In The Car

The Cute Panda Boy

*In the car*

 

Everyone is asleep in the car except for Kris and Bom because she’s driving. Tao sit beside Kris at the back seat. Tao was facing towards the window while Kris face infront while hearing music. Tao was having a nightmare. He talked in his sleep.

 

“Get away from me! Get away from me! Ge~ I’m scared. Ge~ where are you.?” Tao talk in his sleep.

 

Kris heard that and try to wake Tao up. 

 

“Tao ah, Tao ah. Wake up you’re dreaming!” Kris shouted.

 

“Ge~” Tao said and hug Kris.

 

“Ge~ I’m scared.” Tao said and tears started to flow on his cheeks.

 

“It’s OK Tao. I’m here.” 

 

Tao cling over to Kris and he hug Tao. Both of them fell asleep at the position.

 

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“Wake up everyone wake up. We arrived.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hello readers,I've update 6 chapter in a day...aren't you proud of me....Anyway sorry for thi chapter it's short....If i'm NOT lazy i will update today..SUSCRIBE AND COMMENT..and sorry for my bad english..anyeong

 

 

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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~