Chapter Thirty-Six

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Heartbeats

Franziska had arranged to meet with Rosalinde the day after she gets home - she knows she'll need time, as always, to recover from the Portkey.

"You really don't take well to these trips." Her mother observes as Franziska stumbles blearily on landing and barely catches herself on her trunk so she doesn't faceplant on the floor of the German Ministry offices in Dusseldorf.

"Neip." Franziska mutters, her brain mushing English and German in her mind and producing a non-word out of .

Her mother laughs. "Tell you what, we'll take a plane next year."

Franziska mumbles what she hopes is a happy response - the world is still fuzzy at the edges and her stomach can't quite decide where it's supposed to be sitting.

Her mother helps her to one of the chairs in the room, setting her trunk next to her. "You can wait here for a few minutes, I need to make a quick report to my boss before we head home, alright?"

This time Franziska knows she manages the nod, and her mother smiles and hurries off into the Ministry as Franziska puts her foot on top of her trunk for safekeeping before closing her eyes and willing the world to stop spinning.

"I saw you come in last year." A voice comments. "You really don't get along with Portkeys, huh?"

Franziska drags her eyelids back open to toss a bleary glare in the direction of the voice.

It laughs. "Sorry, headache? Some people get headaches, but you seem more dizzy than anything. You know, I've found that for dizziness you can kind of manage it by keeping your eyes closed and focusing on breathing steadily when you jump."

Franziska finally sits up enough to properly look at whoever is talking to her.

The man - boy, her mind corrects her, he can't be much older than eighteen - is sitting at a desk she up to this point hadn't noticed, a quill in hand and fingers stained with ink from the documents he's working on, blonde hair slightly falling into his face.

"I'll try that next time." She manages to say after taking a few moments to properly formulate the words and ensure none of them come out in English.

"Can't promise it will fix things, but it ought to make it a bit more bearable." The boy declares. "I'm Stephan, I'm part of the Portkey office. Obviously." He adds with a slight grin. "And you're still in school?"

Franziska glances towards where her mother had gone, wary of the attention she's getting from this unknown male. She's not in school anymore, so if he tries anything she can't use her wand. And despite Rosa trying to teach her she can't really throw a decent punch either.

"Just finished fifth year." She replies primly. She notes that he startles slightly and sits back in his seat, no longer leaning towards her.

"Oh, wow, sorry. I thought you might be seventeen or eighteen." He at least sounds apologetic. "I'm almost twenty-one. I promise I'll stop trying to terribly flirt with you now."

Franziska blinks and gives Stephan a more thorough look over. He's being very polite, and she supposes she doesn't know how long her mother will be. It can't hurt to have a conversation. "Well, I'll take it as a compliment. I'm Franziska, my mom works in the Muggle Liason department."

Stephan smiles. "Mrs. Reinhardt right? You look a lot like her. She's down here whenever she needs to organize a Portkey for your school trips, so us full-time employees know her."

Franziska tilts her head, curious. "Are there not many full-time employees?"

She and Stephan end up discussing the intricacies of the funding for the Portkey office (which Franziska, by the end, thinks is utter nonsense and possibly corrupt) for the better part of an hour while she waits for her mother to finish her reports. They've moved on to discussing the OWLs (equivalent to the Durmstrang PLTs) when Pannidda returns.

"So sorry that took so long Lida. Stephan, I hope she wasn't a distraction."

Stephan grins. "Of course not ma'am, your daughter is quite brilliant."

"He was a perfect gentleman." Franziska agrees. "Are your reports done then?"

Pannidda nods. "We'll be going then. I'll see you later Stephan."

"I hope to see you as well." Franziska adds quickly. "I'd love to discuss politics more sometime."

Stephan blinks in surprise and then beams. "That would be great! I'll see you both around then. Good luck waiting for your OWL grades Lida, you'll do great I'm sure."

Pannidda raises an eyebrow, but says nothing until she and Franziska are in a taxi back towards the Dusseldorf suburbs.

"So you and Stephan seemed to be getting along. He's a sweet boy, very hardworking." She comments slyly.

Franziska groans. "Mother, I just got out of a relationship, and he's nearly twenty one. That's four years older than me."

"Closer to three years dear." Pannidda points out. "And I'm just making an observation. I'm glad you weren't bored, I really didn't expect that to take as long as it did."

"Well, I'm completely recovered at least." Franziska points out cheerfully, taking care not to mention the Portkey in front of the Muggle taxi driver. "Maybe I can go visit Rosa before dinner?"

Her mother laughs. "Not tonight Lida, you'll see her tomorrow. I need help with dinner, your father has had a rough week at work and will need both his ladies to cheer him up tonight."

The night ends up being quite fun, and Franziska eagerly shares most of her year, glossing over her breakup with Brandon and insisting they're still friends and just need some time apart. She most focuses on telling them about Evie.

"She's decided she wants to be a Security Troll Trainer." She tells her parents as they're finishing dessert. "Which I think sounds rather dangerous but she's super excited about it. She says it should keep her wand  active and happy too, which is a bonus."

"This whole wand business does confuse me some." Her father admits. "It just sets things on fire whenever?"

"Well every wand is different." Franziska says, mostly just reciting what Evie has told her. She can't claim she completely understands it all either. "The wand chooses the wizard after all, so they do have a sort of personality and cleverness to them. You remember mine wouldn't choose anyone but we bonded instantly? She's pretty calm overall, but Evie's wand is more adventurous, and it was bored. So it would sometimes just... do magic on its own to alleviate that, so far as I understood it."

Pannidda nods. "It makes sense, it's why it's such bad luck to use another person's wand - they usually don't like witches or wizards who aren't their chosen master, so they won't work quite as well."

Heinrich tilts his head in acknowledgement. "They do still usually work, but I have seen wands go limp after their owners pass away. Rather tragic sight, honestly."

Franziska winces and quickly changes the topic - she doesn't want to remember that her dad's job is actually quite dangerous.

The next day she attempts to sleep in, as she'd habitually stayed up late (a habit picked up in the past week of giggling late into the night with her roommates) but her mother peers in around eight AM to wake her up.

"You're meeting with Rosa this morning dear, if you don't get up now you'll be late."

Franziska tries to roll over and escape back into slumber, but guilt at possibly making her friend wait keeps her just enough on the edge of wakefullness that she gives up the attempt and stumbles out of bed.

She's at the table about ten minutes later, dressed but far from alert.

"Goodness Ziska, you look like you barely slept at all." Her father comments.

"Let's just say I'm happy Astronomy is over." She mumbles, dropping her head into her arms. "I am not good at not getting enough sleep."

Her mother laughs. "You got at least seven hours last night, that's plenty even for a growing teen. You're just used to getting more. Now eat up, Rosa already called to ask if she can still come over so she'll be here in a half hour or so."

That gets Franziska moving, and once she's polished off her breakfast she's feeling a lot more awake. She hops up as soon as the doorbell rings.

"Hey Rosa!" She greets eagerly, and nearly falls over when her friend drags her into a hug.

"Belated break-up comfort hug!" Rosa declares once she's released Franziska. "I never liked him much anyway." She adds. "I can say that now, right? Dumb American, you can do way better Frannie."

Franziska just smiles faintly and shakes her head. "I think you didn't know him well enough to make that call." She points out. "He was really sweet, it just wasn't really a fair relationship. I just didn't like him that much. Speaking of dating, how's Jennifer?" She quickly switches the topic, and Rosa turns bright red.

"Fran! Not in public!" She hisses nervously. "Jen isn't out. I mean, I'm not out either but I'm kind of coming around to it? But she's not comfortable at all so please don't say anything."

Franziska mimes zipping shut. "Got it, not a word. There was a cute boy at my mom's workplace I talke to yesterday."

It's absolutely the wrong thing to say, because Rosa immediately gets excited and starts pestering her with questions about Stephan, most of which Franziska can't answer because of the Statute of Secrecy.

"Honestly I regret saying anything." She pouts as the two arrive at their destination: the communal park.

Rosalinde giggles. "Sorry, you know I'm a romantic. Tell me about school then, you said your fancy boarding school had some fancy tests this year?"

Franziska has already planned out how to talk about the OWLs without breaking the Statute, so she goes off on a good hour-long rant about their difficulty and how nerve-wracking it is to wait for her results.

"And if I don't get high enough scores I can't take some classes next year." She finishes with a huff. "And there are some which will really be useful to have if I want my mom's job some day."

"Which you do." Rosalinde laughs. "Man, I never thought I would be happy about going to public school but those tests sound awful. Yay for boring normal exams!"

The two waste the day away in the park, chatting and people watching. Franziska hadn't thought to bring her sketchbook so she instead points out things Rosalinde should draw instead. Her suggestions are mostly ignored, though to be fair she's mostly pointing out the most ridiculous or difficult things she can spot.

They make their way home as the sun is starting to brush close to the horizon, and don't actually get back until it's completely sunk out of sight.

Rosalinde's mother is standing in the doorway of the Treindl household and she doesn't look very amused.

"Ah jeez, broke curfew." Rosalinde mutters, though she doesn't sound very repentant. "See you tomorrow Frannie."

Franziska hesitates to leave her friend alone to the wrath of Mrs. Treindl but when the door closes she has no other option but to continue on to her own house.

"You're home late, you girls have fun today?" Her mother asks.

Franziska hums. "How come you don't get mad when I'm out late?" She asks as she kicks off her shoes and settles at the kitchen counter, watching her mother take her dinner out of the fridge and place it in the new microwave they'd bought while Franziska was at school. Franziska still wonders how her mother managed to convince her father that the appliance wouldn't irradiate them all, but she's not complaining. It's a very useful appliance that she's wanted for as long as she's known that it existed.

Her mother looks thoughtful. "I knew you were with Rosalinde, and that you likely wouldn't be out for long after dark since you're both very safe. I likely would have started to worry after another hour or so. But you're nearly an adult, I have to trust that you're staying safe."

Franziska blinks and smiles faintly. "I guess I never thought of it like that. I'll try to get back earlier in the future though. As cool as the microwave is, dinner is best right out of the pot."

Her mother laughs as she takes the plate out and places it in front of her. "I'll agree with that."

The two are still sitting at the table chatting when Heinrich gets home, and though he grimaces he accepts the microwave-heated meal his wife offers him.

"I still say those things will make you sick. Radiating food can't possibly be healthy." He grumbles. "Sometimes I think Muggles are taking far too many risks in their quest to create artificial magic."

"It's all very safe dear, the Treindls have had one for years and they're all fine." Panidda points out, rolling her eyes slightly at Franziska who suppresses a snort. "And Muggles are not trying to create artificial magic, it's called science and it's really quite brilliant all on its own."

"Still seems unnatural to me." Heinrich grumbles, but he eats nonetheless.

"Wizards, so stuck in their ways." Pannidda jokes to Franziska, who this time allows herself to giggle in response.

Heinrich pretends to be attacked. "You as well Ziska? All the ladies in my life are against me!"

"Sorry daddy, but Muggles really are amazing. I think wizards could learn a lot from them."

Her father leans over to ruffle her hair. "You'll make a wonderful Muggle liason someday." He praises her, even as she yelps and starts trying to brush everything back into place.

"Dad! I'm not five anymore!" She complains, but she knows she smiling.

That night she stares up at the ceiling, determined to fall asleep before midnight but too used to being awake for that task to be very easy.

She's really missed being home. She hasn't had a chance to just sit and reflect on that until now, but once she stopped moving it's all caught up with her at once. She loves joking with Rosalinde, and talking over dinner with her parents. She loves the park, and the city, and speaking German instead of English.

She wishes she could come home more often.

"Only two more years." She reminds herself. "And then I can stay in Germany forever. And next summer I'll even be able to use magic!"

That does cheer her up some, and she occupies her mind with ideas of how she'll be able to cast charms and practice for her NEWTs all summer long next year. She eventually drifts to sleep mulling over the idea of coloring her hair with magic - Rosalinde would absolutely love it.

Holly sends Myr a formal invitation to Laurel's wedding only a week before the actual date. It makes him glad he'd already warned his mother about the offer, so they aren't caught too off guard and there's minimal scrambling to get him ready to travel to London for the event.

"You're sure you don't want your uncle to accompany you there? I'd feel better if someone who can perform magic would confirm when you arrive." His mother worries as they walk over to Uncle Cyril's house so Myr can take the Floo to the address on the invitation.

"Holly said Laurel's fiancé Eric will send you a message when I get there." Myr reminds her. "And Floo travel isn't like taking the train, it's instant. No one can kidnap be between this fireplace and the Kiddell's."

Aster smiles, though it's strained. "I know, I know. I just worry. I am your mother."

Myr hums. "I know. I'll make sure Eric sends the message right away. An owl should only take an hour or so to get here." He promises.

Uncle Cyril greets them at the door. "Go have fun, don't drink too much Butterbeer, and if someone offers you Firewhiskey just say no." He declares loudly, though the wink he directs at Myr tells the brunet that the Firewhiskey comment is mostly for Aster.

Myr still doesn't plan on drinking anything - he won't be of legal age for another two years after all.

"Okay Uncle Cyril. I'll see you in a week." He waves awkwardly, his bag slung over his shoulder, before grabbing a handful of Floo powder and tossing into the fireplace.

He recites the address clearly and steps through the flames, accidentally inhaling a bit of soot in the process.

He comes out the other side coughing heavily, and a broad, warm hand slaps him on the back a few times as he stumbles into a different living room.

"Woah there son, take it easy. Lydia! Dear, could we get some water, Holly's friend got a mouthful of Floo from the looks of it!" The man calls over his shoulder, keeping one hand steadily on Myr's back which is used to steer him into one of the chairs near the fireplace.

A woman appears a few moments after Myr has settled in, glass of water in hand and wand in the other. "There you are dear, new to Flooing I presume? It takes some time to get used to." She observes sympathetically. "There you are, drink slowly, little sips. I'll just get Eric then, he's supposed to tell your folks when you've arrived wasn't he?"

Myr nods mutely, obediently taking careful sips of water to soothe his throat. The woman - Lydia - hurries out of the room humming lightly.

"So you're our Holly's friend!" The man takes the seat next to Myr, smiling almost unnervingly the entire time. "I'm Ash Kiddell, her father, and that was my wife Lydia. We're so pleased to finally meet one of our daughters' school friends. Willow never brought anyone home and we only met Eric after he and Laurel had been dating for a year!"

"In Laurel's defense, that was mostly my fault." A young man announces as he walks in. Myr assumes he must be Eric the fiancé based on his words. "Hello Myrddin, you probably don't remember me but I was one of the Ravenclaw prefects during your first few years of school."

"I mostly remember you from games." Myr admits. "And even then I was more focused on playing."

Eric laughs. "Of course, Laurel wouldn't have put you on the team if you weren't going to put in full focus. Alright, so your Uncle is a wizard right? And your mother will be with him?"

Myr nods, tilting his head uncertainly. "Why does that matter?" He asks curiously.

Eric smiles as he produces his wand. "Patronuses can only be sent to other magic users - it's not completely understood why that is, but people theorize that the patronuses lock onto whatever genes allow us access to magic and-" He cuts himself off sheepishly when he sees Myr's look of pure confusion. "Sorry, I get carried away with this stuff. What's your uncle's name?"

"Cyril Greengrass." Myr replies hesitantly. He has absolutely no idea what a patronus is, but he supposes that as long as it doesn't take much longer than an owl would it will still work as a messenger to his mother.

Eric nods. "Got it. Expecto Patronum!'

Myr nearly drops his glass of water when a silvery Unicorn bursts from the end of Eric's wand and trots around the room, shaking out it's mane and passing through the furniture as it clops a good two feet off of the ground.

"What the heck is that?" He can't help the outburst - the sudden appearance of a mythical beast has caught him very off guard.

Eric blinks, and then laughs again. "I suppose you haven't learned about Patronuses yet, have you?" He observes. "These are pretty tough to create, but if you're taking Defense this year you'll start learning the basics. What's important now is that I can use my patronus to contact your uncle and tell him you arrived safely. It's much faster than owling."

"I certainly can't create a corporeal one." Ash says proudly. "Eric really is quite skilled, could have been an Auror, I always say."

Eric flushes slightly as he gets his patronus to stop parading around so he can give it the message. "I never much fancied that kind of work, I'm very happy at St. Mungo's." He tells Ash before turning to the unicorn. "For Cyril Greengrass, Cardiff, Whales. Message start: Myr has arrived safely at the Kiddell estate. Message end."

The Patronus whinnies and then leaps through the wall, presumably towards Whales.

"They should receive her in ten to fifteen minutes." Eric promises.

Myr nods his thanks and quietly hopes he did well enough on his Defense OWL so he can learn how to make his own unicorn. The patronus spell is definitely on the list of coolest spells he's ever seen.

"Well Holly should be in her room, she can help you get settled in the guest room!" Ash says cheerfully. "I need to get back to helping Lydia and Laurel with decorations!"

Ash points Myr in the directions of the stairs and Myr heads up while Holly's father exits the house.

He can tell immediately which of the rooms is Holly's when he reaches the top of the stairs - there's a framed wand with the words "First Wand Carved" hanging on the front of her door.

He knocks lightly before hesitantly cracking the door open. "Holly? Your dad said you'd be up here."

"Myr! Hey, hello, come in!" Holly greets, sounding a bit out of breath. "I'm carving some kickass decorations for tomorrow so sorry for the mess." She adds as he pushes the door open further and is struck by the overwhelming scent of wood shavings.

"You can carve more than wands I see." He comments, shifting uncertainly in the doorway and hefting his bag a bit higher on his shoulder so that it isn't covered with the sawdust permeating the room.

Holly beams. "I'm pretty handy when I want to be. I'm glad it hasn't been raining the past week though, I've had to keep my window open - I clean out the sawdust every day but I can never really get it all, especially without cleaning spells."

"Why don't you ask your parents? Or your sisters? They can do magic." Myr points out, giving up on finding anywhere to sit and leaning against the doorframe instead.

Holly shakes her head vehemently. "Heck no, no one is allowed to see until it's all done! Except you, obviously." She adds with a grin. "I need a guinea pig to tell me which are best, but it can't be family since they're all going to be surprised!"

Myr laughs. "Well, could I put my stuff down first? Your dad mentioned a guest room?"

Holly perks up. "Oh, yeah! Sorry, I get carried away. Lemme wash up real quick, be out in two minutes!"

Once Myr is settled he ends up spending the rest of the day in Holly's room, giving his opinions on her many creations. If he's honest he doesn't really know much about art but he does his best to be honest.

Holly at least seems pleased, and at dinner she announces that her gifts are ready.

Myr goes to bed rather soon after that - he's rather drained by the day. He falls asleep rather quickly to the sounds of Holly's parents exclaiming over the state of her room.

The wedding is the next day, and the family is holding it right there on their wand farm. They've dolled up a section of the clearing with white, red, and blue (for their Houses, Willow Kiddell informs Myr when he first goes to check out the venue), and several of Holly's carvings now guard the edges of the area. They'd chosen two quidditch players, an eagle, a lion, and a cauldron and the entire area actually looks really nice. Myr wonders if, whenever he gets married, he should do it at home.

Though the Cadwalladers don't have nearly as much land to work with as the Kiddells do, so it probably wouldn't work.

Guests start arriving around ten, and Myr awkwardly keeps close to Holly as he doesn't recognize anyone. At least, not until one of Eric's guests arrive and he recognizes her pale complexion, dark braids, and South American-looking necklace from class.

"Say, isn't that the Ravenclaw at the top of our year? What was her name again?" Holly notices the other girl at the same time that Myr does. "Ava or Ana or something like that?"

Myr can't quite remember either, which is bothering him. "Maybe we should say hello? I doubt she knows anyone here either." He suggests, though he's quickly proven wrong when several of Eric's friends start chatting with the girl. "Or not."

"We can still say hi, and introduce ourselves to Eric's friends! The after party will be no fun if we only know each other after all." Holly says confidently, striding over towards the group and leaving Myr to debate whether staying in the corner alone or going to talk to a bunch of strangers is the worse option.

The decision is made for him when Holly enthusiastically points him out and then waves him over. It would be rude to stay away at this point.

"Myr, these are Eric's classmates from school, and also Ana but you know her." Holly explains cheerfully.

"Not all of us actually, Sarah and Eric used to be best friends before Laurel came into the picture." The one male present pipes up cheerfully and earns himself an elbow in the ribs for his trouble.

"She's completely swamped with work, which you'd know if you kept in contact with anyone other than Eric." The lanky brunette scolds. She holds out her hand to Myr with an apologetic smile. "I'm Josie, this is Horace, and that's Hannah." She introduces the three of them with slight flicks of her hand, and Myr nods to each of the others as he accepts the handshake.

"Myrddin Cadwallader, but I usually go by Myr." he replies, despite Holly having already blurted his name moments before.

Myr doesn't end up talking much after that - the Ravenclaws go off on wizard politics and he finds himself utterly lost, barely being in tune with the Muggle side of things nonetheless the wizarding part.

Though I probably should start paying attention, considering what I want to do for a career. He thinks to himself.

Thankfully, Ash and Lydia usher everyone into their seats not long after, so Myr manages to avoid feeling too awkward.

The service is painfully long, though it helps that Laurel keeps making faces at him, Holly, and Willow to show she's as bored as the rest of them. Eric looks simultaneously amused and embarrassed at her antics.

Finally it's over, the vows are said, and Eric kisses Laurel to thundering applause.

Holly sighs dreamily next to Myr. "I can't wait until I'm in love." She says wistfully. "It must be lovely."

"Getting there is a mess though. Also staying there." Willow quips cheerfully. "I'm in no hurry to find another boyfriend myself, relationships are exhausting."

Holly sticks her tongue out at her older sister. "Maybe you're just bad at them, did you ever think of that?"

Myr leaves them to it, deciding to join the crowd of people congratulating the bride and groom.

It takes a few minutes but he eventually reaches the couple, and Laurel lights up when she sees him.

"Myr! How's my favorite beater doing? Did they get a good replacement? Holly says yes but I don't trust her Quidditch judgement. How did Kent do as captain? Who's captain now? If it's not Charlie Weasley I'm going to be paying Kent a visit to smack some sense into him."

Myr blinks rapidly and Eric laughs.

"Let the kid breath Laur, you're overwhelming him. They just had their OWLs remember?" He points out.

Laurel at least looks sheepish. "Sorry, I haven't really spoken to anyone from the team since graduating."

Myr manages a grin. "Well Evera and Jacob Fawley started dating so there's that."

Laurel laughs. "I knew it! I knew they would! Kent owes me five Sickles, he said no way his sister would sink that low but I saw that tension. It was either kissing or killing."

Myr is glad he'd decided to talk to Eric and Laurel - he ends up staying with them for the rest of the night. Ana stops by to chat with Eric and the two of them go off on hypotheticals about a bracelet, which Myr doesn't totally understand, and Myr and Laurel discuss Hogwarts Quidditch.

"Man, Hufflepuff won this year? That team has been doing really well, I heard Lola had offers from a couple teams."

"Did she not take them?" Myr is genuinely surprised to hear it. He'd always assumed Lola would go pro with Quidditch considering how skilled she is.

Laurel shrugs. "Not that I've heard. Don't quote me on that though, it's only hear-say. We on the pro circut like to gossip about potential recruits but we only really know anything about our own team."

It's a nice evening, overall. Myr does feel a bit awkward when people he doesn't know swarm the happy couple to congratulate them and reminisce about school days or 'when you were this small!' from distant family.

Everyone starts heading home well after dark, and Lydia insists he retire too when he tries to help clean up.

"We have magic dear, this will only be a few minutes at most! You look absolutely beat and you've got a Floo trip home tomorrow!"

Myr doesn't really put up a fight about it. He is absolutely exhausted.

Still, he's glad he came. It really was a fun night.

Ana had fun at Eric's wedding, even if she'd be loathe to admit it. She honestly was surprised he'd invited her at all, and she normally might have given it a pass except the fact that June has been dragging itself out painfully slowly and it gave her something to do while waiting for her exam results.

And it had been fun to see Josie again, if not Horace who merely reminded Ana why they had never really been on speaking terms.

She'd of course spent most of the evening with Hannah though.

They'd mostly discussed the work Hannah was doing at the observatory - apparently their team is pushing for open communication with the herd of centaurs in the forbidden forest but is meeting resistance from both the Ministry and the centaurs - but Hannah does ask about Alec.

The blonde is the one person who knows that Ana has been regularly owling the curse-breaker, though her parents are starting to catch on as well.

"I've only written him once since getting home. He is in Peru, communication is rather difficult." Ana sighs when Hannah spectacularly fails to be subtle when bringing it up. "And yes this is still the necklace he gave me, it matches everything and I've gotten used to having it on." She adds.

Hannah smiles. "I said nothing. It is a really beautiful necklace, I would certainly wear it regularly if I had anything like it." She agrees. "It must be nice to have someone to talk to about curse-breaking, I was utterly lost when I first started looking for observatory jobs. Sarah and I were the only Ravenclaws still taking Astronomy and she had no interest in pursuing it further so I mostly had to figure things out as I went."

Ana hums. "It is useful. The whole thing is far more complicated than I had initially assumed." She admits.

Hannah had let the subject drop after that and they mostly watched the other party guests embarrass themselves as they got increasingly inebriated as the night went on. It wasn't until just after eleven that Ana and Hannah walked back to the floo and said their goodbyes before heading home.

Once she arrives Ana does her best to stay quiet, certain her parents are already asleep. She pads up to her room, slips into her nightgown, and thankfully falls alseep rather quickly.

The next morning she tries to force herself to sleep in, just to waste a bit of extra time, but Dracula is making a low, irritated whining sound and she's not really tired anyway. She cleans out the fire salamander's cage and then heads downstairs for breakfast.

"Only one more day until OWL results arrive!" Her mother greets her brightly as Ana settles at the table. Ana glares. She doesn't need a reminder - she's already acutely aware of when the results are supposed to be released, and she's equally aware that actual reception of the results can take anywhere from one to five days after initial release to arrive.

"Hopefully." She mutters, helping herself to the plate her mother has already left on the table. As she eats, an owl taps at the window, and for two seconds Ana finds herself hoping it could somehow be the as-yet unreleased exam results.

But the large grey owl is familiar, and though she is a bit disappointed a response from Alec isn't the worst way to start the day.

Her mother looks quite pleased with the interruption. "Hello there, good to see you again." She greets the owl. "Ana, it's for you. I'll get you a treat, just wait a moment." She adds to the international flyer, who looks quite pleased by the news.

Ana quickly grabs the letter before her mother can try to read it and hurries back up to her room. While she's rather certain her mother knows exactly who she's been owling she has no interest in dealing with that particular conversation. Now or ever.

She opts to sit on her bed, and she lets Dracula out onto her pillow before tearing open the envelope and unfolding the letter within.

Ana,

Hope you had fun at the wedding (I'm assuming this letter will arrive after it's happened). I can't say I'm much of a fan of grand spectacles either but as you say it can be a good way to waste time. I remember the summer after fifth year, you must be frustrated with no summer homework to work on. If I may make a suggestion, you should work on your wandless, wordless magic. The Trace can't track that so you wouldn't technically be breaking any laws. And I imagine it would give you something to focus on other than your Baba's Dark Magic lessons, which I do hope you've stopped. Sixteen and over you become legally responsible for any Dark Magic you learn and it is grounds for application rejection so do be careful.

Alec

Ana still isn't sure why she'd told Alec about her Baba, but it had come up and she had felt surprisingly comfortable admitting her childhood Dark Arts lessons. She has decided to stop practicing them though - as Alec has pointed out they could jeopardize her career options.

She does appreciate the suggestion as she likely wouldn't have done any work on her silent spellwork due to the Trace. But if it can't track her without her wand, she may just have something to do this summer after all.

She decides to postpone replying to Alec until she's gotten her OWL results - it should only be a few days after all.

She carefully hides the letter in the drawer where she keeps all of her and Alec's correspondence and then stands and opens up the window. She plans to start with spells she'd already accomplished without a wand, but she doesn't fancy filling her room with smoke on the off chance something goes wrong.

She also puts Dracula back in his cage and secures as much of the loose paper in her room at she can so that nothing is blown out the window. She then takes a careful breath, holds up her hand, and mutters,

"Lumos."

A small ball of light flickers to life in her palm, but it sputters out only a few moments later. Ana gives an irritated frown and tries again, and again the light only survives a few moments before going dark again.

"I suppose it needs a continuous source." Ana decides. "Let's try something else."

Her next attempted spell is Alohamora which goes much better. She manages to unlock every lock in her room individually, though a few do take multiple tries.

She's thinking about attempting Accio next but her mother calls up for lunch and Ana startles to realize how much time has passed.

"I was thinking we could go into the city this afternoon, do some shopping, maybe get you some new clothes! You've grown an inch since the winter at least." Her mother suggests hopefully as the two of them sit down to eat.

Ana isn't very enthusiastic about the idea - she'd much rather attempt Accio without her wand - but her mother isn't wrong that most of her dresses are getting a bit short around the ankles, even the ones she'd only just gotten the year before.

So she agrees, somewhat grudgingly, to the request and spends her afternoon trying on dresses and watching her mother dither over what to make for dinner for the next week. By the time they get home, just as the sun is setting, Ana is regretting agreeing to go, even if she did get quite a few new items for her wardrobe. She couldn't have imagined a duller way to have spent her afternoon.

The sole positive is that it did wile away the remaining time until the next day - the day the exam results will be released.

Ana has a very difficult time falling asleep that night. She knows there's a chance the results won't actually arrive in the morning, but living as close to the Ministry as she does she's pretty sure they'll arrive with the morning Prophet. Despite her own insistence otherwise.

She does eventually fall into a rather fitful slumber, though she never fully falls asleep and instead lingers between dreaming and wakefullness all night.

This has the result of her being utterly exhausted when the morning arrives. She drags herself out of bed, cleans Dracula's cage, and then heads downstairs to make herself a coffee and wait for the morning owl.

She even beats her father down, and he's momentarily startled when he sees he sitting at the table, cup of coffee in hand.

"You know that stuff stunts your growth." He observes when he's recovered, pouring himself a glass as he does.

"I've grown plenty, I'm happy at this height." She replies blearily. "Good morning." She adds after a moment.

Her father laughs. "I suppose I shouldn't be surprised to see you up. Your exam results come in today, correct?"

She just nods mutely, too tired to really respond, and her father pats her awkwardly on the shoulder.

"Well, best of luck. We know you'll do great." He offers encouragingly.

Ana of course knows she did well, but that doesn't stop her from being nervous about the entire situation. The morning post arrives just as her father is getting ready to head out, and with a grin he passes her a sealed envelope.

"I'll try to get home for dinner tonight so you can tell me how you did." He promises before Apparating away, Prophet in hand.

Ana grips the envelope nervously for a solid minute before exhaling and carefully prying it open.

The topmost parchment is a letter from the head of the Wizarding Examination Authority, which she quickly tosses aside in favor of pulling out the twelve pages below it.

At the very top is her Care of Magical Creatures assessment and grades. She looks first at the grade - an E, which while not an Outstanding isn't bad considering how little time she truly dedicated to studying for it - and then skims through the notes given by the grader.

She's a bit irked by a note stating that her writing can seem stilted and unconnected at times, but she pushes down the irritation and moves on to the next paper.

She smirks when she sees the O at the bottom of her Charms evaluation - of course she'd gotten perfect, the exam for that class had been quite easy. She ends up rifling through the pages to look for other Os and is a bit disappointed that Arithmancy and Defense Against the Dark Arts are the only other two she's gotten.

She's managed an E for most of the rest - Transfiguration and Potions most notably, which pleases her since those are the required grades to continue to the NEWT levels. The comments on those are mostly positive, and generally note that while she occasionally glosses over details it's clear she understands the concepts quite well.

She also gets an E in Ancient Runes which does bother her somewhat - she'd been certain she'd get an O. The comments state that she had mixed up a few similar runes and she resolves to go back through all her textbooks before returning to school.

Astronomy is the last E grade she finds, and her gut twists somewhat when she realizes that there are still four exam papers she hasn't properly looked at - and as she'd been going from highest grade to lowest they must be the exams she did worst on.

The biggest problem in the pile is her Herbology grade. While an A gets her an OWL credit and is all that is required for curse-breaking, it doesn't get her into the NEWT level class at Hogwarts. She wonders if she can argue her way into the course regardless - she is the top-ranked student in their class, surely the professors would see that it would be silly to bar her from taking the higher level classes.

She gets an A in Divination as well, which she accepts grudgingly. She can still continue the class at Hogwarts with an A, and it's widely known that one pretty much has to be a Seer to get any higher. It still stings a bit though.

Finally she picks up one of the last two papers, and nearly chokes on air.

A P stares up at her from the bottom of the page. She'd gotten a P in History of Magic. A Poor.

She hadn't gotten an OWL credit at all.

The notes are much harsher here about her essay writing abilities, noting a lack of coherency of ideas and common grammatical missteps. It also notes her lack of detail, which makes her want to throw the page across the room. Who cares about details of things that happened thousands of years ago anyway?

She almost doesn't want to look at her Muggle Studies grade, but she forces herself to anyway. Another P decorates the bottom of the page, and she doesn't bother reading the comments.

Her mother finds her a few minutes later when she emerges from the master bedroom.

"Ana, are those your grades? How did you do?" She asks brightly, though her demeanor shifts when she spots her daughter's sour expression. Winona uncertainly picks up the pile of exam grades Ana had left on the counter and begins shuffling through them. She begins to smile again as she does.

"Oh Ana, ten OWLs is amazing! I only got seven you know." Her mother looks over and frowns when she sees that Ana is still slumped miserably in her chair. "Now Ana, very few people can get all twelve OWLs - ten is already mind blowing. You're acting like a stubborn child who didn't get dessert." She scolds. "You're nearly seventeen - nearly an adult!"

Ana huffs out a breath but does sit up. Her mother isn't wrong after all, but the comments about her writing on top of the two failed exams still leave her in a grouchy mood for most of the day.

It isn't until after dinner that she remembers she needs to write Alec back. Sighing, she deposits Dracula on her writing desk next to her inkwell and sets to work penning a short response.

Alec,

My exam results just came in, and I unfortunately failed two of the OWLs, and I did not score high enough in Herbology to continue at the NEWT level. Should I make a case to the Headmaster and Professor Sprout to rectify this? Or is an OWL enough Herbology knowledge for Curse-Breaking?

Ana

She reads back over the letter, hesitates, and then adds a coda.

P.S. - The graders noted that I have a rather stilted way of writing essays. Any tips on how to improve?

Rajani gets a Dreadful on her Ancient Runes exam and it lands her in a full pot of boiling water with her parents. She does manage seven OWLs total - including an O in both Muggle Studies and History of Magic, an E in Transfiguration and Charms, and an A in Defense Against the Dark Arts, Astronomy, and Potions - but the two Ds and the P she gets in Ancient Runes, Herbology and Arithmancy respectively are the only things her parents notice.

Luckily for her she's only able to be grounded for a week before she's needed for wedding preparations, so she figures punishment could have been worse.

Or it's being postponed until after Sahana's marriage, but Rajani has decided that worrying about that is future Rajani's problem. Present Rajani is busy trying to sneak meetings with Ed in Diagon Alley whenever she goes out to pick up orders for her parents.

She knows it's probably a bad idea to put off their pre-determined breakup until Ed gets a job, but Rajani doesn't really want to think about that either. Honestly after OWLs she's not much up to thinking at all if she can help it. Her brain needs a break.

It's two days before the wedding when Ed asks her to grab an ice cream at Fortescue's with him, and Rajani gets around her parents by lying that she's helping Queenie choose her outfit. She arrives a few minutes late to find he's already gotten her a bowl of strawberry ice cream with slices of banana and kiwi on top.

She grins and accepts the spoon. "Hey, so what's up? You don't normally risk owling me since my parents are so crazy." Her smile drops when he doesn't laugh. "Ed? Is everything alright?"

"I got a job as a scribe for one of the older Wizengamot members." He responds, and for a moment Rajani is thrilled for him. Then she remembers what she hadn't been thinking about and feels like someone punched her in the gut.

"Oh, that... that's amazing!" She tries to imbue her initial excitement into her words but she knows she's failing miserably.

Ed frowns. "It is. But I'm going to be really busy from now on, and not being able to owl you..."

Rajani nods. "It would basically be a long distance relationship but with extremely limited communication. It doesn't make sense." She knows they're being logical, but it still .

She says as much a moment later and that gets Ed to laugh slightly.

"Hey, maybe in two years when you enter the Ministry we can meet up." He offers. "But I start tomorrow and the hours are pretty intense. It's not fair for me to expect you to wait."

"And it's not fair for me to expect you to wait either." Rajani sighs. "Well, maybe see you in two years?"

He grins at her. "Hey, I don't start until tomorrow. Can't we have one more afternoon to hang out?"

The afternoon is bittersweet, but Rajani does enjoy herself despite everything. She's definitely going to miss Ed.

The next day Rajani submits to the unavoidable fussing her mother puts her through to make sure she looks absolutely perfect. She'll have to go through the entire process again in the morning, but Vandana wants to ensure that everything looks correct before the big day, including Rajani.

Once her mother is satisfied Rajani takes off the entire ensemble and retires to her room. She knows that technically most of the guests are arriving that afternoon and she should be greeting them, but she's honestly just tired.

It's that afternoon, sitting up in her room and trying to figure out how to ward off the intense boredom that's latched onto her that she properly processes her OWL grades.

"I failed Ancient Runes." She realizes, sitting up sharply and in a breath. The other classes she'd wanted to continue are fine, but she'd needed an E minimum for Ancient Runes.

She wonders if Snape is going to mock her. He's never mocked a Slytherin as far as she can recall, but she's heard him go after students from the other three Houses and she's not eager to be on the other end of his scorn.

She does wonder how her schedule will work now - will she be able to replace her sixth class, or will she only be taking five? She figures the school will most likely send an owl explaining the process, and she hopes she can intercept it before her parents read it and remind themselves that they're upset with her.

She figures she can also ask Queenie, Eugene, and Clary their thoughts as she'd invited them all to the wedding. Queenie and Eugene's whole families are coming, but Clary is attending on her own which did disappoint Rajani's parents who had been hoping to properly meet a branch of the Travers family.

She perks up slightly when she remembers that Eugene's uncle is a former professor at Hogwarts - he'll surely know what the next steps are for her. Feeling much better, she goes back to being bored until she's called down for dinner.

She ends up next to Keaton's aunt, who's half blind and fusses over her, cooing about her 'pretty dark hair' and 'exotic complexion'. Rajani is distinctly uncomfortable with the entire situation but she mostly keeps quiet and remains polite whenever she responds to any questions the woman asks.

"No young man in your life then?" Mrs. Avery asks at one point, and Rajani sighs.

"I just broke up with my boyfriend." She says honestly in return. "He's graduated this year and has a job, and as I'm about to start my NEWT studies we both decided it would be best to focus on ourselves rather than a long-distance relationship."

Mrs. Avery pats her consolingly. "Terribly sorry to hear it. Well, if it was meant to be then you'll surely run into each other down the line. Fate has a funny way of working out like that." She says consolingly, and Rajani is surprised to find that the sentiment actually does make her feel a bit better. Although it's clear the karma from her past life isn't ideal, things have generally worked out well for her, so surely romance will likely be in the cards for her future.

And, she reminds herself, if things don't work out in this life I just need to do my best to pursue Moksha and my next life will be better.

The next day is the wedding, and once again Rajani undergoes fussing, though less than the day before as they'd already determined exactly what needed to be done to make her look perfect.

She admits it's nice to be dolled up in her formal sari, something she doesn't often have a reason to wear, but she knows she stands out amongst all the formal gowns of the native Brits and she's not blind to the occasional stare of distaste as she mingles with the guests.

She finds Queenie and Eugene sitting together with a girl she vaguely recognizes from around the common room and she moves to join them.

Queenie beams when she spots Rajani making her way over. "Raj! Hey, great venue, Eugene and I are taking notes." She greets with a grin. "You're the maind of honor, right? You know, I always thought that would be Mayra, she and your sister were best friends back in school." A raised eyebrow tells Rajani that Queenie has a good hunch on exactly how close Mayra and Sahana had really been, though she thankfully doesn't mention it.

Rajani shrugs. "School time friendship I suppose. How much did they really have in common in the end?" She responds as neutrally as she can, eyeing the other girl curiously. "I think of it as practice for when I'm your maid of honor."

Queenie grins. "Consider it more like an audition. Do this well and I'll consider you for the role." She teases.

The third girl clears uncertainly, and Eugene beams and pulls her closer. "Guys, this is Maribell Rowle. Her older brother Thorfinn is around somewhere, he's the best man. He and Keaton were best friends back in school." He introduces her.

Rajani eyes Maribell as suspiciously as the other girl is eyeing her. She's a broad woman, heavy-boned and curvy, with dusty blonde hair and sharp blue eyes. Even sitting down Rajani can tell she's very tall, and though she'd never say it Rajani is slightly intimidated.

"Going into your last year?" Rajani guesses, keeping her tone neutrally polite. She's not sure why but something about the blonde sets off warning bells in her mind.

Maribell hums. "Indeed. After which I shall being training as a midwife at St. Mungo's. Eugene and Queen were just telling me of their own ambitions."

The conversation is uncomfortable, but with his usual charm Eugene manages to keep it flowing until Rajani finds an excuse to leave - namely her mother waving for her to take her place in preparation of the ceremony.

Rajani catches a glimpse of her sister, and while she's still not okay with Sahana's life decisions, she has to admit that her sister looks absolutely stunning in her wedding sari.

Rajani takes her place in line, just in front of her sister and next to a broad, blonde man who looks so much like Maribell that Rajani knows instantly it must be Thorfinn.

Rajani decides to skip small talk and waits in silence for the music to begin. If Thorfinn is anything like his sister she's not going to have much to say to him anyway.

Finally it begins, and the flower girl skips down the aisle excitedly. The other bridesmaids and groomsmen go next, and Thorfinn offers his arm politely. Rajani takes it with as much dignity as she can muster considering she's several inches shorter than him.

Thankfully the walk isn't far, and she's able to release his arm shortly after to join the other bridesmaids in a line next to the altar.

It's the first time Rajani has seen Keaton, and she's stunned when she realizes he's wearing a formal Hindu wedding garment. She wonders if maybe she should be feeling bad for him - he obviously is genuinely in love with her sister, and Rajani is still convinced that Sahana is just using him.

If she's honest Rajani doens't really pay attention to the ceremony. It's incredibly long and partway through her legs start getting tired from standing. She glances over at Queenie and Eugene repeatedly, but both are enraptured by the ceremony - she's pretty sure Eugene even tears up during the vows.

She does finally spot Clary as things are wrapping up, and her friend looks like she's struggling not to fall asleep. Rajani feels vindicated in her boredom.

Finally the big kiss happens and Rajani beelines for a chair as soon as it seems appropriate. Her friends join her not long after, Queenie bearing an extra glass of water which she hands to Rajani with a grin.

"So how did I do? Did I pass the test?" Rajani jokes once she's downed half the glass in one go.

Queenie laughs. "Eh, you looked a litle bored, but I guess you'll do." She teases. "Sorry Clary, you'll have to settle for being a simple bridesmaid, Rajani has secured Maid of Honor."

Clary looks surprised. "I didn't even think I'd be in the wedding, but heck yeah! No ugly dresses though." She adds threateningly. "I will intentionally show you up if you try to make me wear something gross-looking."

Queenie laughs. "Please, like I'd ever let my entourage look bad. And of course you're in the party, Lenox is going to be one of Eugene's groomsmen after all."

Eugene looks slightly uncomfortable. "He, uh, is actually probably going to be my best man. If that's okay with you Clary." He adds hurriedly.

Clary grins. "It's fine, it's fine. Lenox and I are stable, not walking down the aisle together at our friends' wedding won't be destructive to our relationship."

Rajani feels slightly nervous when she realizes that it will be her walking down the aisle with Lenox, but she quickly pushes it down. She hadn't liked him before, and he and Clary are obviously happy together - she may be a Slytherin but she's not going to hurt her friend like that. She's just lonely because of the breakup. That's all.

The reception is a lot of fun at least, and she and Clary end up commiserating over their parents' disappointment with their OWL grades while Queenie and Eugene dance. They also both consult with the former Professor Slughorn once they manage to get Eugene to introduce them properly, and he assures them both that their Head of House will meet with them again at the start of term to correct their schedules and do what he can to ensure their career choices are still available.

"At least I did pass five classes." Clary observes when they've returned to their table. "Now I just have to buckle down and make sure to get the NEWTs for them as well."

"I can help with History." Rajani offers. "I managed an O in that one."

Clary looks sheepish. "Failed that one." She admits. "I'm sort of stuck with Herbology, Charms, Defense Against the Dark Arts, Potions, and Divination."

Rajani makes a face. "Divination?"

Clary shrugs. "Just predict the worst possible outcome and you're almost guaranteed and O." She laughs. "Really though, there have been seers in the Travers line before so I'm predisposed. I feel bad for Nia, the Flints haven't ever had seers in the family and you can definitely tell watching her in class."

The reception wraps up a little after eleven, and Rajani says her farewells to her friends before having to help her mother and Keaton's mother with clean up. The two women use magic, leaving Rajani with not much to do, though she isn't allowed to leave until everything has been put away. She finally stumbles into her bed just after midnight and passes out rather immediately.

The next morning Keaton is sitting at the breakfast table, and Rajani pointedly keeps her eyes down so she won't glare at her sister and possibly bring their parents' attention onto herself.

"Well you two enjoy your honeymoon, Dehli is just beautiful this time of year."

Rajani glances up slightly at her mother's words. "You're going back home?" She asks, directing her question more towards Keaton than Sahana.

Keaton smiles at her. "I wanted to see where Sahana grew up." He explains. "I hear the spice markets are an absolute delight."

Rajani thinks again that it's too bad her sister doesn't truly like Keaton - but at least, she thinks, she'll get along with her brother in law.

She ends up describing the spice markets to Keaton in detail over breakfast, and she's almost cheerful as she helps clean up afterwards.

Then her mother turns to face her. "Now then Rajani, we must discuss your OWL grades."

Rajani barely bites back a groan. She supposes she's future Rajani now, and she'll have to deal with it.

This was finished literally less than two hours ago, finals are kicking my rear OTL But here we are, starting sixth year! Next chapter we return to Hogwarts for the start of NEWT classes, and we'll get to see what everyone else is taking and perhaps get some insight into future jobs!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2453 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2453 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!