Saranghae Tao

The Cute Panda Boy

Kris heard Bom's voice screaming wake up. He don't want to wake Tao up so he decided to carry him bridal-style. They went inside the lift and Chen punch the number of the level of their room. 

"Tao is very cute when he is sleeping." CL said.

"Yeah, I know. That's why I threat him like my younger brother." He lied. He actually wanted to say that he loved Tao but he scared that the others will tell Tao.

...

Kris enter their bedroom and place Tao on the bed. He help to take out his jacket and pull up the blanket onto his shoulder. Kris walked to the kitchen to get some water to drink. After that, he went to the leaving room to watch some random movie.

Lay walked out from his room cause he is not sleepy.

"Huh, why you didn't sleep yet?"

"Oh. I'm just not that sleepy."

"What movie are you watching?"

"Pirates and the carrabean."

"Oh."

Both of them are watching the movie. Meanwhile, Tao woke up cause he kept having nightmare. It's his secong time having a nightmare. So, he called out Kris's name. 

"Ge~ Ge~ Where are you?"

Kris heard Tao shouting, so he ran to his room. He saw Tao tears falling down uncontrobally.

"Tao ah. What's wrong?" 

"I really can't sleep. The ghost keep appearing in my dream."

Kris hug Tao tightly and Tao's head rest on Kris chest.

"Can you sleep with me?" Tao asked.

"What do you mean? We always sleep together."

"I mean don't go. Don't leave me alone here."

"I won't. I'll stay here." 

"Thanks ge."

Tao lay down beside Kris and Kris pat Tao's while sing a lullaby song.

"Sleep thight Tao. Saranghae." Kris whispered

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i'm sorry for this short chapter. Anyway is it ok? Please comment.

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~