Ghost Movie

The Cute Panda Boy

They arrived at the dorm and sit on the couch.

 

...

 

“Ya! What took you so long?” Bom shouted.

 

“We bought power bank, Gucci, headphone, 4 packets of popcorn, 3 bottles of soft drinks and plushie for all.” Kris said.

 

“What’s that plushie for?”

 

“For all of us to hide behind it since we are going to watch scary movie. Duh.” Kris said with the ‘duh’ face.

 

“Ya! it’s impolite for you to talk like that with Noona!”

 

“Mianhae, my beloved noona.” Kris said.

 

“That’s better.” Bom said and take the plastic which is full of popcorn and drinks.

 

......

 

“Which one should we watch?” Dara asked.

 

“What did we have?” Chen asked.

 

“The Walking Dead, The Insidious 1 and 2, Shutter (Thai movie), The Ring (Japanese movie) and House at the end street.”

 

“Shutter.”

 

“What movie is that?” Tao asked.

 

“It’s a Thai scary movie.” Kris replied.

 

“Tao ah are you sure you can watch?” Lay asked.

 

“Gege is here so never mind.” Tao replied.

 

“Let’s get started.” Minzy said.

Dara switch of the light while Bom switch on the air-cond. Their reaction when watching the movie:

 

*starting*

 

Lay and Chen: It’s not scary at all.

 

*middle*

 

Kris: What an awesome movie.

 

Tao: Ge. I-I’m scared. Where did my plushie go? Someone please search for my panda.

 

Chen: *fell down from the couch because he sits beside the speaker* It’s a bad idea sitting        

            beside the speaker.

 

Lay: *fall asleep on the couch*

 

Minzy: *give Tao’s plushie because she saw it on the floor*

 

CL: *enjoying the movie while eating popcorn*

 

Dara: Chen, why do you suggested this movie *shouting while hide behind the plushie*

 

Bom: I may got heart attack because of Chen

 

*End*

 

Kris: *relaxing*

 

Tao: *fell asleep in Kris’s arm*

 

Chen, Minzy, CL, Dara and Bom: *relaxing*

 

Lay: *still sleeping*

 

Soon the movie end and it’s already 9:30 pm. The girls clear the foods and drink, Chen trying to wake Lay up and Kris is carrying Tao bridal style to the bedroom. He put Tao on the bed.

 

The 4 girls return to their dorm and went to sleep.

 

Everyone walk into their room to sleep.

 

*3 a.m*

 

Kris awake at 3 a.m when he heard someone crying. He then saw Tao curled into a ball on the bed. Then he turn to Tao and asked what happened.

 

“Y-Yifan, I-I can’t sleep.”

 

“Why?”

“Because of that movie. It’s really scary.”

 

“Never mind, I’m here. Now sleep.”

 

Tao lay beside Kris and Kris hug Tao and drag him closer.

 

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~