Fanfic Addiction

Title (4/5):
It's catchy and cute, also too the point. You can easily tell that some member of the band is having an addiction to fanfics, so it's a pretty straightforward name. However, it's also cliche and is a pretty overused concept.

Poster/Trailer/Background : -
There is none. Quite frankly, since it's a oneshot, I really didn't expect a poster to be made.

Description/Foreword (7/10):
It was short an concise, too the point. Were it a chaptered fic, I would've like it to be longer. Three lines just isn't enough, even with a oneshot. There's also an excessive amount and misuse of punctuation. It's acceptable to put a question mark after an ellipses (...), but an ellipses must be complete with all 3 dots. Sorry if that seems harsh. There's also a grammar error in the last two sentences.

Plot (7/10):
It was a bit choppy and abstract. It was also a bit disorganized. There's not much to say because it was so straightforward, so I wish it had been a bit longer so the plot could develop.

Originality (5/10):
I can't give many points for this section since there are really many fics like this; however, I will give you props for switching the roles. PO topping Taeil is something I've never seen before. XD

Flow (5/5):
It's actually very choppy and switches scenes very quickly. It seems very rushed, and like I said before, I'd have liked it more if you'd taken your time with the story and developed the plot more.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (20/30):
There were actually a lot of grammar mistakes. As for spelling, there were only a few errors, and punctuation was mostly correct. I didn't find much wrong with it.

Writing Style (8/10):
It's very original, but rushed. Like I've been saying, take your time to produce a well written fic.

Overall Enjoyment (7/10):

Again, it was rushed with many errors, but nevertheless, the roles of the seme an uke were unexpected and I quite enjoyed how PO was messing with Taeil, bit the ending seems like a cliffhanger (which I love, by the way!!) XD But I would like there to be some closure as to whether PO had any feelings fir Taeil or if Taeil stopped reading fanfics.

Total Score: 63/90% (without 10 points from "Poster/Trailer/Background" section.

reviewed by: Star_Sarang