I use to be gay

The Cute Panda Boy

"OK. Anyway let's clean up this place." Tao and Kris said.

"Let's go."

All of them are cleaning up the place. It only took about half an hour to clean up this place since there's sixteen people cleaning up this place. As soon as they finished cleaning up the place, they went back to their house. The boys walked towards their room to get some rest.

*In Tao and Kris room*

"Baby?"

"Yes?"

"Actually the reason why I'm at the quiet street because my parents put me there."

"Huh? I-I don't get it."

"The reason why I'm at the quiet street because I'm gay. I use to have a boyfriend. His name is Jaehyo. He is an ulzzang and he is the same age as you. I known him since I was in China. We've known each other for about 10 months. So we ended up becoming a couple. We're been a couple for about 6 months but I didn't told my parents. One day, when I was walking with him my parents saw us. We were holding hands but I didn't see my parents. When I came back home, my family is at the living room with an angry face accept for my brother, Jisoo, he sit on the couch with a sad face. I asked my father what happened, he immediately slap me with all of his force. I fell down while holding my cheeks. My brother is trying to help me but my father ended up hitting both of us with a belt. He force me to break up with Jaehyo. Our body is full of scar. We were walking towards our room and I called Jaehyo for a break up. He is heartbroken. I tried to hold my tears but I failed. I burried my face on the pillow but I ended up sleeping. The next day, I woke up and I'm at the street. Luckily, the girls found me there or not I don't know who to call. My phone is still inside my pocket. That's why  sometime i'm with my phone. I texted my brother." Tao said tears  coming down from his cheeks.

"It's OK Tao. Just forgot the past." Kris said while wiping Tao's tears.

"OK." Tao said and start to sleep.

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sorry for the super short update. I have to sleep since I got school tomorrow. Anyway, is it OK?

 

 

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~