My not so easy life with Super Junior

a. Title (4/5)

Hmm, when I read your title, the first thing that came up to my mind is "it's just another fic with a girl living with Super Juniors" and yes I was right. The good thing here is that, it fits your story and definitely tells what your story will be about. But it's cliche.

b. Poster & Background & Trailer (9/10)

Wonderful poster. Just wonderful. Usually for poster makers, they find it hard to put up a lot of person in one poster, but this one's just awesome and I like the way it's colorize.

c. Description & Foreword (8/10)

Interesting description. You made me want to read more and also the foreword.

d. Plot (8/10)

The plot is my type. But what I liked the best is Summer's past, that's a cool creativity you added. But it's just that, it's like another "Living with famous idiots" but with your own creativity but with Super Junior again. LOL. A little bit disappointing at some parts that the main girl had to be one of the member's brothers and then fall in love with all Super Junior, which is very very common these days. I like it that Alex and Uki are there. So cute, and that would mean Super Junior will fall for another girl. Haha, just cute.

e. Originality (4/10)

So, another girl livng with Super Junior. Like you said, you got this inspiration from two of those stories you mentioned in your foreword. So it's not original ,even the past thing is not original but you mixed it together with living wiht Super Junior and it made it a big interesting. Just that, Super Junior are a lot of guys so Summer's so lucky, this happened to a lot of fics already, fics I've read just like LWFI. However, it was fine.

f. Flow (3/5)

It's slow in the first 3 chapters, but it went fine in the following chapters. Unfortunately, the neutral pace went back to zero in the middle.

g. Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (21/30)

There was a lot of mistakes, everything but I think the grammar/spelling is better, improved.  But you have to watch out in the punctuations next time. I can see them clearly. If you want me to be specific with these mistakes, you can just tell me. But over-all, yours is fine here.

h. Writing Style (8/10)

It has small fonts so it was hard to read it, sometimes but it's fine. Another thing is, your font style, you better stick to one font style.

i. Overall Enjoyment (7.5/10) - 

I enjoyed it. It was fun with some parts funny and thrilling. Romantic, too.

Total Score  : 72.5/100%