Chapter Two

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
The Start of the Rest of Your Life

Franziska hadn't been sure what to expect from Platform Nine and Three Quarters, but somehow crowded had never been a descriptor that entered her mind.

However, crowded is exactly what it is as she and her mother enter the steam-filled platform ten minutes before eleven o'clock. The two women have barely passed through the barrier when they're jolted by another family pushing in behind them and Franziska ends up falling straight into a group in front of them.

"Whoops, sorry!" Franziska is catapulted into a red haired boy who looks about her own age.

He steadies her, and then quickly withdraws his hands. "You alright?"

She brushes her hair out of her face, feeling her cheeks heating slightly. "Yeah. Sorry about that." She apologizes again, looking anywhere but the boy's face. This wasn't exactly the ideal start she had been hoping for.

"We should probably move out of the entryway Lida." Her mother's voice is a welcome distraction from her embarrassment, and she quickly complies with the suggestion. The family they'd run into vanishes in the smoke behind them and Franziska lets out a small breath of relief.

Her mother pulls her into a tight hug just before Franziska boards the train.

"Good luck and owl me as soon as you settle in. I'll see you in June."

Franziska clings to her mother for a long moment before stepping back and grabbing her trunk. Together they heave it onto the train and then the whistle is blowing and doors are closing and Pannida is lost in a blast of smoke as the train begins to move.

Franziska nearly falls over, but manages to catch herself on her trunk. She continues leaning against it until the movement of the carriage under her feet evens out somewhat. When she's sure she won't fall flat on her face, she eases her death grip on the trunk and begins dragging it towards the rows of compartments, hoping that someone will let her sit with them.

The first compartment she glances into has a very sullen boy staring out the window, and she doesn't even bother knocking on the door before continuing past, not wanting to interrupt him.

The next compartment is filled to capacity with a group of extremely rowdy teenagers so once again she continues past.

The third compartment, however, looks friendly enough and there are only three people inside of it, leaving plenty of space for Franziska to sit down. So she knocks and peeks her head in.

"Um, would you mind if I sat with you?" She asks politely.

The only other girl in the compartment gives her a smile so wide that Franziska is a bit concerned that her face may split in half. "Of course! The more the merrier." She scoots over and one of the boys stands to help with Franziska's trunk.

Once the two of them manage to shove it into the overhead space he holds out a hand. "I'm Shaun."

She smiles and returns the handshake. "Franziska. First year as well?"

He nods as they sit, but it's the other girl who vocally responds.

"We all are! I'm so excited, can you believe magic is real? We were just talking about what we think it's going to be like!" She's still grinning hard enough that Franziska's jaw is a bit sore just from looking. "I'm Evie by the way, and that's Finn."

The second boy lifts a hand in an idle wave and Franziska gives a return nod.

"So you guys are all Muggleborn?" She asks curiously.

She gets three blank stares in response and realizes that they probably don't know what the term means. Blushing slightly, she clarifies.

"I mean, your parents aren't witches or wizards, right?"

Shaun nods and Evie gives an enthusiastic confirmation, but Finn looks thoughtful.

"I'm not actually sure. I'd never heard of magic prior to Professor Kettleburn arriving with my letter, but I'm adopted. Maybe one of my biological parents knew magic." He explains when he notices the other three are waiting for him to say something. "I assume your parents are magical?" He adds after a moment.

Franziska smiles. "Yep! My mom went to Hogwarts when she was a kid and my dad went to Durmstrang. But I know more about the Muggle world than the Wizarding one." She admits when she sees Evie gearing up to ask a questions. "My mom is a Muggle liaison for the German Ministry of Magic so we've always lived in non-magical communities and my best friend is a Muggle." She shrugs apologetically. "So I probably only know a little bit more than you guys."

Evie looks distinctly put out, but Shaun tilts his head curiously.

"Ministry of Magic?" He questions. "What's that?"

Franziska shrugs. "Government for magic people. Both my parents work for it but it's really rather boring for the most part. Paperwork and meetings - not that different from normal Muggle government from what I understand."

Evie frowns. "Really? What's the point of having magic if you restrict it with rules and government?" She complains.

Finn raises an eyebrow. "I assume the same reason we have laws about gun control." He points out wryly, never turning away from the window.

Franziska nods. "Exactly. It's to protect us and Muggles and make sure no one gets hurt or uses Dark magic."

Finn looks over at her, the first time he's shown active interest in the conversation despite participating in it himself. "Dark magic? How is that different than normal magic?"

Franziska pauses to try and think of the best way to explain the difference. It's always been one of the things she takes for granted - some magic simply shouldn't be taught or used. She chooses her words carefully.

"Dark magic is like... well it's hard to explain. It's sort of like the difference between a handgun and an automatic machine gun. One is obviously way more dangerous and destructive than the other." She waves her hands vaguely. "That's not a perfect metaphor but Dark magic is one of those things that you don't really think about much. It's just... bad stuff." She shrugs as her hands find their way back down to her lap.

Finn nods and returns his gaze to the window. Franziska worries that the conversation is going to drop off and they'll be stuck in awkward silence for the rest of the seven hour trip.

Thankfully, Evie is more than happy to pick up the slack.

"So if magic is real, what else is there? Professor Whits didn't say all that much while we were shopping, she was being all mysterious. Like, how come the owls know where to go when you give them letters? And why owls? They're nocturnal so can you only send letters at night? What if there's an emergency during the day time?"

Franziska is a bit overwhelmed by the time the tidal wave of questions peters out. However, she can see Shaun looking over at her, just as openly curious as Evie, and even Finn is eyeing her slightly from his spot across from her.

She takes a deep breath to stall for time as she tries to come up with acceptable answers. So much of this stuff she just takes for granted - she's honestly never questioned the owl service before, but Evie does make some good point.

"Well, I'm not totally sure but I think owls, and toads and cats as well actually, are particularly attuned to magic so it's easier to use them for mail purposes. And owls aren't the only way to contact people but they are the easiest. That way even we can write to our parents instead of having to wait until we're seventeen and can do the other stuff." She thinks all that is correct anyway. "But I mean, I honestly haven't ever really thought about it. It's just sort of the way things are."

Shaun looks thoughtful. "I guess magic is just normal for you. The way we don't question phones or the telly."

Franziska nods thankfully. "Exactly. But, um, I can still try to answer questions and stuff. Just, maybe fact check me afterwards." She laughs slightly and beside her Evie giggles as well.

Finn seems to have stopped paying attention to the conversation.

For nearly an hour Franziska talks to Evie and Shaun about the Wizarding World. She explains how dragons and centaurs and all sorts of supposedly mythical creatures are real, and even manages to remember a bit about the erklings her father spends a lot of time rounding up.

"You see they're small, but really rather vicious, and they don't comply with magical law very well so they'll sometimes go after Muggles."

"What happens if one is seen? Have any Muggles been killed by one?"

Evie seems oddly enthused by the idea, and Franziska resists inching away from her. "Er, well, I don't believe there have been any attacks in recent decades. There's a specific department in the Ministry that deals with magical beasts, and another one that erases Muggles' memories if they've seen something undeniably magical, or if their experience was traumatic."

"Is that the branch your mom works for?" Shaun has mostly been quiet, choosing to simply absorb Franziska's answers to whatever random topic Evie comes up with, but now he speaks up.

Franziska is surprised he'd remembered her mother's occupation. "Oh, no, she's employed by a different one. The Obliviators - that's what the people who erase Muggle's memories are called - work in Magical Law Enforcement, like my dad. My mom is with the Department of International Magical Cooperation."

Shaun nods quietly, and Evie latches onto the new information liked a starving dog to a bone.

"There's a Magical Law Enforcement? Are they like normal bobbies or is there some magical alternative?"

Before Evie can start explaining the intricacies and multiple branches of the department - which honestly she isn't terribly familiar with either - there's a knock on the compartment door.

"Anything from the trolley dears?"

Franziska immediately digs into her pockets for the money her mother gave her for snacks.

"Three chocolate frogs and a box of Bertie Bott's please!" She orders excitedly. Shaun and Evie look utterly confused, and Franziska suddenly realizes they've never had wizarding desserts before. Finn either, but he seems to have fallen asleep against the window and she doesn't want to wake him.

"Actually, can I also get some pumpkin pasties and two cauldron cakes?"

The trolley witch smiles and Franziska counts out five Sickles and sixteen Knuts to pay for the order. Once the sweets are handed over, she passes the cauldron cakes and two of the chocolate frogs to Evie and Shaun.

"Here. Start with these, and we can share the pasties and Bertie Bott's."

Shaun frowns. "How much do I owe you for this?"

Franziska shakes her head. "Don't worry about it, this stuff isn't that expensive, and you've never had it before. Consider this my way of welcoming you into our world."

As she speaks, Evie has opened her chocolate frog box. She releases a shriek as it jumps out and lands on the seat beside her.

"Oh careful! It'll run off if you let it!"

To her surprise Evie recovers quickly and snags the frog out of the air when it tries to make a break for the partially opened window. "Oh no you don't Mr Froggie! You're going in my tummy!" And with that she bites off the head.

"What on Earth did I miss?" Evie's momentary panic had awoken Finn from his doze, and he quirks an eyebrow up as he regards the other three.

Shaun looks a bit ill as he replies. "Um, Frannie got us some Wizarding sweets and Evie was surprised when hers moved..."

Evie grins and holds up the still twitching body of her now headless chocolate frog. "It tastes great though!" She declares as Shaun pales and glances down at his own chocolate frog box.

Finn catches the look. "I'll have it if you don't want it." He offers, and the box is handed to him in an instant while Shaun gingerly unwraps his cauldron cake and is clearly relieved when it remains stationary in his palm.

Franziska has consumed her own chocolate frog during the exchange, and now pulls out the trading card in the hopes it will be one she doesn't have yet.

"Yes!" She almost jumps out of her seat in excitement when she sees the witch that's gazing up at her from within the card. "Artemisia Lufkin! I don't have her yet!"

The other three are giving her funny looks, and she flushes slightly.

"Chocolate frog cards. They'll be in your boxes as well. They have famous witches and wizards on them and I've been trying to get a collection going, though I only have twenty three so far, counting the magical creature collection."

"So who's Artemisia Lufkin?" Shaun inquires politely around mouthfuls of cauldron cake while Finn and Evie check out their own cards.

"She was the first ever witch to be elected Minister of Magic in Britain and she was the first Minister of any magical government to establish the Department of International Magical Cooperation." She grins. "She was also a Hufflepuff like my mom, so she's kind of my hero."

"Sweet, my person is the actual evil queen!" Evie exclaims happily, waving around a card containing Malodor Grymm, the hag who had, in fact, inspired the story of Snow White.

Finn raises an eyebrow as he reads his. "Merlin." He laughs, and Franziska belatedly realizes that he's stating which card he's gotten rather than swearing. "It figures I'd get a card of someone I already know. I'm curious though," He looks over at Franziska. "How many of the Muggle legends, myths, and fairy tales are true, or based in more truth than we realize?"

Franziska shrugs. "Probably more than we know but less than you'd expect." She'd asked the same thing to her mother once and she rather likes that response. "Muggles are really quite imaginative. You don't seem need magic to still find fantastical things in the world."

Finn blinks once, and then smiles. "I think I rather like that outlook." He replies, pocketing his card and reaching for one of the pumpkin pasties.

The four continue chatting animatedly over snacks for another several hours, before a prefect raps on the door and reminds them to change into their robes before arrival. Shaun and Finn go to one of the bathrooms to change, and Franziska pulls the curtains shut over the window out into the corridor so she and Evie can switch clothes in private.

"How do I look?" Evie has perched her hat at a ridiculous angle on her head. "Ready for the witch trials?"

Franziska bursts out laughing and the boys return to find the two giggling intensely as Franziska chokes her way through a story about Wendelin the Weird and how she used to mess with Muggles by getting caught on purpose during the European witch burnings and then running off afterwards and doing it all over again.

The boys join the discussion, and although there's less than an hour until they reach the school, Franziska is significantly less worried than she had been when she'd first boarded the train that morning. As Evie snorts loudly at a story Finn is sharing, it's not hard to imagine that this year is going to work out just fine.

Seven hours proves exactly and hour longer than she needs to finish her book.

Ana had only put down the novel once throughout the trip, in order to exchange names with the other boy in the compartment - Alasdair Macmillan if she recalled correctly. Once those formalities were complete, he had been content to pull out his own reading material and fall silent.

With less than an hour left in the train ride, Ana doesn't mind that she's run out of distractions. She puts her book away and pulls out her robes.

"I'm going to change." She tells Alasdair quickly as she stands up and heads into the corridor.

She apparently hasn't been the only one with this idea, as there's a line for the loo. She frowns and steps up behind a girl nearly four inches shorter than her. The blonde immediately spins around with a blinding grin.

"Hi! I'm Evera!"

Ana has no interest in talking with this overly friendly stranger, so she simply smiles stiffly in response and then turns so her gazes passes right over Evera's head.

However Evera either doesn't notice the clear dismissal or misreads it as she continues chattering away. "Can you believe we're almost there? I can't wait to get Sorted! I mean, I already know I'll be in Gryffindor with my brother but it'll be great when it's made official! Gryffindor is the best House I think. What House do you want to be in?"

Ana has never been a very petty or vindictive person. So although she does briefly contemplate the idea of telling Evera that she intends to be in Slytherin, just to see the look on her face, she sighs and opts for honesty.

"Ravenclaw." She keeps her tone curt and her eyes facing forward.

Evera still isn't picking up on Ana's disinterest however and plows forward with the discussion. "I guess Ravenclaw is pretty good. I guess you're pretty smart then! Only super smart people go into Ravenclaw."

Ana is officially done with this conversation. "My family has all been in Slytherin though, so I'd be content there as well."

As predicted, that shuts Evera up in a heartbeat, and she awkwardly excuses herself and turns to talk with the person in front of her instead. Ana smiles to herself. You can always count on the age-old rivalry between Gryffindor and Slytherin to get out of conversations with over zealous members of either House.

She wonders what Evera will do if she's not in Gryffindor, but then she realizes that she doesn't actually care and returns to thinking about the theme of her book as she waits for her turn to change in the loo.

When she gets back to her compartment Alasdair has also changed into his robes, though his hat is set on the seat beside him.

"Long line?"

It's the first time he's spoken since the start of the ride, and his voice catches Ana off guard momentarily. "Oh, yes. There was a rather annoying girl standing in front of me. Insisted on trying to make conversation but stopped when she found out my family has a lot of Slytherins in it."

Alasdair nods as Ana sits back down. "I suppose she wouldn't like me much then either. Though mother says Ravenclaw would work just as well."

Ana tilts her head. "Same for me. Which would you prefer?" She's not sure what's prompting her to converse with her compartment mate all of a sudden, but perhaps Evera had shown her how valuable someone not completely annoying is.

Alasdair shrugs. "Either is fine I suppose. I'm not too keen on Hogwarts as a whole truth be told."

Ana nods. "Same here. I was supposed to go to Durmstrang but my mother insisted we move to London so I could go to Hogwarts."

Alasdair shrugs. "Mothers."

Ana could almost laugh. "Mothers." She agrees.

They sit in companionable silence for the remaining twenty minutes of the ride, and then the train is slowing down and students are starting to file into the corridors, and an announcement is telling them to leave their luggage on the train. Ana glances worriedly at Dracula, but he's fast asleep and she figures he'll be just fine.

By some unspoken agreement, Alasdair and Ana stick close to each other as they're jostled relentless in the scramble to get off the train. Finally Ana feels fresh air on her face and she hadn't realized how much she missed it until just this moment.

Then the moment passes and she hears a gruff voice loudly calling for the first years. She and Alasdair make their way towards where a giant of a man is standing, waving both hands as if his ridiculous height wasn't enough to get him noticed.

"Firs' years! Firs' years follow me! Any more firs' years? Oh, yep, alrigh' gather in now don' want ter leave anyone behind!" The man seems jovial enough but Ana can tell a few of the other students are a bit intimidated by his sheer size.

Once it seems all the first years have gathered - and it's really not a very large class, Ana notices - the beast of a man leads them along a different path than the one the older students had vanished down. It's a bit steep, a bit slippery, and a lot dark, and Ana feels someone grab her sleeve when they slip. She assumes it's Alasdair and opts to say nothing as the grip is released shortly afterwards.

"Now yeh'll get yer firs' sight o' Hogwarts in a sec." The man waves his lamp as he speaks, and Ana really wishes he wouldn't as it's their only light source at the moment.

However, not seconds later they turn a corner and there it is, rising up over a dark lake that stretches out in front of them, lit up against the night sky.

Ana has to admit, it's a rather breathtaking view. Hogwarts certainly knows how to introduce itself.

"No more 'n four to a boat!" The giant man ushers them all down to the edge of the lake, where a small fleet of little boats are floating by a small dock.

Ana and Alasdair are joined in their boat by one other boy, who cheerily introduces himself as Aidan Ward but is thankfully too awed by the sight of the school to try and make any small talk as the boats take off at a command from the giant and glide across the water, seemingly of their own accord.

Ana loses interest in the growing impression of the castle against the sky and turns her eyes to the reflection of the stars in the water. She strains to see if she can make out the Giant Squid she knows dwells in the depths of the lake, or perhaps a few merpeople, but only her own reflection gazes back, eyes dark and braids brushing dangerously close to the water.

"Heads down!"

Ana's head nearly goes up when their guide speaks again, but she catches herself and stays low as the boats glide through a curtain of ivy. Once again the lantern is their only source of light, and when the boats bump against another shore there are several exclamations of surprise.

"Alrigh' then, careful there, watch your step. This way!"

They follow the man up a passage that lets them out onto a wide expanse of grass, right in the shadow of the castle.

Up close it's almost menacing, and everyone hurries to follow the light of the lantern up the stone steps leading to the grand front door of the school.

"Everyone here?" The giant waves the lantern over their heads to double check and then, satisfied that no one had been lost along the way, raps heavily on the great wooden door three times.

It swings open almost instantly and Ana is nearly blinded by the sudden light they're bathed in. Standing in front of them is a black haired witch clothed in emerald robes. She looks rather like someone Ana would not like to cross, and that instantly makes her like the woman.

"The firs' years Professor McGonagall."

She nods the the man. "Thank you Hagrid, I'll take it from here."

The man - Hagrid - nods back and ambles off into the darkness, leaving the first years with Professor McGonagall.

She doesn't say a word but the group follows her obediently nonetheless to a small chamber on the side of the grand entrance hall. It's a bit too small to house the full class, but they manage to cram in somehow.

Ana finds herself pressed against a wall in an attempt to find some sort of personal space. She's lost Alasdair in the commotion and she's a bit disappointed at the idea that they might not see each other again until classes if they're Sorted to different Houses.

Professor McGonagall has managed to make her way to the front of the room and clears . It's not loud, but everyone immediately quiets down.

Yes, Ana quite likes this woman.

"Welcome to Hogwarts." Ana can tell McGonagall has given this speech several times from the ease in which it's delivered. "The start-of-term banquet will begin shortly. But before you take your seats in the great hall, you will be Sorted in to your houses. The Sorting is a very important ceremony, because, while you are here, your house will be something like your family within Hogwarts. You will have classes with the rest of your house, sleep in your house dormitory, and spend free time in your house common room.

"The four houses are called Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin. Each house has its own noble history and each has produced outstanding witches and wizards. While you are at Hogwarts, your triumphs will earn your house points, while any rule-breaking will lose house points. At the end of the year, the house with the most points will be awarded the House Cup, a great honor. I hope each of you will be a credit to whichever house becomes yours.

"The Sorting Ceremony will take place in a few minutes in front of the rest of the school. I suggest you all smarten yourselves up as much as you can while you are waiting."

Her eyes sweep over the group of nearly-mute eleven year olds before she strides out of the room.

Immediately the room erupts into chatter.

"What's the Sorting Ceremony going to be like do you reckon?"

"I hear it hurts!"

"If I'm not in Gryffindor I'm pretty sure my parents will disown me..."

Ana presses herself further against the wall and closes her eyes. Despite reading about Hogwarts, she doesn't know what the Sorting Ceremony entails either. It's a right of passage, one author had said, to enter the Sorting Ceremony completely blind.

She'd feel a lot better without the right of passage quite frankly.

After what feels like a lot longer than Ana is sure it actually was, McGonagall returns and herds them back across the entrance hall, instructing them to form a line before she opens the doors and they begin filing into what Ana assumes must be the Great Hall.

She looks up to the enchanted ceiling, and stars twinkle down at her. A few clouds drift idly but they're thin and sparse, leaving a mostly clear sky. Floating lanterns light up the hall and paint everyone's faces in shadow. Four long tables serve as the room's central focus, and the first years are directed between the center two.

Ana glances to her left and spies the silver and blue ties of Ravenclaw. Hopefully she'll be sitting there before the night is over.

Glancing back to the front of the room, she's surprised to see a plain wooden stool sitting at the front of the room, atop which is a ratty old wizard's hat.

The whole hall is rigidly silent for a long moment, and then all at once the hat bursts into song.

For centuries students come to me,
Upon my stool they sit,
I look into their minds to find
The house where best they fit.

If nerves of steel and chivalry
Are what your heart embrace,
Then I will know that Gryffindor
Is where you'll find your place.

But if your mind is curious
And wisdom is aswarm,
Then Ravenclaw's the place for you
Where you can best perform.

If hard work and loyalty
Are traits that you hold dear,
I'll send you off to Hufflepuff
Where friends are always near.

Or perhaps your values
Are cunning and ambition,
Then Slytherin's the greatest place
To help complete your mission.

So come to me and put me on,
I'll see what's in your head.
But before we can begin
One last thing must be said.

Although there is some difference
Between these houses fair,
They all are part of Hogwarts,
Of this please be aware.

No one house is greater
Than any of the rest.
So with that said come put me on,
We'll see which fits you best.

The hat falls silent, looking once again like a filthy thing you might find in the trash, and the room bursts into applause.

Ana applauds as well, politely, as McGonagall steps forward holding a long roll of parchment.

"When I call your name, you will put on the hat and sit on the stool to be sorted." She unrolls the scroll and begins. "Abbott, Tyler."

A scrawny blond boy awkwardly hurries to the front of the line and plops down onto the stool. The hat has barely brushed his hair when it loudly declares, "HUFFLEPUFF."

Tyler glances at one of the other first years as he walks over to the cheering Hufflepuff table and takes a seat.

Ana sighs as she realizes this will be in last name order as "Ashburner, Cadfael" is called up next. And as a Vulchanova, that means her name is going to be right at the end.

It takes the hat a few seconds longer to decide to send Cadfael to Slytherin, and Ana nearly sighs again when she realizes the time for each sorting won't be as quick as Tyler's had been.

"Boot, Jerome" is sent off to Ravenclaw, though there's even more hesitation on the hat's part this time.

"Cadwallader, Myrddin!"

If only she'd been a Burke. A Burke would have been the fourth person called. She mentally braces herself as Myrddin continues to sit on the stool far longer than any of the three before him. This is going to take a while.

'Hmph, you are a tricky one aren't you?'

Having a voice in his head that's not his own is possibly one of the most disconcerting things Myr has ever experienced in his short time being alive.

'Well trust me, this is the least of it.' The Hat sounds distinctly amused. 'Now then, back to your Sorting. You're quite a difficult one kid. Very clever, that's for certain, and with a real love for order. That would serve you well in Ravenclaw. But there's also a strong loyalty and devotion to your friends and family that could be fostered well in Hufflepuff.'

Either is fine. Could you please hurry, everyone is probably impatient-

'This determines the rest of your life kid. Trust me you don't want me to rush. There's a lot of potential in you and any of it could serve you well in each of the houses.'

Myr chews lightly on the inside of his cheek. True, he wouldn't want the hat to rush such an important decision. But the first three boys had been sorted very quickly and he's feeling a bit self-conscious about how long he's obviously taking.

'Happens a lot with Muggleborns. No expectations, no bias except what's been cultivated on the train.' The hat offers.

Myr wants to sigh. He's not technically Muggleborn, he just has a deadbeat for a dad.

The hat goes quiet for a while, but Myr swears he can feel it poking around in his head and he really doesn't like the sensation.

'Cyril Greengrass hm? I remember him. Strong Slytherin but was determined to go to Gryffindor with some kid he met on the train. We argued about it for a good four minutes.'

Myr can see that being something his Uncle would do. He smiles slightly at the thought of his eleven year old uncle stubbornly arguing to change his entire future just so he could sit with someone.

'It was the right choice. I woudn't have bothered with the argument if it wasn't. But tell me, what's the right choice for you? Who do you want to become?'

Myr doesn't know. His mind swirls - and suddenly the hat isn't in his head anymore.

"GRYFFINDOR!"

He blinks. Apparently somewhere in the mess his brain had conjured, the hat had found it's answer. He puts it back on the stool and walks over to the far right table. One of the older students claps him on the back in greeting as "Cassidy, Kiera" takes to the stool - and is immediately sent to Hufflepuff.

"How rare is it for the hat to take that long?" He asks the boy sitting next to him.

The red head grins. "Not unheard of, but for a second there I thought you might be a hatstall! Hasn't been one of those in over a decade." He offers a handshake as behind them "Davies, Henry" also joins the ever increasing number of new Hufflepuffs. "I'm Bill Weasley by the way, third year. My little brother Charlie's in your year, and with luck your roommate too."

Myr returns the handshake. "What's a hatstall?"

Bill's eyes return to the Sorting as he responds. "It's when the hat takes more than five minutes to decide on a placement. More people than you'd think get pretty close but normally it doesn't take more than a minute to sort."

Myr doens't get a chance to respond as "Jarvis, Drake" becomes the second new Gryffindor, prompting the table to break out into cheers. Myr claps politely as well as Drake takes the seat across from him.

"Congratulations. Welcome to the best house." Bill grins. Behind them "Jones, Evie" is sent to Ravenclaw before the hat has even covered her eyes.

Drake returns it with a cocky one of his own, but before he can reply "Kiddell, Holly" is sorted into Gryffindor almost as quickly as the girl before her and they have to stop and applaud as she joins them.

Holly high fives one of the older girls already sitting at the table before dropping herself down next to Myrddin.

"Hey, I'm Holly." She has to raise her voice at the end of the introduction to be heard over Ravenclaw's cheers as "Kingsley, Amelia" joins them.

"Myrddin." He replies. "Nice to meet you."

"Likewise!" Holly doesn't seem interested in pausing the conversation, even as they applaud "McKay, Fiona" joining the table. "The hat considered putting me in Hufflepuff, but it saw reason in the end."

"Is Gryffindor better than Hufflepuff?" Myr frowns.

Holly shakes her head. "Not technically, but I was hoping I'd be here. My sister is after all!" She nods to the teen she'd high fived earlier.

The girls turns and grins. "Laurel Kiddell, new Captain of the Quidditch team." She introduces herself after another boy joins the Gryffindor table.

"Hopefully a better one than Everly." Bill adds. "We've been on a losing streak the past couple years."

Laurel puffs up. "Wait and see kid. I'll bring in the Cup for the next three years for sure!" She leans closer to be heard over the cheering of the other houses as the Sorting continues behind them. "I need a lot of new people though, Everly was bad at knowing who was good. You're going to tryout again this year, right Bill?"

Bill shrugs. "I'm not sure. I do like the game but I don't know if I could commit to playing for the rest of my time at Hogwarts."

Laurel shrugs. "Eh, I don't need you forever, but you're a good Chaser and we definitely need those this year."

Myr tunes out of the discussion, honestly lost. Drake and Holly are both engrossed in it however, so he turns to one of the other Gryffindor first years.

"So um, Remi, right? I'm Myr."

The brunet grins. "Yup! Remi Longbottom at your service, best first year in Gryffindor."

Myr blinks. "But... we haven't all been Sorted yet..." He's already somewhat regretting his decision to talk to Remi, but there's no backing out now.

Thankfully someone else - he didn't hear who - is Sorted into Gryffindor and they have to stop and applaud. This breaks up the discussion to his right, and Remi is distracted trying to talk to the new girl.

Myr turns back to Holly. "So, um-" Before he can really start a sentence though the hat sends yet another person to Gryffindor. "Lots of new Gryffindors at the end of the alphabet I guess."

Holly laughs. "I suppose so."

The new girl immediately starts talking to Drake so Myr decides to keep chatting with Holly. "So I guess you must know a lot about Hogwarts if you have an older sister here."

She grins. "Two actually! Willow is in Ravenclaw though."

Myr tilts his head. "So what's the difference?"

Holly blinks. "Between here and Ravenclaw? I dunno, we're more fun I guess." She grins. "Ravenclaws would say they're smarter but I don't buy it personally." She lights up suddenly. "Hey! You should show me your wand!"

Laurel snorts loudly right as "Ward, Aidan" is sent to Hufflepuff, and she receives a few glares from the applauding table.

Myr glances at Laurel in confusion, and then pulls out the wand his uncle had given him a few days before.

Holly studies it, and then proudly declares, "Chestnut with a unicorn hair core, right?"

Myr blinks. "Um, maybe? Can you usually tell that stuff?"

Holly gives him an incredulous look. "Wait, how do you not know? Didn't Ollivander tell you?"

Myr raises an eyebrow. "Who? My uncle gave me this as a birthday gift."

Holly stares at him for a long moment before giving the most over dramatic sigh Myr has ever heard come out of a person. Before she can speak the hat announces another new Gryffindor, and next to Myr, Bill whistles.

They're joined by a red head who wriggles in to sit between Bill and Myr.

"Way to go Charlie." Bill grins, and Charlie returns the gesture. Two seconds later "Young, Brandon", the last person to be sorted, joins them, sitting next to Drake and his friend.

McGonagall carries out the hat and stool, and behind her an old wizard stands, his beard so long the tip is still hidden beneath the table.

The room falls silent, even the Gryffindor table which had been murmuring for most of the Sorting.

"Now I know we're all rather hungry, but a few words must be said before we begin. First years, please avoid the Forbidden Forest. It's called Forbidden for a reason. And with that said, let the Feast begin!"

Myr nearly leaps out of his seat as the once empty goblets and platters adorning the table suddenly fill themselves with food.

"I like Dumbledore. Always keeps the speech short." Bill says approvingly as he helps himself to a rather large heaping of food.

Myr uncertainly puts a bit on his plate, and as the magically appearing food doesn't seem to be having any negative side effects on anyone else he begins eating. He is admittedly rather hungry.

A few minutes into dinner Holly rounds on him, clearly having remember that she was upset about his wand. "You! You have a hand me down wand! Don't your parents know that's neglectful? Everyone should have their own wand that's especially attached to them! An inherited wand won't work nearly as well." She waves blindly across the table, pointing at no one in particular. "You! Show me your wand!"

Drake's blonde friend has hers pulled out in a second. "Me?"

Holly shrugs. "Sure! Alright lemme see..." She takes a bit longer to place the blonde's wand than she had Myr's, but after a moment she proudly declares, "Maple with a unicorn hair core!"

The girl looks impressed. "Hey yeah! How'd you do that?"

Holly isn't finished. "You like new experiences right? And meeting new people?"

The girl blinks. "Wow. That is super cool." She grins. "I'm Evera by the way. I can't remember your names."

Myr and Holly both introduce themselves, as does Drake, who asks if Holly can guess his wand as well.

His doesn't take as long as Evera's. "Fir with a dragon heartstring core. You aren't afraid to get loud if something is important to you."

Drake gives a low whistle and moment later the rest of the first years are demanding Holly read their wands as well. Down the table Laurel looks incredibly proud.

Myr shrinks a bit in his seat, wishing he'd sat further from Holly so he wouldn't be so caught up in the center of the chaos. He idly runs a finger along his own wand, wondering if Holly is right and that it won't do magic for him. What will he do if he has a wand that doesn't work? Will he be sent home?

Charlie seems to pick up on his distress. "Hey, don't sweat it. Lots of people use hand-me-down wands for a while. Most wands will work for other owners, and you can get your own later on no problem."

Myr smiles at him. "Thanks. This whole thing with magic is pretty new to me." He admits.

Charlie grins. "Well you'll learn fast! And if you have any questions you can totally ask me or Bill." He adds.

His brother glances over, opens his mouth, and then shrugs and returns to conversing with his own friends.

Charlie nods. "Yup, just ask Bill. Actually wait, make a point to ask Bill. Hunt him down if you must!"

"You're an Ash wand aren't you?" Holly seems to have disentangled herself from the other first years and is now leaning on the table so she can look at Charlie around Myr's head.

Charlie looks surprised. "Dang, you are good. Holly wasn't it? You related to Ollivander?"

That sets her off on a five minute rant about there being more wandmakers in London than just Ollivander and honestly that man is overrated. Myr awkwardly glances across the table in hopes he can find someone to talk to who isn't a bit barmy.

He makes eye contact with a brunet boy who's looking quite amused by the conversation. Brandon, if he remembers correctly.

He double checks, and Brandon grins.

"Yep, that's me. You're Myrddin right? No offense mate but that's kind of a weird name."

Myrddin shrugs. "It's Welsh. Most people just call me Myr. So um, are you American?" He can't resist asking - Brandon's accent is very clearly from across the pond and it's going to bother Myr if he doesn't find out more.

Brandon nods, frowning. "Yeah, I was supposed to go to Ilvermorny but my stupid dad moved us out here. No offense to you guy or anything but Hogwarts isn't nearly as cool as Ilvermorny. I really wish dad hadn't moved us." There's an underlying bitterness to the words that Myr doesn't really get a chance to notice before Charlie barges into the conversation.

"No offense? How is that not offensive Brandon, Hogwarts is the greatest and you sully it's name as it welcomes you into it's halls!"

Brandon can only laugh and shrug, and Myr realizes that the two already know each other from the complete ease with which they're speaking.

"Probably shared a compartment." Holly notes from beside him. It seems the world is determined to make him speak with her as his other conversation routes keep getting derailed, so he turns to face her once again.

"Everyone in my compartment ended up in different houses. Like literally, there were four of us and we each went to one of the four houses! Kind of crazy." She grins over at him.

Myr shrugs. "I suppose. I didn't really talk with anyone in my compartment. I'm not sure they were even first years." He admits. It had been a long and nerve-wracking trip to be honest, and he isn't really looking forward to having to do it again at Christmas.

Holly pats his shoulder consolingly. "I'll sit with you on the ride back, okay? Then you won't be bored!"

Maybe not bored, but the idea of being trapped in a box for seven hours with Holly Kiddell is a terrifying one.

But perhaps it wouldn't be terrible. And if there's one thing for certain, his time at Hogwarts isn't going to be boring in the least.

Rajani isn't quite sure how to feel about everything that's happened.

The train ride over had been spent alone in a compartment after her sister had rushed off to sit with the other prefects. She'd naturally taken to reading some of her school texts to pass the time, and she'd let her owl Lakshmi out of her cage for a bit so she could stretch her wings.

The trip to the castle itself had been interesting. She'd shared a boat with three others who clearly already knew each other and had effectively cut her out of any conversation they were having. She didn't mind too much - they were rather loud, and if she remembers correctly two of them had gone off to Gryffindor in the end so she doubted they'd have gotten along. But the view of the castle had truly been spectacular from across the water, so that was nice.

The Sorting ceremony was a bit surprising - Sahana had never told her what it would require and honestly wearing a hat was not what she was expecting in the least - but she was proud that she'd been Sorted to Slytherin in under twenty seconds. The hat had mumbled something about Hufflepuff but it clearly saw reason in the end.

Now the Feast is in full swing and Rajani has found herself in a rather awkward position, squished between two other first years who's names she honestly can't remember and who aren't speaking to her anyway. She picks at her food rather primly as the rest of the room buzzes with conversation and she wonders if she ought to be the one doing the talking, if no one plans on talking to her.

Her dilemma resolves itself when the girl sitting next to her finishes a conversation with a blond boy and turns to face Rajani.

"Hello, I'm Queenie Shacklebolt." She holds out her hand and Rajani politely returns the gesture. "Rajani Misra right? My older brother is in the year below your sister. He says she's a very good student. I look forward to working together."

Rajani nearly smiles. Queenie is exactly like all the children she's had to entertain in the past during her parents' dinners, so this is something she knows how to handle.

"I've heard excellent things about the Shacklebolt family myself, though I'm afraid Sahana has never mentioned your brother." There, just the right amount of regret and sophistication. Her mother would be proud.

Across the table someone groans. "Ugh, cut that out you two, we're still kids! We can be stuffy and lame later, let's enjoy the food first!" The speaker is female, and she's speaking around a mouthful of chicken.

Rajani can see her disgust mirrored by Queenie out of the corner of her eye.

"Swallow before you choke." Queenie sniffs slightly.

The girl does so, grinning unabashedly. "I'm Clary Travers by the way. Guess we'll be dorm mates for the next seven years!"

"Lovely." Queenie sighs. "I suppose it's unavoidable. Travers you said?"

Clary nods cheerfully, heaping more food onto her plate as she does, and Rajani feels a bit ill just watching. So she turns away and reverts to her original plan - initiate a conversation with someone else.

Anyone else.

The boy to her right isn't speaking to anybody so she decides to chance it. "Um, hello. I'm Rajani."

He looks up, ascertaining that he is in fact the one being spoken to, and then gives a stiff smile. "Alasdair. Rajani is a bit of a mouthful."

She blinks. "Well, most people call me Raj." She offers, unsure of what exactly to make of Alasdair's bluntness. "So... did you want to be in Slytherin?"

"My mom wanted me to." He replies evenly, and Rajani bites down lightly on her tongue. It's like talking to a brick wall. But she perseveres - she's been trapped in conversation with people like Alasdair before - it's better than having to watch Clary stuff herself silly.

"It's a family house then?" She prompts. Find common ground, that's always the best way to start.

He shrugs. "On my mom's side sure. My dad was one but most of his family are Hufflepuffs."

Well drat. "Oh, um, I'm sorry?" She never knows how to speak of Hufflepuff. She sees nothing wrong with the house herself, but she knows some people who consider it the worst of the four. She can't quite remember Alasdair's last name so she isn't sure in which direction his bias skews.

He rolls his eyes. "I don't care." For a hopeful moment Rajani thinks he'll say more, but instead he once again falls silent and she groans internally.

"Do you care about anything?" The voice joining the conversation is bitingly accusatory, and for all the frustration Alasdair has dredged up within her over the course of a minute, this one question assures Rajani that whoever the speaker is, she's not going to like him very much.

"Sure. I care about football. But that's not something I can do here so." Alasdair on the other hand seems rather unphased by the open hostility.

Rajani and the rude boy both frown.

"What in Merlin's name is football?" The boy's tone remains sarcastic, but he does seem genuinely confused. Rajani wonders if being caustic is simply his default.

Alasdair sighs and shakes his head. "A Muggle sport. You wouldn't be aware of it. Ashburner, right? My parents talk about yours sometimes." His tone isn't overtly rude but there's a definite hint that nothing particularly nice is said about the Ashburners.

Rajani can tell that this nettles the other boy and he pointedly turns back to his plate. Alasdair does the same.

Rajani resigns herself to eating the rest of her meal in silence, choosing to instead observe her housemates rather than try and engage anyone in any more awkward conversations.

Queenie has moved on from Clary and is chatting once again with the blond boy, who Rajani now recognizes as Eugene Slughorn. Her parents have never much liked the Slughorns, but they're one of the few Pureblood families that still deign to have contact with the Misra family after the war, so Eugene's is a face she'd seen a few times before.

Across from him are two girls talking to each other in low tones and throwing suspicious glances down the table every so often, who look about as willing to open up and make friends as Alasdair or Ashburner.

But beside them is a boy. He isn't anything spectacular really and Rajani isn't surprised that she hasn't noticed him up until this point. He's listening politely as Clary rattles on about something or other, full of course, but Rajani can tell he's not really listening. He glances her way briefly and she gives him a small nod.

When Clary finishes her story the boy turns fully to her. "I don't think we've been introduced yet. I'm Lennox McLeod."

"Rajani Misra." She replies. "I'd offer a handshake but-" She gestures at the large amount of food separating them and he nods.

"Understandable. Did I hear you mention a family history in Slytherin?"

Lennox, as it turns out, is an excellent conversationalist. The two spend nearly thirty minutes discussing house politics, and they're joined by an over eager Queenie about half way through, before moving on to more general topics concerning classes and spell theory. They lose Queenie for a while when discussing details of the first few chapters of 'A History of Magic' but she's back when they switch to Defense Against the Dark Arts.

"I hear the teaching position is cursed." Queenie informs them proudly. "Kingsley says that they get a new Defense teacher every single year."

Rajani nods. "They have since Sahana started here anyway. She thinks the curse is silly though. Just bad luck and a tough position."

Queenie shrugs. "If it helps her sleep at night. I think it's well in the Dark Lord's power to have cursed the position. He was incredibly powerful you know." She makes a face. "Not that I like him. He ruined Slytherin's reputation and that really bothers me."

Rajani raises an eyebrow. "I suppose he made it worse with Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff, but Gryffindor has always been annoyingly superior." She offers with a small grin.

Lennox and Queenie both grin back, and Clary barks out a laugh, startling the other three who hadn't realized she'd been listening in.

"Preach sister. Those lions are in need of being taken down a peg or two." She holds up a glass of fizzing cider in a toast, which Queenie cheerfully joins in.

Lennox shrugs and hold up his glass as well, and Rajani figures it can't hurt anything so she lifts her goblet in solidarity.

The Feast is wrapped up by Dumbledore shortly after, and in an instant Sahana has stood up - she'd been at the opposite end of the table from Rajani - and begins calling for the first years. A few other prefects join the call further down the table, and Rajani finds herself following one of them instead, along with most of the first years she'd been speaking with.

"Alright, this way firsties. We're down in the dungeons so we have the shortest walk with the fewest stairs to deal with." The prefect they're following sounds quite proud of this fact, though Rajani isn't sure how she feels about living in the dungeons for seven years. She'd much rather be able to see the sky herself.

"Kingsley says the common room is amazing." Queenie informs her as they walk. Queenie has informed her about many things concerning her older brother Kingsley, and Rajani is admittedly getting a little tired hearing about him.

"I'm sure." She replies respectfully nonetheless.

They follow the stocky boy down two flights of stairs until they reach a stretch of bare stone wall. It's a bit chilly and damp, and Rajani's uncertainty about her new home increases despite Queenie's assurance.

"Alright, everyone shush. I'm only saying the password once, and if you don't have it then you're gonna be stuck in the hallways until you find someone who does know it. So I'd listen up now if I were you." The prefect's voice echoes in the passageway and the crowd quiets down immediately.

The prefect taps his wand briefly on the stone wall. "Orior"

"Odd password." Queenie notes as the wall folds away to reveal a corridor behind it.

"Latin I believe." A boy offers from her other side. "I'm not sure what it means though."

Queenie glances over at him in surprise. "Oh, well, I suppose that would make sense then. Most spells have roots in Latin after all."

"Do they?" The boy is clearly intrigued by this information, and Rajani realizes he's not familiar with the wizarding world. Latin in spells is common knowledge, even among half-bloods and Gryffindors.

"Are you Muggleborn?" It's a rude question really, but she'd heard that Slytherin house almost never has Muggleborns so she's honestly startled by the realization.

The boy is unaffected by her outburst. "I'm not sure. I was adopted by Muggles but my birth parents were perhaps magical."

Well that is a rather interesting - and depressing - situation. "I'm sorry to hear that."

He shrugs. "I'm not. My parents are excellent."

Rajani doesn't have a chance to formulate a response as they reach the end of the corridor and enter the Slytherin common room.

And Queenie was right - it's absolutely beautiful. There are high-backed ebony chairs with green silk cushions and emerald tapestries depicting great battles in silver thread strung across the arched ceiling. Portraits of great witches and wizards, all Slytherins, wave from the walls and the entire room is bathed in light from several green-tinted lanterns floating along the walls. Rajani can see large windows directly across from them, and though they're currently pitch black she swears she can make out someone peering in from the other side.

"Alright firsties, gather in, let's lay down some ground rules." The stocky prefect waves to get everyone's attention. Rajani can see the older years filing away down two side corridors, likely to their dorm rooms, and soon only the first years and the six Slytherin prefects are left in the common room.

The stocky boy waits to make sure he has everyone's attention, and then begins to speak.

"Alright firsties, first things first. Password changes every fortnight so check the notice board regularly." He gestures to a board behind them, which they all turn to look at dutifully.

"Never tell anyone the password, and don't let anyone from the other houses into our common room. This should be common sense but I'm warning you regardless.

"Now, the second things to do is memorize the faces in front of you. These are your prefects." Rajani spots Sahana straighten her posture ever so slightly as the first years turn back around to look at the six older students in the common room with them.

"If you're ever lost or need help, these should be the first people you come to. If you can't find a prefect for whatever reason, then look for anyone wearing silver and green. One thing you'll learn quickly is that in Slytherin house, we look out for our own. This house is your family while you're here, and we will always have each other's backs no matter what. Remember that if you ever find yourself in trouble." His voice is solemn, and Rajani believes him. Sahana has always talked about how close the house is, and it's something Rajani has been looking forward to.

The prefect seems to have reached the end of his speech, as he nods to the other prefects.

"Alright then, girls to the left and boys to the right. The prefects will show you which rooms are yours, and your trunks will be there already. Breakfast is at eight o'clock so don't be late."

Rajani and the four other girls follow the female prefects down the left hand hallway. Sahana is the one to point out their rooms, but she's gone before Rajani can try to tak to her.

"Aw man, they already chose our beds for us!" Clary sounds highly disappointed. "I wanted to be by the window."

"Do you want to switch? Being close to the lake like this squicks me out honestly." One of the two girls who Rajani hasn't formally met yet offers with a smile, and Clary grins.

"Really? Thanks! I'm Clary by the way."

"Calligenia, but please just call me Callie or Nia. Calligenia is so... ugh." She makes a face. "My parents hated me, clearly."

Queenie snickers from where she's rummaging around in her trunk. "Girl, tell me about it. My name is Queen. What was my mom tripping on?"

"Whatever it was it must have been going around. Her parents had the brilliant idea to call her Elspeth." Nia playfully nudges the girl she'd been speaking with during the Feast, but she's unceremoniously pushed away as said girl finally speaks up.

"I don't mind it that much." She mutters.

Rajani smiles at her. "It's a nice name. Very Slytherin."

"What about you?" Nia prompts, and Raj glances over to her.

"Rajani, though I usually go by Raj."

Nia grins. "So everyone's parents except Clary's clearly had it out for their kids." She jokes.

Raj is still smiling when they finally settle down for the night. For all her worrying on the train and during the Feast, her dorm mates are all really nice, and she can easily see herself having a great time in school with them.

She drifts to sleep, lulled by the water lapping gently at the window by her bed, and happily dreams of the coming days.

School is looking quite promising.

I did FANTASTIC on my project presentation yesterday so in celebration I gave myself the morning off from studying for finals to edit. And so here's chapter two! I'll post the official list of who's in which House on Sunday to give everyone time to read the chapter without spoilers ^^ I hope everyone is doing well and that you aren't too overwhelmed with projects and exams! And if anyone wants to know how long their character's Sorting was and which Houses they were considered for, I'm happy to share! Each Sorting is based on how long or short it actually took me to Sort them.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2452 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!