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Title (3/5)
The title is okay but it’s really cliché. Even if the story is about angels, try not to put that into the
title.
Poster/Background/Trailer (10/10)
There was only a trailer and it was absolutely amazing. I would have liked to see a poster for it
though. You don’t have to put pictures of the characters in it, just like the title and some angel
wings would look really cool.
Description & Foreword (10/10)
Great! I don’t think I’ve ever given anyone a 10/10 for this part!
I really like how you put the angels and fallen angels and the two girls, if you hadn’t then a lot of
people would get confused when reading the story.
Plot (10/10)
It was a good plot, as always. You guys always come up with really nice plots and they always
catch my attention.
Originality (4/10)
Unfortunately there are way too many angel fics on this site so I docked some points, and then
I’ve read two about angels battling each other. However, this plot reminded me greatly of a
book I’d read last year so I docked some more points. I know that you came up with it on your
own, but it’s a bit risky when something is too much like a book because you never know when
someone might try and flag you on it.
Flow (4/5)
The flow was good, but the the beginning was a little rushed when you were introducing the
characters and I got a little confused, so you should slow down just a bit.
Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (29/30)
Pretty much everything was perfect, but there was one thing I noticed.
After dialogue you should end with a comma unless it’s an exclamation or a question and then
always after a dialogue you need to begin the next word with a capital letter.
Writing Style (10/10)
This was written absolutely beautifully and I felt as if I were reading a published book.
Overall Enjoyment (6/10)
As good as it was, I’m not a huge fan of angel stories. I’m more of a dark magic person or angst.
Total Score: 86/100%
Congratz! Your story will be on the recommended list!
reviewed by: peacelovehugs
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