My Super Star/Nerd by mia_haesica

Title (4/5)

Your title is nice and does/can evoke some curiosity and attention. But, your title seems a bit confusing.

Appearance (2.5/5)

Great! You have a lovely poster! But, you have no background.

Description/Foreword (9/15)

It is nice that you have a little summary in your description. But it is best to move your author’s note/credits in the foreword. In the summary, you have a little punctuation error and it would be better to rearrange that sentence.

“..she met an arrogant egoistic heir, who could fulfill her wish.” 

“..she met an arrogant, egoistic heir. Despite his conceit, he was able to make her dreams come true.”

You have a character cast and you were able to tell their personality and a bit of their background. You also gave pictures of how the characters would look like. Perfect!

Plot (13/25)

I have seen your plot a couple times, here and there, but it is not overly cliche.

Characters (9/15)

All of your characters do have at least one point about them that is cliche. I do like the bac