Birthday Kiss

The Cute Panda Boy

The next day (night),

"Tao, faster dress up. We're going dinner."

"OK."

Tao getting dress. He is wearing a shirt with some stacks on it and thights leather pants. After, he finish wearing those clothes, he walked out from the room and saw Kris waiting for him.

"Let's go." Kris said and stand up and walks towards the door. 

Tao take his black converse and wear it. They walked to their car and Kris drove.

"Where's the others?" Tao asked.

"Oh, They just stay at the dorm since they're lazy to go.

...

They reach there, Tao thought they would go to a restaurant but ended up going to a mansion.

"K-Kris. Where are we?" Tao said clinging over to Kris.

"Somewhere. Just follow me."

Both of them walked in the mansion. The girls, Chen and Lay are inside the mansion, hiding. So they walked towards the dining room.

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"HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!" All of them shouted.

"Thanks guys. I thought you guys forgot about it."

"Why would we forgot a bout it." Kris said and peck Tao's lip.

"Just stop being lovey dovey and eat the cake." CL said and put the cake on the plate.

Each one of them took a piece of cake. It's a blueberry chessecake. 

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After they finish eating, Tao open one by one the presents. He read one by one the cards inside the wraped presents.

He opened the last one and there's a kitten inside it. He took the kitten and carry it. 

"Who gave this?"

All of them push him to the front. 

"D-Do you like it?" Kris asked while biting his lips.

He let the kitten to sit on the chair and hug Kris. His head rest on Kris's broad chest while Kris rest his chin on Tao's head. 

"I knew you will like it."

The others just walked away and started to clean the place. 

"Baby"

"Hmm?"

"I have another gift for you."

Kris put his lips against the youngers and both of them just close their eyes and enjoy the kiss.

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~