There All Gone by jokinglang

Title (4/5)

I never seen this title, so it sparks up interest in me. I only docked off one point because it should be, "They're All Gone," instead of "They're all Gone."

Appearance (2/5)

I wished for the poster to look more dramatic and sad. I can tell the story will have Minho and 'you', but I can't quite tell whether if the story is going to be sad or happy.

Description/Foreword (12/15)

Your description and foreword both sparks up interest, with catches the reader's attention. They ask themselves, "Why? What did this character do?" The only thing I docked off points was because although it sparked interest, I couldn't tell exactly what I was going to read about.

Plot (13/25)

I never read a plot such as yours, but your plot bored me a bit. I'm sure that the plot would've been more interesting if you added more details and adjective. For an example, you could've described Minho's feelings when Taemin fell of the building, or made the situation where Minho and 'you' broke up more dramatic.

Characters (12/15)

The characters fit the plot, but some of the characters weren't necessary. For an example, Minho's mother or Taemin. True, they were needed to explain why Minho was so depressed. However, you could've explained his relationship with the characters more thoroughly, making the fanfic a more heart-breaking story.

Spelling/Grammar (10/20)

Let me first note that for every speech or thought a character says or think