From Pauperess to Princess

Title (3/5)

While it did portray the story, it is not attention grabbing.

Poster/Background/Trailer (5/10)

First poster: The qaulity of the Jieun picture is poor and it completely takes away from
the ‘sweet’ look the poster has. The quote on it is written incorrectly and take also degrades the
overall look.

Second poster: It’s cute, but there is too much princess foo foo stuff going on.

Background: You could have found something in a higher qaulity.

Description & Foreword (5/10)

Good, not great, could be more interesting.

Plot (4/10)

The plot was okay, but nothing super great. It surely didn’t catch my attention enough to want to
actually read it. It’s really generic and commonly used to have a poor character end up being a
secret princess or something. Then adding marriage to it? Why?

Originality (5/10)

I’ve seen several stories that attempt a royal theme. Several of them are ‘long lost royal blood’ or
whatever you want to call it.

Flow (3/5)

Slow at some points and then rushed at others.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (20/30)

I found a few mistakes in verb tenses and several of your sentences are fragments, but all you

have to do that is combine a few things together.

Writing Style (5/10)

Your writing style is very amateur; it’s mostly dialogue than actual story. There is nothing much
there except for constant chattering and that gets boring quite fast. Like, when you spent a few
chapters on giving emphasis on Jieun’s poorness by having Suzy and Thunder go to the mall. All
they did was talk. I would have rather of read a descriptive paragraph about why Jieun is poor
anyways. Because you said she was adopted, correct? Poor people don’t generally get to adopt
children because it costs a lot of money.

Then, the story pretty much lacks everything that a story needs. Events, problem, ,
resolution, etc. This isn’t a story, it’s just a made up fairytale with no real meaning to it.

There is almost no emotional connection to it. The characters are bland and have the same
bleakly written personality.

Overall, your writing style is very one dimensional.

Overall Enjoyment (0/10)

Zero speaks for itself.

Total Score: 50/100%

reviewed by: peacelovehugs