My Immortal-Completed

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This story came about a dream that left me zoned out all throughout the day.It all seems so real and yet it is only a dream.I can still the heaviness on my chest and the pain on my knees as I remember it all.

 

Foreword

It was already late at night,Selina hurried her steps,but the more she quicken her pace,the more ,it was slowing her down,as if someone has been pinning her down,on the same spots as she was.She tried and tried until she fell down on the ground.She tried to get up,but something is holding her down like a supernatural power beyond her control and will.The rain was getting heavy,the pitter patter drops earlier ,now become a downpour.She tried to get up,and she was soaked to her bones.Tears started running on her face,fear ,disappointment and frustration set it.

She can see the wet fallen yellow leaves on the ground,she lifted her face,as lightning strikes the sky,bright lights against the dark sky.She cried some more,she needs to get out from her,she needs to get up,he will be waiting for her,just like he promised,and she on her part want to fulfill her promise to him,she will be there and they are going to be together for the rest of their life.

Image of Dadong played on her mind,tears and tears but nothing can help her to fulfill her promise.He must be waiting for her...she tried the last time ,until total darkness enveloped her,as she lost consciousness

Selina woke up and she was in her bed in their trailer house.This was home,as she felt the warm blanket around her.She heard a door opening and she tried to open her eyes but it felt too heavy.

"Is that you Jolin?Are you home?" Selina asked but when she finally opened her eyes,and elderly dirty man looking at her.

"You should have told me that there is a pretty young girl waiting for me,then I could have gone home earlier." the old man said.He got a beard,unshaven face and dirty,with torn and tattered clothes on,he was carrying a heavy wire that was being use for plumbing.

Then she heard a gruff voice from an Old Woman outside the room.Selina got up,she does not recognized this two people.She don't know them,but the trailer house was theirs,that is her home,as fear came to her.

"Where is Joe my brother and my sister Jolin,where are they?" Selina asked.

"We don't know who are you talking about.There are just two of us here.I don't even know you."the old lady said.

"No,No what happened to them." as she cried.

"Girl,we don't know what you are talking about.I just found you in bed this morning.And we have been living in this house for a while now." she said.

Selina ran away from the trailer house as fast as she could.Who are those people living in their house.But that house is the only familiar thing in her mind right now,even the neighborhood have changed.

She walked and remember the big house,just two blocks around the corner,where her Grandma lives.They might be in the big house.They used to go there often,for there are always food on the table and they a TV where they can watch the latest show.They must be at Grandma's house.

She saw the familiar house,but there have been some changes.It looks beautiful now and different.It still have the round around porch where they played a lot when she was young.She hopped with anticipation as she knocked on her door.She was surprised an unfamiliar lady opened the door.Just a little older than her by 5 to 10 years.

"Is my Grandma home?Are my brother and sister here?" Selina asked.

"I am sorry but I don't know you.It is just me and my husband and my kids here.I don't know what you are talking about." she said.

"No,this is my Grandma's house.Me and my brother Joe and my sister Jolin always come here.Where is my Grandma?" Selina crying and screaming now.

"Sorry but we have been living here for few years now,and we don't know who are you talking about." as she closed the door on her.Selina walked out with tears on her eyes.What happened to them?What happened to her family?

Then she remembered that someone has been waiting for her,as her heart beats faster.She saw the familiar road with the trees that lined up on the side walk,leaves was scattered all over,yellow wet leaves,as she remembered him.Sadness crept in her heart,she will be with him soon and she was going to fulfill her promise to him,as she stood on the roadside among the trees,as the rain keep on pouring...she was wet and cold...but she stood there,until she cannot feel no more....

Starring:

Jiro Wang

Selina Ren

Arron Yan

Hebe Tian

Actually I have this dream,a very strange dream like my another life...and the dream feels so real and decided to write this as a fan fic.I have never written this kind of story before...but I'll try my best.I always tell myself that maybe Jiro was somebody special from my previous life,hence the affection that I feel today was a remnants from my previous life,it is like Deja Vu.....

Anyway enjoy....

For all those who have been following my stories....and who have been reading Like A Rose...it will be my next in line to finish.Watch out for a lot of updates this week.Hopefully I will try to finish it in two to three weeks time.It has been going on forever...For all the Bebu fans..Like a Rose is really a Bebu love story.I just caught up by my love for Jirlina,so there role sort of got bigger.
There is still so much drama on that story....and yes lots of Bebu...

Anne 4/28/2009

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description Will read soon
summer-star
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Visiting old fics!
summer-star
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Visiting old fics!
C_a_r_o_LL
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wow good fic !!
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fayeluccie143
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tears..tears..and more tears :( what a touching story, i'm just thankful that im in the comfort of my room while reading this story or else it will be a shame! and the title -- a song's title that gave me chill in my spine and goosebumps even before. the ending still made me cry--but this time it's tears of joy :) it's still a happy ending after all :) another story worth reading!