Detectives

The Cute Panda Boy

 

"OK Kris listen, last night around two or three in the morning, a group of kidnappers barged into our apartment. Me and the girls were not asleep yet cause we are making some projects with the boys. After they barged in, Minzy was trying her best to kick the kidnappers but she failed. All of us been tied together. You heard the noise that time so you are awake. You fought them but someone drugged you by injection. You fainted and they put you on your bed." CL explain with a sad face.

"Then what happen to Tao?!" Kris asked with a scared face.

"They taped Tao's mouth so no one notice that he been kidnapped." Minzy explained

Ding Dong...

Minzy went to open the door. It was the boys

"What happen?" Chanyeol asked and quickly sit down in the living room.

"Listen here Tao been kidnapped and we need to save him," Minzy shouted.

"Sis, how does the kidnapper look like?" Sehun asked with his serious face. Sehun is very good in investigating stuff. He knows how to be a detective or a FBI agent.

"They were wearing mask so I don't know but look at this. Look what really happen." Minzy passed her phone to the boys to see what happen.

Minzy put some CCTV in the boy's dorm and all of the CCTV is connected to her phone so that she can know every single stuff happen here.

"Wait, pause it. If you look closely to the guy's arm, you can see there's a tattoo. The tattoo is a picture of a bear growling." Baekhyun said.

"Thats one," Kai said and wrote the clues of the kidnappers on a piece of paper.

"Guys remember Chen and Lay been kidnapped as well. You all need to handle this thing I need to do some stuff here." Minzy said and leave with her two friends to the kitchen. 

"I really can't believe this thing really happen," Kris said. He almost cried. "I need to go to the bathroom first," he continued.

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Here's the next chapeter I know its very short. But I hope u will enjoy. Starting from the next chapter most of the part will the boys part a.k.a EXO. I cant updateuch since im using my phone. Bui

 

 

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~