calling ohainerdygirl
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a. Title (5/5)
Matched very well with the plot.
b. Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10)
The background was cute and simple. I liked the poster.
c. Description & Foreword (10/10)
It was cool & it really caught my eye, I was even excited to read the first chapter.
d. Plot (9/10)
Not to complicated, it's good.
e. Originality (8/10)
I've seen some other fics like this, but this one was more realistic.
f. Flow (5/5)
Writer's block? Psh. No way. Each chapter was un-wrapped perfectly, and things didn't go to fast, nor did they go too slow. Just a perfect pace.
g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (25/30)
Like your said, it's your grammar. Also a little bit on your punctuation & capitalization.
h. Writing Style (9/10)
This is probably the only "You" story that I actually like.
i. Overall Enjoyment (10/10)
I subscribed. So that means you deserve the 10.
Total - 90/100
reviewer: mooncake
I seriously like it. ^~^ I even, myself, subscribed to the story. I actually smiled and laughed a little at some parts. It's very imaginable and I can visualize it easily in my head. The way you portrayed each member, as a fellow EXOtic, was on-spot & accurate. Keep going. The story is doing great so far! Fighting!
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