Presents

The Cute Panda Boy

"Anyway, tomorrow is Tao's birthday. What should we do?" Kris said almost whispered.

"I don't know. Let me discuss with the other's first then I'll let you know. I'm leaving make sure both of you didn't do anything bad here. Bye."

"Bye. Make sure you let me know."

CL walked out the dorm back and walked towards her dorm.

*At the girls dorm*

CL knock on the door and Bom open it and all of them started to discuss about the birthday party.

"What should we do for the concept?" Dara asked.

"What did he like?" Bom asked.

"Barbie, Gucci and panda." Minzy said.

"Come on. Just forgot about barbie. It's annoying." CL said.

"Let me call Chen first." Minzy said.

 

"Hello?"

"Hello. Chen."

"Yes?"

"Where are you?" 

"On my way home. Why?"

"As soon as you park your car, just straight go to the girls dorm."

"OK."

"Bye."

"Bye."

Few minutes later, Chen and Lay knock on the girls dorm and Bom open it. Dara quickly grab their wrists.

"What's wrong?" Lay asked.

"Tomorrow is Tao's birthday but we don't know the concept and we are dicussing about it now."

6 of them are thinking and Dara come out with an idea.

"My family are on vacation to Japan now. There's a big garden behind the house. So, Tao and Kris can walk at the garden."

"I think I agree with you Dara." Chen said.

"I agree." all of them said.

"Wait let me call my mom first."

"Hello?"

"Hello. Dara."

"Omma. Can I use your house tomorrow?"

"Sure Why?"

"It's my friend's birthday."

"OK. Make sure you don't mess my house. Bye."

"OK. Bye."

"Yes. My mom let. Yoo hoo."

All of them HI-5 each other and went to the nearest shopping mall and buy the presents. 

*At the mall*

"What should I buy for him" Bom asked.

"Okay everone let's buy the present. We have to go seperately now." 

"OK."

They went to buy presents seperately. 15 minutes later, all of them had finished buying the presents. This is the present they bought:

Chen: Gucci         CL: Panda plushie     Lay: Laptop     Minzy: Earings      Bom: Leather jacket      Dara: Makeup

All of them see each other again infront of the mall. 

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Sorry for the late update. I'm totally busy with my school and my exam is on 17th of March. I have to study and sorry for my bad english *bow*.

 

 

 

 

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~