Review from Linlin

"Just Say It Already" Review
From Linlin Vito @ justlikeher.yolasite.com
Author: juliada3

[THIS REVIEW IS MADE BY THE REVIEWER NOT JUST TO IMPROVE THE WRITING SKILLS OF THE WRITER BUT ALSO TO LET THE WRITER KNOW SOME OTHER IDEAS AND WHAT READERS THINK ABOUT HIS/HER FANFIC. ]

Title: 4/5
Its a good one. But still can't think how it ended up with the plot.

Characters: 9/10
Love the characters.. An AARON YAN advantage! Mwuahaha! Is a good thing its Xiao Gui, Wei Yu and fic this time. And this time, Guigui was the one who was having a lot of suitors.

Forewords (/trailer): 8/10
Its kinda boring. You just introduced the characters and stuffs like that.

Originality: 9/10
First fanfic that has Guigui a lot of suitors. Haha! So, I gave it a 9!

Grammar and Spelling: 9/10
I haven't seen some wrong grammars there. But, you should use more descriptive words..

Plot: 18/20
LOVE the PLOT!! Its cute and cool and AMAZING! One problem is, since Guigui has a lot of suitors coming in to the story, it makes Xiao Gui- chapter per chapter- a minor character. But, it still fits..

Style of Writing: 14/15
One word... "WOW!"

Word Choice and Description: 8/10
Its good. You made a good job on that one..

Appearance (Poster,Background & Font): 13/15
Really love your poster and bacground. But, you should put Xiao Gui in the poster.

Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
Love this FANFIC!! awoot!!

Total Points: 86/100

xoxo TEEHEE xoxo
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Author's Note:
Thanks Linlin for the great review! You're amazing!