Are You Up For The Challenge?

Title (5/5)

I am up for the Challenge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes! Very flashy, so good job.

Poster/Trailer/Background (6/10)

I guess it's ok. But it doesn't have the message in it, you know? It's just a bunch of people.

Description/Foreword (8/10)

First time I gave someone such a high score. I really enjoyed the description, since it actually made me want to try reading it. The foreword was also good, since it actually did what forewords are supposed to do.

Plot (8/10)

The plot is enjoyable so far. I like the way you're progressing the story through different POV's. I found it really funny when the idols received the random phone call from Jaejoong and get automatically put in a game show. I feel a very happy and fun vibe from the first two chapters, but I know that it will turn scary after a while.

Originality 8/10

It's one of the most original fanfics I reviewed. Good job! I only dock a few points because it reminds me of the HungerGames fics. But other than that good job!

Flow 5/5

Like I said, I loved how you pieced together the story using POV's

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary (26/30)
"He nodded in agreement as he watched her heading towards her seat by Taecyeon hyung"

It should be: as he watched her head (not heading)

"I heard someone saying my name and turned to who said it."

Again, say not saying.

"We all aligned ourselves us we faced the audience."

You probably forgot a "as"

The grammar and etc are really good!!!! Just take a good look at some of the lines to make sure that you didn't leave a simple word or two.

Writing Style (10/10)

I really like you're writing style. It is very clear and easy to understand.

Overall Enjoyment (7/10)

It seems fun and quirky but there is also a unseen danger lurking in the shadows. Brilliant. It got me interested, and the cliff hanger at the end of Chapter 2 was really good!

Total Score: 83/100%

reviewed by: susanyuenkim