There was no one there

Unlocked Doors

 

                There was a knock on her door. It wasn’t locked but at least it wasn’t wide open like the night she saw (or imagined) the ghost girl.

            She waited for another sound but there was nothing.

            Collecting all the courage possible she went to her closet put on a sweater over her pajamas and looked for a flashlight. When she found the flashlight, the thing just didn’t want to cooperate with her. She hit it once, twice and finally, after flickering for a while, it . She rushed to her door.

            Sulli gripped the doorknob and breathed deeply. She opened the door slightly, watching the corridor. The girl stepped outside once she realized there was no one there. She thought that maybe it was a prank from any of the girls that learned about her late night visit.

            She walked down the corridor, afraid that any of the nuns in watch duty would found out she was out of bed. She reached an end that divided the corridor in two.  Pondering where she should head to, the flashlight began to fail again. Sulli decided it was best to just go back to her room besides there was not a soul to be seen. She turned, careful not to make any sound. But just then she saw with her peripheral vision, long black hair, a girl passing just behind her.

            Her hands trembled and cold fear crawled up her back, taking over her head and brain.

            “It’s cold outside,” said the ghost girl. There was a ring of concern in her voice but it was still said as a statement. It sounded so ethereal, so thrilling and scary.

             Without even thinking about it she was running desperately to her room. Sulli reached her room faster than she ever imagined she was capable of. She locked her door and waited, holding the doorknob. It shifted in her hand as if the person outside was attempting to open the door. Sulli forgot how to breathe.

             The jittering of the doorknob ceased.  A second, two seconds… five seconds passed and there was no sound again, just dead silence.

             “I’m sorry…” the voice outside whispered as if her lips had been pressed to the door.

             A shiver ran through Sulli’s body. Again she waited. Then, as if by instinct and against her common sense, she unlocked her door and opened it. There was no one there. 

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_sullpeach_
#1
Chapter 61: Loved this story, i literally enjoyed every word you put in every chapter, thanks author-nim for this wonderful story ^^
MistressOfAngst
#2
Chapter 61: Omg this story was absolutely amazing and beautifully written! It was a unique plot and I think you delivered it well. It all felt like a movie and in the end it all come together nicely. Thanks for writing this and Jungli <3
MistressOfAngst
#3
Chapter 59: I guess Sulli and krystal really used up that bed one last time ;)
MistressOfAngst
#4
Chapter 58: Dang, the school really has to lock down now. I hope no one else will get hurt now, but I feel so sad for Luna. I mean they were best friends and now it's kind of a good bye for them. I am happy that Sulli feels better though, with her new form.
MistressOfAngst
#5
Chapter 55: Aww poor Luna, she’s losing her (maybe crush) and best friend now but I love how she can joke around during serious times!
MistressOfAngst
#6
Chapter 54: OMG SUCH A TWIST IT WAS LUNA!!!
MistressOfAngst
#7
Chapter 53: And there went the other half of the messed up coupe lol I felt bad for her but no one messes with Sulli like that! I really like this story and how everything is falling together!
MistressOfAngst
#8
Chapter 51: We all had to admit that Yookyung was a crazy girl and I do feel bad for her death but - eh lol I’m glad Krystal could own up to the truth. I felt so bad for Hayoung, the girl she loved was now gone. I hope she doesn’t go crazy too
MistressOfAngst
#9
Chapter 49: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/325468/49'>At least she was alive…</a></span>

Oh man Yookyung’s state is so bad, I kinda feel bad for Hayoung bc She’s stuck in the middle of all this. I wonder if Hayoung will do anything for real. But idk how Yookyung’s parents can just go out and party while their daughter is in such horrible state!

Oh no... she died. They couldn’t save her
MistressOfAngst
#10
Chapter 47: I’m excited to see where their journey takes them but curious on that opening door as well