Chapter Thirty

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
New and Old

After the date with Ed (during which they did buy all her new school supplies in addition to a few extras), the rest of Rajani's summer is spent in bouts of intense boredom broken up by the occasional letters from her friends.

By the time September first arrives she's about ready to burst. Her homework had been completed weeks before, and even Sahana's OWL textbooks have done as much as they can without Rajani actually understanding the last bits of theory or being able to practice anything practically.

So it's a relief to push her trolley through the barrier between Platforms nine and ten and hurry through the bustling platform to the train.

Her parents had just dropped her off out front at her insistence, "I'm a prefect now, so I need to look professional and adult so the first years will trust me.", so she's able to immediately look for Ed, who'd promised to meet her on the platform and show her where the Prefects' car is.

She doesn't spot her boyfriend right away, but she does run into Lenox and Clary, who are standing on the platform with their parents.

Clary waves at her cheerfully. "Hey Raj." She greets once Rajani is close enough to hear her over the bustle of the platform. "Mom, Dad, this is Rajani, she's the one I covered for last month. How was the date?" She grins teasingly and Rajani feels a faint stab of jealousy at how relaxed and playful Clary seems to be with her parents.

"It was fantastic, thanks for asking. Also as the new prefect I'm pretty sure I can take points for sassing me."

Clary laughs. "Oh good, so glad power hasn't gone to your head." She teases.

"Did you have a good summer?" Lenox adds, resting a hand lightly on Clary's shoulder in a clear indication for her to reign it in slightly. She leans lightly into the touch.

Rajani shrugs. "It had... ups and downs. Mostly a lot of flat if I'm honest. I get why Sahana moved out as quickly after graduation as she did, that house is stifling."

"Speaking of stifling, we should get to the prefects' car before all the good seats are snagged." A familiar voice adds, and Rajani grins as she turns.

"Ed!" She hugs him and greets him with a kiss that may or may not be more enthusiastic than it strictly needs to be.

"Missed you too Raj. Hey Clary, Lenox. Cute outfits, did you match on purpose?"

The two blush slightly, and Rajani can't believe she didn't notice that her friends were dressed in the same colors. She laughs.

"It is cute, but really guys?" She can't help but tease.

Clary sticks her tongue out. "More efficient than trying to off his face every time someone new comes by to announce his taken status."

Lenox turns bright red and Rajani can feel her own cheeks warming but she refuses to be too embarrassed by her public display of affection from a few moments before. "You're just jealous. I'll see you guys at school, yeah?"

She and Ed head towards the front of the train, pushing their trolleys ahead of them.

"So you already told me you didn't make Head Boy, but do you have any idea who did? They're in charge of coordinating all the prefects, right?" Rajani questions once they reach the front and Ed starts hauling their trunks onto the train.

"I mean, I figure it's probably Bill and Willow, but who knows? You don't have to be a Prefect to be made Head Boy or Girl so it could be literally anyone from our year, and I don't know anyone from the other Houses well enough to judge if any of them is better for the role."

Rajani raises an eybrow as she steps onto the train, taking their pets' carriers while Ed struggles to drag the trunks along. "Really? That seems a bit odd, but I suppose it makes sense. People can mature between fifteen and seventeen." She muses. "Still, how often does that actually happen?"

"Once every couple of decades is how I understand it." Ed offers. "Dunno when the last time was though, so I couldn't give an actual statistical number or anything." He nods at one of the compartment. "This is it. Welcome to the biggest compartment on the train."

Rajani is actually rather impressed by the prefect compartment once she's able to peer around her boyfriend and get a proper look at it.

It's most notably incredibly roomy inside, with space for all the prefects and then some. Ed gets help from the male Hufflepuff prefect from his year, and the two of them swap easy grins once the job is done and Ed returns to Rajani, who's hovering near the doorway, feeling a bit awkward and invasive. She notes that she's the first one from her year to have arrived - everyone else seems to already know each other.

Ed places a hand lightly on the small of her back and nudges her into the room. "Willow, this is my girlfriend." He announces to one of the three Ravenclaws huddled around an Exploding Snap deck.

The ravenette not playing glances up and grins. "Hey, I've heard things about you. Welcome to the club. Leave your bias at the door and we'll get on great." She swings her legs around and offers a handshake. "Willow Kiddell, Head Girl and I think you probably know my little sister Holly, she's hard to miss."

"I have a vague recollection of someone yelling about wand wood during some of our first year classes." Rajani confirms dryly and accepts the proferred greeting, shaking firmly. "And as long as everyone else leaves the bias we'll be good."

Willow sighs. "Workable. Well, make yourself comfortable, socialize, these are the people you'll be working with for the next year so I'd recommend finding something to talk about with them."

"I'll introduce her." Ed says quickly, pulling Rajani along with him. Willow waves a few fingers at their departure and turns back to the Exploding Snap game.

"So that was Willow, like she said. The two she was with were John, seventh year Ravenclaw prefect, and Iris, one of the seventh year Hufflepuff prefects. Adrian was the other seventh year from Hufflepuff, he helped with the bags." He nods to the broad brunet in reminder. "He's pretty chill, real fun to patrol with. You're more likely to be with the fifth or sixth years though."

"Hey Ed, this one of the new snakes?" A curious voice questions from the entrance of the carriage. Rajani vaguely recognizes the boy standing in the doorway, his trunk gripped in one hand as he twists rather awkwardly to try and keep the hold while also addressing Ed.

Ed grins. "Yep, this is my girlfriend Rajani. Raj this is Trevor, sixth year Slytherin."

"AKA the one you want to be paired with for patrols." Trevor says, a wicked grin on his face. "Nice to meet you Raj." He finally gives up on his trunk and sweeps into a low bow, taking Rajani's hand and kissing the back of it. She can't help but laugh.

"Nice to meet you Trevor." She affects a curtsey once he's stood up again. Ed pulls her pointedly against his side once she's straightened up, and she grins at the slight show of possessiveness.

"Where's Lucy? She's usually one of the first in." Trevor observes to Ed, who just shrugs.

"Probably upset about not getting Head Girl, you know how she is. What about Gabi?"

Rajani figures those must be the other female Slytherins they're expecting. She lets the two boys chat a bit as she looks around the compartment for anyone she recognizes. The only other fifth year present are the two Ravenclaws, whose names Rajani honestly can't remember and who are keeping to themselves in one of the corners of the car.

Ed points out a few other people - Bill Weasley from Gryffindor, Tabitha from Hufflepuff, and Terrence from Ravenclaw - but they all blend together for Rajani and she figures she'll learn their faces during the year.

Eventually everyone else arrives just in time for the train to start moving, and Willow and Bill shoo everyone into their seats.

"Alright guys, we'll try to make this as quick and painless as possible so you all can get changed and start patrols." Bill grins easily.  "First of all, I'm going to clear up the misconception that as Prefects you can do whatever you like - that's not true. Disappointing, I know." He jokes and the Hufflepuff prefects from Rajani's year laugh.

Willow rolls her eyes slightly. "What he means is that you may take away House Points when you deem it appropriate, and you may also hand out detentions, again when appropriate, but you may not give points and you may not take points from your fellow prefects. And know that if you do abuse your power it will be taken away."

"What about curfew? We don't have to follow that anymore, right?" Charlie pipes up with a grin from where he's sitting next to his brother. Honestly Rajani only recognizes him because of the familiar resemblance.

Willow sighs. "Each of you will be assigned a patrol route and time. During these patriols you'll be paired with one other Prefect and you're in charge of keeping each other in line. You won't have patrols every night, and Bill and I will need to know when your Astronomy classes are - fifth years especially." She looks thoughtful. "I think that's about everything. We will be patrolling the corridors of the train so that the new prefects get used to it. Your jobs for this are just to comfort any confused first years and help people where you can. All of you need to be back here one hour before we arrive and Bill and I will go over your duties for the Feast tonight. Any questions?"

No one has any, so Bill starts handing out their pairs for the train patrols. Much to both their chagrin Rajani ends up paired with one of the Hufflepuff sixth years - Tabitha, who she remembers Ed pointing out - and Ed ends up teamed up with the female Gryffindor from Rajani's year.

Rajani pauses so she can properly talk to Eugene before starting on the patrol. "Hey, how was your summer?"

He grins and shrugs. "Pretty fantastic, but Queenie wants to tell you herself so we'll probably talk about it at the Feast." He replies. "Also I think your partner is getting antsy." He adds with a laugh, and Rajani turns to find that sure enough, Tabitha is bouncing on the balls of her feet, staring intensly at the back of Rajani's head.

"Ugh, this is going to be great." Rajani drawls bitterly.

Eugene just laughs at her misfortune. "I'd offer to switch but I'm with Willow and like heck I'm giving up a chance to watch the Head Girl in action."

Rajani rolls her eyes at him before finally walking over to her partner.

"So um, hi. I'm Rajani." She introduces herself stiffly.

Tabitha grins. "I heard! You're dating Ed, right? Is it weird dating someone older like that? I couldn't imagine it. Do you want to get changed now or do the patrol first and then change after? Ooh, and I like being called Tabs rather than Tabitha!"

Rajani blinks slowly as she attempts to process the rush of information streaming from her partner. "Um, I, now?" She decides, disliking how it comes out sounding like a question. "Now, we should change now." She repeats more firmly.

Tabitha - Tabs - giggles and hums in agreement. "Meet back here in five then?" She offers cheerfully, skipping off before Rajani can actually respond.

Rajani decides while she changes that she doesn't like Tabs very much. Her opinion is unaffected when the two girls meet up again and the sixteen year old immediately starts prattling away again.

"You'll get used to Prefect duties really fast, and Bill and Willow already are way better than our Head Boy and Girl from last year. It took me a solid month to figure out that we couldn't take points from each other, and it took Arnold even longer. He's my pair, I like calling the prefects from the same year and House as pairs, though I guess that could be weird for you since you're dating Ed so he would be more your pair?"

Rajani bites down on an irritated groan as Tabs continues talking and instead focuses on tuning out her patrol partner as they head down the train. She figures nothing will really come up on their walk down the train so she doesn't really need to pay attention to the cars.

They're halfway down the train, and two and a half hours into the ride, and Tabs still hasn't run out of breath. Now she's on about Quidditch and the statistics for the teams in the new year.

"Lola is graduating this year which super , so hopefully there will be someone in the incoming class who's really good because our backup Seeker is actually one of our Chasers so he's not great at Seekering. Also then we would need a new Chaser. What about the Slytherin team? How are you guys looking?"

Rajani has learned by now that she doesn't actaully need to reply to Tabs, even when the questions are directed at her, so she takes a moment to realize the other girl is actually expecting an answer this time.

"Oh, um, I honestly haven't been paying much attention to the team since I dropped it last year. My friend Lenox is the Seeker though, and he's pretty good."

Tabs beams. "Oh yeah, he's fantastic! You're friends with him? That's really cool! I don't really know anyone on our team, like, I know of them and stuff but no one in my year is on the team so I'm not super close friends with any of the team members."

Rajani sighs softly and lets Tabs return to her chatter, scanning idly back and forth between the cars. She spots her friends at one point, but they're caught up talking with each other and don't notice her passing. She considers stopping Tabs so she can say hello, but decides that she'd rather see her friends when she's not dragging an annoying Hufflepuff around with her.

They arrive back in the Prefects' compartment almost an hour earlier than they need to, and Rajani considers running back to her friends' car but she's pulled aside by a girl in Slytherin robes who looks relieved to see her.

"Oh thank goodness, another snake. I was the first one back and I'm about ready to throw the little Hufflepuff boy off the train." The woman huffs. "Lucy Brown by the way, I'm-"

"Seventh year Slytherin prefect." Rajani finishes with a smile. "Rajani Misra, you probably knew my sister?"

The two girls are joined by the rest of the Slytherins as they come in from their patrols, and Rajani finds that she gets along well with the other Slytherin prefects quite well.

All in all, Tabs aside, she's pretty excited about her new role.

Myr somehow manages to hide the fact about his uncle being their new Defense professor for the entire train ride.

Of course they have more pressing things to talk about, such as OWLs and Charlie and Fiona's promotion to prefect. Both of them pop in on the compartment during their prefect patrols but neither can stay for very long, so Myr mostly spends the ride chatting with Holly, Evera, and Drake.

With three out of four being Quidditch players, that ends up being the topic for most of the ride.

"So Kent says that Charlie is almost definitely the new Team Captain, which will be fun." Evera reports. "Also Kent says not to grow up because being an adult and trying to get a job is terrible."

"With Charlie in charge, I think we might actually have a decent chance this year. Given we get a good Keeper of course." Myr offers.

Holly laughs. "You mean as long as Oliver is actually as good as he says he is." She jokes.

Evera grins. "True enough, though really he's just trying to be better than my brother, so it's not a huge order to fill."

"Harsh." Drake chuckles, though he's a bit subdued. Jemma had arrived on the platform with him but she'd had to run off pretty quickly to join the other prefects at the front of the train, and she hasn't stopped in to say hello. With only an hour left until they arrive at school Myr doubts they're going to see her until classes in the morning.

When they arrive at the station Myr takes a carriage with the same group he'd ridden over with and they continue their discussion all the way to the Gryffindor table in the Great Hall.

Myr nervously scans the front table for his uncle, and spots Cyril chatting amicably with Professor Sprout. He hasn't yet noticed Myr, and Myr is quick to avert his eyes so as not to make eye contact.

They get through the Sorting without anyone noticing, though he supposes only Holly knows what his uncle looks like so he shouldn't be that worried, but then Dumbledore stands up to give the start of year speech, and Myr suddenly remembers that he always introduces the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher.

Myr keeps his eyes very carefully on the table but he can still here when the Headmaster reaches the introduction despite the rush in his ears.

"And please give a warm welcome to Cyril Greengrass, who will be your new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher!"

Myr can see Holly turning to look at him from across the table as the rest of the room applauds politely. Myr pointedly doesn't meet her eyes. This is going to be incredibly awkward.

Finally the speech is finished and the Feast appears on the table. Holly is still watching him, and when Myr finally looks over at her she's smirking.

"Well no wonder your uncle was so excited to meet your school friends." She observes.

Fiona looks over. "Uncle?" She asks, fork paused halfway up to .

Holly beams even as Myr tries to telepathically ask her to not. "Professor Greengrass is Myr's uncle!" She says, loud enough that everyone sitting near them looks over, including a few of the second years who have settled nearby.

Specifically, the two male second years who had previously been engaged in a debate about something or other, as they usually are.

"The Defense professor is your Uncle Myr? Do you think he might give me a pass this year, since I've got Quidditch and all now?" Oliver Wood asks hopefully. Percy Weasley kicks him.

"Honestly Oliver, if you just study before there's a week left to finals you'll do fine. But on that question, you don't suppose he'd be willing to answer some questions after class, or on the weekends do you?" Percy asks shyly.

Myr sighs. "I mean, Uncle Cyril probably would be okay setting up a time you could ask him questions."

"Uncle Cyril? Hey, will you get to call him that in class?" Drake asks curiously. "Ooh, can I get extra credit for being your friend?"

Holly snorts as Myr buries his face in his hands as the rest of his friends begin pestering him with questions as well.

Thankfully they switch to teasing Charlie and Fiona when the two new prefects have to take the first years up to the Tower after the Feast is over.

"They volunteered to do it." Bill Weasley informs the group, sounding amused. "I mean, don't get me wrong they would have had to do it anyway - no one wants the job of herding confused and excited first years - but they actually volunteered before we could tell them they had to do it. It was kind of funny, your year has some very enthusiastic prefects."

"We'll see how long they last." The girl sitting next to Bill drawls. Myr has seen her around the eldest Weasley boy before - he thinks she might be the other prefect in Bill's year - but he doesn't actually know her name. And with her sour attitude he's not surprised he hasn't bothered to get to know her before.

"Harriet be nice. Enthusiasm is a good thing." Bill scolds lightly. "This is why you didn't make Head Girl."

"Who would want to? It's NEWT year, I've got better things to stress about." Harriet mutters, mostly to herself though loud enough that they all hear her.

Bill rolls his eyes. "Right. Anyway, we should head up as well, the firsties are probably getting settled in by now, and you've all got class in the morning."

All the students are starting to file out of the Great Hall towards their dorms, and Myr and his friends quickly join him.

"Seriously though Myr, why didn't you mention about your uncle?" Brandon asks curiously. Beside him, Nabila nods.

Myr sighs. "I didn't know myself until recently, and I guess I just didn't think it was that big a deal."

"Liar, you wouldn't look at me when it was announced." Holly pokes him. "It's cool though, your uncle seems fun and it'll be good to actually have a half-decent teacher for our OWL year." She adds, her tone a bit kinder.

Myr shrugs and stares at his feet as they make their way up to the Tower.

"Flitterbloom." Bill tells the Fat Lady, who smiles broadly and swings open to permit them entrance to the Tower.

"Didn't we have that password our first year?" Evera mumbles, and Myr shrugs at her.

"Only so many passwords?" He guesses, but the repeat does seem a bit odd to him.

When they reach the room Charlie and, surprisingly, Remi are already unpacked and settled in.

"Hey guys, welcome. First years are obnoxious but also there's a little lady Chaser name Angelina and she's my favorite." Charlie greets, hanging off the side of his bed with a grin. "I'm going to give her Jacob's spot next year."

Myr shakes his head lightly. "Don't go making promises when there's still a year left. She may be awful."

"Oliver may be awful but we all know he's going to be the new Keeper." Brandon points out. "Let the new Captain be excited Myr."

They settle down pretty quickly after that despite the teasing - all of them are apparently drained from the trip, and Myr falls asleep just before midnight.

The next morning Professor McGonagall hands them their schedules, and Evera makes a big deal of being disappointed they they don't have Defense Against the Dark Arts until Monday.

"And double potions in the morning." She adds with a groan. "Thank goodness that Arithmancy is first after breakfast, I think I'd die if my very first class back was with the great bat himself."

Myr makes a face, along with everyone else who isn't taking Arithmancy. "Well, I guess we can take the free hour to go over our Potions notes." He suggests tiredly. "I'd rather not go into the negatives with House points on the first morning."

Surprisingly double Potions isn't unbearable, though Myr can't say he wouldn't have chosen literally any other class to be his first one of the school year. He pairs up with Holly, and they do passably on the assignment and have fun chatting while waiting for things to boil and cool.

Afterwards they head to lunch and take a proper look at the rest of their schedules.

"Astronomy at one in the morning, ugh." Evera wrinkles her nose. "And on Tuesdays as well, that's just cruel."

Nabila taps her own schedule lightly. "It would be if we didn't have the entire morning on Wednesdays free." She points out.

Myr glances at his own schedule and starts to reply, but Charlie beats him to it.

"Unless you have Muggle Studies. But even that's right before lunch so it's still a pretty substantial sleep in." The red head observes.

After lunch they have Charms with Professor Flitwick, and they spend the class reviewing everything from the past four years.

"This year are your OWLs, which will cover everything we've every done!" The tiny professor reminds them repeatedly. "So be sure to practice everything, not just the new charms we'll be working on!"

"Oh jeez, we'll have to remember everything from potions too, won't we?" Evera groans. "I'm going to fail that OWL, no questions."

"I think most of us are." Charlie laughs. "Bill says that all four houses are lumped together for NEWT level potions since so few people actually take it. Plus, Snape requires an E or higher, unlike most teachers who just need an A."

"I can't say I'll miss that class." Drake makes a face.

Brandon pouts dramatically. "Are you all abandoning me?" He cries dramatically. "Alone in the bat's lair, probably with a bunch of snakes."

"Not our fault you have some weird love of the worst class." Charlie teases. "Oh, total subject change, but I'm getting the Quidditch pitch reserved for next Wednesday afternoon for tryouts. That okay with everyone?"

"You're the captain Charlie, I'm pretty sure that's your call." Fiona points out. "But yeah, Wednesday should be good. It's not like we're going to have all that much to do during the first week."

"Ms. McKay, if you have time to chat you have time to demonstrate! Come, let's see how your engorging charm looks!" Professor Flitwick interrupts their discussion, and Myr feels his cheeks heat slightly. He's normally much better about staying focused during class.

Thankfully they have an hour break after Charms class, during which they continue their Quidditch discussion.

"Everyone is still going to try out right? I don't think there are any other Beaters as good as you two at school right now." Charlie double checks with Myr and Fiona.

Myr nods. "It would take a lot to get me to stop playing." He grins. "Quidditch was the first magical thing I was actually good at."

"Because of your wand-" Holly starts but Evera smacks a hand over with a laugh.

"We know Holly, save it for Herbology." The blonde grins. "Also we should probably head for Care of Magical Creatures. Kettleburn said we'd be working with nifflers this year and I want to play with them before class starts!"

"That doesn't mean we'll be working with them today though..." Myr tries to point out, but Evera has already jumped up and started rushing for the front door, dragging Drake along with her. Charlie and Nabila are right behind her, with the latter tugging at Fiona's sleeve as she goes.

Myr shares an amused look with Holly and Brandon before the three of them head after their friends.

Because of their early arrival they do actually get to play with the Kneazle from the fourth years' class, but no nifflers are in sight. Remi and the three remaining Slytherins in their class (there had been a fourth but she'd dropped out between third and fourth year) arrive just before three, and Professor Kettleburn sets Charlie and Nabila - the two undisputed best students in their class - to get the Kneazle fed and settled while he starts the class.

"Alrighty everyone, welcome back!" Professor Kettleburn waves his stump arm cheerfully in the air in greeting. "This year is an important one as I'm sure your other teachers have already told you enough times to make you want to pull your hair out! So I'm not gong to bother with all that. Instead, I have a job for you all! There are twenty five Bowtruckles in the trees around us - go find them! I borrowed some brooms from Coach Crowell so feel free to use them in your search!"

Evera nudges Myr with a grin. "Want to bet he just accidentally let them out and figured it was good enough for a lesson?" She jokes as they grab two of the offered brooms and take off to check the canopy.

"I mean, it's good practice either way."

"Found three!" Holly shouts happily from the ground. "Everyone, check the trees with the highest magical capacities first! Bowtruckles tend to next on magic trees!"

Myr glances at Evera. "Do you know how to tell which trees are magical?"

She shrugs. "No idea. I guess Holly's wand obsession might actually be useful outside of Herbology." She jokes.

"Hey Holly, you want to elaborate on how to even do that?" Remi shouts from where he's hovering a few trees away. Myr hadn't even realized he'd joined them in the air.

He can make out the tall brunette shrugging. "Um, it feels magical?" She shouts back, a trifle unhelpfully.

"Ah yes, the feel of magic, I know it well." Evera laughs, and Myr grins.

"I think we might just have to resort to checking everything." He observes.

They do eventually collect all the Bowtruckles, with Holly directing the search efforts with enthusiasm.

"And that's why you should pay attention in Herbology." She announces as they head back to the castle after class. "Though I guess actually we're not doing wand woods, but there's been plenty on identifying magical plants."

"She's right. You guys are boned for the OWL." Brandon adds with a grin.

Charlie punches him lightly. "Like you'll do any better."

"He will. Brandon didn't need my help." Holly pipes up cheerfully. "Nice to know I'll know at least one person in Herbology next year since you're all failing out." She teases.

It's a casual jab, but it actually makes Myr start worrying. OWLs really do determine the rest of their lives, and while he's pretty sure he was planning to drop a few classes the idea of actually failing out leaves a bad taste in his mouth.

When they reach the castle he decides to head to the library. It's never too early to start preparing after all.

Franziska thinks fifth year might be their weirdest schedule to date.

On Mondays, Thursdays, and Fridays she has barely any classes at all, while Tuesdays and Wednesdays are never ending back-to-back classes save a short break after lunch on Wednesdays.

Franziska knows it's just a result of how her electives landed, but she's still not used to the schedule even a month into the year.

"Next year will be even worse." Tyler Abbott informs her when she mentions it at breakfast one the first Wednesday of October. "Lola says that dropping classes after OWLs absolute butchers any sense of logic in the scheduling."

"Except for the few crazies who don't drop anything." Leona pipes up wryly.

Jemma tilts her head curiously. "Well if you pass all your OWLs, why not continue taking all the classes?" She points out lightly.

"Well if a class won't help you with your career choices then what's the point of taking it other than stressing yourself out?" Tyler points out.

"Knowledge for knowledge's sake isn't a crime." Aidan offers. "One could take a class simply because they enjoy it."

Leona pokes him. "You sound like a Ravenclaw." She teases.

"Nothing wrong with that." Aidan replies easily. "Though I'm a proud Hufflepuff, even moreso now that I'm a Prefect."

"Same here." Jemma adds with a nod. "I had to talk to four different first years who were disappointed with their placement."

Franziska makes a face. "I'll never understand that, I wanted to be Hufflepuff for as long as I knew about Hogwarts. What's so great about the other Houses?"

"Absolutely nothing!" Henry declares cheerfully, and he raises his glass of orange juice in a mock toast, which they all join in on, laughing.

The moment is interrupted when the tablecloth on the far end of the table catches on fire, and a familar voice shouts the usual apology and, "That wasn't supposed to do that!"

"Someone really needs to take Saundra's wand away, she's gotten worse." Cian grumbles. "She snapped three of my guitar strings a couple of days ago. Thank goodness for magic since those are really expensive to replace."

"What could she have been trying to do that would snap guitar strings?" Donaghan wonders, eyeing the flames at the end of the table warily until one of the seventh years puts them out. "Those aren't exactly easy to break."

Cian shrugs. "Something about duplicating her quills? I wasn't really listening to her excuses."

"Still, you should do something." Tyler waves his fork at Jemma and Aidan. "You're prefects now, can't you do stuff like that?"

"We can take points and give detentions when warranted." Jemma recites. "Which really isn't much."

"I imagine Saundra has already had plenty of detentions, so clearly that doesn't perturb her much." Aidan adds with a shrug.

"Man, what's the point of being a prefect if your powers are that lame?" Tonks sighs dramatically, finally pausing her inhalation of breakfast to contribute to the conversation.

"Ha, I win!" Kiera shouts happily. The two had been competing over who could finish their food faster, which honestly Franziska thinks is gross but they're not sitting near her so she hadn't protested that much.

Tonks sticks her tongue out in retort. "I'll beat you tomorrow." She promises.

They head to class as a group a few minutes later, making their way down into the dungeons. Despite having a boyfriend who's a huge fan of the class, Potions is still Franziska's least favorite lesson, so starting the day with a double block is always rough.

She partners up with Henry once they arrive, and he unfolds his cauldron while she lays out the ingredients for the potions Professor Snape had told them they'd be brewing.

"Did you read the prep last night?" She asks once she's certain the vial of salamander blood isn't going to fall off the table and make a mess.

Henry sighs, though he's smiling ruefully. "Yeah I did. I'm never living last year down, am I?"

Franziska elbows him lightly. "You made a hole through solid stone floor." She teases. "But hey, on the bright side didn't Amelia ask you about it afterwards?"

Henry flushes at the name of his long-time crush. "Yeah. B-but still, it's a bad impression!" He flails slightly and Franziska grabs the salamander's blood just to be safe.

"Calm down Henry, I'm teasing. Oh, on the topic-"

"Don't-"

"You should sit with her in Charms today. And ask her to Hogsmeade." Franziska finishes with a grin. Their whole Hufflepuff class have taken to teasing and pestering Henry about Amelia since the second week of class when he'd literally tripped down the stairs because he'd been watching her instead of where he was going.

"I can't, do you know how embarrassing that would be?" Henry whines. Franziska elbows him again.

"You're fifteen now Henry, and really it doesn't hurt a thing to try. It's not like you're friends anyway, and the first trip is this weekend! It's now or never."

Henry looks over at her, his cheeks still flushed. "But-"

"Sit down." Professor Snape drawls as he sweeps into the classroom, and immediately everyone falls silent. Franziska swears that the temperature drops, and she knows it's going to be a rough class. Snape is in a bad mood.

Snape being sour is nothing new - Franziska is pretty sure he isn't capable of feeling true happiness at this point - but this year he's been particularly irritable. Leona had told them that according to the rumor mill, Professor Snape and Professor Greengrass don't get along at all, which is the reason for the increased moodiness.

Franziska doesn't understand how anyone could dislike Professor Greengrass, who's easily their best Defense teacher since Professor Whits in their first year, but conversely it's Snape. So really it isn't all that surprising he'd hate someone everyone else likes.

Luckily she and Henry manage to make a passable Strengthening Solution, so Snape's irritation falls elsewhere - namely onto Tonks and Kiera who have both always had trouble with the class. Franziska isn't sure why they keep pairing up considering neither of them usually knows what they're doing.

All in all it's not the worst potions class she's had, but she's definitely looking forward to dropping the class after this year.

She leaves Henry in the dungeons along with Tonks, Tyler, and Aidan, while she and the rest of the Hufflepuffs head to Muggle Studies on the third floor.

Professor Quirrell is already bumbling around the room, shuffling some papers on his desk and looking a bit lost. He seems relieved when the Hufflepuffs arrive, closely followed by a few of the other students in the class.

"Ah, welcome, welcome, I have your essays graded!" He greets, his hands fluttering towards the pile of parchment he'd just set down. "You may come find yours in the pile once you've picked a seat!"

Franziska generally likes Muggle Studies, and she generally likes the flighty and distractible professor as well, but sometimes she thinks he doesn't fully think through his decisions before making them. Which is a bit odd for a Ravenclaw.

The class rushes to the front desk to try and find their essay, the first graded one of the year. Franziska sighs and drops her bag next to one of the seats, dropping herself into said seat a moment later.

"You avoiding the crush of people too?" Evie Jones takes up residence next to Franziska, grinning over at her.

Franziska returns the smile hesitantly. Evie hadn't been nearly as destructive the previous year as she had been their first three, but Franziska doesn't share potions with the Ravenclaws and she's heard some stories about those classes from Holly and Nabila. So she's still generally hesitant around the Ravenclaw.

"Honestly, Professor Quirrell is a nice guy but he's got this habit of not fully thinking things through." Her grin becomes slightly self-deprecating. "A trait I share, as you probably know. I'm Evie by the way. We've never really talked before."

Franziska is honestly surprised by the self-aware observation by the brunette next to her, and it's that that pushes her to put out her hand.

"Franziska, though my friends usually call me Frannie. I admittedly have avoided you since I rather enjoy not being on fire."

Evie snorts as she accepts the handshake. "Fair enough. No fire today, I promise. Holly has been a huge help with that honestly, so if you don't trust my word maybe you could take hers."

Franziska is curious how Holly could have possibly helped with Evie's destructiveness, but she's distracted by her essay being dropped on the desk in front of her. She looks up to find Leona grinning at her.

"You're welcome. Hi Evie, mind if I slide in next to you?" The stout Hufflepuff doesn't wait for an answer before squashing herself into the third seat of their table. "I've got your essay too." She adds, dropping the parchment down in front of Evie, who looks surprised.

"What do you want Leona?" Franziska asks with a wry grin at her friend. Leona being nice means she either wants information or has information, and Franziska isn't sure whether or not to be worried about the overly innocent smile the gossip is giving her.

"Oh nothing. Say, I heard you talking to Henry about Hogsmeade. Are you going with Brandon?"

Franziska blinks "Um, yes? Obviously, he's my boyfriend." She replies, becoming even more suspicious at the seemingly innocuous question.

Leona shrugs. "Just checking. I overheard Charlie and Aidan talking with him yesterday and it didn't sound like he was planning to go is all."

Franziska frowns and glances at Evie. She's not sure she wants to be having this conversation in front of the Ravenclaw who's basically a complete stranger to her - even if she's still not quite sure why the discussion feels particularly monumental.

Evie holds up her hands. "I hear nothing, I see nothing. Henry is that cute brunette boy in your House right? The one always giving Amelia puppy dog looks? He should ask her to Hogsmeade, she'd probably say yes. She thinks he's sweet." It's said idly but it's very effective at popping the tension that had started to build behind Franziska's eyes.

She thinks she might have misjudged Evie. Just slightly.

Muggle Studies goes smoothly after that, and Evie ends up walking with Franziska and Leona to the Great Hall for lunch. She then proceeds to invite herself over to the Hufflepuff table for the sole purpose of helping Leona - and the rest of the girls except Jemma - pestering Henry about talking to Amelia.

Franziska joins the teasing for a few minutes before she spots Brandon sitting at the Gryffindor table and quickly excuses herself so she can go talk to him about Hogsmeade. Leona had worried her, and it's not like she and Brandon had actually talked about going to Hogsmeade together - she'd just assumed they would since they always had in the past.

"Hey Brandon, can I steal you for a minute?" She does her best to make her tone as light and cheerful as possible.

She doesn't miss the pointed look that Charlie shoots his friend as Brandon stands up.

"Of course!  Maybe just outside?" He suggests, and she agrees. A bit of privacy would probably be a good idea.

They end up wandering into the courtyard, and the lingering warmth through the crisp fall air does make Franziska feel a bit better.

"So, I was wondering, what are we doing for Hogsmeade this weekend?" She asks, then quickly corrects herself. "I mean, are we doing Hogsmeade? I'd assumed we would but-"

"If you want to then we will!" Brandon interrupts, sounding almost nervous. "I mean, if you want to go I'll go with you. If you want me to."

Franzisk frowns at him. "I mean, I'd like if you came but do you want to? Leona said that you didn't. I don't want to force you Brandon."

He bites his lip. "Well, I mean, we always do Hogsmeade dates."

She shrugs. "Sure, last year when we were still new and getting to know each other. But if you wanted to stay I can go with my friends. They won't mind." She's honestly a little irritated at Brandon's attitude about the situation.

He stares at his feet. "I mean, I was thinking that maybe I could stay and work on this potion but-"

"No buts." She says, intending to sound firm but she can hear herself snapping. "Stay and do your potion. I'll go to Hogsmeade with the girls. Heck, maybe I'll ask Evie if she's got plans, she's surprisingly fun to talk to."

Brandon still isn't looking at her. "Okay, yeah. Sounds good. I'll see you in class?"

She nods. "See you in History. I'll save you a seat." She quickly smiles at him, but she's not sure he noticed with how quickly he's hurrying back to the Great Hall.

She lingers in the courtyard a few moments longer, thinking back on the exchange. It had been weird - Brandon has always been very confident in himself and what he likes, even when it had annoyed her in the past. She's not sure she likes the change much.

Of course, she's not sure she likes Brandon in quite the same way regardless, but she doesn't want to think about that so she hurries back inside to rejoin her friends.

She does end up asking Evie if she has any plans for Hogsmeade during their Charms class that afternoon, and the brunette's reaction is one of shock and tentative joy.

"I, um, no! No, no plans at all." She stumbles over her words, suddenly nervous. "Do you, um, do you have plans?"

Franziska shrugs and grins. "Apparently not. Want to go together? We can raid Honeydukes and check out the new arrivals at Tomes and Scrolls. If that's okay with you."

"I mean, I guess I could go to my favorite shop with you, yeah." Evie's nerves seem to vanish, but Franziska can see her hands are shaking slightly.

She laughs and bumps shoulders with her new friend. "It'll be fun! And we can stalk Henry and Amelia's first date too!"

Evie giggles as well, agreeing eagerly to the proposition. Franziska leaves Charms feeling light as air, only to realize that she has History next.

She does save Brandon a seat, and when he sits next to her things feel normal, much to her relief.

But she still can't shake the thoughts she'd had in the courtyard, and when Brandon asks if she found someone to go to Hogsmeade with she finds herself trying to trivialize how excited she is about going with Evie.

It's an ugly impulse that pushes the white lie, a sense of guilt for thinking she's going to have more fun with Evie than she would with her boyfriend.

But she doesn't want to think about what that means, so she doesn't.

Ana doesn't go on the first Hogsmeade trip of the year. Instead she slips away to the Divination classroom and sits by one of the crystal balls that was left out after one of the classes.

Normally she would have animagus lessons, but Professor McGonagall had given her the week off to visit Hogsmeade. But with just over two weeks left until she can start actually attempting her animagus transformation she wants to get everything in order to start as quickly as possible.

She still hasn't been able to ascertain when the next electrical storm is going to be, much to her continued frustration. She's one of the better students in Divination but that doesn't seem to count for much when she actually cares about what she's trying to divine.

She places her hands around the ball and focuses the way her Baba had taught her, hoping nobody comes in. While not technically illegal, the methods her Baba used were almost definitely based in Dark Magic and Ana doesn't fancy being expelled this close to her OWLs.

The ball heats and she gets a few flickers of what could be lightning before the surface clears up, and she growls under her breath.

"Oh it's no good to let negative energy flow when you seek answers! The ball will become hazy!" A lilting, slightly warbling voice exclaims, and Ana very nearly drops the crystal ball onto the floor in surprise.

"I, this isn't-" She trails off. She absolutely was just using dark magic, and there really isn't a way to hide it if the newcomer has noticed. Though Ana is hopeful that Professor Trelawney might be tipsy enough to have not caught on - her voice certainly indicates that she's not quite sober at the moment.

"What is it you seek? Perhaps I could be of assistance!" The divination professor says excitedly, completely ignoring Ana's stuttering. "Come now, let an expert peer into the depths of the unknown to discover answers!"

Ana supposes she's lucky that Professor Trelawney isn't upset about her using the room outside of class, and she doesn't want to push that luck considering what she might be getting away with. "Um, alright, thank you Professor. I was trying to discover when the next electrical storm will be."

Professor Trelawney nods sagely. "Ah, of course of course! Why, you shouldn't use the balls for that! Come, let us consult the cards! They are best at seeing the future after all!"

"We haven't studied that in class yet Professor. I'm just a fifth year." Ana admits. Card reading is a NEWT level divination subject, and while she's naturally looked over the theory herself, divination is notorious for being best learned through constant practice.

Professor Trelawney squints at Ana from behind her thick, bug-eye glasses. "Well, I suppose you are. Never you mind, I shall ask the cards for you." She flutters off, and Ana remains glued to her seat, unable to believe her luck.

Trelawney returns after several minutes with a box clutched in slightly shaking hands. "Here we are! Now then, what was your question dear?"

Ana bites her lip, watching as the Divination Professor opens the box and begins laying out the cards. "I was hoping to learn when the next electrical storm will be." She replies after a moment. "How do you know how to order them?" She can't help but ask. The books had been terribly unhelpful on that front, using a lot of vague terms and essentially saying nothing with a whole lot of flowery language.

Professor Trelawney blinks owlishly. "Oh, well, when you're as accomplished as I am the cards will tell you. The question directs the cards after all."

Ana nods uncertainly, not quite understanding. "I'm quite excited to learn about the cards next year." She offers. "Divination has always fascinated me."

"Well you either have it or you don't dear." Professor Trelawney informs her, leaning down to eye the cards. "Ah yes, the next electrical storm will be in eight weeks! Is that helpful?" She sounds hopeful, and it makes Ana rather uncomfortable to have a teacher looking to her for approval. It's a disorder in the way things are supposed to be.

"Yes, extremely. Thank you Professor, I'll see you in class tomorrow." She smiles, and Professor Trelawney absolutely beams.

"Why yes! Wonderful, wonderful. I'll see you tomorrow Ana."

Ana nearly trips. She hadn't realized the professor had actually recognized her. "I, yes. I'll see you tomorrow." She repeats, quickly hurrying back out of the room.

The entire experience feels surreal - but at least she has a date now. Professor Trelawney's predictions are far from regularly accurate, but Ana wants to trust her on this. The entire situation feels entirely too unlikely to be a coincidence, and Ana thinks it's a sign. Divination has taught her that much.

"Eight weeks." She reminds herself. She has eight weeks to get everything prepared for her first transformation.

The rest of the day is spent figuring out exactly how she'll need to time everything in order to be ready in time for the storm.

And the next day she makes extra sure to pay close attention in Divination. Professor Trelawney smiles at her as she's leaving, and both Jerome and Shaun take notice.

"Professor Trelawney was all over you today. Asking you for predictions, looking into your love life. I wonder who this mystery man she says is right in front of you could be." Jerome is clearly teasing, but his words cause a wave of irritation to shoot up Ana's spine.

"Oh please, I think I'd know if there was a boy worth my time around here. But it's just you, unfortunately." She snaps back. Jerome laughs.

"Wouldn't that be a nightmare, you and me romantically? I'd be dead in a week." He declares, walking backwards down the stairs towards the Great Hall.

Shaun frowns at him. "Jerry you're going to trip." He warns. "And Madame Pomfrey threatened to make you heal naturally if you did that again."

Jerome immediately spins to face the right way. "Yes sir!"

Ana is happy when they rejoin Amelia for lunch shortly after and she has decent company again.

"We're doing practicals with boggarts today, right?" Amelia asks as soon as they sit down. "I couldn't remember if it's today or on Thursday. Professor Greengrass just said this week but that usually means the start of the week." She seems nervous at the prospect, which Ana doesn't understand. After three year straight of very minimal practical application in their Defense Against the Dark Arts classes she rather appreciates Professor Greengrass going out of his way to give them some hands-on practice with subjects they'd covered theoretically in the past.

Shaun shrugs. "I think that's the consensus, but we're the first class this week so we'll have to wait and see."

"It'll be fun to see what everyone is scared of!" Jerome chips in cheerfully.

"Will it really though?"

Once again Finnigan Marley has managed to sit next to them without any of them noticing, but Ana is proud that she manages to not jump this time. He's been doing this about twice a week - sitting beside them without actually announcing his presence. Ana thinks it's getting to the point of being a step beyond creepy, but she doesn't really care enough to ask him what the heck he thinks he's doing.

Jerome tilts his head, acting like he hasn't just knocked his water over in his surprise at the other teen's appearance. "I mean, I guess some people won't want to face their fears, but Prof Greengrass wouldn't force someone to do that. Personally I'm curious what my greatest fear is - I can't really think of anything!" He laughs, and Shaun rolls his eyes in fond exasperation.

Amelia is chewing at her lip. "Henry said the same thing, but I suppose I'm still a bit nervous." She says after a moment. She'd gone on what she insists wasn't a date during the Hogsmeade weekend, though both Shaun and Jerome have informed her that the Hufflepuff boy she'd gone with was under the impression that it had been one. Regardless of what it had been, it seems to have gone well since Amelia has already name-dropped Henry six times since returning from Hogsmeade and sat next to him during Charms that morning.

Ana decides to add her own two cents. "I think it would be best to engage with a boggart now rather than find out you can't cast Riddikulus properly when facing one in an actually dangerous situation, but I agree that Professor Greengrass would never force a student to do something they aren't comfortable with."

"That's a good point. Getting to practice in a controlled environment probably isn't an opportunity you'd want to miss." Shaun nods.

"Well some things aren't other people's business. We don't even know half the class, and we're supposed to show them our greatest fears?" Finnigan counters pointedly. Shaun shrugs.

"I mean, it's just the Gryffindors." He points out. "They're a harmless lot really."

"Remi." Ana and Amelia respond simultaneously, and Jerome snorts.

"They do have a point there." He observes. "But Remi has been sort of pouty and generally keeps to himself this year, have you noticed? He's like Evie from two years ago, so maybe there's hope."

"Speaking of, where is she? She usually sits with us at lunch." Amelia says, frowning and scanning the table.

"Hufflepuff table. She made a new friend over the weekend." Jerome supplies. "I'm glad, she never really fit with us very well. Everyone deserves to have a good friend they can rely on." He adds happily.

The rest of lunch slips by quickly, and then it's time for their Defense class. Personally Ana is looking forward to it, though Amelia is clearly still nervous about the possibilities of boggarts.

Her fears prove rational - as soon as the last Gryffindor takes his seat the professor pulls a cloth off a large wardrobe with a flourish.

"Ladies and gentlemen, today is a review day. Wands out, anyone interested can have a go at our borrowed boggart."

Ana immediately pulls out her wand, as does most of the class. Amelia conspicuously doesn't move.

Professor Greengrass beams. "Wonderful, it looks like most of you are willing to give it a go! Myrddin, why don't you start?"

Ana rolls her eyes. Professor Greengrass always lets his nephew try out spells first, which honestly has gotten old. At least Myrddin doesn't seem very happy with the special attention either, as he always seems quite embarrassed when he's called out.

"Actually, maybe someone else could go first this time Professor Greengrass?" He suggests, and Ana wonders if he's a bit nervous to face his fears.

"I'd like to go, if that's alright." She speaks up, raising her hand so she can be identified. "I don't mind being first."

Professor Greengrass frowns at his nephew, but then turns to Ana with a renewed smile. "Of course Ms. Vulchanova. Whenever you're ready."

Ana has to slide past Jerome, who shoots her an obvious thumbs up that she really could have done without. She ignores him and steps to the front of the room, nodding to the professor and shifting into a dueling stance.

The wardrobe swings open, and Professor McGonagall steps out.

Ana blinks, genuinely surprised. She'd thought she'd known what her greatest feat was but this-

McGonagall begins to speak. "Ms. Vulchanova, your performance this year has been atrocious. I simply cannot recommend you continue your-"

Ana knows where this is going now, and she quickly shakes off her shock and flicks her wand. "Riddikulus!"

McGonagall is turned abruptly into a shaved cat, and most of the class starts laughing. Ana nods proudly.

"What was she going to say?" Jerome asks curiously as one of the Gryffindors steps up and Ana returns to her seat.

"Nothing important." She replies shortly. No need to tell the world about her animagus studies - her friends may already know, but the Gryffindors don't, and they don't need to as far as Ana is concerned.

Jerome and Shaun both take their turn facing down the boggart, though Jerome ends up extremely shaken when he finds himself looking at the dead body of a young boy.

"My brother." He mumbles, still stunned, once he gets back to his seat. "Terry, I've told you about him. I didn't think... how did you regain your composure so quickly?" He's not really looking at Ana, shock making his focus drift in and out.

She hums. "I suppose your fear is greater than mine." She suggests.

"Could be the whole fight or flight thing too." Evie offers from behind them. She'd gotten the biggest laugh from the class when she'd made a group of deatheaters start dancing around like drunkards, and she still seems to be on a high from it.

"That's a good point." Shaun responds thoughtfully, and Ana figures it must be one of the infuriatingly many Muggle things she doesn't understand.

Defense is her final class of the day, so once it lets out she sets about finishing her schoolwork well ahead of time in order to leave herself space to work on her animagus preparations over the weekend. She's not sure if Professor McGonagall will provide her with the animagus potion, so once her Arithmancy paper is finished - the last assignment she wanted to complete that day - she begins listing out where she could possible locate the needed ingredients.

"You could just ask Professor Snape." Amelia suggests, glancing over at Ana's parchment. Her friends had joined her in the library at some point and are each working on their own assignments. Finnigan hasn't appeared yet, and it's close enough to dinner now that Ana thinks he won't be joining them.

"You could also ask to be poisoned but I find people generally don't want to tempt fate." Jerome replies for Ana, and she simply waves a hand at him in agreement.

The rest of the week goes similarly, though Ana is relieved when Professor McGonagall informs her during their lesson that Saturday that the potion ingredients will be provided when the time comes - Ana's list is measly at best and she has no idea how to find a few of the ingredients herself. Not that she wants to admit that.

She enters the next week with a sense of anticipation. She's always excited for Halloween and her birthday, but this year the day has a particular importance.

In nine weeks she's going to be a full fledged animagus - and she gets to start actually working towards it once she turns sixteen.

It's going to be a good birthday.

Next time on H:aH - Halloween! Quidditch! More Uncle Cyril being a great teacher! Dating! You know, all the usual stuff xD But jeez, thirty chapters already. It feels both really fast and really slow honestly. Anyway, I hope you're all still enjoying my little tale and are looking forward to the developments coming in the next twenty chapters! Goodness knows I'm excited to be at this point!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2452 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!