Chapter Twelve

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Snowfall

It snows on the first day of December. The flakes frost over the windows and leave streak of icy blue sunlight over the floors of the Ravenclaw common room.

Ana can admit that it's quite pretty. However, the next day is also the first day of exams, so she has no interest in joining several of her schoolmates as they waste their time having snowball fights and building snow forts in the courtyard.

Instead she's taking advantage of the extra space in the common room, spreading out over two of the tables as she rechecks notes and annotates a few extra books she's found in the library during the year. Eric's silver bracelet is still clasped around one wrist, and in her writing hand hand she's gripping the self-sharpening quill that Alasdair had gotten her, something that's proven quite useful in the past month.

The room is mostly silent, save for quills scratching across parchment and occasional murmurs between people studying together, though they keep to the corners. It's a comforting buzz of white noise and Ana gets through several hours of work before a hand lands on her shoulder and she's rudely pulled from her zone.

Eric smiles at her apologetically. "Sorry to interrupt, but it's dinner, and I'm pretty sure you're in the exact same spot you were when I left this morning which really can't be good for your body."

She grimaces but shuffles her notes into organized piles and slides them obligingly into her bag. "Alright, I could eat I suppose."

Eric has the decency to quiz her on topics he remembers being on his second year exams as they make their way to the Great Hall, and Ana is pleased that she's able to answer each of his questions with no hesitation.

"It's a lot better to study with other people I find." Eric observes as they sit down. "Notes are obviously well and good but as long as they're in front of you you can't really know if you're absorbing the material effectively or if you're subconsciously glancing down. You should study with your classmates sometimes."

Ana shoots him a look. They've had this conversation before. "You know full well how obnoxious everyone in my year is."

"I thought you said Shaun was alright?" He points out, wheedling intently.

She sighs. "He is but he's best friends with Fitzwilliam and Jerome and they're both irritating more often than not. Jerome especially."

Eric shakes his head. "You are one of the most judgemental people I know Ana. What are you going to do when we all graduate next year? Be alone for five years?"

Ana frowns at him. "I have Alasdair you know."

Eric looks like he wants to say something, but he bites it back as they arrive at the Ravenclaw table, which, Ana notes, is hosting more than just Ravenclaws.

Eric lights up when he sees the extra person seated there. "Laurel! I thought you were going to hold one last practice for the team tonight!" He quickly sits next to her, debate with Ana forgotten, and the second year rolls her eyes in annoyance as she takes the seat across from the two, next to Hannah.

"Can't compete with young love I'm afraid." Hannah notes teasingly. "How's studying going Ana? Need any help? My schedule is way lighter this year since three of my classes don't have mid year exams so I'm free to help out if you'd like."

Ana nods slightly. "If it's not going to impede your own studies." She pretends to not have been practicing the proper pronunciation for 'impede' for the better part of the year, but internally she's extremely proud to have used it correctly and clearly.

Hannah grins as dinner appears on the golden plates in front of them and begins to help herself. "No impediment at all. It actually would probably be good for me to review some of that stuff anyway, second year was forever ago it seems like."

Ana feels like that could have been a crack at her age, but Hannah has never been judgemental on that front - or any front that Ana has noticed - so she merely shrugs and carefully moves a rib onto her own plate. "Perhaps I could help you as well? I might not know the material but I can still help quiz you if I have the answers in front of me."

Hannah hums an affirmative around a mouthful of food, and adds a verbal assent as well once she's swallowed.

The next day dawns chilly and bright, and Ana is quick to dress and hurry down to breakfast so she can spend as much time studying for the afternoon Transfiguration exam as possible. Though she fully intends to once again obtain Os across the board, she's most determined to maintain her Transfiguration grades.

The sixth years have a morning Arithmancy exam, so Ana ends up at the table with only Horace and Josie for company, as Eric, Sarah and Hannah are all taking the class at a NEWT level.

'Transfiguration huh? What are you all learning this year?" Josie at least does her best to engage Ana, though honestly the second year would rather study in peace than talk with the two sixth years she has the least communication with.

"So far we've done some simple animate to inanimate transformations - beetles to buttons and such." She replies distractedly, continuing to idly twitch her wrist in the wand motions they'd learned over the past few months to ensure she wasn't mixing anything up with the new charms they'd worked on.

Josie shifts uncertainly in her seat. "Um, maybe I could quiz you? My first exam isn't until tomorrow so I have some extra time to help if you'd like."

Horace pouts and looks ready to argue against his girlfriend spending her free time with Ana instead of him, but he ultimately bites back any contentions he has and simply shrugs, focusing on his food.

Ana considers it carefully. She already has a few study sessions lined up with Hannah and Eric, but adding in more people wouldn't necessarily hurt. And she really does want to do well in this exam.

"If you're offering I certainly won't say no." She replies after a moment, and Josie grins.

"Great! Are you done yet? There's an abandoned classroom on the sixth floor that no one seems to know about-"

Horace makes a choking noise, and Josie turns to him with a frown. "Oh calm down Ace, did you think you were the only one I showed that room to? It really is great for studying in, she can use it when we graduate."

Ana gets a sense that Horace doesn't want her in this mystery classroom, but honestly she doesn't care what Horace wants. "That sounds nice. I'm ready now if you are."

Surprisingly, studying with Josie isn't as awkward as she'd expected. When not around her boyfriend, Josie proves perfectly capable of maintaining a conversation with no innuendos or subtle insults at all, something that Ana hadn't expected from their previous encounters.

"Jeez, I don't think you really needed me at all, you've got this down." Josie grins after about two hours of nonstop practice. "Certainly better than I was at your age. Have you thought about maybe teaching the other kids in your grade, or the first years? I think you'd be good at it."

Ana makes a face at the suggestion, slipping her wand back into her sleeve. "I fail to see how that would result in anything but a headache."

Josie shrugs. "I find I learn things better when I'm able to teach them to others. But that could just be a result of having two professors for parents." She grins lightly. "Something to think about though, I really think you could help others in Transfiguration if you wanted to."

"Well I don't particularly at the moment." Ana responds curtly, and the subject is thankfully dropped, though Josie continues giving her looks every so often that Ana thinks she's going to get rater tired of rather quickly if they don't die out by the time school resumes in the new year.

The exam goes extremely well at least, and Ana allows herself a bit of time afterwards to sit on her bed and read through more of her birthday book, which Horace had in fact returned exactly on time and with no damages whatsoever.

Unfortunately, about halfway through her designated free time Evie shows up in the dorms, muddy and furious.

"It's absolutely ridiculous that they won't let me play! They let Finnigan play. Finnigan-I-hate-everyone-Marley gets to play in their stupid pickup game but I can't!"

It's easy enough for Ana to work out exactly what's going on, and honestly she doesn't care a whit. "Махай се." She grumbles, not bothering to use English. Maybe being told to sod off in Bulgarian will somehow get through to Evie in a way that English never seems to.

Shockingly enough, Evie goes silent for longer than Ana has ever heard in the year they've known each other. Of course, it doesn't last.

"What does that mean? You speak another language? Can you teach me? Or wait, was that a spell? What did it do?"

Ana feels annoyance twisting in her gut. Was Evie making fun of her? Obviously she spoke another language - she's used Bulgarian words in the past when she'd forgotten their English counterparts, and her accent isn't exactly what one would call subtle.

She ignores Evie's questions and grudgingly puts away her book. Clearly her break is being cut off early.

Evie frowns at the action. "Hey wait, are you leaving?" Ana doesn't reply, just checks that her bag has the correct textbooks in it and heads out to the library, leaving Evie and the mess that's always close behind her alone in the dorm.

Maybe if it had been someone else Ana might have felt a bit bad. But really, Evie needs to learn eventually how to not be a tactless mess and Ana has no interest in coaching her through that. Especially not when they're in the middle of exams.

The study session goes well, and she's joined in her corner of the library by Eric and Laurel about an hour in. They take turns quizzing her on dates and events for the History of Magic exam she has in the morning while simultaneously working on their own study material. All in all, a solid day's work and Ana falls asleep content and feeling more than prepared for whatever the next day wishes to throw at her.

As it turns out, what it throws is a surprisingly tricky History exam. Although Ana knows all the dates, the essay they have to write requires them to connect the events in a cause-and-effect manner that she hadn't been anticipating. She finishes with thirty minutes left over with which to edit, but her confidence is a bit shaken when she heads for lunch after they're all released from the testing room.

She can hear Evie talking to Jerome Boot behind her. "That was way easier than I thought it was going to be! I mean, just memorizing dates is all well and good but I can't always get their order perfect."

"Right?" Jerome agrees whole-heartedly. "Connecting things like that is how I study in the first place so I was done in only two hours! I usually never have time to edit my exams!" He sounds incredibly proud of himself, and something boils under Ana's skin that the two most destructive and least productive members of her house apparently had an easier time on the exam than she did.

Her annoyance is picked up by the sixth years at dinner that night - she'd skipped lunch to study extra for the Charms and Potions exams she had next, and likely would have missed dinner as well if it wasn't for her favorite prefect once again pulling her down to the Great Hall.

"Everything alright there Ana? You aren't overworking yourself studying, right?" Eric sounds concerned as Ana absently eats directly off the golden platters while going over her potions notes for the sixteenth time.

She waves him off. "I'm fine, just didn't do as well on today's exam as I wanted." She replies tersely, and he's smart enough to back down and leave her be.

She studies late into the night until, surprisingly, Sarah Poole finally snaps at her to 'get your to bed or you'll fall asleep in your cauldron tomorrow.' When she wakes the next morning she's a bit drowsy, but she pushes herself out of bed and grabs her bag - packed the night before with everything she'll need for the day - before stumbling down to the Great Hall and filling up on the heartiest foods offered.

Charms is scheduled during the morning, and though she's a bit disoriented still she knows she does well from the bright smile Professor Flitwick offers upon her easy and flawless execution of the Knockback Jinx. She's a bit more awake and generally feeling better about herself by lunch, and the Potions exam proceeds effortlessly for her - she makes a point to keep her cauldron well away from Evie. At Eric and Sarah's combined urging she goes to bed early instead of reviewing for the Astronomy final, though she does sneak a few minutes of review for Herbology, which she also has the next day.

She wakes up early, and admits to herself that the extra sleep was probably good for her, especially considering how late they'll be staying up for Astronomy that night. She reviews for Herbology further in the common room while waiting for the rest of the House to head down to breakfast.

Hannah is happy to quiz Ana on Astronomy during the meal, a class which Hannah is the only sixth year Ravenclaw taking a NEWT level in, and Ana is feeling more than ready for both exams by the time lunch rolls around.

She studies alone after that - the sixth years of course have their own studies to attend to, but she feels she does acceptably well on both of the tests, even if she is completely worn out by the time she walks out of the Astronomy Tower in the early hours of the next day.

The final exam is in the afternoon the next day, so she allows herself a few extra hours of rest before waking up and going over the material that Professor McCormack had told them was going to be on the exam (and really, what sort of teacher just told you exactly what to study? It was ridiculous!). Naturally the exam itself is effortless, and Ana finds herself more than ready to head home the next morning. After all, Eric is going to send her his OWL books to study from - she has plenty to look forward to.

Franziska walks to the train station with her friends the first morning of winter break.

"You'll write, yeah?" She pokes Kiera lightly in the side. "You promised."

"Don't worry your little head about it." Tonks grins. "I'll write ya, and I'll write her to remind her to write ya!" She promises, cheerfully tossing an arm around both Kiera and Franziska.

Franziska laughs. "I didn't completely follow that, but alright!"

"We'll write too." Donaghan promises as he and Cian catch up to the girls. "And you won't be alone, right? Leona and her siblings will be staying over break as well."

"Heck yeah! Patrick and Sarah are both freaking out over NEWTs so they're staying to study, and me and Eddie are staying because we felt like it." Leona tosses herself onto the mini dog pile Tonks had started, resulting in all four girls toppling to the floor.

"Are you doing a goodbye hug without me?" Henry sounds distinctly sad, though his subsequent decision to toss himself on top of the group doesn't win him any sympathy points.

"Urgh, get off you lot!" Tonks attempts to sound angry, though Franziska can see that she's smiling from the bottom of the pile.

"Guys come on, we'll miss the train." Ever the voice of reason, Donaghan helps Henry haul himself off the pile, and Cian reluctantly allows Leona to use his leg to get into a sitting position.

Once everyone is standing again, goodbyes are more formally exchanged, and Franziska and Leona wave eagerly as the train chugs back towards King's Cross.

"Well then, what shall we do first?" Leona turns immediately to Franziska once the light snowfall hides the train from view. "You're the veteran for staying at school over break - what festivities await?"

Franziska grins. "First things first, you need to meet my friends."

As expected, Leona already vaguely knows the other second years who stay over the break, but she's only too happy to dramatically reintroduce herself to each of them.

Fitzwilliam is rather taken aback by Leona's general loudness, while Nabila simply looks resigned to it. Brandon however is only too happy to be just as ridiculous in kind - when Leona executes an overly dramatic bow in greeting he responds with an even more elaborate one that causes him to lose his balance and fall over completely.

Leona burst out laughing. "Oh this is going to be fun! I ought to stay over break more often in the future." She grins over at Brandon as he struggles to sit up. "So is this it then? I admit I'd thought more people would be staying over break."

Fitzwilliam shrugs slightly. "Finnigan is still here, but he's not very social."

Leona tilts her head. "Oh, is that sir grumps-a-lot?" She suddenly perks up. "I know him! We're paired in Potions this year. He's fine if you don't mind doing all the talking."

Franziska can't help but snort rather inelegantly at the rather apt description, and Brandon barks out a laugh as well.

"I like you, you can stay." He decides cheerfully. "Alright gang, I say we head to the courtyard and put the other years to shame with our fort building capabilities!"

"What ho!" Leona agrees immediately and is bounding off, leaving the rest of them with little choice but to follow.

Nabila falls in next to Franziska. "I admit i'm not sure about how I feel having a female Brandon around." She frowns, and Franziska can only laugh.

"I hate to tell you this Nabila, but Leona might actually be worse."

The afternoon is spent out in the snow, initially building a fort but eventually Brandon and Leona are distracted and somehow start a snowball war with some of the older students that are still at school. Fitzwilliam spends most of the match cowering behind their fort, but both Franziska and Nabila help with defense despite Nabila's complaints on the subject.

They return to the Great Hall for dinner wet and shivering, but extremely cheerful for the most part. Fitzwilliam does run off to the Ravenclaw Tower first, citing a desperate need for a shower, but Nabila merely shrugs off her sopping outer robes and tosses them carelessly on the Gryffindor bench before deciding for the group that they'll be sitting at the Hufflepuff table for dinner.

Leona is thrilled by the apparent rule-breaking, until she's informed very firmly by Franziska that no rules are being even slightly bent by the Gryffindors - and Fitzwilliam, when he returns to join them - sitting at a table other than the one designated for their house.

"So you're saying I could just walk over to the Slytherin table and sit down and there would be zero repercussions?" Leona frowns. "That just seems wrong."

Brandon gags. "Why you'd even want to sit there is beyond me, Slytherins are awful."

"And there would likely be repercussions in the form of the Slytherins not taking kindly to your presence." Fitzwilliam points out quietly.

Leona rolls her eyes. "My brother is a Slytherin you know." She says, feigning offense for all of twenty seconds before laughing. "Though he's a complete prick so really that's no surprise."

They move on to lighter topics as dinner appears on the golden platters, and Fitzwilliam uncertainly looks over at Franziska as they do, waiting until she notices and smiles over at him.

"Hey, what's up?"

He shifts a bit awkwardly in his seat before replying. "Um, did you want to maybe do our Astronomy homework together again? It's supposed to be clear tomorrow night-"

Leona cuts him off enthusiastically. "Oh, that would be awesome! Astronomy is so boring, and I'm always so tired during that class, we could totally help each other out! Fitzy you're a genius!"

Fitzwilliam looks vaguely nonplussed, but Nabila and Brandon both agree to join the outing as well so he remains silent.

"Haha, your friends are fun, we should hang out with them during regular school as well." Leona remarks later that night as she and Franziska get ready to sleep. Her hair is falling in wet ringlets around her face, and when she shakes her head the droplets fly onto Franziska's bed.

Franziska merely tosses a new towel over her comforter. "I look forward to when we learn the drying spell." She notes wryly. "But yeah, they're pretty cool. Nabila spent time during the summer at Kiera's farm and they had a pretty good time from what I hear." She smiles faintly. "And I spend time with Fitzwilliam pretty often. He's part of my study group."

Leona grins over at her. "And what about Brandon? He's the most fun for sure!"

Franziska laughs. "I see him around school sometimes, but I guess we usually only hang out during Winter Break now that you mention it."

"Well, we'll have to fix that." Leona decides cheerfully as she pulls on a nightgown and tosses herself onto her bed. The two girls have moved their bunks so that they're right next to each other, that way they can chat late into the night without having to raise their voices above a whisper.

"I suppose. He's kind of a troublemaker though." Franziska notes. "Remember how many house points Aidan lost last year because of the pranks he pulled with Brandon and Charlie?"

Leona shrugs. "He got just as many impressing the teachers with his million and ten questions." She replies cheerfully, sitting up so she can look over at Franziska. "And you have to admit, seeing Snape's hair bright pink was hilarious." She adds with a wicked grin.

Franziska does have to laugh at the memory. "Fair enough. But still, I hope those three will ease up a bit. I'd like to actually win the House Cup at some point while we're here."

Leona hums an idle agreement and the two lapse into silence, and eventually into sleep.

The next day they have breakfast at the Gryffindor table, and between Leona and Brandon they manage to instigate a food fight within ten minutes of the rest of the students arriving.

Franziska at first is terrified that the teachers will punish them, until she sees Headmaster Dumbledore himself playfully flick some of his eggs at Walter Crowell, while Professor McCormack gleefully sends sausages flying around the room.

Fitzwilliam runs off for a shower as soon as the group manages to escape the food storm they'd stirred up, while the rest of them head for the Gryffindor common room.

Leona eyes the red and gold decorations critically. "Not as nice as Hufflepuff." She decides after a moment. "But I suppose it will do."

"Well we wouldn't know, you lot never let us into the Hufflepuff common room!" Brandon complains. "It's like some secret clubhouse or something, honestly."

Leona shrugs in mock innocence. "Off limits to anyone but Hufflepuffs, sorry. Not our fault our standards are higher when it comes to who we let into our common room." She grins at Brandon's loud protests, and then yelps when he lobs a pillow into her face.

"Oh it is on! Get over here you damn yank, let's see how you fair at close range!" Leona grabs one of the other pillows in the room and begins chasing Brandon around the space, attempting to smack him in return.

Nabila sighs. "Well at least they can keep each other occupied. Want to work on the Herbology assignment?"

They fall into a similar routine for the next week, with Leona and Brandon causing mischief while Franziska, Fitzwilliam, and Nabila usually work on their homework. However, every so often they get caught up in the whirlwind caused by their two friends.

The most prominent incident occurs the day before Christmas. It starts innocently enough, with Leona suggesting they check out the greenhouses to see whether they've been decorated for the holiday. It very quickly goes downhill from there.

Upon discovering the greenhouses barren of any festivity, Leona declares that they'll just have to fix the distinct lack of cheer themselves.

"Maybe they just haven't put up the decorations yet?" Franziska points out uncertainly as Leona bounds towards the woods in hunt of something to decorate with. "I mean, Hagrid only just took the tree for the Great Hall in earlier today-"

But Leona has a mission, and Franziska knows that when her roommate has set her mind to something it's rather difficult to sway her away from it.

So they traipse around the edges of the Forbidden Forest, collecting anything that looks even slightly decorative and at some point Leona gets them all singing Christmas Carols. It's all good fun until they actually start trying to decorate - and Leona breaks into the greenhouse to grab some flowers she'd spotted through the glass exterior.

They don't notice anything at first, but Leona's screams certainly get their attention rather rapidly.

Franziska leads the charge into the greenhouse, only to stop short in genuine terror. Leona has been backed into a corner by a plant that looks a bit like a very overgrown Venus Flytrap, complete with jagged fangs dripping a sap-like substance.

"I'll get a teacher." Fitzwilliam whimpers, backing up rapidly before being grabbed by Nabila and pinned with a glare so fierce it makes Franziska shiver as well.

"You'll do no such thing, I refuse to get in trouble for this." Nabila snaps. "Come on  you guys, we can handle this."

Her and Brandon both whip out their wands and advance on the creature, and after hesitating for a brief moment Franziska follows them. Fitzwilliam stays in the entryway, scared stiff but reluctantly resisting the urge to find an adult.

"Hit it with a stunning spell!" Nabila decides, calling out so Leona can hear the order as well. The brunette shakily fumbles her own wand out of her pocket, and the four of them all fire at the plant together. It shrieks and pulls back just long enough for Leona to dart past it and back out of the greenhouse, Franziska and the Gryffindors hot on her heels.

Nabila is the one to slam the doors once they're all out, panting and still pumped up on adrenaline. After a long moment Leona suddenly bursts into somewhat hysterical laughter.

"Oh man, and here I thought Herbology was the least dangerous class we took here!" She chokes out, and the rest of them start laughing as well, more from residual energy than any actual mirth at the situation.

"I vote we go inside and ask the house elves for hot chocolate." Franziska decides once they've somewhat recovered their wits, and the group quickly agrees, abandoning the greenhouse project to be found by a very confused teacher the next day.

They stay inside the rest of the day, nursing hot chocolates and idly exploring the castle. It amazes Franziska that even after an entire year at school there are still so many corridors and passageways she's never seen before.

During dinner that night, a few late post owls soar overhead. Franziska doesn't pay them any mind at first - none of them are over the Ravenclaw table anyway.

However, one of the largest owls, and one of the strangest looking ones, wheels around for a moment above the Hufflepuff table, before diving down, landing on top of Franziska's chicken and helping itself rather haughtily.

Franziska shrieks.

Fitzwilliam looks startled as well, jumping back to avoid the bird getting too close to him. Nabila however looks absolutely thrilled as she leans over the table to offer the giant bird a scratching behind the wings, which the owl is only too happy to oblige.

When she's recovered, Franziska hesitantly reaches out to remove the note tied around the owl's leg. He accommodatingly lifts his talon to allow her better access.

The note is short, simply noting that the owl is a male and that he's Franziska's combined Christmas and birthday present, since they hadn't sent her anything in September when she'd turned thirteen.

Franziska looks up at the owl again, lost for words.

"What are you going to name him?" Nabila asks excitedly. "This is a Powerful Owl. These are rare, you know? They breed in Australia, and are one of the only bird species where the male is dominant, did you know that? I am so jealous." She keeps the owl's head, much to his pleasure.

Franziska regards the owl for a moment, before grinning. "His name is Rudi, after Germany's forward for the national team." She decides.

Rudi seems to like the name, as he gives a low humming sound as he helps himself to the remains of Franziska's dinner.

The rest of the meal is spent fussing over Franziska's new pet, and they end up taking him with them when they head up to the Astronomy tower after dinner to work on their homework.

All in all, Franziska thinks it's an excellent start to the holidays.

Rajani knows she wants to go Christmas shopping as soon as possible this year. While there's of course no need to get her family anything, she wants to exchange gifts with the rest of her year, as all of them celebrate the holiday.

However, when she arrives home she finds her parents are both entirely too busy to take her into town. Her father is caught up in something at work and her mother is busy corresponding with several of their connections for a reason that Rajani can't quite work out.

On the eighth day of sitting in her room, numbly scanning the same sentence in her Hindi book she realizes that there is one other adult in the house who she can ask to take her.

She knocks uncertainly on Sahana's door. Her sister has once again locked herself up in her room, sending her owl Sita out at least once a day. Rajani is starting to question whether her sister is really only writing her roommate, or if there's someone in her life that their parents might not approve of.

Sahana takes a minute to answer, but she does eventually pull open the door. "What?" Her tone is clipped, and Rajani very nearly turns tail and abandons the mission, but she manages to steel herself and look up at her sister.

"Um, I was wondering if you might want to go into town to do some Christmas shopping? You could get something for Mayra, and I wanted to find things for my roommates." She looks up hopefully, and Sahana sighs.

"Not right now, but tomorrow, okay? I've got some things to do and we should ask mother first." She's clearly distracted, but at least she hadn't said no, so Rajani counts it as a win.

"I'll ask mother now!" She says quickly. "I promise I won't bother you the rest of the day either. Thank you so much."

Sahana just hums as she closes the door again, and Rajani rushes down the stairs as elegantly as she can manage around her excitement.

"Mother? Are you busy just now?" She taps lightly on the study door where her mother is once again penning a letter while the family owl Vishnu waits patiently on the perch over the desk.

Vandana looks up, slightly disoriented before she focuses on her daughter in the doorway. "Ah, Rajani, of course dear, what is it?"

Rajani takes a few steps further into the room before speaking again. "I was wondering if it would be possible for Sahana and I to take a trip into town to purchase gifts for our friends? I was hoping to find something for Queenie Shacklebolt since we've become very good friends." She knows it's a bit manipulative dropping the Shacklebolt name, but she really wants her mother to agree.

It does the trick, as her mother is immediately focusing her full attention on Rajani. "Why I think that's a wonderful idea! In fact, I've been arranging a special surprise but I suppose it does no harm to tell you now - we'll be spending Christmas day with the Shacklebolts and Slughorns this year. I believe you having a gift for young Queenie would be ideal. See if Sahana couldn't get something for Kingsley as well while you're out, would you?"

Rajani is only too eager to agree. Surely Sahana can find something for her fellow prefect easily enough, and if she can't Rajani will look for something herself.

Sahana stops by her room that night after supper and tells Rajani to be ready by eight the next morning, a request Rajani happily complies with.

They apparate into town and Sahana hands Rajani ten Galleons.

"Meet back here in five hours, alright? I'll find something for Kingsley."

Rajani tries to object - she may have been excited to go out but she doesn't want to be alone - but Sahana is already hurrying off, leaving Rajani to pocket the Galleons and nervously walk out into the square.

She gets a few side-eyes from the other shoppers, but no one tries to stop her or demands why she isn't with a parent or other adult, and she eventually relaxes enough to pull out her shopping list and begins searching for the perfect presents.

Eugene is easy enough - she drops into the broom supply store and gets him a technique book for beaters. She's sure he probably has something similar already, so she's sure to get the most obscure one they have.

Clary is next, and Rajani decides on a book detailing the proper ways to climb a tree. If Clary wants to share stories of getting stuck in trees, she can handle some ribbing about it.

After those two it gets a lot trickier. She eventually settles on a bracelet with a snake charm on it for Lennox, to compliment the one he'd gotten her the year before, which she's kept clasped around her wrist since receiving it. She suspects she may be getting a new charm for it from him when she gets back to school.

She doesn't really intend to get anything for Finn, since they really aren't very close, but when she spots a book on the history of Muggle-Magic relations she knows instantly that he'd probably enjoy it, and she has plenty of spending money left. So she purchases the book, along with a few self-sharpening quills for Elspeth, who she does want to buy something for but really has no idea where to even begin with the sullen girl.

Finally she has to face the bottom of the list, and the two hardest purchases yet. Queenie's gift needs to be absolutely perfect, since her mother will likely be furious if it's anything less, and after the brilliance of Clary's gift the year before Rajani has a lot to live up to.

She decides to focus on Queenie's gift first, since she probably will have to spend a decent amount of money on it if last year's pendant is any indication. She wanders around the town, regularly checking the time to make sure she doesn't miss her sister's deadline, and looking into shop windows in hopes something will strike inspiration.

And eventually, something does. A simple, elegant black jacket with some silver ornamentation is added to her pile of gifts after triple checking that it's a good size. It will be a bit large for now, but she's confident Queenie will grow into it and be able to wear it for longer than a few years.

With only a few Sickles left of the initial ten Galleons, Rajani is hoping for a miracle to appear and magically direct her to the perfect gift for Nia. However, after wandering for nearly an hour - leaving only thirty minutes left in her designated time - she's still at a complete loss as to what to get. Reluctantly she starts heading back to the meeting point, wondering how she'll explain having gifts for everyone else in the group but not Nia.

Sahana is already at the meeting point when a desolate Rajani arrives, carrying a wrapped package that Rajani assumes is for Kingsley.

"Did you get everything you wanted?" Sahana seems to be in a distinctly better mood than she had been before they'd separated. "Oh, and have you had lunch yet? I'd think you're probably pretty hungry if you didn't."

Rajani honestly hadn't even realized it was lunch time, she was so busy being worried about gifts. Her stomach growling it's annoyance answers Sahana for her, and she blushes at the uncouth noise.

Sahana surprises her when she simply laughs. "Thought not. Come on, I have some money left over, we can grab something at the café."

Rajani follows Sahana to the nearby restaurant and she orders a simple sandwich. Sahana however, doesn't get anything.

"Did you already eat?" Rajani questions as they wait for her food to arrive.

Sahana nods. "Yeah, just something light before we met up. So did you find everything? You didn't answer earlier."

Rajani shows Sahana the gifts she's managed to find, and notes her frustration at not finding anything appropriate for Nia.

Sahana hums thoughtfully. "You should talk with your friend, Queenie. I'm sure between the two of you you'll come up with something."

Rajani hadn't thought of that, and it cheers her up somewhat. "That's true. I guess mother told you about our Christmas plans then?"

Sahana nods distractedly. "She did. I think it's nice that our parents are finding friends again here in England."

Rajani stays quiet after that, and Sahana doesn't make any further attempts to create conversation either. When they return to the house, both girls retreat to their rooms and Rajani spends the evening wrapping her gifts.

In the days leading up to the Christmas gathering Rajani focuses on finishing all the assigned homework from school, so she won't have to worry about it when she sees Queenie and Eugene. It's distracting enough that she almost doesn't mind the fact that despite being at home with her family she feels rather lonely.

But it doesn't matter when Christmas morning finally dawns bright and early and Rajani springs from her bed and puts on a nice red dress that she had set aside especially for the occasion. Red was Christmas-y after all, and she adds her silver flower pin in her hair as adornment. Combined with the charm bracelet still latched onto her wrist, she thinks she cuts quite the striking figure.

Her mother agrees when she sees her youngest daughter descending the stairs. The elder Misras both look distinguished in black and silver, and Sahana looks lovely in a forest green gown. Rajani feels quite grown up.

"Well, let's be off then, we don't want to be late." Vandana gestured for Rajani to take her father's arm and the four apparate to the Shacklebolt manor.

Queenie is waiting just inside the doors and she grins broadly when Rajani steps in.

"Raj! Hey girl, get over here. Let me help you with those." She takes one of the two gifts that Rajani is clinging too and grins when she spots her name on the label. "Aw, you got me something? You didn't have to, we're swapping at school with the others right?"

Rajani smiles and follows her friend down the hall, leaving the adults and older kids to chat in the foyer. "I know, but since I'm here anyway I figured why not? You can open it later if you want. And hey, speaking of gifts, do you have any ideas for what to get Nia?"

Queenie laughs. "Dang, I was hoping you would. That little sheep you got her last year was a of genius, I don't think we're ever going to top it." They finally stop when they reach a living room. A beautiful - and in Rajani's opinion overly extravagant, though she doesn't say so - tree stands in the center of the room, and presents are scattered beneath it.

"Here, we'll leave these with the rest for now. Come up to my room, Bagheera misses you, and I honestly don't feel up to playing princess today. I think I'm coming down with a head cold."

Rajani jokingly shies away. "Gross, keep your germs away from me!" She laughs, but follows Queenie up several flights of stairs to a bedroom that really does look like something that would fit right in in a castle.

"Wow Queenie, nice place." She sits down on the bed and is immediately greeted by Queenie's black cat, who curls up on her lap and begins purring contentedly as she scratches under his chin. "Yes, hello Bagheera, I've missed you as well." She coos indulgently.

Queenie laughs at the sight. "Honestly, I think he likes you better than me. I'd be hurt if I didn't totally get why."

Rajani laughs as well, shifting slightly so that circulation to her legs isn't completely cut off by the cat sprawled across her lap. "I'm flattered. So when is Eugene supposed to arrive?"

The two chat about school and toss around ideas for what exactly to get Nia for Christmas. They're no closer to an answer when Eugene arrives, bearing gifts and dressed up in the most ostentatious suit that Rajani has ever seen. She can't help laughing when she sees him, and he tosses the jacket over her head in retaliation.

"Hey, you try saying no to my mom when she's on rampage." He grins and pets Bagheera, who mews softly, pleased with the attention, but refuses to budge from his spot on top of Rajani.

"Little snob." Queenie laughs fondly as she gets up to give Eugene a hug in greeting. "Not you. Well," She steps back, grinning. "Actually that does apply to you pretty well."

Eugene mocks offense. "And here I brought you presents. If this is the thanks I get-"

The girls laugh and Queenie hits him with a pillow before he can dramatically storm out of the room. The three stay chatting on the bed until they're called down for lunch, comparing notes on their homework and continuing to try and decode the puzzle of what to get Nia for the holidays.

The meal is passed silently by the three youngest members of the gathering, and they excuse themselves as soon as their plates are cleared and retire to the sitting room to gather around the tree.

"Hey, happy birthday by the way." Queenie pipes up suddenly, grinning over at Eugene. "I can't believe you two are both teenagers now, you make me feel so young."

Rajani feels a moment of shame that she'd forgotten the twenty fifth was Eugene's birthday as well as Christmas, but they never exchange birthday gifts since it would be entirely too difficult to do so she dismisses the guilt rather quickly. "It's really not very different from twelve." She notes idly. "At least so far as I can tell."

The rest of the attendees join them not long after and they settle in to exchange gifts. Queenie ends up being the one to pass them around, being the youngest in the room.

Rajani gets a lovely green pendant from Queenie, one that's quite similar to the one she'd gotten the other girl the year before, and they both put them on for the rest of the evening. Eugene gives her a book on Quidditch strategies, and she can't help grinning despite her father's obvious dislike of the gift.

Queenie is thrilled with the jacket and drapes it regally around her shoulders since it's too large to put on properly, and Eugene immediately starts skimming his new book when he opens it, much to Rajani's relief. She sees her mother beaming at the positive reactions out of the corner of her eye.

Maybe she doesn't really get Christmas or what it's supposed to be celebrating, but Rajani can say for sure that she enjoys it.

As it always is, returning home is a mixed blessing and curse for Myr. On the one hand, he's missed his family terribly and he's always happy to see them again. On the other, it means he has to once again field questions about the magical world from Cadi and deal with his Uncle Cyril being weirder than normal.

His mother picks him up from the train station alone and explains that Cadi is helping their uncle in his curio shop for the afternoon, and that she wants to spend some proper mother-son time together before launching into the holidays.

Myr is grateful for it, and he's also glad he'd decided to let Owen stay with Brandon over the break - he doesn't think his kitten would much appreciate being stuck in a carrier for any longer than absolutely necessary.

They stop off in a small diner and he lets his mother order for him before they settle in.

"So tell me how school has been going. I know you write us all the time but I want to hear it directly from you." She smiles encouragingly, and it's all too easy to launch into stories about the pranks Brandon and Charlie have been pulling, and to talk about Connor and Rosie and training with the Gryffindor reserves.

"Connor says that if I keep up my current rate of improvement I'll probably make the team next year." He says excitedly. "I was hoping I could practice in the backyard while I'm here, so I don't lose any of my technique."

Aster smiles. "Of course you can Myr. I'm sure your uncle would love to help you out as well, I believe he mentioned being on the team himself when he was at school."

Myr hums acknowledgement. "Some of the exercises we do need more than one person so that would be great actually."

They continue chatting over lunch, and his mother surprises him when she suggests that he invite some of his friends over for New Years.

"Mom, are you sure? Our house isn't exactly big, and most of my friends are, well, kind of destructive." His mind flits briefly over the melted cauldrons and burning curtains their dorm room has been subjected to during the year.

Aster smiles lightly. "I'm sure they'd be on their best behavior, and it would only be a few days before you all went back to school. Think about it and tell me if you invite anyone, alright? Cadi's boyfriend will be over as well so you don't need to feel awkward about having people over."

Myr nearly chokes on his food. "Cadi has a boyfriend? Why didn't she say anything in her letters?"

His mother looks surprised for a moment. "I honestly thought that she had. His name is Dylan, they've been together for about a month now."

Myr frowns, wondering why Cadi wouldn't have mentioned the guy in her letters, but he decides to simply shrug it off and ask his sister about it later when he sees her at home. The rest of the lunch is spent detailing some of the more ridiculous antics of his classmates, including Evera's quest for revenge that had occurred after the Gryffindor-Slytherin Quidditch match that had put her brother in the hospital wing for a week. The quest had subsequently put her in detention for the same amount of time, but Myr has to admit it's an entertaining story now that he's not stressing about her causing property damage.

They return home just after three, and Myr has time to unpack and get a bit of his reading for school done before Cadi and their uncle arrive a little after five thirty.

Myr is quick to ditch his Transfiguration textbook in favor of hurrying to the kitchen to greet them.

"Myr!" Cadi grabs him in a hug when he approaches. "How are you? There's so much I have to tell you."

"I'd say." He replies somewhat dryly. "Who's Dylan?"

Cadi is immediately blushing. "Mom! Why'd you tell him?" She glances back over at Myr, at least having the decency to look shamed at leaving him out of the loop. "It's not really serious yet, and I didn't think you'd care. No offense Myr, but there are some things I don't want to share with my twelve year old brother."

Myr tries to not be offended, but he can't help it. He and Cadi have always been pretty close despite the four year - nothing had ever been too private or girly for her to not share it with him before. But he smiles anyway.

"That's fine. I guess I just won't tell you when I get a girlfriend then. Only fair."

Cadi looks incredibly relieved. "Thanks Myr, I knew you'd be cool. You'll meet him in a couple weeks anyway. So hey, tell me about what you've been learning at school!"

Myr lets the topic change happen, and he does his best to explain the spells and potions he's been working on. In return Cadi tutors him in the math and Muggle history that he's missing out on at Hogwarts over the next few weeks. She even gets him some workbooks for Christmas, and Myr is self-aware enough to be a bit embarrassed by the fact he's happy about getting textbooks as gifts.

He spends most of his days out in the backyard. Uncle Cyril sets up privacy charms to deter the neighbors from snooping and the two fly around the backyard, working on Myr's form. Cyril has quite a few useful tips about how to stay on the broom and the best ways to take tight corners that Myr is only too happy to work on.

Evening are spent in the living room with hot chocolate, sometimes sharing stories but more often doing homework or reading. All in all, his break goes by rather quietly.

Then New Years approaches and he decides that he is going to invite some of his friends, against his common sense.

It takes some time to decide who exactly he'd be alright bringing home to his mother, but eventually he sends Uncle Cyril's owl off with three letters inviting his housemates to his for the last few days of break.

Holly Kiddell is the first to respond with a resounding positive, and a very long rant about how annoying it is to have to watch Laurel and her new boyfriend Eric being disgustingly cute all the time. Fiona is next, confirming that she can come but that she'll likely have to return home to get her things before they head back to school.

Charlie takes the longest to reply, and Myr is starting to wonder if his letter was somehow delivered to the wrong person by the time his response finally arrives via the Weasley's ever disastrous owl Errol.

The Great Grey Owl bounces off of their window and proceeds to pass out on the ground below it, so Myr has to go outside to retrieve the poor creature. He lets Cadi fuss over the molting mop of feathers as he retrieves the letter attached to Errol's leg.

Hey, sorry it took so long to reply, I had to wear my mum down. But I've got the all clear, so I'll see you on Wednesday! Oh, and Bill is coming too. I hope that's alright, he says he'll keep out of our way as much as he can.

Myr grins. "Mom! Is it okay if Charlie brings his older brother Bill for New Years?"

Aster calls a muffled affirmative from where she's getting ready for work. The curio shop always gets a bit busier during the holidays so she has to work more hours than usual.

Cadi looks up in interest at the information. "Bill is coming down? Charlie's mentioned him once or twice but it'll be nice to have a face to put to the name." She pauses, and then grins somewhat deprecatingly. "Same for Charlie actually. We've owled a ton but I've never actually met the kid."

While it's not news that Charlie and Cadi are in contact - Cadi often responds to both of them with one owl while they're at school - it still feels a little weird to Myr that one of his friends is also friends with his sister. "Yeah, it'll be cool for you to finally meet." He agrees out loud.

The days leading up to his friends' arrivals move agonizingly slowly, giving Myr plenty of time to fret about his magical life and his normal life getting even more tangled up than they already are. However, the decision has already been made, and he'll just have to live with any consequences that may arise from it. And his brain is quite helpful at providing the worst possible consequences available.

Finally December thirty first dawns, and he's greeted by Fiona and Holly barging into his room armed with gifts and shouting demands that he wake up.

"Jeez, when did you two get here? And who let you into my house?" He groans as Holly drops directly on top of him with no shame at all.

"Your mom let us in! We flooed to your Uncle's like you said to and then came right over. Come on grouchy, come open your gifts and be social before Charlie and Bill arrive and turn everything into Quidditch." Holly whines in her usual over dramatic way, and Myr begrudgingly pushes her off and sits up in bed despite not wanting to face the chilly morning just yet.

"Alright alright, I'm up. Get out so I can change." He grumbles good naturedly, and the girls laugh as they race back out and down the hall.

Myr struggles into the first sweater he can find and a pair of worn jeans and thick socks before padding down the hall after them. He finds Cadi squealing excitedly over a tiny dragon that's sitting in her hand, idly puffing smoke.

"Lookit! Fiona brought him, she says it's a specially enchanted figurine." Cadi hoists the small dragon into the air. "She got one for Charlie too but I got first pick since he's not here yet."

Myr is glad to see that his usually quiet and introverted sister is getting along with his friends, but he's not sure it's a good idea to have a mini dragon running around the house. "It won't burn anything down will it?"

Fiona smiles in understanding. "Don't worry Myr, I showed her how to deactivate and reactivate the charm so it won't be wandering around without supervision." She promises. "Now come see your gift wouldya? I'm excited to see if you like it."

When Myr sees the long, thin box that Fiona is gesturing to he knows immediately what it is, though he doens't get his hopes up in case he's wrong.

However, when he opens the gift, sure enough, a simple broomstick is nestled inside.

"It's a Cleansweep 200." Fiona says happily. "Not the best or newest broom on the market but still better than the school ones I'd think."

Myr hugs her excitedly. "This is amazing Fi! You really didn't have to."

She grins as she returns the hug. "Hey, if we're gonna be a team, I need you to be able to keep up don't I?"

"Gosh dang it NO QUIDDITCH." Holly whines miserably. "I have to hear enough about it at home!"

Myr laughs but relents, and they soon find themselves listening to Holly go on about the internship she'll be starting with her father in the summer. Cadi in particular is absolutely fascinated by the workings of wands and the two girls end up conducting their own conversation while the rest of them slip away.

"When do you think Charlie and Bill will get here? We'd probably have enough people here for a small pick up game." Fiona notes as she and Myr laze on the floor in front of the fireplace. He's polishing his new broom while she thumbs through the copy of Quidditch Through the Ages that Myr had permanently borrowed from his Uncle. "And you and I could work on our teamwork."

Myr smiles. "I think we'd only have enough people for one beater per team, though we don't actually have any bludgers to use if we did play a game."

Fiona frowns. "Right, I forget sometimes that you're Muggleborn like me." She sighs. "We need to meet up at a wizarding family's house next time."

Charlie and Bill arrive a few hours later, accompanied by Uncle Cyril who's extremely excited to see Myr's new broom and agrees that a small game would be a fun way to pass the evening.

Holly's complaints on the subject go unspoken this time as she's still wrapped up in conversation with Cadi. The two girls had paused briefly to greet the Weasley boys when they had arrived, but were very quick to fall back into their own world of wand woods and cores.

The group gathers in the backyard and Cyril again puts up wards to prevent the neighbors from seeing the group.

They end up just tossing a makeshift Quaffle around in a version of the keep-away game the reserves team is so fond of. Naturally Fiona and Myr are the best, and once they figure this out they start actively trying to position themselves so they can always pass to one another.

Finally the group heads back inside thirty minutes before midnight. Aster is sitting with Cadi and Holly and all three have steaming cups of hot chocolate piled high with marshmallows. Cyril is quick to magic up five more cups for the chilly group and everyone settles in to chat and count down to the start of the new year.

"You think 1986 is going to be any better than 85?" Charlie asks as he sits next to Myr.

Myr glances over at him. "85 wasn't so bad." He replies, and the furrows his brow. "Actually 85 was pretty smooth sailing overall. I'd appreciate 86 being much of the same."

Charlie laughs. "You would. I'm hoping something dramatic happens to liven things up, school has been so boring this year!"

Myr immediately tenses. "No helping it be more interesting." He says, and Charlie just laughs loudly.

"No promises my friend."

Myr wants to retort further, but Cadi excitedly calls that there's only a minute left until midnight.

That's when Myr realizes her supposed boyfriend had never shown up. He nods to Charlie before getting up and walking over to his sister.

"Hey, where's this Dylan I was supposed to meet?" He tries to keep his tone light and hopes that the question won't put Cadi in a bad mood.

She shifts uncomfortably. "Something came up with his grandmother so he couldn't make it. You'll meet him over the summer probably." She assures him, just as Charlie and Fiona start the final countdown.

Myr enters the new year with a twist in his gut and the feeling that the year is going to be one to remember. Whether or not that's a good thing he really isn't sure.

 

I finished this chapter on the first day that it was actually warm enough to wear shorts, ironically enough xD. I'm happy to say that I"m working on building a buffer for this story at the moment, though I'm only about half a chapter in since it's been kind of a crazy week for me. I helped write a show that's being produced by one of the theater clubs this week, and I'm helping backstage, so between tech runs and generally planning for school next year (I switched to the four-year program this year which has been kind of complicated) it's been tough to keep up with writing. However I'm super inspired for this story at the moment so I'm confident that if not now, definitely after the show I'll be able to buffer up so there shouldn't be any more unannounced hiatuses in the future!

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2452 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
2452 streak #9
Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!