Chapter One

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Quills, Cloaks, and Owl Post

Very few things in Myrddin Cadwallader's life can be considered particularly normal. From his name to his insane uncle who runs what his sister likes to refer to as a "scam shop" for tourists, Myr is rather accustomed to the odd and whimsical.

However a letter being dropped unceremoniously onto his head before the sun has even risen is pushing it, even for him.

"What on Earth...?" He groggily flails about for a moment, his eyes stubbornly refusing to open, until he feels the envelope slide off the bed and hears it settle onto the floor. There's a rustle of feathers but he's already halfway back asleep and he's content to believe the strange incident is simply a waking dream as he drifts back into slumber.

He nearly brains himself on his dresser later than morning when he slips on the forgotten letter as he gets dressed. Partly annoyed and partly concerned, he picks it up and takes it with him down to breakfast, where his mother and Cadi are already seated.

"Morning Myr." His sister greets after taking a moment to swallow a mouthful of cereal. He gives her a quick, tired smile before helping himself to his own bowl and sitting down across from her.

His mother frowns as she notes his apparent exhaustion "How was your sleep Myr? I thought I heard some commotion in your room last night."

He hands the letter to his mother as he begins to eat. "Something dropped that on my head last night, a bird I think. Though I'm not sure how it would have gotten in." That's bothering him more than the mystery letter honestly. Birds are rather filthy creatures and to have one flying uncontrolled through the house is not something he wants becoming a regular situation. "Of course, the sound could have been the rain as well." He amends, glancing at the gray storm sulking outside of their window.

His mother frowns and flips the envelope over in her hands, studying it cautiously. "Well, perhaps it's another joke from your uncle. I'm on shift at the shop this afternoon so I'll see if he knows anything. In the meantime perhaps we should check the locks on the doors and windows."

Cadi and Myr both agree and hurry through the rest of breakfast.

"Are you sure it was a bird Myr? You were probably half asleep and I really don't see how it could have gotten in?" Cadi frowns as they check the last window in the house only to find it quite firmly locked up. The morning's rain is still going against the pane, though it's lighter now than it had been earlier.

Myr shakes his head. "I didn't actually open my eyes, but it sounded like a bird. But you're right, the whole place is shut up tight." And he's even more paranoid now than he had been before. Nothing about the situation makes logical sense, and without logic he's flailing a bit. "It could have been the rain." He reiterates, but it's a weak suggestion and Cadi knows it. Thankfully she lets it slide.

"We'll go with mom to the shop later then. Uncle Cyril is probably just testing something for the shop, you know how he is." Cadi sounds more like she's trying to convince him of this fact than that she believes it herself, and Myr knows she doesn't want him stressing himself out about it.

Which he might have been planning to do.

He sighs. "I guess we can't do much else, can we?"

His sister grins "And you absolutely hate that. Come on, let's play a few rounds of chess, it'll get your mind off of it."

He appreciates Cadi's attempts at distraction and lets her lead him into her room where she sets up their worn chessboard.

They play for nearly an hour, both attempting to outmaneuver each other and ending up in something of a stalemate with their knights and bishops chasing one another around the board as their queens attempted to be useful without putting themselves in any danger.

"Well, looks like we're at a draw again." Cadi says ruefully after a solid twenty turns of nothing of note occurring in the game.

Myr nods and helps her start packing up the board. These deadlocks are becoming an increasingly common occurrence for their games - he attributes it to them having a nearly identical play styles due to having been taught by the same person.

"Mom is probably about ready to head out anyway. Rematch tomorrow?" Cadi offers as she slides the board back under her bed and then stands, smiling over at her brother.

"And we could just walk over ourselves if she isn't, Uncle Cyril's place isn't all that far after all. And I'm actually pretty curious about the letter as well." She continues to talk as they walk towards the kitchen, twirling a stray hair around a finger, and Myr is content to let her. Cadi is normally rather quiet, but when she gets curious about something she opens up and he likes seeing that side of her.

"Did you look at it before giving it to mom? Is it addressed to you or her? And is it properly addressed with a return address?"

Myr can't answer most of the questions, since he'd only given it a cursory glance before determining that he needed to give the unknown communication to his mother for further analysis. He does, however, remember thinking that the handwriting had been rather odd.

Cadi frowns. "Odd? In what way?"

He can only shrug. "Just... odd. It wasn't a font people usually write in." He pauses to consider, and then shrugs again helplessly.

"It was handwritten then?" Cadi always was one for mysteries and has the talent of latching onto any information she can, no matter how seemingly insignificant. Thankfully they found their mother a moment later and Cadi was able to redirect her questions to someone Myr felt was better suited to answer them.

"I still have a bit to get done but if you'd like, the letter is on my desk and I can meet you at the shop." Aster offers after a few minutes of questioning.

Both of her children were happy to take up the offer, and once the letter was safely tucked into Myr's pocket they were off, shoes sinking slightly into the damp ground.

"I wonder if Uncle Cyril has any new stock we could try out." Cadi sounds quite hopeful. For all her teasing about the questionable nature of their Uncle's curio shop she loved the place as much as the rest of the family.

Myr nods. "I hope he does. Or perhaps you'll finally take him up on that offer to read your future." He grins wickedly as Cadi gags.

"Ugh please, he's such a hack! And anyway, I already know my future. I'm going to be in Parliament making life less y for people with fewer means." She raises her chin confidently and Myr grins. Cadi had decided on her life plan when she was still in the single digits, but he fully believes that if anyone can do it it's her. Even at only fourteen years old she's already more studious than a lot of adults over twice her age.

"Sure Cadi, if you say so." They arrive at the shop then and he holds the door for her and she gives the silly little curtsy she's always given since they were small.

"Uncle Cyril! Are you busy?" Myr attempts to stamp the mud off his feet before he ventures after Cadi into the shop.

"In the back, I'll be out in a moment! Is your brother with you?"

Myr lets Cadi shout out the affirmative - he's never been fond of raising his voice for any reason and Cadi seems content to do the talking regardless.

Cyril is grinning when he appears from behind the beaded curtain that separates his office space from the rest of the shop. By all legal accounts Cyril Greengrass doesn't actually have any familial ties to the Cadawalladers, and yet Myr can't remember a time he didn't refer to the eccentric man as his uncle. He's a school friend of Myr's absent father, and despite said father walking out on the family when Myr was quite young, Myr can't quite imagine what life would be like without the inclusion of Cyril's special brand of whimsy.

A brand that Myr likes to think he's quite attuned with, but as he studies his uncle he realizes that Cyril's grin is one of cheer and not mischief. Myr frowns and fingers the letter in his pocket uncertainly. Surely he would be able to tell if his uncle has played some part in it's appearance?

Cyril's grin falters when he spots Myr's confusion. "Something the matter Myrddin?" He's the only one who uses Myr's full name. "You look like a wet cat."

"It's raining." Myr points out, but it's half-hearted and the letter is out moments later. "You didn't have anything to do with this, did you?"

Cyril goes still when he spots the letter, and then slowly, almost cautiously though his uncle is never cautious, he takes the envelope from Myr and scans it over several times before releasing a low breath.

"Cadi I think you best go see if your mother needs any help."

Cadi frowns and for a moment Myr thinks she might argue. But instead she shoots him a look that says she expects a full debriefing afterwards and then hurries out of the shop.

Cyril follows her, locking the door and flipping the sign to deter customers.

"Alright." He sighs. "I was hoping... well, I suppose it was a miracle Cadi is how she is."

Myr isn't sure what on Earth his uncle is talking about, but he remains silent, waiting for the explanation to come on its own terms.

After a moment of silence Cyril ushers his nephew into the back room, where he sits the boy down on a stool.

"Alright. I guess you should read this first and then I'll try and explain what I can." The letter is handed to Myr, and he frowns but accepts it.

He's read the front already of course, so he turns it over and tears the odd wax seal off the back, tracing the official-looking stamp adorning the flap just over the seal with his eyes as he does.

The image on the seal is almost familiar to him, but he can't quite place why. Shaking his head, he puts the envelope aside and withdraws two pieces of parchment and what appears to be a train ticket. His uncle has promised an explanation after all, but only after the letter is read. He can inquire about the crest then.

The topmost parchment only has writing on the top third of it, so he scans over that first.

Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Not even past the title at the top and already he's confused. He glances up at his uncle, thinking he's going to start laughing, but for once there's no mirth in Cyri's expression. Myr chews slightly at the inside of his lip as he looks back down and presses on with reading.

Mr. Cadwallader,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.

Term begins on 1 September. We await your owl by no later than 31 July.

Yours sincerely,

Minerva McGonagall

Deputy Headmistress

Myr rereads it three times before looking up at his uncle once again, certain his confusion is written plainly across his face. However, when his uncle still doesn't speak he takes it upon himself to begin what he knows is going to be a very confusing conversation.

"Uncle Cyril, what is this?"

His uncle takes a breath, and then seems to come to a decision as he looks directly at Myr.

"You know your father and I met at school. This was that school." He studies Myr's expression before pressing on. "It's the best school in the world for young witches and wizards to study magic."

Myr knows he looks incredulous, but he's not sure how else to react to his uncle's declarations. Magic? Witches and wizards? It's all utter nonsense surely? And yet his uncle, for once, seems to be completely serious.

Cyril clears his throat. "I can prove it to you, if you like, show you a bit of magic."

Myr can only nod mutely as his uncle pulls a box off one of the many cluttered shelves decorating the small office space. He pulls it open and tugs out a beautifully carved stick. Taking a slow breath, Cyril gives the stick a swish and suddenly the letter in Myr's hands is pulled out of his grasp and begins to float nearly a foot above his head. A moment later the letter folds itself into an origami cat that begins running circles around Myr, who can't help but laugh.

"Okay, I think I might believe you. But if I'm magic wouldn't I have known it? And what about Cadi? Why doesn't she have magic?" He still can't quite wrap his head around it, but the paper cat now snoozing on his shoulder is doing a pretty good job of assuring him that this isn't just another of his uncle's pranks.

"You have shown some aptitude, but you're right that it wasn't all that much." Cyril sighs and puts the stick - a wand perhaps? - back into its box. The paper cat continues purring and Myr idly reaches up to scratch at its head, earning a pleased mewl in reward. "As for Cadi, it's not unheard of for a wizard or witch to produce non-magical offspring. She's what we would call a Squib."

Myr takes a long minute to roll all this new information around in his head. It still seems rather ludicrous but his uncle has given plenty of reason to believe him, the least of which being how seriously he's treating the entire situation.

"So then you and dad are wizards, and you went to this school for magic? And now they want me to attend?" He frowns. "But what about regular school? And how much would all this cost?"

Cyril smiles. "The only cost is for books and I can help with that - I might even have some old cauldrons and quills you could use to save on supplies." He hesitates slightly, and then presses on. "In fact, I'll get you a wand as a late birthday present. That's the most expensive item on the list anyhow and you only need to get one unless you break it." At this point he's back to his usual self, and Myr somehow feels more comfortable with the entire situation because of it. Uncle Cyril being serious just isn't something that happens.

Then he frowns again. "Wait, but what do I tell mom and Cadi? They'll have to know, I can't keep something like this from them."

Cyril waves cheerfully as he stands up and heads back out into the shop. "Don't worry about that for now, I'll help explain things to them when they arrive this afternoon. In the meantime, would you help with inventory?"

Myr follows him out, still a bit dubious and extremely confused. But, he supposes, it is only June. There's plenty of time to learn more and become accustomed to the idea. Hopefully.

It's raining when the letters arrive, and Rajani Misra has to give the delivery owl two mice as tip before it deigns to head back into the storm. She already knows what the letters are of course - they've received this same post every year since Sahana had started at school - but she has to admit to a small thrill when her fingers brush over the official Hogwarts seal and she sees her name on the front of the topmost envelope.

Her parents are busy entertaining guests at the moment, which was why Rajani felt it appropriate  to answer the window herself when the owl arrived, and the young girl decides to leave the letter bearing her name atop it on her father's desk instead of interrupting them to announce her acceptance.

The second letter is taken up the stairs to her sister's room. Sahana barely glances up from her summer readings as she instructs Rajani to leave the letter on her nightstand, which Rajani quickly does before excusing herself back to her own room.

Even though she had of course known the letter was coming, actually waiting for it had been excruciating. She wonders if her sister had felt that same uncertainty when she was awaiting her first letter. If she had she certainly hadn't shown it.

Rajani sighs and selects a book off of her shelf to curl up with. It will surely be a few hours yet before her parents are finished hosting and find the letter, so she may as well continue with her own studies.

Her chosen book is written in Hindi and details the legends of Indian culture. Rajani might find it quite interesting if only she didn't struggle so much with simply translating the text in her mind in order to properly understand.

The family had lived in India when Rajani was very young, so she speaks the language acceptably enough, but reading has never come easily to her in either Hindi or English. Her parents feel it's important for her to understand her heritage however, and so she continues to work through the Hindi language books that inhabit her bookshelf - gifts from her parents and other relatives alike.

She gets through about ten pages before she hears the front door closing, indicating that her parents' guests have left. She puts the book down and strains to hear what her parents are doing now. Is her father going towards his study? Or will he follow her mother into the kitchen to continue a conversation?

She hears her sister's door opening and the sound of Sahana's feet pattering on the steps, moving faster than she normally does. Curiosity piqued, and deciding that if Sahana can go downstairs then she can as well, Rajani follows suit.

"Mother, the post arrived while you were in the sitting room." Sahana announces. Rajani peers into the kitchen to see her mother magically gathering ingredients for supper while Sahana stands off to the side, hands folded politely behind her back. Rajani tilts her head, wondering why Sahana would want to bring this up, as she never had in the past. Not since her first letter anyway.

"Rajani, is there a reason you're skulking about in the hallway?"

Her father's voice causes her to jump guiltily, despite a voice in her mind politely reminding her that she's not technically doing anything wrong. The kitchen door closes without her small hands bracing it open, and she hopes the soft thud hasn't been noticed by the two speaking in the kitchen.

"Oh, I didn't want to interrupt Sahana and Mother's conversation." She bows slightly. "I didn't intend to skulk father, I apologize."

Samman Misra regards his youngest daughter with a critical eye before giving a short nod.

"Well don't linger in the hall in the future." He walks past her and Rajani is quick to fall in behind him, pushing her shoulders back subconsciously to improve her posture.

"Oh, and good job." Samman adds a moment before he enters the kitchen, holding up her letter with two fingers as he pushes open the door.

Rajani takes a private moment to beam happily to herself and then follows, quickly arranging her features back into a neutral facade.

She enters the kitchen to find her mother smiling proudly and Sahana looking rather pleased with herself.

"What's going on in here?" Her father's tone is one of detached interest, and Rajani does her best to emulate his attitude as she stands just behind him.

Her mother turns the smile towards her husband. "Our Sahana was chosen as a prefect!"

Just like that Rajani's excitement for her own letter dulls. Prefect is much more exciting than a simple acceptance - no wonder Sahana had come downstairs so quickly.

Sahana smiles modestly as her father congratulates her, and Rajani quickly shakes off her own disappointment to follow suit.

"I guess you'll be showing me around then?" She adds with a small smile.

Sahana nods importantly. "Of course. Prefects look out for the younger students."

"Well I say this calls for a special dinner. Sahana a prefect and Rajani starting at Hogwarts - there's certainly plenty to celebrate." Vandana sounds pleased for the excuse to make an elaborate meal. She shoos her family out of the kitchen shortly after, and Rajani's letter is returned to her before her father retires into his study.

Rajani looks up at Sahana, who's polishing her new prefect badge with her sleeve. "Could I see it?" She asks after a moment, not sure if it's a good idea but her curiosity getting the better of common sense.

Sahana glances between her and the badge, hesitates, and then sighs. "I suppose. But don't smudge it!"

Rajani takes it delicately and admires the silver engravings, resisting an urge to touch the dark green background to see if it's as soft as it looks. She hands the badge back and smiles.

"It's beautiful. It'll look really good on you."

Sahana gives a small smile in return though it's quick to retreat again, replaced with Sahana's usual look of indifference.

"Well... maybe you can get your own one day." The sentiment is brisk, but Rajani appreciates it regardless. It's rare to hear anything even vaguely affectionate from her sister these days.

The two return to their rooms in silence, and Rajani finally tears open her letter. It says the same things that Sahana's had five years before, but this one is hers and she gently smooths it out over her desk before looking to her school supply list.

She believes a majority of the textbooks are already somewhere in the house, one of the benefits of having an older sibling, but she still needs her robes, the new Defense textbook, and of course her wand.

She's definitely most excited about that.

She hadn't been permitted to visit Ollivander's with her sister five years prior, so she has no real idea of what to expect from the visit beyond the fact that it's apparently rather odd.

She quietly fantasizes about getting her wand for the next hour instead of reading like she knows she ought to be, and the guilt over that decision drives her to take her book down to the reading room when she's called for dinner so that she'll be forced to make up for lost time after eating.

She's politely silent during the meal, only speaking when a question is directed towards her, which isn't very often. For the most part she sits and savors the meal while paying sharp attention to her parents' conversation, hoping they'll mention when the visit to Diagon Alley will take place.

Unfortunately, the topic is never breached, and Rajani gets very little reading done after she's cleared her dishes, too distracted by the disappointment. Her mother makes a comment but she's quick to dismiss the distraction as exhaustion from the long day, an excuse she's rather certain her mother doesn't believe but accepts nonetheless.

Rajani does her best to focus more on the book after that.

Three more weeks drift by, and the anticipation nearly drives her to question her father as to when the trip will occur but she manages to bite her tongue, and her patience is rewarded when on the third day of July her mother announces that they'll be visiting Diagon Alley the following day.

"And girls, if the two of you could determine what we already have before we leave it would be appreciated."

Both Sahana and Rajani know that it isn't a request, and they quickly retire to Sahana's room with their supply lists. Sahana needs everything, naturally, and she adds a note that her robes are no longer fitting correctly. Rajani manages to cross off everything she'd expected to, and she returns to her room with her arms stacked full of slightly worn textbooks.

She spends the rest of the day with her nose buried in A History of Magic and it takes quite a bit of self-control to not talk about all she's learned over dinner that night, knowing her parents and sister have already read the book.

She ends up staying awake until the earliest hours of the morning, reading by the light of the full moon until her eyelids refuse to stay open and she finally crawls beneath her sheets.

They awaken early the next morning, and despite the lack of sleep Rajani is bursting with energy. She had accompanied her mother and Sahana to Diagon Alley once in the past, but she'd been a mere eight years of age and had been more interested in when they would be getting ice cream than what was sold in the shops.

She also recalls spending a decent amount of time asking about how the Floo system worked. Her self-control hadn't been quite as well developed at eight.

Her second usage of the Floo network is exactly as discomfiting as the first time, and she nearly faceplants as she trips out of the fireplace, silently thankful that she had requested to go through first and thus her embarrassment is not being witnessed by her mother and sister.

A hand appears at the edge of her field of vision, and she glances up to find a sturdily built teenage girl offering her a hand up.

Glancing back at the fireplace, Rajani accepts the gesture and brushes off her skirt once she's standing.

"Thank you."

The teenager grins and waves her off. "No worries, you should have seen my baby sister Holly the first time she went through the Floo. Tripped five feet forward and landed right on some Ministry official's lap!" She laughs loudly as another voice from further in the shop loudly protests the story.

Rajani is saved from attempting to respond to the odd tale by Sahana appearing out of the fireplace behind her.

"Raj don't stand right in front of the-" She cuts off as she spots the girl who had helped Rajani up. "Kiddell."

The teen - Kiddell, Rajani supposes - tilts her head, her demeanor suddenly much less friendly. "Misra. This is your sister then?"

Rajani glances between the two girls uncertainly, the tension permeating the air almost palpable.

Sahana nods sharply. "It is. Don't you have somewhere else to be?"

Kiddell smirks. "Of course. Apologies for invading your space your highness." Her bow is mocking and exaggerated, and she quickly spins on her heel and calls to two other girls in the store that she's heading out. The two quickly finish paying and scurry out after her.

Raj glances up at her sister, who's still fuming slightly. "Um, who was that?"

Sahana glances down, as if she'd forgotten that Rajani was even there. "Oh, no one. Laurel Kiddell. Gryffindor and professional nuisance." She makes a face. "She punched a sixth year Ravenclaw back in our second year. Really I don't understand why they let someone so violent into the school."

Rajani frowns. Laurel hadn't seemed very violent, but she supposes that first impressions can be misleading.

She isn't given much time to dwell on the matter as moments later Sahana tugs her out of the way to allow their mother to exit the fireplace.

"Well then, we have a lot to accomplish today, so let's begin."

Rajani's mother and sister are as efficient as ever. They start off at Madame Malkin's, and it only takes a few minutes to adjust Sahana's robes to better fit her changing body. And so Rajani is left alone to finish her fitting while her family goes to Flourish and Blotts to pick up their textbooks.

Vandana pays for the robes in advance, and hands Rajani ten galleons before she leaves.

"When you're finished you can head right to Ollivander's. It's just down the street to the right, you can't miss it. Pick up your wand and then meet us at Rosa Lee Teabag, alright? It's just across the way from Ollivander's."

Rajani nods eagerly and moment later her mother is gone in a rustle of skirts, closely followed by a glaringly less sophisticated Sahana.

Rajani lets herself giggle a bit at how silly her sister had looked upon departure, and the seamstress taking her measurement decides that this is an indication that she can speak freely.

"So is this your first year at Hogwarts?"

Rajani glances uncertainly at the door. Her parents have always advocated not speaking to strangers, and certainly not speaking to ones of lower blood status, but at the same time she's been bursting with excitement ever since she received her letter, with no real outlet for it.

And what her parents down know can't hurt them, right?

"Yes ma'am, I'm very excited. My older sister is a Prefect this year."

The woman smiles. "That was your sister who just left, yes? It must be nice to have an older sibling, she can show you around. Hogwarts can be quite confusing if you aren't familiar with it." The woman laughs. "Why I remember on my first day of school, I got so turned around looking for the Potions classroom that I somehow found my way to the Astronomy Tower instead of the dungeons!"

Rajani tilts her head in what she hopes is appropriate disbelief. "My goodness, how did you manage to confuse up for down?"

The woman laughs. "I can't quite say I know myself!"

Talking to the seamstress proves to be quite educational, and when Rajani's measurements are finished and the robes are bundled into her arms, she's rather sad to leave.

"Now you remember what I told you about those staircases! Saved my life more than once that did."

Rajani curtsies awkwardly around her full arms. "Thank you so much for telling me about Hogwarts, I dare say I may be even more excited now than I was when I walked in earlier."

The woman smiles warmly. "Any time dear. When you need your robes let out you just ask for Ilsa and I'll give you a little discount if you tell me all about your adventures at school."

It's a rather odd way to make a friend, Rajani thinks as she all but skips out of the store, but she's quite pleased at the turn of events. She'll appear quite knowledgeable among her classmates with all the tips and tricks Ilsa had shared.

Her feet carry her down the bustling cobblestone street towards the wand shop, and her pace picks up ever so slightly until she's nearly jogging in her eagerness to reach the store.

But once she's in front of the wand shop she starts to feel a bit nervous. A witch's wand is a powerful and delicate tool, and not one to be taken lightly. Once a wand has chosen her, it will stay with her for the rest of her life, becoming a finely tuned instrument, aware of her whims and decisions maybe even before she is.

For the first time the realization that she's finally, truly going to be learning magic sinks in, and the weight of it all knocks the breath out of her.

It's wonderful, and it's scary, and it all starts once she enters the store in front of her.

Taking a deep breath and shifting the robes in her arms a bit, she pushes open the door.

"It's so grey!"

A child's voice rings out over the muted bustle of the London skyline, notable for it's vibrance against an otherwise drab backdrop of white noise.

"Lida darling, please slow down."

The source of the fascinated exclamation is one Franziska Chalida Reinhardt, who is eagerly tugging at the hem of her mother's blouse as the two navigate the narrow London streets.

On a different day Franziska might have been more cautious, but her sheer excitement overrides her usual carefulness and she presses forward enthusiastically, her destination visualized firmly in her mind as her feet confidently tread unfamiliar territory as if she's traversed it her entire life and hadn't simply been studying maps the entire night before.

"We're almost there mom, come on, hurry up!"

And then she turns a corner and there it is. A rundown, utterly unimpressive little pub squats miserably between two other, equally forlorn buildings. Franzika squints at the pub intently, and her mother laughs slightly.

"Over here Lida. You can't see the alley unless you know just where to look." Pannida Reinhardt finally catches up with her daughter and gently steers the excited girl a few steps closer to the pub. From this distance, Franziska can make out the pub's name beneath the peeling paint on the sign.

"Isn't calling it the Leaky Cauldron kind of obvious?" She questions as her mother guides her into an almost invisible alley between the pub and it's neighbor. "Cauldrons are very important to magic after all."

"Muggles don't know about magic dear. They just think it's a name." Pannida is only half listening as she scrutinizes the brick wall closing off he back of the alley. "Now was it the third or fourth brick?" She muses to herself, tracing her hand over the wall as she pulls a wand from her coat pocket.

"Third." Franziksa offers cheerfully. "I remember Daddy reminding you this morning."

Pannida smiles. "Thank you dear. You know," She taps on a seemingly random brink on the wall and it begins folding into itself, "You may be a Ravenclaw with a mind like yours."

But Franziska isn't listening. She's staring in raptured awe as an archway forms in the wall, beyond which is a bustling street filled with witches and wizards of all ages racing to complete their last-minute shopping.

"Oh mum look! The Magical Menagerie!" Franziska is once again tugging on her mother's clothes. "Can I please get a pet? I'll take super good care of her and love her and-"

Pannida is already shaking her head and effortlessly using her daughter's grip to guide them both past the archway and towards a different shop. "We've already spoken about this Lida, no pets for now. If first year goes well we'll see about getting an owl."

Franziska sulks for a long moment, but her misery is short lived as she realizes where her mother is taking her instead.

"Is that Ollivander's?"

Pannida smiles over at her daughter. "It can take a while to find the perfect fit. I was in here for nearly an hour when I was your age." Her thumb rubs thoughtlessly against the wand that's still held loosely in her right hand. "So you go on inside and I'll purchase your books. Stay here and I'll pick you up when I'm done and we'll get your robes together, alright?"

Franziska manages to nod quickly before eagerly bounding into the wand shop.

It takes several seconds for her eyes to adjust to the sudden dimness she's wrapped in, and she blinks rapidly in an attempt to speed up the process.

"Well hello. You're coming in rather last minute hmm?"

Franziska can't help being startled as a squat man seems to materialize out of the thin air behind the counter. She nods, suddenly shy.

"We live in Germany so mum thought it would be a good idea to do our shopping the day before school so that we'd only have to pay for two international portkeys." She explains, fidgeting a bit.

The man - he surely must be Ollivander Franziska reasons - nods thoughtfully.

"Lots of you foreigners this year it feels like. Never mind that, let's get you a wand, shall we?"

At the mention of wands, all of Franziska's uncertainty drains away again. She steps up to the counter, leaning against it in an attempt to watch Ollivander as he vanishes into the seemingly endless rows of shelves behind the counter.

She doesn't really know all that much about wands, just that they have minds of their own. A fact that actually makes her a bit nervous. Her dad always says not to trust something if you can't see where it keeps its brain - but he also swears his wand has saved his life several times in the past. Really it's all a bit contradictory.

Her musings are interrupted by the return of Ollivander, who present her with a slim box not unlike the one her mother keeps at her bedside.

"Here, try this one."

She's barely brushed her fingers on the wood to pull it free when the box is snatched back.

"No no, no good." And he's vanished into the shadows of the shelves once again.

Franziska frowns and looks down at her fingers. How had he known so quickly it was the wrong fit? She hadn't noticed anything - but maybe that was the problem.

He's back moments later armed with three new options. Each is snatched away in turn, and the cycle continues.

A few of the wands Fransziska actually gets to hold, and one she even waves around for a moment before they're all taken back with increasingly tense mumbling from the wandmaker.

This must be a very tedious process when there's more than one person waiting. Franziska muses as she waits for the next box to be presented to her.

She half expects it to be pulled away from her as she opens the box, but for once Ollivander is silent. She gently pulls the slim wand free and examines it for a moment. It's longer than many of the others she's tried, but it fits neatly into her small hand just as well as the rest.

She glances at Ollivander, who's still unnervingly quiet, and she hesitantly raises the wand. Before she's done a thing, a grin breaks out of Ollivander's features.

"There we are then! Hazel and unicorn hair, twelve and three quarter inches with rigid flexibility. A bit longer than I'd expected for you but you never can tell with wands!" He holds out the box, clearly with the intent for her to replace her new wand in, but she clutches it and gazes at the wandmaker with wide eyes.

"Can't I hold it a bit longer? We ought to get to know one another a bit before trying any magic, right?"

Ollivander blinks, and then smiles, quite warmly.

"Well well. I see why that one picked you. She's been on my shelf for near twenty years now you know, just waiting for a partner who sees her as an equal."

Franziska beams.

After she's paid her ten galleons, and profusely thanked Ollivander, she skips the front of the store to wait for her mother, who she's rather surprised hasn't returned yet.

While she waits, she takes the time to examine her wand more closely. It's quite slim, enough so that it almost looks fragile, and there's a neat pattern carved into the hilt that winds it's way haphazardly up the entirety of the wand.

"You and I are going to do great things together." She promises before finally returning her new companion to it's box for safe keeping.

Her mother hurries into view less than a minute later, laden down with shopping bags.

"Hold you books Lida." She instructs, passing her daughter one of the bags. Lida accepts it without complaint, and immediately launches into a full account of her time in Ollivander's.

"You'll have to show me your new wand before you pack it tonight." Pannida smiles once Franziska has completed her retelling. "I'm sure it's beautiful."

This sets off another wave of assurances that it's probably the most gorgeous wand ever carved, and did she mention yet that it's been waiting for her for twenty years? Pannida listens to her daughter's enthusiastic rambling with soft amusement as they walk to Madame Malkin's to get Franziska fitted.

Franziska calms down once she's in the presence of the Malkins seamstress, and by the time the two women leave the robe shop with two more bags weighing them down Franziska is back to her normal, much more level-headed self.

The two check into their room at the Leaky Cauldron and, after depositing Franziska's school supplies on the beds to be packed later, head back out into Muggle London for dinner.

They meet with Franzika's father in front of the restaurant, and Franziska eagerly tells him all about their shopping trip, being careful to steer away from any mentions of magic in case any of the nearby Muggles are listening in.

Her father is as attentive as ever, his eyes never leaving her as she describes her day.

"Well I'm sorry to have missed it, it sounds like you ladies had quite a bit of fun." There's distinct regret in his voice as he speaks and Franziska frowns a bit.

"Well, maybe you can come next year!" She offers hopefully.

Her father smiles. "If I don't need to work then you can bet I'll be there." He promises.

Franziska is a little put out that he wouldn't try to make sure he didn't have to work, but she supposes being an Auror isn't very easy to schedule. That knowledge doesn't stop her from pouting just slightly.

Her mother immediately spots it and places a hand on her arm. "Say, I think Fortescue's is still open - why don't we head there for desert afterwards and you can show your father everywhere we went today in person, how about that?"

Franziska is agreeing before her mother has even finished speaking, and the rest of the meal is passed with her parents talking about her father's work while Franziska mentally maps out the best possible route they can take to show her father everything they'd done that day.

After paying Franziska all but drags her parents back to their room so she can retrieve her wand before they head out for ice cream. As they walk, Franziska once again repeats the tale of how she came to meet her wand for her father, with a few added flourishes.

"I'd been through almost a hundred wands but nothing was working! Then Ollivander looked me up and down really careful-like and mutters 'perhaps this is the one' before he scuttles back into the shelves." Her arms are practically windmilling as they try to illustrate the story. "And then, he pulls down a box and I feel it. A pull right in my heart, like the wand was calling to me!"

She misses the amused glance her parents share over her head as her hands fling out in front of her. "And as soon as my fingers touched the wood, I knew she was the one!" With this final declaration she pulls her wand out and proudly presents it. "Ollivander says she's been waiting twenty years for me to walk in." She finishes happily.

Her father smiles. "Is that right?" He shoots a questioning glance at his wife, who's also smiling.

"Ollivander never lies about these things. My wand didn't come with any type of story like yours did." Pannida confirms, and Franziska puffs up even more.

"Well Ziska, we always knew you were something special." Her father ruffles her hair lightly as the small family finally reaches the ice cream parlour.

Franziska hums happily and lets her mother order for her, opting instead to find them a table out in front of the shop so she can watch the sunset.

As she settles in, a brunette who looks to be about her age boldly walks over.

"Hi! Were you just talking about wands?"

Franziska eyes the girl uncertainly. She doesn't seem like a threat, but she's also a stranger.

The girl doesn't seem to pick up on Franziska's unease as she plows ahead with her conversation. "Because I'm something of a wand expert you know. My uncle owns a wand shop - in fact, my whole family is in the business of wand making." She grins enthusiastically. "I could totally tell you more about your wand if you wanted!"

"You're related to Ollivander?" Franziska inquires curiously. She hadn't known Ollivander had any brothers.

The girl scoffs, the first hint of negativity she's shown since showing up. "Ollivander isn't the only wandmaker in London you know! There are plenty of other people who are just as good as he is, no matter what his advertising might say." She quietly fumes for a moment, but just a quickly as it comes the sour mood passes and she's grinning again. "So can I see your wand?"

Franziska hesitates. "I'm not really supposed to talk to strangers." She says uncertainly.

The girl laughs. "Well in that case." She sticks out her hand. "Holly Kiddell. I'm starting at Hogwarts this year."

Franziska finds herself unable to avoid smiling as she accepts the handshake. "Franziska Chalida Reinhardt, and I'm a first year too." Sparing one last glance towards the shop to check that her parents are still there, she turns her full attention onto Holly and pulls out her wand.

"Alright then Holly Kiddell, niece of a wandmaker. Tell me more."

It's not that Anastasiya Vulchanova is disappointed that she's going to be spending the next seven years learning magic - no one in their right minds would be disappointed with that.

It's more that she'd hoped her parents would have a last minute change of heart and let her attend the Durmstrang Institute instead. Being descended from the Durstrang founder herself, it feels rather silly not to be going there. But her mother is insistent and if there's been one constant in Ana's life it's that her mother always gets her way.

And so on August thirty first, nineteen eighty four, she finds herself in her room, gathering her books and attempting to fit everything she wants into her trunk, which is a much more complicated task than her parents had led her to believe.

So far she's fit her robes and a little over half of her textbooks, but there's very little room remaining now and she's stopped to try and work out how best to organize her remaining belongings.

A knock at the door briefly pulls her from her contemplation.

"Come in."

Her father pushes open the door and eyes her open trunk. "Doing alright up here?" He asks.

Ana tilts her head in an abbreviated nod. "Just fine. I'm trying to arrange my belongings so that my potion ingredients won't risk being crushed on the train ride over." She replies, turning back to the items laid out on her bed.

Her father remains in the room silently for a moment before responding. "An excellent idea, but you needn't worry too much about that. The box the ingredients are stored in is quite robust."

Ana frowns. "But it takes up a lot of room, and I wanted to bring some of my personal library with me to Hogwarts." She admits. It's the primary reason packing is taking as long as it is. If she can't have her first choice of school, then she wants to at least keep a little bit of home with her.

Her father makes a small noise of understanding and moves to stand beside her.

"It can be scary at first. When I was getting ready to go to Durmstrang when I was your age I was pretty nervous. But you'll make friends and I'm sure the Hogwarts library will have lots of books for you to read as well." He places a hand briefly on her shoulder before it's withdrawn again. Physical contact isn't very common in their house, but Ana somewhat appreciates the intention behind the gesture, even if it did make her a bit uncomfortable.

"Alright, I get it. I'll finish packing now." She picks up one of her books and meticulously, pointedly, nestles it into her trunk, and her father leaves her to it.

She's careful about where she puts her potion ingredients, still a bit concerned despite her father's assurance. They hadn't been inexpensive, and regardless she has no way of getting more during the school year if she runs out of anything. She doesn't trust the school owls to not damage or lose anything she might request that her parents send.

It takes another thirty minutes to rearrange everything to her liking, but finally she heaves the trunk shut and drags it, with quite a bit of effort, to the top of the stairs.

She leaves it off to the side of the banister - so no one will trip - and heads down to request assistance in getting it into the parlor so they'll be ready to leave first thing in the morning.

Her mother is busy in the kitchen, but her father is happy to put down his reports and levitate her trunk down.

"You've got your ticket as well?" He checks before returning to his study.

"Of course. I've kept it safe in my bedside cabinet all summer." Ana replies primly, pretending she's not miffed by the mere suggestion that she'd lose such an important item.

Her father nods. "Excellent, then I believe we're more than prepared for tomorrow. Maybe clean out Dracula's cage before dinner though, I doubt he'd appreciate having to sit in filth for several hours until you can let him out in the dorms."

Ana agrees and returns to her room. She plucks Dracula - a fire salamander she'd purchased from Magical Menagerie at the start of the summer - out of his terrarium and lets him lounge on her bed as she cleans the cage as thoroughly as she can manage. She'd of course requested a self-cleaning terrarium for her new pet, but her mother had said something about "learning responsibility" and refused to pay for it.

So for now Ana is stuck cleaning up after her - thankfully rather tidy - salamander until she gets to Hogwarts and can learn the proper magic for it instead.

Said salamander regards her with an air of detachment as she replaces  his water and food.

"Oh fine, you can stay out for a bit longer." She tells him, sitting on the bed and wiping her hands delicately on the hem of her dress. Her mother would throw a fit if she saw, but Ana doesn't particularly feel like walking down the entire hallway simply to wash a bit of grime off her hands. She'll wash up properly before dinner.

She pulls out one of her favorite books and reads aloud to Dracula - who continues to barely pay her any attention - until she hears the bell signalling that dinner is ready.

She washes her hands in the downstairs loo, as it's located just to the side of the stairs, and then joins her parents in the dining room.

"Are you excited for tomorrow Ana dear? Your first day at Hogwarts!" Winona Vulchanova is only too eager to start in on her favorite topic, and Ana suppresses a sigh.

"I suppose so mother, though I am a bit nervous."

Her mother finishes her bite of food before quickly responding. "Well of course dear, but I assure you Slytherin is  lovely House, and I'm sure you and your roommates will get along just fine."

Ana doesn't respond. It's the fact that she's unsure whether or not she truly wishes to be in her mother's old House that's feeding a majority of her nerves. Winona's family, the Burkes, have been Slytherins for generations, but while Ana certainly could see herself doing just fine in Salazar's House, she personally is more drawn to Ravenclaw.

She hasn't quite found the courage to tell that to her mother yet. And so Winona continues to regale her daughter with stories of the House while Ana quietly consumes her supper, idly rolling the idea of mentioning her Housing preferences to her mother around her brain as she chews.

When they finish, Ana and her father clear the table while her mother vanishes up the stairs to take a shower and prepare for bed.

"Are you still nervous Ana?"

Her father always has been good at noticing when she's at less than her best.

"Not really." She pauses, and then checks that her mother is well and truly out of the room. "Honestly I'm not sure I want to be in Slytherin. I wouldn't mind it per se but..."

"There's another House?" Her father guesses.

She can only nod and he ushers her to his study and closes the door.

"Tell me about it. We don't want you going in tomorrow with any doubts." He instructs.

So Ana confesses. She describes how you have to answer riddles to get into the Ravenclaw common room, how nearly every witch or wizard who was an alumnus of Ravenclaw went on to create amazing things and discover new kinds of magic, and how she felt that she'd simply learn more in Ravenclaw than in Slytherin.

Her father listens thoughtfully, and when she finishes her explanation he purses his lips.

"Well, it sounds like you've spent a lot of time pondering this. I can speak with your mother tonight if you wish."

Ana shakes her head. "I should probably tell her myself."

Her father looks proud of her decision. "I agree. Take life head on - you have nothing to be ashamed of after all, you're a Vulchanova."

It's something he says a lot, and it really does help when he reminds Ana she has no reason not to keep her head up.

She nods to him and excuses herself to bed. Dracula has switched pillows in the time she's been away, but has otherwise remained motionless. She scoops him up and deposits him back in the terrarium before changing into her nightgown.

She checks that her ticket is still where she'd left it, as she has every night since receiving her Hogwarts letter in late June, and then drifts into a restless slumber.

She awakens with the sun and finds herself unable to sleep again, so she picks up her book and reads until she hears her parents stirring down the hall. As quietly as she can she places her book down and slips out of bed to select her clothes for the day.

It's rather frustrating that they'll have to pass through Muggle London to reach the train. Even in Bulgaria the Vulchanova family has always lived in Wizarding communities, and Ana doesn't have much in the way of Muggle clothing. And what she does have is far from her preferred wardrobe.

Eventually she settles for a black dress that she can admit will likely look a bit strange to the Muggles, but she thinks is plain enough that she might just be written off as eccentric.

She pockets her train ticket and hurries to intercept her father when she hears his heavy footfalls passing by her door. He levitates Dracula's cage down the stairs to join her trunk and the two are joined shortly thereafter by Winona.

"And you're absolutely certain that you've got everything?"

Breakfast is barely half way finished but it's already the third time her mother has asked. "Yes mother, I'm sure. I double checked everything last night before locking my trunk, and I showed you my ticket before we sat down." Ana fights to keep her tone patient but the repeated question is starting to irk her.

Winona's hands flutter slightly along her utensils. "I'm sorry dear, I'm just so excited for you! Another Burke off to Hogwarts-"

"I'm a Vulchanova mother. And actually, I wanted to speak with you about something before we leave this morning, if that's possible?" She catches her father's proud smile in her periphery and she draws herself up a bit straighter.

Winona looks startled, but she quickly agrees. "Of course dear! You can help me tidy up after we finish and tell me anything you need to."

Ana spends the rest of breakfast quietly planning how exactly to inform her mother that she fully intends to break family tradition if the Sorting process allows her to. By the time her father has departed for his study she feels a bit more prepared, though still slightly concerned as to what her mother's reaction might be.

"So what was it you wanted to talk about?" Winona tries, and fails, to sound nonchalant, as the two begin clearing the table, but Ana doesn't notice as she tries to work out the best way to broach the topic.

Ana takes a quick breath. "Well... it's about Hogwarts I suppose."

"Don't suppose dear, it's not attractive. Confidence is key." Winona responds with a trace of distaste and Ana quickly corrects herself.

"Of course. Well I feel I'm better suited for a House other than Slytherin." There. She'd said it. Whatever happened now was out of her control.

Winona pauses, one half-washed plate levitating in the air. Ana meanwhile continues to dry the utensils in her hands.

Finally her mother speaks. "Well if that is the case then it's alright I suppose." She hesitates, and then continues. "It's not... Gryffindor, is it?"

Ana could almost laugh. The weight on her chest lifts some and she shakes her head.

"Heavens no, how anyone can stand that House I'll never understand. I simply think Ravenclaw would be nice. Lots of intelligent people to have discussions with."

Winona is clearly relieved as the dishes begin washing themselves once again. "Oh well that's quite alright. I'd be proud to have a Ravenclaw in the family. Our Ana, judged as the brightest in the class!"

The rest of the morning is a blur of once again double checking that they have everything before their prescheduled remise to pick them up.

The driver eyes Dracula's terrarium with clear confusion but keeps his mouth shut as he helps them load Ana's trunk into the back. The drive to King's Cross takes less than twenty minutes, and Ana lets her mind wander past the ride and beyond the scarlet express they're driving to all the way to a castle in the highlands of Scotland.

She's still not thrilled that she isn't going to Durmstrang, but if she can't change things, perhaps she can find something worthwhile at Hogwarts.

They have to wait outside the station for a few minutes as her father pays the driver, and they receive several sideways glances due to the fire salamander cage perched on top of their trolley. Ana doesn't know why she even bothered trying to wear something passably Muggle and decides she won't ever attempt to cater to them again as her father finally joins them and they head into the crowded station.

Both Ana and her father are quite lost, having never been to King's Cross before, but Winona is walking with confidence and her family has to hurry to keep up with her.

It takes some tricky maneuvering to stop the trolley from running anyone over and keep Dracula's terrarium from falling, but the family finally finds themselves at the barrier between Platforms Nind and Ten.

Winona finally pauses at the barrier between the two. "Well then." She says, glancing around quickly before turning back to Ana. "You can push your trolley right through the wall here - the Platform is just past the barrier. Your father and I will be right behind."

Ana strides confidently through the wall, having already read about the strange passage onto Platform Nine and Three Quarters.

The station is already crowded despite their having arrived thirty minutes early, and Winona encourages her to board the train quickly "or else there will be no compartments left open".

Ana's father helps her lift her trunk and Dracula's home onto the train, and then she says a quick goodbye and hurries to find an empty compartment to claim for herself.

Once situated she glances back out the window, but her parents seem to have already left. Shrugging to herself, she pops open her trunk and pulls out the one non-required book she'd managed to fit in and flips it open. Might as well get comfortable now.

It's going to be a long ride.

And thus the adventure begins! It was really tough picking the final lineup for the POVs, but I think it's going to be a whole lot of fun exploring the next seven years with these four. If anyone is curious as to why their character wasn't selected as a POV I'm happy to tell you if you ask. And for those who's characters aren't POVs, remember that they'll still be in the story! Every character has a place planned, and most people will appear in the next few chapters so keep an eye out for yours! Oh, and if anybody wants to know their character's wand you can ask about that too, I know everyone's wands ^^

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!