Your Artificial Heart

Description

You're a normal girl, average looking, really smart. That day was a day like any other, until you saw the new kid. He looked like a run-of-the-mill boy, but there was something about him that was really mysterious.... and alluring. What happens when you find out he has a secret? One that could possibly kill you.

Foreword

Hello everyone :) This is my very first fanfic, so I'd really appreciate if you guys would comment. Sorry for any fails on my part, just a natural fail XD I'll write the first chapter, and if you guys think it sounds good, please tell me :) Yeah... if a lot of people don't like it, the fanfic will be killed ^^ Thanks, Sammi~ And PS, No offense to all the Lunew lovers, Onew's just who I imagined in the role ;)

Characters

You: 16. In grade 11. Intelligent. Very kind. Not scared easily. Both parents died last year, but you're very strong mentally. Doesn't really smile other than with Amber and Junsu. Onew's girlfriend.

Amber: Same age and grade as you. Your best friend, like a sister. Tomboyish. She helped you through hard times, and you'll be together to the end.

Junsu: Also the same age and grade as you. Your other best friend. Flirty. Whiny. Girly. Has a beautiful voice. Yoochun's brother and part of DBSK

Yoochun, Yunho, Changmin, Jaejoong: The rest of DBSK. All have amazing voices and are your friends.

Onew: 17. In grade 11. In all of your classes. Top of the class. Usually happy, clumsy and kind. The oldest of four brothers and a psychic vampire.

Jonghyun: 16. In grade 10. Has a crude sense of humour. Blood- vampire. 

Key: 16. Also in grade 10. Kind. Witty. Psychic vampire. Power to give or take memories.

Minho: 15. In grade 9. Has a rivalry with Jonghyun. Blood- vampire.

Taemin: 14. In grade 8. Can control the elements and has telekinetic powers. Psychic vampire. Very moody. Hates everyone except his hyung Minho.

Note: This is just a fanfic, so please don't take offense to anything I say.

obsessedwithkpop
Thank you to everyone, whether it be those who have been with me from the start or ones who are just reading it now. Thank you for your support! ^^

Comments

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lee-chelle #1
Chapter 30: Loved the story! But.. Could I get some closure as to why she dreamt of TOP?
obsessedwithkpop #2
Thank you for all your comments and support! :D
anonymousshowal #3
Chapter 30: This was an awesome story dude!!
InfinitelyP
#4
Chapter 30: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IM FANGRILING SO MUCH RIGHT NOW THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLL. It's too beautiful T_____T
Yakusoku
#5
Updateupdateupdateupdate
autumnroads
#6
It's no problem! I know school can be horrible sometimes too! Just take ur time! I'm a faithful reader and I luv this story!!
jongin_fox
#7
Please Update soon :)
obsessedwithkpop #8
@iluvreading Sorry, I was rushing the last update. No she's not a vampire, he just gave her some blood so she wouldn't be so tired and out of it. Thanks for reading :)
autumnroads
#9
Wait sorry I'm confused! Why is she drinking Onew's blood. Did she turn into a vampire and I just missed it? Anyways pls update soon and I hope you reply to my question!!!