Review from Timeless Memories

Title: Just Say It Already
Author: Juliada3
Reviewer: GuiLun41
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/juliada3/

Title: 3.5/5
The title is fine, the "It" should not be capitalized.

Forewords: 8/10
Adding more information into the characters descriptions would help the reader have a better understanding of the characters abilities.

Plot: 17/20
Being a GuiLun fan as well, I enjoy reading all kinds of stories. I really enjoyed your story and

Originality: 6.5/10
The story is a bit predictable, but with the different twists you had weren't so bad.

Style of Your Writing: 10/15
It was really well written and the paragraphs were spaced out fine. No faults.
Its good that you changed your writing style from script to dialoged-- Based on the previous reviewer's tips.

Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation: 14/15
I found very little mistakes in your writing.

Descriptions and Word Choice: 8/10
You had pretty good descriptions, especially during action and romance scenes.

Appearance (Poster and Background): 7/10
The background and poster were very nice, not boring at all, the text blended well with the background and was not difficult for me to read.

Creativity and Bonus: 2/5
I am REALLY sorry for handing this in late. T__T REALLY sorry.

Total: 76/100
Great job(: again, truly sorry for the very late entry.
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Thank you for the great review!