Let's go to the haunted house

The Cute Panda Boy

*The next day*

 

 

Kris woke up and open the curtain. Then, Tao woke up because of the bright sun.

 

“Morning ge.” Tao said while rubbing his eyes.

 

“Morning.” 

 

“Thanks for just now.”

 

“....”

 

“I mean thanks for making me sleep in your arms.”

 

“Oh, no prob, Tao tao-er.” Kris said while pinching Tao’s cheek.

 

Both of them went out from their room and sit on the couch in the living room. Chen and Lay are at the supermarket buying some groceries for lunch. 

 

Then Chen called Kris.

“Hello?”

 

“Hyung.”

 

“Oh, Chen. Waeyo?”

 

“Lay already prepare both of you breakfast.”

 

“Oh. OK. Bye.”

 

“Bye.”

 

“I want to take shower for a while.” Tao said.

 

“OK.” Kris said while walking to the kitchen.

 

....

 

Kris was watching TV while eating. Then suddenly,

 

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.” Tao screamed. Kris almost drop the plate but luckily he grab it.

 

“What is it?!” Kris asked.

 

“There’s a ghost inside the toilet.” 

 

“There’s no ghost in the morning.”

 

“B-but I saw it with m-my own eyes. Can you accompany me?” Tao said almost cried.

 

“OK OK OK.”

 

“Thanks ge.”

 

.....

 

Tao had finished showering.

 

“Eat breakfast. I’m going to take shower.”

 

“OK.”

 

.....

 

6 hours later, the 4 boys is watching TV. 

 

“Oh, I wanted to go to the girls dorm for a while because I have to take something.” Kris said.

 

“OK. Bye.” the boys said.

 

*At the girls dorm*

 

Kris knock the door and Minzy open it.

 

“Oh, Hi. Where’s the others?” 

 

“Oh. They went shopping. Come in.” 

 

“Without you?”

 

“I don’t want to go because I don’t have a mood and I heard you left something in here.”

 

“Yeah. It’s my keyboard. CL borrow it from me and she forgot to give me back.”

 

“Oh wait, let me take. If you want any drink you can take it from the kitchen.”

 

“OK.”

 

Kris went to the kitchen and take some drink.

 

“Kris ge, I forgot that CL unnie lock the door.”

 

“Oh. Gwenchana maybe next time.”

 

“OK.”

The 3 girls arrived at the dorm and they open the door.

 

“Ya! Are both of you dating?” Dara asked.

 

“Aniya. He just wanted to take the keyboard but CL unnie’s room is locked.” Minzy quickly said.

 

“Anyway, we planned to got to the haunted house (the one in Exo Showtime ep 10) tonight. You want to follow?” Bom asked.

 

“I would love to but I’m scared that Tao will cry. Nevermind, I will talk to him.” Kris said while scratching his head and walk out of the dorm.

 

“Wait wait, here’s your keyboard ge.”

 

“Oh thanks.”

 

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~