser - Franziska thinks she remembers Brandon calling him Jacob? - snags the Quaffle as it falls behind the hoops and takes off across the field. He quickly passes off to the one Chaser who's name Franziska doesn't know, and she passes to Evera. The three play keep away from the Slytherin Chasers and this time successfully get the ball through the far right hoop.

She nudges Brandon playfully. "What did I tell you? Gryffindor does best under pressure."

The game remains incredibly close throughout, with each goal made quickly being matched so neither team remains in the lead for long. Above the chaos, Charlie and Lenox circle like birds of prey, both of them keeping their eyes sharp for any glint of gold.

However, it's neither of them that sees it first. In the Hufflepuff stands, Leona jumps up with a shriek. "Since when can the snitch enter the stands?"

At her exclamation both Seekers are off, shooting first towards the Hufflepuff stands, and then switching direction when they catch sight of the golden glint moving further down the pitch.

Franziska can barely see it herself, more relying on where the Seekers are to be able to notice the occasional glint of gold above the stands.

Charlie manages to swerve in, cutting Lenox off from the snitch, and the Gryffindor Seeker reaches out.

On the pitch, Mayra manages to dodge past a distracted Evera to make a shot on goal, though Kent manages to narrowly block the attempt. Another Slytherin Chaser nabs the falling Quaffle and scores neatly on the opposing hoop before Kent has a chance to even notice he's there.

The two Seekers meanwhile have continued their chase, with Charlie continuing to box Lenox away from the snitch. However, just as the red-headed Seeker reaches out to snag the snitch and the win, Lennox flies above Charlie and rolls over in mid air, so he's dangling upside down from his broom, his legs crossed over the top to stop gravity from dragging him several hundred feet to the ground below. WIth a deft move he grabs the snitch from right under Charlie's nose and then casually rights himself, grinning and waving the snitch towards the Slytherin reserves bench, where an Indian girl Franziska recognizes from her classes enthusiastically waves back.

Slytherin of course begins cheering loudly, while the rest of the students in attendance deflate. Franziska sees Laurel flying down to the pitch, closely followed by Mayra. The two Captains exchange a hand shake, but Franziska can tell even from the stands that it's a tense one.

Beside her, Holly stands up. "I should go make sure she's okay. And also make sure Eric doesn't smother her with attempted comfort, he's awful at it." She smiles faintly and then joins the crowd of departing fans.

Franziska and Brandon stay a little longer to let the crowd thin out before they get up. Franziska unconciously tugs at Brandon's scarf still wrapped around her neck to shield against the cold November air. "Well, hopefully Hufflepuff will win our game next time, so the end of the date won't be such a downer." She observes as they make their way back inside.

Brandon looks over at her with wide eyes. "You want to do this again?" He sounds almost pathetically hopeful and Franziska can't help but laugh and flick his own scarf at his face.

"I might be interested, yeah." She can feel herself blushing. "But first you have to make up with Aidan okay? And apologize to Cerid too, she's an absolute dear."

Brandon nods immediately. "Absolutely can do Badger. Sorry it upset you so much, I'll be sure to run pranks by you in the future."

Franziska allows herself a small smile as she takes off the scarf and offers it back, no longer needing it for camoflauge or warmth. "Expect me to shoot a lot of them down, you know I'm not a fan."

He grins and pushes the scarf back into her hands. "We'll work on that. And you keep this, it's only getting colder you know!" With that he runs off, and Franziska stares after him, confused.

"Where are you going?" She shouts, and he turns briefly to flash her that mischevieous grin.

"To apologize of course! My lady has demanded it after all!"

She laughs and watches him go, draping the scarf back over her shoulders. All in all, Brandon definitely isn't the worst person to spend a free day with.

Losing their first Quidditch match hadn't exactly been a confidence booster for the fledgling Gryffindor Team, and it shows in their subsequent practices.

Evera especially has been down about the situation, getting to practice early and staying late whenever she can. Kent usually stays with her but Myr is still concerned. Evera has always been rather carefree so seeing her so upset is disconcerting.

However, he has more pressing things to occupy his mind. Namely, the upcoming midterm exams. He's never been a particularly exceptional student, but this year has proven much harder to keep up with than previous ones thanks to the addition of Care of Magical Creatures and Muggle Studies. Writing essays isn't hard, but it eats into the time he usually spends working on casting spells for the rest of his classes, and he's worried that he may actually fail the practical portions of his Charms and Transfiguration exams.

When he mentions this to Holly during a study session, she raises an eyebrow pointedly. "Well if you had a proper wand I'd be more worried. I'm serious Myr, come by our shop this summer and get a wand from us would you? It'll help, I swear it will help."

This isn't the first time Holly has pointed out that his using a wand purchased by someone else is probably affecting his ability to use magic effectively. And he believes her, he does - she's an expert on wands after all, even working at her uncle's wand shop over the summers and intending to take it over whenever he retires.

Myr sighs. "I'll talk to my mom about it, but you know wands are expensive Holly. And you've seen my house - we aren't exactly rolling in extra funds right now." He points out.

Holly pouts. "Tell you what, you come in between noon and one and I can give you a discount. That's when Uncle Rowan takes his lunch so I'm in charge of the shop for an hour."

Charlie, who's studying with them, glances up at the offer. "Any chance that would be available for other classmates? My little brother Percy is starting at Hogwarts this year." He asks hopefully.

Holly grins over at him. Despite Charlie having rejected her request for a Hogsmeade date, it's clear she still has a bit of a crush on the red head. "Of course! Between noon and one and I can set him up with a Kiddell original." She promises.

Charle flashes her a return smile. "Awesome! Thanks Holly."

Myr nods as well. "Thanks Holly. I'll talk to my mom about it, we might be able to swing something."

Holly just beams.

Myr considers the offer alone later on in the day, when he's unsuccessfully attempting to Transfigure a beetle he'd found wandering aimlessly around the corridors. It's one of the easiest spells they've learned this year, but he just can't seem to master it despite his best efforts.

He wonders if it's really his wand that causes him to have such trouble with casting magic. He's looked up Squibs in the library, has figured out that Cadi must be one, that his Uncle had thought he was one as well. Until that letter he hadn't shown any sign of having magic. He wonders if maybe even the best wand in the world won't make up for his own lack of talent.

He pushes the thoughts away and focuses on the beetle in front of him, something he's become accustomed to doing. But as ever, the worry lingers at the back of his skull, whispering that he'll never really be a good wizard, no matter what he tries.

Quidditch helps, and he's glad that Laurel is continuing practices despite their not having another match until February. Being in the air on his broom is the one place he honestly feels like he completely belongs at Hogwarts.

He's glad that he decided to try out as a Beater though - Evera is absolutely miserable as a Chaser due to Jacob's intense arrogance and Cassidy's tendency to not really think through what she's doing, making it nearly impossible for Evera to stay open for a pass. Myr isn't sure he'd enjoy Quidditch as much if they were his partners.

As it is, he knows he's losing Laurel as his pair, so he's enjoying the time he has with her for all it's worth. She's a great partner on the field, and he appreciates her less direct approach to beating.

"Myr, cover the crow wouldya?" Laureal shouts to him, shaking him out of his thoughts and in an instant he's diving, scanning for the bludger she'd directed him towards. The two of them have their own way of refering to actions in order to prevent opposing players to know what they're doing until it's too late.

Myr's eyes lock onto the bludger finally, and he redirects his dive so he can send it towards Laurel, who uses it to bat the Quaffle away from Cassidy, who rewards the excellent maneoveur with an extremely rude hand gesture.

Myr grins and arcs back up, keeping an eye on the errant bludger in case he needs to direct it away from one of his teammates. He ends up hovering near Kent, who's looking remarkably bored as the Chasers have been doing an excellent job keeping the Quaffle away from him.

Kent greets him with a nod and a light grin before turning back to the game, and Myr is content to float quietly for a few minutes before Laurel calls another manouveur and he takes back off across the field.

He wouldn't say Quidditch is mindless, but it certainly feels easy when it's compared to the strain of studying for the upcoming exams. Once the brooms have been put away Myr is back in the library, editing his final Muggle Studies paper and doing his best to only use knowledge he's learned from Hogwarts and not from actually living as a Muggle. For all Professor Quirrel's apparent good intentions he's not exactly a master of Muggle culture.

"Hey, is that the Muggle Studies essay on electricity?" Kent asks curiously. The other boy, along with most of the Quidditch team now that Myr is looking around, has also made his way to the library, and he's cradling an armful of books. "I remember that one. I only managed an 'A' myself, I was never much good at non-practical classes." He grins. "Mind if I study next to you? Evera summarily kicked me out when Drake and Jemma showed up."

Myr smiles briefly and nods, shifting his parchments so Kent will have somewhere to put his books.

"So how's school treating you so far? I remember third year was super intense what with the new electives and the spells getting harder." Kent continues chatting as he settles in, and Myr sighs but looks up from his essay, which really is fine but he wanted to make sure it was perfect. However, if his teammate wants to talk he can make some time.

"It's fine. I've always had trouble with practical spells so that's not very fun." He responds, putting down his quill. "But my electives are great, and Quidditch of course, so I can't really complain."

Kent nods thoughtfully. "I get that, there's a couple kids in my year who struggle with application as well. It comes with practice - I could try and help out, if you like. Take some time before or after practice - I'm going into NEWTs sooner than I care to think about so I could use some refreshing anyway." He grins over at Myr, who smiles hopefully.

"That actually sounds amazing." He admits. "It wouldn't be too much trouble?"

Kent laughs. "Not at all. Hey, why don't we go find one of the empty classrooms and start now? I can go through all this tonight in the dorms." He waves at the pile of books in front of him, and Myr, after a moment to glance at his essay, decides it's well worth it.

The two end up on the fourth floor, which seems to be composed entirely of unused classrooms as far as Myr can tell, and Kent helps him work on his wrist movement for his Charms exam.

"You're doing it perfectly, I'm not sure why the effect is still so weak." Kent frowns as Myr attempts a Lumos Duo that fizzles into a small stream of light instead of the beam it's supposed to be.

Myr sighs. "I'm just not great at magic. My uncle thought I was a squib until I got my letter." He admits quietly.

Kent shakes his head with a frown. "That shouldn't matter though. Wands choose the wizard - if you have weak magic your wand should be making up for it. At least, that's what I understand from when Laurel's gone on a tangent a few times." He laughs at Myr's incredulous look. "Just because Holly is the one inheriting the family business doesn't mean her sisters aren't equally nerdy about that stuff."

Myr glances at his wand. "This was actually from my uncle, I didn't get it myself. Do you really think it would help to get a new one?"

Kent nods immediately. "I'd think so. Though I know wands are pretty expensive." He adds with a frown. "Your uncle might not be thrilled he spent money on something that's going to be thrown away."

Myr shrugs. "I mean, if it's going to get me better grades I think my mom will deem it important enough to find the funds. And Holly offered me a discount so I guess I'll take her up on that."

Kent nods. "Well there you go! For now perfecting technique is the best you can do really, but teachers will take note of that so your grades shouldn't be too heavily affected by the wand thing."

The two continue practicing for nearly an hour before Kent calls it a day and heads out to find some of his friends, while Myr remains in the classroom but turns back to editing his essay. He really does want to do well on it.

With the prank war over and Quidditch relegated to only practices, Myr's life comes to revolve entirely around writing essays and attempting to perfect his wand technique and pronounciation in hopes his midterm grades will remain average despite the harder material.

The one bit of relief comes in the form of the Hufflepuff-Ravenclaw match in the third week of November, just before exams begin. Myr attends with the rest of the Gryffindor team, with instructions from Laurel to watch the strategies of the other two teams. Myr is quietly glad that Brandon is on another date with his Hufflepuff friend since he'd have otherwise been sitting alone, being the one Gryffindor third year not on the team (Holly isn't either, but she's sitting with her sister).

Myr mostly just watches the game, though he takes note of a few interesting plays by the Ravenclaw beaters.

He recognizes one of the new Ravenclaw chasers as being from his class, but the boy isn't playing very well, rarely passing the Quaffle and thus rarely being given it in turn. When he does have it Myr sees why he's on the team though - he's really quite skilled on a broom.

He spots Laurel eyeing the new player as well, a thoughtful look on her face that tells Myr she's scheming.

Unsurprisingly Hufflepuff takes home the win. Between Lola looking to reclaim her title of 'best Seeker' and the lacking teamwork, Ravenclaw never really stood a chance.

It was still a fun distraction, if only an hour long, and Myr is sorry when he has to head back to the library to study up on Bowtruckles.

His first exam thankfully is for Muggle Studies, which is all written and also his best class so far. Professor Quirrell is always happy to derail the class to listen to Myr describing more accurate portryals of Muggle life. For his part Myr is almost impressed at how incredibly wrong wizards can get Muggle culture at times.

The essay is on Halloween, one of the many tangents they'd had during class time, and Myr decides to divide his essay between Wizarding beliefs and actual Muggle traditions. He's hoping Professor Quirrell doesn't expect exam answers to perfectly follow the textbooks, especially considering the readings are very rarely discussed in class.

The next exam is a lot more stressful unfortuantely. Myr walks into the Charms midterm feeling like there are doxies chewing through his stomach lining.

Holly is equally miserable, apparently going through another set of mood swings this week. She does invite him just before the exam to study for Herbology with her and her fourth year friend Emery Grant, but he declines politely, not really wanting to be around her when she's being unpredictable.

He instead retires to the empty sixth floor classroom he'd found with Kent earlier, which he's found to be a better, quieter study area than the library, and practices his Transfigurations for the exam at the end of the week. The rest of his exams don't require much in the way of practical magic, thankfully.

Professor Addington in Defense Against the Dark Arts has opted for a written test, with a series of questions on the locations and best defenses against the dark beasts they've been studying so far during the year. Myr knows the final exam will include properly banishing a boggart, but for the time being he's happy to just write about their weakness to laughter and what his ridikuloused boggart would look like (Owen, tripping over his own paws while trying to catch his tail - he thinks that could get even the most stone-hearted person to crack a smile).

Herbology is next, and he's quite happy to be paired up with Holly for the assignment - she's easily the Gryffindor in their year who's best at the subject which makes him optimistic about his grade, especially considering he probably didn't study as much as he should have.

Holly is only too willing to take charge of the situation, and Myr obediently follows her every instruction, resulting in their final product being near perfect, and also done before most of the other Gryffindors or Slytherins.

He spends the rest of the day going over his Care of Magical Creatures notes as well as his History as he has both exams the next day and while he's certain he remembers everything it would be rather embarrassing to not finish on time or miss an obvious date.

Both exams thankfully go well, as does Potions the next morning (he's certain he got an A, which is really all the Gryffindors can hope for in Snape's class).

Finally he enters the Transfiguration classroom for their final exam before winter break, and he can practically feel the butterflies in his stomach attempting to chew their way through his intestines.

He knows his technique is great, and his pronounciation has been praised by his Head of House more than once, but he also knows his actual spellwork is weak at best. At this point though, he just wants to get things over with so he can go home and forget about magic for a while.

It's always a bit of a transition for Ana to shift from school back into her home life during Christmas break.

Her mother always hovers and asks more questions than Ana particularly cares to answer, and the tea circle, as interesting as it can be, takes getting used to after months of minimal social interaction.

The worst part, though, is the fact that this year they're going to be having Christmas at the MacMillan manor. And that means spending all of December twenty fifth with Alasdair's obnoxious older brother Alec, who Ana can barely handle on an hourly basis, nonetheless for an entire day.

She does have about a week to prepare though, and she does so by immersing herself in her break homework and discussing Marcus Flint's scholastic progress with his mother whenever she's down for the tea circle. She's hoping she'll be able to develop a script about school that she can follow instead of having to actually expend energy thinking up reponses to Alec's likely inane attempts at conversation.

She's admittedly also a bit worried about talking with Alasdair. Though she still considers him her closest friend amongst her same aged peers, they don't really speak during school anymore. Alasdair has been spending more time with his blond roommate - the one with the unfortunate name that Ana can't quite ever remember - and Ana has her seventh year friends as well as her new aquaintanceship with Aidan to keep her plenty occupied as well.

But before they can have Christmas, Winona insists on taking her daughter shopping for presents. For her part Ana is not particularly happy with that state of affairs, but a look from her father has her acquiescing to her mother's request nonetheless.

Which is how she finds herself in Diagon Alley with a list of names and a pocket full of Galleons. Her mother had given some vague excuse as to why she absolutely had to go to the back alone so Ana could go shop for her friends for an hour. Ana of course knows that her mother is simply getting her a present but she doesn't fight about it.

At the top of the list is Eric, with Laurel's name in parentheses beside his. Ana isn't sure if she should get anything for the Gryffindor Quidditch captain as she doesn't really know her, but Laurel and Eric are practically a package deal these days - even during the prank war she couldn't go a single meal without hearing something about Eric's girlfriend.

Ultimately, after remembering that she still has the bracelet Eric had gotten her for her thirteenth birthday clasped around her wrist, she decides to get something for them both. She owes Eric - the bracelet really has helped with her Leglimency lessons. So she crosses out the parentheses around Laurel's name and sets about her gift hunting.

After an hour she's only about halfway down what she's come to realize is a much longer list than she'd expected to have. Sighing and deciding she'll just have to do the rest with her mother, she returns to their agreed on meeting place and waits.

Winona is a few minutes late, and laden down with shopping bags. "Did you find everything you need sweetie?" She asks with a smile.

Ana shakes her head. "I'm still looking for Aidan, Josie, and Horace, and I suppose I ought to get something for Alec since we are going to be seeing them in a few days. Perhaps something for Marcus as well, I hear he passed his midterm examinations and that ought to be rewarded."

Winona beams. "Oh it's so nice to hear you have so many friends! Come, I'll help out. Between the two of us we'll find the perfect gifts in no time!"

Ana wouldn't call an additional hour and a half 'no time', but her mother does help quite a bit with Alec and Marcus's presents. Ana would have had no idea what to get for them.

Finally they return home, and Ana heads up to her room with spellotape and a roll of wrapping paper to wrap her gifts. She knows her mother will take the opportunity to wrap Ana's gift, and Ana needs the privacy to wrap the small present she'd gotten for her parents as well. She has an income now so she figures it's time she start purchasing her parents gifts for Christmas.

It takes almost an hour to wrap everything, and she take the gifts that need to be mailed downstairs to her father.

"Could you get them to the owl post by this evening? I'd like for them to arrive by Christmas day." She requests once Alexander has a moment to talk with her.

Her father smiles. "Of course, just leave them by my bag so I remember to bring them. They're already addressed?"

Ana nods. "Of course, I wouldn't forget. Thank you father."

Alexander smiles distractedly at her and she excuses herself from the room, placing her presents next to his work bag as requested."

"Ana dear, help me with dinner?" Her mother requests hopefully, and Ana can't quite bring herself to turn her mother down.

"Alright. What are we making?"

Ana spends the next hour and a half fending off her mother's questions about her friends, particularly her male ones. She's rather certain now that her mother and Mareum Macmillan are already planning her and Alasdair's wedding, and really it's disturbing. She has no romantic inclinations towards her first friend, and based on his action in the past year she's rather confident he's of a similar mindset. If only her mother could recognize that as well.

But Ana doesn't say anything about it as her mother tries to coax information about what Alasdair has been doing during the school year, answering honestly that she's not sure as she's been busy with her own studies. And considering her new friend Aidan is second in their class, she's naturally been studying with him more than Alasdair (she hasn't been studying at all with Alasdair but she omits that particular tidbit).

Her mother accepts the excuse, though it's clear she's not particularly pleased by Ana's new friend being a Muggleborn, but she doesn't comment on it explicitly.

Thankfully Ana's father eventually comes back from his meetings and sits at the kitchen table, alternately speaking with his wife and daughter and working on something for work and successfully distracting his wife from trying to pry more into Ana's personal life.

Once dinner is finished, Ana heads up to her room to feed Dracula and finish the few pages of the assigned readings she hasn't completed yet. She's surprised to find a package sitting on her bed when she arrives.

Happy early Christmas! The note reads in perfect cursive. You don't have to get me anything, but I was thinking about our debate a couple weeks back and thought you'd enjoy this. - Aidan

Ana raises an eyebrow and decides to go ahead and open the gift despite it still being a day early. She's glad now that she had in fact gotten Aidan a book on the history of wizarding politics as for all the note's saying the gift doesn't need to be reciprocated, she wouldn't like feeling like she owed Aidan anything.

Inside is a thick book entitled The Brothers' Grimm Anthology.

Ana frowns and thumbs through a few pages, skimming the short stories inside. A book of fairy tales then. They had discussed some weeks ago the subtle magical influence on Muggle myths and legends, so it's a logical gift.

After a moment's contemplation Ana decides to read the first few stories before dinner. It would after all be rude to return to school and not have read at least some of it.

She ends up absolutely enraptured. The stories are dark in ways she didn't think Muggle fairy tales could be, and she sees several parallels to known historical figures in the magical world. She very nearly is late for dinner as she attempts to finish the tale of Iron Hans before heading downstairs.

"Studying going well dear?" Her father asks with a smile as she sits at the table a few minutes later.

Ana smiles politely. "It is. I'm going through some Muggle Studies material at the moment." It's not a lie, exactly, but she does have a brief moment of reflection on whether even this partial truth is a good idea. Her worries are settled when her father smiles and nods.

"They didn't even offer that class at Durmstrang you know. Hogwarts has always been rather forward thinking when it comes to social issues like Muggles."

Winona sniffs. "It's not a particularly useful class though, unless you choose to work with Muggles."

"Most people have to interact with Muggles at some point mother." Ana points out, cutting into her pork. "They do make up a majority of the world's population, and there are an increasing number of Muggleborn witches and wizards every year due to the larger global population."

Winona frowns faintly but concedes. "I suppose it's not all useless. Still, I'm glad you're taking classes on practical magic and simply reading the textbooks for the rest of the classes."

Ana doesn't bother with a response to that, chewing thoughtfully at her food as her mind travels back up the stairs to where the Grimm anthology is lying on her covers, kept company by Dracula who hadn't wanted to go back into his terrarium when Ana came down for dinner.

Alexander decides to change the subject. "So are you looking forward to seeing the Macmillans tomorrow? It will be interesting to celebrate with people outside the family."

Winona is only too happy to launch into a discussion about all that she and Mareum have prepared for the combined Christmas, and Ana offers her father a small, thankful smile that he returns.

The next day is Christmas Eve, and the Vulchanovas arrive at the Macmillan manor at exactly five in the afternoon. They're greeted by a cheery Mareum, who shows them the rooms they'll be staying in for the night.

Ana is just putting her change of clothes in the wardrobe when someone knocks at her door. Assuming it's Alasdair she waves them in, glancing towards her bed to make sure her Grimm anthology is still hidden under the pillow. She'd brought it along just in case she gets bored, but she's not sure how her family - or the Macmillans for that matter - will react to her reading a Muggle storybook.

When she turns around, content that her dress is safe from wrinkling, she's annoyed to find that her visitor is actually Alasdair's older brother.

Alec offers a -eating grin in response to her grimace. "Happy Christmas Anastasiya." He greets, rolling the second half of her name in a grating manner. "Good to see you too."

"What do you want Alec?" She sighs, reigning in her temper. Alec isn't worth losing her cool over.

"I can't just want to say hello to my future sister-in-law?" He asks, feigning hurt. "And here I thought we were friends."

"Perhaps in the deluded landscape of your mind we may qualify as friends, but I have higher standards." She replies primly. "And I am not your future sister-in-law." She adds, rather irritated by the thought.

Alec looks genuinely surprised at that. "Really? Well that's news to me. Mom goes on like it's a done deal, and it's not like it's unheard of for kids your age to get into arrangements like that. I never much liked that myself though. Guess mom will have to deal."

Ana is momentarily caught off guard by Alec's seemingly honest and non-obnoxious response. "Oh, well, yes. I agree. If I'm going to be married, which I'm not convinced I will, I'd rather it be with someone I've known longer than a few years, and have more in common with."

Alec shrugs. "Well, I'll leave telling our mothers that to you. I'm not dealing with that fallout."

And there he is. Ana rolls her eyes. "Lovely speaking with you as always Alec. You may leave my room."

He laughs but surprisingly complies, waving at her mockingly in the doorway before bounding off to find someone else to bother.

Ana sighs, closes her door, and grabs her Grimm anthology. She needs to unwind before facing the rest of the Macmillan clan.

An hour later she emerges from her room, wearing the black and red dress her mother had insisted she bring, and makes her way down to the foyer, where she can hear her father and Alec chatting.

Alasdair is sitting next to his brother, looking rather bored, and he glances up when Ana enters. She smiles at him in greeting and he returns the expression, though somewhat more subdued.

"Ana! There you are!" Her father greets with a bright grin. "Alec here was just telling me about Peru. He's being sent there for work next week, isn't that exciting?"

It actually is quite an intriguing topic, but Ana won't give Alec the satisfaction of seeing her interested. "I suppose. What is there in Peru that needs his expertise though?" It's not a subtle jab, but instead of looking annoyed Alec laughs.

"Well someone woke up grumpy. But I'm only going to be a junior member of a full team, so I imagine I'll be stuck doing the simplest tasks for most of this posting. I'm still looking forward to travelling. England can get rather dull."

Ana settles in a seat next to Alasdair and quietly listens as Alec explains about the Incan burial site they'll be working at. It's apparently a rather common first outing for rookie Curse-Breakers, as it contains quite a bit of old magic that very few people practice anymore and thus is both a continuously ongoing project and exposes new recruits to quite a variety of different curses.

At the very least it is interesting, so Ana remains in the room until dinner, at which point everyone moves collectively to the dining area.

Dinner is decidedly less interesting than ancient Incan curses, and Ana once again finds her mind wandering up the stairs to where the next Grimm tale - The Blue Light if she remembers correctly - is waiting for her. Eventually she and Alasdair are allowed to return to their rooms, and though she isn't against going with Alasdair to his room to talk he heads up without a word, so she goes to her own accomadations for the night.

As she settles in to read her new book - she'd been correct about the next title - she hopes dearly that this will be the last year then spend Christmas wit the Macmillans. Though she gets the feeling that she won't be so lucky.

Even with them now formally engaged, Queenie and Eugene are still incredibly fun to spend Christmas with.

The Misras arrive at the Shacklebolt home early on December twenty fifth, and Queenie immediately drags Rajani away from her parents and a still brooding Sahana and up to Queenie's room.

"Girl. What is going on with you and Ed? Were you planning on telling me about this?" Her friend demands excitedly as soon as the door closes.

Rajani blinks in confusion, both from the question and from the rapid change of scene she'd been subjected too.

"What are you talking about? Ed and I are friends, but you knew that?" She answers uncertainly once she's properly processed the inquiry.

Queenie raises an eyebrow. "Uh-huh, and that's why he sent you a Christmas gift?"

Rajani blinks. "He did what? I mean, yeah, that's what friends do, but he sent it here?"

Queenie pouts. "I guess he overheard us telling the others to send your and Eugene's gifts my way since we're spending the holiday together. So there's no flirting there or anything?" She sounds distinctly dissapointed, and Rajani grins.

"Sorry Queen, just friends. And anyway, he's fifteen, almost sixteen! That's too old for my tastes."

That gets Queenie to laugh. "You're fourteen you brat, two years is nothing. You should tell Lenox that though, he thinks you two are interested in each other."

It's Rajani's turn to frown. "Why would he think that? And why would it matter anyway? Lenox is my friend too."

Queenie sighs and shakes her head. "Raj, love, you may be able to twist adults around your little finger but you are absolutely hopeless with people your own age aren't you?"

"Hey!" Rajani's protest is a token effort though. She knows full well that Queenie really isn't too far off, and if she's completely honest with herself she's not sure she'd have any friends if it wasn't for how inclusive and familiar the whole of Slytherin house is. "I haven't really had friends my own age until now." She still finishes her defense, and Queenie pats her hand consolingly.

"I'm pretty sure I'd be similar if my brother wasn't the greatest." She admits with a grin. "He was the only kid I hung out with growing up - well, and the Malfoy brat but he's just awful. Did you ever meet him?"

Rajani spends the next hour happily listening to Queenie's stories about the fancy dinner parties she remembers from childhood, and the colorful characters as well.

"Oh, and Eugene's great-uncle! You should see how he gets when he's been drinking, it's really rather pathetic." Queenie giggles.

Rajani perks up at this tidbit. "Eugene's uncle? Did you two know each other before Hogwarts then?" She hadn't thought the two were previously aquainted, but considering how quickly they'd gotten engaged she wouldn't exactly be surprised if she was wrong.

Queenie makes a face. "I mean, kind of? Not really though, I didn't go to all that many dinners since I was rather loud as a child and that's simply not proper pureblood etiquette, and Eugene says he didn't go to many either. I do think our parents met a few times but his mom was generally more focused on raising him than attending society functions. Her uncle is the one who dragged her out on occasion." She shrugs. "I think we might have seen each other across the table once when we were seven or eight."

Rajani laughs and shakes her head. "Why my parents are so determined to get into that sort of lifestlye I'll never know. I think even Sahana is happy just having her few friends and leaving it at that."

Queenie looks over curiously. "Speaking of your shining light of a sister, how's she doing? Graduation is in a few months - does she have a game plan for after graduating?"

Rajani shrugs. "I think so. At the very least she has a place to stay - her and Mayra are getting an appartment in the city and splitting rent. Mayra I know got an offer from the Ballycastle Bats and the city is closer to their field than her parents' place. Sahana I'm not sure."

Queenie raises an eyebrow in amusement. "How is it you know more about Mayra's job than your own sister's?" She teases, and Rajani rolls her eyes.

"Mayra is my friend as well you know. Sahana and I talk about her since we have her in common, that's all. Plus the whole Quidditch Team knows about the Ballycastle offer."

Queenie concedes. "Fine, makes sense. Still, Sahana's going to be living with a woman? Can't imagine your parents are happy about that."

Rajani shrugs. "I mean, they've been good friends for years, and it makes sense to get a roommate right out of school. Not many entry-level jobs pay enough to afford city rent." Rajani herself is thinking about rooming with one of her own friends once they graduate, though it's a distant thought since they have quite a bit of schooling left to get through.

Queenie gives a small, knowing laugh. "Good friends, right." Before Rajani can question the statement, the doorbell rings, and Queenie's face lights up.

"Eugene is here! Come on Raj, you brought your broom right? Eugene wants to see if our basement is large enough to race in."

Rajani has little choice but to follow her excited friend down the stairs to greet the Slughorns. Eugene's mother is bustled off by the adults and Eugene joins the girls as they head down to the lowest level of the Shacklebolts' home.

"Merry Christmas." He greets Queenie with a quick kiss on the cheek, and then grins over at Rajani. "Did Queenie extend my race invitation."

Rajani grins back. "Received and accepted. You're going down."

Eugene doesn't go down quite as completely as Rajani had hoped. They race a total of five times, and while Rajani does win three out of the five Eugene manages to take two victories of his own, and all five races are quite close.

"Well, that was fun." Queenie says with mild amusement, her hair utterly windswept from sitting at the center of the chaos. "Maybe you won't be so cocky next time Raj." She teases as the three head back up to straighten up before they join the adults to open presents.

"I'll win next time." Rajani replies briskly, earning laughs from her friends. "Now then, presents?"

As they'd asked, all their friends had sent presents for the three of them to the Shacklebolt residence, so there's a substantial pile underneath the grand tree the Shacklebolts have put up. Rajani even spots a few with her sister's name on them, and figures Sahana had informed her friends as well of their location for the holiday.

Gift opening is less enthusiastic than it is when they do it in the Slytherin dorms, but Rajani is quite pleased with what her friends have sent, and she hugs both Queenie and Eugene in thanks when she opens their combined gift to find an assortment of Indian spices that remind her of her childhood home in Delhi. Her mother is also pleased with the gift, noting that they'll have to host a dinner so she can share some of her favorite Indian recipies.

The one part of the afternoon that stands out to Rajani as odd is the fact that Sahana doesn't receive a gift from Mayra. She doesn't comment, but she thinks her parents notice the discrepancy as well, as they both give their eldest daughter concerned looks.

When they return home that night, Rajani decides to ask about it. After all, if her sister and Mayra are fighting, that could affect Sahana's living plans after school, and Rajani knows a good sister would worry about something like that.

And she's a good sister.

"Sahana? Can I come in?"

Her sister looks surprised to see her, but she waves Rajani into her room. "Sure. What's going on?" She sounds rather like she doesn't want her little sister there, but Sahana is a good sister as well. "Everything alright?"

Rajani nods. "Oh I'm good. I was wondering why Mayra didn't give you a gift this year."

Sahana looks surprised, and then laughs, a real laugh that Rajani hasn't heard in some time. "That's sweet. Mayra and I have always exchanged gifts in person since we were eleven. We didn't see a reason to change that this year, especially since it's our last one. It's a tradition, you know? Plus, I don't think our parents would appreciate some of the stuff she gets me."

Rajani nods slowly, not totally sure why this situation is so funny to her sister, but glad that her interpretation was incorrect. "Well, that's good then. I'll leave you to rest then."

"Alright Raj. Goodnight." Sahana is still smiling, and it's honestly a little weird. So Rajani departs the room as quickly as she can without being obvious about it.

She spends the remainder of the winter break finishing the homework she'd failed to start before Christmas to the best of her abilities, though she's starting to admit that taking three electives may have been a bit too ambitious considering she's an average student at best. Ancient Runes in particular is proving rather overwhelming and she's sent more than one frantic owl to Queenie begging for help.

She almost wishes Sahana wasn't staying with Mayra for the end of break since she knows her sister did pretty well in Ancient Runes when she was taking it. She'd even gotten an A on her OWL but she'd decided to focus on Arithmancy for her NEWTS and dropped Ancient Runes after fifth year.

Rajani is starting to think she may be forced to drop it even before fifth year, though she knows her parents will be furious if that ends up being the case. Misras aren't supposed to fail classes, and they especially don't drop out.

She admits this in one of her owls to Queenie, and the response is exactly what she needs.

Sweetie, I totally get that. My parents would flip if Kingsley or I ever did poorly in school work. Tell you what, let's get to the train early and we'll work on the assignment together. Honestly I had to ask Kingsley for help on it, it's covering stuff we've only kind of touched on so far. Don't let this get you down, you've got all of Slytherin House behind you! And your sister is still here this year - she'll definitely help out for all you say you don't like each other. Just focus on the rest of your stuff and we'll work on this together, okay?

Love, Queenie

Rajani immediately writes back her heartfelt thanks, and once she's sent Lakshmi out the window she heads downstairs to ask her parents if they can go to Kings Cross early in January.

Her father frowns. "Why would you want that? Sitting in a train car for any longer than necessary?"

Rajani clears nervously. "Actually, it's for Queenie. She wants to go over our school work, and she mentioned something about Eugene?" Hopefully Queenie won't mind being used as her excuse.

Rajani's mother Vandana looks up from where she's cleaning dishes. "Samaan, I think she should go. Girls bond over discussing relationships, I think it will be good for Rajani."

Her father frowns, but ultimately nods. "Very well, I'll arrange transport. I assume your own school work is complete?"

Rajani nods immediately, the lie sour on the back of her tongue. "Of course father." She assures him, and he nods, already turning back to the paper he'd been reading.

She slinks back up to her room, feeling guilt clawing at the back of her head. She's lied to adults before of course - it's almost second nature really - but it's the first time she's dared to be anything less than completely honest with her own parents. She doubts Sahana has ever lied to them, and the thought makes her feel that much worse.

She doesn't get anything else accomplished in the way of school work that night, so she pulls out her long-neglected Hindi books and begins making her way slowly through one of them. Eventually it's dark enough outside that she feels that going to bed is a viable option.

The rest of break is spent with Rajani doing her best not to let her lie show on her face or in her posture. She swears her guilt is radiating off her in waves, but neither of her parents seem to notice anything different. Thankfully.

Finally it's time to return, and Rajani is extra glad that she's leaving the house earlier than she normally would. She is, as expected, one of the the first people there, and she grabs the largest compartment she can find, knowing most of her friend will want to ride with her and Queenie when they arrive.

Queenie comes shortly after, and the two hug quickly before Rajani pulls out her Ancient Runes homework.

"I lied to my parents." She blurts before they can start.

Queenie raises an eyebrow. "Wow." Rajani starts to flinch when her friend finishes her thought. "You only just lied to them now? After fourteen years? Girl you're a master of making adults trust you, why'd it take you this long?"

Rajani blinks, stunned. "I... I don't lie to my parents Queenie! They're... they're my parents!"

Queenie raises an eyebrow. "Alright, but you should know that everyone lies to their parents sometimes. It's totally normal, part of growing up. So Ancient Runes?"

Rajani still doesn't feel very good about the deception, but she agrees regardless and the two settle in to do the assignemnt.

Queenie does a good job explaining the new concepts, and slowly Rajani relaxes, some of the nervous tension she'd been building over the week dissapating.

Then Queeni glances up, and starts grinning. "Hey, I know what will make you feel better. Wait here a second." And without another word she's darted out of the compartment, leaving Rajani confused but mostly content to continue working on the problems in front of her.

Then Queenie returns with Sahana and Mayra in tow, and Rajani doesn't feel particularly good anymore.

"I hear you lied to mother and father." Sahana notes, and Rajani preemptively flinches away, before realizing her sister sounds more amused than accusatory.

ANd then Mayra bursts out laughing. "I think she's the same age you were when you lied to them. Yeah, fourteen, though I guess we were fourth years at that point." She grins, and Sahan swats her arm lightly.

Rajani stares at Mayra, and she thinks maybe is open but she can't actually care right at that moment.

"You've... lied to our parents?" She asks uncertainly. After a moment Sahana nods.

"About a lot more than school work little sister. Don't let it stress you out too much, okay? And don't you dare tell them I've lied to them."

Rajani nods mutely and her sister and Mayra leave for a different compartment.

Queenie grins. "There. Feeling better?"

Rajani nods, but that's a lie too. She just sort of feels hollow.

Hopefully it's a good thing.

So sorry that this is a week late guys OTL I'll definitely make it up at some point in the future so we'll be back on schedule ^^'' For now, I hope you enjoy the chapter! I'm content with the final product myself, a lot of little plot bunnies have been planted here!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2452 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!