Chapter Fourty-Four

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Unsteady

Working with Myrddin isn't as exhausting, frustrating, or generally awful as Rajani had expected.

His schedule is generally easy to work around and Rajani has roped Eugene into being her permanent alibi with her parents whenever she's with the Head Boy. He'd told her she owes him now but she knows he's not really going to hold it over her head - he knows she'd do the same for him without questions, even though his mother is far more reasonable than her parents.

They meet at least once a week, and once she joins him for lunch on a Saturday but they get nothing done and she's forced to sit and listen to Holly Kiddell rambling for nearly an hour which is possibly the least pleasant experience of her life so far.

Myr at least isn't a typical Gryffindor, so conversing with him isn't so bad. They're both still tense around each other, but Rajani is becoming more certain that he'll be a professional during the year, which is all she needs. Not that that stops her from complaining about him to Eugene the day before another of their meetings.

"I do still wish you were my partner in all this, he's utterly clueless about a lot of things - I get the feeling I'll be making a lot of decisions this year." Rajani sighs to Eugene the first week of August. The two still meet every other Friday - the days Myr has work - for study sessions though they've long completed all their summer assignments and now just hang out for the day.

As Queenie had suggested they've invited Clary as well, and though she declined at first she caved on Eugene's insistence. Things had been incredibly awkward for the first few hours of the first day she'd come, but Rajani had quickly grown tired of that state of affairs and said as much in a rather long rant against boys in general.

Rajani can tell that Clary is still a bit upset, but after her speech most of it that hurt and rage is now directed towards Lenox and the situation in general rather than Rajani, and that Rajani can work with.

She's sitting next to Eugene on this particular day, slouched over the table and looking distinctly sleepy while Eugene and Rajani banter, likely only half-listening at best.

"Please, you'd make all the decisions regardless of who the Head Boy was - I might get a few words in only when Queenie came to my defense." Eugene teases. "You're a bit of a control freak sometimes Raj."

"Hey! I'm just getting things done." She protests, but there's no heat in it. For every time Eugene has called her a control freak she's called him spoiled, so they're even. "Clary back me up here." She kicks her friend lightly in the shin and the other girl startles.

"What? Yes, that. What she said." She declares, falsely confident despite her obviously having no idea what she's agreeing to.

"There, Clary's on my side." Rajani says, grinning. "Two against one, you lose Rich Boy."

Eugene whines, but he's laughing as well. "No fair, Clary doesn't count!"

"Excuse me?" Clary is paying attention now, and though she's clearly trying to engage with the teasing atmosphere there's a sharp hurt at the edge of her voice. "What's that supposed to mean?"

Eugene puts up his hands in the universal sign for surrender. "I mean you agreed without even knowing what was going on! That doesn't count as an informed vote!"

Clary relaxes at that and the afternoon continues with unimpeded cheer until Eugene's mother comes in clutching a letter and looking faint.

"Um, dear, you... you have a correspondence from Peru." She says, her voice a bit off. Rajani looks over and frowns.

"Is everything alright?" She asks. "Queenie didn't do something stupid did she?" She can't think of who else in Peru could be contacting Eugene, though it's odd his mother seems to have already read the letter if that's the case. Adela Slughorn never struck her as the nosy sort of parent.

Adela merely holds out the letter wordlessly and something in Rajani's guts twist. That's not a good response. That is probably the worst possible response the woman could have given and Rajani hopes desperately that the places her mind is going are overreactions.

Eugene seems as frozen as she is, so Clary reaches out to take the letter, though she looks as tense as Rajani feels.

"It's from Queenie's parents." She says after a moment, voice subdued and shaking slightly. "She got dragon pox while she was out hiking."

Eugene in a sharp breath. "But... she's okay? Younger people can sometimes pull through, it's only over twenty five or something that it becomes deadly right?"

"Over twelve." Rajani says, voice flat as she relays the knowledge she's always had but never quite known why. "But there have been cases up to twenty that get through alright."

"Queenie wasn't one." Clary breathes, voice shaking but clear. And then she cracks and starts sobbing, dropping the letter and inching away from it like distance will somehow make it's contents less painful. "It took five days to get to a good hospital - you can't Apparate sick people. They said she might have been exposed earlier and that weakened her immune system." Despite her shaking and the tears Clary's voice is almost terrifyingly steady.

Rajani honestly isn't sure what happens after that. She knows something happened because she wakes up the next day in one of the Slughorn's spare rooms, dressed in a clearly borrowed nightgown with her own clean dress folded on a chair beside the desk.

It takes a moment to orient herself, to worry what her parents are going to think, to wonder how she'd stayed over without remembering agreeing to do so.

And then she remembers the letter.

Rajani would be proud to say she doesn't cry over very much. Crying is a weakness and a waste of time and frankly shows a complete lack of control over her own emotions. But that morning, sitting in an unfamiliar bed as early morning sunlight attempts to penetrate the curtains, Rajani cries.

She isn't sure how long she sits there, using the pillows and comforter to muffle herself until her breathing evens out and her eyes refuse to produce any more moisture. Once she's calmed she gets up, takes the clothes laid out, and steps into the room's attached restroom to clean her face and prepare to face the day.

The night before is coming back to her in fits and starts. Clary had been a complete mess, Eugene had gone catatonic. Rajani remembers getting both of them into rooms for the night before Ms. Slughorn had insisted she stay as well, saying she'd already contacted Rajani and Clary's parents to let them know the two girls were staying over and gotten permission.

Overall, from what she can remember Rajani thinks she held together quite admirably. And if the world wasn't falling out from underneath her she'd be quite proud of herself - perhaps she will be, in time. For the moment she robotically moves through her morning routine before heading to the dining area for breakfast.

Clary is already there, spearing listlessly at the eggs and toast on her plate. Eugene is nowhere to be seen though Rajani doubts she'll be seeing him at all before she leaves for home. He'd been in a bad way the night before, so far as she can remember.

"Good morning Rajani, help yourself." Adela says with forced, uncertain cheer, and Rajani graces her with a diplomatic smile, the kind she's learned from watching her parents at parties.

"Thank you." She nods and says nothing more, knowing she won't be pushed and thinking that Clary likely won't be able to handle any conversation at the moment.

As expected Eugene never makes an appearance, and Rajani leaves for home as soon as she's finished eating, bidding a quiet farewell to Clary which is nonverbally returned. At least the other girl is aware of her surroundings.

Rajani takes the Floo, not completely trusting herself to Apparate safely at the moment - heightened emotions can be just as dangerous to proper concentration as a state of intoxication. Twycross had said that numerous times, and while she currently just feels numb it's the sort of numb that she knows means she's feeling far too much and can't process it all.

She steps out of the fireplace and is stunned to be immediately pulled into a hug by the last person she'd expected to ever see in their house.

Mayra Byrnes steps back after a moment and gives Rajani a half-strained, half-knowing grin. "Your sister snuck me in, your parents are out right now. I was thinking you and I go grab some ice cream and fresh air - being inside isn't where you want to be right now."

Rajani blinks, barely registering the comment. "...Sahana contacted you?"

Mayra sighs. "We didn't work out because she's a coward, but when she heard about Queenie... I lost my grandmother a few years ago and it's not the same but it still hurts like the dickens. She thought I'd be better to talk to than any of your folks."

Rajani doesn't have to think about her answer. "Let's go."

She'll have to thank her sister later, when she's emotionally less vulnerable (and also when she actually talks to Sahana - her sister is kept very occupied by being married, she's barely seen her since the wedding).

The day ends up being absolutely wonderful. Mayra takes her to a small Muggle ice cream shop selling something called Gelato, which is somehow ice cream but better, and they walk along the Thames not talking. It's exactly what Rajani needed - a chance to breath and process everything without judgement or expectations before confronting her parents and the sideways attempts at pity she knows they'll be giving.

She doesn't cry again - thank goodness - but she does choke up at several points and repeatedly has to stop and lean against the railing, staring out across the filthy water and taking deep breaths. She still feels a bit disconnected from herself, but by the time she arrives home that evening she's feeling grounded enough to take her new, broken reality head-on.

"Rajani, there you are, I went to the Slughorns and Adela said you'd come home!" Her mother sounds furious, and her father is staring at her disapprovingly. "We've been worried sick, where were you all day?"

Rajani blinks, and then sighs. "Apologies mother, Clary and I walked around London. We needed the air, I'm sorry I didn't tell you. You were out when I returned home and Clary arrived to ask me to go out before you returned." She'll have to owl Clary and ask the other girl to cover for her, but that's something to worry about later.

Her parents buy the excuse and her mother, as expected, showers her with platitudes and assurances that things will get better. Her father merely informs her that the funeral will be in two weeks.

When Rajani manages to escape to her room she sits at her desk to start writing to Clary about the cover story - when she spots her Head Girl meeting outline sitting on the side of her desk.

She'd stood up Myr.

Groaning she decides to write him first. He's decent enough - likely furious right now but hopefully he'll be somewhat understanding of the situation.

She doesn't sleep well that night, waking up far too often and rendering herself exhausted the next morning.

Luckily Myr's reply is very polite and he offers to let her have some space, stating he can talk to some of the prefects he knows to fill in the rest of his needed knowledge. Clary also replies with a short confirmation that she'll back the story.

The funeral ends up being twelve days later. It's closed casket, which Rajani is both grateful for - she's not sure she won't start crying if she sees the lifeless body of someone who was always the most lively of them - and upset by. She hates that all she has left are pictures and memories and some part of her wonders quietly if seeing the body wouldn't bring some sort of closure.

Mostly she's thankful though. It's the first time she's seen Eugene since that horrid day and he looks no more put together now than he had then.

She stands next to him, unsure of what to say, or if she should say anything. Queenie had been her best friend, but she imagines it must be a thousand times worse for Eugene. He had loved her more than Rajani every could.

The service is... well, Rajani honestly couldn't say much about the service as she barely hears it. Her eyes flit from Eugene, to the floor, to Clary and Alasdair who along with their families were also invited.

It seems to go on forever, she knows that much.

Then someone asks her and Eugene if they want to say anything. Rajani glances over at her friend and concludes rather quickly that he won't be able to keep it together if he tries to say anything, so she decides to take the focus off him and agrees.

She doesn't have anything prepared, but she tells herself she doesn't have to say very much.

When she gets onto the podium she finds herself momentarily at a loss for words, a first so far as she can remember. She takes a nervous breath and sees her parents staring at her expectantly. Next to them Keaton is giving her a sympathetic look (Merlin she doesn't like her brother-in-law). Then she locks eyes with her sister, who gives a small smile and a nod.

Rajani thinks about Mayra, which gets her thinking about school, and the words finally come.

"I met Queenie when we were eleven years old and I sat down next to her during the Welcome Feast. I didn't know it then, but sitting there turned out to be one of the best decisions of my life." She smiles faintly, glancing at her classmates and seeing Clary's eyes light up slightly as she remembers that first night, complaining about their names as they anticipated the unknown that was Hogwarts at the time.

Rajani clears . "By Christmas we were already best friends. You all already know that she was smart, she was driven, she was going to make Slytherin the great House we all know it to be. But I think more importantly Queenie always demanded the best, of herself and of all of us. She certainly pushed me to be better. We had a bit of a rivalry fourth year, we both wanted to be named Prefect. But when I got the badge Queenie didn't hold it against me at all. She was the greatest friend I think I'll ever have, and I was lucky to have known her." She breathes out softly. "We all were made better for it. Thank you."

She doesn't cry, not in front of everyone. But that night she sits with Eugene in silence in his room and he can't judge if a few stray tears escape because he's just the same.

Myr doesn't actually follow up with Charlie or Fiona on prefect duties - his own schedule is hectic and he doesn't actually have any way of contacting them since they both live quite far from London and he doesn't have an owl.

He does feel bad for Raj though, so he resolutely doesn't bother her, instead going over the notes from their other meetings diligently and hoping that will be good enough.

He feels like he should feel worse about Raj's friend passing away, but the truth is he didn't really know Queen Shacklebolt as anything other than the Slytherin teacher's pet. She'd seemed nice enough, but without having really known her the death feels distant and he often forgets about it when he's with his sister, Holly, or Amanda - which he usually is.

After the July rush business at the bookstore slows down again, and Mr. Hale agrees to let him finish work a week before school begins so that he can listen to the Quidditch World Cup final. Amanda has continuously tried to make him come listen to the games but he's always been busy. But now, with Scotland in the finals, he feels like he really ought to give it a listen.

"This is the farthest Canada has ever made it, it's a big deal." Amanda tells him excitedly when he arrives at her family's home just outside of the city. He'd taken public transportation rather than Apparating - he hadn't known exactly where the house was located and didn't fancy splinching himself.

Amanda had met him at the bus stop and walked him back to her place, during which she caught him up to speed on every detail of the Cup so far. When they arrive at the quaint brick two-story her father is standing in the doorway eyeing Myr critically.

Myr immediately straightens up nervously, which makes Amanda laugh.

"Daddy don't scare my boyfriend please." She grins. "Myr this is my dad. Daddy, Myr."

Myr holds out his hand stiffly. "Good to meet you Mr. Taylor." He says, sounding robotic even to his own ears.

Amanda's father studies him for a moment longer before laughing, and Myr realizes that Amanda really takes after her dad. He grasps Myr's hand firmly and gives it a single shake. "Good to meet you as well Myr. The girls say great things about you."

Amanda rolls her eyes. "Okay daddy that's enough. It's hot out here I want in."

The house is incredibly homey on the inside, and Melody is already perched by the radio, fiddling with it to get the channel.

"Heya Myr, welcome to the hidey hole." She greets without looking up. Her hair is falling over her face, muffling her words slightly. "Dad this thing is acting up again." She adds.

Mr. Taylor moves to assist his other daughter, and Myr looks around instinctively for the presumed fourth member of the family.

Amanda looks at him, and then gestures to the mantle. "Mom's picture is up there, if you wanted to see." She says, softly. "She died in the first war, one of the attacks on the Ministry."

Myr isn't sure what to say to that. "I lost my dad too." He finally settles on. "Though my mum didn't know he was a wizard so we had no idea where he'd gotten to." It's still an uncomfortable truth, but he figures he won't get used to it until he starts talking about it.

Amanda takes his hand and gives it a quick squeeze. "Come on, I'll give you the grand tour before dinner."

It's a cozy house with touches of both girls scattered throughout it. Myr finds himself relaxing faster than he thought he'd be able to, and the three hours until the game starts fly by comfortably.

"Okay, everyone shush up!" Melody declares excitedly, turning up the radio volume as an announcer begins rattling off the opening speech.

The game is intense. Myr has a bit more respect for Leona now - the announcer on the radio is talking a mile a minute, describing nearly every move on the pitch so clearly that Myr can practically envision it all himself. He barely listens to their announcer during school matches, but he does know she talks a lot during games.

Myr stays at the Taylor's house until eleven thirty at which point he insists he needs to head home but he'll be back in the morning if the game isn't over by then.

In the end the game lasts for five days and Myr doesn't understand why anyone would want to play the sport professionally. Though he has to admit when Canada takes the win it's possibly the most intense moment of his life so far.

The game had served as a great distraction - as had the Taylors themselves - but with the World Cup over there's only two days until school starts and Myr immediately begins worrying about the prefect meeting again. He's been majorly slacking on that front and there's been no word from Raj either so he's becoming less and less certain that she's going to be particularly helpful coaching him through the first meeting.

His worries are very slightly alleviated when her owl appears at his window the night before the first, bearing a short note that Raj obviously doesn't expect a reply to as the barn owl leaves as soon as he's taken the letter from her.

Myr,

Apologies for the lack of communication. Please meet me at the Express at 10 tomorrow to go over final details for the meeting.

Raj

Myr releases a slow breath. Ten in the morning is an hour before the train leaves, but he's not sure it will be enough time for him to really feel ready for any of this.

It really feels like first year all over again - completely overwhelming and honestly a bit terrifying.

Myr swallows down the nerves climbing up his throat and heads down to the kitchen where his sister is going through several files for a work report, Owen curled up by her feet and batting at her pant leg every so often.

"Hey, I need to be at King's Cross by ten tomorrow." He says by way of announcing himself, and Cadi startles, nearly knocking over her files.

"Myr don't- jeez, you move like a mouse." She laughs shakily, gathering the files away from the edge of the table. "Yeah, sure, no problem. You're all packed right?"

"Only Owen left." Myr confirms, looking down at his cat with fond amusement when sleepy gold eyes open at the sound of his name.

Cadi snorts. "Alright. I have to be in the office by nine but I can leave money for a cab.

Myr momentarily thinks to suggest that he just Apparate, but then he remembers he's never done it with Owen and he has no interest in screwing up his first Side-Along Apparition right before what will probably be the most stressful meeting of his life.

So he accepts the offer and in the morning Cadi hands him twenty pounds before heading out the door, leaving Myr with nothing to distract himself from the coming meeting except Owen. His cat does give him about ten minutes of relief as he attempts to avoid the carrier, but then Myr is ready to go and not ready to go at all.

He arrives at King's Cross fifteen minutes early because if he stayed at home he was going to pace a hole into the floor and at least at the station he can move with some sort of purpose.

Of course now he's on the Platform with no actual idea how to find Raj or where they're supposed to be meeting.

Luckily for him something finally goes right when the Head Girl appears seemingly out of nowhere next to him not two minutes after he reaches Platform nine and three quarters.

"Good, you're here. I've isolated a compartment we can use." She says briskly in lieu of a greeting. Myr wordlessly follows her, the silence between them filled only with a single curious mew from Owen as the large cat attempts to smack at Raj's skirt as it swishes with each step.

"Don't get comfortable, the meeting will be in the prefect carriage a few cars down." Raj warns as they step into the car she's cordoned off for them. "And after patrols you can go sit with your friends elsewhere on the train. Most fifth years do that, though the sixth and seventh years usually stay and mingle in the prefect car."

Myr quietly smarts at the implication that he'll be more like a fifth year, but he doesn't respond. Instead he sits across from Raj and accepts the parchment paper she offers him.

"That's the rough outline for the meeting. Tell me if you want to add or change anything, and if you have any last minute questions now is the time. I figure we'll give the prefects a chance to mingle until the journey begins and then we'll join them, give the overview, and pair the fifth years with the older prefects to make sure they get the hang of things." Raj is all business, more so, even, than over the summer, and Myr is honestly a bit taken aback. He'd expected subdued, still mourning, but the woman in front of him is a rock, and he isn't sure if that's somehow worse. Regardless he doesn't know how to react either way so he just looks down at the parchment and reads the outline.

It's a bit detailed for 'rough', but he knows Raj is doing a lot of hand-holding for him so he doesn't make the snarky comment he might have had if Fiona or even Nabila had handed it to him - the only two Gryffindors he can think if who would even make an outline like this one.

"So? Any questions?" Raj prompts impatiently and Myr startles.

"Um, no, nothing pressing." He says, and then hesitates. "Maybe the names of the sixth year prefects? Just so I know them?"

Raj nods sharply. "Hector and Alana from Slytherin, Adrian and Cass from Gryffindor, Taylor and Saundra from Hufflepuff, and Brett and Josephine from Ravenclaw. Josephine doesn't respond to nicknames and will metaphorically claw your face off if you try. I'm thinking we pick out the fifth year who seems most confident and pair him or her with Josephine, that will knock down the arrogance pretty effectively. Most nervous ones ought to be with Shaun Roberts from our year or Saundra from sixth, they're the more calming people, though I can't believe I'm saying that about Saundra."

Myr blinks, having caught exactly none of the information. "...okay?"

Raj sighs impatiently. "I'll handle the pairing, you just stand there and look pretty." She says briskly.

Myr bristles slightly. "I'm the Head Boy, I ought to say something." He protests. "You can do the rules and stuff, fine, but I can talk about-" He stumbles, suddenly unsure of what exactly he can talk about.

Raj narrows her eyes in annoyance. "You can do the opening bit if you want, how we're here if needed and such." She offers after a moment and Myr flushes and agrees.

He's nervous enough as is and honestly Raj is only making it worse. He'd thought she might have been warming up a bit during their handful of summer meetings but obviously he'd been incorrect.

Or her best friend died and she's dealing with that. He reminds himself, immediately feeling guilty for his momentary irritation.

Raj is already packing up the rough schedule when he pulls himself back out of his thoughts, and a glance out the window shows the familiar mass of people crowding the platform, calling final goodbyes and well wishes as the students pile onto the train.

"Let's get going then, everyone should have arrived by now."

Nerves are weighing down Myr's tongue and throat so he doesn't reply, just picks up his trunk and Owen's carrying case and follows the Head Girl down the corridor and into another car.

The first thing he notices is that it's much bigger than the standard cars on the Express. The next is that despite that substantial size increase it's still completely packed.

Fiona waves at him from where she's sitting next to Charlie and a Ravenclaw boy who Myr recognizes enough to know he's in their year but he can't quite grasp a name.

It takes him a moment to realize the chatter has silenced and everyone is staring at him and Raj, who's giving him a look.

He clears his throat. Right, he's doing the opening.

"Hey guys! So I'm Myr, and you probably know Raj but, um, that's her." He gestures to his partner and is relieved when several people laugh. "We're the Head Boy and Girl this year which means if you have any questions then we're always happy to help so don't think you're ever bothering us."

Raj starts to open but Myr still has one more thing to say and he's determined to get it out while the nerves are still temporarily appeased by the relaxed atmosphere. "That also means, though, that if you screw up we're the ones who get to decide your fate, so you probably want to be nice to us."

That gets more laughs, and when he glances over at Raj she's smiling in a distant sort of approval.

She takes over from there, and Myr honestly doesn't catch much of what she says but the group of prefects are listening attentively. He studies faces, trying to match names but no one is in their school robes yet so he can't use Houses to determine who's who.

However he does spy a few familiar faces - the younger Slytherin Beater is eyeing him warily from the corner where all the Slytherin prefects are huddled, students from his own year, and one face he wasn't expecting, which gives him a bit of a shock when he spots it.

When Rajani finishes handing out patrol pairs (he's with another Gryffindor named Adrian) he takes a quick detour to walk over to where Melody Taylor is looking for her partner.

"You didn't think to mention you were made prefect when I was basically living at your house last week?" He asks, and she grins.

"Surprise! Honestly I didn't even think about it, I figured you guys were given names with your letters."

They had been, but as Raj had taken care of patrol pairings for the first day so Myr hadn't actually looked at them.

"Hey, don't mean to break it up but I'd like to get this done quickly." A voice interrupts. The gawky brunet boy sticks out a hand. "Adrian, we're paired. Raj says you need some instructions on how this works?"

Myr flushes slightly but waves to Melody and follows after Adrian.

Being Head Boy is definitely not going to be easy. But he's thinking that maybe he won't completely screw it up.

Franziska ends up in a compartment with Donaghan and Cian in addition to Evie and Fitzwilliam, and she's not completely sure how it happened but the group seems to be getting along surprisingly well.

Cian and Fitzwilliam had started talking music rather early on in the ride and two hours in are still going strong. Evie had tried to engage with them a bit at the start but has since moved on to talking current events with Franziska - namely the ongoing discussions to reunify Germany.

"I sweat my whole family was glued to the screen when Reagan gave his speech, but it's taken forever to actually tear down that wall." Evie laughs. "It must have been chaotic for you this summer, huh Frannie?"

Franziska shrugs. "Kind of? I live pretty far west though, so the stuff going on in Berlin isn't that close to us, and the Ministry Headquarters were moved during the second world war to get away from the Nazi regime so. We haven't really been in Berlin at all as a magical community."

Evie makes a face. "So. Wait. If I'm getting this right all the witches and wizards just did nothing during the Holocaust? No offense, but that's genuinely awful."

Franziska shrugs, grimacing. "I mean, people joined up but the Statute of Secrecy was deemed to be more important to maintain, above all else." She says. "Trust me, I don't like it either, but it's done. And besides, there's no spell on Earth that could stop a bullet, so it's questionable how much of an impact we really would have had - the reveal could have made things even worse." It's a flimsy argument, but it's one she's heard endlessly from their Ministry so it's the first thing she can think of in response to Evie's comment.

Donaghan grimaces. "Still, it feels dirty. But I suppose the Muggle world has a lot of problems accepting anyone who seems even the slightest bit different - I get being a bit scared of coming out."

Franziska thinks of Rosa and Jen (who she still hasn't met, to her frustration) and wonders why she'd never considered it that way before. "That's a good point." She observes quietly. "I mean, a lot of Muggles can't handle other Muggles, who's to say revealing magic wouldn't cause another round of the witch trials?"

Evie leans back in her seat. "Oh man, those were caused by fear of the unknown weren't they?" She suddenly grins. "Hey Frannie, didn't we talk about those on our very first train ride to Hogwarts? You, me, Shaun, and Finn and hey I just realized except me and Shaun we all went to different Houses!"

Franziska blinks. In all honesty she'd almost forgotten about that long ago train ride. She smiles faintly - her eleven year old self would be happy to know that she still talks to at least one of those first three classmates she'd met.

Her eleven year old self might be slightly less pleased with how uncomfortable she is around Shaun these days, but it's unavoidable. And if she thinks about it, she isn't even sure what Finn has been doing - though it's not surprising given how exclusive the Slytherin House is.

"I think we talked about Wendelin the Weird." She recalls aloud, letting her smile turn into a full grin.

"I think we reenacted Wendelin the Weird." Evie laughs. "Oh man, that feels like forever ago. Say, what did you guys do on the first Express ride?" She pokes Fitzwilliam to get his and Cian's attention.

Donaghan answers first. "Cian and I shared a car with some upperclassmen who mostly kept to themselves. Mind, he wasn't feeling particularly social either." He says dryly, giving his friend an amused look.

Cian shrugs. "I didn't even want to come to Hogwarts." He replies flatly.

"I sat with Amelia. And my cousin. And one of the other Slytherin girls, though I don't remember her name." Fitzwilliam offers. "It was really awkward honestly, we didn't talk much. Well, the one Slytherin did but Elspeth and Amelia didn't."

"That sounds awful." Evie declares, and while Franziska agrees she thinks her friend could have been a bit more tactful.

But to her surprise Fitzwilliam actually gives a small laugh. "It kind of was. I only sat with Elspeth because I knew her, but we've never really gotten on. She... was closer to her parents than I was with mine." He says the last part a bit awkwardly, glancing over at Donaghan and Cian.

Franziska remembers when Fitzwilliam had admitted to her and Evie that his parents had been Deatheaters and were currently imprisoned in Azkaban. The two girls had made clear they didn't care, but Franziska knows it's still a sore topic for Fitzwilliam and she's surprised he brought it up at all in front of Donaghan and Cian, considering he doesn't know the two boys.

"Well, you've got other people you know now!" Donaghan beams, and Franziska has never been happier that Jemma's dating him has allowed them to become closer.

A knock on the door dissipates the last of the awkwardness as the Trolley Witch leans into the compartment and asks her usual question.

Evie flashes Franziska a grin. "We'd like three chocolate frogs, a box of Bertie Bott's, some pumpkin pasties, and two cauldron cakes please!" 

Franziska laughs. "I can't believe you remember that, it's been six years."

Evie pays for the sweets and passes them around the compartment. "If anyone gets the Wendelin card I will literally give you anything you want for it." She announces cheerfully, grabbing one of the chocolate frogs for herself.

"That's a bold statement." Donaghan warns with a grin. "Cian might make you listen to him talk music theory for four hours."

Cian glares half-heartedly at his friend, the effect lessened by the pumpkin pasty crumbs he has on his face. 

Fitzwilliam awkwardly points out the crumbs as he accepts a handful of Bertie Botts from Evie. "I never get any good ones of these." He says pitifully after popping a lovely red one into his mouth an immediately making a face.

Franziska tilts her head curious as she accepts her own palmful of beans. "What was it? Red is usually pretty safe I've found."

Donaghan laughs. "You clearly haven't ever had a blood-flavored one before, I'm never touching red again. Not worth it."

"What was yours?" Evie pokes Fitzwilliam curiously as he forces himself to swallow.

"Feathers." He gives a dejected sigh and proceeds to eat another one, smiling ever so faintly when Evie bursts out laughing.

"I think the worst I ever got was motor oil." Evie says decidedly after a moment.

Cian makes a face. "This is why I refuse to touch those things." He wrinkles his nose. Of course, Evie takes that as a challenge and proceeds to start attempting to convince Cian to try at least one.

Donaghan laughs and shakes his head, moving so he's sitting next to Franziska.

"So, moving on from Nazis, how was your summer?" He asks with a grin, and Franziska laughs while Fitzwilliam looks vaguely confused.

Evie does eventually succeed on her quest, though Cian spits out the moss-flavored bean ("oh come on, moss isn't even that bad!" Evie had exclaimed) and the entire compartment sans Cian are still laughing when Jemma makes an appearance, already dressed with her Prefect badge pinned on her right lapel.

"What did I miss?" She asks, but Franziska immediately recognizes the tone. It's the one Jemma pulls out when she's feeling down but doesn't want to bother anybody.

Franziska is about to call her out when Donaghan beats her to it. "What happened at the Prefect meeting? You look miserable."

Jemma sighs, smiling straining to stay in place. "No, the meeting was fine! Rajani and Myr did a great job, really. I'm not upset about Head Girl." She adds pointedly to Donaghan, who closes his mouth and shakes his head. "Really though, just a rough patrol. The new Slytherin prefect - Bella - she's a bit standoffish. It felt like talking to a rock the entire three hours." She grimaces. "Sorry, I'm complaining, it's not a big problem, didn't mean to kill the atmosphere."

The group share a look before Franziska decides to somewhat shift the topic. "Myr as in the Welsh boy from Gryffindor? I didn't think he was a prefect, how is he Head Boy now?" She prompts, only half-curious, but the rest of the compartment seem to have a collective moment of realization before they begin to bombard Jemma with similar questions. Soon enough the blonde has relaxed as well and the whole group is chatting comfortably for the rest of the ride.

The six of them opt to share a carriage together as they disembark. Franziska waves to Hagrid as the Groundskeeper calls for the first years and he cheerfully waves back.

"Oh my gosh they're so little!" Jemma whispers as she watches the first years nervously walking towards the half-giant. "I can't believe that was us once."

Franziska laughs slightly. "And now here we are, seventh years, top of the food chain." She says with a grin.

"Seven years ago I didn't even know magic existed. Weird to think how normal it is now." Donaghan observes, gently nudging one baffled first year in the right direction. He elbows Cian lightly as he takes Jemma's hand. "I bet even you're used to it now."

Cian rolls his eyes. "I'm still appalled by the music selection for wizards. We're fixing that immediately." He says flatly, but Franziska thinks she spies a faint smile in the low light.

"You guys have an amazing setlist." Jemma agrees. "Hey, you should play something for the first years at the end of the week! We're doing a general get-to-know you type party right?"

Franziska is ashamed that she'd actually almost forgotten about the Hufflepuff tradition.

Evie and Fitzwilliam frown. "Um, what?" Fitzwilliam ventures, and the four Hufflepuffs immediately go quiet, teasingly refusing to say anymore on the subject despite Evie practically begging for information.

"Jeez, betrayed by my own best friend." Evie laments dramatically, falling over Franziska's lap once they've chosen a carriage. "Refusing to tell me juicy Hufflepuff secrets, I may have to make Fitz my new best friend now."

Fitzwilliam glances over, pushing Evie's feet off his lap but not commenting otherwise.

"Sorry, House secrets, you know how it goes." Franziska laughs as the other three pile onto the opposite seat and the carriage begins moving on it's own as it always does.

"Well at least we know you're not cavorting with the enemy." Jemma jokes.

They split from Evie and Fitzwilliam when the arrive at the castle and Jemma makes a point of gathering all the seventh year Hufflepuffs that she can to sit on the furthest end of the bench away from where the new first years will be sitting.

"Meeting in the guys dorm tonight, we need to solidify this weekend." She reminds everyone in a low voice as the new first years stream into the Great Hall, eyes wide and curious as they gaze around. Franziska gives one boy what she hopes is an encouraging smile.

Leona grins dangerously. "I am so excited to be a seventh year, we finally get to rule the school." She breaths as the Hat launches into it's song.

"You're just pleased that business will probably pick up since a seventeen year old has more credibility than an eleven year old." Adian points out with mild amusement, and the whole group laughs softly.

"Hey, new customers get one free." Leona protests lightly, but she's grinning as well. "My rates are perfectly fair, no one gets hurt, everyone's happy! I even get Slytherins on occasion." She adds with a glint in her eyes. "Those are always interesting."

"Shush, the sorting has started." Jemma scolds them and they settle down for the next hour as the new students are sent to their Houses. Hufflepuff, as usual, has one of the largest number of new students - eight if Franziska has counted correctly though she wasn't paying that close attention - but overall the class is much smaller than average.

"Well, the fewer kids we need to keep an eye on the better." Kiera says with a shrug once the usual welcome is given and the Feast appears in front of them, continuing the conversation from an hour before easily. "Heck, we've got, what, three extra people?"

"Two, there's eight first years." Jemma corrects and Kiera shrugs.

"Two then, Still that's good isn't it? Remember our first year, there were only six in the graduating class." The farm girl laughs, and Franziska notices that in the course of two sentences she's managed to move from the bench onto Tyler's lap, who'd been sitting next to her. He doesn't complain at all, simply eating around her as though nothing has changed. "I bet they were a bit frantic when they realized how massive our class was going to be." She laughs.

"Still, our plans are rather low-key, we probably won't need everyone present." Jemma says thoughtfully. "But shush, we don't want anyone overhearing. How was everyone's summers?"

Aidan proceeds to point out Jemma's atrocious grammar but the group lets themselves be derailed. Jemma does have a point - they may be down the table from the first years but sound travels oddly in the Great Hall and it's not worth the risk.

They catch up all through the feast, and then Jemma excuses herself to assist the fifth years with leading the first years to the dorm.

"See you all in the boys' room." She reminds them before departing.

They sit at the table a few minutes more before growing bored and heading for the Hufflepuff common room.

Several first years are still lingering in the main room, eyeing everything curiously, and Franziska smothers a nostalgic laugh. She remembers being one of those first years.

The group of them go straight to the boys' rooms and settle on the beds, pairing off however they please. Donaghan of course keeps his bed open for Jemma to sit with him when she arrives, and Franziska finds herself perched next to Leona on Cian's bed, while its proper owner lies on Aidan's bed, taking up most of the space.

Jemma arrives a few minutes later, looking breathless but smiling. "Alright then, the first years are as settled as they're going to be considering it's their first night. Now then," She takes her spot next to Donaghan. "Let's get this party planned!"

Ana sits with her usual group at the Feast - and isn't it odd to think she has one of those now? - and is content to mostly listen to them chatting as she eats.

Amelia does most of the talking - she'd had an internship over the summer with the Pest Advisory Board and she's quite eager to detail every little thing she'd done.

"So are you going to work there after graduation then?" Jerome asks during one of her pauses for breath.

Amelia shakes her head. "Goodness no, it was terribly boring. I'm going to get my Magizoology certification and likely start research out of the country by the time I turn nineteen. Sooner preferably, but it depends on the program I can get into for the certification."

Ana rolls her eyes slightly, but she does understand the sentiment. Even if it's not directly related to her intended job Amelia's internship did involve magical creatures so it will look good on her application form for the certification programs.

Ana isn't worried about her own applications for Curse Breaking - she already knows she's guaranteed a spot in the 1991 class courtesy of her boyfriend.

However she is rather tired of listening to Amelia after nearly an hour of the same thing, so she turns to Shaun. "What about you, any plans for after graduation?"

Shaun smiles. "Actually I want to be a teacher. Always have and that hasn't changed. Professor Flitwick says there likely won't be any openings at Hogwarts for a few years yet, other than Defense Against the Dark Arts which I'm rather hesitant to take, so I'll likely attend secondary education for the next few years and then see where things go from there."

Ana nods. Personally teaching sounds incredibly boring, but she can recognize it's importance so it's good people like Shaun exist to fill the needed roles.

Amelia sighs but accepts that her turn to talk has been ended and she looks to Jerome. "So how about you? Figure out what you're doing?"

Jerome shrugs sheepishly. "Not really? Kind of? I'm probably going to try to be a historian but I'm not sure what I'll do to make money since that's not really an official job." He smiles a bit awkwardly. "Honestly I don't know what I'm going to do after we graduate. Probably stay with my parents for the summer and apply to whatever I'm qualified for."

Ana raises an eyebrow. "Why not do what Shaun is? Getting a higher level degree in History would likely get you snapped up as an assistant for one of the active historians, and from there several schools or even publishing companies are often looking for textbook writers. If you do your own projects while assisting you could probably be a full-time historian by thirty at the latest."

Jerome looks surprised. "Huh. That... actually sounds like fun. I should set up a meeting with Professor Flitwick though, see what that would look like for me considering I'm not the best student." He flushed but he's grinning and Ana can't help smiling back.

"I guess we're all set for after graduation then." Shaun jokes lightly. "No need to do seventh year at all."

Amelia giggles.

The Feast ends and Evie joins her and Amelia in their room. The girls exchange some small talk about their summers before Evie suddenly laughs.

"Hey remember first year? When we-"

"No, no nostalgia." Amelia interrupts immediately, making a face. Ana personally agrees - it's far too early in the year for such sentiment in her opinion.

Evie looks a little taken aback but she purses her lips and doesn't finish the thought. "Alright, well how are things with you and Henry then? Still together?" She offers after a long moment of awkward silence.

Amelia shrugs. "Yes we are. We spent a lot of time together over the summer, though he was rather stressed about school." She looks oddly pleased as she says it. "Which is nice considering he never cared for it much before. I'm glad NEWTs are finally making him put a bit more effort into his schoolwork." She glances over at Ana. "And what about you? I recall you going to Hogsmeade with a man last year - he said he was your Curse Breaker contact?"

Ana hums. "He's also my boyfriend and currently back in Peru, though he'll be home for the Holidays."

Evie perks up. "Hold up, this is all new to me. Details!"

"No details, we aren't gossiping Hufflepuffs." Ana counters flatly, and Evie frowns.

"My best friend is Hufflepuff and she doesn't gossip a whit." She grumbles. "Whatever, 'night guys."

"Goodnight." Ana responds. Amelia merely hums, already changed into her nightclothes and settling into her bed. Ana is quick to follow her example and let sleep overtake her.

They receive their schedules the next morning, though as it's a Sunday they have no classes to occupy themselves with once breakfast is over.

Several of the first years scatter, exploring the castle and generally getting underfoot while Ana attempts to set up in the library to continue her summer NEWT studying. She'd kept her schedule quite well and now hopes to work ahead a bit in preparation for the year - assuming the younger years stop giggling at each other long enough for her to focus.

Five minutes later the irritating background noise is still going strong - and& where is Madame Pince she's usually very good about removing loiterers from the premises - Ana decides to remove the distraction herself.

She closes the textbook she'd been ineffectually trying to read and focuses on the sounds, trying to pinpoint their point of origin. Finally her eyes land on a pair of Hufflepuff girls near one of the windows. She stands, not bothering to bring her things - there's barely anyone in the library so she's not concerned with anyone trying to take any of her things - and walks over to them, not bothering with a friendly expression as she approaches.

"Excuse me," She makes her presence known and eyes the Quidditch magazine the two girls had been cooing over with distaste. Honestly she'll never understand the appeal of muscles like those, they seem far to bulky for her taste. "Unless you're studying schoolwork I'd suggest taking yourselves elsewhere as to not distract those of us here who were hoping to use the library for its intended purpose."

One of the girls, the darker-skinned one, pouts at her in annoyance. "We aren't hurting anyone, and Madame Pince hasn't told us to leave." She points out, smiling appeasingly. "Maybe you could move?"

Ana huffs. "I'm nearly half-way across the library and I can still hear you. Either study something useful or study that somewhere else. There are plenty of empty classrooms where you wouldn't be bothering others."

The girl who had spoken purses her lips, but her friend speaks first. "Sorry, we didn't know how loud we were being! We can go to a classroom like you said, right Farrah?"

The dark girl - Farrah, Ana supposes - continues to pout but it's clear from her body language she's going to acquiesce. "Alright, I guess we could. The first years are getting everywhere though." She complains. Ana may agree, but she still doesn't have any sympathy. It's not like the two are doing anything worthwhile after all, it's just a stupid magazine.

Once the two have left Ana finds it much easier to immerse herself in her studies and she loses herself completely until her stomach loudly informs her that it requires sustenance if she wants it to keep supplying her with study energy.

She sighs and glances out the window. The sun is still up, though it's low on the horizon, so dinner likely won't be for another hour or so. Ana debates the merits of going to the kitchen and getting something light but she knows if she does she'll likely skip dinner in favor of continuing to try and puzzle through Arithmancy. So she resigns herself to being finished for the day and decides to try and find Jerome. He at least will be easy to talk to and hopefully help waste the time until dinner.

She traverses the halls, heading for the Ravenclaw Tower, when she hears movement in the corridor behind her. Spinning rapidly - she will not be the of anyone's pranks - she's surprised to find two identical redheads standing in front of the tapestry she'd just walked past.

"Oh man it works!" One exclaims excitedly, while the other quickly shoves something into the inner pockets of his robes, glances up, and freezes when he meets Ana's eyes.

"Um, hello Miss, funny running into you here-"

"Don't try selling me any lines. I know trouble when I see it and you two seem to reek of it." Ana sighs. She unfortunately does know the two - the Weasley twins, who while not personal acquaintances, have enough of a reputation that Ana has heard plenty about them. "Tell you what, you leave me and the rest of the seventh year Ravenclaws alone so we can study and I won't tell Filch about that tapestry. Deal?"

The second years nod fervently. "Cross our hearts-"

"-Ravenclaw is a no-splash zone." They chorus, and Ana opts to ignore how incredibly freaky they're being and simply nods.

"Good. Then I don't know you, you don't know me. Carry on."

The two scamper off and she sighs. Maybe she'll just stay in the Tower until dinner - no chance of running into irritating younger students that way.

Luckily for her Jerome and Shaun are both in the common room when she arrives and she watches their chess game after putting her bag away, and they walk to dinner together.

Amelia arrives after them, and Ana notices immediately that she's looking slightly puffy and her eyes have the faintest tinge of red.

"Potion gone wrong." Amelia says flatly before anyone can ask, and while it's an obvious lie Ana doesn't push. Amelia's business is her own, and frankly Ana doesn't care.

Jerome is a lot nicer than she is though, and he pats Amelia's hand lightly. "Well, if you don't want to tell us about it you don't have to. We all have had potions go wrong." His tone is warm and makes it clear they all know Amelia's excuse is just that.

Amelia gives a shuttering sigh. "...Thanks." She finally mumbles, looking more towards Shaun than Jerome or Ana but that's not surprising. They'd inevitably paired off somewhat once Jerome and Ana developed their unlikely relationship.

They move on from there, Jerome more than happy to chatter away about helping the Groundskeeper around the castle grounds to fill the space between them. Ana only half listens, more focused on eating and idly going over what she'd studied that day in her mind.

Amelia is still tense and silent after dinner ends and even Evie comments on it when they're getting ready to sleep.

"It's not your business." Amelia snaps, only confirming that the potion explanation was entirely fabricated.

Evie glances at Ana questioningly but Ana merely shrugs in return and the rest of the night is spent in silence. Ana is rather certain that Amelia is still awake when she falls asleep about an hour later.

The next day classes start, though with their schedules still stripped down dramatically as compared to the first five years, Ana's first class - Charms - isn't until eleven, leaving her two hours after breakfast to try and occupy herself.

She ends up unintentionally running into Aidan, which proves fortuitous as he's in the same predicament that she is so they end up finding a quiet nook to catch up.

Though she isn't as close to Aidan as she'd once been Ana does still consider him a good friend, so she's pleased to hear he'd gotten an apprenticeship lined up for after graduation.

"Congratulations, spell creation is a tough field to make money in. Finding a mentor is usually quite difficult."

"Consistently being the second highest-scoring student in the class helped." Aidan says with a smalle grin. He then hesitates before speaking again. "I know this isn't really your realm of expertise or interest, but I was wondering if you're close with Amelia Kingsley?"

Ana frowns at the questions. "We talk." She says after a moment. "I suppose we would be considered friends. Why?" She didn't even know Aidan knew Amelia, nonetheless well enough to ask after her.

Aidan shifts uncertainly. "Oh. Well, is she doing alright?"

Ana's frown deepens. "She was upset yesterday about something, though she wouldn't say what." Ana thinks she might be starting to figure out that particular mystery though. Aidan may not know Amelia directly as far as Ana is aware, but he is a male Hufflepuff - and therefore roommates with one Henry Davies, aka Amelia's boyfriend.

Aidan bites his lip. "Oh. Okay, sorry for-"

"They broke up didn't they?" Ana can't help the interruption. She's always thought Henry and Amelia's relationship was dangerously one-sided so she wouldn't be surprised if her deduction is correct. Though she recalls Amelia intending to maintain the relationship until graduation, which raises new questions. She blinks. "Did Henry break up with her?"

Aidan's expression is answer enough and Ana can't help making a disbelieving chuckle.

"Well, good for him. Not what I expected, certainly, but that relationship was going nowhere."

"That's a bit cold. You said Amelia was upset? Henry is miserable." Aidan counters. "...He's the one who asked us if we could check up on Amelia."

Ana sighs. "She'll be fine, she was planning to break up with him at the end of the year anyway. I say good for him not taking it."

Aidan shakes his head slightly. "Sometimes I really don't understand you. But I'll pass on what you said."

Ana notices that he doesn't explicitly disagree with her.

They walk to Charms together, but Ana ends up taking a seat next to Jerome rather than Aidan, who predictably goes over to where Henry is sitting in the back of the classroom, far away from Amelia at the front.

"So Henry dumped you." Ana says in lieu of a greeting. No reason to not let Amelia know that she knows - not mentioning it would likely result in more of a headache later. "Aidan told me." She adds. "Henry wanted to know how you were doing."

"He dumped me, as you so eloquently put it." Amelia replies flatly, her dull tone and expression not matching her shaking hands which are gripping her quill hard enough that Ana is certain it will snap before the end of the lecture. "So I don't see why he cares."

Ana lets it drop and thankfully Jerome doesn't comment either. Shaun eyes Henry but also remains mute, and the four say nothing more until Professor Flitwick hops up onto his chair and begins the lecture.

It's an interesting start to the year, that much is certain. Ana just hopes it isn't a sign of how the rest will play out.

Ana is fighting me again, all is right with the world xD Anyway, yeah. That happened. I've known Queenie would need to be removed prior to canon starting for a while now (upon realizing Kingsley having a sister would otherwise have been mentioned in the books) but having lost my best friend a little over a year ago this was a really hard chapter to write. I may have wish-fulfilled Raj having a near-perfect support in Mayra because making her go through it alone wasn't something I was ready to write yet. I'll get there - I'll have to for CtF - but yeah. Sorry for the bummer start to the year, I swear it gets better! Next chapter will have the Hufflepuff first-week party so that will be fun!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!